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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

What Should Be the Future Of the Story ?


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DEVILWANTED

only one protector of HELL, it's called DEVILWANTD
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Awesome update brother...

Matlb marte marte bhi AP 2.0 ko jhataka de gaya mack...

Ye bahut galat kiya isne, iski keemat kon chukayega...

Musa ke liye ye bahut hi khatarnak baat hone wali hai... Like AP ko satisfaction nahi milana mtlb mout ka tandav...

Jis tarah se elders se ek call par hi baat karana. It's awesome..

Fabulous update...
 

DEVILWANTED

only one protector of HELL, it's called DEVILWANTD
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Waiting for next update
 

Sushil@10

Active Member
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Update-647(MOD Outplayed?)
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Main- But tu chinta Naa kar woh din aane he nahi dunga main as I said tu bacha hai mera tujhe kuch nahi hoga...

Kartik- Thanks Bhai...

Nysa- Why do you want to kill my dad ??Unhone kya bigaada hai tumhara??

Main- Nothing honestly nothing...But issue kya haina mere sath mujhe jo task milta haina obviously woh pura hota he hai but bina death or tragedy k mere mission ko main khud pura nahi maanta aise fir duniya se mera fear kam hota hai you know.. I've built my kingdom on two things and two things only that are Fear And Death... Orr mere kingdom ka maintainance bahot high hai usko pura rakhne k liye ye sab karna padta hai you know..

Nysa- So you kill people for fun..

Main- Naa naa..Fun nahi... Satisfaction...It's not fun bahot ganda kaam hai kabhi maara hai kissi ko??Nahi naa ?Maine hajaaron logon ko maara hai toh I'll tell you by experience no koi fun nahi hai usme ..But Satisfaction yes satisfaction kutt kutt k bharra hota hai you know saamne waale ki aankhon se uski life jaatey hue dekhna apne aap mein ek nasha hai and no drugs can beat this..

Nysa- So you'll kill my dad for your satisfaction??

Main- Exactly ab samjhi naa tum..

Nysa- You know main kabhi maaf nahi karungi tumhe..

Main- Hahaha... Tumhaare only family member ko tumse cheen lunga main toh yahi expect karta hun main ...Ofcourse I know...But I don't care...

Nysa- One day when you least suspect it I'll be there ..

Kartik- Nysa it's a bad idea to threaten MOD...

Main- Naa naa ..Let her speak...Go ahead...I give you permission..

Nysa-I will have my revenge...

Main-Yahi toh caahiye mujhe...That's what I need , issiliye toh tumhe jinda chhod Raha hun main ...Trust me I'll be waiting...
Tabhi bahaar ek helicopter land hua ..

Main- Tumhare Pitaji aagaye hain..Jaldi hai marrne ki lagta hai...Randy ,guys come out..

Udhar se Randy Chang Ami or C andar aaye obviously sab sun liya tha unhone bhi and idhar se Mack andar enter hua woh bhi akela ..Nysa bhaagke usase galle milli or woh usko wahin samjhaane laga....

Randy- Kartik How are you ??

Kartik- I'm good Sir .

Randy- Ye toh expect nahi kiya tha humne...

Kartik- Oh trust me Sir maine toh bilkul bhi nahi kiya tha mujhe thodi pata tha aaplog aa jaaoge...Humein toh bus itana bataya tha ki ROW k kuch log kidnap kiye hain for information..Or humein bhejdiya protection k liye ...Humein koi idea nahi tha ki aapko task denge pata hota toh pehle he na kardetey...

Randy - I know...

Kartik- Thanks again boss meri ijjat or jindagi dono bakshne k liye..

Main- Abe fir wahi baat tu apna banda hai bhosdk tujhe kuch nahi hoga samjha .Tu moujj le aise he loyal reh apne employers k liye , jaise aaj inke liye marrne ko taiyaar tha waise apne bosses k liye humesha taiyaar rehna and nobody will be able to stop you...Koi issue hai toh come to me ,main baitha hun idhar samjha..

Kartik- I know bhai..

Randy- Yeah..Tu soch bhi nahi shakta bc Teri wajah se kitane logon ki jaan bach gayi ye Nysa or uske saare villagers khatam they...Or trust me ye aisa favour bahot kam logon k liye karta hai ..Even humaare liye bhi rarely aisa kuch karega ye..

Kartik- I know Sir issiliye toh main forever grateful rahunga..

Main- Tu aish kar be..Kya rakha hai Thankyou Sorry mein..Ye Bhenchod jaaydaad naam karne lag gaya kya be...

Randy- Marrne waala hai boss toh samjha raha hoga sab...Duniya bahot kutti cheej hai...

Main- Humse jyaada kutti thodi hogi bc..

Randy- True that...Maanana padega bosss ,kya bhayanak plan banaya hai baithey-2 ...Socha bhi nahi tha aisa toh..

Main-Ye khud fans gaya isne Snow k piche bandey bheje or main Snow ko bachaane pohanch gaya toh unhone mere uppar firing ki...

Randy- Lo karlo baat isase bada gunaah kya he hoga bhalla..

Main- Bechaare unhe khud nahi pata tha kon hai ,sniper chala raha tha main unhe toh dikha bhi nahi...

Randy- Fir bhi galati toh galati hoti hai..

Chang- Or isase badi galati kya he karenge ye..

Main- Yep..Khud toh marre he sath apne boss ki gand marwa gaye...

Randy- Exactly..

Main- Arrey bus kar be hogaya hoga emotional drama pura ..Come on aaja let's fight...Maine suna hai bahot bhayanak fighter hua karta tha tu ,hum bhi toh dekhein...

Ye sunke Mack Nysa ko chhodke aage aaya ..

Mack- First of all ye deal done hai ...Tune apni jubaan di hai or MOD ki jubaan ki keemat bahot jyaada hai ye pata hai mujhe...Toh deal ye hai ki Meri Laash or 3 hostages badle mein tu mere kissi bhi sathi ko touch takk nahi karega...

Main- Yes..

Mack- Pakka??Do I got your word ??

Main- Yes...Abe Mera word pathar ki lakeer hai..

Mack- I know ,I know...Jaanta hun main tumhe ,ache se ..Tum apni baat k pakke ho...

Main- Exactly...

Mack-or main ye bhi jaanta hun ki tumhe kitana passand hai logon ko maarna..

Main- Acha..??

Mack- Yeah..You get satisfaction from this right ??You like this ??you love killing people..

Main- I don't love it bro I just get satisfaction from it..

Mack- Saikdon logon ko tum khud apne hathon se maar chuke hoge or hajaaron logon ki moutt kaa kaaran hoge tum...

Main- True...

Mack- Or I know tumne ek baar jiska naam apni list mein daal diya usko maarne k liye tum kissi bhi hadd takk jaa shakte ho..

Main- True...

Mack- Like tumhaare shikaar ko tumse koi nahi cheen shakta..

Main- 1000%...

Mack- Or tum pagal ho jaate ho jab tumhara shikaar tumse bach jaata hai ,like you can't control yourself you get insane...

Main-Oh yeah .. Satisfaction nahi milta naa fir bahot gussa aata hai tu soch bhi nahi shakta...

Mack- Yes toh unfortunately woh satisfaction tujhe aaj bhi nahi millegi...

Main- Wait what ??

Mack- You will never kill me ,I'll die on my own terms ... You'll never get satisfaction from me ...I win... Apni baat yaad rakhna baat meri laash ki hui thi...It doesn't matter how I die...Good Bye MOD ...Go fuck yourself...

Ye Bolke usne apni jeb se pistol nikaali or bina ek second hichkichaaye usne khudki khopdi mein goli maar lee...

Main- Nooooooo...

Mera thobda wahin k wahin khulla reh gaya ..He played me...He fucking Played me....Noo...No...no...no...Fuck No...No...Mera shikaar tha ye ...Nooo... Fuckkkkkkk.kkkk...No no no...Ye nahi ho shakta... I'll kill him..

Continued...
Awesome update and nice story
 

Avaran

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Lets Review Start
To Last Review Shayad Goergia Town Se Pending Raha Hain Issilye Wahi Se Shuru Karte Hain

Mack Ki Drugs wali Chaaal AP Ne aakhir Padak Hi Liya .AP Ko Dokha De Kese Sakta Hain , AP Ko Dokha Dena MATLAB Mout Ko Invite ,Me To wahi Samajh Gaya Thaa Mack To Giyo .

wo Security Guards wala Banda Acha Thaa , chahe AP Ki Kitna Hi Brutul Ho Lekin Ache Logo Ke Sath Wo Hamedha Acha Hi Rehta Hain , Yahi Baat To Mujhe AP Ki Sabse Achi Lagti Hain .

Then action Sequence Ki Baat me Kya Karu Mujhe Nahi Lagta ki Iske Bare Me Kuch Keh Sakta Hu ,AP bhai ne Likha Hain Hamesha Top Notch Hi Rehta Hain, AP BHAI se Jyada Details Me Fight Kam Hi Log Likhte . Wo To Ye Opponent Halke Thee 2.0 Ke liye warna ye Fight Details me Aur Jati Khair Adhiktar Fight 1.0 Ki Jyada Details Me Rehti Kyuki Wo slow Hain Issilye opponent Ko Bidhne Me Dikat Aati Hain

sabse Jaldi Fight 3.0 Ki Khatam Hoti Hain .

if Agar fight Ki Baat Karu Mujhe Hamesha 2.0 No one Par Rahega .

Sath Hi Kyuki Ye Georgia Town League headquarters Ke Similar Hain Issilye hame Town Ke Bare Me samjhne Jyada pareshani Nahi huwi , Jo Jo Town Me ghatna Ghati Wo hame league Me Jesa Hota Wesa Hi Laga .Like League Town Dimag Me Image Bani Hain wo Image Georgia Towns me Kaam aaye Hain .

Then snow Ko Pehle Bhagana Ka Idea Todha Back Fire Kiya Lekin AP 2.0 Waha Jakaar Situation Sahi SHAMBHAL li Warna snow Ke Sath Durghatna Jyada Bhi Hojati

lekin Yaha AP Jab Snow Ke Sath bach Raha Thaa Isme mack Chumtiya ke Sniper ne Galti Ki inko AP Ke Aane Par waha Se Bhag Jana Thaa lekin In Chumtiyo ki Ek Galti Ne AP Ka aage Kam Easy Kiya .

Well Sab as Expected Chal Raha Then Mere according Ju Ne Yaha Readers Ko Curiosity Me Daal Diya Ki Harayana Me AP Ki Jarurat Hain Lekin Waha Kya Huwa Hoga ,

Kya Ju Ne Din Pehle Poll Diya Thaa Ki Kya Story Ka Part End Hona Chahiye sanjay Chapter ka Ya Continus Chalne Do Well Mujhe Yahi LAG Raha Haryana Me AP vs sanjay Ka Plan Hi Kiye Ho

Mere According Kyuki 1.0 Ne desh Me Sarkaar bhi Li Isse AP Powerful bhi Huwa aur Sanjay ke Itne Log Marne se Sanjay Samjh Gaya Ki AP Se Aise Chele Bhej Nahi Fight Kiya Ja Sakta Issilye Shayad Sanjay Ab Apne Pure Soldiers Andrew aur Megha ke sath Fight Karne Aayega .

Well Kuch bhi Hosakta Ye Possibility Hain , ye Bhi chance ki Drugs hi Aaye Ho Fir Se lekin Norman Ki Ghabrat bata Rahi Thee Matter bada Hain .

Then Kartik Ki Baat Kare
yaha Ek Bande Bachane Ke Liye Game Me Se Loophole Nikal Diya AP Ne Rules me Se Hi , well Yaha Abhi kartik Ka Future AP ke Hath me hain .

Jiss Bhi Readers ko kartik ko Lekar confusion Hain
wo update 305 - 320 Ke Bich Merchant Of Dekhna Usme Mil Jayega Kartik Prison me

Yaha Mack chumtiye Ki Ek Harkat Lashe Bichwayegi , 2.0 ka Brutal Satisfaction Dekha Thaa Yaha Shayad Mack Ki Ye Harkat Pura Kar De kyuki 2.0 ke Satisfaction Wale Arc mera Hamedha Se Favorite Hain Aaj Bhi wo Sara Ne AP Ko Kidnapp Update kiya Tab Ke Update Yaad Haib Jisme Boe ne Bhi Permission Di Thee

Yaha Kya Hoga Mack Ke Iss Suicide Se
Kyuki Shikar 2.0 ka Hain , Nysa Ko Ab Maar Nahi Sakta Kyuki Wo Promise Diya, Kartik Ko Maar Nahi Sakta Kyuki wo Acha Dost Hain AP Ka Badi Vikat Samsya Hain Iss Samay .
Shayad ye 2.0 ka Anger Harayana Me Jakar Nahi Fatte Kyuki Noway yaha Todhe Bahut Satisfaction Ke Liye Koi acha Hain Jisko Maar Ke 2.0 Blood lust Shant kare .

Kahi Hame Wo Purana Pagal 2.0 Nahi Dekhne Ko Mile Jo dushman Dekhe Na Dost

Me To kehta Hu Randy Waigraa Bhag Jaye Kyuki Ye AP Ka Purana Avatar lag Raha Mujhe
The og Merchant Of Death who Only Loves satisfaction

Yaha Mera Thought Hain ki Nysa Maregi Aur AP Vs Elder Me Fir Kuch Situation Bhi Hosakta Hain

Overall Updates Hamesha Ki Tarah Shandaar Bhai .
Eagerly Waiting

AP 316 Bhai Ab To 200 update Se Jyada Hogaye bagair Index ke
Ju kisi mod Ko bolkar Index Banawa Do Sarkaar
 
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