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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

Him@987

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Deva- Agar tu confident hai toh I'm confident...

Main- Yeah...Mujhe jaankaari le lene do thodi...Rohit Orr Sam kidhar hain...

Rohit- Idhar bhai...

Rohit or Sam ek side they baaki sabke sath main unke pass gaya and unke saamne jaake baitha...

Rohit - Bc Hollywood waali bakchodi haibe ye toh..

Main- Sun...Mujhe thoda yaad dilwa toh Commerce block ka kya scene hai..Tu bahot baar gaya haina wahaan par ,bc suru mein jab tu elections mein utha tha tab wahin votes maangte they Main Sam or Ravi tere liye..Wahi haina ??

Rohit- Yeah...

Main- Uske baad ye Sam ki setting thi naa woh BCOM waali jiske piche jaatey they wahaan right ??

Sam- Exactly.

Main- Toh right side stairs hain left side stairs hain fir aage hallway and piche classrooms...

Rohit- Haan..

Main- Seedhiyon se toh nahi jaane denge bc dono seedhiyaan cover karke baithey honge wohlog...

Ravi-1000% ...Itane pagal thodi hain...

Main- Uske alawa koi option??Pipes ?? Khidkiyaan ??Balcony ...kuch bhi jisse pakkadke main uppar jaa shakun...

Sam- Haina...Pipes hain first floor takk ...Idhar balcony bhi hai...Pipes plastic k hain toh muskill hai but niche waali khidki better option hai ,khidki k uppar climb karke uppar first floor takk reach karke uppar waali balcony pakkad shakta hai tu...Washroom khaali hoga kyunki sab students ko 2 he room mein rakha hai ye do rooms mein ...

Sam ne mujhe Google par Building ki photos dikhaai ...

Main- Or woh washroom konsa hai...

Sam- Ye waala...Just bagal mein..

Main- Bawligand...Marwa dega kya be...Unke just bagal mein nikalunga main matlab...

Sam- Yeah...But dusara koi option nahi hai baaki sab classes ki windon andar se lock hongi toh uppar climb karke kya faayda andar thodi jaa paaega tu...

Main- Fuck...Itane close se toh silencer lagaaunga toh bhi awaaj aaegi bc...

Rohit- 100% bilkul bagal mein he toh hai washroom...

Main- Ye toh problem hogayi bc...Awaaj suntey he woh students ko thokna suru kardenge or main akela kitano ko ek sath thokunga bc 4-5 students ko toh maar he denge tabtak wohlog...

Ravi- Yeah...

Riya- Tum akele jaaoge ..

Main- Yeah..

Riya- Why ???

Main- Because dusara koi option nahi hai Riya...Don't worry I'll be fine...

Riya- Unhe jo caahiye woh de kyun nahi detey..

Main- Nooo...No..no...Woh orr jyaada dangerous hai...

Anjali- Ab sound ka kya karein boss??

Main- Sochne dey yaar sochne dey.. Fuckkkk...

Ab mera phone baja jo Ruhi ka tha..

Main- aajao madam tumhara he wait hai ,kahaan reh gayi...

Ruhi - Ye piche tere police waalon ne roukka hua hai ,bole aage bandh hai..

Main- Main bhejta hun kissi ko...

Call disconnected..

Main- Mangal Bahaar Ruhi hai usko leke aa toh...

Mangal- 2 Minute...

Main- Hmmm...Sound...Sound...sound....

Mangal- AP...Ruhi is here.....

Main-Jaldi aa..

Ruhi andar aake mujhse galle milli..

Ruhi -Matlab bimari mein bhi sans nahi lene detey log tujhe...

Main-True...Ye medicine inject kardey...

Ruhi- Ye konsi medicine hai ??Naa koi naam naa koi tag ...

Main- Homeopathic Hai ...

Ruhi - Homeopathy waale kabse injection banaaney lage..

Main- Meri maa sawaal naa kar .. Injection laga ,tested medicine hai...

Ruhi- Kuch bhi leta rehta hai tu..

Ruhi ne injection fill Kiya and meri arm par laga diya..

Main-Ok...Jaa ab bhaag jaa ,it's not safe here...

Ruhi - Tum sab ho yahaan or main akeli safe nahi hun bolo...I'm staying here kissi ko kuch hua toh doctor ki jarurat padegi naa..

Main- Uske liye already Saikdon ambulance hain bahaar Ruhi...

Ruhi - Haan lekin woh ambulance tere koi kaam nahi aaengi naa , mujhe pata hai tu kuch na kuch hero giri karega jarur or tera ilaaj toh mujhse he hoga..

Main- Ok ok...Rukk jaa meri maa...Sound ka kya karein bc ab...

Ami- I got an idea boss ..Sound ko Sound se he tackle kartey hain...

Main- Matlab ??

Ami- Matlab unhe helicopter bhi toh caahiye hum ek helicopter bulaatey hain uppar land hoga jo obviously helicopter itani jyaada sound karega ki Bina silencer bhi pistol ki goli ki awaj nahi aaegi..

Main- Great fucking idea Ami...But helicopter bulaaenge toh wohlog faill jaaenge kuch pehle helicopter check karne uppar jaaenge or khaali helicopter millega toh fir wohlog bhokla jaaenge...

Ami- True..Fir great idea kaise hua...

Main - Helicopter nahi toh kya hua sound toh hai he..

Ami- How ??

Main- Rohit kitane students honge bahaar...

Rohit - 500-600 toh honge he bhai..

Main- Ok sabko ikkatha kar or samjha unko ki jaise he tu bole unhe jor jor se naare lagaane hain ,like kuch bhi ,humaare doston ko chhudwaao ,insaaf dilwaao wagairah wagairah,rukkna nahi hai bc ek sans naare he lagwaane hain...Itane logon ki sound helicopter jitani he ho jaaegi...

Deva- Yes...That's great...

Anjali- That'll work boss...

Rohit- Main ikkatha karta hun sabko...

Main- 2 he minutes hain tere pass...Anjali isko ek earbud de dey toh jaise he main bolun chaalu ho jaana hai.

Rohit - Copy...

Main- Sam Ravi Ashish sablog tum bhi jaao...

Ashish- Ok bhai...

Wohlog wahaan se chale gaye ab baari thi mujhe cover karne ki..

Main - 2 Snipers bhi caahiye hongi Anjali mujhe...Ek Front mein or ek left side jiss side se main climb karke washroom se nikalunga...Front mein Ami ko rakh or left mein Jiya ko...

Anjali- Ok boss...

Main-Tu or baaki team standby par rahegi kuch bhi gadbad hui toh seedha rambo ki tarah andar ghus jaana ...2 pistols bhi laa mere liye with silencers...Deagle se toh pura gaon jaag jaaega...

Anjali- Copy that...Ami ,Jiya take your positions....

Main- Guys no pressure but yaad dilwa dun tum miss hue toh main marr jaaunga or Abhi marrne ka koi plan hai nahi ..

Jiya- Come on boss aapko kuch hogaya toh fir laanat hai humaare jeene par..

Main- Good...

Jiya- Give us 5 minutes...

Main- Yep...Lelo... Position...

Laxman meri coffee le aaya tabtak...

Anjali- Yelo boss ...Earbuds or bulletproof vest...

Maine earbud lagaaya ...

Main- Vest nahi caahiye ..

Anjali- Come on boss akele Jaa rahe ho ...

Main- Arrey woh nahi ,vest pehanke uppar kaise climb karunga ...

Anjali-Taang lo sathmein andar washroom mein jaake pehan Lena..

Main- Yeah...Ye bhi hai..

Mangal- Le le bc ,waise bhi kismat kharaab chalri hai...

Main- Yep...Sath leleta hun...Kismat bahot kharab hai...

Continued ..
Awesome
 

spritemathews

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ekdum cinematic aur tense sequence jaise lage — jaise ek military operation chalu ho, par emotion aur intensity dono full power par ho. Yahaan kahani ne apna tone action-thriller mode me daal diya hai — pura setup calm intelligence aur controlled chaos ka perfect balance tha.


658 me AP ka uthna hi heroic moment tha. Thoda weak tha, par uske andar ka fighter kabhi rest nahi leta. Niharika Di ke diye hue injections ka detail realistic touch laata hai — science aur survival dono ka mix. AP ka line “bimar hun bhai, coma mein nahi” pure attitude se bhara hai. Uska apne limits ke bawajood ready hona dikhata hai ki AP fear se nahi, focus se chalta hai. Mangal ke sath uska coordination — ek silent trust wala bond lagta hai, jisme bina zyada words ke samajh hoti hai.


Phir jab canteen scene aata hai, pura environment ek high-stakes zone jaise lagta hai. Police, NCB, media sab wahaan hain, par real control tab aata hai jab AP entry leta hai. “Majaak zaruri hai bhai, warna gussa dimaag pe chadh jaayega” — ye line uske mental control ka masterstroke hai. Violence ke beech humor se apna calm maintain karna — ye hi uska real weapon hai. Uske analytical observation — ki hijackers ne commerce block kyu choose kiya — shows AP’s tactical genius. Helicopter exit, student ratio, risk calculation — sab ek trained mind ke jaise breakdown karta hai.


Phir 659 me planning ka pura tension build-up hai. Rohit, Sam, Ravi ke dialogues ek dum natural lage — jaise purane college friends serious situation me bhi apna lingo nahi chhodte. Unka commerce block ka layout discussion practical aur visually clear hai, jisse reader easily scene imagine kar sakta hai. “Bc itne close se silencer lagaaunga toh bhi awaaz aaegi” — ye line ekdum raw realism dikhata hai. AP koi superhero nahi, balki ek grounded strategist hai jo har risk samajhta hai.


Ruhi ka aana ek emotional pause jaisa laga — thoda warmth, thoda concern, par AP ke world me wo bhi ek calculated chaos hai. Unka small banter “Homeopathy waale kabse injection banane lage?” jaise lines tension ke beech comic relief dete hain — exactly jaise Bollywood me ek short emotional breather milta hai action ke pehle.


Aur phir jab Ami idea deti hai “sound ko sound se tackle karte hain” — bhai, woh moment ekdum creative genius tha. Helicopter ka noise replicate karne ka plan students ke naare se — itna clever improvisation rarely milta hai. It shows how this team doesn’t just fight with bullets, they fight with brains.


Anjali aur Ami ka coordination, Jiya aur sniper placement, earbud setup — sab ek professional SWAT operation jaisa detail me likha gaya hai. Har line me ek ticking clock feel hoti hai. Aur AP ka casual tone — “Guys no pressure but agar miss hue toh main marr jaaunga” — ek dark humour aur confidence ka deadly combo hai.


Overall bhai, ye dono updates poora pre-action climax jaise the — silence ke beech storm ready ho raha hai. Kahani ka scale ab sirf underworld nahi, poora tactical warfare level par chala gaya hai.
 

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