Horror Arjun - The Devgadh Mystery

[RED Ashoka]

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Dosto main ek reader hu aur aj ek story apke samne prastut karne ja raha hu . Bhai galtiyo ke liye maaf kijiyega aur reviews feedback dijiyega taki story mai koyi kami ho toh dur ki ja sake...

Ye story Horror based hogi par isme bharpur thrill aur suspense milega
Mai apni taraf se puri koshish karunga ki readers ko ye story pasand aaye
Agr aapko acchi lagi to support kijiyega...
Mai yaha Xforum pe story' upload aur editing kr bare me itna nahi janta isliye bhul ke liye maaf kijiyega aur

aapke story k liye good luck

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 1


Ek Andheri Raat, Ek Tanha Safar


Raat ka waqt tha. Pura chand andhero ke peeche chhupa hua tha, jaise kisi ne usse chhupane ki koshish ki ho. Devghar ke jungle se guzarne wali patli railway line par ek matra rail gadi guzar rahi thi. Andhera itna gehra tha ki lagta tha jaise raat kisi rahasya ko chhupa rahi ho.

Arjun ek coach ke kone ki seat par akele baitha tha. Uski aankhein bahar dekh rahi thi, par daayra sirf andhere tak simit tha.

Train ruki nahi thi, lekin bahut dheemi raftaar se chal rahi thi, jaise kisi anjaane bhaar se dab rahi ho. Sab kuch shaant tha, lekin hawa me ek ajeeb si gungunahat thi, ek halka sa shor jo kisi bhi normal awaaz se alag tha.

Vo Awaaz!

Arjun ne apni seat se uthkar train ke darwaze ke paas jaakar bahar jhaankne ki koshish ki. Thandi hawa uske chehre se takra rahi thi, aur ek ajib si thandak uske shareer me daud gayi.

Phir usne suna… ek awaaz“

Arjunnnn…”

Halka, lekin bilkul saaf! Kisi aurat ki awaz!



Uske shareer me ek tez sansanahat daud gayi. Usne turant peechhe mudkar dekha, lekin coach me sirf 4-5 log hi baithe the. Sab apni jagah pe shaant baithe hue the, jaise unhe kuch mehsoos hi na hua ho.

Lekin Arjun ko mehsoos ho raha tha.


Darwaza Khud Hi Khol Gaya?!

Arjun ne dubara bahar jhaankne ke liye apna haath darwaze ki taraf badhaya.

Lekin jaise hi usne haath aage badhaya, darwaza apne aap “Khadak!” ki tez awaaz ke saath khul gaya!


Ek dum se tez thandi hawa andar ghus gayi.

Aur tabhi Arjun ki nazar neeche padi…

Ek pair!

Bina joota, lekin mitti aur khoon se bhara ek pair!

Wo pair hawa me tha… zameen se upar!

Aur phir wo dheere dheere ulta hone laga… jaise koi latak raha ho!

Arjun ka sansa ruk gaya. Uska gala sookh gaya. Usne peechhe murkar dekha, lekin train ke andar baaki log jaise moorti ban gaye the. Koi bhi react nahi kar raha tha

Aur jab usne wapas darwaze ki taraf dekha…

Wo pair gaayab tha!
Lekin ek cheeze ab bhi thi…

Ek patli, safed haath… jo darwaze ke kone se dheere dheere andar aa raha tha…

Agle Pal Kya Hoga?






•Kya Arjun sach mein kisi aatmik shakti ka samna kar raha hai?


•Ye aurat kaun hai? Aur uska Arjun se kya sambandh hai?


Train me baaki log react kyun nahi kar rahe? Kya wo bhi kisi bhram me hain?

 

[Naik]

Nayi kahani ke liye Mubarak baad
Kafi suspense ke saath kahani ki shuruwat huwi h
Ab dekhte h kia rishta h us aurat ka Jo sirf usne Arjun ko awaz dia or suna bhi sirf Arjun ne
Shaandar shuruwat

 

[RED Ashoka]

Nayi kahani ke liye Mubarak baad
Kafi suspense ke saath kahani ki shuruwat huwi h
Ab dekhte h kia rishta h us aurat ka Jo sirf usne Arjun ko awaz dia or suna bhi sirf Arjun ne
Shaandar shuruwat

Thank bro , bilkul kahani me pura suspense milega, I hope ki aapko pasand aaye

 

[SK573khan]

Interested

 

[RED Ashoka]

Family Introduction:

Arjun(Hero) :- jo shahar me padhai karke apne gav wapis Laut tha hai aur in sab andhvishwas ka virodh karta hai ,Jo ek bahadur aur ache dil ka hai

Arjun mother : (Rajeswari Devi ya Shanti devi) simple housewife
Jo apne gharwalo ki parwah karti hai puja path krti hai


Arjun ke pita:- dead ,achaank anjane tarike se mrityu ho gayi , jiska kisi ko pata nahi

Arjun ke daada (bhadranaath):buddhimani aur pracheen, bhadranaath devghar mein alaukik shaktiyon ke baare mein bahut kuchh jaante hain

Arjun ki dadi:-(Riddhi)
ek aadhyaatmik aur buddhimaan mahila jo gaanv ke anushthaanon aur alaukik tatvon ke baare mein praacheen gyaan rakhatee hai

arjun kee bahan(Sia/Chhoti)

saral aur maasoom, araajakata ke beech saamaany sthiti kee bhaavana ka pratinidhitv karata hai
.
arjun ke chacha aur chachi :- chachi(Rupa) ek bhaavanaatmak mahila hain,inke pati ka dehant ho chuka hai

Pandit deenanath- Gav ke pandit

Chhagan kaka aur Bhola- Gav ke nivasi

ravi - bachapan ka dost, sahaj, lekin thoda andhavishvasi

deepak - thoda bada ladka bhoot-pret mein vishvaas nahin karata.

manoj - ek shaant paryavekshak, lekin vah un cheezon par dhyaan deta hai jo doosre nahin dekhte.



Note: Baki kirdar samay aane pe add kiye jayenge

 

[Smith_15]

 

[RED Ashoka]

Update 2 : Home



Arjun ne tez kadam badhaye. Wo ab bhi uss ajeeb cheez ke baare mein soch raha tha jo usne jungle ke pass dekha tha.


Jaise hi wo apne ghar ke darwaje tak pahucha, uska dil tez dhadak raha tha. Darwaza halke dhakke se khula—andar andhera tha, sirf ek purani diya bati ka halka sa ujala poore aangan mein fail raha tha.





Beta, tu aa gaya?"

Uski maa ka pyaar bhara lekin halki thaki hua aawaz sunai di. Wo rasoi mein thi

lakdi ke chulhe par roti sek rahi thi.



Arjun ne haan mein sir hilaya aur andar chala gaya. Uski chhoti behan, Sia, ek kone mein baithi hui thi, lakdi ke takhte par soojh-bhoojh se ek purani kitaab padhti hui.



"Aaj der ho gayi?" Bhadranath dadaji, jo ek moode se uthkar Arjun ki taraf dekha, unki aankhon mein ek gehri soojh thi.



"Haan dadaji… raat thodi ajeeb thi." Arjun ne dheere se kaha, phir ek pal rukkar bola, "Jungle ke paas ek ajeeb sa mahsoos hua. Jaise koi mujhe dekh raha ho."



Ek dam se maa ka haath ruk gaya, unhone ek pal ke liye Arjun ko dekha, phir chup chaap roti palatne lagi.

Dadaji ne geheri saans bhari. "Devghar ki raat kabhi mamooli nahi hoti, beta."



Sia ne apni kitaab se nazar uthai. "Bhaiya, kya wahan koi bhoot tha?"



Arjun hansa, lekin uski hansi mein ek bechaini thi. "Pata nahi, lekin jo bhi tha, wo normal nahi tha."



Uski maa ne aage badhkar uske haath par haath rakha. "Beta, raat ke waqt jungle ke paas mat jaana." Unki aawaz mein ek ajeeb si fikr thi.



Arjun ne sir hilaaya, lekin andar se uska mann ab aur zyada jaan'ne ko bechain ho gaya tha.

Ghar ke andar sab so chuke the, par Arjun ki aankhein neend se door thi. Hawa mein ek ajeeb si sararahat thi, jaise koi deewar ke us paar se use dekh raha ho.

Tabhi ek halki si awaz aayi—darwaze ki chaarpai ke paas se. Dheere dheere, kadam uthate hue, Arjun ne darwaza khola...



Bahar ek vishal bargad ka ped tha, jismein hawa ke jhoke se patte sarsara rahe the. Lekin ek patta bhi zameen par nahi gir raha tha! Arjun ne dhyan diya, to dekha ki ped ke neeche mitti gili ho rahi thi—jaise abhi-abhi

koi wahan aaya ho.





Tabhi, ek tez cheekh hawa mein gunj uthi! Arjun ka shareer ek pal ke liye jam gaya.

Usne jhat se peechhe mudkar dekha—aur saamne ek patli si parchayi khadi thi.
Uski aankhein surkh thi, aur haath mein ek purani, jali hui diary.

“Arjun…” ek halki, kampakti hui awaz aayi, jaise koi uske kaan ke bilkul kareeb ho.

Arjun ne saans andar kheench li aur ek kadam peeche hata. Lekin jaise hi usne aankhein jhapkayi, wo parchayi wahin se gayab ho gayi. Sirf ek cheez wahan chhod gayi thi—ek laal dhaaga, jo dheere dheere hawa mein hil raha tha.



Lekin, kya sirf jungle hi asar dal raha tha? Ya phir Devghar ke andheron mein kuch aur bhi tha jo sirf raat ko
jagta tha?