Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

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[RED Ashoka]

Update 18 is hafte me aayega

 

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Aaj raat tak update aayega

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 18 : Ek raaj


Arjun ghar laut aaya

raat ke time

Khana bankar tayaar ho jata hai
Dadi ke hatho me rojana ki tarah maal thi



jise wo jap rhi thi wahi arjun ki maa shanti rasoi me thi aur chachi khana jama rahi thi aur dadaji kursi pe baithe hue the siya bhi kursi pe baithe kitaben padh rahi hoti hai


Chachi khana parosti hai roti methi ki sabji aur daal

Khana khane ke baad Arjun dadaji se baat krne ki sochta hai ki "aaj to dadaji se ye devghar ke baare me jankar hi rahunga "


Khana khane ke baad Arjun dadaji ke kamre me jata h jaha dadaji baithe hote


Dadaji" are aao Arjun kaise aana hua

Arjun " wo dadaji, darasal

Dadaji" thoda sochte hue kya jannna aaye ho

Arjun thoda chauke.dekhta hai

Dada" devghar ke baare me janne aaya ho

Arjun" pr dadaji aapko kaise pata chla


Dada"ek halki banawati muskurahat se khade hote aur khidki ki taraf dekhte h "apne kismat se bhala kon bach Sakta hai"



Jaise hi dadaji ne ye kaha Arjun soch me pad gaya



Arjun"dekhiye dadaji jabse mai devghar aaya hu tabse mujhe kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha ,mujhe janna h yaha k baare me aur bhala aapse behatar kon batayega



Dadaji" Lekin tumhari maa chahti hai ki tum un sab cheezo se dur raho



Arjun: lekin kyo , aakhir ye mera bhi gaav hai,mujhe janna hai


Dadaji" gambheer Hote hue: wo aag hai arjun,aag wo phir jala degi


Arjun ne bahas karna sahi nahi samjha aur wo jane laga


Dadaji" kuch bhi krne se pahle Arjun apni maa ka bhi soch lena , tum me uski jaan basti hai wrna wo to kab ki mar chuki hoti


Arjun ye sunkar to waha se chala aata aur apne kamre jane se pahle shanti devi ke kamre ki aur chal deta hai


Darwaza halka khula hua tha arjun andar jata hai jaha shanti devi kuch kpdo ko jamakar ikdinki almari me rakh rahi hoti hai

Shanti " are arjun aao beta, kuch chahiye the?


Arjun "nahi maa ,mai to bus aise hi bat krne aaya tha



Shanti devi kpde Rakh kr palang pe baith jati hai aur Arjun bhi whi baith jata hai


Shanti "tum kuch sochme lag rahe ho kya hua ,


Arjun " nahi maa ,wo bus nind nahi aa rhi thi to aise hi


Shanti " to tum yahi so jao itne saal baad laute ho aur itne dino se ek bar bhi apni maa ke pas nahi soye tum


Arjun" wo maa mujhe kuch kaam krna tha to mai wo krke phir aajaunga sone


Shanti(udas hote hue)

" subah kr lena , abhi so jao thak gye hoge,


Arjun (shanti devi ko pyar se piche galte lgte hue )"thoda hi maa ,mai pakka aajaunga sone


Shanti" acha thik hai


Arjun apne kamre me aa jata aur wo case files dobara padhne lgta hai


Raat bhi ho gyi thi arjun niche shanti devi ke room ki aur aane lgta hai

Tabhi usse kuch awaj aati hai wo aawaj ki aur janne lagta hai


To dekhta hai

Raat ke andhere mein,



Arjun ne apne dadaji Bhadranath ko chhupke se ghar ke pichhle hisson mein jaate dekha. Usne bina awaaz kiye unka peecha kiya. Bhadranath ek purani


loh-ki peti le ja rahe the, jise dekhte hi Arjun ke mann mein ajeeb si ghabrahat hone lagi


Peti lekar Bhadranath ek chhoti si, zameen mein dhansi hui mandir jaisi jagah mein gaye-jise pura gaon "Bhoomi Garbh" kehta tha. Kaha jata tha ki yeh jagah Devghar ke pehle tantrik rishiyon is tapasya ka sthaan thi. Gaon wale wahan jaane se darte the



Arjun chupke se us jagah ke andar jhankta hai. Andar, Bhadranath ne ek gol chakra banaya tha rakht se. Us chakra ke beech mein woh peti rakh di gayi. Unhone mantra jaap shuru kiya



"Agni-rahit sharir mein pravesh kare prakrit bal, Yaksha-kaal ki rekha tod, jale purvajon ka vishal."


Peti khul gayi. Andar se ek jalti hui roshni nikalti hai-woh Mystery Fire. Lekin is baar, Arjun ko us roshni mein apne pita ka chehra dikhai diya dukh se bhara hua, jale hue roop mein.


Achanak Bhadranath bol uthte hain, jaise unhe pata ho ki Arjun dekh raha h



"Tum dekh rahe ho, Arjun. Tumhare pita ne yeh bojh apne kandhon pe liya tha. Ab yeh tumhara hai. Tumhe taiyyar rehna hoga."

Arjun ko kuch alag sa feel hota aur dadaji ki baat sunkar
Arjun bhaag kar wapas ghar chala aata hai, lekin uski aankhon ke saamne ab sirf

ek tasveer hai-Mystery Fire ke andar fasa hua uska pita


To be continued.......

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[RED Ashoka]

Wow......Nice story….. waiting for next update

Kahani kaafi rahasyamayi hai..

Arjun ke gharwalo ke haav-bhaav pal pal mei badal rahe hai.

Gaunwale bhi aadhi-aduri baate kar rahe.

Sab ko kuch pata hai lekin apne muh se kuch kehna nahi chahte.

Aur kya woh jagah Savita ka ghar tha, jaha Arjun ko NAHI jaana tha?

ye Savita ka kuch alag hi chakkar chal raha hai sayad....
Arjun ko nayi nayi uljhane milti jaa rahi hai....
Nice update

Han bhai aa rahi bas length bade do

Nice update

Nice update

Nyc update brother ....

Saw your story for the first time bro. Bhot acchi start h n ummid karta hu updates regular aayenge. Tara ka part dilchasp lag ra hai. Maza ayega agar aage story me tara aur arjun ki chemistry banegi toh.

Jabardast update..

Nice

Update Posted

 

[TheInvincible]

Update 18 : Ek raaj


Arjun ghar laut aaya

raat ke time

Khana bankar tayaar ho jata hai
Dadi ke hatho me rojana ki tarah maal thi



jise wo jap rhi thi wahi arjun ki maa shanti rasoi me thi aur chachi khana jama rahi thi aur dadaji kursi pe baithe hue the siya bhi kursi pe baithe kitaben padh rahi hoti hai


Chachi khana parosti hai roti methi ki sabji aur daal

Khana khane ke baad Arjun dadaji se baat krne ki sochta hai ki "aaj to dadaji se ye devghar ke baare me jankar hi rahunga "


Khana khane ke baad Arjun dadaji ke kamre me jata h jaha dadaji baithe hote


Dadaji" are aao Arjun kaise aana hua

Arjun " wo dadaji, darasal

Dadaji" thoda sochte hue kya jannna aaye ho

Arjun thoda chauke.dekhta hai

Dada" devghar ke baare me janne aaya ho

Arjun" pr dadaji aapko kaise pata chla


Dada"ek halki banawati muskurahat se khade hote aur khidki ki taraf dekhte h "apne kismat se bhala kon bach Sakta hai"



Jaise hi dadaji ne ye kaha Arjun soch me pad gaya



Arjun"dekhiye dadaji jabse mai devghar aaya hu tabse mujhe kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha ,mujhe janna h yaha k baare me aur bhala aapse behatar kon batayega



Dadaji" Lekin tumhari maa chahti hai ki tum un sab cheezo se dur raho



Arjun: lekin kyo , aakhir ye mera bhi gaav hai,mujhe janna hai


Dadaji" gambheer Hote hue: wo aag hai arjun,aag wo phir jala degi


Arjun ne bahas karna sahi nahi samjha aur wo jane laga


Dadaji" kuch bhi krne se pahle Arjun apni maa ka bhi soch lena , tum me uski jaan basti hai wrna wo to kab ki mar chuki hoti


Arjun ye sunkar to waha se chala aata aur apne kamre jane se pahle shanti devi ke kamre ki aur chal deta hai


Darwaza halka khula hua tha arjun andar jata hai jaha shanti devi kuch kpdo ko jamakar ikdinki almari me rakh rahi hoti hai

Shanti " are arjun aao beta, kuch chahiye the?


Arjun "nahi maa ,mai to bus aise hi bat krne aaya tha



Shanti devi kpde Rakh kr palang pe baith jati hai aur Arjun bhi whi baith jata hai


Shanti "tum kuch sochme lag rahe ho kya hua ,


Arjun " nahi maa ,wo bus nind nahi aa rhi thi to aise hi


Shanti " to tum yahi so jao itne saal baad laute ho aur itne dino se ek bar bhi apni maa ke pas nahi soye tum


Arjun" wo maa mujhe kuch kaam krna tha to mai wo krke phir aajaunga sone


Shanti(udas hote hue)

" subah kr lena , abhi so jao thak gye hoge,


Arjun (shanti devi ko pyar se piche galte lgte hue )"thoda hi maa ,mai pakka aajaunga sone


Shanti" acha thik hai


Arjun apne kamre me aa jata aur wo case files dobara padhne lgta hai


Raat bhi ho gyi thi arjun niche shanti devi ke room ki aur aane lgta hai

Tabhi usse kuch awaj aati hai wo aawaj ki aur janne lagta hai


To dekhta hai

Raat ke andhere mein,



Arjun ne apne dadaji Bhadranath ko chhupke se ghar ke pichhle hisson mein jaate dekha. Usne bina awaaz kiye unka peecha kiya. Bhadranath ek purani


loh-ki peti le ja rahe the, jise dekhte hi Arjun ke mann mein ajeeb si ghabrahat hone lagi


Peti lekar Bhadranath ek chhoti si, zameen mein dhansi hui mandir jaisi jagah mein gaye-jise pura gaon "Bhoomi Garbh" kehta tha. Kaha jata tha ki yeh jagah Devghar ke pehle tantrik rishiyon is tapasya ka sthaan thi. Gaon wale wahan jaane se darte the



Arjun chupke se us jagah ke andar jhankta hai. Andar, Bhadranath ne ek gol chakra banaya tha rakht se. Us chakra ke beech mein woh peti rakh di gayi. Unhone mantra jaap shuru kiya



"Agni-rahit sharir mein pravesh kare prakrit bal, Yaksha-kaal ki rekha tod, jale purvajon ka vishal."


Peti khul gayi. Andar se ek jalti hui roshni nikalti hai-woh Mystery Fire. Lekin is baar, Arjun ko us roshni mein apne pita ka chehra dikhai diya dukh se bhara hua, jale hue roop mein.


Achanak Bhadranath bol uthte hain, jaise unhe pata ho ki Arjun dekh raha h



"Tum dekh rahe ho, Arjun. Tumhare pita ne yeh bojh apne kandhon pe liya tha. Ab yeh tumhara hai. Tumhe taiyyar rehna hoga."

Arjun ko kuch alag sa feel hota aur dadaji ki baat sunkar
Arjun bhaag kar wapas ghar chala aata hai, lekin uski aankhon ke saamne ab sirf

ek tasveer hai-Mystery Fire ke andar fasa hua uska pita


To be continued.......

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Nice update

 

[RED Ashoka]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[spritemathews]

Bahut badiya update

 

[RED Ashoka]

Bahut badiya update

Thank you brother