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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

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Main bhaagke Mack ki dead body k pass gaya but tabtak woh jaa chuka tha lekin mera mind ye maananey ko taiyaar nahi tha maine usko galle se pakkadke uthaaya ...

Main- (Chilaake)You can't do that you can't fucking do that....Wake up...Get the fuck up..Tu aise nahi marr shakta ...No ...No...no...You can't die...

Maine usko chhoda or Randy se uski pistol cheeni and Mack k uppar goli chalaane laga or tabtak goli chalaata raha jabtak meri magazine khaali nahi hogayi finally uski beti ne mujhe dhakka maara ...Mera dimag gusse se fattne ko hogaya tha ,Mera shikaar mere hathon se ,mere saamne se nikal gaya tha isase kharaab kuch nahi ho shakta tha maine Nysa ko pakkada or dono hathon se uska galla dabaaya..

Nysa- Yess...Kill Me...Kill Me...Dikhaado ki tumhari jubaan ka koi matlab nahi hai...You are a fucking Coward...Kill me...

Maine usko turant chhoda ...

Main- We gotta Go Randy..We gotta go...

Randy-Y....yess...yes...Let's go...C tu teeno hostages ko waapis bhijwa dena..

Humlog turant wahaan se nikale ,meri puri body jall rahi thi maano kissi ne acid daal diya ho mere uppar bhenchood what the fuck...Humlog gaadi mein baithey and nikale wahaan se...

Main- I need Jester Randy...I need Jester right fucking now...

Randy- Boss...Plane mein hai jester...10 minutes..

Main- Then you better drive fast or I'm killing everyone I see...

Randy- I got you boss...

Main- Bhenchod...Woh jhant bharr ka banda mujhe pagal bana gaya...Can you believe it...Kitana close tha main usko maarne k...Mera shikaar mere hathon se waapis chala gaya...No no...that's impossible...How did I missed it...Kaise nahi dekh paaya uski chaal main....Fuckkkk....Oh bro I can't even breath.....Randy I Need Jester right now...

Randy- 2 more minutes boss...

Main- Fast...

Mujhe still belive nahi horaha tha ki woh budha bhenchood mere sath game khel gaya ,main sab jeetke bhi haar gaya tha..I can't believe this maine ek country ka 20%+ hissa jeet liya tha but fir bhi main haar gaya tha ...Itana gussa ..I don't even know last time kab aaya tha mujhe..Fuckkk...I can't stay like this no no no i can't . I gotta go back...I Gotta go...Asap ..

Randy ne apne saare contacts lagaaye tab jaake humein direct airport mein entry mill chuki thi or humlog bhaagtey hue humaare plane k andar enter hue ,wahi plane jo Snow yahaan leke aai thi...Plane mein aatey he main Baitha or Randy ne Jester mere saamne rakha maine turant quadruple dose banaai and turant he snort kar gaya main or turant he hit kiya jester ne mujhe...

Main- Randy go to Delhi Drop me to Delhi...Listen main jaa raha hun ,1.0 ko aane dena..Usko bolna I'm sorry but thodi gand maregi uski bhi...But dhyaan rakhe woh kuch bhi kare gussa naa kare not at all...Agle kuch din gussa bahot jyada aaega usko toh usko bolna usko control kare,main gusse ko control nahi kar shakta but woh kar shakta hai issiliye ye jimmedari usko sonpke jaa raha hun...Tell him to fight it...Tell him to control the Anger...I'm sorry mere pass koi or chaara nahi tha issliye yun sab uske uppar thoppke jaa raha hun ..Tell him iske badle jab usse help caahiye hogi ,I'll help him on his terms...But this time he gotta help me...Wake me after 8 hours...

Randy- Ok boss...Just sleep..

Main- Control the angeeerrrrrr...

Uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha main deep sleep mein chala gaya and aage ka kaam 1.0 par chhod diya , as I said main gusse par control nahi kar shakta main apne andar k killer par control nahi kar shakta but 1.0 ,woh ye kar shakta hai , easily nahi but kar shakta hai woh ...Ab main caahta toh rukk shakta tha but usme Mera he nuksaan tha , kyunki main bahot saare logon ko maar Dene waala tha jo fir meri he gand marwaata , already ek case Gand faad raha tha meri or nahi caahiye tha..Uppar se AP ki jarurat india mein thi toh maine usko jaane diya ,kya pata kitana bada issue ho ..3.0 se already dushmani moll le chuka tha main or ab 1.0 ko uski personal problems se Durr karke usase bhi dusmani moll nahi lena caahta tha main ,ek wahi tha mere pass .. Issliye I made the right decision to just go back to sleep...Take care 1.0..

Main aise so raha tha maano kai saal baad aankh lagi hon tabhi bhenchod baarish suru hogayi ,bahaar so raha tha kya main??Nahi toh bc..Abe uth toh fir yaa pura bheegke uthega..

Main jump maarke utha toh khudko ek bed par paaya or mere side mein Chang ek paani ka glass liye khadda tha jo usne mere uppar daala tha.. Bhenchood 2 Chang kahaan se aagaye ...Mujhe literally 2 Chang khaddey dikh rahe they ,itana blurred vision tha filhal mera ...Maine munh saaf kiya apni shirt se...

Main- Bhenchod...Aise kon jagaata haibe...Or tu yahaan kya kar raha hai???Randy Tum bhi ??..Sab theek toh hai...

Randy- Ok 1.0 he hai ..

Main-Ofocurse main hun...Fuck...Abe sone do naa ..Sir bhayanak dard kar raha hai...Nind Puri nahi hui hai..

Randy - 12 ghante se so he rahe ho tum...

Main- What the fuck...

Randy- Calm down..Baitho...Kya chal raha hai yaad hai tumhe ??Kahaan ho tum...

Main- Yeah.. Thailand k hoteeeelll...Ek minutes ye Toh Ajit ji waala hotel haibe..Delhi... Bhenchod Delhi kaise aagaya main...

Randy- Yeah...Lambi story hai..

Main- Baadmein sunana bhai Ajit ji ka hotel hai toh doctor ko bulaa asap...Sir fatt jaaega warna Bhenchod...Bukhaar bhi haibe mujhe toh...

Randy- Yeah...Doctor aaraha hai...

"Aagaya"

Gate se andar aatey hue Ajit ji bole unke sath Sunaina or ek doctor tha ..Ajit ji yaad haina,Delhi Headquarters k Chief or Sunaina Deputy chief...Mere kaafi close hain wohlog...

Doctor ne turant stethoscope or thermometer etc nikaale aankhein check ki torch maarke...

Main- andha kardega kya be..

Maine uske hath se torch cheentey hue kaha..

Randy- Noo...Gussa nahi karna hai...

Main- Ye gussa thodi tha be... Frustration thi..

Randy- Woh bhi nahi..

Main- Aji haan...aisa thodi hota hai...Kyun be ??

Randy- Dawaai lele sab batTa hun..

Ab doctor ne mujhe tarah tarah ki dawaaiyaan de di..

Main- Uncle 10 seconds k checkup mein itani saari tablets kaise de di ??

Doctor- Maine bus Bukhaar and bodyaches ki di hain baaki tablets Niharika ji ne suggest ki thi..

Main- Niharika di ne ??

Randy- Yeah..Humne symptoms bataa diye they unhe pehle he...

Main- Aisa kya hua bc ??What the fuck happened??

Continued...
2.0gussa me hi chala gaya
Gussa hona bhi chahiye jab apna shikar koyi cheen le ya fir khud apne aap ko maar le
Bahar haal 1.0 ki wapsi ho gayi h ab dekhte h yaha kia aisa chal raha h
 

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Mujhe Sunaina di ne dawaai bheji ,matlab bhenchood kuch toh serious chal raha tha ,kya gand marwai hai 2.0 ne bc ..

Ab Doctor wahaan se chala gaya mujhe dawaai deke toh room mein bache main Randy Ami Chang Sunaina or Ajit ji ..

Main- Bataa be..

Randy- So Actually 2.0 ko unexpectedly jaana padda kyunki uske hathon se uska shikaar chala gaya or woh bahot bhayankar gussa tha ,bahot jyaada but kuch retaliation karne ka time nahi tha uske pass ,well time toh bahot tha but tere waapis aane kaa time horaha tha toh usne bola humein ki woh tera time nahi lena caahta kyuki tujhe urgent waapis aana tha ,woh already 3.0 se panga leke uske against jaa chuka tha toh ab woh tujhe bhi apne against nahi dekhna caahta tha issliye woh mid anger he bahot jyaada Jester leke like bahot jyaada itana ek sath kabhi nahi liya hoga jester tune itana jester leke woh forcefully bich mein chala gaya...Toh teri gand toh marrni he thi ek toh 2.0 Bich mein gaya ,dusara drugs leke Gaya woh bhi bahot saare drugs and third and most importantly woh gusse mein he waapis gaya yaani you're fucked...Ussi ne humein jaatey hue bataaya tha ki kuch din aag lagi rahegi tumhare andar toh kuch bhi karo gusse par control rakhna hai Jo keval tu he kar shakta tha issliye woh ye tere uppar chhodke gaya..

Main- Well...2.0 ne koi acha kaam kiya finally...I'm impressed...But...Again... Bhenchod meri gand kyun maarke jaatey hain ye dono ,i don't understand this...Abe full permission hai meri tumlog aao kuch bhi karo kaise bhi karo i don't care,care kya bc mujhe toh pata bhi nahi kya kartey ho tumlog ,meri bus ek he request rehti hai ki mujhe aise he chhod jaaya karo jaise suru mein tha main but nahi bhenchood harr baar they fuck me over...

Randy- Well woh unke hath mein nahi haina woh normally aake jaatey rahenge toh bhi tujhe problem honge...For example ek machine jo ek kaam ko 24 ghante mein karti hai or wahi kaam uss machine se 2 minutes mein karwaaenge toh machine ki gand toh maregi he ,same wahi situation hai tumhari..Yaani wohlog agar caahein tujhe normal chhodke jaane ki toh bhi ye possible nahi hai ,unke jaane k baad teri aisi taisi honi pakki hai.mm

Main- Yeah...Yeah..I Know...Fuckkkkk...

Randy- Relax AP...Bc 2.0 agar koi request karke gaya hai toh usko follow naa karna tujhe pata haina kitana bura hoga ..Gussa...Nahi Caahiye....

Main-Ek second ...Tune bola mujhe urgently aana tha yahaan...Kyun be ??Kya hua yahaan??

Randy- Hua nahi hai ho he Raha hai ..

Main- Kya..?

Randy- So Obviously Sanjay k last 2 pillars he bache hain obviously ek toh uski Behan Medha and dusara Andrews...Medha important nahi hai Andrews important hai , Andrews is smart , dangerous and insanely powerful...

Main- Haao pata hai mujhe ..He's equally powerful...And bahot jyaada smart hai woh...

Randy- Yes...Bahot jyaada smart...Toh obviously abhi uska number aagaya hai yahaan aane ka or ab woh pagal toh hai nahi jo seedha aake tujhse ladega no woh smart hai toh he'll fight tactically...Toh issiliye usne apna master stroke khela hai ..

Main- Konsa Master Stroke ??

Randy- Inn dono ko Jaanta hai ??

Usne mujhe do shaks ki photo dikhaatey hue kaha..

Main- Oh yeah ..Ye toh Sanjay Das ka bada bhai tha na Vasu Das???Right??. Ye Asian Underworld ka ek important part tha ..Even khudka ek chota lekin bahot jyaada dangerous Syndicate chalaata tha ye Asian Underworld mein kya naam tha uss syndicate ka ..

Randy- VJ Syndicate...

Main- Yes...VJ ... Assassins they yelog .Or Uss time par Hounds k baad sabse powerfull hired killers they yelog..Or ye Vasu unka leader tha or Master Boe k according uss time ka sabse best killer tha ye...He was smart and insanely brutal he was always two steps ahead of everybody.. Kaafi kisse chaltey hain uske naam se Asian Underworld mein ..Naam chalta hai uska bc .

Randy- Yes...

Main- Ye Sanjay gandu ko ussi ne banaaya tha warna ye Bhenchod Mumbai port par se goods churaaya karta tha chindi chor tha woh bhenchood ,Vasu ne isse apne pairon par khadda hona sikhaaya usko support Kiya pehle isko Andrews se milwaake Mumbai Underworld ki gaddi par baithaaya or fir Vilas se milwaake South dilwaya and ussi ne Sanjay ko Underworld ka businessmen banwaaya or ab Sanjay ka 50% paisa Asian Underworld k sath kiye business se aata hai toh Vasu ne Banaya Sanjay ko uske baad Sanjay ne piche muddke nahi dekha hai...Or aaj woh bhenchood pure Indian Crime World ki raaj gaddi par baitha hai keval or keval Vasu ki wajah se..

Ajit- Exactly..

Main- And Fir ekdin Vasu ko laalach aagaya or usne Hounds k contract apne under lene caahe khudko badhaane k liye Hounds k khilaaf chal raha tha woh Hounds k clients leke Jaa Raha tha woh and woh yahaan par he nahi rukka , khudko or bada karne k liye usne Hounds k 2 Managers ko maara bahot smartly but Master Norman se nahi bach paaya woh and Master Norman ne khud isko goli maari thi and Vasu ka game over kardiya tha...Aaj se 18-20 saal pehle..

Randy - Exactly..

Main- Toh tu mujhe marre hue bandey ki photo kaahe dikha raha hai..

Randy- Vasu ko nahi dikha raha tha main uske sath jo dusara banda hai usko dikha raha tha ,tu he Vasu ki kahaani sunaaney laga..

Main- Ye kon hai bc ??

Randy- Ye hai Jose..VJ Syndicate mein V se Vasu or J se Jose ..Ye Co Leader tha VJ Syndicate ka ...Or ye Andrews ka bada bhai tha..

Main- What the fuck?? Bhenchod Ye kahaan se or kaise aagaya..

Continued...
Tow Sanjay ko itna bada criminal banane wale bhaiyion me ek tow mar gaya tha lekin doosra wapas laya gaya h
 

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Randy- Yeah Jose or Vasu bachpan se he sath they dono he young age mein gharse bhaagke Mumbai aaye they jahaan se Underworld ka safar unhone ek sath tayy kiya tha ..Toh Andrews or Sanjay se pehle inn dono k bhai best friends they like brothers or ussi wajah se Andrews or Sanjay ek sath hue they..Ab obviously Vasu marr gaya but Jose ne surrender kar diya tha High Command k saamne or kai saal uska case chala or investigation mein Jose ka koi role nahi milla tha Conspiracy mein lekin VJ ko khatam kar diya gaya tha toh Jose ko yun he maarna inhumane tha issliye usko jinda chhod diya gaya tha or Jose apna saara kaala paisa ikkatha karke US bhaagne ki planning kar raha tha US k kuch apne old friends k sath millke but unhi friends ne Jose ko NewYork bulaa liya or uska Paisa khaake usse Newyork airport se he arrest karwa diya or usse NewYork State Prison mein bandh karwa diya fraud or blackmoney related bahot saare cases lagwaake and uss din se aaj takk 17-18 saal se Jose NewYork prison mein saja kaat raha tha ..Ab Andrews ki itani banti nahi hai apne bhai k sath you know siblings rivalry turned bad ..Toh Andrews apna naam bachaane k liye Jose se Durr he raha or pass rehke bhi kya karleta woh State Prison mein bandh tha toh koi ilaaj nahi tha toh Andrews ne apna naam bachaana theek samjha...Lekin ab itane saal baad uski aankhein khulli actually khulli nahi tumne khol di jab tumne Bhusan jaise bandey ko ghantey k andar maar diya or uski aadhi gang ki toh laash bhi nahi millne di uske alawa itani powerful sarkaar banaake toh tere pass unlimited powers hogayi thi tab Andrews ko samjh aagaya ki agla number ab tumse ladne ka uska hai or woh thoda backfoot par hai or Obviously Andrews ek businessmen hai like usne drugs se billions of dollars ka revenue generate kiya hai Sanjay k liye he's extremely smart ,Sanjay khud or uske baaki saare pillars millke jitana revenue generate kartey they usase double revenue Andrews ne akele diya tha Sanjay ko so as I said Andrews ek businessmen hai woh koi raah chalta gangster nahi hai or tumhe haraane k liye usse wahi banana tha he needed to be ruthless ,he needed a killer tab usse apne bade bhai ki yaad aayi ,Ab issue ye tha ki bhai ki saja mein abhi 13-14 saal or bache they but usne ab apne contact lagwaaye or apne bhai ki saja good behaviour par khatam karwaai jiske badle usne 20 Million USD diye yaani almost 180 crore Rupees...Khudse apni jeb se..

Main- What the fuckkkkkkk...

Randy- Yes ..Jose ko india laaye 10-12 din hue ab Andrews ne bahaar nikaalne k badle 2 he cheej maangi Jose se pehli tumhaara kata hua sir or dusara 180 Crore ka jo nuksaan hua hai uski bharpaai ho jaaye or dono he conditions Jose ko passand aai ,aani he thi bc woh toh marr raha tha. Bahaar aane k liye toh usne maan lee conditions or ab paise obviously woh Andrews k drugs business ko takeover karke kamaaega and dusari condition obviously..

Main- Meri khopdi kaatke puri karega...

Randy- Karni padegi... Karega thodi...Tumhara sir Bhenchod aise he rakha mill jaaega isko..

Main- Bhenchod...Jab lagta haina Sanjay se upper hand leliya hai maine or usase aage chall raha hun main tabhi Bhenchod log apni jaadui topi mein se naya khargosh nikaa laata hai bhadwa...Or abki baar toh Khargosh nahi maadarchod Sherr he nikaal laaya hai...

Ajit- Yes...I'll say this AP Jose beshak Vasu jitana dangerous nahi tha but still kam bhi nahi tha woh he was an insanely smart killer ..He was brains behind VJ he was a masterful killer ...

Main- Great...

Randy - Yes...Or rumours toh ye kehtey hain ki woh North India mein aa chuka hai or apne pair jamaane suru kar chuka hai..Even kai jagah uska jikar bhi ho chuka hai kai drug dealers ne uska jikar karna suru kar diya hai Delhi NCR mein ..Or criminals mein ek alag he lehar hai khussi ki kyunki unki najaron mein toh Jose ek crime boss he tha jo bahot jyada powerful tha ki ussi ne Sanjay or Andrews ko banaaya hai ,unhe thodi pata hai woh Underworld se tha unki aankhon mein woh ek hardcore gangster hai issliye uski harr baat maanenge wohlog uska khouff he itana hai ...

Main- Great...Fucking Great ..Yahi kasar reh gayi thi ab... Maadarchod..

Continued...
Tow Vaju ko deal di gaya h AP ka kata sir or 180 crore rupai
Dekhte h ab AP kaise deal karta h iss bande se
Ho kuch bhi kotna bhi dangerous marna tow isko bhi h iske bhai ko Master Norman ne mara tha ab isko AP thonkega
Baharhal dekhte h aage kia hota ha
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Main bhaagke Mack ki dead body k pass gaya but tabtak woh jaa chuka tha lekin mera mind ye maananey ko taiyaar nahi tha maine usko galle se pakkadke uthaaya ...

Main- (Chilaake)You can't do that you can't fucking do that....Wake up...Get the fuck up..Tu aise nahi marr shakta ...No ...No...no...You can't die...

Maine usko chhoda or Randy se uski pistol cheeni and Mack k uppar goli chalaane laga or tabtak goli chalaata raha jabtak meri magazine khaali nahi hogayi finally uski beti ne mujhe dhakka maara ...Mera dimag gusse se fattne ko hogaya tha ,Mera shikaar mere hathon se ,mere saamne se nikal gaya tha isase kharaab kuch nahi ho shakta tha maine Nysa ko pakkada or dono hathon se uska galla dabaaya..

Nysa- Yess...Kill Me...Kill Me...Dikhaado ki tumhari jubaan ka koi matlab nahi hai...You are a fucking Coward...Kill me...

Maine usko turant chhoda ...

Main- We gotta Go Randy..We gotta go...

Randy-Y....yess...yes...Let's go...C tu teeno hostages ko waapis bhijwa dena..

Humlog turant wahaan se nikale ,meri puri body jall rahi thi maano kissi ne acid daal diya ho mere uppar bhenchood what the fuck...Humlog gaadi mein baithey and nikale wahaan se...

Main- I need Jester Randy...I need Jester right fucking now...

Randy- Boss...Plane mein hai jester...10 minutes..

Main- Then you better drive fast or I'm killing everyone I see...

Randy- I got you boss...

Main- Bhenchod...Woh jhant bharr ka banda mujhe pagal bana gaya...Can you believe it...Kitana close tha main usko maarne k...Mera shikaar mere hathon se waapis chala gaya...No no...that's impossible...How did I missed it...Kaise nahi dekh paaya uski chaal main....Fuckkkk....Oh bro I can't even breath.....Randy I Need Jester right now...

Randy- 2 more minutes boss...

Main- Fast...

Mujhe still belive nahi horaha tha ki woh budha bhenchood mere sath game khel gaya ,main sab jeetke bhi haar gaya tha..I can't believe this maine ek country ka 20%+ hissa jeet liya tha but fir bhi main haar gaya tha ...Itana gussa ..I don't even know last time kab aaya tha mujhe..Fuckkk...I can't stay like this no no no i can't . I gotta go back...I Gotta go...Asap ..

Randy ne apne saare contacts lagaaye tab jaake humein direct airport mein entry mill chuki thi or humlog bhaagtey hue humaare plane k andar enter hue ,wahi plane jo Snow yahaan leke aai thi...Plane mein aatey he main Baitha or Randy ne Jester mere saamne rakha maine turant quadruple dose banaai and turant he snort kar gaya main or turant he hit kiya jester ne mujhe...

Main- Randy go to Delhi Drop me to Delhi...Listen main jaa raha hun ,1.0 ko aane dena..Usko bolna I'm sorry but thodi gand maregi uski bhi...But dhyaan rakhe woh kuch bhi kare gussa naa kare not at all...Agle kuch din gussa bahot jyada aaega usko toh usko bolna usko control kare,main gusse ko control nahi kar shakta but woh kar shakta hai issiliye ye jimmedari usko sonpke jaa raha hun...Tell him to fight it...Tell him to control the Anger...I'm sorry mere pass koi or chaara nahi tha issliye yun sab uske uppar thoppke jaa raha hun ..Tell him iske badle jab usse help caahiye hogi ,I'll help him on his terms...But this time he gotta help me...Wake me after 8 hours...

Randy- Ok boss...Just sleep..

Main- Control the angeeerrrrrr...

Uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nahi tha main deep sleep mein chala gaya and aage ka kaam 1.0 par chhod diya , as I said main gusse par control nahi kar shakta main apne andar k killer par control nahi kar shakta but 1.0 ,woh ye kar shakta hai , easily nahi but kar shakta hai woh ...Ab main caahta toh rukk shakta tha but usme Mera he nuksaan tha , kyunki main bahot saare logon ko maar Dene waala tha jo fir meri he gand marwaata , already ek case Gand faad raha tha meri or nahi caahiye tha..Uppar se AP ki jarurat india mein thi toh maine usko jaane diya ,kya pata kitana bada issue ho ..3.0 se already dushmani moll le chuka tha main or ab 1.0 ko uski personal problems se Durr karke usase bhi dusmani moll nahi lena caahta tha main ,ek wahi tha mere pass .. Issliye I made the right decision to just go back to sleep...Take care 1.0..

Main aise so raha tha maano kai saal baad aankh lagi hon tabhi bhenchod baarish suru hogayi ,bahaar so raha tha kya main??Nahi toh bc..Abe uth toh fir yaa pura bheegke uthega..

Main jump maarke utha toh khudko ek bed par paaya or mere side mein Chang ek paani ka glass liye khadda tha jo usne mere uppar daala tha.. Bhenchood 2 Chang kahaan se aagaye ...Mujhe literally 2 Chang khaddey dikh rahe they ,itana blurred vision tha filhal mera ...Maine munh saaf kiya apni shirt se...

Main- Bhenchod...Aise kon jagaata haibe...Or tu yahaan kya kar raha hai???Randy Tum bhi ??..Sab theek toh hai...

Randy- Ok 1.0 he hai ..

Main-Ofocurse main hun...Fuck...Abe sone do naa ..Sir bhayanak dard kar raha hai...Nind Puri nahi hui hai..

Randy - 12 ghante se so he rahe ho tum...

Main- What the fuck...

Randy- Calm down..Baitho...Kya chal raha hai yaad hai tumhe ??Kahaan ho tum...

Main- Yeah.. Thailand k hoteeeelll...Ek minutes ye Toh Ajit ji waala hotel haibe..Delhi... Bhenchod Delhi kaise aagaya main...

Randy- Yeah...Lambi story hai..

Main- Baadmein sunana bhai Ajit ji ka hotel hai toh doctor ko bulaa asap...Sir fatt jaaega warna Bhenchod...Bukhaar bhi haibe mujhe toh...

Randy- Yeah...Doctor aaraha hai...

"Aagaya"

Gate se andar aatey hue Ajit ji bole unke sath Sunaina or ek doctor tha ..Ajit ji yaad haina,Delhi Headquarters k Chief or Sunaina Deputy chief...Mere kaafi close hain wohlog...

Doctor ne turant stethoscope or thermometer etc nikaale aankhein check ki torch maarke...

Main- andha kardega kya be..

Maine uske hath se torch cheentey hue kaha..

Randy- Noo...Gussa nahi karna hai...

Main- Ye gussa thodi tha be... Frustration thi..

Randy- Woh bhi nahi..

Main- Aji haan...aisa thodi hota hai...Kyun be ??

Randy- Dawaai lele sab batTa hun..

Ab doctor ne mujhe tarah tarah ki dawaaiyaan de di..

Main- Uncle 10 seconds k checkup mein itani saari tablets kaise de di ??

Doctor- Maine bus Bukhaar and bodyaches ki di hain baaki tablets Niharika ji ne suggest ki thi..

Main- Niharika di ne ??

Randy- Yeah..Humne symptoms bataa diye they unhe pehle he...

Main- Aisa kya hua bc ??What the fuck happened??

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Update-649(Jose-1)

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Mujhe Sunaina di ne dawaai bheji ,matlab bhenchood kuch toh serious chal raha tha ,kya gand marwai hai 2.0 ne bc ..

Ab Doctor wahaan se chala gaya mujhe dawaai deke toh room mein bache main Randy Ami Chang Sunaina or Ajit ji ..

Main- Bataa be..

Randy- So Actually 2.0 ko unexpectedly jaana padda kyunki uske hathon se uska shikaar chala gaya or woh bahot bhayankar gussa tha ,bahot jyaada but kuch retaliation karne ka time nahi tha uske pass ,well time toh bahot tha but tere waapis aane kaa time horaha tha toh usne bola humein ki woh tera time nahi lena caahta kyuki tujhe urgent waapis aana tha ,woh already 3.0 se panga leke uske against jaa chuka tha toh ab woh tujhe bhi apne against nahi dekhna caahta tha issliye woh mid anger he bahot jyaada Jester leke like bahot jyaada itana ek sath kabhi nahi liya hoga jester tune itana jester leke woh forcefully bich mein chala gaya...Toh teri gand toh marrni he thi ek toh 2.0 Bich mein gaya ,dusara drugs leke Gaya woh bhi bahot saare drugs and third and most importantly woh gusse mein he waapis gaya yaani you're fucked...Ussi ne humein jaatey hue bataaya tha ki kuch din aag lagi rahegi tumhare andar toh kuch bhi karo gusse par control rakhna hai Jo keval tu he kar shakta tha issliye woh ye tere uppar chhodke gaya..

Main- Well...2.0 ne koi acha kaam kiya finally...I'm impressed...But...Again... Bhenchod meri gand kyun maarke jaatey hain ye dono ,i don't understand this...Abe full permission hai meri tumlog aao kuch bhi karo kaise bhi karo i don't care,care kya bc mujhe toh pata bhi nahi kya kartey ho tumlog ,meri bus ek he request rehti hai ki mujhe aise he chhod jaaya karo jaise suru mein tha main but nahi bhenchood harr baar they fuck me over...

Randy- Well woh unke hath mein nahi haina woh normally aake jaatey rahenge toh bhi tujhe problem honge...For example ek machine jo ek kaam ko 24 ghante mein karti hai or wahi kaam uss machine se 2 minutes mein karwaaenge toh machine ki gand toh maregi he ,same wahi situation hai tumhari..Yaani wohlog agar caahein tujhe normal chhodke jaane ki toh bhi ye possible nahi hai ,unke jaane k baad teri aisi taisi honi pakki hai.mm

Main- Yeah...Yeah..I Know...Fuckkkkk...

Randy- Relax AP...Bc 2.0 agar koi request karke gaya hai toh usko follow naa karna tujhe pata haina kitana bura hoga ..Gussa...Nahi Caahiye....

Main-Ek second ...Tune bola mujhe urgently aana tha yahaan...Kyun be ??Kya hua yahaan??

Randy- Hua nahi hai ho he Raha hai ..

Main- Kya..?

Randy- So Obviously Sanjay k last 2 pillars he bache hain obviously ek toh uski Behan Medha and dusara Andrews...Medha important nahi hai Andrews important hai , Andrews is smart , dangerous and insanely powerful...

Main- Haao pata hai mujhe ..He's equally powerful...And bahot jyaada smart hai woh...

Randy- Yes...Bahot jyaada smart...Toh obviously abhi uska number aagaya hai yahaan aane ka or ab woh pagal toh hai nahi jo seedha aake tujhse ladega no woh smart hai toh he'll fight tactically...Toh issiliye usne apna master stroke khela hai ..

Main- Konsa Master Stroke ??

Randy- Inn dono ko Jaanta hai ??

Usne mujhe do shaks ki photo dikhaatey hue kaha..

Main- Oh yeah ..Ye toh Sanjay Das ka bada bhai tha na Vasu Das???Right??. Ye Asian Underworld ka ek important part tha ..Even khudka ek chota lekin bahot jyaada dangerous Syndicate chalaata tha ye Asian Underworld mein kya naam tha uss syndicate ka ..

Randy- VJ Syndicate...

Main- Yes...VJ ... Assassins they yelog .Or Uss time par Hounds k baad sabse powerfull hired killers they yelog..Or ye Vasu unka leader tha or Master Boe k according uss time ka sabse best killer tha ye...He was smart and insanely brutal he was always two steps ahead of everybody.. Kaafi kisse chaltey hain uske naam se Asian Underworld mein ..Naam chalta hai uska bc .

Randy- Yes...

Main- Ye Sanjay gandu ko ussi ne banaaya tha warna ye Bhenchod Mumbai port par se goods churaaya karta tha chindi chor tha woh bhenchood ,Vasu ne isse apne pairon par khadda hona sikhaaya usko support Kiya pehle isko Andrews se milwaake Mumbai Underworld ki gaddi par baithaaya or fir Vilas se milwaake South dilwaya and ussi ne Sanjay ko Underworld ka businessmen banwaaya or ab Sanjay ka 50% paisa Asian Underworld k sath kiye business se aata hai toh Vasu ne Banaya Sanjay ko uske baad Sanjay ne piche muddke nahi dekha hai...Or aaj woh bhenchood pure Indian Crime World ki raaj gaddi par baitha hai keval or keval Vasu ki wajah se..

Ajit- Exactly..

Main- And Fir ekdin Vasu ko laalach aagaya or usne Hounds k contract apne under lene caahe khudko badhaane k liye Hounds k khilaaf chal raha tha woh Hounds k clients leke Jaa Raha tha woh and woh yahaan par he nahi rukka , khudko or bada karne k liye usne Hounds k 2 Managers ko maara bahot smartly but Master Norman se nahi bach paaya woh and Master Norman ne khud isko goli maari thi and Vasu ka game over kardiya tha...Aaj se 18-20 saal pehle..

Randy - Exactly..

Main- Toh tu mujhe marre hue bandey ki photo kaahe dikha raha hai..

Randy- Vasu ko nahi dikha raha tha main uske sath jo dusara banda hai usko dikha raha tha ,tu he Vasu ki kahaani sunaaney laga..

Main- Ye kon hai bc ??

Randy- Ye hai Jose..VJ Syndicate mein V se Vasu or J se Jose ..Ye Co Leader tha VJ Syndicate ka ...Or ye Andrews ka bada bhai tha..

Main- What the fuck?? Bhenchod Ye kahaan se or kaise aagaya..

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Update-650(Jose-2)
650

Randy- Yeah Jose or Vasu bachpan se he sath they dono he young age mein gharse bhaagke Mumbai aaye they jahaan se Underworld ka safar unhone ek sath tayy kiya tha ..Toh Andrews or Sanjay se pehle inn dono k bhai best friends they like brothers or ussi wajah se Andrews or Sanjay ek sath hue they..Ab obviously Vasu marr gaya but Jose ne surrender kar diya tha High Command k saamne or kai saal uska case chala or investigation mein Jose ka koi role nahi milla tha Conspiracy mein lekin VJ ko khatam kar diya gaya tha toh Jose ko yun he maarna inhumane tha issliye usko jinda chhod diya gaya tha or Jose apna saara kaala paisa ikkatha karke US bhaagne ki planning kar raha tha US k kuch apne old friends k sath millke but unhi friends ne Jose ko NewYork bulaa liya or uska Paisa khaake usse Newyork airport se he arrest karwa diya or usse NewYork State Prison mein bandh karwa diya fraud or blackmoney related bahot saare cases lagwaake and uss din se aaj takk 17-18 saal se Jose NewYork prison mein saja kaat raha tha ..Ab Andrews ki itani banti nahi hai apne bhai k sath you know siblings rivalry turned bad ..Toh Andrews apna naam bachaane k liye Jose se Durr he raha or pass rehke bhi kya karleta woh State Prison mein bandh tha toh koi ilaaj nahi tha toh Andrews ne apna naam bachaana theek samjha...Lekin ab itane saal baad uski aankhein khulli actually khulli nahi tumne khol di jab tumne Bhusan jaise bandey ko ghantey k andar maar diya or uski aadhi gang ki toh laash bhi nahi millne di uske alawa itani powerful sarkaar banaake toh tere pass unlimited powers hogayi thi tab Andrews ko samjh aagaya ki agla number ab tumse ladne ka uska hai or woh thoda backfoot par hai or Obviously Andrews ek businessmen hai like usne drugs se billions of dollars ka revenue generate kiya hai Sanjay k liye he's extremely smart ,Sanjay khud or uske baaki saare pillars millke jitana revenue generate kartey they usase double revenue Andrews ne akele diya tha Sanjay ko so as I said Andrews ek businessmen hai woh koi raah chalta gangster nahi hai or tumhe haraane k liye usse wahi banana tha he needed to be ruthless ,he needed a killer tab usse apne bade bhai ki yaad aayi ,Ab issue ye tha ki bhai ki saja mein abhi 13-14 saal or bache they but usne ab apne contact lagwaaye or apne bhai ki saja good behaviour par khatam karwaai jiske badle usne 20 Million USD diye yaani almost 180 crore Rupees...Khudse apni jeb se..

Main- What the fuckkkkkkk...

Randy- Yes ..Jose ko india laaye 10-12 din hue ab Andrews ne bahaar nikaalne k badle 2 he cheej maangi Jose se pehli tumhaara kata hua sir or dusara 180 Crore ka jo nuksaan hua hai uski bharpaai ho jaaye or dono he conditions Jose ko passand aai ,aani he thi bc woh toh marr raha tha. Bahaar aane k liye toh usne maan lee conditions or ab paise obviously woh Andrews k drugs business ko takeover karke kamaaega and dusari condition obviously..

Main- Meri khopdi kaatke puri karega...

Randy- Karni padegi... Karega thodi...Tumhara sir Bhenchod aise he rakha mill jaaega isko..

Main- Bhenchod...Jab lagta haina Sanjay se upper hand leliya hai maine or usase aage chall raha hun main tabhi Bhenchod log apni jaadui topi mein se naya khargosh nikaa laata hai bhadwa...Or abki baar toh Khargosh nahi maadarchod Sherr he nikaal laaya hai...

Ajit- Yes...I'll say this AP Jose beshak Vasu jitana dangerous nahi tha but still kam bhi nahi tha woh he was an insanely smart killer ..He was brains behind VJ he was a masterful killer ...

Main- Great...

Randy - Yes...Or rumours toh ye kehtey hain ki woh North India mein aa chuka hai or apne pair jamaane suru kar chuka hai..Even kai jagah uska jikar bhi ho chuka hai kai drug dealers ne uska jikar karna suru kar diya hai Delhi NCR mein ..Or criminals mein ek alag he lehar hai khussi ki kyunki unki najaron mein toh Jose ek crime boss he tha jo bahot jyada powerful tha ki ussi ne Sanjay or Andrews ko banaaya hai ,unhe thodi pata hai woh Underworld se tha unki aankhon mein woh ek hardcore gangster hai issliye uski harr baat maanenge wohlog uska khouff he itana hai ...

Main- Great...Fucking Great ..Yahi kasar reh gayi thi ab... Maadarchod..

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Super dhamakedar updates Bhai 💯 🔥
 

spritemathews

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Pehle toh Mack ke suicide ne sab kuch hila ke rakh diya — MOD jaisa insaan, jo kabhi haar maanta hi nahi, uska apna shikaar uske saamne khud ko maar leta hai. Us moment me laga jaise uske andar ka pura system crash ho gaya ho. Gussa, shock aur ego sab ek sath phat gaye. Uska chillana, Mack ki laash pe goliyaan chalana, fir Nysa ka “kill me, coward!” kehna — sab kuch ekdum raw aur real laga. Ye wo scene tha jahan MOD insaan bhi lag raha tha aur shaitaan bhi, dono ek sath.


Phir jab 1.0 jagta hai, toh poora vibe badal jaata hai. 2.0 ka gussa, uske drugs aur madness ke baad 1.0 ka calm tone ek relief jaisa laga, lekin andar se woh bhi toota hua tha. Randy aur team ka usko handle karna aur usko situation samjhaana ekdum professional yet emotional tha. “Control the anger” wali line ab story ka mantra lagti hai — har version of MOD ussi se lad raha hai, bas alag tareeke se.


Aur tab entry hoti hai Jose ki — bhai, kya twist nikala hai! Pehle laga koi chhoti backstory hai, lekin jab pata chala ki woh Vasu ka partner tha aur Andrews ka bhai bhi, tab samajh aaya ki game kitna bada hone wala hai. 180 crore deke bhai ko jail se nikalwana aur uske haathon MOD ka sir maangna — ye koi chhoti planning nahi thi, ye ek mastermind ka chess move tha. Ab scene set ho gaya hai — ek taraf MOD, jiska control hil gaya hai, aur dusri taraf Jose, ek purana monster jo ab phir se jungle me wapas aaya hai.
 

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Update-628(The Plan-2)
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Main- So plan simple hai main ek fighter banke wahaan jaaunga fight karunga fights k bich area scan maarunga kuch hints mille toh theek otherwise kuch or sochenge...

Ye plan simple yet brilliant tha ,Claire ne ek perfect plan bana diya tha ,Mack k village mein koi fighting tournament tha jisme bahaar se fighters aatey they 2.5 Lakh dollars ki prize money k liye ladne , ab achi baat ye thi ki unn fighters mein shamil hone k liye humein na toh koi ID card caahiye tha or naa koi sifarish bus humaare pass ek invitation card hona chahiye jisko dikhaake hum uss fighting tournament mein part le shaktey they ...Or main wahi karne waala tha yahaan iss town mein he sab fighters ikkatha hotey they or yahaan se fir Mack k log via helicopter fighters ko uppar Village mein lejaatey they toh humein yahaan bus ek fighter dhundana tha jiske pass invitation card ho...

Claire- Exactly...

Main- Great fucking Plan Claire...Ye fighters millenge kahaan lekin??

Claire- Dhundana padega boss...

Main- Koi naa chota saa town hai ek kaam karo sab faill jaao koi toh millega he ghumta firta...Fighters ko pehchan paana easy hai or bahaar k honge fighters toh yahaan k logon se alag he honge ..Toh jaao faill jaao...

Sablog nikal gaye main hotel mein he rukka ..This was insane,Claire ne godlike plan bana diya tha and I was proud of her... Jabtak wohlog kissi fighter ko dhundtey tabtak main karne laga research uss location par uss village par unn logon par ...Main Late night takk research he karta raha and finally raat 10 baje mere room ka door knock hua maine door khola toh Randy Chang Claire Snow or Ami aaye they sathmein ek aadmi ko leke aaye they Randy ne gun point kar rakhi thi uske uppar...

Randy - Get inside...Boss ye hai aapka fighter...Iske pass invitation hai...

Main- Good...Kitana paisa caahiye??

Randy- Hey..How much you want to just give your invitation to us and leave this country right now...

Aadmi- I'm a fighter... I'll fight...No guns..Hand to hand if you win you can take this invitation if I win I'll keep my invitation...

Main- 100 Thousand Dollars...Right here right now...Leave .

Aadmi- No I'll fight...

Main-Trust me you don't want to fight me...

Chang- He's right ,you don't want to fight him ,no one does...

Aadmi- I'll fight him.

Main- Bhenchod itane fighters honge iss town mein ek yahi chutiya Milla tha...Ok fine...Let's fight ..

Aadmi- Right here ??

Main- Yes..Right here ,right now...Randy gun niche kar...

Randy ne gun niche ki wohlog side hue or woh mere saamne aaya...

Main- Last chance take the money and leave .

Aadmi - No..Let's fight...

Ye bolke usne mujhe khaddey khaddey he laat maarni caahi lekin uski laat maine bichmein he pakkad lee toh usne jhatke se apni laat chhutwaai mujhse or turant he usne punch maarna caaha mujhe again uska punch maine apne left hand se pakkad liya or turant he right hand se diya uske pait mein ek bhayanak punch ,punch lagte he uske pair kaanp gaye or woh ghutano par niche girra munh se khoon thookta hua...

Aadmi- I'll take the money...

Main- Good...

Chang- Told you no one wants to fight him..

Randy- Bada aaya fighter..Ek he laga tha abhi toh..

Main- Give me the invitation card..

Ye bolke main waapis apni chair par aake baitha ..Woh finally ladkhadata hua utha or mere saamne usne woh card rakha ...Simple card tha Debit card type uspe kuch nahi likha tha bus ek QR code tha...

Aadmi- Who are you ??you hit like a monster...

Main- You don't want to know..What's the situation, how ,when to leave and what happens up there..?

Aadmi- You'll Leave day after tomorrow 5 Am in the morning from the helipad at the North of this town...Just bring this card with you ,you can take one person as your trainer with you ..No weapons strictly no weapons..

Uske baad usne wahaan ki situation bataai ,scene ye tha ki wahaan jaake fighters ko alag groups mein devide kar diya jaata hai or unki pichli reputation k hisaab se unhe fight karni padti hai jaise ye banda pichli baar Top 4 mein tha issliye isse 3 fights jeetani hai jiske baad ye Quarter Final mein jaaega woh jeetke Semi mein or woh jeetke final mein...Ab naye bando ko 2-3 fights extra ladni padti hain..But thankfully mujhe 3 fights he ladni padengi Quarter final se pehle jo badhiya tha.. Time limit hoti hai fights mein jo situation k hisaab se set ki jaati hai fight k dauraan he , kyunki sab events parson he khatam karni hai toh wohlog uske hisab se adjust kartey rahenge..

Itani information kaafi thi mere liye uske baad Randy or C usko drop karne chale gaye and dinner k time waapis aaye wohlog...Hum sab dinner k liye baithey...

Randy- Boss weird...Usne bataya ki Ye Mack jo haina bhaari obsessed hai jeetane ko leke uske fighters no doubt bhayanak badhiya hain but semis or finals mein toh wohlog alag he roop mein aa jaatey hain toh most probably steroids ya koi performance enhancement drugs deta hoga woh major fights se pehle...Quarter Finals mein 2-3 fighter uske harr baar hotey hain and pichle 7 saal mein 24 Baar ye fights ho chuki hain jisme se 23 baar ussi k log jeetey hain...Mack harr fight closely baithke dekhta or monitor karta hai kuch Village k VIPs uske sath hotey hain and kuch bahaar k VIPS bhi invited hotey hain ...

Main- Cool...

Randy - Practice karni hai ???

Main- Kiss liye bc ?

Randy- Fights k liye obviously...

Ye sunke mujhe hansi aagayi...

Randy- Arrey boss steroids k baad you know banda double powerful and double skilled ho jaata hai...Toh ..

Main- Shut up Randy...Woh 10 gunna powerful ho jaaein naa still they can't defeat me..Come on..

Randy - Arrey mujhe pata hai they can't defeat you but still thoda jaldi khatam karoge ..

Main- Aji haan ek din ki practice mein farak padta hoga...Fuck that ..

Claire- Obviously boss sooner or later Mack ko pata chal he jaaega aap kon ho toh be smart i know wohlog aapko kuch nahi kar shaktey but still befaltu risk nahi Lena...

Main - Yeah I know...Usne bola na ek Banda apne sath le jaa shaktey hain ??

Claire -Yes ..As trainer...

Main - Toh Snow mere sath jaaegi ...

Snow- Main ??

Main- Ofcourse tu ...Chooper se jaana hai toh niche ka view clear hoga pure raaste toh tu route samjh lena kahaan check posts hain kahaan snipers hain etc ...Baaki kissi k bus ka nahi hai..Aage bahot kaam aaega ye..

Claire- Boss this could be dangerous,wohlog aapko kuch nahi kar shaktey but Snow ko toh kar shaktey haina...

Main- Naa I got her covered...Don't worry..

Snow- Great...Let's go then .

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Sorry for absence. To aakhir kar plan ban gaya aur pohach gaye hai arena me ab dekhna hoga yah over confidence to nahi. Waisay 1.0 ke liye bhi yah easy hota yaha to 2.0 hai to no problem.
 
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