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Thriller Haweli ~~ " The Night Is Dark " (completed)

What makes reader feel while readng " Haweli " title story?


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harshit1890

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Andhera itna tha ki kali padh chuki haveli hote hue bi dikhai nai de rhi thi, charon aur sanata tha aur haveli ke aas pass dur dur tak is andheri raat mein koi bhi nai tha, kuch tha to vo sanata jiski awaz suni to nahi jaa sakti thi lekin mehsus jarur ho rahi thi....

Us sanate aur andhere mein jahan roshni ka namo-nishan na tha, usi samay haveli ki khidkiyun par ek roshni jhalak rahi thi jese vo us roshni se khidki ke bahar jhankne ki kosish kar rahi ho par darasal vo khidki se bahar nahi balki dhire-dhire niche utar rahi thi. Ek hath mein laltein liye aur dusre hath mein ek glass vo dhire-dhire sidiyan utar rahi thi. Uske chehre par ghabrahat thi, sidiyan utarte sath hi usne bina der kiye apne kadam samne kamre ki taraf badha diye par vahan pahunchte hi vo ruk gayi. Uski sansein ek dum hi tez ho chali thi, blouse mein kasi uski chatiyan zor-zor se uppar niche hone lagi, usne kuch pal yun hi vahan khade guzar die aur phir darwaje par halka dhakka dete hue use khol dia, andar roshni pehle se thi uske sath us kamre mein ek awaz gunj rahi thi jo haveli mein to thi par bahar tak nahi pahunch rahi thi.



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harshit1890

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Lagta hai ye sapna jo atit se juda hai. Mahaj ittfak nhi hai ,der saber Vikram ka kankal bhi wahi se milega jaha se us bacche ka kankal mila hai.puri kahani me ek bat jo gour kerne layak hai wo hai time.jab time tha tab kuch kiya nahi ,jammene chali gayi , property ka pata nahi na hi vasiyat aur in sabse behtar apne aas pas ke insano tak ka pata nahi, ki kon kesa hai .itne time me sare raj chipa diye gaye . Khuni ka kuch ata pata nahi. Aur ab malini ji andhre me tir mar rahi hai . Ki kabhi to nishane per lage ab na power hai na hi pesa .kyu ki dono ek dusre ke purak hai. aur na hi bacha hai vishwas .le de ke bacha hai uska aur manju ka jism jiska fayeda uthane ka soch rhi hai malini . Per kya razdaar itna bevkuf hoga jo apna raz aese hi jahir ker de ...
Dekhna dilchasp hoga ??

Nahi ye sapna hi hai, atit se nahi juda. Dekhte hain bikram ka kya hai, jab akal nahi thi aur na hi rutba aur ab na hi haweli par rutba hai aur na hi haweli par hukum chalane wala koi.
Sach dhundne mein tir hi marna hi padta hai. Sahi laga to theek vrna teer kahin aur lag jata hai..
Keep reading bhai shurkiya :hug:
 
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Maafi chahta hun... itne din baad is kahani par apni pratikriya de raha hun..
Saare update bohot hi badhiya the... Lagta hai ki woh garage hi rent par diya hoga thakur sahab ne...
Kya sapne sach hote hai...? kahani abhi aur dilchasp ho rahi hai... kehne ko to sabhi shak ke ghere mein hai...
Leking dekhte hai aage hota kya hai.
 

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Maafi chahta hun... itne din baad is kahani par apni pratikriya de raha hun..
Saare update bohot hi badhiya the... Lagta hai ki woh garage hi rent par diya hoga thakur sahab ne...
Kya sapne sach hote hai...? kahani abhi aur dilchasp ho rahi hai... kehne ko to sabhi shak ke ghere mein hai...
Leking dekhte hai aage hota kya hai.

Koi nahi bhaihota hai mei bhi kabhi kabhi aise hi gayab ho jata hun :hug:
Dekhte hain bhai koi tisra angle hai ya fir yahi sach hai.
Sapne sach ho gaye to agla update malini ke lliye bhari ho jayega. Hamesha rehte hai...
Thank you so much pawan bhai:hug:
 
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हर्षित भाई.... नैना जी ने सही कहा है....मालिनी की ऐसी की तैसी....मंजु को बबलु के साथ सोने के लिए कहना ।
और वैसे बबलु काका की अचानक तबीयत कैसे खराब हो गई ?

मैं Anky@123 के रिभियू से भी पुरी तरह सहमत हूं । सांप के भागने के बाद लकीर पर लाठी पिटना ।

बड़ी देर से मालिनी की निंद टुटी । चलो देर से ही सही निंद टुटी तो ।....... लेकिन पता नहीं ये भी कोई दिमाग को कन्फ्यूज करने वाली बात हो ।

लाजवाब स्टोरी हर्षित भाई। क्या गजब की कहानी लिखा है आपने ।
 

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हर्षित भाई.... नैना जी ने सही कहा है....मालिनी की ऐसी की तैसी....मंजु को बबलु के साथ सोने के लिए कहना ।
और वैसे बबलु काका की अचानक तबीयत कैसे खराब हो गई ?

मैं Anky@123 के रिभियू से भी पुरी तरह सहमत हूं । सांप के भागने के बाद लकीर पर लाठी पिटना ।

बड़ी देर से मालिनी की निंद टुटी । चलो देर से ही सही निंद टुटी तो ।....... लेकिन पता नहीं ये भी कोई दिमाग को कन्फ्यूज करने वाली बात हो ।

लाजवाब स्टोरी हर्षित भाई। क्या गजब की कहानी लिखा है आपने ।

Uski wajah hai, bhejne ki, baki malini kyun chahegi jab use khud sambhog nahi pasand :shy:
Bhai end jisdin likh dun tab kahogeki lazab likhi to man lunga, abhi mujhe khud doubt hai..

Keep reading bhai, thank you so much.... :hug:
 

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" manju hum soch rahe the ki aaj raat tum bablu kaka ke sath so jao "

" kaka ke sath? " manju chaunkte hue boli " par unke sath kyun? "

" hume unki tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi. Yahi wajah thi ki humne unka kamra haweli mein karwaya. Tumhe koi pareshani hai? " malini ne aine mein se manju ko dekha. Manju jo baat use batane ayi thi ab vo bata nahi sakti thi, us raat jisne uske sharir ko dabocha tha vo bablu kaka the ye baat vo malini ko batana chahti thi lekin ab bata kar koi faiyda nahi tha. Usne nah mein sar hila diya " hume koi pareshani nahi hai thakurain "

" bahut acha, vaise tum kuch kehni ayi thi? "

" nahi.. vo bas lakdiyan nahi thi to aaj apki roti bhi chule par hi sekh dein "

" hmm " malini ke jawab ke manju wahan se chali gayi. Malini ne uske jatte hi apna kamra band kiya aur almari kholi. Usne kuch saman hataya aur piche chupaye hue mobile phone ko bahar nikala. Usne uska button daba kar on kiya aur ek number milaya. " hum shakuntla devi bol rahe hain "

Din dhal chuka tha aur ane wali raat apne sath kadake ki thand layi thi. Malini hall mein baithi aur manju uske liye khana laga rahi thi. " bas manju "

" thakurain " bablu kaka ne atte hi awaz di.

" kaka aa gaye aap, manju inke liye bhi khana laga do aur khud bhi kha lo " malini ke kehne par manju ne wahi kiya.

" thakurain vo hum puch rahe the ki abhi hum sham ko laute to gaddi nahi thi haweli mein "

" han vo usme kuch dikkat ho gayi thi to humne hi theek karne ke liye di hai " malini ne bablu kaka ke jatte hi gaddi haweli se kuch duri par khadi kar di thi.

" han kuch waqt se vo dikkat de rahi hai, purani bhi kafi ho gayi hai "

" acha kaka ek baat bataiye, agar hamari gaddi bigad jati hai to aap use kahan theek karate hain?"

" gaon ke bahar hi hai hum wahin se theek karwa lete hain " bablu kaka ke jawab se malini ko yakeen ho gaya ki ye wahi garage hoga jahan vo aaj subah gayi thi aur jiska number tehkhane mein se mila tha.

" hmm, akhri baar kab aap gaye the kuch yaad hai? "

" aise to yaad nahi thakurain lekin akhri baar hum nahi gaye the "

" matlab? "

" jahan tak hume yaad hai akhri baar gaddi theek hue kuch saal beet gaye, pakke yakeen se to nahi keh sakte lekin hume itna yaad hai humne chote thakur se pucha tha tab unhone bataya tha ki gaddi ke break mein kuch dikkat hai to vo use na le jaye "

" inhone kaha tha apse? "

" ji thakurain, darasal thakur sahab ne vakeel babu ko bulane ke liye kaha tha, unse baat nahi ho paa rahi thi to hume le jane ke liye bola lekin jab hum bahar aye to chote thakur ne hume kaha ki gaddi ke break mein koi pareshani hai to vo use theek karane le jaa rahe hain aur unhone hi kaha tha ki vo vakeel babu ko bhi atte waqt le ayenge "

" fir? "

" fir kya hua hume nahi pata thakurain par hum uske baad kabhi gaddi theek karane nahi gaye aur na hi humne use chalaya tabse. Aaj apse suna ki usme kuch kharabi hai to lagne laga ki ab us gaddi ka samay aa gaya hai. Thakur sahab ne bade pyar se li thi vo gaddi "

" pyar se li thi ? " malini ne apni baat par zor diya.

" ji thakurain, unko apni gaddi se bada lagav tha. Hume aaj bhi yaad hai jab unki mrityu ke theek us din hamari unse mulakat hui thi to unhone hamse kaha tha ki bablu hamari gaddi ka khayal rakhna jaise is haweli ka dhayan rakha "

" apne pucha nahi ki vo aisa kyun keh rahe hain ? "

" jarurat hi nahi padi thakurain, hum jante the vo udas hai, chote thakur ki khoj been ko lekar unhe kuch mila nahi hai aur aksar insan udasi mein aisi baatein karta hai " bablu kaka ki baat ke baad koi aur baat nahi hui. Sabne shanti se khana khaya aur badhti thand ke chalte sab apne-apne kamre mein chale gaye, manju bas apna kaam nipta kar jane hi wali thi. Uska man reh-reh kar ghabra raha tha ki vo bablu kaka ke sath akele kaise so sakti hai lekin thakurain ko mana bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta. Manju ne kaam khatam kiya aur apna bistar lekar uppar ki taraf chal di. Kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha aur usme se jhankte hue andar dekha to bablu kaka apne khat par laite hue the ankh band karke, shayad so chuke the. Manju ne bina koi shor kiye, kamre ke dusre kone mein apna bistar dala aur wahan laitne lagi.

" kaun hai? "

" kaka mei hun manju? "

" manju tu yahan? kya hua ? "

" kuch nahi vo thakurain ne kaha ki apko kisi chiz ki jarurat padegi to aap ko takleef na ho isliye yahan sone ko kaha hai "

" thakurain ne? " kaka kuch soch mein pade " theek hai tum so jao, kuch jarurat padegi to hum keh denge " kaka ne jawab diya aur karwat badal li. Manju ek pal unhe dekhti rahi vo uski taraf nahi balki viprit disha mein karwat lekar soye the jise dekh uske man ko shanti mili aur usne chadar dhaki aur khud bhi lait gayi. Thakurain ne hume yahan kyun kaha sone ko? Bablu kaka ko to koi takleef nazar nahi ati? Kya unhone jaan kar hume yahan sulaya taki vo bablu kaka ko hume saunp de? Nahi nahi vo aisa kyun karegi bhala lekin agar aisa hua to? Manju ne sochte hue ek nazar phir kaka ki aur dekha jo usi tarah so rahe the. Uske man mein bechaini bhi badh rahi thi aur romanch bhi. Vo kuch der yahi sab sochti rahi aur phir uski ankh lag gayi.

Malini bistar par padi thi aur uski nazar khidki se bahar thi jahan sirf andhkar tha. Vo jiska intezar kar rahi thi vo bas ane hi wala tha lekin tab tak uske dimag mein din wala sapna ghum raha tha jisne use dara dia tha. Uske liye abhi tak ye rehasye tha ki mandir ki surang mein kankal mila hai to vo kiska ho sakta hai? Kya vo kafi waqt se pada tha isliye babuji us admi ke sath mil kar surang ko band karwana chahte the, kaun tha vo admi? Agar vo mil jaye to shayad is kankal se parda hatt jaye jo itne salon se wahan pada hai aur shayad us khuni ka bhi jisne use wahan rakha. Kya pata usi se bikram ka bhi sach samne aa jaye. Eka-ek khidki ke bahar light jalti bhujti hui dikhi, vo samajh gayi ki vo jiska intezar kar rahi thi vo aa chuka hai.
 

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Next is coming .... :online:
 

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yeh budhau bahut jhuth bolta hai...
Yeh bahot si baatein jaanta hai past se related par batayega nahi....
malini ko koi tarkib sochni hogi....
lo aa gaya ek aashiq uske dar pe.... oh toh isliye tharki malini ne manju ko us budhe bablu sang sone ko kah rahi taki malini aur uske aashiq ko tang na kare bablu :D
haweli hai ki hawshi logo ka thikana :D
aur haan yeh sab us gahne ki Duran meera ke pati tharki vikrant ke wajah se ho raha hai... ho na ho wohi culprit hai :approve:
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
 
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