Bhai kahani mast hai, lekin writing style itna bekar hai ki kai baar samajh nhi aata ki kon sa character kis dialogue ko bol rha hai 2-3 baar padhkar process krna padta hai.
Sirf jaldbazi me likhkar post mat kro, update likhne ke baad kuch editing or correction par bhi dhyan do
Sirf jaldbazi me likhkar post mat kro, update likhne ke baad kuch editing or correction par bhi dhyan do
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Bhai sudhaar kiya jayga thank....waise har character ke name ke bad - aisa dash toh main deta hun
fir bhi aur shudhaar krunga thankyouuuu