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I think may be avni....but pakka nahi bta sakti....and ha bhot hi payara update or kafi romanchak plus supance....waiting for your next update
Nice update
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Gazab .
Thankyou for supporting final update posted
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Pyar barsa do like kar do .... AndUpdate 52 - Final update-----
Idhar pain nikal jata hai divine realm jaha saare god aur soul master ek sath hai...kyu ki tournament shuru hone waala hai aur usi ke silsila main yaha meeting bulai gai hai...
Tabhi seen change hota hai aur madara dekta hai...
Madara- pain aur darkesss ye is duniya ke dawara bnaye gya log hai mujhe nhi pta ki hm jeet paaynge yaa nhi lekin ek badlaav jarur aayga...
Madara- kal se maut ka khel shrur hoga... Apno ka khoon bahega....
Ab aage -
Pain - rohit ko kaise pta ki dark abilty user ke paas dark world hota jisko activate kr ke main teji se level up kr skta hun ...
Idhar rohit chup chaap ek jagah par baitha tha..... Aur gussa main bolta hai... Main aaya tha sabhi bhagwan ke paas kisi ne meri nhi suni....meri kaju maari gai...meri mariruuu maari gai...mera saare bhai maare gya aur unki maut ko main aise barbaad nhi hone dunga...
Rohit ne 8th soul ring use kiya tha life dead end...
Ye bahut jyada powerfull technique hai ismain insan apna control kho deta hai aur ek dusre se ladne lagta hai...
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Divine realm
Sun god- ye kya ho rha hai.... Suraj kyu nhi nikal rha har taraf bas andhera andhere aur moon ki roshni hai..
Dragon god- mujhe bhi nhi pta lekin agr inhe nhi roka gya toh duniya ka ant hone se koi nhi bacha skta ..
Sea god - ye sab kon kar rha hai...jarur kuch bahut ganda hone waaala hai jiska natiiza ab duniya bugat rhi hai...
Tabhi great god aate hai jinko dekh kar sab khada ho jate hai...
Great god - past ke kiye hua kuch kaam insaan ko bugatne padte hai...
Asura god- hm samjhe nhi
Iske pahle ki koi aur kuch kahta wha hasi ki aawaz aane lgti hai...
Ek darwani hasi jise sun kar har koi chup ho gya...
Tabhi wo chahra dekh kar sea goddess chillati hai...rohit ye kya hai...
Tabhi rohit haste hua pain ko isaara karta hai aur pain apne hath main ek 4 saal ki bachi ka kata hua sir lata hai aur ek aurat hoti hai 2 aurat hoti hai jo cheekh cheekh ke chilla rhi hoti hai ..
Ye seen dekh kar aaas paas avni, ruhi, arohi, anu, sadia , aur ankita , zoya sab aa jate hai aur pura continent inhe ghur Raha hota hai lekin in dono ka aura bahut khatarnaak hone ki wagah se sab chup tha...
Lekin jaise hi un dono ladki aur bachi ke kate hua sir par nazer padi sun aur dragon god ki wo dono chillane lage....
Tabhi wo aurat kahti hai d d dd arkness ne sb ko maar diya, koi zinda nhi bacha, aurst bache aur sab ko maar diya bs hm bache pura god realm tabaah ho gya....
Ye sun kar sun god chillata hai aur kahta hai rote hua tune meri bachi ko kyu mara, kyu mara bol...
Har koi sun god aur dragon ko samjha rha tha...
Rohit- mja aaaya janta hai teri beti jaan ki bheekh maang rhi thi maine tadpa kar maut di use...itna tadpi ki uska sharir par jaan nhi bachi puchna apni patni se, kaisa maine sabla sir kata shairr alg kiya....
Tabhi great god kahte hai kyu kar rha ho aisa, main kuch samjha nhi...
Rohit- samjhne aur samjhanane ka waqt gya......
Avni - avni apni aankhon se aasu puchte hua kahti hai, itna bura toh tum kabhi nhi tha, tumhe toh mar jana chahiye..... Ek mauka tha tumhare paas powerfull ban kar hmsa sath rahna ka....
Sea god - tum akela yaha ladne aaye ho..
Tabhi rohit kahta nhi i am here to declare the war...
Pain- hm aaap sabhi ke saamne war declare karte hai... Aap sabhi continent ke god human, jinnies , aur breast.... Jo zinda bach sakta hai bach le..
Tabhi rohit aur pain waha se nikal gya....
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Dekhte hi dekhte yudh shuru ho gya tha....aur har taraf maut ka khel shuru ho chuka tha...
Sun god - kuch kariye great god is duniye ki aadhi population khatam ho chuki hai... Wo sabhi god ko maar kar ke unki divine power le rha hai....
Tabhi waha par jaisen bhaagte hua aata hai....jiska ek hath tuta hau tha ..
"Kya hua jasien" dragon god ne chillate hua bola.
Aaj saam ko pain akela hi aap sab par yaani divine realm main hamla kar ke khatam kar dena chahta hai jisse ye yudh khtm ho jaye aur aap sab ki divine power se wo is world ko kahtam kar dena chahata hai ...
Tabhi sun god chillate hai ab bahut ho gya aaj hm sb ek sath hamla kar ke pain ke 6 path ko kahtam kar denge...
Tabhi sea gom kahti hai god formation banao pain utna powerfull nhi hai hm sab mil kar use hra sakte hai...
Ye baat sbhi beast sun rha tha aur wo sab kahte hai aaj aar paar ki ladai hogi.... Pain ke bina rohit kuch nhi hai....
Aise hi saam hota hai aur har taraf Andhra tha divine realm main....
Tabhi metriod girne ki aahat hoti hai....jise ruhi gor se dekti hai sath main sadia bhi aur wo log aaj ladai ke liya taiyaar thi....
Avni- tumne sab barbaad kr diya....rohit jis duniya ne hme mauka diya tmne use samsaan bna diya kyuuuu kyuuuu...
Seagod - ham rohit ko khatam kr ke uska memory ka 1/2 hissa zinda rakh skta hai lekin abhi chalo Verna god gussa krnge...
Zoya - meri bahen kaha haiuse dhud do plss..
Uski ye baat sun kar avni ka dil bhi pighal jata hai wo afisha ke kitni kreeb thi....uski aankhein nam ho jati hai... Aur wo kahti hai "naah hi divya ka pata chal rha , nah hi jaya ka, naah hi
Kaash tum aa jaoo divya shayd tb ye view ham badal ske...
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Hell queen kingdom....
Aaj kuch bahut bda hone waala hai tu jaanti hai....ek ladki ye bolti hai hell queen se
Darknesss jo bhi kar rha hai uski koi na koi wagah jarur hai .... Aur iski wagah waha ja kar hi malum padegi...
Chlo dekte hai,suna hai bahut powerfull ho gya ho naah tum.... Dekti hun tmri himmat...
" Tu achi tarah janti hai tare saamne uski siti piti gum ho jati hai"
Haan jaanti hun.....
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Idhar divine world main sab koi yudh ki taiyaari kar raha tha... formation puri tarah se ban chuki thi.... Bas intejar tha toh pain ke saamne aane ka....
Tabhi ek bahut jor ka dhamka hota hai....aur un sb ki nazer ek ladke par padti hai jo chup chaap unki taraf dekh rha tha....
Avni- ye tum ho rohit, kyun kar rha ho aise ruk jaoo abhi bhi time hai...
Ruhi- sun god, rohit ka harana hai toh suraj ki roshni main hi harana padega toh yaad rhe suraj ki roshni kam naaah ho.
Sadia- hamne toh suna tha pain aayga ye toh rohit kya ye mujhe bhi maar dega...
Ankita- dar mat milke ladnge...
Sadia- kaise ladungi usse jiske sath hamsa rahne ki kasam khayi thi.... Kaise karu us par war jisne hamsa mera hath thaama .....
Avni- mujhse jyada pyar toh nhi krte naah
Idhar sungod ne apni puri power artificial sun create kiya jisse rohit ki power affect ho...
Tabhi sun god par bahut si talwar girne lagi....
Dragon god unhe bachane ke liye aage aaye.... Tabhi unke saamne rohit khada ho gya unki aankhon main dekh rhe dragon ko sab samaj gya tha ki rohit ku ye sab kar rha tha....
Dragon god- tu toh whi hai naah... Main toh mar jaunga lekin tujhe bhi zidna nhi chodunga....
Itna kah kar dragon god ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Lekin tabhi dragongod whi ruk gya aur ek bacha main badal gya ....
Aur rohit ko aise busy dekh kar is mauka ka fayada uthane ke liya ruhi ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya... Lekin uske saamne bhi ek pain aa gya aur dhamka itna tej hua ki.....har taraf bas dhua hi dhua tha...
Tabhi rohit ne smile kiya aur ruhi ko ladta dekh kar aage aane lga...
Avni ne uska raasta rokna chaha toh ek pain uske saamne bhi aa gya....
Lekin wo sab bekaar tha aur ab dhere pain ke 6 path gayal ho rhe tha....
Aur ab rohit ko apni talwar uthani padi aur har taraf black fire aane lagi....
Ruhi- jiska dar tha yhi hua....is aag se dur rahna sab verna jo jo iske aage aayga wo wo mara jayga....
Aur is mauka ka fayada utha kar pain ne dragon god ka gala kaat diya aur uske sharir ko le kar ud gya...
Great god - ab bhi 4 god bache hai hme unhe bachana padega...
Sea god ne ye sun kar aage aayi...
Aur sun god bhi bahut khtre main tha...
Lekin dhere dhere 3 god aur pain le kar chala gya...
Ab bs ek hi god bacha tha aur aur ek hi pain bacha tha....beshak ye sab nakli pain tha lekin inmain main pain jitni power thi...
Lekin ab rohit ke saamne uski sabhi wife aur is continent ke sabse power being kdha tha
Itna main hi ankita aur sadia ne apna sabse powerfull hamla kiya tha jisse rohit distracted hua aur avni ne apni blue flame rohit ke aaas paas faila diya...
Aur is moke ka fayada utha kar zoya ne apni speed ka use kar ke puri takat se apni qi sword rohit ke seene main daal di...
Idhar zoya ne ye notice kiya ki rohit chahta toh use aasani se rok skta tha lekin usne aisa nhi kiya...
Tabhi ye seen dekh kar jasien ka dimag hil gya...
Tabhi sun god aur great god ne apni divine power se rohit ko maarna ka socha ne lekin tabhi bilkul andhera ho gya...
Aur dono apni apni jagah ruk gya aur jaise hi unhone dekha ki wo ek jail main hai aur bache hai...
Unhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha tabhi ruhi chillai... Ye ek illusion hai jisse nikalne bahut muskil hai...
Lekin sea god ne bahar se apni pure energy faila diya...
Aur har taraf illusion kam ho gya...
Aur illustion ke jaate hi ek spear rohit ke seene main aur blast ho gya....
Rohit chahe jitna powerfull ho lekin wo akela itne sab se battle kar rha tha...
Tabhi rohit ne apni sword nikali aur evil god ki power har taraf failana shuru kar diya...
Ye dekh kar ke great god bole ek god hone ke baad bhi tum is world ko kahatam karna chah rha ho sharam nhi aa rhi...
Tabhi sun god samaj gya wo isse bach nhi sakte isiliya unhone apni sabse technique use ki sabhi soul ring ko sacrifice karta hai ek tarah ye socide technique hai...
Jaise hi usne ye kiya ek bahut bada dhamaka hua....
Aur rohit ne apne shadow scaleton se apni sabhi wife ko bacha liya aur avni ko apni god main se niche utara...
Lekin hamla itna jordaar ki rohit ka ek hath aur ek pair tut chaka hai ab use rest ki jarurat thi...
Aur ab din se raat ho gai thi....aur gods main bs ek god bachi thi sea god aur great god...
Tabhi rohit ke saamne hell queen aati hai jise dekh kar ke rohit ek baar ruk jata hai...
Uska chehra har baar ki tarah aaj bhi noor se bhara hua tha.... Apne bachpan ke pyar ko aise dekh kar wo kuch kah nhi pa rha tha...
Tabhi divya ke bagal jaya kahti hai, tumhe kya lagta hai tum kuch bhi kroge tumhe koi rok nhi skta...
Divya- tumne ye kya kiya rohit har taraf bas maut ka khel begunaah log mar rha hai, sbhi planet ka ye haal haii, mera rohit toh aisa nhi tha...
Tabhi rohit bas itna bolta hai yudh bhumi main mili ho, prahaar kro aur maaro mujhe...
Tabhi waha pain ka ek path aata hai...
Rohit- pain le kar jaoo ise sun god ki body ko aur t sukoyomi shuru kro...
Pain- lekin tum
Rohit chillate hua kahta hai maina kaha jaoo pain..... Kuch paane ke liya kuch khona padta hai...
Whi pain bhi bahut jakhmi tha aur wo aage bad gya....
Pain ke jaate hi har taraf aasmaan ne 5 elements aane lga aur ise rokne ke liya great god aage badne waale tha...
Tabhi rohit kahta hai itni bhi kya jaldi hai...agr aap gya toh yaha sab khatam ho jayga sab...
Rohit ne apna sabse powerfull attack banaya jiska naam tha noble sword creation....
Aur is attack ko great god par kar diya lekin ise rokne ke liya ..... Divya ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Aur divvya bhi moon power ki madad se rohit rohit par hamla karti hai...
Lekin rohit ab bahut jakhmi ho gya tha....
Tbhi jaya aur avni log ke paas aati hai aur kahti hai meri mind power se main rohit ka mind use kr skti hai...
Divya use isaara krti hai taki wo rohit ka dimag pad ske ....
Idhar jaise hi jaya rohit ka dimag padti hai.... Uska dimag hill jata hai aur jaya ke sath sath sabhi ek dm chup ho jate hai...
Ab kisi ke paas kuch nhi tha bolne ke liya sab chup chaap tha....
Kyuki jaya ki is power se jaya hi nhi sabhi wifes ne ye dekha tha....kyuki wo sabhi rohit ki patniyan thi aur jinnie ek dusre se judi hoti hai(starting main bataya tha)....
Tabhi divya aur sea god kuch kahti.....uske pahle hi rohit bol padta hai.
"Kajal mar chuki hai, use bachane ke liya jisse wo pyar krti thi, options uske paas bhi tha, mujhe chodna ka lekin usne mere liya marna pasand kiya"
Rohit fir aage kahta hai,"tum chahe jo bhi kaho sea god, mere liya tum jo kajal ko nhi bacha saki, ek dhokebaaz ho, aur wo sabhi gods dhokebaaz hai, jo god hone ke baad bhi human ke matter main envolve hote hai".
"Kya meri sabhi patniyan jitni bhi hai kya, umhone mera sath diya, aayi ho mere paaas dekhne ki main zinda hun yaa nhi, aaj jo halat is duniya ke hai uski zimedaar ye duniya khud hai, jiski wajah se main ye sab karne ko majbur hua wo ye duniya hai, gods khud hai.
Rohit "inke banaye hua rule, yaha snake aur others beast jo cultivation kar ke human bante hai unhe soul ring ke liya maar diya jata hai"
Tabhi har taraf rohit ne kaha main demon aur beast ka god hun aur evil god ki divine power janti ho tum sea god ...
Rohit - haste hua bolta hai kisi bhi god ki divine power chin lena...
Rohit ne apni divine power use ki aur seagod aur great god ki divine power chin li aur pain ko soap kar jane ko bola....
Rohit- madara ki banai hui duniya jaha sirf pyar hoga....naah koi lalach insaan, insaan ko bhulta ja rha hai power ke nase main...
Rohit- main evil god , is duniya ko chod kar sabhi human beast ke sath yaha se chala jaunga.... Mubarak ko apko apki duniya....
Tabhi rohit aage bada lekin uske pair tute hone ki wajah se wo ladkhada kar gir pad rha tha...
Tabhi great god pain ki taraf aage bad rha tha, lakin tabhi divya ko ishare se great god ne kuch kaha aur divya ne rohit ka raasta rok liya...
Divya- zara ruko rohit hm is par baat bhi toh kar skta hai naah...
Tabhi divya ke saamne har taraf paper aane lagta hai paper ne divya ka raasta rok liya tha ...
Tabhi afisha apni saadi ko hath main pakad kar palat kr dekti hai...
Usko dekh kar rohit ka toh khada hi ho gya....
Tabhi divya aur baaki sbhi afisha ko aise dekh kar shocked ho jate hai.. aur zoya kahti hai kamini tu ye bhabhi jaisa pataka kaisa ban gai...
Afisha - divya bhale hi main bhabhi jaise moti ho gai hun, sadi main chal nhi pa rhi lekin, rohit ke paas bhi gai toh yaad rakhna acha nhi hoga...
Iske pahle ki divya kuch aur kahti uske piche payal aa jati hai....
Jiske aane matr se great god ki gaand fat jati hai...
Payal haste main kahti hai arre great god mujhe pahchana yaa hm bhi de introduction...
Tabhi payal rohit ko utha leti hai...
Tabhi seagod ki helper bolti hai haa le jao apne kamjor pati ko yaha se...
Tabhi afisha kahti he is not weak his enemy is his wifes .
Tabhi uske gaal ke niche ek thappad aata hai jise seagod ne diya tha...
Tabhi divya kahti hai 2 gods ki kiya ki saja pure continent ko dena is not right... Inhe ek aur moka do.....
Rohit- mere se kya matlab tumri duniya se main ja rha hun...khud...
Divya- sbahi beast jo human main form hua unhe yhi rahne do...kam se kam ek mauka toh do...
Great god- gods se galti hui human se galti hui lekin ab wo samaj gya apno ka mahtav agr tum unhe le kar chale jaoge toh wo regreat main hi mar jayenge...
Ab divya kahti hai " tum aise nhi smjhoge ruko, tumhe manana ka tarika hai mere paas"
Tabhi divya kahti hai Tamasha bna kar rakh diya hai kutta nhi toh tumhe bachpan se mujhe pyar tha naah, aaj tumhari divya ki ijjat hi khatam kar de rhi hun...
Tabhi divya ne piche se apni dress ki dor kholni shuru kar di...
Jisse dekh kar rohit hadbada gya aur jaldi se uska hath pakad liya, but tabhi avni ne bhi yhi shuru kar diya...
Rohit- thik thik hai wo yaha rhnge...tamasha band karo apna tum sb...
Ye sun kar sbhi khus ho jati hai aur aas paas ke sabhi human khus ho jate hai.... Ye unke liya ek naya avsar tha...
Tabhi jaanvi bahut dhere dhere se aati hai jise dekh kar ke sea god use pakad leti hai...
Rohit ne abhi tak notice ni kiya tha....ki seagod ka pet fula tha...
Tabhi uski nazer jaanvi par padti hai jo dhere se aa rhi thi rohit dekta hai toh pata chala ki wo bhi pregent hai..
Jise dekh kar divya ko bahut shaqk lga...
Divya daud kar apni ma ke lage lag gai aur haste hua kahti hai aapne toh surprise kr diya waise aapka toh hme pta hai seagod aap bhi iska papa kon hai....
Tabhi seagod rohit ko dekti hai....
Great god - agr sab yhi rhnge toh ye nahi duniya ko..
Rohit- maina Kab bola ki main yaha rahunga...
Rohit- jasien chale mera bhai...
Tabhi pain bhi waha aa jata hai aur bolta hai rohit hm kamayaab rhe duniya banane main madara yaha ka sab kuch chod kar chuka hai.... Hmne ek badlaav kr dikhaya ab duniya main shaanti hai...
Payal tabhi sabhi mare hua insaan jo nirdosh tha unhe zinda kar di, aur yhi uski special power thi.. jiski wajah se sbhi usse bahut darte tha ....
Tabhi rohit ko piche se ek bahut jor ka thappad padta hai...
"Ullu kahi ke dimag hai payjama maine tumko apni soul ring di thi add kyu nhi kiya tune"
Ye sun kar rohit ki aankhon main aasu aa jate hai aur tabhi kajal uske sene main ghus jati hai...
Tabhi divya kahti haiiii " chale fir apni nayi duniya main jaha hm sab sath rhnge hmsa"
Tabhi rohit kahta hai jasien kaha mar gya maderchod ...
Aarohi - haaaye raaam mar jaungi maain aaaaaah main chilla dungi ab chod do sharam nhi aati yaha log mar rha hai aur tum mujhe ladai karte karte kone main le kar aa gya...
Jaisen- aaaaaah bahut mja aa rha hai pahli baar kisi ko chod rha kam se kam itna toh karne do arohi i love you main tumse pyar krta hun
Arohi- ye kaisa pyaar hawasi jaisa aise aaaaaaah mamammy chodd do hme main baad main pkkka mna nhi krungii..
Tabhi jasien aata hai aur kahta hai bhai wo main thoda kaam kar rha tha...
Tabhi langate hua aarohi bahar aati hai...
Aur fir wo sab chup chaap nayi duniya main nikal gya aur is duniya main bas human rah gya tha...
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Madara - maine socha bhi nhi tha akhir ab duniya main shaanti aa gai, ab god insaan ke matter main nhi bolte, wo ab power ke liya itna nhi bhaagte...
Pain- haa ye bhi shi kaha, is duniya ko god realm banane ka decision shi tha...lekin sun aur dragon god ko chod kar baaki sab ko zinda karne ka idea shi tha...
Madara - time change everything unhe bhi samaj main aa gaya aur is realm se wo insaano ki madad aur safety kar skta hai aur apna successor chun skta hai...
Pain- meri bhi family zinda ho gai ye bahut achi baat haii...
Madara- haa jaoo thoda time spent kr lo family ke sath..
Pain- haa abhi tk unhi ke sath tha..
Madara - rohit kaha hai?
Pain- usne akela hi sabhi god ko marte marte haraya, uske jaise insaan maine nhi dekha kahi wo practice kar rha hoga khi yaa insano par nazer rakh rha hoga...mera khyaal se wo cultivation kar rha hoga...
Divya - aaaaahaa ahahahahah rohit mar jaungi main bacha aaaah choddd yarrrr sachi bacha jaaaan nikal jaygiii bacha ab nhi ab nhi rohit ab nhii aaaaah maar doge kya chodd choddd keee aaaaaah
Rohit- aaaaaaah shhhh bahut tadpa hun main.
Divya- haaaaaaaye aaaaaaaaah maar jaungi main aaaaah bacha thodi der ke liya rest de do bas thodi der aaaaaah bas thoda sa rest de do main aaaaaah mar jaungi pura sharir tut rha hai rohit itna nhi karte aaaaaaaahhhhh..
Rohit usko chod deta hai... Aur avni ko daboch leta hai....
Avni- aaaaaaah aaaaaaah nhiiii afisha didi bacha lo aaaaaaah jaya diiiiiii aaaaaaaha mammmyyy maar jaungi aaaaaaaahhh itna thodi chodte hai aaaaaaaah mammmy puri chut jal rhi hai naaah bacha thode din ka rest de do hm dono ka aaaaaah baaki ki biwi bhi hai aaaaaaah 1 mahine se chud rhi hai hm dono rohit plsss rohit bas 1 din ke liya chod do...
Idhar bahar seagod langdate hua paani pee rhi thi...jismo kajal darte hua pakad rakhi thi....
Tabhi afisha aur payal haste hua aati hai...aur kahti hai inki toh jaise taise aapka kya hoga kajal rani, aapka kya hoga....
Kajal- plsss didi bacha lo
Afisha- main kaha se bachau...
Kajal- main mar jaungi main toh waise bhi patli dubli hun
Jaanvi - daro mat tumko bahut pyar se krega, divya ke liya aur avni ke liya toh wo bachapn se tadap rha tha isliya..
Ouchhhhh mammmyyyy reeeeeeeeee maaaaaar jaungi yaar dhreeeee dhreeee naaaaah rohit rohit i love you kabhi gussaa nhi houngi bacha tumhari hi patni hun bhaag thodi rhi hun....dard ho rha hai yarrrrr........
Lekin tabhi divya ka dimag kam karta hai aur khud rohit ke sath pyar karne lagti hai aur rohit ek baar fir jhad jata hai ..
Divya- thoda rest de do pkka baad main mna nhi krungi...
Rohit bahar nikal aata hai aur afisha ko bahon main bhar leta hai....
Tabhi langate hua divya aur avni bahar aati hai...
Avni - divvya thoda pakad le hath himmat nhi ho rhi zara bhi..
Divya- gaand mra tu tujhse jyada main chudi hun, meri toh gaand bhi maari gai...
Idhar in dono ko dekh kar jaanvi aur payal inhe pakad leta hai....
Rohit- kajal, ankita, ruhi nhi dikh rha...
Afisha- tumhare khauf se chat par hai...
Divya - ab se tu akela kisi patni ke sath nhi krega sex krngi toh sab sath main krngi Verna koi nhi krngi ....
Ye sun kar sab hasne lagti hai aur inki baat shi bhi thi....isse in sab ko help mil jaygiii...
Divya bade pyar se rohit ko dekh rhi thi aur smile kar ke kahti hai ab hamsa sath rhenga...
Tabhi afisha ko feel hota hai kuch aur wo hat jati hai...
Divya- jaao bahar ghum kar aao..
Rohit ko sab ne bhaga diya tha aur wo chup chaap waterfull par khda tha ...
Tabhi use ek ladki nazer aati hai...
Ladki- rohit tum
Rohit- aap kon..
Ladki- main pain ki mammy alka
Rohit- acha aap bhi zinda ho gai...acha hai..
Alka - tumhare ahsaan toh kabhi nhi bhulungi beta tumhari wagah se pain ne sab kuch paya.... Tumahra bahut bahut sukriya...
Rohit- aap pain ki mammy hai wife nhi naah.
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Alka- aaaaaah karamjale shram nhi aati dost ki mammy ko chodte hua..
Rohit- aapko dekh kar apnapan sa lga shyd aap meri ho, akelapan nhi dekha gya mujhse..
Alka- aaaah aaaaah mammmy re itna jor se toh mera pati nhi choda tha aaaaaaahh aaaaah nhi pain aaa jaygaa dhere dhere..
Alka- main kabhi mna nhi krungi abhi jaane de pain bula rha hoga.. beta raham kar itna tej nhi aaaaaaaah
Alka- main kahti hun jaane de...
Rohit gussa se hat jata hai aur jane lagta hai...
Tabhi alka usko pakad leti hai aur kahti sorry Naa acha kar le naraz mat ho.
Alka- haaaye waha nhi waha nhi aaaaaah mammmyyyyyyyyyy..
.... THE END ......
ITNA PYAR DENE KE LIYA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA ........EVERY STORY NEED A GOOD BYEEEE ......
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Update 52 - Final update-----
Idhar pain nikal jata hai divine realm jaha saare god aur soul master ek sath hai...kyu ki tournament shuru hone waala hai aur usi ke silsila main yaha meeting bulai gai hai...
Tabhi seen change hota hai aur madara dekta hai...
Madara- pain aur darkesss ye is duniya ke dawara bnaye gya log hai mujhe nhi pta ki hm jeet paaynge yaa nhi lekin ek badlaav jarur aayga...
Madara- kal se maut ka khel shrur hoga... Apno ka khoon bahega....
Ab aage -
Pain - rohit ko kaise pta ki dark abilty user ke paas dark world hota jisko activate kr ke main teji se level up kr skta hun ...
Idhar rohit chup chaap ek jagah par baitha tha..... Aur gussa main bolta hai... Main aaya tha sabhi bhagwan ke paas kisi ne meri nhi suni....meri kaju maari gai...meri mariruuu maari gai...mera saare bhai maare gya aur unki maut ko main aise barbaad nhi hone dunga...
Rohit ne 8th soul ring use kiya tha life dead end...
Ye bahut jyada powerfull technique hai ismain insan apna control kho deta hai aur ek dusre se ladne lagta hai...
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Divine realm
Sun god- ye kya ho rha hai.... Suraj kyu nhi nikal rha har taraf bas andhera andhere aur moon ki roshni hai..
Dragon god- mujhe bhi nhi pta lekin agr inhe nhi roka gya toh duniya ka ant hone se koi nhi bacha skta ..
Sea god - ye sab kon kar rha hai...jarur kuch bahut ganda hone waaala hai jiska natiiza ab duniya bugat rhi hai...
Tabhi great god aate hai jinko dekh kar sab khada ho jate hai...
Great god - past ke kiye hua kuch kaam insaan ko bugatne padte hai...
Asura god- hm samjhe nhi
Iske pahle ki koi aur kuch kahta wha hasi ki aawaz aane lgti hai...
Ek darwani hasi jise sun kar har koi chup ho gya...
Tabhi wo chahra dekh kar sea goddess chillati hai...rohit ye kya hai...
Tabhi rohit haste hua pain ko isaara karta hai aur pain apne hath main ek 4 saal ki bachi ka kata hua sir lata hai aur ek aurat hoti hai 2 aurat hoti hai jo cheekh cheekh ke chilla rhi hoti hai ..
Ye seen dekh kar aaas paas avni, ruhi, arohi, anu, sadia , aur ankita , zoya sab aa jate hai aur pura continent inhe ghur Raha hota hai lekin in dono ka aura bahut khatarnaak hone ki wagah se sab chup tha...
Lekin jaise hi un dono ladki aur bachi ke kate hua sir par nazer padi sun aur dragon god ki wo dono chillane lage....
Tabhi wo aurat kahti hai d d dd arkness ne sb ko maar diya, koi zinda nhi bacha, aurst bache aur sab ko maar diya bs hm bache pura god realm tabaah ho gya....
Ye sun kar sun god chillata hai aur kahta hai rote hua tune meri bachi ko kyu mara, kyu mara bol...
Har koi sun god aur dragon ko samjha rha tha...
Rohit- mja aaaya janta hai teri beti jaan ki bheekh maang rhi thi maine tadpa kar maut di use...itna tadpi ki uska sharir par jaan nhi bachi puchna apni patni se, kaisa maine sabla sir kata shairr alg kiya....
Tabhi great god kahte hai kyu kar rha ho aisa, main kuch samjha nhi...
Rohit- samjhne aur samjhanane ka waqt gya......
Avni - avni apni aankhon se aasu puchte hua kahti hai, itna bura toh tum kabhi nhi tha, tumhe toh mar jana chahiye..... Ek mauka tha tumhare paas powerfull ban kar hmsa sath rahna ka....
Sea god - tum akela yaha ladne aaye ho..
Tabhi rohit kahta nhi i am here to declare the war...
Pain- hm aaap sabhi ke saamne war declare karte hai... Aap sabhi continent ke god human, jinnies , aur breast.... Jo zinda bach sakta hai bach le..
Tabhi rohit aur pain waha se nikal gya....
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Dekhte hi dekhte yudh shuru ho gya tha....aur har taraf maut ka khel shuru ho chuka tha...
Sun god - kuch kariye great god is duniye ki aadhi population khatam ho chuki hai... Wo sabhi god ko maar kar ke unki divine power le rha hai....
Tabhi waha par jaisen bhaagte hua aata hai....jiska ek hath tuta hau tha ..
"Kya hua jasien" dragon god ne chillate hua bola.
Aaj saam ko pain akela hi aap sab par yaani divine realm main hamla kar ke khatam kar dena chahta hai jisse ye yudh khtm ho jaye aur aap sab ki divine power se wo is world ko kahtam kar dena chahata hai ...
Tabhi sun god chillate hai ab bahut ho gya aaj hm sb ek sath hamla kar ke pain ke 6 path ko kahtam kar denge...
Tabhi sea gom kahti hai god formation banao pain utna powerfull nhi hai hm sab mil kar use hra sakte hai...
Ye baat sbhi beast sun rha tha aur wo sab kahte hai aaj aar paar ki ladai hogi.... Pain ke bina rohit kuch nhi hai....
Aise hi saam hota hai aur har taraf Andhra tha divine realm main....
Tabhi metriod girne ki aahat hoti hai....jise ruhi gor se dekti hai sath main sadia bhi aur wo log aaj ladai ke liya taiyaar thi....
Avni- tumne sab barbaad kr diya....rohit jis duniya ne hme mauka diya tmne use samsaan bna diya kyuuuu kyuuuu...
Seagod - ham rohit ko khatam kr ke uska memory ka 1/2 hissa zinda rakh skta hai lekin abhi chalo Verna god gussa krnge...
Zoya - meri bahen kaha hai
Uski ye baat sun kar avni ka dil bhi pighal jata hai wo afisha ke kitni kreeb thi....uski aankhein nam ho jati hai... Aur wo kahti hai "naah hi divya ka pata chal rha , nah hi jaya ka, naah hi
Kaash tum aa jaoo divya shayd tb ye view ham badal ske...
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Hell queen kingdom....
Aaj kuch bahut bda hone waala hai tu jaanti hai....ek ladki ye bolti hai hell queen se
Darknesss jo bhi kar rha hai uski koi na koi wagah jarur hai .... Aur iski wagah waha ja kar hi malum padegi...
Chlo dekte hai,suna hai bahut powerfull ho gya ho naah tum.... Dekti hun tmri himmat...
" Tu achi tarah janti hai tare saamne uski siti piti gum ho jati hai"
Haan jaanti hun.....
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Idhar divine world main sab koi yudh ki taiyaari kar raha tha... formation puri tarah se ban chuki thi.... Bas intejar tha toh pain ke saamne aane ka....
Tabhi ek bahut jor ka dhamka hota hai....aur un sb ki nazer ek ladke par padti hai jo chup chaap unki taraf dekh rha tha....
Avni- ye tum ho rohit, kyun kar rha ho aise ruk jaoo abhi bhi time hai...
Ruhi- sun god, rohit ka harana hai toh suraj ki roshni main hi harana padega toh yaad rhe suraj ki roshni kam naaah ho.
Sadia- hamne toh suna tha pain aayga ye toh rohit kya ye mujhe bhi maar dega...
Ankita- dar mat milke ladnge...
Sadia- kaise ladungi usse jiske sath hamsa rahne ki kasam khayi thi.... Kaise karu us par war jisne hamsa mera hath thaama .....
Avni- mujhse jyada pyar toh nhi krte naah
Idhar sungod ne apni puri power artificial sun create kiya jisse rohit ki power affect ho...
Tabhi sun god par bahut si talwar girne lagi....
Dragon god unhe bachane ke liye aage aaye.... Tabhi unke saamne rohit khada ho gya unki aankhon main dekh rhe dragon ko sab samaj gya tha ki rohit ku ye sab kar rha tha....
Dragon god- tu toh whi hai naah... Main toh mar jaunga lekin tujhe bhi zidna nhi chodunga....
Itna kah kar dragon god ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Lekin tabhi dragongod whi ruk gya aur ek bacha main badal gya ....
Aur rohit ko aise busy dekh kar is mauka ka fayada uthane ke liya ruhi ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya... Lekin uske saamne bhi ek pain aa gya aur dhamka itna tej hua ki.....har taraf bas dhua hi dhua tha...
Tabhi rohit ne smile kiya aur ruhi ko ladta dekh kar aage aane lga...
Avni ne uska raasta rokna chaha toh ek pain uske saamne bhi aa gya....
Lekin wo sab bekaar tha aur ab dhere pain ke 6 path gayal ho rhe tha....
Aur ab rohit ko apni talwar uthani padi aur har taraf black fire aane lagi....
Ruhi- jiska dar tha yhi hua....is aag se dur rahna sab verna jo jo iske aage aayga wo wo mara jayga....
Aur is mauka ka fayada utha kar pain ne dragon god ka gala kaat diya aur uske sharir ko le kar ud gya...
Great god - ab bhi 4 god bache hai hme unhe bachana padega...
Sea god ne ye sun kar aage aayi...
Aur sun god bhi bahut khtre main tha...
Lekin dhere dhere 3 god aur pain le kar chala gya...
Ab bs ek hi god bacha tha aur aur ek hi pain bacha tha....beshak ye sab nakli pain tha lekin inmain main pain jitni power thi...
Lekin ab rohit ke saamne uski sabhi wife aur is continent ke sabse power being kdha tha
Itna main hi ankita aur sadia ne apna sabse powerfull hamla kiya tha jisse rohit distracted hua aur avni ne apni blue flame rohit ke aaas paas faila diya...
Aur is moke ka fayada utha kar zoya ne apni speed ka use kar ke puri takat se apni qi sword rohit ke seene main daal di...
Idhar zoya ne ye notice kiya ki rohit chahta toh use aasani se rok skta tha lekin usne aisa nhi kiya...
Tabhi ye seen dekh kar jasien ka dimag hil gya...
Tabhi sun god aur great god ne apni divine power se rohit ko maarna ka socha ne lekin tabhi bilkul andhera ho gya...
Aur dono apni apni jagah ruk gya aur jaise hi unhone dekha ki wo ek jail main hai aur bache hai...
Unhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha tabhi ruhi chillai... Ye ek illusion hai jisse nikalne bahut muskil hai...
Lekin sea god ne bahar se apni pure energy faila diya...
Aur har taraf illusion kam ho gya...
Aur illustion ke jaate hi ek spear rohit ke seene main aur blast ho gya....
Rohit chahe jitna powerfull ho lekin wo akela itne sab se battle kar rha tha...
Tabhi rohit ne apni sword nikali aur evil god ki power har taraf failana shuru kar diya...
Ye dekh kar ke great god bole ek god hone ke baad bhi tum is world ko kahatam karna chah rha ho sharam nhi aa rhi...
Tabhi sun god samaj gya wo isse bach nhi sakte isiliya unhone apni sabse technique use ki sabhi soul ring ko sacrifice karta hai ek tarah ye socide technique hai...
Jaise hi usne ye kiya ek bahut bada dhamaka hua....
Aur rohit ne apne shadow scaleton se apni sabhi wife ko bacha liya aur avni ko apni god main se niche utara...
Lekin hamla itna jordaar ki rohit ka ek hath aur ek pair tut chaka hai ab use rest ki jarurat thi...
Aur ab din se raat ho gai thi....aur gods main bs ek god bachi thi sea god aur great god...
Tabhi rohit ke saamne hell queen aati hai jise dekh kar ke rohit ek baar ruk jata hai...
Uska chehra har baar ki tarah aaj bhi noor se bhara hua tha.... Apne bachpan ke pyar ko aise dekh kar wo kuch kah nhi pa rha tha...
Tabhi divya ke bagal jaya kahti hai, tumhe kya lagta hai tum kuch bhi kroge tumhe koi rok nhi skta...
Divya- tumne ye kya kiya rohit har taraf bas maut ka khel begunaah log mar rha hai, sbhi planet ka ye haal haii, mera rohit toh aisa nhi tha...
Tabhi rohit bas itna bolta hai yudh bhumi main mili ho, prahaar kro aur maaro mujhe...
Tabhi waha pain ka ek path aata hai...
Rohit- pain le kar jaoo ise sun god ki body ko aur t sukoyomi shuru kro...
Pain- lekin tum
Rohit chillate hua kahta hai maina kaha jaoo pain..... Kuch paane ke liya kuch khona padta hai...
Whi pain bhi bahut jakhmi tha aur wo aage bad gya....
Pain ke jaate hi har taraf aasmaan ne 5 elements aane lga aur ise rokne ke liya great god aage badne waale tha...
Tabhi rohit kahta hai itni bhi kya jaldi hai...agr aap gya toh yaha sab khatam ho jayga sab...
Rohit ne apna sabse powerfull attack banaya jiska naam tha noble sword creation....
Aur is attack ko great god par kar diya lekin ise rokne ke liya ..... Divya ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Aur divvya bhi moon power ki madad se rohit rohit par hamla karti hai...
Lekin rohit ab bahut jakhmi ho gya tha....
Tbhi jaya aur avni log ke paas aati hai aur kahti hai meri mind power se main rohit ka mind use kr skti hai...
Divya use isaara krti hai taki wo rohit ka dimag pad ske ....
Idhar jaise hi jaya rohit ka dimag padti hai.... Uska dimag hill jata hai aur jaya ke sath sath sabhi ek dm chup ho jate hai...
Ab kisi ke paas kuch nhi tha bolne ke liya sab chup chaap tha....
Kyuki jaya ki is power se jaya hi nhi sabhi wifes ne ye dekha tha....kyuki wo sabhi rohit ki patniyan thi aur jinnie ek dusre se judi hoti hai(starting main bataya tha)....
Tabhi divya aur sea god kuch kahti.....uske pahle hi rohit bol padta hai.
"Kajal mar chuki hai, use bachane ke liya jisse wo pyar krti thi, options uske paas bhi tha, mujhe chodna ka lekin usne mere liya marna pasand kiya"
Rohit fir aage kahta hai,"tum chahe jo bhi kaho sea god, mere liya tum jo kajal ko nhi bacha saki, ek dhokebaaz ho, aur wo sabhi gods dhokebaaz hai, jo god hone ke baad bhi human ke matter main envolve hote hai".
"Kya meri sabhi patniyan jitni bhi hai kya, umhone mera sath diya, aayi ho mere paaas dekhne ki main zinda hun yaa nhi, aaj jo halat is duniya ke hai uski zimedaar ye duniya khud hai, jiski wajah se main ye sab karne ko majbur hua wo ye duniya hai, gods khud hai.
Rohit "inke banaye hua rule, yaha snake aur others beast jo cultivation kar ke human bante hai unhe soul ring ke liya maar diya jata hai"
Tabhi har taraf rohit ne kaha main demon aur beast ka god hun aur evil god ki divine power janti ho tum sea god ...
Rohit - haste hua bolta hai kisi bhi god ki divine power chin lena...
Rohit ne apni divine power use ki aur seagod aur great god ki divine power chin li aur pain ko soap kar jane ko bola....
Rohit- madara ki banai hui duniya jaha sirf pyar hoga....naah koi lalach insaan, insaan ko bhulta ja rha hai power ke nase main...
Rohit- main evil god , is duniya ko chod kar sabhi human beast ke sath yaha se chala jaunga.... Mubarak ko apko apki duniya....
Tabhi rohit aage bada lekin uske pair tute hone ki wajah se wo ladkhada kar gir pad rha tha...
Tabhi great god pain ki taraf aage bad rha tha, lakin tabhi divya ko ishare se great god ne kuch kaha aur divya ne rohit ka raasta rok liya...
Divya- zara ruko rohit hm is par baat bhi toh kar skta hai naah...
Tabhi divya ke saamne har taraf paper aane lagta hai paper ne divya ka raasta rok liya tha ...
Tabhi afisha apni saadi ko hath main pakad kar palat kr dekti hai...
Usko dekh kar rohit ka toh khada hi ho gya....
Tabhi divya aur baaki sbhi afisha ko aise dekh kar shocked ho jate hai.. aur zoya kahti hai kamini tu ye bhabhi jaisa pataka kaisa ban gai...
Afisha - divya bhale hi main bhabhi jaise moti ho gai hun, sadi main chal nhi pa rhi lekin, rohit ke paas bhi gai toh yaad rakhna acha nhi hoga...
Iske pahle ki divya kuch aur kahti uske piche payal aa jati hai....
Jiske aane matr se great god ki gaand fat jati hai...
Payal haste main kahti hai arre great god mujhe pahchana yaa hm bhi de introduction...
Tabhi payal rohit ko utha leti hai...
Tabhi seagod ki helper bolti hai haa le jao apne kamjor pati ko yaha se...
Tabhi afisha kahti he is not weak his enemy is his wifes .
Tabhi uske gaal ke niche ek thappad aata hai jise seagod ne diya tha...
Tabhi divya kahti hai 2 gods ki kiya ki saja pure continent ko dena is not right... Inhe ek aur moka do.....
Rohit- mere se kya matlab tumri duniya se main ja rha hun...khud...
Divya- sbahi beast jo human main form hua unhe yhi rahne do...kam se kam ek mauka toh do...
Great god- gods se galti hui human se galti hui lekin ab wo samaj gya apno ka mahtav agr tum unhe le kar chale jaoge toh wo regreat main hi mar jayenge...
Ab divya kahti hai " tum aise nhi smjhoge ruko, tumhe manana ka tarika hai mere paas"
Tabhi divya kahti hai Tamasha bna kar rakh diya hai kutta nhi toh tumhe bachpan se mujhe pyar tha naah, aaj tumhari divya ki ijjat hi khatam kar de rhi hun...
Tabhi divya ne piche se apni dress ki dor kholni shuru kar di...
Jisse dekh kar rohit hadbada gya aur jaldi se uska hath pakad liya, but tabhi avni ne bhi yhi shuru kar diya...
Rohit- thik thik hai wo yaha rhnge...tamasha band karo apna tum sb...
Ye sun kar sbhi khus ho jati hai aur aas paas ke sabhi human khus ho jate hai.... Ye unke liya ek naya avsar tha...
Tabhi jaanvi bahut dhere dhere se aati hai jise dekh kar ke sea god use pakad leti hai...
Rohit ne abhi tak notice ni kiya tha....ki seagod ka pet fula tha...
Tabhi uski nazer jaanvi par padti hai jo dhere se aa rhi thi rohit dekta hai toh pata chala ki wo bhi pregent hai..
Jise dekh kar divya ko bahut shaqk lga...
Divya daud kar apni ma ke lage lag gai aur haste hua kahti hai aapne toh surprise kr diya waise aapka toh hme pta hai seagod aap bhi iska papa kon hai....
Tabhi seagod rohit ko dekti hai....
Great god - agr sab yhi rhnge toh ye nahi duniya ko..
Rohit- maina Kab bola ki main yaha rahunga...
Rohit- jasien chale mera bhai...
Tabhi pain bhi waha aa jata hai aur bolta hai rohit hm kamayaab rhe duniya banane main madara yaha ka sab kuch chod kar chuka hai.... Hmne ek badlaav kr dikhaya ab duniya main shaanti hai...
Payal tabhi sabhi mare hua insaan jo nirdosh tha unhe zinda kar di, aur yhi uski special power thi.. jiski wajah se sbhi usse bahut darte tha ....
Tabhi rohit ko piche se ek bahut jor ka thappad padta hai...
"Ullu kahi ke dimag hai payjama maine tumko apni soul ring di thi add kyu nhi kiya tune"
Ye sun kar rohit ki aankhon main aasu aa jate hai aur tabhi kajal uske sene main ghus jati hai...
Tabhi divya kahti haiiii " chale fir apni nayi duniya main jaha hm sab sath rhnge hmsa"
Tabhi rohit kahta hai jasien kaha mar gya maderchod ...
Aarohi - haaaye raaam mar jaungi maain aaaaaah main chilla dungi ab chod do sharam nhi aati yaha log mar rha hai aur tum mujhe ladai karte karte kone main le kar aa gya...
Jaisen- aaaaaah bahut mja aa rha hai pahli baar kisi ko chod rha kam se kam itna toh karne do arohi i love you main tumse pyar krta hun
Arohi- ye kaisa pyaar hawasi jaisa aise aaaaaaah mamammy chodd do hme main baad main pkkka mna nhi krungii..
Tabhi jasien aata hai aur kahta hai bhai wo main thoda kaam kar rha tha...
Tabhi langate hua aarohi bahar aati hai...
Aur fir wo sab chup chaap nayi duniya main nikal gya aur is duniya main bas human rah gya tha...
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Madara - maine socha bhi nhi tha akhir ab duniya main shaanti aa gai, ab god insaan ke matter main nhi bolte, wo ab power ke liya itna nhi bhaagte...
Pain- haa ye bhi shi kaha, is duniya ko god realm banane ka decision shi tha...lekin sun aur dragon god ko chod kar baaki sab ko zinda karne ka idea shi tha...
Madara - time change everything unhe bhi samaj main aa gaya aur is realm se wo insaano ki madad aur safety kar skta hai aur apna successor chun skta hai...
Pain- meri bhi family zinda ho gai ye bahut achi baat haii...
Madara- haa jaoo thoda time spent kr lo family ke sath..
Pain- haa abhi tk unhi ke sath tha..
Madara - rohit kaha hai?
Pain- usne akela hi sabhi god ko marte marte haraya, uske jaise insaan maine nhi dekha kahi wo practice kar rha hoga khi yaa insano par nazer rakh rha hoga...mera khyaal se wo cultivation kar rha hoga...
Divya - aaaaahaa ahahahahah rohit mar jaungi main bacha aaaah choddd yarrrr sachi bacha jaaaan nikal jaygiii bacha ab nhi ab nhi rohit ab nhii aaaaah maar doge kya chodd choddd keee aaaaaah
Rohit- aaaaaaah shhhh bahut tadpa hun main.
Divya- haaaaaaaye aaaaaaaaah maar jaungi main aaaaah bacha thodi der ke liya rest de do bas thodi der aaaaaah bas thoda sa rest de do main aaaaaah mar jaungi pura sharir tut rha hai rohit itna nhi karte aaaaaaaahhhhh..
Rohit usko chod deta hai... Aur avni ko daboch leta hai....
Avni- aaaaaaah aaaaaaah nhiiii afisha didi bacha lo aaaaaaah jaya diiiiiii aaaaaaaha mammmyyy maar jaungi aaaaaaaahhh itna thodi chodte hai aaaaaaaah mammmy puri chut jal rhi hai naaah bacha thode din ka rest de do hm dono ka aaaaaah baaki ki biwi bhi hai aaaaaaah 1 mahine se chud rhi hai hm dono rohit plsss rohit bas 1 din ke liya chod do...
Idhar bahar seagod langdate hua paani pee rhi thi...jismo kajal darte hua pakad rakhi thi....
Tabhi afisha aur payal haste hua aati hai...aur kahti hai inki toh jaise taise aapka kya hoga kajal rani, aapka kya hoga....
Kajal- plsss didi bacha lo
Afisha- main kaha se bachau...
Kajal- main mar jaungi main toh waise bhi patli dubli hun
Jaanvi - daro mat tumko bahut pyar se krega, divya ke liya aur avni ke liya toh wo bachapn se tadap rha tha isliya..
Ouchhhhh mammmyyyy reeeeeeeeee maaaaaar jaungi yaar dhreeeee dhreeee naaaaah rohit rohit i love you kabhi gussaa nhi houngi bacha tumhari hi patni hun bhaag thodi rhi hun....dard ho rha hai yarrrrr........
Lekin tabhi divya ka dimag kam karta hai aur khud rohit ke sath pyar karne lagti hai aur rohit ek baar fir jhad jata hai ..
Divya- thoda rest de do pkka baad main mna nhi krungi...
Rohit bahar nikal aata hai aur afisha ko bahon main bhar leta hai....
Tabhi langate hua divya aur avni bahar aati hai...
Avni - divvya thoda pakad le hath himmat nhi ho rhi zara bhi..
Divya- gaand mra tu tujhse jyada main chudi hun, meri toh gaand bhi maari gai...
Idhar in dono ko dekh kar jaanvi aur payal inhe pakad leta hai....
Rohit- kajal, ankita, ruhi nhi dikh rha...
Afisha- tumhare khauf se chat par hai...
Divya - ab se tu akela kisi patni ke sath nhi krega sex krngi toh sab sath main krngi Verna koi nhi krngi ....
Ye sun kar sab hasne lagti hai aur inki baat shi bhi thi....isse in sab ko help mil jaygiii...
Divya bade pyar se rohit ko dekh rhi thi aur smile kar ke kahti hai ab hamsa sath rhenga...
Tabhi afisha ko feel hota hai kuch aur wo hat jati hai...
Divya- jaao bahar ghum kar aao..
Rohit ko sab ne bhaga diya tha aur wo chup chaap waterfull par khda tha ...
Tabhi use ek ladki nazer aati hai...
Ladki- rohit tum
Rohit- aap kon..
Ladki- main pain ki mammy alka
Rohit- acha aap bhi zinda ho gai...acha hai..
Alka - tumhare ahsaan toh kabhi nhi bhulungi beta tumhari wagah se pain ne sab kuch paya.... Tumahra bahut bahut sukriya...
Rohit- aap pain ki mammy hai wife nhi naah.
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Alka- aaaaaah karamjale shram nhi aati dost ki mammy ko chodte hua..
Rohit- aapko dekh kar apnapan sa lga shyd aap meri ho, akelapan nhi dekha gya mujhse..
Alka- aaaah aaaaah mammmy re itna jor se toh mera pati nhi choda tha aaaaaaahh aaaaah nhi pain aaa jaygaa dhere dhere..
Alka- main kabhi mna nhi krungi abhi jaane de pain bula rha hoga.. beta raham kar itna tej nhi aaaaaaaah
Alka- main kahti hun jaane de...
Rohit gussa se hat jata hai aur jane lagta hai...
Tabhi alka usko pakad leti hai aur kahti sorry Naa acha kar le naraz mat ho.
Alka- haaaye waha nhi waha nhi aaaaaah mammmyyyyyyyyyy..
.... THE END ......
ITNA PYAR DENE KE LIYA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA ........
Wonderful story.
Good Ending.
Nice update bro bahut vadiya end Kiya story ka fantasticUpdate 52 - Final update-----
Idhar pain nikal jata hai divine realm jaha saare god aur soul master ek sath hai...kyu ki tournament shuru hone waala hai aur usi ke silsila main yaha meeting bulai gai hai...
Tabhi seen change hota hai aur madara dekta hai...
Madara- pain aur darkesss ye is duniya ke dawara bnaye gya log hai mujhe nhi pta ki hm jeet paaynge yaa nhi lekin ek badlaav jarur aayga...
Madara- kal se maut ka khel shrur hoga... Apno ka khoon bahega....
Ab aage -
Pain - rohit ko kaise pta ki dark abilty user ke paas dark world hota jisko activate kr ke main teji se level up kr skta hun ...
Idhar rohit chup chaap ek jagah par baitha tha..... Aur gussa main bolta hai... Main aaya tha sabhi bhagwan ke paas kisi ne meri nhi suni....meri kaju maari gai...meri mariruuu maari gai...mera saare bhai maare gya aur unki maut ko main aise barbaad nhi hone dunga...
Rohit ne 8th soul ring use kiya tha life dead end...
Ye bahut jyada powerfull technique hai ismain insan apna control kho deta hai aur ek dusre se ladne lagta hai...
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Divine realm
Sun god- ye kya ho rha hai.... Suraj kyu nhi nikal rha har taraf bas andhera andhere aur moon ki roshni hai..
Dragon god- mujhe bhi nhi pta lekin agr inhe nhi roka gya toh duniya ka ant hone se koi nhi bacha skta ..
Sea god - ye sab kon kar rha hai...jarur kuch bahut ganda hone waaala hai jiska natiiza ab duniya bugat rhi hai...
Tabhi great god aate hai jinko dekh kar sab khada ho jate hai...
Great god - past ke kiye hua kuch kaam insaan ko bugatne padte hai...
Asura god- hm samjhe nhi
Iske pahle ki koi aur kuch kahta wha hasi ki aawaz aane lgti hai...
Ek darwani hasi jise sun kar har koi chup ho gya...
Tabhi wo chahra dekh kar sea goddess chillati hai...rohit ye kya hai...
Tabhi rohit haste hua pain ko isaara karta hai aur pain apne hath main ek 4 saal ki bachi ka kata hua sir lata hai aur ek aurat hoti hai 2 aurat hoti hai jo cheekh cheekh ke chilla rhi hoti hai ..
Ye seen dekh kar aaas paas avni, ruhi, arohi, anu, sadia , aur ankita , zoya sab aa jate hai aur pura continent inhe ghur Raha hota hai lekin in dono ka aura bahut khatarnaak hone ki wagah se sab chup tha...
Lekin jaise hi un dono ladki aur bachi ke kate hua sir par nazer padi sun aur dragon god ki wo dono chillane lage....
Tabhi wo aurat kahti hai d d dd arkness ne sb ko maar diya, koi zinda nhi bacha, aurst bache aur sab ko maar diya bs hm bache pura god realm tabaah ho gya....
Ye sun kar sun god chillata hai aur kahta hai rote hua tune meri bachi ko kyu mara, kyu mara bol...
Har koi sun god aur dragon ko samjha rha tha...
Rohit- mja aaaya janta hai teri beti jaan ki bheekh maang rhi thi maine tadpa kar maut di use...itna tadpi ki uska sharir par jaan nhi bachi puchna apni patni se, kaisa maine sabla sir kata shairr alg kiya....
Tabhi great god kahte hai kyu kar rha ho aisa, main kuch samjha nhi...
Rohit- samjhne aur samjhanane ka waqt gya......
Avni - avni apni aankhon se aasu puchte hua kahti hai, itna bura toh tum kabhi nhi tha, tumhe toh mar jana chahiye..... Ek mauka tha tumhare paas powerfull ban kar hmsa sath rahna ka....
Sea god - tum akela yaha ladne aaye ho..
Tabhi rohit kahta nhi i am here to declare the war...
Pain- hm aaap sabhi ke saamne war declare karte hai... Aap sabhi continent ke god human, jinnies , aur breast.... Jo zinda bach sakta hai bach le..
Tabhi rohit aur pain waha se nikal gya....
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Dekhte hi dekhte yudh shuru ho gya tha....aur har taraf maut ka khel shuru ho chuka tha...
Sun god - kuch kariye great god is duniye ki aadhi population khatam ho chuki hai... Wo sabhi god ko maar kar ke unki divine power le rha hai....
Tabhi waha par jaisen bhaagte hua aata hai....jiska ek hath tuta hau tha ..
"Kya hua jasien" dragon god ne chillate hua bola.
Aaj saam ko pain akela hi aap sab par yaani divine realm main hamla kar ke khatam kar dena chahta hai jisse ye yudh khtm ho jaye aur aap sab ki divine power se wo is world ko kahtam kar dena chahata hai ...
Tabhi sun god chillate hai ab bahut ho gya aaj hm sb ek sath hamla kar ke pain ke 6 path ko kahtam kar denge...
Tabhi sea gom kahti hai god formation banao pain utna powerfull nhi hai hm sab mil kar use hra sakte hai...
Ye baat sbhi beast sun rha tha aur wo sab kahte hai aaj aar paar ki ladai hogi.... Pain ke bina rohit kuch nhi hai....
Aise hi saam hota hai aur har taraf Andhra tha divine realm main....
Tabhi metriod girne ki aahat hoti hai....jise ruhi gor se dekti hai sath main sadia bhi aur wo log aaj ladai ke liya taiyaar thi....
Avni- tumne sab barbaad kr diya....rohit jis duniya ne hme mauka diya tmne use samsaan bna diya kyuuuu kyuuuu...
Seagod - ham rohit ko khatam kr ke uska memory ka 1/2 hissa zinda rakh skta hai lekin abhi chalo Verna god gussa krnge...
Zoya - meri bahen kaha hai
Uski ye baat sun kar avni ka dil bhi pighal jata hai wo afisha ke kitni kreeb thi....uski aankhein nam ho jati hai... Aur wo kahti hai "naah hi divya ka pata chal rha , nah hi jaya ka, naah hi
Kaash tum aa jaoo divya shayd tb ye view ham badal ske...
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Hell queen kingdom....
Aaj kuch bahut bda hone waala hai tu jaanti hai....ek ladki ye bolti hai hell queen se
Darknesss jo bhi kar rha hai uski koi na koi wagah jarur hai .... Aur iski wagah waha ja kar hi malum padegi...
Chlo dekte hai,suna hai bahut powerfull ho gya ho naah tum.... Dekti hun tmri himmat...
" Tu achi tarah janti hai tare saamne uski siti piti gum ho jati hai"
Haan jaanti hun.....
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Idhar divine world main sab koi yudh ki taiyaari kar raha tha... formation puri tarah se ban chuki thi.... Bas intejar tha toh pain ke saamne aane ka....
Tabhi ek bahut jor ka dhamka hota hai....aur un sb ki nazer ek ladke par padti hai jo chup chaap unki taraf dekh rha tha....
Avni- ye tum ho rohit, kyun kar rha ho aise ruk jaoo abhi bhi time hai...
Ruhi- sun god, rohit ka harana hai toh suraj ki roshni main hi harana padega toh yaad rhe suraj ki roshni kam naaah ho.
Sadia- hamne toh suna tha pain aayga ye toh rohit kya ye mujhe bhi maar dega...
Ankita- dar mat milke ladnge...
Sadia- kaise ladungi usse jiske sath hamsa rahne ki kasam khayi thi.... Kaise karu us par war jisne hamsa mera hath thaama .....
Avni- mujhse jyada pyar toh nhi krte naah
Idhar sungod ne apni puri power artificial sun create kiya jisse rohit ki power affect ho...
Tabhi sun god par bahut si talwar girne lagi....
Dragon god unhe bachane ke liye aage aaye.... Tabhi unke saamne rohit khada ho gya unki aankhon main dekh rhe dragon ko sab samaj gya tha ki rohit ku ye sab kar rha tha....
Dragon god- tu toh whi hai naah... Main toh mar jaunga lekin tujhe bhi zidna nhi chodunga....
Itna kah kar dragon god ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Lekin tabhi dragongod whi ruk gya aur ek bacha main badal gya ....
Aur rohit ko aise busy dekh kar is mauka ka fayada uthane ke liya ruhi ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya... Lekin uske saamne bhi ek pain aa gya aur dhamka itna tej hua ki.....har taraf bas dhua hi dhua tha...
Tabhi rohit ne smile kiya aur ruhi ko ladta dekh kar aage aane lga...
Avni ne uska raasta rokna chaha toh ek pain uske saamne bhi aa gya....
Lekin wo sab bekaar tha aur ab dhere pain ke 6 path gayal ho rhe tha....
Aur ab rohit ko apni talwar uthani padi aur har taraf black fire aane lagi....
Ruhi- jiska dar tha yhi hua....is aag se dur rahna sab verna jo jo iske aage aayga wo wo mara jayga....
Aur is mauka ka fayada utha kar pain ne dragon god ka gala kaat diya aur uske sharir ko le kar ud gya...
Great god - ab bhi 4 god bache hai hme unhe bachana padega...
Sea god ne ye sun kar aage aayi...
Aur sun god bhi bahut khtre main tha...
Lekin dhere dhere 3 god aur pain le kar chala gya...
Ab bs ek hi god bacha tha aur aur ek hi pain bacha tha....beshak ye sab nakli pain tha lekin inmain main pain jitni power thi...
Lekin ab rohit ke saamne uski sabhi wife aur is continent ke sabse power being kdha tha
Itna main hi ankita aur sadia ne apna sabse powerfull hamla kiya tha jisse rohit distracted hua aur avni ne apni blue flame rohit ke aaas paas faila diya...
Aur is moke ka fayada utha kar zoya ne apni speed ka use kar ke puri takat se apni qi sword rohit ke seene main daal di...
Idhar zoya ne ye notice kiya ki rohit chahta toh use aasani se rok skta tha lekin usne aisa nhi kiya...
Tabhi ye seen dekh kar jasien ka dimag hil gya...
Tabhi sun god aur great god ne apni divine power se rohit ko maarna ka socha ne lekin tabhi bilkul andhera ho gya...
Aur dono apni apni jagah ruk gya aur jaise hi unhone dekha ki wo ek jail main hai aur bache hai...
Unhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha tabhi ruhi chillai... Ye ek illusion hai jisse nikalne bahut muskil hai...
Lekin sea god ne bahar se apni pure energy faila diya...
Aur har taraf illusion kam ho gya...
Aur illustion ke jaate hi ek spear rohit ke seene main aur blast ho gya....
Rohit chahe jitna powerfull ho lekin wo akela itne sab se battle kar rha tha...
Tabhi rohit ne apni sword nikali aur evil god ki power har taraf failana shuru kar diya...
Ye dekh kar ke great god bole ek god hone ke baad bhi tum is world ko kahatam karna chah rha ho sharam nhi aa rhi...
Tabhi sun god samaj gya wo isse bach nhi sakte isiliya unhone apni sabse technique use ki sabhi soul ring ko sacrifice karta hai ek tarah ye socide technique hai...
Jaise hi usne ye kiya ek bahut bada dhamaka hua....
Aur rohit ne apne shadow scaleton se apni sabhi wife ko bacha liya aur avni ko apni god main se niche utara...
Lekin hamla itna jordaar ki rohit ka ek hath aur ek pair tut chaka hai ab use rest ki jarurat thi...
Aur ab din se raat ho gai thi....aur gods main bs ek god bachi thi sea god aur great god...
Tabhi rohit ke saamne hell queen aati hai jise dekh kar ke rohit ek baar ruk jata hai...
Uska chehra har baar ki tarah aaj bhi noor se bhara hua tha.... Apne bachpan ke pyar ko aise dekh kar wo kuch kah nhi pa rha tha...
Tabhi divya ke bagal jaya kahti hai, tumhe kya lagta hai tum kuch bhi kroge tumhe koi rok nhi skta...
Divya- tumne ye kya kiya rohit har taraf bas maut ka khel begunaah log mar rha hai, sbhi planet ka ye haal haii, mera rohit toh aisa nhi tha...
Tabhi rohit bas itna bolta hai yudh bhumi main mili ho, prahaar kro aur maaro mujhe...
Tabhi waha pain ka ek path aata hai...
Rohit- pain le kar jaoo ise sun god ki body ko aur t sukoyomi shuru kro...
Pain- lekin tum
Rohit chillate hua kahta hai maina kaha jaoo pain..... Kuch paane ke liya kuch khona padta hai...
Whi pain bhi bahut jakhmi tha aur wo aage bad gya....
Pain ke jaate hi har taraf aasmaan ne 5 elements aane lga aur ise rokne ke liya great god aage badne waale tha...
Tabhi rohit kahta hai itni bhi kya jaldi hai...agr aap gya toh yaha sab khatam ho jayga sab...
Rohit ne apna sabse powerfull attack banaya jiska naam tha noble sword creation....
Aur is attack ko great god par kar diya lekin ise rokne ke liya ..... Divya ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Aur divvya bhi moon power ki madad se rohit rohit par hamla karti hai...
Lekin rohit ab bahut jakhmi ho gya tha....
Tbhi jaya aur avni log ke paas aati hai aur kahti hai meri mind power se main rohit ka mind use kr skti hai...
Divya use isaara krti hai taki wo rohit ka dimag pad ske ....
Idhar jaise hi jaya rohit ka dimag padti hai.... Uska dimag hill jata hai aur jaya ke sath sath sabhi ek dm chup ho jate hai...
Ab kisi ke paas kuch nhi tha bolne ke liya sab chup chaap tha....
Kyuki jaya ki is power se jaya hi nhi sabhi wifes ne ye dekha tha....kyuki wo sabhi rohit ki patniyan thi aur jinnie ek dusre se judi hoti hai(starting main bataya tha)....
Tabhi divya aur sea god kuch kahti.....uske pahle hi rohit bol padta hai.
"Kajal mar chuki hai, use bachane ke liya jisse wo pyar krti thi, options uske paas bhi tha, mujhe chodna ka lekin usne mere liya marna pasand kiya"
Rohit fir aage kahta hai,"tum chahe jo bhi kaho sea god, mere liya tum jo kajal ko nhi bacha saki, ek dhokebaaz ho, aur wo sabhi gods dhokebaaz hai, jo god hone ke baad bhi human ke matter main envolve hote hai".
"Kya meri sabhi patniyan jitni bhi hai kya, umhone mera sath diya, aayi ho mere paaas dekhne ki main zinda hun yaa nhi, aaj jo halat is duniya ke hai uski zimedaar ye duniya khud hai, jiski wajah se main ye sab karne ko majbur hua wo ye duniya hai, gods khud hai.
Rohit "inke banaye hua rule, yaha snake aur others beast jo cultivation kar ke human bante hai unhe soul ring ke liya maar diya jata hai"
Tabhi har taraf rohit ne kaha main demon aur beast ka god hun aur evil god ki divine power janti ho tum sea god ...
Rohit - haste hua bolta hai kisi bhi god ki divine power chin lena...
Rohit ne apni divine power use ki aur seagod aur great god ki divine power chin li aur pain ko soap kar jane ko bola....
Rohit- madara ki banai hui duniya jaha sirf pyar hoga....naah koi lalach insaan, insaan ko bhulta ja rha hai power ke nase main...
Rohit- main evil god , is duniya ko chod kar sabhi human beast ke sath yaha se chala jaunga.... Mubarak ko apko apki duniya....
Tabhi rohit aage bada lekin uske pair tute hone ki wajah se wo ladkhada kar gir pad rha tha...
Tabhi great god pain ki taraf aage bad rha tha, lakin tabhi divya ko ishare se great god ne kuch kaha aur divya ne rohit ka raasta rok liya...
Divya- zara ruko rohit hm is par baat bhi toh kar skta hai naah...
Tabhi divya ke saamne har taraf paper aane lagta hai paper ne divya ka raasta rok liya tha ...
Tabhi afisha apni saadi ko hath main pakad kar palat kr dekti hai...
Usko dekh kar rohit ka toh khada hi ho gya....
Tabhi divya aur baaki sbhi afisha ko aise dekh kar shocked ho jate hai.. aur zoya kahti hai kamini tu ye bhabhi jaisa pataka kaisa ban gai...
Afisha - divya bhale hi main bhabhi jaise moti ho gai hun, sadi main chal nhi pa rhi lekin, rohit ke paas bhi gai toh yaad rakhna acha nhi hoga...
Iske pahle ki divya kuch aur kahti uske piche payal aa jati hai....
Jiske aane matr se great god ki gaand fat jati hai...
Payal haste main kahti hai arre great god mujhe pahchana yaa hm bhi de introduction...
Tabhi payal rohit ko utha leti hai...
Tabhi seagod ki helper bolti hai haa le jao apne kamjor pati ko yaha se...
Tabhi afisha kahti he is not weak his enemy is his wifes .
Tabhi uske gaal ke niche ek thappad aata hai jise seagod ne diya tha...
Tabhi divya kahti hai 2 gods ki kiya ki saja pure continent ko dena is not right... Inhe ek aur moka do.....
Rohit- mere se kya matlab tumri duniya se main ja rha hun...khud...
Divya- sbahi beast jo human main form hua unhe yhi rahne do...kam se kam ek mauka toh do...
Great god- gods se galti hui human se galti hui lekin ab wo samaj gya apno ka mahtav agr tum unhe le kar chale jaoge toh wo regreat main hi mar jayenge...
Ab divya kahti hai " tum aise nhi smjhoge ruko, tumhe manana ka tarika hai mere paas"
Tabhi divya kahti hai Tamasha bna kar rakh diya hai kutta nhi toh tumhe bachpan se mujhe pyar tha naah, aaj tumhari divya ki ijjat hi khatam kar de rhi hun...
Tabhi divya ne piche se apni dress ki dor kholni shuru kar di...
Jisse dekh kar rohit hadbada gya aur jaldi se uska hath pakad liya, but tabhi avni ne bhi yhi shuru kar diya...
Rohit- thik thik hai wo yaha rhnge...tamasha band karo apna tum sb...
Ye sun kar sbhi khus ho jati hai aur aas paas ke sabhi human khus ho jate hai.... Ye unke liya ek naya avsar tha...
Tabhi jaanvi bahut dhere dhere se aati hai jise dekh kar ke sea god use pakad leti hai...
Rohit ne abhi tak notice ni kiya tha....ki seagod ka pet fula tha...
Tabhi uski nazer jaanvi par padti hai jo dhere se aa rhi thi rohit dekta hai toh pata chala ki wo bhi pregent hai..
Jise dekh kar divya ko bahut shaqk lga...
Divya daud kar apni ma ke lage lag gai aur haste hua kahti hai aapne toh surprise kr diya waise aapka toh hme pta hai seagod aap bhi iska papa kon hai....
Tabhi seagod rohit ko dekti hai....
Great god - agr sab yhi rhnge toh ye nahi duniya ko..
Rohit- maina Kab bola ki main yaha rahunga...
Rohit- jasien chale mera bhai...
Tabhi pain bhi waha aa jata hai aur bolta hai rohit hm kamayaab rhe duniya banane main madara yaha ka sab kuch chod kar chuka hai.... Hmne ek badlaav kr dikhaya ab duniya main shaanti hai...
Payal tabhi sabhi mare hua insaan jo nirdosh tha unhe zinda kar di, aur yhi uski special power thi.. jiski wajah se sbhi usse bahut darte tha ....
Tabhi rohit ko piche se ek bahut jor ka thappad padta hai...
"Ullu kahi ke dimag hai payjama maine tumko apni soul ring di thi add kyu nhi kiya tune"
Ye sun kar rohit ki aankhon main aasu aa jate hai aur tabhi kajal uske sene main ghus jati hai...
Tabhi divya kahti haiiii " chale fir apni nayi duniya main jaha hm sab sath rhnge hmsa"
Tabhi rohit kahta hai jasien kaha mar gya maderchod ...
Aarohi - haaaye raaam mar jaungi maain aaaaaah main chilla dungi ab chod do sharam nhi aati yaha log mar rha hai aur tum mujhe ladai karte karte kone main le kar aa gya...
Jaisen- aaaaaah bahut mja aa rha hai pahli baar kisi ko chod rha kam se kam itna toh karne do arohi i love you main tumse pyar krta hun
Arohi- ye kaisa pyaar hawasi jaisa aise aaaaaaah mamammy chodd do hme main baad main pkkka mna nhi krungii..
Tabhi jasien aata hai aur kahta hai bhai wo main thoda kaam kar rha tha...
Tabhi langate hua aarohi bahar aati hai...
Aur fir wo sab chup chaap nayi duniya main nikal gya aur is duniya main bas human rah gya tha...
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Madara - maine socha bhi nhi tha akhir ab duniya main shaanti aa gai, ab god insaan ke matter main nhi bolte, wo ab power ke liya itna nhi bhaagte...
Pain- haa ye bhi shi kaha, is duniya ko god realm banane ka decision shi tha...lekin sun aur dragon god ko chod kar baaki sab ko zinda karne ka idea shi tha...
Madara - time change everything unhe bhi samaj main aa gaya aur is realm se wo insaano ki madad aur safety kar skta hai aur apna successor chun skta hai...
Pain- meri bhi family zinda ho gai ye bahut achi baat haii...
Madara- haa jaoo thoda time spent kr lo family ke sath..
Pain- haa abhi tk unhi ke sath tha..
Madara - rohit kaha hai?
Pain- usne akela hi sabhi god ko marte marte haraya, uske jaise insaan maine nhi dekha kahi wo practice kar rha hoga khi yaa insano par nazer rakh rha hoga...mera khyaal se wo cultivation kar rha hoga...
Divya - aaaaahaa ahahahahah rohit mar jaungi main bacha aaaah choddd yarrrr sachi bacha jaaaan nikal jaygiii bacha ab nhi ab nhi rohit ab nhii aaaaah maar doge kya chodd choddd keee aaaaaah
Rohit- aaaaaaah shhhh bahut tadpa hun main.
Divya- haaaaaaaye aaaaaaaaah maar jaungi main aaaaah bacha thodi der ke liya rest de do bas thodi der aaaaaah bas thoda sa rest de do main aaaaaah mar jaungi pura sharir tut rha hai rohit itna nhi karte aaaaaaaahhhhh..
Rohit usko chod deta hai... Aur avni ko daboch leta hai....
Avni- aaaaaaah aaaaaaah nhiiii afisha didi bacha lo aaaaaaah jaya diiiiiii aaaaaaaha mammmyyy maar jaungi aaaaaaaahhh itna thodi chodte hai aaaaaaaah mammmy puri chut jal rhi hai naaah bacha thode din ka rest de do hm dono ka aaaaaah baaki ki biwi bhi hai aaaaaaah 1 mahine se chud rhi hai hm dono rohit plsss rohit bas 1 din ke liya chod do...
Idhar bahar seagod langdate hua paani pee rhi thi...jismo kajal darte hua pakad rakhi thi....
Tabhi afisha aur payal haste hua aati hai...aur kahti hai inki toh jaise taise aapka kya hoga kajal rani, aapka kya hoga....
Kajal- plsss didi bacha lo
Afisha- main kaha se bachau...
Kajal- main mar jaungi main toh waise bhi patli dubli hun
Jaanvi - daro mat tumko bahut pyar se krega, divya ke liya aur avni ke liya toh wo bachapn se tadap rha tha isliya..
Ouchhhhh mammmyyyy reeeeeeeeee maaaaaar jaungi yaar dhreeeee dhreeee naaaaah rohit rohit i love you kabhi gussaa nhi houngi bacha tumhari hi patni hun bhaag thodi rhi hun....dard ho rha hai yarrrrr........
Lekin tabhi divya ka dimag kam karta hai aur khud rohit ke sath pyar karne lagti hai aur rohit ek baar fir jhad jata hai ..
Divya- thoda rest de do pkka baad main mna nhi krungi...
Rohit bahar nikal aata hai aur afisha ko bahon main bhar leta hai....
Tabhi langate hua divya aur avni bahar aati hai...
Avni - divvya thoda pakad le hath himmat nhi ho rhi zara bhi..
Divya- gaand mra tu tujhse jyada main chudi hun, meri toh gaand bhi maari gai...
Idhar in dono ko dekh kar jaanvi aur payal inhe pakad leta hai....
Rohit- kajal, ankita, ruhi nhi dikh rha...
Afisha- tumhare khauf se chat par hai...
Divya - ab se tu akela kisi patni ke sath nhi krega sex krngi toh sab sath main krngi Verna koi nhi krngi ....
Ye sun kar sab hasne lagti hai aur inki baat shi bhi thi....isse in sab ko help mil jaygiii...
Divya bade pyar se rohit ko dekh rhi thi aur smile kar ke kahti hai ab hamsa sath rhenga...
Tabhi afisha ko feel hota hai kuch aur wo hat jati hai...
Divya- jaao bahar ghum kar aao..
Rohit ko sab ne bhaga diya tha aur wo chup chaap waterfull par khda tha ...
Tabhi use ek ladki nazer aati hai...
Ladki- rohit tum
Rohit- aap kon..
Ladki- main pain ki mammy alka
Rohit- acha aap bhi zinda ho gai...acha hai..
Alka - tumhare ahsaan toh kabhi nhi bhulungi beta tumhari wagah se pain ne sab kuch paya.... Tumahra bahut bahut sukriya...
Rohit- aap pain ki mammy hai wife nhi naah.
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Alka- aaaaaah karamjale shram nhi aati dost ki mammy ko chodte hua..
Rohit- aapko dekh kar apnapan sa lga shyd aap meri ho, akelapan nhi dekha gya mujhse..
Alka- aaaah aaaaah mammmy re itna jor se toh mera pati nhi choda tha aaaaaaahh aaaaah nhi pain aaa jaygaa dhere dhere..
Alka- main kabhi mna nhi krungi abhi jaane de pain bula rha hoga.. beta raham kar itna tej nhi aaaaaaaah
Alka- main kahti hun jaane de...
Rohit gussa se hat jata hai aur jane lagta hai...
Tabhi alka usko pakad leti hai aur kahti sorry Naa acha kar le naraz mat ho.
Alka- haaaye waha nhi waha nhi aaaaaah mammmyyyyyyyyyy..
.... THE END ......
ITNA PYAR DENE KE LIYA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA ........
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Behtreen story bhaiUpdate 52 - Final update-----
Idhar pain nikal jata hai divine realm jaha saare god aur soul master ek sath hai...kyu ki tournament shuru hone waala hai aur usi ke silsila main yaha meeting bulai gai hai...
Tabhi seen change hota hai aur madara dekta hai...
Madara- pain aur darkesss ye is duniya ke dawara bnaye gya log hai mujhe nhi pta ki hm jeet paaynge yaa nhi lekin ek badlaav jarur aayga...
Madara- kal se maut ka khel shrur hoga... Apno ka khoon bahega....
Ab aage -
Pain - rohit ko kaise pta ki dark abilty user ke paas dark world hota jisko activate kr ke main teji se level up kr skta hun ...
Idhar rohit chup chaap ek jagah par baitha tha..... Aur gussa main bolta hai... Main aaya tha sabhi bhagwan ke paas kisi ne meri nhi suni....meri kaju maari gai...meri mariruuu maari gai...mera saare bhai maare gya aur unki maut ko main aise barbaad nhi hone dunga...
Rohit ne 8th soul ring use kiya tha life dead end...
Ye bahut jyada powerfull technique hai ismain insan apna control kho deta hai aur ek dusre se ladne lagta hai...
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Divine realm
Sun god- ye kya ho rha hai.... Suraj kyu nhi nikal rha har taraf bas andhera andhere aur moon ki roshni hai..
Dragon god- mujhe bhi nhi pta lekin agr inhe nhi roka gya toh duniya ka ant hone se koi nhi bacha skta ..
Sea god - ye sab kon kar rha hai...jarur kuch bahut ganda hone waaala hai jiska natiiza ab duniya bugat rhi hai...
Tabhi great god aate hai jinko dekh kar sab khada ho jate hai...
Great god - past ke kiye hua kuch kaam insaan ko bugatne padte hai...
Asura god- hm samjhe nhi
Iske pahle ki koi aur kuch kahta wha hasi ki aawaz aane lgti hai...
Ek darwani hasi jise sun kar har koi chup ho gya...
Tabhi wo chahra dekh kar sea goddess chillati hai...rohit ye kya hai...
Tabhi rohit haste hua pain ko isaara karta hai aur pain apne hath main ek 4 saal ki bachi ka kata hua sir lata hai aur ek aurat hoti hai 2 aurat hoti hai jo cheekh cheekh ke chilla rhi hoti hai ..
Ye seen dekh kar aaas paas avni, ruhi, arohi, anu, sadia , aur ankita , zoya sab aa jate hai aur pura continent inhe ghur Raha hota hai lekin in dono ka aura bahut khatarnaak hone ki wagah se sab chup tha...
Lekin jaise hi un dono ladki aur bachi ke kate hua sir par nazer padi sun aur dragon god ki wo dono chillane lage....
Tabhi wo aurat kahti hai d d dd arkness ne sb ko maar diya, koi zinda nhi bacha, aurst bache aur sab ko maar diya bs hm bache pura god realm tabaah ho gya....
Ye sun kar sun god chillata hai aur kahta hai rote hua tune meri bachi ko kyu mara, kyu mara bol...
Har koi sun god aur dragon ko samjha rha tha...
Rohit- mja aaaya janta hai teri beti jaan ki bheekh maang rhi thi maine tadpa kar maut di use...itna tadpi ki uska sharir par jaan nhi bachi puchna apni patni se, kaisa maine sabla sir kata shairr alg kiya....
Tabhi great god kahte hai kyu kar rha ho aisa, main kuch samjha nhi...
Rohit- samjhne aur samjhanane ka waqt gya......
Avni - avni apni aankhon se aasu puchte hua kahti hai, itna bura toh tum kabhi nhi tha, tumhe toh mar jana chahiye..... Ek mauka tha tumhare paas powerfull ban kar hmsa sath rahna ka....
Sea god - tum akela yaha ladne aaye ho..
Tabhi rohit kahta nhi i am here to declare the war...
Pain- hm aaap sabhi ke saamne war declare karte hai... Aap sabhi continent ke god human, jinnies , aur breast.... Jo zinda bach sakta hai bach le..
Tabhi rohit aur pain waha se nikal gya....
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Dekhte hi dekhte yudh shuru ho gya tha....aur har taraf maut ka khel shuru ho chuka tha...
Sun god - kuch kariye great god is duniye ki aadhi population khatam ho chuki hai... Wo sabhi god ko maar kar ke unki divine power le rha hai....
Tabhi waha par jaisen bhaagte hua aata hai....jiska ek hath tuta hau tha ..
"Kya hua jasien" dragon god ne chillate hua bola.
Aaj saam ko pain akela hi aap sab par yaani divine realm main hamla kar ke khatam kar dena chahta hai jisse ye yudh khtm ho jaye aur aap sab ki divine power se wo is world ko kahtam kar dena chahata hai ...
Tabhi sun god chillate hai ab bahut ho gya aaj hm sb ek sath hamla kar ke pain ke 6 path ko kahtam kar denge...
Tabhi sea gom kahti hai god formation banao pain utna powerfull nhi hai hm sab mil kar use hra sakte hai...
Ye baat sbhi beast sun rha tha aur wo sab kahte hai aaj aar paar ki ladai hogi.... Pain ke bina rohit kuch nhi hai....
Aise hi saam hota hai aur har taraf Andhra tha divine realm main....
Tabhi metriod girne ki aahat hoti hai....jise ruhi gor se dekti hai sath main sadia bhi aur wo log aaj ladai ke liya taiyaar thi....
Avni- tumne sab barbaad kr diya....rohit jis duniya ne hme mauka diya tmne use samsaan bna diya kyuuuu kyuuuu...
Seagod - ham rohit ko khatam kr ke uska memory ka 1/2 hissa zinda rakh skta hai lekin abhi chalo Verna god gussa krnge...
Zoya - meri bahen kaha hai
Uski ye baat sun kar avni ka dil bhi pighal jata hai wo afisha ke kitni kreeb thi....uski aankhein nam ho jati hai... Aur wo kahti hai "naah hi divya ka pata chal rha , nah hi jaya ka, naah hi
Kaash tum aa jaoo divya shayd tb ye view ham badal ske...
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Hell queen kingdom....
Aaj kuch bahut bda hone waala hai tu jaanti hai....ek ladki ye bolti hai hell queen se
Darknesss jo bhi kar rha hai uski koi na koi wagah jarur hai .... Aur iski wagah waha ja kar hi malum padegi...
Chlo dekte hai,suna hai bahut powerfull ho gya ho naah tum.... Dekti hun tmri himmat...
" Tu achi tarah janti hai tare saamne uski siti piti gum ho jati hai"
Haan jaanti hun.....
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Idhar divine world main sab koi yudh ki taiyaari kar raha tha... formation puri tarah se ban chuki thi.... Bas intejar tha toh pain ke saamne aane ka....
Tabhi ek bahut jor ka dhamka hota hai....aur un sb ki nazer ek ladke par padti hai jo chup chaap unki taraf dekh rha tha....
Avni- ye tum ho rohit, kyun kar rha ho aise ruk jaoo abhi bhi time hai...
Ruhi- sun god, rohit ka harana hai toh suraj ki roshni main hi harana padega toh yaad rhe suraj ki roshni kam naaah ho.
Sadia- hamne toh suna tha pain aayga ye toh rohit kya ye mujhe bhi maar dega...
Ankita- dar mat milke ladnge...
Sadia- kaise ladungi usse jiske sath hamsa rahne ki kasam khayi thi.... Kaise karu us par war jisne hamsa mera hath thaama .....
Avni- mujhse jyada pyar toh nhi krte naah
Idhar sungod ne apni puri power artificial sun create kiya jisse rohit ki power affect ho...
Tabhi sun god par bahut si talwar girne lagi....
Dragon god unhe bachane ke liye aage aaye.... Tabhi unke saamne rohit khada ho gya unki aankhon main dekh rhe dragon ko sab samaj gya tha ki rohit ku ye sab kar rha tha....
Dragon god- tu toh whi hai naah... Main toh mar jaunga lekin tujhe bhi zidna nhi chodunga....
Itna kah kar dragon god ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Lekin tabhi dragongod whi ruk gya aur ek bacha main badal gya ....
Aur rohit ko aise busy dekh kar is mauka ka fayada uthane ke liya ruhi ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya... Lekin uske saamne bhi ek pain aa gya aur dhamka itna tej hua ki.....har taraf bas dhua hi dhua tha...
Tabhi rohit ne smile kiya aur ruhi ko ladta dekh kar aage aane lga...
Avni ne uska raasta rokna chaha toh ek pain uske saamne bhi aa gya....
Lekin wo sab bekaar tha aur ab dhere pain ke 6 path gayal ho rhe tha....
Aur ab rohit ko apni talwar uthani padi aur har taraf black fire aane lagi....
Ruhi- jiska dar tha yhi hua....is aag se dur rahna sab verna jo jo iske aage aayga wo wo mara jayga....
Aur is mauka ka fayada utha kar pain ne dragon god ka gala kaat diya aur uske sharir ko le kar ud gya...
Great god - ab bhi 4 god bache hai hme unhe bachana padega...
Sea god ne ye sun kar aage aayi...
Aur sun god bhi bahut khtre main tha...
Lekin dhere dhere 3 god aur pain le kar chala gya...
Ab bs ek hi god bacha tha aur aur ek hi pain bacha tha....beshak ye sab nakli pain tha lekin inmain main pain jitni power thi...
Lekin ab rohit ke saamne uski sabhi wife aur is continent ke sabse power being kdha tha
Itna main hi ankita aur sadia ne apna sabse powerfull hamla kiya tha jisse rohit distracted hua aur avni ne apni blue flame rohit ke aaas paas faila diya...
Aur is moke ka fayada utha kar zoya ne apni speed ka use kar ke puri takat se apni qi sword rohit ke seene main daal di...
Idhar zoya ne ye notice kiya ki rohit chahta toh use aasani se rok skta tha lekin usne aisa nhi kiya...
Tabhi ye seen dekh kar jasien ka dimag hil gya...
Tabhi sun god aur great god ne apni divine power se rohit ko maarna ka socha ne lekin tabhi bilkul andhera ho gya...
Aur dono apni apni jagah ruk gya aur jaise hi unhone dekha ki wo ek jail main hai aur bache hai...
Unhe kuch samaj nhi aa rha tha tabhi ruhi chillai... Ye ek illusion hai jisse nikalne bahut muskil hai...
Lekin sea god ne bahar se apni pure energy faila diya...
Aur har taraf illusion kam ho gya...
Aur illustion ke jaate hi ek spear rohit ke seene main aur blast ho gya....
Rohit chahe jitna powerfull ho lekin wo akela itne sab se battle kar rha tha...
Tabhi rohit ne apni sword nikali aur evil god ki power har taraf failana shuru kar diya...
Ye dekh kar ke great god bole ek god hone ke baad bhi tum is world ko kahatam karna chah rha ho sharam nhi aa rhi...
Tabhi sun god samaj gya wo isse bach nhi sakte isiliya unhone apni sabse technique use ki sabhi soul ring ko sacrifice karta hai ek tarah ye socide technique hai...
Jaise hi usne ye kiya ek bahut bada dhamaka hua....
Aur rohit ne apne shadow scaleton se apni sabhi wife ko bacha liya aur avni ko apni god main se niche utara...
Lekin hamla itna jordaar ki rohit ka ek hath aur ek pair tut chaka hai ab use rest ki jarurat thi...
Aur ab din se raat ho gai thi....aur gods main bs ek god bachi thi sea god aur great god...
Tabhi rohit ke saamne hell queen aati hai jise dekh kar ke rohit ek baar ruk jata hai...
Uska chehra har baar ki tarah aaj bhi noor se bhara hua tha.... Apne bachpan ke pyar ko aise dekh kar wo kuch kah nhi pa rha tha...
Tabhi divya ke bagal jaya kahti hai, tumhe kya lagta hai tum kuch bhi kroge tumhe koi rok nhi skta...
Divya- tumne ye kya kiya rohit har taraf bas maut ka khel begunaah log mar rha hai, sbhi planet ka ye haal haii, mera rohit toh aisa nhi tha...
Tabhi rohit bas itna bolta hai yudh bhumi main mili ho, prahaar kro aur maaro mujhe...
Tabhi waha pain ka ek path aata hai...
Rohit- pain le kar jaoo ise sun god ki body ko aur t sukoyomi shuru kro...
Pain- lekin tum
Rohit chillate hua kahta hai maina kaha jaoo pain..... Kuch paane ke liya kuch khona padta hai...
Whi pain bhi bahut jakhmi tha aur wo aage bad gya....
Pain ke jaate hi har taraf aasmaan ne 5 elements aane lga aur ise rokne ke liya great god aage badne waale tha...
Tabhi rohit kahta hai itni bhi kya jaldi hai...agr aap gya toh yaha sab khatam ho jayga sab...
Rohit ne apna sabse powerfull attack banaya jiska naam tha noble sword creation....
Aur is attack ko great god par kar diya lekin ise rokne ke liya ..... Divya ne apna sabse powerfull attack kiya...
Aur divvya bhi moon power ki madad se rohit rohit par hamla karti hai...
Lekin rohit ab bahut jakhmi ho gya tha....
Tbhi jaya aur avni log ke paas aati hai aur kahti hai meri mind power se main rohit ka mind use kr skti hai...
Divya use isaara krti hai taki wo rohit ka dimag pad ske ....
Idhar jaise hi jaya rohit ka dimag padti hai.... Uska dimag hill jata hai aur jaya ke sath sath sabhi ek dm chup ho jate hai...
Ab kisi ke paas kuch nhi tha bolne ke liya sab chup chaap tha....
Kyuki jaya ki is power se jaya hi nhi sabhi wifes ne ye dekha tha....kyuki wo sabhi rohit ki patniyan thi aur jinnie ek dusre se judi hoti hai(starting main bataya tha)....
Tabhi divya aur sea god kuch kahti.....uske pahle hi rohit bol padta hai.
"Kajal mar chuki hai, use bachane ke liya jisse wo pyar krti thi, options uske paas bhi tha, mujhe chodna ka lekin usne mere liya marna pasand kiya"
Rohit fir aage kahta hai,"tum chahe jo bhi kaho sea god, mere liya tum jo kajal ko nhi bacha saki, ek dhokebaaz ho, aur wo sabhi gods dhokebaaz hai, jo god hone ke baad bhi human ke matter main envolve hote hai".
"Kya meri sabhi patniyan jitni bhi hai kya, umhone mera sath diya, aayi ho mere paaas dekhne ki main zinda hun yaa nhi, aaj jo halat is duniya ke hai uski zimedaar ye duniya khud hai, jiski wajah se main ye sab karne ko majbur hua wo ye duniya hai, gods khud hai.
Rohit "inke banaye hua rule, yaha snake aur others beast jo cultivation kar ke human bante hai unhe soul ring ke liya maar diya jata hai"
Tabhi har taraf rohit ne kaha main demon aur beast ka god hun aur evil god ki divine power janti ho tum sea god ...
Rohit - haste hua bolta hai kisi bhi god ki divine power chin lena...
Rohit ne apni divine power use ki aur seagod aur great god ki divine power chin li aur pain ko soap kar jane ko bola....
Rohit- madara ki banai hui duniya jaha sirf pyar hoga....naah koi lalach insaan, insaan ko bhulta ja rha hai power ke nase main...
Rohit- main evil god , is duniya ko chod kar sabhi human beast ke sath yaha se chala jaunga.... Mubarak ko apko apki duniya....
Tabhi rohit aage bada lekin uske pair tute hone ki wajah se wo ladkhada kar gir pad rha tha...
Tabhi great god pain ki taraf aage bad rha tha, lakin tabhi divya ko ishare se great god ne kuch kaha aur divya ne rohit ka raasta rok liya...
Divya- zara ruko rohit hm is par baat bhi toh kar skta hai naah...
Tabhi divya ke saamne har taraf paper aane lagta hai paper ne divya ka raasta rok liya tha ...
Tabhi afisha apni saadi ko hath main pakad kar palat kr dekti hai...
Usko dekh kar rohit ka toh khada hi ho gya....
Tabhi divya aur baaki sbhi afisha ko aise dekh kar shocked ho jate hai.. aur zoya kahti hai kamini tu ye bhabhi jaisa pataka kaisa ban gai...
Afisha - divya bhale hi main bhabhi jaise moti ho gai hun, sadi main chal nhi pa rhi lekin, rohit ke paas bhi gai toh yaad rakhna acha nhi hoga...
Iske pahle ki divya kuch aur kahti uske piche payal aa jati hai....
Jiske aane matr se great god ki gaand fat jati hai...
Payal haste main kahti hai arre great god mujhe pahchana yaa hm bhi de introduction...
Tabhi payal rohit ko utha leti hai...
Tabhi seagod ki helper bolti hai haa le jao apne kamjor pati ko yaha se...
Tabhi afisha kahti he is not weak his enemy is his wifes .
Tabhi uske gaal ke niche ek thappad aata hai jise seagod ne diya tha...
Tabhi divya kahti hai 2 gods ki kiya ki saja pure continent ko dena is not right... Inhe ek aur moka do.....
Rohit- mere se kya matlab tumri duniya se main ja rha hun...khud...
Divya- sbahi beast jo human main form hua unhe yhi rahne do...kam se kam ek mauka toh do...
Great god- gods se galti hui human se galti hui lekin ab wo samaj gya apno ka mahtav agr tum unhe le kar chale jaoge toh wo regreat main hi mar jayenge...
Ab divya kahti hai " tum aise nhi smjhoge ruko, tumhe manana ka tarika hai mere paas"
Tabhi divya kahti hai Tamasha bna kar rakh diya hai kutta nhi toh tumhe bachpan se mujhe pyar tha naah, aaj tumhari divya ki ijjat hi khatam kar de rhi hun...
Tabhi divya ne piche se apni dress ki dor kholni shuru kar di...
Jisse dekh kar rohit hadbada gya aur jaldi se uska hath pakad liya, but tabhi avni ne bhi yhi shuru kar diya...
Rohit- thik thik hai wo yaha rhnge...tamasha band karo apna tum sb...
Ye sun kar sbhi khus ho jati hai aur aas paas ke sabhi human khus ho jate hai.... Ye unke liya ek naya avsar tha...
Tabhi jaanvi bahut dhere dhere se aati hai jise dekh kar ke sea god use pakad leti hai...
Rohit ne abhi tak notice ni kiya tha....ki seagod ka pet fula tha...
Tabhi uski nazer jaanvi par padti hai jo dhere se aa rhi thi rohit dekta hai toh pata chala ki wo bhi pregent hai..
Jise dekh kar divya ko bahut shaqk lga...
Divya daud kar apni ma ke lage lag gai aur haste hua kahti hai aapne toh surprise kr diya waise aapka toh hme pta hai seagod aap bhi iska papa kon hai....
Tabhi seagod rohit ko dekti hai....
Great god - agr sab yhi rhnge toh ye nahi duniya ko..
Rohit- maina Kab bola ki main yaha rahunga...
Rohit- jasien chale mera bhai...
Tabhi pain bhi waha aa jata hai aur bolta hai rohit hm kamayaab rhe duniya banane main madara yaha ka sab kuch chod kar chuka hai.... Hmne ek badlaav kr dikhaya ab duniya main shaanti hai...
Payal tabhi sabhi mare hua insaan jo nirdosh tha unhe zinda kar di, aur yhi uski special power thi.. jiski wajah se sbhi usse bahut darte tha ....
Tabhi rohit ko piche se ek bahut jor ka thappad padta hai...
"Ullu kahi ke dimag hai payjama maine tumko apni soul ring di thi add kyu nhi kiya tune"
Ye sun kar rohit ki aankhon main aasu aa jate hai aur tabhi kajal uske sene main ghus jati hai...
Tabhi divya kahti haiiii " chale fir apni nayi duniya main jaha hm sab sath rhnge hmsa"
Tabhi rohit kahta hai jasien kaha mar gya maderchod ...
Aarohi - haaaye raaam mar jaungi maain aaaaaah main chilla dungi ab chod do sharam nhi aati yaha log mar rha hai aur tum mujhe ladai karte karte kone main le kar aa gya...
Jaisen- aaaaaah bahut mja aa rha hai pahli baar kisi ko chod rha kam se kam itna toh karne do arohi i love you main tumse pyar krta hun
Arohi- ye kaisa pyaar hawasi jaisa aise aaaaaaah mamammy chodd do hme main baad main pkkka mna nhi krungii..
Tabhi jasien aata hai aur kahta hai bhai wo main thoda kaam kar rha tha...
Tabhi langate hua aarohi bahar aati hai...
Aur fir wo sab chup chaap nayi duniya main nikal gya aur is duniya main bas human rah gya tha...
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Madara - maine socha bhi nhi tha akhir ab duniya main shaanti aa gai, ab god insaan ke matter main nhi bolte, wo ab power ke liya itna nhi bhaagte...
Pain- haa ye bhi shi kaha, is duniya ko god realm banane ka decision shi tha...lekin sun aur dragon god ko chod kar baaki sab ko zinda karne ka idea shi tha...
Madara - time change everything unhe bhi samaj main aa gaya aur is realm se wo insaano ki madad aur safety kar skta hai aur apna successor chun skta hai...
Pain- meri bhi family zinda ho gai ye bahut achi baat haii...
Madara- haa jaoo thoda time spent kr lo family ke sath..
Pain- haa abhi tk unhi ke sath tha..
Madara - rohit kaha hai?
Pain- usne akela hi sabhi god ko marte marte haraya, uske jaise insaan maine nhi dekha kahi wo practice kar rha hoga khi yaa insano par nazer rakh rha hoga...mera khyaal se wo cultivation kar rha hoga...
Divya - aaaaahaa ahahahahah rohit mar jaungi main bacha aaaah choddd yarrrr sachi bacha jaaaan nikal jaygiii bacha ab nhi ab nhi rohit ab nhii aaaaah maar doge kya chodd choddd keee aaaaaah
Rohit- aaaaaaah shhhh bahut tadpa hun main.
Divya- haaaaaaaye aaaaaaaaah maar jaungi main aaaaah bacha thodi der ke liya rest de do bas thodi der aaaaaah bas thoda sa rest de do main aaaaaah mar jaungi pura sharir tut rha hai rohit itna nhi karte aaaaaaaahhhhh..
Rohit usko chod deta hai... Aur avni ko daboch leta hai....
Avni- aaaaaaah aaaaaaah nhiiii afisha didi bacha lo aaaaaaah jaya diiiiiii aaaaaaaha mammmyyy maar jaungi aaaaaaaahhh itna thodi chodte hai aaaaaaaah mammmy puri chut jal rhi hai naaah bacha thode din ka rest de do hm dono ka aaaaaah baaki ki biwi bhi hai aaaaaaah 1 mahine se chud rhi hai hm dono rohit plsss rohit bas 1 din ke liya chod do...
Idhar bahar seagod langdate hua paani pee rhi thi...jismo kajal darte hua pakad rakhi thi....
Tabhi afisha aur payal haste hua aati hai...aur kahti hai inki toh jaise taise aapka kya hoga kajal rani, aapka kya hoga....
Kajal- plsss didi bacha lo
Afisha- main kaha se bachau...
Kajal- main mar jaungi main toh waise bhi patli dubli hun
Jaanvi - daro mat tumko bahut pyar se krega, divya ke liya aur avni ke liya toh wo bachapn se tadap rha tha isliya..
Ouchhhhh mammmyyyy reeeeeeeeee maaaaaar jaungi yaar dhreeeee dhreeee naaaaah rohit rohit i love you kabhi gussaa nhi houngi bacha tumhari hi patni hun bhaag thodi rhi hun....dard ho rha hai yarrrrr........
Lekin tabhi divya ka dimag kam karta hai aur khud rohit ke sath pyar karne lagti hai aur rohit ek baar fir jhad jata hai ..
Divya- thoda rest de do pkka baad main mna nhi krungi...
Rohit bahar nikal aata hai aur afisha ko bahon main bhar leta hai....
Tabhi langate hua divya aur avni bahar aati hai...
Avni - divvya thoda pakad le hath himmat nhi ho rhi zara bhi..
Divya- gaand mra tu tujhse jyada main chudi hun, meri toh gaand bhi maari gai...
Idhar in dono ko dekh kar jaanvi aur payal inhe pakad leta hai....
Rohit- kajal, ankita, ruhi nhi dikh rha...
Afisha- tumhare khauf se chat par hai...
Divya - ab se tu akela kisi patni ke sath nhi krega sex krngi toh sab sath main krngi Verna koi nhi krngi ....
Ye sun kar sab hasne lagti hai aur inki baat shi bhi thi....isse in sab ko help mil jaygiii...
Divya bade pyar se rohit ko dekh rhi thi aur smile kar ke kahti hai ab hamsa sath rhenga...
Tabhi afisha ko feel hota hai kuch aur wo hat jati hai...
Divya- jaao bahar ghum kar aao..
Rohit ko sab ne bhaga diya tha aur wo chup chaap waterfull par khda tha ...
Tabhi use ek ladki nazer aati hai...
Ladki- rohit tum
Rohit- aap kon..
Ladki- main pain ki mammy alka
Rohit- acha aap bhi zinda ho gai...acha hai..
Alka - tumhare ahsaan toh kabhi nhi bhulungi beta tumhari wagah se pain ne sab kuch paya.... Tumahra bahut bahut sukriya...
Rohit- aap pain ki mammy hai wife nhi naah.
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Alka- aaaaaah karamjale shram nhi aati dost ki mammy ko chodte hua..
Rohit- aapko dekh kar apnapan sa lga shyd aap meri ho, akelapan nhi dekha gya mujhse..
Alka- aaaah aaaaah mammmy re itna jor se toh mera pati nhi choda tha aaaaaaahh aaaaah nhi pain aaa jaygaa dhere dhere..
Alka- main kabhi mna nhi krungi abhi jaane de pain bula rha hoga.. beta raham kar itna tej nhi aaaaaaaah
Alka- main kahti hun jaane de...
Rohit gussa se hat jata hai aur jane lagta hai...
Tabhi alka usko pakad leti hai aur kahti sorry Naa acha kar le naraz mat ho.
Alka- haaaye waha nhi waha nhi aaaaaah mammmyyyyyyyyyy..
.... THE END ......
ITNA PYAR DENE KE LIYA TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA ........
Bas ek hi cheej rah gyi ki kuch din saari patniyo ke saath masti hote dekhte but koi baat nhi fantastic ending fantastic story
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Bahut jabardast update bhai aur introduction bhi acha haiHero--Rohit age 20
Mom- (Jaanvi age 44)
ye ek Housewife hai normally ghar main rhti hai.
Bdi bahen- (divya age 22)
Waise toh hai ek dm pataka bt gussail hai hmsa chut main gussa rhta hai i mean nak main gussa rhta h
Dad- ye business krta hai ghar se bahen jada rhta hai bhar se sasti cheeze export krta h aur yaha laakar bech deta hai fir bhi hum gareeb hai kyuki mera bap ka lund main itni garmi hai ki unhone ek aur shaadi kar li aur meri mom Ko chod diya
Waise toh ye chutiya hi hai ab btoo itni mast item kon chodta h.
2 mom- neelam.
Average hi hai bt bahot caring hai tabhi toh mera bap ka lund hmsa iske ander rhta hai.
Iski chut se 4 pilla nikal ke aaya
2 ladka uday aur majnu.
Bole toh name jaisa hai waise hi kam dono ek no ke chutiaya ye dono chutiyapa failaye rhta hai aur mera bap shi krta rhta h esy language main bole toh ye dono hagte rhta hai aur mera baap tatti saaf krta rhta hai.
2 ldki twin ye dono galti se nikal aayi
Ankita aur Anamika both are 20 age.
Bahot pyari hai ye dono jaisa kali khil ke aayi ho aur inka nature mujha ni pta jab milengi story main toh dek loge .
Ye sab rhta hai area ke sabse bda ghar main ...
Aur hum sab ek middle class bosda main.
i mean ghar main.
( Kaafi time baad aaya hun nah toh jaban ider uder ghus ja rhi h don't mind haa)
Toh bachapn se hi apna hero ke mohalle main ek se badkar ek item rhti.
Aur sb ek se badkar ek pataka.
Sonali- apne hero ki crush.
Iska bap pe kar tun rhta hai koi nah koi aa jata hai paisa usoolne.
Mona- mohalle ki ek aur ldki pas main ghar hai
Tanu- ye bhi mohalle ki hai bsdk ye thodi moti h. Thodi ni jada moti hai.
Kya hi batau khud hi dek lo.
Jaya aur Avni - meri dii ki besties ye dono bhi mohalle main rhti h.
Lekin apko toh pta h agr ek Akeli ladki ghar chalaya toh kitni problem hoti h toh usi trh hmri life main bhi chudap h.
Rohit ke dusmans bhi kafi hai mla son aur unki beti.
Aur Rohit ke dosto bhi kafi hai toh dosti main jene marne ke sth sth gand bhi sath sath fati rhti h.
Plus mera hi dusman hai uday aur majnu bt unki tatti se mera ko farak ni pdta .
Baki saare chudap aur dosti aur kand aage aaynge update ke sth ...
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Tanu moti jarur hai but garam bahut haiUpdate 1
Subah subah ghar main barten ke tutne ke sth Rohit utatha hai ...
Rohit- ho gai ghar ki subah.. ye bhi bahenchod koi subah hai.. arre koi sundari aaya aur khol ke dade subah subah tb toh morning good ho lekin nhi yaha gali ke sth shuru hota hai.
Jaanvi Rohit ki maa tbse chillati hai- arre ohh ghar ka kaamchorr uth ja padai likhai ni krta bahar job krna jata hai aur din bhar bed todta hai.
Divya- rhne de nah ma uth toh ja rha hai.
Rohit- bed hi kaha tod rha aisi sakal ni di haddi ka dacha jaisa sharir upar se lund jaisi skal arre tanu bhi ni degi abhi toh.
Divya- kya bunbuna rha hai subah subah.
Rohit- wo wo ku ku kuch toh ni diii.
Divya- ab uth bhi ja Verna mammy ki gali hi khayga aur din bhar bahar kyu rhta hai ghar kyu ni rhta.
Divya- sona bta rhi thi mohalle main bhi ni aata dosto ke sth bhi ni rhta.
Rohit- toh kya kru koi mera dost ni hai sharir se acha ni hun sakal toh aisi dek rakhi hai ki pucho mt.
Tabhi di ki bestie Avni bolti hai.
Avni- kyu kya dikkat hai teri sakal main itni achi toh h bs patla hai.
Rohit- ek toh ye chutmari din bhar yaha rhti hai iska ghar hai ya ni pta ni.
Divya- itna hi hai dosti ka nasa toh padai likhai kiya hota nah awara khi ka.
Rohit- uth kar tea pita hai aur bahar chala jana lgta hai..
Jaanvi- beta ruk zara(jo peticoat aur bra main rhti hai blouse pahnte hua bolti hai)
Main bhi chal rhi hun mera sath hi chal mujhe chod dena..
Rohit- Haye meri maa kitni sexy hai lund hmsa tight rakti hai mera bahar toh kuch milne se rha kam se kam ghar main najre sek liya kru.
Rohit- are bilkul meri mamma aap aaram se kar lo main wait krta hun.
Rohit ekdm kas ke ghur rha tha fir jaldi se bathroom jata hai.
Aur fir waha par jaldi se mut marta hai..
Rohit- aaaahhh mja hi aa gya agli bar Avni ko soch kr krunga.
Avni- kya krega mujhe soxh kr zara batiyo.
Rohit ki toh gaand hi fat ke hath main aa gai.
Rohit- wo wo di wo main kuch ni.
Avni- batana Verna main batau divya ko.
Rohit- are ni wo main kah rha tha ki aap bahot cute ho pyari si next time koi ni pategi toh apko le kar chal dunga date pe.
Avni- acha sharam ni aati aisa bolte hua ho bdi hun tmse aur divya ko batana pdega.
Rohit- ni ni aisa ni hoga plss aap usko mt batao nah.
Avni- thik h bt ab se ni hoga.
Rohit man main sochta hai ek bar tu pat jaye fir dekna teri chut main hi rhega mera loda.
Avni- gur kya rha h ja nah.
Rohit- kuch ni jitni sunder uthne nakre.
Avni has has ke gir padti h.
Tabhi Rohit ko uski ma bula leti h.
Rohit- aaya maa.
Jaanvi - chal ab mera sth kaam pe uder se jaana jider jana hoga.
Rohit- jaanvi ko lekar chal deta hai....
Rohit- uski ma ko school main chod kar uski gaand ko dek kar chal deta hai tbhi usko uske dost milte hai.
Ali aur Vishal.
Ali- arre wo haddi kider ja rha.
Vishal- kiski chut main jane ka plan hai re.
Ali- waise bhai tumko kbhi dikkat ni hui sochne main.
Rohit- kya sochne main.
Ali- yhi ki chut main kya dalna hai lund yaa tujhe kyuki dono utne hi hai
Rohit- ni yar ab kya batau Sadia pate toh soxh lunga.
(Sadia ali ki bahen)
Ali- Abe wo tujhe ander le legi
Vishal- madrchodo bahas bnd kro aur chalo tanu ke ghar kam kare apna aur aaj ki kamai nikal le..
Aisa kah kar teeno tanu ke ghar par aa jate hai jaha Tanu khadi thi.
Ali aur Vishal toh Nikal gya chat pe Rohit ka rha tha ki tabhi uski nazer tanu par padi jo room ke bahar kuch kar rhi thi.
Rohit- iski toh main kbhi chut nhi marunga.
Tanu- aisa kya dek rha hai tu hmsa ghurta rhta hai.
Rohit- tu kya kar rhi hai.
Tanu- kuch Mona ki notes dhud rhi thi. Aur bhai ne bola tha bank jane ko toh wo bhi kar rhi thi.
Rohit- okay.
Tanu- sun.
Rohit- han bolo
Tanu- saam ko aana chat pr mja kiya jayga.
Rohit- thik h baish.
Tanu- kamina khi ka ja nah.
Rohit- waise iska nature mast hai moti ka .
Vishal- lekin degi ye bhi ni ab tu sare saman ki list bna aur shopkeeper se bat kr ek peti acha paisa main deal kr.
Wo teeno apas main kam krna lga tabhi unko ek jabardast deal mil gai..
Ali aur Rohit- apna kam karne gya shopkeeper ke pas tabhi waha inki deal ke badle ke uncle aaya dusri deal le kar .
Uncle- Abe ohh laudo chalo fut lo apni deal le kar ab ye meri lega.
Rohit- kyu uncle ye toh galt hai nah aap usko hi doge hme bhi toh do acha se lunga nah.
Uncle- kya bola mdr chod janta hai kon hun main yaha ke sbse bde gunda sanju ka admi hun main.
Rohit- mtlb tu usko hi dega kewal.
Ali- Rohit bahen ke loda chup ho ja yaa pelwa ke dum lega..
Uncle fir chala gya.
Rohit- bol Vishal ko deal done paisa mil gya.
Ali- aur bsdk jo hm dono tut gya wo aur upar se sanju bhai se dusmani wo alg.
Rohit- Abe chup kr nah lodu kitna bolta hai tu upar se darta hai wo alg.
Uder dusri taraf uncle apne dost ko call krta hai.
Phone wala admi- kya hai be .
Uncle- bhai apni deal cancel ho gai.
Phone waala admi- kaisa mdr chod tu kya ma chuda rha tha .
Uncle- wo kuch ladke aa gai tha unki wgh se.
Phone waLa admi- tu jo chahe kar unka acha se mja chaka de
Uncle- ab tu dek beta main kya krta hun saale kal ke laude ab mujhe batynge dhada krna.
Uder rat ho gai thi aur Rohit jaisa hi chat par aya Sonali ke pas gya.
Sonali- ye kya hua kaisa chot lagi.
Mona- subah toh thik tha tanu bta rhi thi.
Sonali- ruk tu tanu jaldi se thodi Rui le ao aur lagane lagti hai.
Rohit ab sona ko dekna lgta hai.
Fir wo ab aisa hi hasi majak karne lgta hai.
Fir sonali aur mona chali jati hai.
Aur tanu niche chali jati hai aur Rohit apne ghar jane lgta hai tbhi wo sochta hai tanu se milta chalta hun..
Wo ander dekta hai toh tanu ke mom dad apas main chudai kar rha hota hai.
Room ke ander se bas aaaaaahhh ohhhh yesssss ki awaz aa rhi thi aur tanu gate pe khadi ho kar chut ragad rhi thi.
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Rohit ko kuch smj ni aa rha tha lekin usne life main phli bar aisa feel kiya kisi ko dek kar tbhi wo bina kuch soche smjha tanu ko pakd ke kpdo ke upar se hi chudai krne lgta h.
Tabhi usko tanu dakel deti hai..kon hai
Tabhi pura mohal change ho jata h.. tanu ka bhai mom dad sb bahar aa jate hai.
Aur wo kuch kahte uske phle divya aa jati hai jo bahot gussa main lag rhi thi.
Rohit- lgta hai kuch kand hone wala hai.
Lekin Rohit kuch kahta uske phle divya usko marne lagti h..
Tabhi jaanvi bhi aa jati hai aur usko pitne lagti hai aur Avni usko choda rhi hoti h.
Tabhi uska dhyan usko dhyan aata hai uske bgl main Vishal pit rhe hota hai.
Rohit- hm dono ko kyu mar rhi ho.
Kisi ko kuch samj ni aa rha tha isi mauka ka fayda dek tanu jaldi se dress krna chali jati h.
Jaanvi- tune shuruwat se padai ni ki maina kuch ni bola tune hmsa Awarapan kiya maina kuch ni bola aaj saari hade par kr di tune.
Ab tu ldki bhi chedna lga hai unko blackmail krna lga hai.
Rohit- bt maina kuch ni kiya ma.
Divya- karamjale toh ye ldki jhut bol rhi hai.
Wo ldki bs rona shuru kr deti hai.
Aur usko rota dek meri didi ki jhaat sulag ja rhi thi wo bina kuch bole bs hme pele ja rhi thi.
Vishal- are yar jaya didi thoda ruko toh hme bhi toh kuch bolne do aap toh bs mare ja rhi ho.
Tabhi wo uncle aata hai.
Aur kahte hai dekho apne laudo ko main police main ni ja rha.
Jaanvi- apka bahot bahot shukriya bhai saab hm wada krta hai aaj ke bad aisa kuch ni hoga.
Vishal- are police ke pas tb jayga nah jab kuch subot hoga.
Vishal ka itna bolna ki Vishal ke bap ne pelai shuru kr dii.
Fir mera dimag kuch ni samj rha tha tabhi sona bolti h didi Rohit Vishal log aisa ni kar skta.
Divya- usko ghur ke dekti h uski gand hi fat gai.
Wo uncle us ladki ko lekar chale jata h aur tabhi divya kahti hai nikal ja yaha se apni manhus jaisi sakal subah se pahle mt dikana ...
Rohit- uth jata hai aur rowasa ho kar aur kahta hai di
main hasi majak se bhara hua ladka
Kisi din kamra main murda milunga
Divya- itni gussa main thi ki kuch smj ni paayi.
Aur fir waha se Rohit nikal gya.
Aaj phli bar Rohit ro rha tha wo rote rote ek pull par gya.
Waha dusri taraf ye sab bawal tanu ke bhai ko pta chala toh unhone Vishal se bat ki aur shopkeeper ko bulwaya.
Shopkeeper- dekhiye bhaiya hm normal insaan hai aisa kah kar usne saari bat batai ki ye sb in ldko ke dhande ki wgh se hua.
Ab divya aur jaanvi ko bahot bura lga.
Jaya Avni se kahti hai yar maina apna bhai ko fltu hi itna mar diya.
Avni- zara Rohit ki soch.
Fir sab Rohit ko dhudne nikal padte hai.
Tab wo ek pull par baitha tha jaha koi ni aata tha.
Tbhi uski nazer ek ring par padti hai wo gussa main usko lat mar deta hai jo Tut jati h.
Rohit- bhagwan ne kya diya mujhe nah sharir nah kismat nah paisa.
Tbhi us ring se ek ketli aati aur jinn bhar nikal ke aati hai.
Jinn- mujhe ajad karane ke liya tmra shukriya
Rohit- arre mdr chod mera pas mat ana mujhe bhut se dar ni lgta.
Jinn- thik hai ab kapo mt Verna gir jaoge.
Rohit thoda sabalta hai.
Jinn- ye konsa saal hai yaha ke insaan itna patle kaisa hota h
Rohit- mdr chod main hi laad jaisa hun baki saare hathi hai.
Jinn- tmri koi icha batoo ek wo main puri kar dungi.
Rohit- tmri taang kider hai.
Jinn- bakwas band kro aur apni ek icha batoo.
Rohit- mujhe tmko chodna hai..
Jinn ye sunte hi pagal ho gai aur kapne lagi.
Jinn- Aa aaa aisa kaisa ho skta hai tum bdle main sona chadi sab mang skta ho.
Jinn- darte hua usko samjati hai dekho tum caho toh sundarta mang lo usse puri duniya tmri jiska man kre uske sth rahna.
Rohit- haan tum shi kah rhi ho main samaj gya.
Jinn- toh ab batoo kya chahiya tumko.
Rohit- ab mujhe tmse shaadi krni h.
Jinn- ye insaan bahen ka loda hai thoda sa aisa maderchod maina phli bar dekha hai.
Jinn- ne waapis usko sammohit kiya aur fir se usko paisa aur sharir hone ke fayada dikaye ghanto tk sb kuch dikha diya.
Jinn- dekha tumne paisa hone se kya hota hai sundarta hone se kya hota h.
Rohit- yar ye toh Kamal hai.
Jinn- toh batoo fir chahaiya ye sb.
Rohit upar se niche dekta hai ginie ko aur kahta hai chal ab shaadi kr chut de.
To be continued..
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Hero kya hi cheej hai yaar bahut badiya chalo ek biwi toh mili aur wo bhi jinniUpdate 3
Jinn- yar aisa chutiya ladka phli bar dekha ye kaisi wish mang rha hai
Rohit- jaldi karo nah.
Jinn- kuch aur mango iske bare main mujhe ni pta kuch bhi.
Rohit- kiske bare main ni ota.
Jinn- yhi ki mera sath shadi ka kya riwaj hai hum jino ki shadi ni hoti.
Rohit- chut marni hai mujhe natak mt pelo Verna gand bhi lunga.
Jinn- dekho apni wo aur kuch bolti uske phle train aa jati hai jisko dek kar wo kahti h ye kya h
Rohit- bat mt palat ye train h tu khol ab.
Jin- ye kya hota h
Rohit- tu kis sadi ki h dress bhi ajeeb se pahni h ek toh taang ni dik rhi.
Jinn- main toh kai jamano ke bad bahar aayi hun mera kam yhi rhta hai jo bhi iccha mange puri kro fir main ander is ketli ke.
Rohit- duniya dekna ka man ni krta.
Jinn- karta hai bahot krta hai bt mera bas main ni hai agr maina niyam ka palan ni kiya toh wo mujhe saja denga kaid kr denga aur aisa bol ke wo kaapne lagti h.
Rohit-tumko pta hai jab ldki chudti hai aur paani chodti h tb aisa hi kapti hai.
Jinn- tmra dimag kam chalta h yaa chalate kam ho main jinn hun man ke ander ke saari bat jaan leti hun.
Jinn- tmne apni padai isi liya chodi nah kyuki teri bahen pad ske isiliya sb karta h nah.
Rohit- haan (serious hote hua).
Jinn- toh natak bnd kro iccha bataoo.
Rohit- chut gulabi h ya kali.
Jinn-
Rohit- meri iccha hai tu abhi chut de ye hai meri pahli iccha.
Jinn ke pas ab koi options ni bacha tha aur acnk se khi gayab ho gai aur Rohit bhi gayab ho gya.
Rohit- main kaha hun.
Jinn- ketli ke ander aur aisa kahte hua wo rone lagi.
Aur rote hua boli ab aao aur kro khud hi.
Rohit- tu ro kyu rhi h.
Jinn- kyuki hum jino ko wish puri krna hi pdta hai ye hi hamari life hai.
Rohit- thik hai fir aisa kah kar wo usko utha kar hoth se hoth mila deta hai aur hoth milte hi jinn kapne lgti hai aur aasu bahne lgta hai.
Rohit- dek kewal kiss kr ke chod dunga is liya kap mt.
Jinn- pkka nah
Rohit- han.
Rohit waapis kiss krta hai fir wo kaap jati hai aisa hi Kai bar hua.
Rohit- tera hoth toh bahot pyare hai malai jaise lekin kap kap ke tune mja kharab kr diya..
Jinn- mujhe ye sab se dar lgta hai.
Rohit- kaisi jhaatu jinn hai teri hmsa gaand hi fati rhti hai.
Jinn- maina abhi bachi hun 2000 sal ki hun main.
Rohit- bhosdachodi ye kam gai.
Jinn- ye kya hota hai.
Rohit- iska mtlb iska mltb bahot sunder hota hai waise main puch rha tha ye kam hai kya.
Jinn- jinn ek tarah se amar hote hai wo marte ni kaid kiya jate hai lekin jo acha hota hai unhe ajad rhne diya jata hai jab koi jinnn buri raahon main nikal jata h tb hi wo kaid kiya jata hai.
Rohit- bsdk yha mera chutiayapa lode se ni sulaj rha tera kya main lund smjhunga.
Rohit- meri dusri iccha hai tu ajaad ho ja.
Jinn- are lekin itni jaldi kya thi abhi mujhe bat krni thi.
Rohit- ja aaj se ajaad.
Wo kuch kahti uske phle aasmaan main ek cheez aayi jo has rhi thi aur kah rhi thi
Main hunnnn jino ka goddddd ha ha ha ha.
Rohit- ye dek kar toh meri gand hi fati thi lekin jinn ki gand fat ke chauraha ho gai thi.
Rohit- arre gand mari tu kyu dar rhi h
Jinn- m m m m
Rohit- muh main loda fas gya tu rhne de tera bas ki ni h bolna.
Rohit- kon ho tum aur hath aisa kya aage kar rakha h gand dega kya tum mujhe.
Rohit ki itna bat sunkar jinn piche se kapne lagi aur Rohit ke pakd ke aur jor se kap rhi thi.
Black male jinn- bache ye jinn aisa ni ajaad hogi jinn ki ajaadi carore saal bad hoti hai lekin tu is jinn ko ajaad karana chahta hai toh tujhe iske sath shaadi krni pdegi jinn aur insaan ki shaadi hm jino main kabul hai.
Black jinn- lekin iske liya tujhe blood ritual krna pdega uske sth ye shaadi aisa hi hogi fir ye ajaad ho jaygi aur tera sth rhegii.
Rohit- toh thik h kr do aur achi si skal banao darwa kyu rha ho.
Black jinn- ritual krne ke bad tum amar toh ho jaoge lekin ha ha ha ha.
Rohit- ye ajaad ho jaygi meri har icha puri kregii.
Black jinn- han
Rohit- toh kr do jaldi se.
Lekin wo lady jinn jaise kuch kahna chah rhi thi lekin uski gand fatna bnd ho tb toh kuch bole.
Fir us kalu ne bdi ajeeb se kuch rasmaina ki bahen ke lode ne meri hath ki nas kat ke khoon usko chatne ko bola wo chaati toh bahen ki lodi ki aankh laal ho gai.
Rohit- mera loda chusa ni ja rha tha khoon chus le rhi h tu.
Black jinn- tu darta ni h kya.
Rohit- mujhe apse kuch puchne hai.
Black Jinn- kya bol
Rohit- tm itna bda ho tmra loda toh aur bda hoga nah
Black jinn- afisha apne pati ko lekar bhaag ja yaha se Verna acha ni hoga..
Rohit- ye afisha hai.
Black Jinn- ha
Rohit - ab chut degi nah ye
Rohit aage kuch bolta lekin uske phle hi afisha usko lekar gayab ho gai.
Black jinn bhi waha se gayab ho gya..
