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Fantasy The devil watch

Kasa sex apko jyada pasand h ?

  • Romantic

    Votes: 115 52.5%
  • Master slave sex

    Votes: 85 38.8%
  • Hardcore

    Votes: 88 40.2%
  • Bondage

    Votes: 34 15.5%

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Gys ma kai dino sa xforum ki stories read krta hu meri favourite stories mainly incest, sci-fi and fantasy hi hoti h jinhe ma read krta hu.
Mana kai stories padhi h jinma hero ko supernatural powers milti h or muje vo bhot achhi lgti h.
Ma ek bhot hi imaginative insan hu
So mene bhi socha ki aj ek story ma bhi likhu.
Ma ek naya writer hu to ho skta h apko mere story pasand na aye par padhna jarur or batana ki kya sudhar ho skta h.
Jin logo sci-fi, fantasy, supernatural power,group sex, kinky ,bondage sex pasand h ya story unlogo ka liya h.
Lekin ma ise adultery bilkul nahi krugasirf hero ki sex dikhaunga kyuki mere hisab sa Jo log cukold ya apna ghar ki aurto ko kisi or ka sath sex krnwate h wo namrd hote h or hamara hero sachha mard hoga.
Characters ka introduction aj rat 8 bje tak ayega or phla update kal. ya story lambi jyegi thoda sabr rkhna
Ma ise teen ya do parts ma likhuga

To shuru krta hu

THE DEVIL WATCH

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by shlok the devil

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INDEX

Character introduction

UPDATES
Part 1 - Landon saga
(Completed)

Part 2- Incest saga
(Running)

 
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TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

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"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

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Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


u-turn-drift

Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


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Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


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Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

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Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

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Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


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Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
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Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

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Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
Shikha or Ella ko rohan pakadkr le gya hai, shlok ne apni sujh bujh ke sath maze ki power ki madad se pta lga liya ki rohan ka plan kya hai pr Lana ko sak firse Ho gya hai or Usne shlok ke kapdo or bike se Pahchan liya ki vo uska bhram nhi hai or shlok ka pichha kiya...dekhte hai shlok samay rahte pahuch payega ya nhi... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast Bhai update no 21 hai
 
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UPDATE 22 : WHO IS THIS STRANGER?( Road to climax)

Ab tak hme pata chala ki shlok ko Rohan ka phone uske car ma mila jise Rohan sa car ma hi reh gaya tha or use phone ma sa ek easa clue mila jiske chalte vo forun apni bike par baith ker ek jagah ka liya Ravana ho gya but ek or shaks tha jisna shlok ka picha kiya or shlok ko is bat ka bilkul pata nhi tha

Vo shaks kon tha ya sabko pata h

"LANA"

Ji ha lana

Par sawal ya tha ki akhir usne on duty kam chorkar shlok ka picha kyu kiya ?

Lana ek jabaj ,imandar , reputed or sharp minded inspector, aj tak jo bhi case uske pas aya usne apni presence of mind or confidence ka jariya use asani sa solve kr diya , bade bade experience holders bhi ek naye naye is inspector ki sucees dekh kar hairan the

Lana ko kisi bhi case ma agar koi dought hota to ya uska record tha ki 90% galtiya use jagah sa nikalte

Yhi karan tha ka usne shlok ka picha kiya

Shlok na badi chalaki sa lana ka samne apne ap ko innocent sabit kr diya but lana itni asani sa apne Mindset ko nhi badalne Vali thi

Use poora doubt tha ki shlok khuch cheez chipa rha h iske kai Karan the

1- shlok use us godam ma behosh halat ma mila jha kai log buri tarah mare pade the
2- shlok ka jaisa same lockit use anjali ka bedroom sa mila theek usi din jab vo kidnap hui
3-aj shlok na Rohan ka Car ka sath bhi ched chad kri

ya teen points kafi the lana jaise smart police officer ko apne piche lagane ka liya


Lana : ya yha kyu aya h vo bhi itni jaldi ma ? Akhir iske dimag ma chal kya rha h . Aj ma pata laga kar hi rhungi

Lana samne khade shlok ko dekh kar ya hi sab apne man ma badbada rhi thi

Vo adhe ghante sa uska peecha kar rhi thi

Shlok ka peecha krte krte vo ek Susan sa area ma AA phuchi jha abhi Ghar bhot kam the ya ek forest vala ilaka tha yha and jane ka liya raste to maujood the but unpe abhi jyada chel phel nhi thi

Peecha karte karte vo ek under construction site ka pas phuch chuki thi jiske ek building poori ho chuki thi jo use thodi age nazar a rhi thi

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Shlok na apni bike us site sa thode pehle hi rok Li thi jise dekhte hue lana na bhi apni car shlok sa thodi pehle rok de

Shlok is vakt bike rok kar apna helmet hath ma liya us site ka sabse upar terrece ki taraf ghure ja rha tha

Uske face par is vakt muskurhat or gusse ka mile jula expressions the

Muskan isliya ki uska shikar vhi tha
Or gussa isliya kyuki usne uske chahne valo par hath dala tha

apna helmet or apni bike vhi jhadiyo ma chor apni trouser sa gun nikalta h or use load karta h ,kyuki ab use yha iski jarurat padne Vali thi ,gun to usne jab hi apne pas rakh li thi jab vo maze ka sath apne pehle victims ko saja dene gya tha kyuki use pata tha age ki life ma ab use iski kitni jarurat padne Vali ha

Vhi jab Lana na shlok ka hath ma gun dekhi to uske chehre par bhi ek winning smile ayi
Kyuki uska shlok par doubt ab confirm ho gya tha ki shlok koi common man nhi h matlab vo koi gunda ya criminal type h

Lekin ab bhi sawal ya tha ki vo tha kya kr rha h ya janne ka liya lana ab bhi chpi hui thi


Lekin lana ka alawa is vakt koi or bhi tha jo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha

Ji ha ek admi , jis building ma shlok gaya usse opposite Vali building par hi vo khada tha

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Uski black Halloween ki costume face par vo horror ghost vala mask uski mask ma chamkte hui vo Hari ankhe cheenkh- cheenkh kar keh rhi the ki ya jaroor koi evil hi h

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Par sawal ya tha ki akhir vo shlok par spy kyu kar rha tha ?

Well iska jawab bhi time Ane par milna hi tha


ab shlok tez kadmo sa chupta chipata us building ki taraf badh gya Jise dekhte hi Lana bhi forun car sa bhar nikal gyi

Shlok bhot dheere dheere bhot safety ka sath age kadm badha rha tha or cover le lekar chal rha tha taki kisi ki nazar ma na aye , use poora yakeen tha ki Rohan na tha poori security laga rakhi hogi

andar akar use khuch nhi mila porra ground floor Khali or ekdum shant tha

Kyuki vo wali building taiyar ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kafi blocks bache hue the us site ka to lift ki facility abhi available nhi thi

Shlok savdhani sa last floor tak phucha matlab terrace sa ek floor pehle

But is floor ki banavat baki floors sa thodi alag thi jitni asani sa usne baki floors paar kar diye ya vala floor ma ghusna itna asan nhi tha kyuki ya floor charo taraf sa band tha , andar jane ka sirf ek hi rasta tha jha ek bhot bada lohe ka hitech security gate laga hua tha ,or shlok is vakt usi ka samne maujood tha

Gate ka pas do buttons lage hue hue the open or close ka

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use poora yakeen tha ki vo gate itni asani sa nhi khulaga ya jaroor kisi pass word ya kisi ka fingerprint ya ratina ko scan krke hi khulega

Bat bhi shi thi agar koi bhi isko sirf open ya close ka do buttons dabakar khol sakta to iska owner itna hitech or majbut gate lagwata hi kyu

Bhar khade hue us anjan aadmi na shlok ko ese confused dekha to uske chehre par ek katil muskan cha gyi

Par kase? Matlab vo to bhar dusri building ki chat par khada tha ,fir kase vo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha jo ko is vakt ek dusri building ma tha

Is chiz sa ya bat to saf ho gyi ki us shaks ka pas bhi khuch super natural powers thi isiliya to vo building ka aar paar dekh pa rha tha

Tabhi us shaks na apna ek hath hawa ma uthaya or shlok ki taraf jor sa ghurne laga

Usne apne man ma khuch spell bolna shuru kiya jisse uske hath par jo ki hawa ma tha us me sa ek Hari color ki roshni nikalne lagi

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Vo roshni uske hath sa hote hue side samne Vali building ki taraf jane lagi jisme is vakt shlok maujood tha

Stranger: (man me) ek bar or tumhe marne ka mauka muje Mila, ma bata nhi sakta ma kitna khush hu ..... Ghamandi Lucifer 👿👿,par tumhe marne sa pehle kyu na tumhe ek bar ajmaya jaye

Kuch hi der ma vo roshni failne lagi or usne us building ka charo taraf ek green but transparent color ka kavach bana diya

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Vhi shlok jo is vakt us door ka samne asmanjas ma fasa hua tha

Shlok: something is wrong ,i can fell it

Sab khuch pehla jaisa hi tha but shlok ki 6th sense na achanak hi khuch mehsoos Kara tha

Maze : master shikha or ella uske kabje ma h hme jaldi krne hogi

Shlok: hmm but Rohan ka plan ka according vo yhi Ane vala tha but yha to koi nhi , or to or vo yha sa Landon sa kase bhag sakta use to khi airport vagera par Jana chaiya tha

Maze: shayad vo tha aya hi na ho

Shlok: (lambi saans lekar)hhhhmmm ab age badhna hi padega, kyuki ab ham climax par h

Shlok ab himmat karke age badhta h or sach khe to use jyaada dar bhi nhi tha apni jaan ka kyuki vo watch sambhal leti use dar bas shikha or elle ka tha

Par ab ya sab bhool kar pakka man banakar vo age badha or vo open vala green button usne daba diya

Or vo gate dhere dhere bich ma sa split hoker slide hote hue khulne laga

Button dbata hi vo gate ka side ma chip gaya kyuki use laga shayad ab uspar firing hogi

Or gate khulte hi usne apne gun apna hath ma jor sa pakad li

Par thode der tak sannata chaya raha

Jab shlok na vapas andar jhak kar dekha to paya use dekhkar vo dar gaya

Ander shikha or ella ek glass ka chote sa room ma band thi or or uski deewro pa hath mare Jaa rhi thi

But unki awaj us room sa bhar nhi a paa rhi thi kyuki vo glass ka ek bhot chota room tha ya kho ki pinzra type

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Shlok shikha ko dekhte hi uski taraf badh gaya vo us cell ko kholne ki koshish karne laga usne kafi hath pair mare par vo nhi toota

Andar sa shikha or ella ab bhi glass par hath mar markar ishare kar karkar shlok ko khuch batane ki koshish kar rhi thi but shlok ko is vakt unki koi bhi bat samaj nhi a rhi thi

Vo to kisi or hi soch ma tha

Shlok: shit meri takat ko kya hua ma ise Tod kyu nhi pa rha hu maje )

Maze : (master watch subah sa sa green glow kar rhi h khuch to gadbad h )

Idhar maje or shlok bato ma busy the ki achanak


" Doosssh"🔫🔫

Ek goli chalne ki awaj puri building ma goong uthi

Shlok or maze dono na use suna

Yha tak ki shlok ka picha kar rhi Lana jo ki is vakt building ka neeche shlok ko dhoond rhi thi usne bhi ya awaj suni or ya sunte hi vo apni gun load karke ekdum chaukanni ho gyi

Vo upar ki or badhne lagi ki

"Doooossh "

Ek bar or goli chalne ki sound ayi

tez kadmo ka sath lana upar ki or bhag gyi

Jab vo upar phuchi to use kise ka chillane ki awaj ayi

"Ahhhhhhh"

ya awaj shlok ki hi thi vo bhagkar Ander jane ka liye jase hi age badhe uske kadam vhi ruk gaye vo bhot jyada hairan thi

Vo foran hi Ander jane ki bajaye ek diwar ka peeche chip gyi

Andar ka nazara dekh kar vo sachme shock thi

Ander usne dekha ki do ladkiya ko ek jagah band karke rakha hua h or uske thodi pas hi shlok apne ghutno par neeche baitha hua h or dard sa karah rha h kyunki uske ek kandhe or pair sa bhot khoon beh raha tha




Shlok ka samne koi 20 - 25 log hatte katte guns liye khade the

Lana unke chehre nhi dekh pa rhi thi vo sirf unke peeth dekh pa rhe the dekhne sa vo bodyguard ya gunde kism ka hi lag rhe the

Lekin jab Lana na dhyan sa dekha to un admiyo ka group ma hi bich ma ek jawaan ladka gun shlok ki taraf point karke khada hua tha ,jisse ya saf tha ki jo do firing abhi abhi hui vo usi na ki

Us ladke ko lana foran Hi pehchan gyi

"ROHAN"

Lana ko ab Sara mamla samjte der na lagi ki ya do goliya Rohan na shlok ka upar chalayi h isi vajah sa vo ghayal h or dard sa karah rha h

Shlok: (Ahhhhhhhhhh ahhhwhat the fuck maze mera ahhh...mera khoon kaisa beh raha h)

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Maze: master lagta h koi watch ko uski powers use karne sa rok rha h)

Shlok: ( ahhhhh wha.. what ?but how?)

Maze: lagta h ya vo hi log h ,vo aas pas hi h

Shlok: kon log

Maze: IMMORTALS

Shlok: vo kon .....ahhhhhhh

Isse pehle ki shlok khuch keh pata ek baseball bat uske sar par bhot tezi sa akar laga

Or shlok dhadam sa zameen par gir pada

Ankho ka samne dhundlahat cha gyi

Aur behosh hone sa pehla use ella ,shikha or Rohan ka chehra dikhaye diya jo uske bilkul samne vo bat pakde ankho ma gussa liye khada tha

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Or thodi der ma hi vo behosh ho gaya

******"****

Location : india (up)

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Rat ho chuki thi Suraj dhal chuka tha

Satyanand ki family ka sabhi sadasya apne apne kamo sa ghar laut chuke the

Is vakt satyanand or santosh dono hi dining table par baithe apne parivar ka sadasyo ka khana ka liye Ane ka intezar kr rhe the .

Satyanand: ab bhi naraz ho kya

Santosh : ap to chup hi rhiye mera pota apna khud ka ghar hone ka bavjud bhi 12 saal sa hamse door reh rha tha or ap , apne bhi muje batana jaruri nhi samja or aj achanak sa sab bata rhe ho

Satyanand: ya sab mene shlok ki bhalayi ka liye hi kra tha ,tumhe lagta h ki ya log shlok ko yha Chan sa rehne dete are do vakt ki roti ka liya bhi Inka mauhtaz ho jata bechara

Santosh: par ap muje to bata sakte the na

Satyanand: mene jo khuch bhi kiya khuch soch samajkar hi Kiya h , or tumse kha h na ki parso shlok hamare sath hoga , ab tum chup rehna gharwalo ko ya sab ma khud bataunga

Santosh: thik h

Ki ha Aj ghar ma Ek bada khulasa hone vala tha jiske bare ma kisine socha bhi nhi hoga

Aj shlok ka dada sabko shlok ka vapas Ane ka bare ma batane ja rhe the
Par kya gharwale ise accept karenge?

Ya to age hi pata chlega

Ek ek karke sare members dining table par a gye

Tini mini na sabko dinner parosa

Dinner sabko ek sath baithkar hi karna padta tha ya satyanand ka order tha
Or vinay bhi apne bap ki kafi izzat krta tha jis vajah sa sabko dinner krne niche ana hi padta

Lekin dekhne me esa lagta tha jaise koi bhi ya chiz dil sa nhi krta tha

Parivar bada hone ka karan parivarl ma kafi masle bhi the

Aj bhi khuch esa hi dekhne to mila dinner khatam krte hi priya aur Neha uthkar jane lagi

Satyanand: ruko!

Priya: kya hua dada ji

Satyanand : baith jao muje pure parivar sa ek jaruri bat krni h

Satyanand ko thoda serious dekh dono vapas apni apni jagah par baith gyi

Vinay: kaise bat pitaji

Satyanand: shlok vapas a rha h

Thodi der ka liya shanti cha gyi

All family: ....(ekdum chup)

Vinay: kya kha apne pitaji?

Satyanand: bilkul shi suna tum sab ne shlok es ghar ka pota vapas a rha h .

Megha : dada ji ya ap kya kh rhe h vo rascle vapas is ghar ma nhi aa sakta

Satyand: filhal to ya Ghar mera h gudiya , isme kon rhega kon nhi ya mai Tay krunga

Rameshwar ( tau ji): lekin bauji

Satyanand: ma koi lekin vekin nhi sunna chahta ,

Satyanand vinay ki taraf dekhte hue

Satyanand : mere aur tumhari maa ka pas ab khuch hi saal bache h aur is bache Time ma ham apne parivar ko eksath dekhna chahte agar hamari jara si bhi Sharm krte ho to hamre bat ka man rakhlo , Varna jaise marzi aye vaise kro

Dharmveer: par Buji vo ladka .....

Vinay : chote ,bauji agar chahte h to thik h ,

Rameshwar: par vinay .....

Vinay : bhaiyaaaa jaise bauji chahte h vaisa hi hoga ,bas bat khatam

Satyanand sa to koi bhi arguments kar sakta tha par vinay sa arguments karne ki abhi kisi bhi member ki himmat nhi thi

Pure Ghar , business ka malik vo hi to tha baki dono bhai to uske anghuta chap the

Khuch log the jinko ya khabar sunkar khana hazam nhi ho rha tha

Unme se ek thi shweta

Shweta ya khabar sunkar apna khana adha chorker hi apne room ma chali gyi

Shweta : mere sir ma thoda dard h ,mujhe neend a rhi h

Vinay : hmmm,thik h

Shweta ko shuru sa hi shlok pasand nhi tha iski vajah ek incident tha jo age Story ma pata chlaega

Or sabhi shaks ko ya khabar pach nhi rhi thi sivay khuch ka

Priya or Neha ko is chiz sa ghanta faraq nhi pada ki kon a rha h ,vo kabhi bhi faltu ki tension nhi leti thi

Ragini na bhi khuch virodh na kiya use bhi shlok ka Ane sa koi problem nhi thi

Geeta thodi pareshan lag rhi thi par vo bol khuch nhi rhi thi

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UPDATE 21 : WHO IS THIS STRANGER?( Road to climax)

Ab tak hme pata chala ki shlok ko Rohan ka phone uske car ma mila jise Rohan sa car ma hi reh gaya tha or use phone ma sa ek easa clue mila jiske chalte vo forun apni bike par baith ker ek jagah ka liya Ravana ho gya but ek or shaks tha jisna shlok ka picha kiya or shlok ko is bat ka bilkul pata nhi tha

Vo shaks kon tha ya sabko pata h

"LANA"

Ji ha lana

Par sawal ya tha ki akhir usne on duty kam chorkar shlok ka picha kyu kiya ?

Lana ek jabaj ,imandar , reputed or sharp minded inspector, aj tak jo bhi case uske pas aya usne apni presence of mind or confidence ka jariya use asani sa solve kr diya , bade bade experience holders bhi ek naye naye is inspector ki sucees dekh kar hairan the

Lana ko kisi bhi case ma agar koi dought hota to ya uska record tha ki 90% galtiya use jagah sa nikalte

Yhi karan tha ka usne shlok ka picha kiya

Shlok na badi chalaki sa lana ka samne apne ap ko innocent sabit kr diya but lana itni asani sa apne Mindset ko nhi badalne Vali thi

Use poora doubt tha ki shlok khuch cheez chipa rha h iske kai Karan the

1- shlok use us godam ma behosh halat ma mila jha kai log buri tarah mare pade the
2- shlok ka jaisa same lockit use anjali ka bedroom sa mila theek usi din jab vo kidnap hui
3-aj shlok na Rohan ka Car ka sath bhi ched chad kri

ya teen points kafi the lana jaise smart police officer ko apne piche lagane ka liya


Lana : ya yha kyu aya h vo bhi itni jaldi ma ? Akhir iske dimag ma chal kya rha h . Aj ma pata laga kar hi rhungi

Lana samne khade shlok ko dekh kar ya hi sab apne man ma badbada rhi thi

Vo adhe ghante sa uska peecha kar rhi thi

Shlok ka peecha krte krte vo ek Susan sa area ma AA phuchi jha abhi Ghar bhot kam the ya ek forest vala ilaka tha yha and jane ka liya raste to maujood the but unpe abhi jyada chel phel nhi thi

Peecha karte karte vo ek under construction site ka pas phuch chuki thi jiske ek building poori ho chuki thi jo use thodi age nazar a rhi thi

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Shlok na apni bike us site sa thode pehle hi rok Li thi jise dekhte hue lana na bhi apni car shlok sa thodi pehle rok de

Shlok is vakt bike rok kar apna helmet hath ma liya us site ka sabse upar terrece ki taraf ghure ja rha tha

Uske face par is vakt muskurhat or gusse ka mile jula expressions the

Muskan isliya ki uska shikar vhi tha
Or gussa isliya kyuki usne uske chahne valo par hath dala tha

apna helmet or apni bike vhi jhadiyo ma chor apni trouser sa gun nikalta h or use load karta h ,kyuki ab use yha iski jarurat padne Vali thi ,gun to usne jab hi apne pas rakh li thi jab vo maze ka sath apne pehle victims ko saja dene gya tha kyuki use pata tha age ki life ma ab use iski kitni jarurat padne Vali ha

Vhi jab Lana na shlok ka hath ma gun dekhi to uske chehre par bhi ek winning smile ayi
Kyuki uska shlok par doubt ab confirm ho gya tha ki shlok koi common man nhi h matlab vo koi gunda ya criminal type h

Lekin ab bhi sawal ya tha ki vo tha kya kr rha h ya janne ka liya lana ab bhi chpi hui thi


Lekin lana ka alawa is vakt koi or bhi tha jo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha

Ji ha ek admi , jis building ma shlok gaya usse opposite Vali building par hi vo khada tha

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Uski black Halloween ki costume face par vo horror ghost vala mask uski mask ma chamkte hui vo Hari ankhe cheenkh- cheenkh kar keh rhi the ki ya jaroor koi evil hi h

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Par sawal ya tha ki akhir vo shlok par spy kyu kar rha tha ?

Well iska jawab bhi time Ane par milna hi tha


ab shlok tez kadmo sa chupta chipata us building ki taraf badh gya Jise dekhte hi Lana bhi forun car sa bhar nikal gyi

Shlok bhot dheere dheere bhot safety ka sath age kadm badha rha tha or cover le lekar chal rha tha taki kisi ki nazar ma na aye , use poora yakeen tha ki Rohan na tha poori security laga rakhi hogi

andar akar use khuch nhi mila porra ground floor Khali or ekdum shant tha

Kyuki vo wali building taiyar ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kafi blocks bache hue the us site ka to lift ki facility abhi available nhi thi

Shlok savdhani sa last floor tak phucha matlab terrace sa ek floor pehle

But is floor ki banavat baki floors sa thodi alag thi jitni asani sa usne baki floors paar kar diye ya vala floor ma ghusna itna asan nhi tha kyuki ya floor charo taraf sa band tha , andar jane ka sirf ek hi rasta tha jha ek bhot bada lohe ka hitech security gate laga hua tha ,or shlok is vakt usi ka samne maujood tha

Gate ka pas do buttons lage hue hue the open or close ka

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use poora yakeen tha ki vo gate itni asani sa nhi khulaga ya jaroor kisi pass word ya kisi ka fingerprint ya ratina ko scan krke hi khulega

Bat bhi shi thi agar koi bhi isko sirf open ya close ka do buttons dabakar khol sakta to iska owner itna hitech or majbut gate lagwata hi kyu

Bhar khade hue us anjan aadmi na shlok ko ese confused dekha to uske chehre par ek katil muskan cha gyi

Par kase? Matlab vo to bhar dusri building ki chat par khada tha ,fir kase vo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha jo ko is vakt ek dusri building ma tha

Is chiz sa ya bat to saf ho gyi ki us shaks ka pas bhi khuch super natural powers thi isiliya to vo building ka aar paar dekh pa rha tha

Tabhi us shaks na apna ek hath hawa ma uthaya or shlok ki taraf jor sa ghurne laga

Usne apne man ma khuch spell bolna shuru kiya jisse uske hath par jo ki hawa ma tha us me sa ek Hari color ki roshni nikalne lagi

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Vo roshni uske hath sa hote hue side samne Vali building ki taraf jane lagi jisme is vakt shlok maujood tha

Stranger: (man me) ek bar or tumhe marne ka mauka muje Mila, ma bata nhi sakta ma kitna khush hu ..... Ghamandi Lucifer 👿👿,par tumhe marne sa pehle kyu na tumhe ek bar ajmaya jaye

Kuch hi der ma vo roshni failne lagi or usne us building ka charo taraf ek green but transparent color ka kavach bana diya

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Vhi shlok jo is vakt us door ka samne asmanjas ma fasa hua tha

Shlok: something is wrong ,i can fell it

Sab khuch pehla jaisa hi tha but shlok ki 6th sense na achanak hi khuch mehsoos Kara tha

Maze : master shikha or ella uske kabje ma h hme jaldi krne hogi

Shlok: hmm but Rohan ka plan ka according vo yhi Ane vala tha but yha to koi nhi , or to or vo yha sa Landon sa kase bhag sakta use to khi airport vagera par Jana chaiya tha

Maze: shayad vo tha aya hi na ho

Shlok: (lambi saans lekar)hhhhmmm ab age badhna hi padega, kyuki ab ham climax par h

Shlok ab himmat karke age badhta h or sach khe to use jyaada dar bhi nhi tha apni jaan ka kyuki vo watch sambhal leti use dar bas shikha or elle ka tha

Par ab ya sab bhool kar pakka man banakar vo age badha or vo open vala green button usne daba diya

Or vo gate dhere dhere bich ma sa split hoker slide hote hue khulne laga

Button dbata hi vo gate ka side ma chip gaya kyuki use laga shayad ab uspar firing hogi

Or gate khulte hi usne apne gun apna hath ma jor sa pakad li

Par thode der tak sannata chaya raha

Jab shlok na vapas andar jhak kar dekha to paya use dekhkar vo dar gaya

Ander shikha or ella ek glass ka chote sa room ma band thi or or uski deewro pa hath mare Jaa rhi thi

But unki awaj us room sa bhar nhi a paa rhi thi kyuki vo glass ka ek bhot chota room tha ya kho ki pinzra type

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Shlok shikha ko dekhte hi uski taraf badh gaya vo us cell ko kholne ki koshish karne laga usne kafi hath pair mare par vo nhi toota

Andar sa shikha or ella ab bhi glass par hath mar markar ishare kar karkar shlok ko khuch batane ki koshish kar rhi thi but shlok ko is vakt unki koi bhi bat samaj nhi a rhi thi

Vo to kisi or hi soch ma tha

Shlok: shit meri takat ko kya hua ma ise Tod kyu nhi pa rha hu maje )

Maze : (master watch subah sa sa green glow kar rhi h khuch to gadbad h )

Idhar maje or shlok bato ma busy the ki achanak


" Doosssh"🔫🔫

Ek goli chalne ki awaj puri building ma goong uthi

Shlok or maze dono na use suna

Yha tak ki shlok ka picha kar rhi Lana jo ki is vakt building ka neeche shlok ko dhoond rhi thi usne bhi ya awaj suni or ya sunte hi vo apni gun load karke ekdum chaukanni ho gyi

Vo upar ki or badhne lagi ki

"Doooossh "

Ek bar or goli chalne ki sound ayi

tez kadmo ka sath lana upar ki or bhag gyi

Jab vo upar phuchi to use kise ka chillane ki awaj ayi

"Ahhhhhhh"

ya awaj shlok ki hi thi vo bhagkar Ander jane ka liye jase hi age badhe uske kadam vhi ruk gaye vo bhot jyada hairan thi

Vo foran hi Ander jane ki bajaye ek diwar ka peeche chip gyi

Andar ka nazara dekh kar vo sachme shock thi

Ander usne dekha ki do ladkiya ko ek jagah band karke rakha hua h or uske thodi pas hi shlok apne ghutno par neeche baitha hua h or dard sa karah rha h kyunki uske ek kandhe or pair sa bhot khoon beh raha tha




Shlok ka samne koi 20 - 25 log hatte katte guns liye khade the

Lana unke chehre nhi dekh pa rhi thi vo sirf unke peeth dekh pa rhe the dekhne sa vo bodyguard ya gunde kism ka hi lag rhe the

Lekin jab Lana na dhyan sa dekha to un admiyo ka group ma hi bich ma ek jawaan ladka gun shlok ki taraf point karke khada hua tha ,jisse ya saf tha ki jo do firing abhi abhi hui vo usi na ki

Us ladke ko lana foran Hi pehchan gyi

"ROHAN"

Lana ko ab Sara mamla samjte der na lagi ki ya do goliya Rohan na shlok ka upar chalayi h isi vajah sa vo ghayal h or dard sa karah rha h

Shlok: (Ahhhhhhhhhh ahhhwhat the fuck maze mera ahhh...mera khoon kaisa beh raha h)

4RUg

Maze: master lagta h koi watch ko uski powers use karne sa rok rha h)

Shlok: ( ahhhhh wha.. what ?but how?)

Maze: lagta h ya vo hi log h ,vo aas pas hi h

Shlok: kon log

Maze: IMMORTALS

Shlok: vo kon .....ahhhhhhh

Isse pehle ki shlok khuch keh pata ek baseball bat uske sar par bhot tezi sa akar laga

Or shlok dhadam sa zameen par gir pada

Ankho ka samne dhundlahat cha gyi

Aur behosh hone sa pehla use ella ,shikha or Rohan ka chehra dikhaye diya jo uske bilkul samne vo bat pakde ankho ma gussa liye khada tha

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Or thodi der ma hi vo behosh ho gaya

******"****

Location : india (up)

239380-15060917560029065665

Rat ho chuki thi Suraj dhal chuka tha

Satyanand ki family ka sabhi sadasya apne apne kamo sa ghar laut chuke the

Is vakt satyanand or santosh dono hi dining table par baithe apne parivar ka sadasyo ka khana ka liye Ane ka intezar kr rhe the .

Satyanand: ab bhi naraz ho kya

Santosh : ap to chup hi rhiye mera pota apna khud ka ghar hone ka bavjud bhi 12 saal sa hamse door reh rha tha or ap , apne bhi muje batana jaruri nhi samja or aj achanak sa sab bata rhe ho

Satyanand: ya sab mene shlok ki bhalayi ka liye hi kra tha ,tumhe lagta h ki ya log shlok ko yha Chan sa rehne dete are do vakt ki roti ka liya bhi Inka mauhtaz ho jata bechara

Santosh: par ap muje to bata sakte the na

Satyanand: mene jo khuch bhi kiya khuch soch samajkar hi Kiya h , or tumse kha h na ki parso shlok hamare sath hoga , ab tum chup rehna gharwalo ko ya sab ma khud bataunga

Santosh: thik h

Ki ha Aj ghar ma Ek bada khulasa hone vala tha jiske bare ma kisine socha bhi nhi hoga

Aj shlok ka dada sabko shlok ka vapas Ane ka bare ma batane ja rhe the
Par kya gharwale ise accept karenge?

Ya to age hi pata chlega

Ek ek karke sare members dining table par a gye

Tini mini na sabko dinner parosa

Dinner sabko ek sath baithkar hi karna padta tha ya satyanand ka order tha
Or vinay bhi apne bap ki kafi izzat krta tha jis vajah sa sabko dinner krne niche ana hi padta

Lekin dekhne me esa lagta tha jaise koi bhi ya chiz dil sa nhi krta tha

Parivar bada hone ka karan parivarl ma kafi masle bhi the

Aj bhi khuch esa hi dekhne to mila dinner khatam krte hi priya aur Neha uthkar jane lagi

Satyanand: ruko!

Priya: kya hua dada ji

Satyanand : baith jao muje pure parivar sa ek jaruri bat krni h

Satyanand ko thoda serious dekh dono vapas apni apni jagah par baith gyi

Vinay: kaise bat pitaji

Satyanand: shlok vapas a rha h

Thodi der ka liya shanti cha gyi

All family: ....(ekdum chup)

Vinay: kya kha apne pitaji?

Satyanand: bilkul shi suna tum sab ne shlok es ghar ka pota vapas a rha h .

Megha : dada ji ya ap kya kh rhe h vo rascle vapas is ghar ma nhi aa sakta

Satyand: filhal to ya Ghar mera h gudiya , isme kon rhega kon nhi ya mai Tay krunga

Rameshwar ( tau ji): lekin bauji

Satyanand: ma koi lekin vekin nhi sunna chahta ,

Satyanand vinay ki taraf dekhte hue

Satyanand : mere aur tumhari maa ka pas ab khuch hi saal bache h aur is bache Time ma ham apne parivar ko eksath dekhna chahte agar hamari jara si bhi Sharm krte ho to hamre bat ka man rakhlo , Varna jaise marzi aye vaise kro

Dharmveer: par Buji vo ladka .....

Vinay : chote ,bauji agar chahte h to thik h ,

Rameshwar: par vinay .....

Vinay : bhaiyaaaa jaise bauji chahte h vaisa hi hoga ,bas bat khatam

Satyanand sa to koi bhi arguments kar sakta tha par vinay sa arguments karne ki abhi kisi bhi member ki himmat nhi thi

Pure Ghar , business ka malik vo hi to tha baki dono bhai to uske anghuta chap the

Khuch log the jinko ya khabar sunkar khana hazam nhi ho rha tha

Unme se ek thi shweta

Shweta ya khabar sunkar apna khana adha chorker hi apne room ma chali gyi

Shweta : mere sir ma thoda dard h ,mujhe neend a rhi h

Vinay : hmmm,thik h

Shweta ko shuru sa hi shlok pasand nhi tha iski vajah ek incident tha jo age Story ma pata chlaega

Or sabhi shaks ko ya khabar pach nhi rhi thi sivay khuch ka

Priya or Neha ko is chiz sa ghanta faraq nhi pada ki kon a rha h ,vo kabhi bhi faltu ki tension nhi leti thi

Ragini na bhi khuch virodh na kiya use bhi shlok ka Ane sa koi problem nhi thi

Geeta thodi pareshan lag rhi thi par vo bol khuch nhi rhi thi

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UPDATE 21 : WHO IS THIS STRANGER?( Road to climax)

Ab tak hme pata chala ki shlok ko Rohan ka phone uske car ma mila jise Rohan sa car ma hi reh gaya tha or use phone ma sa ek easa clue mila jiske chalte vo forun apni bike par baith ker ek jagah ka liya Ravana ho gya but ek or shaks tha jisna shlok ka picha kiya or shlok ko is bat ka bilkul pata nhi tha

Vo shaks kon tha ya sabko pata h

"LANA"

Ji ha lana

Par sawal ya tha ki akhir usne on duty kam chorkar shlok ka picha kyu kiya ?

Lana ek jabaj ,imandar , reputed or sharp minded inspector, aj tak jo bhi case uske pas aya usne apni presence of mind or confidence ka jariya use asani sa solve kr diya , bade bade experience holders bhi ek naye naye is inspector ki sucees dekh kar hairan the

Lana ko kisi bhi case ma agar koi dought hota to ya uska record tha ki 90% galtiya use jagah sa nikalte

Yhi karan tha ka usne shlok ka picha kiya

Shlok na badi chalaki sa lana ka samne apne ap ko innocent sabit kr diya but lana itni asani sa apne Mindset ko nhi badalne Vali thi

Use poora doubt tha ki shlok khuch cheez chipa rha h iske kai Karan the

1- shlok use us godam ma behosh halat ma mila jha kai log buri tarah mare pade the
2- shlok ka jaisa same lockit use anjali ka bedroom sa mila theek usi din jab vo kidnap hui
3-aj shlok na Rohan ka Car ka sath bhi ched chad kri

ya teen points kafi the lana jaise smart police officer ko apne piche lagane ka liya


Lana : ya yha kyu aya h vo bhi itni jaldi ma ? Akhir iske dimag ma chal kya rha h . Aj ma pata laga kar hi rhungi

Lana samne khade shlok ko dekh kar ya hi sab apne man ma badbada rhi thi

Vo adhe ghante sa uska peecha kar rhi thi

Shlok ka peecha krte krte vo ek Susan sa area ma AA phuchi jha abhi Ghar bhot kam the ya ek forest vala ilaka tha yha and jane ka liya raste to maujood the but unpe abhi jyada chel phel nhi thi

Peecha karte karte vo ek under construction site ka pas phuch chuki thi jiske ek building poori ho chuki thi jo use thodi age nazar a rhi thi

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Shlok na apni bike us site sa thode pehle hi rok Li thi jise dekhte hue lana na bhi apni car shlok sa thodi pehle rok de

Shlok is vakt bike rok kar apna helmet hath ma liya us site ka sabse upar terrece ki taraf ghure ja rha tha

Uske face par is vakt muskurhat or gusse ka mile jula expressions the

Muskan isliya ki uska shikar vhi tha
Or gussa isliya kyuki usne uske chahne valo par hath dala tha

apna helmet or apni bike vhi jhadiyo ma chor apni trouser sa gun nikalta h or use load karta h ,kyuki ab use yha iski jarurat padne Vali thi ,gun to usne jab hi apne pas rakh li thi jab vo maze ka sath apne pehle victims ko saja dene gya tha kyuki use pata tha age ki life ma ab use iski kitni jarurat padne Vali ha

Vhi jab Lana na shlok ka hath ma gun dekhi to uske chehre par bhi ek winning smile ayi
Kyuki uska shlok par doubt ab confirm ho gya tha ki shlok koi common man nhi h matlab vo koi gunda ya criminal type h

Lekin ab bhi sawal ya tha ki vo tha kya kr rha h ya janne ka liya lana ab bhi chpi hui thi


Lekin lana ka alawa is vakt koi or bhi tha jo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha

Ji ha ek admi , jis building ma shlok gaya usse opposite Vali building par hi vo khada tha

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Uski black Halloween ki costume face par vo horror ghost vala mask uski mask ma chamkte hui vo Hari ankhe cheenkh- cheenkh kar keh rhi the ki ya jaroor koi evil hi h

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Par sawal ya tha ki akhir vo shlok par spy kyu kar rha tha ?

Well iska jawab bhi time Ane par milna hi tha


ab shlok tez kadmo sa chupta chipata us building ki taraf badh gya Jise dekhte hi Lana bhi forun car sa bhar nikal gyi

Shlok bhot dheere dheere bhot safety ka sath age kadm badha rha tha or cover le lekar chal rha tha taki kisi ki nazar ma na aye , use poora yakeen tha ki Rohan na tha poori security laga rakhi hogi

andar akar use khuch nhi mila porra ground floor Khali or ekdum shant tha

Kyuki vo wali building taiyar ho chuki thi par abhi bhi kafi blocks bache hue the us site ka to lift ki facility abhi available nhi thi

Shlok savdhani sa last floor tak phucha matlab terrace sa ek floor pehle

But is floor ki banavat baki floors sa thodi alag thi jitni asani sa usne baki floors paar kar diye ya vala floor ma ghusna itna asan nhi tha kyuki ya floor charo taraf sa band tha , andar jane ka sirf ek hi rasta tha jha ek bhot bada lohe ka hitech security gate laga hua tha ,or shlok is vakt usi ka samne maujood tha

Gate ka pas do buttons lage hue hue the open or close ka

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use poora yakeen tha ki vo gate itni asani sa nhi khulaga ya jaroor kisi pass word ya kisi ka fingerprint ya ratina ko scan krke hi khulega

Bat bhi shi thi agar koi bhi isko sirf open ya close ka do buttons dabakar khol sakta to iska owner itna hitech or majbut gate lagwata hi kyu

Bhar khade hue us anjan aadmi na shlok ko ese confused dekha to uske chehre par ek katil muskan cha gyi

Par kase? Matlab vo to bhar dusri building ki chat par khada tha ,fir kase vo shlok ko dekh pa rha tha jo ko is vakt ek dusri building ma tha

Is chiz sa ya bat to saf ho gyi ki us shaks ka pas bhi khuch super natural powers thi isiliya to vo building ka aar paar dekh pa rha tha

Tabhi us shaks na apna ek hath hawa ma uthaya or shlok ki taraf jor sa ghurne laga

Usne apne man ma khuch spell bolna shuru kiya jisse uske hath par jo ki hawa ma tha us me sa ek Hari color ki roshni nikalne lagi

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Vo roshni uske hath sa hote hue side samne Vali building ki taraf jane lagi jisme is vakt shlok maujood tha

Stranger: (man me) ek bar or tumhe marne ka mauka muje Mila, ma bata nhi sakta ma kitna khush hu ..... Ghamandi Lucifer 👿👿,par tumhe marne sa pehle kyu na tumhe ek bar ajmaya jaye

Kuch hi der ma vo roshni failne lagi or usne us building ka charo taraf ek green but transparent color ka kavach bana diya

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Vhi shlok jo is vakt us door ka samne asmanjas ma fasa hua tha

Shlok: something is wrong ,i can fell it

Sab khuch pehla jaisa hi tha but shlok ki 6th sense na achanak hi khuch mehsoos Kara tha

Maze : master shikha or ella uske kabje ma h hme jaldi krne hogi

Shlok: hmm but Rohan ka plan ka according vo yhi Ane vala tha but yha to koi nhi , or to or vo yha sa Landon sa kase bhag sakta use to khi airport vagera par Jana chaiya tha

Maze: shayad vo tha aya hi na ho

Shlok: (lambi saans lekar)hhhhmmm ab age badhna hi padega, kyuki ab ham climax par h

Shlok ab himmat karke age badhta h or sach khe to use jyaada dar bhi nhi tha apni jaan ka kyuki vo watch sambhal leti use dar bas shikha or elle ka tha

Par ab ya sab bhool kar pakka man banakar vo age badha or vo open vala green button usne daba diya

Or vo gate dhere dhere bich ma sa split hoker slide hote hue khulne laga

Button dbata hi vo gate ka side ma chip gaya kyuki use laga shayad ab uspar firing hogi

Or gate khulte hi usne apne gun apna hath ma jor sa pakad li

Par thode der tak sannata chaya raha

Jab shlok na vapas andar jhak kar dekha to paya use dekhkar vo dar gaya

Ander shikha or ella ek glass ka chote sa room ma band thi or or uski deewro pa hath mare Jaa rhi thi

But unki awaj us room sa bhar nhi a paa rhi thi kyuki vo glass ka ek bhot chota room tha ya kho ki pinzra type

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Shlok shikha ko dekhte hi uski taraf badh gaya vo us cell ko kholne ki koshish karne laga usne kafi hath pair mare par vo nhi toota

Andar sa shikha or ella ab bhi glass par hath mar markar ishare kar karkar shlok ko khuch batane ki koshish kar rhi thi but shlok ko is vakt unki koi bhi bat samaj nhi a rhi thi

Vo to kisi or hi soch ma tha

Shlok: shit meri takat ko kya hua ma ise Tod kyu nhi pa rha hu maje )

Maze : (master watch subah sa sa green glow kar rhi h khuch to gadbad h )

Idhar maje or shlok bato ma busy the ki achanak


" Doosssh"🔫🔫

Ek goli chalne ki awaj puri building ma goong uthi

Shlok or maze dono na use suna

Yha tak ki shlok ka picha kar rhi Lana jo ki is vakt building ka neeche shlok ko dhoond rhi thi usne bhi ya awaj suni or ya sunte hi vo apni gun load karke ekdum chaukanni ho gyi

Vo upar ki or badhne lagi ki

"Doooossh "

Ek bar or goli chalne ki sound ayi

tez kadmo ka sath lana upar ki or bhag gyi

Jab vo upar phuchi to use kise ka chillane ki awaj ayi

"Ahhhhhhh"

ya awaj shlok ki hi thi vo bhagkar Ander jane ka liye jase hi age badhe uske kadam vhi ruk gaye vo bhot jyada hairan thi

Vo foran hi Ander jane ki bajaye ek diwar ka peeche chip gyi

Andar ka nazara dekh kar vo sachme shock thi

Ander usne dekha ki do ladkiya ko ek jagah band karke rakha hua h or uske thodi pas hi shlok apne ghutno par neeche baitha hua h or dard sa karah rha h kyunki uske ek kandhe or pair sa bhot khoon beh raha tha




Shlok ka samne koi 20 - 25 log hatte katte guns liye khade the

Lana unke chehre nhi dekh pa rhi thi vo sirf unke peeth dekh pa rhe the dekhne sa vo bodyguard ya gunde kism ka hi lag rhe the

Lekin jab Lana na dhyan sa dekha to un admiyo ka group ma hi bich ma ek jawaan ladka gun shlok ki taraf point karke khada hua tha ,jisse ya saf tha ki jo do firing abhi abhi hui vo usi na ki

Us ladke ko lana foran Hi pehchan gyi

"ROHAN"

Lana ko ab Sara mamla samjte der na lagi ki ya do goliya Rohan na shlok ka upar chalayi h isi vajah sa vo ghayal h or dard sa karah rha h

Shlok: (Ahhhhhhhhhh ahhhwhat the fuck maze mera ahhh...mera khoon kaisa beh raha h)

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Maze: master lagta h koi watch ko uski powers use karne sa rok rha h)

Shlok: ( ahhhhh wha.. what ?but how?)

Maze: lagta h ya vo hi log h ,vo aas pas hi h

Shlok: kon log

Maze: IMMORTALS

Shlok: vo kon .....ahhhhhhh

Isse pehle ki shlok khuch keh pata ek baseball bat uske sar par bhot tezi sa akar laga

Or shlok dhadam sa zameen par gir pada

Ankho ka samne dhundlahat cha gyi

Aur behosh hone sa pehla use ella ,shikha or Rohan ka chehra dikhaye diya jo uske bilkul samne vo bat pakde ankho ma gussa liye khada tha

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Or thodi der ma hi vo behosh ho gaya

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Location : india (up)

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Rat ho chuki thi Suraj dhal chuka tha

Satyanand ki family ka sabhi sadasya apne apne kamo sa ghar laut chuke the

Is vakt satyanand or santosh dono hi dining table par baithe apne parivar ka sadasyo ka khana ka liye Ane ka intezar kr rhe the .

Satyanand: ab bhi naraz ho kya

Santosh : ap to chup hi rhiye mera pota apna khud ka ghar hone ka bavjud bhi 12 saal sa hamse door reh rha tha or ap , apne bhi muje batana jaruri nhi samja or aj achanak sa sab bata rhe ho

Satyanand: ya sab mene shlok ki bhalayi ka liye hi kra tha ,tumhe lagta h ki ya log shlok ko yha Chan sa rehne dete are do vakt ki roti ka liya bhi Inka mauhtaz ho jata bechara

Santosh: par ap muje to bata sakte the na

Satyanand: mene jo khuch bhi kiya khuch soch samajkar hi Kiya h , or tumse kha h na ki parso shlok hamare sath hoga , ab tum chup rehna gharwalo ko ya sab ma khud bataunga

Santosh: thik h

Ki ha Aj ghar ma Ek bada khulasa hone vala tha jiske bare ma kisine socha bhi nhi hoga

Aj shlok ka dada sabko shlok ka vapas Ane ka bare ma batane ja rhe the
Par kya gharwale ise accept karenge?

Ya to age hi pata chlega

Ek ek karke sare members dining table par a gye

Tini mini na sabko dinner parosa

Dinner sabko ek sath baithkar hi karna padta tha ya satyanand ka order tha
Or vinay bhi apne bap ki kafi izzat krta tha jis vajah sa sabko dinner krne niche ana hi padta

Lekin dekhne me esa lagta tha jaise koi bhi ya chiz dil sa nhi krta tha

Parivar bada hone ka karan parivarl ma kafi masle bhi the

Aj bhi khuch esa hi dekhne to mila dinner khatam krte hi priya aur Neha uthkar jane lagi

Satyanand: ruko!

Priya: kya hua dada ji

Satyanand : baith jao muje pure parivar sa ek jaruri bat krni h

Satyanand ko thoda serious dekh dono vapas apni apni jagah par baith gyi

Vinay: kaise bat pitaji

Satyanand: shlok vapas a rha h

Thodi der ka liya shanti cha gyi

All family: ....(ekdum chup)

Vinay: kya kha apne pitaji?

Satyanand: bilkul shi suna tum sab ne shlok es ghar ka pota vapas a rha h .

Megha : dada ji ya ap kya kh rhe h vo rascle vapas is ghar ma nhi aa sakta

Satyand: filhal to ya Ghar mera h gudiya , isme kon rhega kon nhi ya mai Tay krunga

Rameshwar ( tau ji): lekin bauji

Satyanand: ma koi lekin vekin nhi sunna chahta ,

Satyanand vinay ki taraf dekhte hue

Satyanand : mere aur tumhari maa ka pas ab khuch hi saal bache h aur is bache Time ma ham apne parivar ko eksath dekhna chahte agar hamari jara si bhi Sharm krte ho to hamre bat ka man rakhlo , Varna jaise marzi aye vaise kro

Dharmveer: par Buji vo ladka .....

Vinay : chote ,bauji agar chahte h to thik h ,

Rameshwar: par vinay .....

Vinay : bhaiyaaaa jaise bauji chahte h vaisa hi hoga ,bas bat khatam

Satyanand sa to koi bhi arguments kar sakta tha par vinay sa arguments karne ki abhi kisi bhi member ki himmat nhi thi

Pure Ghar , business ka malik vo hi to tha baki dono bhai to uske anghuta chap the

Khuch log the jinko ya khabar sunkar khana hazam nhi ho rha tha

Unme se ek thi shweta

Shweta ya khabar sunkar apna khana adha chorker hi apne room ma chali gyi

Shweta : mere sir ma thoda dard h ,mujhe neend a rhi h

Vinay : hmmm,thik h

Shweta ko shuru sa hi shlok pasand nhi tha iski vajah ek incident tha jo age Story ma pata chlaega

Or sabhi shaks ko ya khabar pach nhi rhi thi sivay khuch ka

Priya or Neha ko is chiz sa ghanta faraq nhi pada ki kon a rha h ,vo kabhi bhi faltu ki tension nhi leti thi

Ragini na bhi khuch virodh na kiya use bhi shlok ka Ane sa koi problem nhi thi

Geeta thodi pareshan lag rhi thi par vo bol khuch nhi rhi thi

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Sandar update 👌 brother....

Confusion ho gya e kon Naya character ghus aaya Sala malum hi nai pada...

Hero b humara kamjor ho gya hai ab dkhna hai Lana kya Karti hai or shlok kese bachta hai or bachata hai ....
 
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