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Fantasy The devil watch

Kasa sex apko jyada pasand h ?

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Gys ma kai dino sa xforum ki stories read krta hu meri favourite stories mainly incest, sci-fi and fantasy hi hoti h jinhe ma read krta hu.
Mana kai stories padhi h jinma hero ko supernatural powers milti h or muje vo bhot achhi lgti h.
Ma ek bhot hi imaginative insan hu
So mene bhi socha ki aj ek story ma bhi likhu.
Ma ek naya writer hu to ho skta h apko mere story pasand na aye par padhna jarur or batana ki kya sudhar ho skta h.
Jin logo sci-fi, fantasy, supernatural power,group sex, kinky ,bondage sex pasand h ya story unlogo ka liya h.
Lekin ma ise adultery bilkul nahi krugasirf hero ki sex dikhaunga kyuki mere hisab sa Jo log cukold ya apna ghar ki aurto ko kisi or ka sath sex krnwate h wo namrd hote h or hamara hero sachha mard hoga.
Characters ka introduction aj rat 8 bje tak ayega or phla update kal. ya story lambi jyegi thoda sabr rkhna
Ma ise teen ya do parts ma likhuga

To shuru krta hu

THE DEVIL WATCH

~
by shlok the devil

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INDEX

Character introduction

UPDATES
Part 1 - Landon saga
(Completed)

Part 2- Incest saga
(Running)

 
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No dear story is not closed
Ek bura incident ho gaya tha family ma thoda personal problems bata nhi sakta
jis vajah Sa ma update nhi de paya
Par ab bas 4 update ayenge or ya segment khatam ho jayega or inCest shuru hoga

Kal update deta hu
Ok bhai
 
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UPDATE 21: THE DEViL IS COMING(the ultimate chase )


TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

*********


"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

Call ends


Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


u-turn-drift

Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


no-gas

Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


angry-mad

Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

************

Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

************


TIME :BACK TO PRESENT


Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


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Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
******

Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

**** ****

Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
 
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UPDATE 20: THE DEViL IS COMING(the ultimate chase )


TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

*********


"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

Call ends


Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


u-turn-drift

Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


no-gas

Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


angry-mad

Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

************

Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

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TIME :BACK TO PRESENT


Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


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Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
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Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

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Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

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UPDATE 20: THE DEViL IS COMING(the ultimate chase )


TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

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"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

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Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


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Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


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Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


angry-mad

Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

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Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

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TIME :BACK TO PRESENT


Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


X0hM

Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
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Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

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Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
Welcome back sir
 

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UPDATE 20: THE DEViL IS COMING(the ultimate chase )


TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

*********


"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

Call ends


Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


u-turn-drift

Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


no-gas

Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


angry-mad

Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

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Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

************


TIME :BACK TO PRESENT


Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


X0hM

Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
******

Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

**** ****

Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
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UPDATE 20: THE DEViL IS COMING(the ultimate chase )


TIME: KHUCH GHANTE PEHLE

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Ella : wow ya mall to bhot bada h

Lisa : ha ya abhi khuch mahine pehla hi khula tha , ma or shlok bhi yha sa kai bar shoping karke gye h, bhut achhe kapde milte h yha

Elle : ok then final ham sab yhi chalte h

Lisa : to fir chalo Ander

Rabia , lisa shikha or Ella Bella is vakt ek mall ka Ander khade hokar ya sub bate kr rhe the

Shikha ko unhone ek burka pehna rakha tha offcourse ab Mehta family sa jyada khatra nhi tha but Rohan ab bhi bhar tha or usne or police na shikha ka chehra dekha hua tha vo jante the ki ya ladki unhe devil tak phucha sakti h

Shlok na shikha ko jane ka liya mana kiya but Ella ka pressure dene par vo is shart par mana ki uska chehra chupa kar rakha jaye

Well ab ya sub mall ma ghumne ko chali gyi aur ho gyi shoping ma mashgul

*********


"Vrooooom "

"Vrooooom

Karte hue do cars ek sath bhot tez speed ma nikli

Lana : drive fast Steve we have to catch him

Steve: yes mam

Un cars ma sa piche wali car police ki thi


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Jisme lana or Steve maujood the



Vo car picha kar rhi thi age wale car ka jo ek jo ek bmw car thi or usme 1 hi shaks maujood tha

ROHAN


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Rohan Adhe din sa police sa chupta chipata ghum rha tha, vo ab bas kisi bhi tarah Landon sa khi bahar bhagna chahta tha

Ofcourse usne taiyariya bhi puri kar li thi

Car ko vo full speed sa drive kr rha tha
Apni poori jan lagakar vo apne per sa accelerator par dabav bana rha tha

Kyuki agar aj pakda gya to sab khatam uski akad , uska aiyashi Vali life sab

Ya hi bate uske dimag ma ghum rhi thi mathe pa tension sa bani lakire, or pasina tap tap karke lagatar beh raha tha

Vo Lana ki car sa puri doori banane ki koshish kar kar raha tha


Lekin uski destination thi kya vo sirf paglo ki tarah to nhi bhag rha tha , as i already said usne sab plan pehle hi krke rakha tha

Offcourse vo thoda egoistic or rude tha par apne chote bhai amit ki tarah chutiya nhi tha vo ek sharp minded insan tha

Usne car drive karte hue hi apne phone sa ek call lagaya or speaker par dala

Other side: hello boss

Rohan: hello sab taiyar h na ?

Other side : yes boss jaisa apne kha tha sab khuch ready h

Rohan : okey mere piche police h taiyar rehna, i am just coming , sirf ek car h

Other side : tension mat lijiye boss ap bas yha phoch jaiya baki ham sambhal lenge

Rohan: good

Call ends


Rohan : bas ek bar ,bas ek bar yha sa nikal jau fir dekhunga is devil ko , abhi tak ma serious nhi tha but now I will not forgive you
Devil 🥵🥵🥵

Gussa ma ya kehkar usne ek jhatke ma staring ko poora ghuma diya

Or ek shanndar style sa u turn liya


u-turn-drift

Bachpan sa hi use sports cars ka shok tha , ya uske liya asan tha

Vhi Steve rohan ka is achanak u turn ko samaj nhi paya or usne foran break lagaye

Par tab tak vo khuch samaj pata Rohan unke barabar ma sa nikal gya

Lana : Steve u turn lo jaldi

Steve : yes mam

Well ab Lana or Rohan ki car ka beech kafi distance a chuka tha Jisse Rohan ka face par ek smile a gyi but afsos vo jyada der tak nhi tiki

Rohan ka chehra firse murja gya jiski vajah thi

Fuel metre


no-gas

Ji ha jab uski najar fuel metre par gyi to uska tension or gussa sa bura hal ho gya

Fuel ab kisi bhi minute khatam ho sakta tha

Or Aisa hi hua car ki speed low hone lagi

Rohan : no god noooooo😡😡🙏🙏

But afsos car thodi age jakar ruk gyi

Rohan : shit 😡😡


angry-mad

Usne piche mudkar dekha to lana ki car nhi dikhi but vo kabhi bhi us tak phuch sakte the

Ab uske dimag na kam krna band kr diya

Tension firse uske chehre par cha gyi

Par jab usne samne dekha to use ek ummid dikhi

Samne ek bhut bada mall tha

"ROYAL PLAZA"



usne thodi der vha chupna ki Sochi
Vo turant gadi sa utra or apni hoddie ki cap or Goggles phen kar tez kadmo ka sath mall ka andar chala gya

Vo jaldi jaldi upar vale floors par jaane laga
Usko is vakt kitni jaldi thi ya isi cheez sa bataye ja sakte thi ki usne lift ka liya bhi wait nhi Kiya balki stairs sa hi Jane laga


Khair is vakt vo bas tezi sa chal rha tha
Bar bar peeche dekhne ki vajah use pata hi nhi chala ki samne koi h or vo usse takra gya


"Ahhhhh""

Takrav ki vajah sa Rohan to nhi gira par samne Vali ladki jameen par balance bigadne ki vajah sa gir gyi

Or jiski vaja sa uska burkha face par sa hat gya


Rohan : sorr.....

Vo sorry kehna chahta tha but jab uski nazar is ladki ka chehre par gyi to uski jaban bich ma hi ruk gayi

Jab ladki ki nazar Rohan par paddi to vo bhi Shem gyi or bas ankhe fade Rohan ko dekhte rhi


"Shikha tum thik ho tumhe kahi lagi to nahi "

Ella bhag kar shikha ka pas ayi or use uthaya

Vo ladki jisse Rohan takraya vo or koi nhi shikha hi thi

Elle: aa mister tum dekh kar nhi.....

Vo Rohan ko datna chah rhi thi but jab usne uska chehra dekha to awaj gale ma hi reh gyi

Rohan ka chehra par is vakt gussa or kamini muskan sath ma thi

Or uska luck bhi itna achha tha ki vo area mall ka thode corner side ma tha or is vakt wakt vha kya koi nhi tha

Usna foran apne Jeb sa gun nikali or in dono par tan di

************

Vhi jab Lana or Steve ko Rohan ki car raste ma khadi dikhti h to vo don bhi foran apni car rokte

But jab Lana Rohan ko car ma nhi pati to thoda confuse ho jati h

Or vo dono firse car ma baithkar age use dhoondne chale jate h

But kafi age jane par bhi unhe khuch nhi milta

Lana (man me) achanak sa kha gayab ho gya

Vo thoda apne dimag par jor dalti h to use car ka pas us mall ka bare ma yad ata h

Lana : Steve car ghumao jaldi muje lagta h vo mall ma gya hoga

Steve : yes mam

Vo dono jase hi mall ka front par phuchte h
Unhe samne hi Rohan nazar ata h par ab uske sath do ladkiya bhi thi. Unme se ek na burkha pehna hua tha . or Rohan na unme sa ek ki kamar par gun laga rakhi thi
Or vo undono ko jabar dasti kisi dusri car ma bitha rakha tha

Lana foran gadi sa utari or Rohan ki taraf gun point karte hue boli

Lana : Rohan ab tum Bach nhi sakte

Rohan na jab Lana ko dekha to usne foran car start kare or or accelerator dabaya or sidha lana ki taraf le jane laga

Lana khuch soch ya samaj pati isse pehli hi car uske kafi nazdeek a gyi but luckily Steve na use dhakka dekar bacha liya or vo dono bhut buri tarah niche gire


Rohan gadi ki window sa apna sar nikal kar bola

Rohan : muje rokne ki koshish bhi mat krna inspector Varna aj mujse bura koi nhi hoga

Or usne apni gun sa ek goli lana ki car ka tyre ma Mari jisse vo puncture ho gya

Lana or Steve jab tak apni halat thik karkar uthe Tab tak rohan car lekar vha se rafu chakkar ho gya


Lana : shit 😡😡

************


TIME :BACK TO PRESENT


Jab shlok Ella ka phone aya tha to usne foran apni bike mall ki taraf dauda di

Vo jab mall ma enter ho rha tha to use gate ka bhar hi Lana or Steve dikhe jo khuch pareshan lag rahe the

Shlok: (man me)ya yha kya kr rhi h

Maze: jaru khuch gadbad h master

Shlok: (hmm esa hi lgta h )

Maze: ap isse hi Jake kyu nhi puch lete

Shlok: nhi isse puchunga to mere hi piche pad jayegi ,har sensitive jagah par tum hote ho bla bla bla...🥱🥱

Shlok unse thoda bachkar mall ka Ander chala jata h


Ander use lisa or Rabia ghuste hi reception par dikh gai vo dono bhot pareshan lag rhi thi
Or receptionist sa bhot hyper hoke bat kr rhi thi

Khair vo undono ka pas gya

Shlok : lisa

Lisa shlok ki awaj sunkar ekdam palti vo shlok ko kafi time sa phone krna chahti thi but uska phone ki battery dead ho gyi thi
Vo foran shlok ka pas bhag kar gyi

Lisa : shlok achha hua tum a gye ,dekho na shikha or Ella bhot der sa nhi mil rhi h

Shlok : (man me)jaisa socha tha shayad vo hi hua , Ella ka phone sa hi ma samaj gya tha ki vo kisi mushkil ma h


Lisa: shlok chup kyu ho kha gyi hogi vo dono

Shlok : lisa pehla tum shant ho jao or tum btao ki vo tumhare sath thi to achanak kaha gayab ho gai

Lisa: pata nhi ma or Rabia aunty shoping kar rhe the or vo dono washroom ka liya kehkar gyi thi par fir bhot der tak vapas hi nhi ayi

Rabia : ha shlok shayad vo dono kisi musibat ma h , hame police complain krni chaiya

Shlok: nooo

Lisa : .....

Rabia: ....

Shlok : mera matlab h itni jaldi police complain nhi likhegi

Rabia: ha tum shi kh rhe ho

Shlok: ha or ab ap log Ghar jao ma unhe dhundkar Lata hu

Lisa: nhi shlok ham bhi tumhari madad karte h

Shlok: nhi lisa plz Ghar jao mene bola na , aunty plz ap lisa ko lekar jao

Lisa : but shlok ...

Shlok: lisa plz understand

Lisa : ok

Rabia lisa ko lekar chali jati h

Shlok: (maze muje shikha or ella ka pas teleport kro jaldi )

Maze: abhi din dhalne ma 2 ghante h master

shlok: ( shit i forgot, but 2 ghante to bhot jyada h unhe khuch ho gya to )

Maze : ( master lana yha jarur Rohan ka liye hi ayi hogi use jarur khuch pata hoga )

Shlok: ( yaa shayad ab ya hi rasta h)

Vo foran mall sa bhar jata h or use samne hi Lana usi car ka pas khadi thi jisme Rohan pehle tha jo fuel khatam hone ki vajah sa band


Vo Lana ka paas jata h

Shlok: hey mam

Lana shlok ko dekhkar jyada bhav nhi deti

Lana : shlok ma is vakt busy hu , plz tum jao

Shlok: ok

Shlok: ( shit lagta h ab dusra tarika apnanana hoga )

Maze : yes

Vo Lana ka nzdekk chala jata h

Lana : tumhe ek bar ma .....

Lana apna sentence pura krne sa pehle hi ruk gayi

Shlok lana ka bhot kareeb a chuka tha or vo uski ankho ma bhot shiddat sa jhak rha tha

Ofcourse vo Lana ko hypnotise kr rha tha or hua bhi khuch esa hi Lana hypnotise ho chuki thi


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Maze : apke pas sirf do minute h master jaldi kijiya

Shlok: (hmm)

Shlok: Lana ab jaldi btao tum yha kya kr rhi ho

Lana : ma Rohan Mehta ki car picha kr rhi thi uski or....,......

Usne sari ram katha shlok ko bata di jise sunkar shlok ko Rohan par bhot gussa aya par vo khuch nhi kr sakta tha


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Tabhi uski nazar bagal ma khadi car par padi

Shlok: ya car Rohan ki h ?

Lana : haa

Shlok na jaldi sa car kholi or use check karne laga use khuch nhi mila but jaise hi vo nikalne wala tha uske nazar driving seat ka niche pade mobile par padi

Shlok: ( ya phone ya jaroor Rohan ka hoga )

Maze : ( yes master )

Shlok us phone ko nikalne ki koshish krne laga but uska hath nhi ja rha tha

Maze : jaldi kijiye master lana normal hone wali h

Shlok:hmmm

Shlok: ajaaa yaar ajjaaa 😡


Finaly uska hath phone tak phuch jata h
Vo phone ko jaldi sa uthata h

Shlok: haaash ya jaroor Rohan ka phone h

Vo jaldi sa phone ko open karta h luckily Rohan na koi lock nhi lagaya tha

Lekin fir vo phone Jeb ma dal leta h or car sa bhar a jata h kyuki Lana kisi bhi vakt vapas sa normal ho sakti thi

Ab vo vha sa chala jata h

Jab Lana ko hosh ata h to vo shlok ko apne pas na dekhkar dar jati h

Lana: (man me) k..k..kha gya vo

Vo apne as pas dekhti h par use shlok najar nhi ata

Steve jo abhi tak dur khada phone par bat kr rha tha vo Lana ko thoda uncomfortable dekhkar uske pas ata h

Steve : kya hua mam

Lana: Steve tumne dekha kya abhi abhi mere sath ek ladka khada tha

Steve : i am sorry mam but ma nhi dek paya

Lana: (man me )shit,to kya iska matlab ya mera vham tha ,nhi nhi ya vhem nhi ho sakta ,pichli bar bhi jab shlok mere sath tha tab esa hua ,khuch to gadbad h

Vo khadi khadi ya hi bate apne dimag ma soch rhi thi ka tabhi uske najar Rohan ka car ka door par gyi jo unlock tha

Lana : (man me) ya kya ya door kase khula hua h ya to band tha ,khi shlok na to ....matlab vo bhem nhi tha shlok sachme yha aya tha
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Vhi dusri taraf shlok jaldi sa Lana sa thodi dur jakar Rohan ka phone ki sari chats or call recordings check krta h jinhe dekhne ka bad vo thoda suprised hota h

Shlok: oo to ye yha sa escape krne ka poora plan bana chuka h ,

Maze: master apko jaldi vha phuchna hoga isse pehla vo shikha or Ella ko koi chot phuchaye

Shlok: hmm ,aj isko iski punishment milegi ,

DEVIL IS COMING

Shlok bina deri kiya maze ka kehne par apni bike uthata h or vha sa full speed ma nikal jata h

Kha ,ya to use hi pata tha

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Dusri taraf Lana ab bhi confuse thi or vo ab ek dusri car ma baithe hue thi

Lana : (man me) ma ab bhi manne ka liye taiyar nhi ki vo mera bhem tha vo sachme shlok hi tha

Vo baithe baithe ya soch hi rhi thi ki uske car ka bagal sa ek bike bhoot tez speed sa overtake karte hue nikalte h

Or jase hi Lana ka najar or bike sawar ka jacket par jate h

Vo use gaur sa dekhne lagte h


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Lana : I knew it , par ya Jaa kha rha h or isne car ma sa kya liya hoga

Tabhi use Sara majra samaj ata h or vo us bike vale ka peeche hi apni car daudane lagti h

Lana : aj ma sab pata laga kar hi rhungi shlok

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Aj ka liya itna hi guys

Ab Sunday ko update ayega ha itna time to muje chaiya agle teen updates ma ya part complete h
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