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Thriller Haweli ~~ " The Night Is Dark " (completed)

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Andhera itna tha ki kali padh chuki haveli hote hue bi dikhai nai de rhi thi, charon aur sanata tha aur haveli ke aas pass dur dur tak is andheri raat mein koi bhi nai tha, kuch tha to vo sanata jiski awaz suni to nahi jaa sakti thi lekin mehsus jarur ho rahi thi....

Us sanate aur andhere mein jahan roshni ka namo-nishan na tha, usi samay haveli ki khidkiyun par ek roshni jhalak rahi thi jese vo us roshni se khidki ke bahar jhankne ki kosish kar rahi ho par darasal vo khidki se bahar nahi balki dhire-dhire niche utar rahi thi. Ek hath mein laltein liye aur dusre hath mein ek glass vo dhire-dhire sidiyan utar rahi thi. Uske chehre par ghabrahat thi, sidiyan utarte sath hi usne bina der kiye apne kadam samne kamre ki taraf badha diye par vahan pahunchte hi vo ruk gayi. Uski sansein ek dum hi tez ho chali thi, blouse mein kasi uski chatiyan zor-zor se uppar niche hone lagi, usne kuch pal yun hi vahan khade guzar die aur phir darwaje par halka dhakka dete hue use khol dia, andar roshni pehle se thi uske sath us kamre mein ek awaz gunj rahi thi jo haveli mein to thi par bahar tak nahi pahunch rahi thi.



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Malini garage par pahunchi jahan par kuch purani gadiyan padi thi jo puri tarah se kharab thi, bhangar jaisi halat mein padi thi. Vo thoda aage gayi to wahan par use kuch admi dikhe jo kaam karte hue nazar aa rahe the.

" kya madad kar sakta hu mei apki? " ek bujurg admi malini ke pas aya jab vo puri dukan ko dekh rahi thi.

" aap yahan ke malik hai "

" ji kuch aisa hi samjhiye, bataiye kya kaam tha apko "

" chacha hume apse kuch jankari chahie thi "

" hanji kahiye "

" hamari gaddi hai vo samne " malini ne ishara kiya " kafi purani ho gayi hai, hum soch rahe hain ki aaj kal ane wali imported gaddi le lein, bas usi ke bare mein apse ray chahte the "

" hanji bataiye usme mei apki kaise madad kar sakta hun "

" bas yahi ki apko kya lagta hai vo imported gadiyan chalegi gaon mein "

" ab kya bataye apko, seher ki nayi chizon par jada bharosa hota nahi, purani chiz hamesha nayi se jada hi chalti hai, che-che sath-sath saal purani gadiyun ko theek karke humne bechi hai jo aaj tak chal rahi hai "

" hmm baat to apki theek hai chacha, apki baat sun kar lag raha hai hume apni soch ko yahin viram lagana padega, warna bada man tha " malini bhuje man ke sath boli.

" vaise hamara ek dost hai seher mein uske bharose hum apko nayi gaddi dilwa sakte hain aur agar apko purani bechni ho to vo bhi bikwa denge " malini janti thi ki vo apne pet par laat nahi marega.

" bahut acha "

" aiye,aiye andar aiye, baith kar baat karte hain " vo malini ko andar le jane laga.

" chacha ye purani gadiyan bhi rakhte hain aap "

" nahi ji, ye to bas padi hai kabad ki tarah ab itni badi jagah hai isliye jarurat hi nahi padti hatwane ki " usne malini ki baat ka jawab diya aur use ek chote kamre mein le aya. Jahan ek chota sa pankha deewar par laga tha aur idhar-udhar ghumta hua hawa fenk raha tha. Kamra bada teetar bitar tha, vo table ke us taraf baith gaya aur malini uske samne ek sofe par baith gayi jispar kafi waqt se dhul hatai nahi gayi thi. Chai ka khali cup aur ek phone table ke usi kone par pada tha.

" to aap humko ye bataiye ki aap kitne tak ki kharidna chahti hai "

" paise ki dikkat nahi, bas pasand ani chahie " malini jawab dete hue idhar-udhar dekhne lagi, kamre ke piche badi si jagah thi khuli hui jahan par kuch gadiyan khadi thi, gaon ki nahi lag rahi thi kyun ki gaon mein itni gadiyan thi nahi aur ye jagah seher se pas hai shayad whain se gadiyan aya karti hogi. Malini soch rahi thi aur puri jagah mein kuch khoj rahi thi, khuli jagah, kuch gadiyan, ek band shutter aur wahan kaam kar rahe kuch ladke.

" apki gaddi kitni purani hai "

" yahi koi takreeban 6 saal purani "

" acha acha, jada purnai nahi hai iska acha dam mil jayega apko "

" pata karke bataiye "

" ji abhi kar deta hu " chacha ne chasme ko theek kiya aur wahan rakhe phone par se ek number milaya. " hello " malini uski baat sunne lagi " han bhaiya kaisan ho, bas hum bhi theek hai aur kam dhanda kaisa chal raha hai " malini ke pas itna samay nahi tha par vo shant baithi rahi. " han ye gaadi hai kitne mein bikegi, theek hai mei tujhe fir se phone karta hun " chacha ne baat karke phone rakha. " apki gaddi ki kimat 85 hazar bata raha hai "

" bas itne ? "

" ab purani chiz hai, purani chiz ke daam kahan milte hai " chacha ke phone par baat karne ke baad swar hi badal gaye the. Malini uski chalaki ko ache se samajh rahi thi lekin uska irada gadi kharid bech ka to tha hi nahi.

" abhi to apne kaha tha ki purani chizen salon saal chalti hai " malini ke turant jawab par chacha thode ruk gaye.

" vo lene wale ke uppar hai purani chizon ke daam kaun deta hai vaise to bahut se log kharidte hain par daam koi nahi deta jada " malini agla sawal karti use pehle kamre mein ek admi andar ghusa. Us admi ne chacha ko 500 rs pakda diye.

" 200 kam hai "

" grahak ne nahi diye, kehne laga ki apne 500 mei hi tay kiye the "

" salle madarchod " chacha badbdaya " theek hai tu jaa abhi " vo jane laga " acha sun " chacha chillaya " raat ko chakar laga jaio kuch kaam hoga to le jaio "

" raat ka kaam na diya karo chacha, sadkon par bizli hai nahi aur tumhari gadiyan sadkon se jada achi hoti hai " uske kehte hi chacha ne dant pise, usne ek tarf malini ko dekha fir uski taraf, vo bhi chacha ki nighaein padh gaya aur bina kuch bole chala gaya.

" aaj kal ke naujawan kuch ata hi nahi inhe, hamare jamane mein hum cycle par raton raat ek jagah se dusri jagah pahunch jaya karte the tab to bizli gharon mein nahi hoti thi to sadkon par kahan hogi aur inhe dekho sab kuch milne ke baad bhi inka ye haal hai " malini kuch nahi boli " han to mei apko bata raha tha ki apki gaddi 85 hazar tak ki bikegi "

" acha to hume kuch aur bhi karna padega "

" nahi nahi hum hai na, apko bas ek din hamare sath chal kar yahin seher mein kuch kagzat par dastak karne hai kanuni taur par uske baad apko hathon hath paise mil jayenge "

" bahut acha " malini apni jagah se khadi hui, vo vaise bhi yahan kuch pata karne nahi ayi thi, use bas jagah dekhni thi. " hum apko khabar karte hain, aap hume apna number de sakte hain " malini ke kehne par chacha ne apna naam aur number likh ek kagaz par malini ki taraf badha diya.

" yadav, 429676.. " akhri number padte hue malini ruki aur use dauhrane lagi. " apne apna naam kya bataya tha "

" ramlal yadav "

Malini apni gaddi mein aa baithi aur usne us parchi ko dekha jo vo haweli se layi thi. Usme likha number aur jo abhi usne garage ke chacha yani ramlal yadav se liya tha vo dono hi number ek jaisa tha. Yani subah milaye number par ramlal yadav tha aur mei na jane kya kya soch rahi thi, par tehkhane mein is jagah ka number? malini chizon ko jod pane mein asmarth ho rahi thi. Bahut se aise sawal the jo khule pade the aur unko vo jod nahi paa rahi thi. Ek pal use laga jaise vo galat jagah par khoj rahi hai lekin uske pas koi dusra chara nahi tha aur koi apna bhi nahi jispar vo bhrosa kar sake. Subah se use kuch baton ka pata chala tha jiski shuruwat us tehkhane se hui thi, ho na ho wahin haweli ke raaz dafan hai. Gaddi chalate hue malini wahan se nikal gayi.

Tehkhane se mile number ka judav is jagah se ho sakta tha ye malini ne kabhi socha nahi tha, uske liye haweli se bahar kabhi kuch tha hi nahi. Vo abhi mandir tak hi simit reh gayi thi, 3 saal pehle jab usne mandir mein khojne ki baat sochi thi tab se rajendra ko usne kaam mein laga diya tha lekin pehle do saal to kuch bhi nahi hua, malini jaisa chahti thi vo shuru tak nahi hua tha aur use yahi laga tha ki vo kabhi kuch hasil nahi kar payegi. Par fir bhi usne haar nahi mani aur uski mehnat rang le ayi thi. Malini is waqt gaddi lekar mandir ke samne khadi thi, din ka waqt tha lekin abhi bhi aisa lag raha tha jaise is jagah par ishwar ne hi shrap de diya ho, mandir ke aas pas kuch nahi tha. Insan to dur ki baat hai, janwar tak maujud nahi the, jhadiyun se ghira mandir, kharab ho chuki uski deewaron ke bich bas sanata pasra hua tha. Malini ko samjhne mein der nahi lagi ki kyun raat ke waqt yahan koi nahi ata.

3 saal pehle jo kaam usne mandir mein karwane ki sochi thi uska sirf ek hi karran tha, vo surang jise usne bikram ke muh se suna tha aur fir usi din jab uske kamre par dastak hui tab.

" kya hua aap kuch pareshan lag rahe hain " bikram ko vichlit dekh malini ne pucha aur phir kamre ka kiwad laga diya. Bikram bina kuch kahe bistar par ja baitha.

" nahi kuch khas nahi apko pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai "

" hum apki patni hai hume batayenge to man halka hoga " malini uske bagal mein baithti hui boli.

" jante hain hum par patni ho isliye patni raho apne aap ko thakur mat samjho. Ek taraf babuji jo pata nahi us mandir mein bina bataye hume kya karwa rahe hain aur uppar se aap, apne kaam par dhayan dijeye hamare mein nahi "

" hume maaf kar do malini, hume is tarah se apko nahi kehna chahie tha " bikram ne piche se akar malini ko pakda aur apne hathon se uska chehra apni aaur moda. Malini ki ankh mein ansu aa chuke the. " aap janti hai hum apse kitna pyar karte hai, chaliye rona band kijeye, hum apke liye ek tofa laye the dena bhool gaye "

" tofa? "

" han ye dekhiye " bikram ne ek kanga nikal kar malini ko thamaya jo lakdi se bana tha aur bahut hi sundar chitr uspar piroya gaya tha.

" hamare liye itna khubsurat tofa " malini ek hi pal mein apne dukh ko bhool gayi.

" han bilkul apke liye hai, ab aap roz ise apni lambi julfein kaad sakti hai aur hum apko " bikram ne malini ke gardan par honth rakh diye.

" abhi ghar par sab hai kya kar rahe hain aap " malini ne khud ko chhudane ki kosish ki lekin bikram utejit hokar piche se malini ke badal ko ragadne laga,, uski pith aur uski kamar par hath ferti hui piche ubharon ko masalne laga. Usne malini ki sarre uppar uthai aur tabhi darwaje par zor-zor se dastak hui jiski wajah se malini ke hath se kangi niche gir gayi.

" kaun hai ? "

" thakurain mein hun " malini ne kiwad khola to samne sugandha khadi thi. " ji kahiye kaki "

" vo bade thakur ko apke hath ki chai pini hai, humne unhe kaha lekin "

" koi baat nahi hum bana kar de atte hain " malini ne bikram ki taraf dekha aur chidati hui kamre se nikal gayi. Usne chandraprakash ke liye chai banai aur uske kamre ki aaur badhi. Andar koi aur bhi tha jise chandraprakash baat kar raha tha. Malini ne gate khola aur usi waqt uske kano mein pada.

" hum mandir ki surang ko hamesha ke liye band karwa dena chahte hai " par malini ko dekh chandraprakash ruk gayi.

" bapuji chai " malini dekhna chahti thi ki kaun hai wo admi jo wahan baitha hai lekin malini ki nazar nahi gayi aur na hi himmat ki vo nazar ghuma kar us taraf dekh sake. Malini mudi usi disha se jahan vo shaks baitha tha lekin vo tab bhi dhang se uska chehra nahi dekh payi, kyun ki vo shaks kamre mein dusre kone par pith ki taraf khada tha yani vo baat chandraprakash se hi kar raha tha par uski nazar unke kamre se bahar thi yani vo khidkiyun se bahar dekh raha tha. Malini ne piche se hi uski jhalak dekhne ki kosish kari aur fir bahar chali gayi.

Surang uske liye koi badi baat nahi thi us waqt lekin apne pati ke achanak gayab hone ke baad jis din thakur chandraprakash ki mrityu hui uske baad to haweli aur uski zindagi veeran ho gayi. Usi dauran sugandha bhi kuch samay baad chal basi aur uske jane ke baad hi use mandir ki kahani pata chali. Ek bar ko to vo bhi dar ke sayein mein zine lagi thi. Haweli ki raat aur uska sanata uski zindagi ka ek abhishap ban gaya tha, kai ratein usne bina soye hi bitai. Vo maan baithi thi ki mandir ka shrap use kha jayega, vo pal-pal bikram ko yaad karti, use bharosa tha vo jahan bhi hai zinda hai, vo bas kahin kisi musibat mein hai aur vo kuch bhi nahi kar rahi hai. Bapuji ke rehte to kabhi usne kosish nahi ki kyun ki vo unke kaam mein dhakal nahi kar sakti thi lekin ab jab vo akeli thi tab vo is kaam ko khud karna chahti thi aur usne uski shuruwat mandir se karwai kyun ki wahi ek baat thi jiske liye usne bikram ko apne pitaji se naraz hote dekha tha. Use nahi pata tha ki wahan kuch milega ya nahi bas use ek shuruwat karni thi aur gaon ki bhi yahi kahani thi ki mandir ka abhishap hi haweli ko kha gaya isliye use usi abhishap ko janna tha ki kya wakai mein usi abhishap ne haweli ke vansh aur uske pati ko nigla hai ya fir koi aur wajah thi.

Malini ne mandir se gaddi haweli ki aaur modh di aur vo haweli jaa pahunchi. Gaddi se utar kar usne haweli ke darwaje par dastak di.

" thakurain, vo kaka aa gaye hai " manju ne malini ke andar atte hi suchna di.

" hmm " malini apne kamre ki taraf badhi fir kuch soch kar uppar chal di jahan usne bablu kaka ka saman lagwa diya tha.
ek ke baad ek kirdaar judte jaa rahe hai haweli se.. jaise yeh ab naya kirdaar ramlal.. iska kya nata hai haweli walo se....
shaq ki sui toh is pe bhi hai...
So malini actually mein bikram ko dhund rahi hai I mean to say ki woh koi kadi, koi raah dhund rahi hai jiske jariye woh bikram tak pahunch paye...
Kya baat hai yeh budhau kaka wapas aa gaya haweli...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
 
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lagta hain woh ladka hi khooni hai... shayad usne shalu ka woh clip wahan chhod diya hoga taaki shaalu fansh jaaye...
log taale ki chaabi dhundte hai aur idhar malini taale dhundti phire....
lo ek aur taala mil gaya ushe... pata nahi in chaabiyo aur taalon ka kya chakkar hai...
kaafi natakiya mod aa rahe hai... upor se malini ki flashback bhi ajibo garib.... lagta hain bachpan se hi ghatanao ki ladi lag gayi thi joh ab tak jaari hai....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
(Btw sorry late revo ke liye)

Vo ladka to ajit hai jo inspector bana hua hai :D
Talle hi to milne mushkil hai haweli mein, chabiyan to mili hi jati hai. Har kisi ke bachapn mein kuch na kuch hta hai aur ye to paida hi aisi hui hai lagta hai :D
Thank you naina ji:hug: nahi samajh skta hun, life mei bzy ho jata hai banda... koi na :dost:

is kahani ke kirdaar kuch zyada hi sochte rahte hai.... aur sabse zyada sochti hai malini... past mein itni ghum ho jaati hai ki vartmaan mein kya ho raha hai ird gird iski koi ilm hi nahi...
Kamal hai.. dost logis bhi tharki . so malini masoom thi.. ushe tharki banaya uske hi tharki dosto ne.. yeh koun chup chupke dekh raha tha.. hoga koi maha tharki..
Ab yeh naya kirdaar chhotu... maybe in future bahot kaam ka sabit hoga malini ke liye..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:

Kyun ki kahani ka patr piche se hi juda hua hai. Agar present mein kuch khojna ho to past mei jana hi padega varna uske jawab nahi milenge.
Dost logis tharki nahi hai , ladkiyun ke vichar hai bhale hi chehre par samne se sharam aur aise dikhati hai ki unhe kuch nahi pata par batei aisi karti hai :D
Hoga koi aisa hi...
Are bahut kaam ki chiz hai vo.. :D

Thank you so much naina ji :hug: keep reading
 

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Bahut ho shandar aur razdaar update
Ye ladki kon ho sakti hai .kahi ye neelam ya Karuna mese koi to nahi

Thank you so much bhai :hug:
Dekhte hain neelam aur karuna mein se koi hoga ya nahi...
 

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Yeh sharma karama sarasar jhuth bol raha hai... aur baat wasiyat ki usme bhi isine hi jarur koi ghapla kara hoga ...
I think woh aurat shayad meera hi hogi.. .. shayad is gahne ki dukan ne woh gahne bhi haweli se chori ki hogi.. chorni kahin ki... :bat:
Ab ushe budhau sharma sang planning kar malini ko maarne ki planning karing.. iski toh aisi ki taisi... :mad: isiki wajah se shayad haweli ka haal behal hai... are isko pakad ke do teen thappad lagao... sabhi raaz ugal degi... aur haan yeh sabse badi tharki yehi hai :bat:
bhala ho us chhotu ka joh samay rahte bata diya malini ko...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
Hahaha.... Ghne kyun chori karegi aur uska vakeel se kya taluk dekhte hai kya hota hai..
Abhi clear thdi hua hai ki kahani kis waqt ki hai aur kis waqt ki nahi..
Thank you nainaji :hug:
ek ke baad ek kirdaar judte jaa rahe hai haweli se.. jaise yeh ab naya kirdaar ramlal.. iska kya nata hai haweli walo se....
shaq ki sui toh is pe bhi hai...
So malini actually mein bikram ko dhund rahi hai I mean to say ki woh koi kadi, koi raah dhund rahi hai jiske jariye woh bikram tak pahunch paye...
Kya baat hai yeh budhau kaka wapas aa gaya haweli...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
Vo bechara budha garib admi uska kya hai :sigh:
Han uska maksad hi sirf wahi tha, ki bikram ko kaise khoj sake.. ya fir ki vo kaise gayab hua vo kaise dhund sake.
Han ji aa hi gaye...
Thank you so much naina ji :hug:

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" itna karane ki kya jarurat thi thakurain " bablu kaka kamre mein apna saman rakhte hue bole jab unhone malini ko darwaje par khada paya.

" kab tak aap haweli ke bahar rahenge apki bhi umar ho gayi hai "

" baat to ap bhi theek keh rahi hai thakurain " bablu kaka baithna chahte the lekin malini khadi thi isliye baith nahi sakte the.

" aap aram kijeye, hum apse sham ko baat karte hain " malini ke pas sawal to bahut the lekin usne abhi puchna sahi nahi samjha.

" ji bahut acha "

Malini wapis jaa hi rahi thi lekin use kuch yaad aya aur vo ruk gayi, bablu kaka khat par baith chuke the " apne hamara khat pahuncha diya? " Malini ke sawal par bablu kaka wapis khade ho gaye.

" han thakurain hume us bare mein apse baat karni thi "

" hmm? "

" karuna beti apke bataye hue patte par nahi rehti, hum jab khat dene ke liye wahan gaye to wahan to koi aur hi rehta hai. Puchne par bhi kuch nahi pata chala "

" aise kaise ho sakta hai "

" hum bhi yahi soch rahe the, kya apke pas patta sahi tha? "

" jahan tak hume yaad hai wahi hona chahie tha, fir bhi hum dekh lete hain, itne waqt se koi baat-cheet nahi hui to ho sakta hai unhone apna pata badal liya ho "

" ho sakta hai ye bhi "

" hmm theek hai aap aram kijeye " malini sochte hue niche aa gayi. Use yakeen tha jo pata usne diya vo sahi tha lekin itne saal guzar jane ke baad ho sakta hai ki usi se koi galti ho gayi ho. Vo apne kamre mein chali gayi aur bistar par lait gayi. Thakan uske sharir mein ho rahi thi par vo janti thi ki ye thakan sharirk nahi dimagi hai. Kal raat tehkhane mein jitna dekha tha uske baad jo bhi subah se hua uske piche koi baat hai jiska judav haweli se hai aur agar aisa hai to bablu kaka ke pas jarur jawab honge. Kuch hai jo sharmaji, madadnlal aur haweli ki zameen se juda hai. Bikram ke lapata hone mein sirf mandir hi nahi hai balki aur bhi kuch batein hai jo waqt mein kahin chupi hai jise khoj kar hi raaz se parda hataya jaa sakta hai. Par use pehle hume us din ko dhang se sochna hoga jis din bikram lapata hue the, kya hua tha us din jispar humne abhi tak dhayan nahi diya tha? Malini ne kafi der socha lekin vo din baki din ke jaisa hi tha. Bas bikram dophar ko bahar gaye aur phir kabhi vapis hi nahi aye. Unse hui akhri mulakat mein bhi kabhi ye nahi laga ki vo kisi chiz se pareshan hai. Kya jo anhoni unke sath hui use vo anjan the? Kisi sadasye ne to unhe us din dekha hoga, mulakat ki hogi, agar hume vo insan mil jaye jise us din unki akhri mulakat hui thi to shayad hume malum ho sake ki unke sath kya hua hai lekin itne saal pehle unse kaun mila hoga ye baat khojna asan nahi hai. Par akhir unke sath hua to hua kya? Kya vo humse kuch chupa rahe the? Malini ki sochte hue ankh lag gayi.

Malini ke hath mein jalti hu mashal thi, panv mein chapal nahi thi aur vo surang ke andhere mein andar ghusti jaa rahi thi. Uski sansein behad tez thi jo maujda khamoshi mein shor kar rahi thi. " malini "

" kaun hai ? " ghabrate hue usne mashal piche ki taraf kari. Awaz usi andhere mein se ayi thi. " malini.. " koi pukar laga raha tha. Awaz behad dabi hui thi par usme saaf tha ki vo behad dari hui hai, takleef mein hai. " kaun hai udhar " malini ne fir pucha aur kadam khud ba khud us taraf badh chale. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki jis raste se vo ayi hai jahan use koi nahi dikha tha awaz usi taraf se kaise aa sakti hai.

" malini, hum hai.. " malini jaise jaise us awaz ke najdeek pahunch rahi thi vo aur saaf hoti jaa rahi thi.

" bikram kya aap hai " mashal ki jalti roshni mein uski ankhein ek hi chiz par jami hui thi, us awaz ke piche chehre par.

" malini idhar " wahan do raste the jo shayad usne atte waqt nahi dekhe the. Bahar se dekhne par to dono hi surang andhkar mein dubi thi jisme se ek ke andar se awaz aa rahi thi. Malini ne mashal ko majbuti se pakda aur apni sarre ko paun se halka uppar uthate hue vo guffa mein ghus gayi. Thoda aage badne par pairon ne pani ko chuha jo behad thanda tha jise mehsus karte hi uske badan mein thand ki lehar daud gayi.

" bikram aap kidhar.. hai " peron se chadti thand uski awaz mein jhalakne lagi. Andhere se malini ko bhay tha lekin apne pati ki khoj mein vo bhool gayi thi par jab ab vo awaz nahi aa rahi thi jise vo dhundti hui yahan ayi thi to uska dhayan fir andhere par chala gaya. " bikram kahan hai aap " uski awaz mein ghabrahat thi. Use lagne laga jaise koi sayein ki tarah uske sath chal raha ho. Sehami hui malini kisi tarah apne man par kabu kar aage badh rahi thi aur achanak uska per pani mein kisi chiz se takraya jiske takrate sath hi vo wahan ruk gayi. Usne mashal ko niche ki aur kiya to pani ki parchai mein jalti aag dikhi yani jo kuch bhi uske pairon se takraya tha vo pani ke bhitar chupa tha. Malini ne jhuk kar pani ke andar hath dala hi tha ki use laga jaise wahan kuch hai. Usne fauran mashal ko apni dayein aur ghumaya aur wahan par kankal ko dekha jisme se awaz aa rahi thi " malini... malini " kankal ko dekh aur usme se apne naam ki pukar sun malini ghabra kar chilla uthi aur mashal uske hath se chhut kar pani mein girte hi bhuj gayi.

Malini zor-zor se chillate hue uth baithi, mathe par pasine ki bundein saaf bata rahi thi ki chehre ka dar koi sadharan dar nahi hai. Agae uske darwaje pas dastak na ho rahi hoti to shayad uska sapna tuta nahi hota. Vo apne palang se uthi, uski sansein abhi bhi tez thi.

" thakurain " samne bablu kaka khade the. Malini ka chehra dekh unhe laga jaise kuch pareshani hai " thakurain aap theek to hain? "

" ji.. bas ek bura sapna dekh liya tha, kahiye " malini ne darwaja chhoda aur aine ke samne khade hokar apna chehra dekhne lagi jispar dar abhi tak tha.

" vo hum soch rahe hain ki bazar se kuch saman le aye. Haweli mein kuch saman khatam ho gaya hai "

" theek hai "

" ji aur ye paise jo hum sheher se laye hain " kaka ne paise nikale aur malini unki taraf ghum gayi.

" sheher mein haweli ka kis chiz ka kaam hai jo aap wahan se har baar jatte hain to paise le atte hain " malini ne pehli dafa ye sawal kiya tha.

" vo .. thakurain kiraya hai " vo kuch soch kar bole aur fir chup hue " salon se haweli ki zameen par kiraye par di gayi hai to ye paisa usi ka kiraya hai "

" aap jante hain haweli ke har zameen ke bare mein ? " malini ne apna dusra prashan kiya.

" nahi... par thakur sahab ne sheher ki kuch zameen dikha rakhi thi, salon se wahan jakar mei hi unka kiraya laya karta tha bas wahi pata hai "

" aur kuch to nahi hai? "

" aur kuch? " hairani mein vo malini ko dekhne laga. Aaj se pehle kabhi malini ne itne sawal nahi kiye the aur thakur sahab ke jane ke baad to kabhi nahi. Par aaj itne sawal sun vo khud thoda hairan the. " baki to hume koi gyan nahi hai "

" ji bahut acha " malini ko jo samjhna tha usne samajh liya tha vo vapis aiyne ki aaur dekhne lagi. Bablu kaka kuch ek-do pal wahin khade rahe fir haweli se nikal gaye. Malini asmanjas mein thi, uski nazar mein ab sharmaji, madanlal, vikram ke baad bablu kaka bhi aa gaye the. Kuch batein vo bhi chupa rahe the jinhe janna jaruri tha.

Manju ne bablu kaka ko bahar jatte hue dekha aur vo kitchen se nikal kar malini ke pas ayi. " thakurain "

" manju hum soch rahe the ki aaj raat tum bablu kaka ke sath so jao "

" kaka ke sath? " manju chaunkte hue boli " par unke sath kyun? "

" hume unki tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi. Yahi wajah thi ki humne unka kamra haweli mein karwaya. Tumhe koi pareshani hai? " malini ne aine mein se manju ko dekha. Manju jo baat use batane ayi thi ab vo bata nahi sakti thi, us raat jisne uske sharir ko dabocha tha vo bablu kaka the ye baat vo malini ko batana chahti thi lekin ab bata kar koi faiyda nahi tha. Usne nah mein sar hila diya " hume koi pareshani nahi hai thakurain "

" bahut acha, vaise tum kuch kehni ayi thi? "

" nahi.. vo bas lakdiyan nahi thi to aaj apki roti bhi chule par hi sekh dein "

" hmm " malini ke jawab ke manju wahan se chali gayi. Malini ne uske jatte hi apna kamra band kiya aur almari kholi. Usne kuch saman hataya aur piche chupaye hue mobile phone ko bahar nikala. Usne uska button daba kar on kiya aur ek number milaya. " hum shakuntla devi bol rahe hain "
 
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yeh malini karna kya chaahti hai... maan bhi le ki kuch log baatein chupa rahe hai maybe woh budhau bablu bhi chupa raha hai.. par iska yeh matlab toh nahi ki baaton ko ugalwane ke liye bholi manju ki use karo... yeh malini khood jaake kyun nahi so jaati budhe ke sath... badi aayi hukum jhaadne wali..."bahot achha, bahot achha "bol bol ke bechari manju ko hi fasane ki chakkar mein yeh kamini malini.. ... joh sapna yeh dekh rahi thi woh sach ho jaaye toh kuch maja aaye... are is malini ki toh aisi ki taisi :bat:
Khair.... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:
 

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Lagta hai ye sapna jo atit se juda hai. Mahaj ittfak nhi hai ,der saber Vikram ka kankal bhi wahi se milega jaha se us bacche ka kankal mila hai.puri kahani me ek bat jo gour kerne layak hai wo hai time.jab time tha tab kuch kiya nahi ,jammene chali gayi , property ka pata nahi na hi vasiyat aur in sabse behtar apne aas pas ke insano tak ka pata nahi, ki kon kesa hai .itne time me sare raj chipa diye gaye . Khuni ka kuch ata pata nahi. Aur ab malini ji andhre me tir mar rahi hai . Ki kabhi to nishane per lage ab na power hai na hi pesa .kyu ki dono ek dusre ke purak hai. aur na hi bacha hai vishwas .le de ke bacha hai uska aur manju ka jism jiska fayeda uthane ka soch rhi hai malini . Per kya razdaar itna bevkuf hoga jo apna raz aese hi jahir ker de ...
Dekhna dilchasp hoga ??
 

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Pura Update hi paste nahi hua what the fuck :doh:Next update mein wahi se shuru kar dunga... :sigh:
 
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yeh malini karna kya chaahti hai... maan bhi le ki kuch log baatein chupa rahe hai maybe woh budhau bablu bhi chupa raha hai.. par iska yeh matlab toh nahi ki baaton ko ugalwane ke liye bholi manju ki use karo... yeh malini khood jaake kyun nahi so jaati budhe ke sath... badi aayi hukum jhaadne wali..."bahot achha, bahot achha "bol bol ke bechari manju ko hi fasane ki chakkar mein yeh kamini malini.. ... joh sapna yeh dekh rahi thi woh sach ho jaaye toh kuch maja aaye... are is malini ki toh aisi ki taisi :bat:
Khair.... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:

Usko nahi pata ki budhao kaisa hai uske sath. Kaun sa manju ke sath vo kuch kar hi jayega raat ko :D
Sach ho jaye, kara dein sach ok... :cool:

Thank you naina ji :hug:
 
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