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Yaha par...
Sath jarur dena..
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To thoda dhyana dena uper niche kuch hoga to...
Aur sabhi baki jo famous writer hey ya purane readers se unko bhi apna namaskar...
Nice update broIntroduction...
Shadow Heir: The Syndicate’s Prince
Kya hota hai jab ek perfect dikhta ladka… perfect hota hi nahi?
Ayaan Rajan —
Mumbai ke ek powerful business family ka heir.
College student, calm mind, sharp intellect…
Log kehte hain, uske jaise ladke sirf success ke liye bane hote hain.
Lekin uski aankhon mein kuch aur chhupa hota hai.
Woh zyada bolta nahi, zyada dikhata bhi nahi…
Par uski khamoshi mein kuch aisa hai jo log samajh nahi paate.
Wo bas ek rich student nahi hai.
Uski zindagi ka ek aur pehlu hai —
Ek aisa pehlu jo sirf raat ki hawa jaanti hai…
Aur jise samajhne mein logon ko bahut der lagti hai.
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“Kuch logon ke raaz likhe nahi jaate… woh mehsoos kiye jaate hain.”
Start karo iss kahani ko — jahan har muskurahat ke peeche ek sawaal hai....
Nice update broA global underworld saga blending legacy, blood, power, and shadows.
Update 1 – The Prince Among Men
“Tum logon ke liye yeh sirf ek naam hai…
...par kuch logon ke liye, yeh maut ka dusra roop hai.”
— Dabi huvi awaje from the East Mumbai Docks, about The Revenant
Mumbai – 6:45 AM – Rajan Estate, Sea-Facing Balcony
Chai ki halki si khushbu udti thi, lekin Ayaan Rajan ke chehre pe koi softness nahi thi.
Uska suit press ho chuka tha, leather strapped watch sharp thi — aur aankhon mein wahi shanti , jo uske baare mein legends banati jaa rahi thi.
Par abhi, wo sirf ek business student tha.
Ek heir.
Ek golden boy.
Kabir Rajan, uska bada bhai — solid build, army-cut hair, — balcony mein aaya.
Kabir: "Meeting 9 baje hai. Tu tayyar hai?"
Ayaan : "Hamesha."
Kabir: "Tu meri tarah fight karta hota, toh tu bhi army mein hota."
Ayaan : "Mujhe fight karni nahi padti, bhai. Main bas sab kuch shantise khatam karta hoon."
Kabir hansa, aur jaane laga. Usse kya pata — uske chhote bhai ne kal raat ek gun-runner ka cold clean-up kiya tha, bina ek boond khoon dikhaye.
10:30 AM – Mumbai Business University
Ayaan ne apni matte black Audi R8 campus ke bahar park ki. Do ladkiyan uski gaadi aur uske suit ko dekh kar ek dusri ko kohni mari.
Wo popular tha, but na milnewala .
College ke doston mein Dev tha — chill banda, mid-level business family, thoda funny.
Aur Shruti — smart, khud ko hi hoshiyar samjne wali , and ... curious about Ayaan.
Shruti: "Sir Rajan, hum normal log aapko coffee pilane laayak hain kya?"
Ayaan : "Bas yeh mat kehna ki main alag hoon."
Dev: "Nahi nahi... tu alag nahi. Tu seedha dusri planet ka hai."
– South Mumbai, Old Port Warehouse
Do aadmi ek table par baith ke deal kar rahe the. Ek Takla , body wala , gold chain pehenewala — Chiku, right hand of Nayak Bhau.
Chiku: "Rajan ka Maal firse bechna shuru krega toh bhai tereko goli dega."
Dealer: "Tu dara raha hai ya bata raha hai?"
Chiku ne thoda muskuraake ek video play kiya — ek aadmi ke dono haath kaat ke petrol ke drum mein gira diye gaye the.
2:00 PM – Campus Library – Ayaan ka Phone vibrate huva
Ek safety app pe ek message blink karta hai:
Trial aarahi hey : "Red Envelope – Code 72X – Location: Mandvi Docks – sirf dekhna . No kill."
Ayaan :
Toh aaj raat fir ek mission hai… Sirf dekhna hey … shamil nahi hona hey .
6:30 PM – Rajan Mansion – Private Dining Room
Table pe sirf teen log the:
Vikram Rajan – father, grey hair, Bussines circle ka Kingmaker
Kabir Rajan – bada bhai , politics mein badhta huva suraj
Ayaan – chota beta , sabse shant, sabse khatarnak, sab kilye paheli
Vikram: "Kabir, Delhi lobby ready hai?"
Kabir: "Final ha chahiye CM office se. Bas... humara naam clean rehna chahiye."
Vikram: "Aur tu, Ayaan? Campus mein sab thik?"
Ayaan: "Haan. Log soch rahe hain ki main normal banda hoon."
Vikram: "Hona bhi chahiye."
Ayaan ki aankhon mein ek second ke liye chamak aayi. Wo ek second jaisa kisika dil dhakane wali chamak thi
11:45 PM – Mandvi Docks – Operation Mode
Black hoodie, gloves, chehara Adha dhaka huva .
Ayaan silent age badhta hey containers ke beech.
Uski contact lens UV chalu hai — jo invisible ink track kar sakta hai.
Target: Ek chota Hatiyar bechnewala — Bahadur Jaiswal — meeting with unknown buyer.
Ayaan ne chat se scene dekha.
Dur se hi record kiya.
Aur apne link par send kiya
Tabhi ek naya message flash hota hai:
“Welcome to The Vestige. Trial Complete.”
Uske haath pe ek black inverted flame tattoo glow karta hai — UV ke under.
Symbol of The Revenant.
Next Morning – College Campus
Dev: "Abe tu kal party mein nahi aaya?"
Ayaan: "Bas thoda chill kar raha tha."
Shruti : "Tum jaise logon ke pass bhi kuch chhupane layak hota hai kya?"
Ayaan : "Har kisi ke paas hota hai... fark sirf yeh hai ki kuch logon ke raaz chupte nahi... maarte hain."..
Nice update broUpdate 2: The Calm Beneath
“Jo log duniya ke samne muskurate hain, unke andar sabse zyada shor hota hai.”
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Mumbai – Rajan Estate – 7:15 AM
Ayaan Rajan ka room silent tha. Curtains se nikalti subah ki roshni uske desk tak aa rahi thi, jahan ek photo frame rakha tha — Rajan parivaar ka ek purana photo.
Usme Ayaan sabse chhota tha. Ek corner mein, smile karta hua. Na aaj waala cold expression, na waise aankhen.
Aaj Ayaan mirror ke saamne khada tha. White kurta, neatly rolled sleeves, black strap watch. Kamar tak hairstyle, bilkul disciplined. Bas ek chehra — jo kuch bolta nahi, sab dekh leta hai.
Door knock hua.
Kabir: "Tu ready hai? Aaj Baba ke saath meeting hai office mein."
Ayaan: "Main sirf dekhne jaa raha hoon. Decision aap log lo."
Kabir: "Kabhi kabhi decisions un logon se bhi aate hain, jo kuch nahi bolte."
Kabir chala gaya. Ayaan ne ek minute tak mirror mein apne aap ko dekha. Phir drawer khola — andar ek black envelope rakha tha.
Uspar sirf ek symbol bana tha — inverted black flame with a lotus.
Bas dekha. Touch nahi kiya.
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Rajan Industries – Boardroom – 11:00 AM
Vikram Rajan, Kabir, aur Ayaan ke saamne investors baithe the.
Discussion chal raha tha ek new chemical plant ke expansion pe. Foreign delegate awkwardly Hindi samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Investor: "Agar local dons waha ka pressure daal rahe hain, toh hum plant kahan se secure rakhenge?"
Kabir: "We’ll handle the local political pressure. Local mafia... hum unko jante hain."
Investor: "Jante hain ya deal kiya hai?"
Room mein ek thoda sa tension ka mahol ho gaya tha.
Ayaan: "Pressure sirf tab hota hai jab aap kisi aur ke rules follow karte ho. Rajan Industries apne rules khud likhti hai."
Investor kuch nahi bola. Lekin uski aankhon mein doubt bhi tha... aur thoda respect bhi.
Meeting ke baad Kabir ne corridor mein Ayaan ko roka.
Kabir: "Tu zyada sharp bol gaya."
Ayaan: "Main sirf unko woh sunwa raha tha jo darr ko kam karta hai."
Kabir: "Tu bhi baba jaisa ho raha hai... lekin tere andar kuch alag hai."
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Mumbai Business College – 2:00 PM
Ayaan ne campus enter kiya toh hamesha ki tarah kuch ladkiyan usko dekh ke whisper kar rahi thi. Lekin Ayaan ka focus bas ek Chhote group pe tha — Dev aur Shruti.
Dev: "Abe tu raat ko phone pe nahi tha. Kahan tha?"
Ayaan: "Bas... thoda personal kaam tha."
Shruti: "Tum hamesha mystery mein rehte ho, Ayaan. Kabhi normal behave karlo."
Ayaan: "Agar main normal ho jaaun, toh tumhara interest chala jaayega."
Dev: "Abe kya baat boli!"
Teeno Hans diye us bat par
Tabhi ek junior student bhaagta hua aaya.
Student: "Bhaiya... gate ke bahar kuch log aaye hain. Rohan ko pakad liya hai."
Ayaan: "Kya matlab?"
Student: "Woh Bhau ke log hain. Keh rahe hain Rohan ne unke area mein software becha."
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College Gate – 2:20 PM
Bhau ke aadmi — do body shody vale bande — Rohan ko dhamka rahe the.
Chiku : "Abe humare area ka rule todta hai? Permission liya tha tu?"
Rohan: "Sir college project tha. Profit ka nahi tha usmey kuch ."
Ek thappad padta hai uske gaal pe.
Ayaan gate ke andar se dekh raha tha. Uska phone vibrate karta hai.
Secure Ping: “dekho No action. Najar rakho Sirf kya hota hey .”
Wo ruk gaya. Ankhe choti kar ke dekh raha tha, un gundo ka face yaad rakh raha tha . Ek photo leli unki aram se..
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Rajan Mansion – Night – 9:45 PM
Dining table pe sirf Vikram aur Kabir the.
Kabir: "Bhau ka interfere badh raha hai. Apne area se nikal ke colleges tak aa gaya hai."
Vikram: "Mumbai mein rule karna ho toh Bhau jaise kutto ko ya toh paalna padta hai... ya kaatna padta hai."
Ayaan: "Kabhi kabhi kutta sirf bhaukta hai. Kaatna sirf uska sapna hota hai."
Kabir: "Tu kuch zyada hi soch raha hai. Sab thik toh hai?"
Ayaan: "Main bas dekh raha hoon."
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Adhi rat Ko – Mumbai Suburb – Abandoned Parking Lot
Ayaan black hoodie mein ek shadow ki tarah khada tha.
Ek chhoti device uske haath mein thi — laser audio scanner. Do Bhau ke log car mein baith ke baat kar rahe the.
Goon 1: "Shipment kal raat Reay Road se jayega."
Goon 2: "Aur Chiku ne Rajan college wale ko foda tha . Bhau khush tha us bat par ."
Ayaan: "Toh yeh sirf personal nahi... political bhi ho gaya hai."
Ayaan ne scanner band kiya. GPS ping bheja. Surveillance report upload.
Reply aaya:
“Marked. distance rakhna . Writ Council ko bhej diya hey .”
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Next Morning – College Corridor – 9:00 AM
Shruti ne Ayaan ko corner mein roka.
Shruti: "Tum kuch chhupa rahe ho. Aur main pakad loongi."
Ayaan: "Jo cheez chhupi ho, usse dhoondhne ka matlab sirf curiosity nahi hota... kabhi kabhi khatra bhi hota hai."
Shruti ruki. Kuch bol nahi paayi.
Ayaan ne ek second ke liye uski aankhon mein dekha, phir side se chalkar nikal gaya — ek naam ki tarah... ek raaz ki tarah.
– Unknown Room – Red Light Scanner
Ek man in shadows ne UV light mein ek black flame lotus tattoo ko scan kiya.
Voice : “The Revenant is awake.”....
Bhayankar fadu update tha broUpdate 3 – The Weight of Silence
Main College Student hoon. Par har raat ek aur duniya mein zinda hoon.
Naam Ayaan Rajan.
Log samajhte hain main sirf ek industrialist ka ladka hoon.
Galat soch rahe hain ohh log jo Sirf bacha samj rahe hey muje .
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Raat – 2:17 AM – Rajan Estate Basement
Ek chhoti si light jal rahi thi.
Samne laptop open tha. Do security video chal rahe the.
Ek mein Bhau ke aadmi ek chhoti warehouse mein Hatiyar bech rahe the. Doosre mein, local police unse haath mila rahi thi.
Main chup tha.
Mere peeche ek awaaz aayi —
“Trial 02 clear. Observation complete. Vestige ko alert bhej diya gaya hai.”
Wo awaaz kisi aur ki nahi, Ghostblade ki thi — mera banda. Kabir Naidu.
Silent killer. Ex-BSF. Banda 4 minute mein aadmi hawa bana deta hai.
Main: “Kabir, iss shipment mein kuch toh off lag raha hai. Bhau itna openly arms deal nahi karta. Koi aur bhi hai scene mein.”
Kabir : “Ho sakta hai... Jade Bastion ka ek code dekha gaya tha . Shayad collaboration chal raha hai.”
Main bas haan mein sir hila ke CCTV ka angle zoom karne laga.
Andar ek banda tha, hoodie mein. Chehra nahi dikha. Par meri gut bol rahi thi…
“Yeh normal nahi hai.”
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9:45 AM – Mumbai Business College
Main apni black hoodie aur jeans mein campus mein aaya.
Bike side mein park ki, aur sidha Dev ke table pe.
Dev – same old. Chill, mastikhor, par loyal
Usne bola: “Abe sun, Shruti pooch rahi thi tu raat ko hostel mein nahi tha.”
Main: “Usse bolna — main neend mein chalta hoon.”
Woh hansa, par uski aankhon mein ek doubt tha ki kaha gaya tha.
Shruti baad mein aayi.
Uski aankhon mein vohi cheez thi jo mujhe khatarnak lagti hai — shak aur samajh dono.
Shruti: “Tum zyada bolte nahi ho. Lekin sab kuch jaante ho.”
Main : “Zyada jaankari... zyada mushkil badalti hey shruti .”
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Shaam 6:15 PM – South Mumbai – Cafe ke bahar
Bhau ka aadmi — Chiku — ek banda ko dhamka raha tha.
Woh banda sirf ek coder tha. Usne Bhau ke digital payment system ke bypass codes develop kiye the... bina pooche.
Chiku: “Tere jaise keyboard warrior ko kaise samjhaun? Haan?”
Main woh scene door se dekh raha tha.
Vestige ke rules simple hain — bina karan khun kharaba nahi chahiye. Dekho khali
Kabir (Ghostblade) ne mujhe call kiya:
“Agar Chiku zyada kuch kare toh mujhe bol. Main handle kar lunga. Tu clean reh.”
Main: “Chiku ki hadd cross hui toh tera number Pehele lagega bhai . Abhi bas record kar.”
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Raat – 12:33 AM – Dadar Flyover ke neeche
Rook — yaani Zoya Khan — Cyber Queen. Uske bag mein full surveillance setup hota hai.
Zoya: “Bhau kuch aur plan kar raha hai. Mera drone camera ne ek truck trace kiya hai — full of military-grade Hatiyar .”
Main: “Tracking chip daali?”
Zoya: “Already done. But sun, yeh truck kis factory se nikla pata hai?”
Main: “Kiski?”
Zoya : “Rajan Group ki subsidiary se.”
Mera dimaag freeze ho gaya.
Apne ghar ke andar se leak?
Koi toh double game khel raha hai.
Main chup raha. Bas ek line boli:
“Ye silence ek din laash ban jaayegi.”
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Next Day – College Campus – Library mein Shruti ke saath
Woh mujhe ghur rahi thi.
Shruti: “Tum kabhi emotionally react nahi karte. Tumhare jaise log dangerous hote hain.”
Main : “Main react nahi karta, Shruti... main direct var karta hoon.”
Usne aankh nahi churaayi.
Main bhi nahi.
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Final Scene – 3:00 AM – Warehouse ke andar, Ayaan akela tha
Main akela gaya — bina backup.
Target: Us truck ke delivery logs trace karna.
Andar ek file mili.
Uspe code tha — VX-893 – Vestige Tag
Matlab… yeh truck authorized tha. Par kisi aur ke naam pe.
Tabhi ek bullet mere kaan ke paas se nikli.
Main jhuka.
Do shadows piche aaye. Silencers ke saath.
Mujhe samajh aa gaya —
Mujhe khatam karne aaye hain. Par mujhe pehchaan liya toh nahi...
Main ek chhoti switch nikali — smoke bomb drop kiya.
Chhup ke nikla.
Mission cancel . Par ek baat confirm thi — mere andar ke circle mey kisi ne game chalu kar diya tha.
Main: “Theek hai… ab main bhi apne rule todta hoon. Lekin sirf ek baar.”
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To be continued...