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Fantasy Werewolf

Kiya is story mein incest add kiya jaye


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Abhishek Kumar98

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Update 6…….





Ek admi phone par kisi ko bol raha hota hai…. Boss abh hum aur investigate nhi kar skte hai. Police ane wali hai.


Sahmne se admi tumhe pata v hai wo suitcase mein jo cheez thi kitni important thi. Chalo abh vapis a jayo aur us lrdke ko pakrd kr mere pass lekar ayo aur pta lagao kon hai jisne hamko dokha dia hai………


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Jab subah construction site par workers pahunche toh unho ne waha par 4 bodies dekhi jinko bhut buri tarike se mara gya tha. Sabne sabse pehla police ko phone lageya.


Ek jawan police wale ne apne superior se pucha sir kiya lgta hai apko.


Superior mujhe lgta hai jaha koi gang war hoi hai. Is khali parde suitcase ko dekh kar lag raha hai jaha koi deal hone wali thi jo nhi ho payi. Aur transporter is khali suitcase ko v ise hi shord gya. Usually gangs transport ke leye nye young lrdko ka use krti hai par jis trah se in logo ko mara gya hai lg nhi raha ke je kisi young lrdke ka kam ho skta hai.


Tabhi ik ladki boli kya pata transporter koi altered ho. Dead bodies ko dekh kar toh jhi lag raha hai ke je kisi altered insaan ka kaam hai.


Jab superior aur young police wale ne murd kar dekha toh paeya uske shmne ek middle aged lardki khrdi hai. Jis ne tight fiting ki uniform pehni hai aur uski uniform pr lage batch ko dekh kar unhe je pata chl gya ke je special force mein se hai jo altered ke layi banayi gyi hai.


Tabhi superior bola tum jahan kiya kar rhe hoo.

Abhi je sabit nhi hua hai ke altered case hai.


Tabhi superior ki nazr us lardki ke sath khrde ek aur handsome aur middle aged man par pardi jiski uniform par uska name Rajeev Singh likha huya tha. Superior ko use dekh kar ek ajjeb sa dar laga kyuke uske expression bhut cold the aur wo inte berehm trike se mare gyi bodies ko aisa dekh raha tha jaise je koi aam baat ho.


Tabhi wo lardki jiska naam shilpa tha wo voli. Koi niya admi v je dekh kar bol skta hai je kisi altered ka hi kaam hai.


Shilpa:- Mr. Akash abh hum si case ki investigation ko smbale ge… mujhe umeed hai ki aap hamari isme puri madad kren ge.


Aur superior ka jawab sune bina hi shipla vrd gyi dead bodies ki taraf aur lag gyi saboot ikatha krne.


Tabhi young police wala superior se bola sir kya je white rose force hai jo altered ke lye banayi gyi hai.


Haan je bhi hai aur tum unse uljna mat……. Woh koi nrml insaan nhi wo dono khud v altered hi hai.


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Sabhi altered ache nhi hote kyi un powers ka istemal crime krne mein v krte hai aur aam police wale guns ke sath v un altered ka sahmna nhi kar skte hai.


Tabhi government ne ek alag force banayi jinme altered ka sahmna krne ke lye altered ko hi bharti kiya gya.


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Chlo abh chlte hai sahil ki taraf……sahil apne bed pr leta hota hai……. Ke use kuch ajjeeb sa scent ata hai. Sahil kutte ke tarah use soongne lgta hai aur pahunch jata hai fridge ke pass. Sahil ko fridge khol kar raaw meat milta hai aur sahil use utha kar kacha hi khane lgta hai ke. Uske pische se joyti uchi awaz mein bolti hai je kya kar rhe ho tum sahil. Je abhi kacha hai.


Sahil ko jaise hi joyti ki awaz atu hai woh vese hi meat dowara fridge mein rakh kar bnd kr deta hai.


Sahil:- woh mein bss dekh raha tha.



Joyti:- pta v hai je mom le kar ayi thi aur woh je raat ko dinner mein banane wali hai. Pta v hai vese v hme kbhi kabar hi meat khane ko milta hai.


Joyti ki awaz sun kar uski mom bhar a kr tum dono subah subah kyu lardh rhe hoo.


Joyti :- mom je sahil meat ko kacha hi khane wala tha.


Mom:- koi baat nhi beta.


Joyti :- lekin iske hath toh dekho kithe gande hai usne meat ko v ganda kar diya hai.


Sahil bolta hai sorry mein nya le ayon ga aur bathroom ki tarf chl deta hai.


Bathroom mein jakar jab sahil khud ko mirror mein dekhta hai usko apni body vese hi lgti hai jaise pehle thi. Par jab sahil apne hath dekhta hai toh pta nhi kaise uska hath apne aap muh mein chla jata hai jis se usne meat ko touch kiya tha…… par sahil ko woh bhut taste lgta hai…. Sahil apna hath muh se niklta hai aur nha kar bahr a kar breakfast karne beth jata hai.


Tabhi sahil ki mom use hamburger deti hai. Jas sahil hamburger kha leta hai toh use notification milti hai.


[28g/2kg meat consumed]


Sahil toh is hamburger mein 28 g hi meat tha tab kiya hoga jab mein 2kilo pura kha loonga aur mission complete hoga.


Par meat mehnga bhut milta hai. Par mere pass 50 hazar hai…. Par je paise uski family ke bhut kaam ayenge. Sahil je sab soch hi rah hota hai ke. Use tv oar news sun ne ko milti hai.


Ke raat ko phir altered ne kisi ko mar dia… hme 4 dead bodies mili hai aur blood sample se pata chala hai ke wahan 5 nhi 6 log majood the. Par 6th person abhi v missing hai police use doond rhi hai. Agge agar koi v is par news mile gi toh hum apko bta denge.


Je sun kar hi sahil ki fat jati hai ke abh police v mere pische pard gyi hai….


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Milte hai next update mein……
Bahut jabardast update bhai new characters ache Lage kafi powerful bhi hai aur ab dheere dheere Hero ki bhookh meat khane ke liye badh rahi hai aur special police altered force bhi hero ke piche hai
 
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Update 7………



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Sahil ajj bhut hi dheere chalte huye school ja raha tha. Uske dimag mein bss news aur raka hi chal rhe the. Aur sahil is baat ka dhiyan v rakh raha tha ke kahin uske pische underdog gang ke log toh nhi a rhe hai.


Underdog gang ke leye wo suitcase bhut important hai agar wo us suitcase ke sama ke leye itni berehmi se un logo ko mar skte hai toh mera hal kaisa krenge. Aur upr se wahan per unknown blood mila hai. Aur woh mera hi hoga kyuke mere chaku laga tha. Mein toh bura fas gya hoon.


Tabhi sahil kisi lardki ki cheekh se bahr aeya.


Sahil ne idr udr dekhya aur peya ke je awaz uske paas wali gali se hi a rhi hai. Jab sahil us gali ki tarah gya toh usne dekha char lardke ne ek lardki ko ger rakha hai aur unme se ek ne lardki ko diwar ke against pin kar rakha hai.


Sahil ka praadosh itna v acha nhi tha. Par aisa din mein kabhi kabar hi hota tha. Lagta hai ajj aisa hi din hai.


Sahil ne sabse pehle je hi socha ke kyu na woh jaha se baagh jaye. Kyuke uske sahmne char lardke the aur sahil unke muqable chhota tha aur woh unse lardhne ke v kabil nhi tha. Agar meine unhe rokne ki kohsis v ki mujhe lgta hai woh mujhe peetne ke ilava mar v sakte hai. Jo din mein ek lardki ke sath aisa krne ki himmet rakhte hai jarur unke pass koi hatiyar v hoga.


Charoo lardke lardki ko sabki nazro se door kisi sunsaan se apartment ke pische gali mein le gye. Par jab sahil ne chupke se us lardki ko dekhna chaha toh usne paeya ke je lardki ki uniform uski uniform ke jaisi hi hai.


Lahnat hai mujh par mein is lardki ki madad nhi kar skta hoon. Kyu na mein inhe je bolon ki mein underdog gang ka hisa hoon aur je is lardki ko choordh de.


Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta meri umer ko dekh kar hi veh je jaan jayein ge ki mein sirf ek transporter hoon aur mere jaise transporter ke lye koi gang ek gang se fight nhi kre gi.


Kash je lrdki nhi lardka hota toh mein ise aise chhoord kar chala jata par je lardki hai mein kya karoon.


Tabhi sahil ke dimag mein ata hai ki agr is lardki ki jagah uski behn hoti toh wo kiya krta. Is lardki ka v koi bhai hoga jo bhut pchtaye ga ke woh apni bhen ko bacha kyu nhi saka. Iske maa baap ka kiya hoga.


Phir sahil ne socha kyu na veh hala kare aur logo ko jor jor se bol kr bataye ki jahan kiya ho raha hai par dusre hi pal uske dimag mein aeya ke log kyu apni jaan jokhim mein dalenge kyuke unhe pata tha gangs ko agar koi rokta hai toh wo sab ko mar dete hai.



vaikalpik roop se vah police ko bulaane kee koshish kar sakta tha, lekin underdog mein usne jo kuchh seekha tha, vah yah tha ki police aise maamlon par dheere-dheere pratikriya karti hai, na keval isilie ki ve kam karmachaaree the, balki isilie bhi ki uchch adhikaariyon ko hafta diya jata tha, yah sunishchit karane ke lie pratikriya samay se deree ho. jab tak ve vaastav mein yahaan pahunchenge, tab tak ve log jo bhee yojana bana rahe the, vah tab tak ho chuka hoga.



Sahil ne socha, aisa lagta hai ki mujhe khud hee iski madad krni pardi gi.


jaise hee sahil ne lardki ki madad karne phaisala kiya, uske saamne ek notification screen dikhaee dee.



[new quest received ]



[lardki ko bachao!]



[apne aakalan kiya hai ki koi any vikalp nahi hain aur aap keval ek hee hain jis par vah bharosa kar sakti hai, kya aap vaastav mein ab usse munh modane ja rahe hain? apke lie apne nae skills dikhaane ka sahi samay aa gaya hai!]



nae skills? yah sahi hai, main ab badal gaya hoon! ... theek hai, kam se kam mujhe lagta hai ki main altered hoon. mere paas super healing hai aur ... aur ... achchhee drshti? aree, system, main unhe un cheejon se kaise hara sakta hoon ?! kya tum chaahte ho ki main unke leye ek punching bag ke roop mein kaam karoon?


Mujhe choordh do………


Lardki ki yee awaaz sahil ko sunayi di.


Mere paass vakt bhut kam hai mujhe kuch karna hoga. Aur sahil ke kadam apne aap chal parde gali ki taraf.


Jab sahil unke pass pahuncha toh usne dekha ke je colour gang ke log hai


Colour gang v ek underdog jaisa hi gang hai. Meine je pehle notice kyu nhi kiya.


koi aashchary nahi ki ve din ke ujaale mein itne besharmi se kaam karne mein saksham the. Colour giroh mein vishvavidyaalay ke chhaatr, ya high skool ke chhaatr the, unme se kuchh bade mukhy girohon ke sath v kaam karte the, lekin sahil ke gyaan ke lie, underdog mein koi v colour giroh ka kam nhi karta hai, jo raahat kee baat thee .



"bache, ham apna kam kar rahe hain, to kyon na tum yahaan se chale jayo.


Sahil ne school uniform ko dekha aur pushti ki ke vah aur lardki vaastav mein ek hee school mein pardhte hain. Vese toh sahil maujooda sthiti se bachne ka bahaana dhoondh raha tha, lekin phir usne lardki kee aankhon mein phir se dar dekha. usne bhee sahil ki bahan ke jaisa hee hairstyle rakha tha, bas uske baal kaale the. yah dekh uske andar bhut gussa paida ho raha tha.


Yeh chaar hai, adhik se adhik kiya ho jayega mujhe mar denge, lekin yah chhura ghompe jane se jyaada chot nahi lagne wali, hai na? Sahil ne khud ko samajhaane kee koshish kee. khud ko sthiti ke lie tiyar karte hue, vah ek fighting postion mein kharda ho gaya jaisa ki kirk ne use dikhaaya tha.



ve log hasi ke thahaake lagaane lage.



"oh, aisa lagta hai ki kamse lardhne koi knight aeya hai." Toh theek hai" ek lardke ne aage badhte hue kaha.




Sahil ruka aur uskne lardke ke pair ki ungaliyon par dhyaan kendrit kiya. Aur usnke yaad kiya ke kaise Krik ne use lardhna shikheya tha.


abhi nahi, vah abhi bhi kaafi door hai mujhse.


Jaise hi woh lardke sahil ke kareeb aeya sahil ne furti dikhate huye ek tez punch us admi ko mara. Par us lardke ne varde aram se sahil ke punch ko dodge kar diya aur uska hath pakard liya.


Lardka:- tumhe kiya laga tum jaisa ek nosikhiya mujhe muka mar sakta hai. Agar aisa hamare sath hone lage toh hum woh nhi kr pate ho hum pehle kar rhe the.


Phir us lardke ne sahil ko hath se khicha aur ek muka mara sahil ke ser par. Muke ke lage hi sahil neche gir gya. Lardke ne phir v sahil ko nhi choorda aur uske pet ke apna ghutna de mara.


Jaise hi lardke ka ghutna sahil ko laga usse saans nhi aa rhi hai.


Mein galat tha je toh chaku lagne se v jyda dard de raha hai.


Jaise hi in dono ki lardayi ke karn baki teen lardko ka diyan v bhatka. Toh lardki ne is muke ka faida uthate huye jis lardke ne uska muh band kar rakha tha uske hath ko jor se kaat diya. Aur ek lat mari lardke ke lund par.


Lardke ko iski ummed nhi thi is achanak huye hamle ke karn lardke ke hath se lardki shooot gyi. Aur lardka dard se kahrahta huya apne main point par hath rakh ke neeche gir gya. lardki ko je moka sahi laga aur bagh gyi.


Tabhi unme se ek lardka gusse se bola dekha bache tumhari wajah se woh lardki baagh gyi. Abh use pakrdne ke leye hume phir se mehnat krni parde gi. Bache abh toh tu gya….. Dekhna abh hum tera kiya haal karte hai.


Sahil apne ghutno ke bal neeche betha dard se kahrah raha tha uske pet se lekar ghutno tak dard ki lehr faili hoi thi ke tabhi uske sahmne ek aur notification screen khuli.


[quest completed]


[40 exp rewarded]


Lardki bagh gyi aur mujhe 40 exp point mile hai. Par mujhe lagta nhi hai eska koi faida hai mujhe lag raha hai ke aaj je log mujhe maar denge.


Tabhi woh lardka jiske main point par lardki ne laat mari thi woh utha jo abhi tak kuch theek mehsoos lar raha tha aur pahunch gya sahil ke paas aur ek jordar laat mari sahil ke face pe.


Tabhi dusra lardka bola arre tum use mar doge chhooord do ise hum lardki ko pakrdte hai.


Neeche parda sahil soch raha tha ke kiya mein jeene ke layek hoon.


Aur ek aur laat pardi sahil ke pet pe


Agar mein jagah nhi hota toh wo kiya karte lardki ke saath.


Jaise hi sahil ke dimag mein je vichar aeya uska gussa badh ne laga.


[BMP 85]


Ek aur laat pardi sahil ke pet pe aur ek lhoon ka fuwara nikla sahil ke muh se.


Kiya agr meri behn us lrdki ki jagah hoti.


[BMP 120]



[BMP 125]


Lardka sahil ko ek aur laat marne hi wala tha ke sahil ne uski laat pakrd li aur tordh di.


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Lardki jitni tez baagh skti thi utni teez bagh rhi thi aur uske sath mein do police wale v the.


Ji haan police wale darsal baat kuch aisi thi ke jaise hi lardki apne aap ko chuurda kar baghi toh usne madad ke lye idr udr dekhne lgi aur bhut dur jakar use do police wale mile.


Jaise lardki aur police wale wahan pahunche toh ohno ne dekha ke charoo lardke admari halat mein neeche zammeen par gire huye hai. Aur ek ki toh laat bhut bure tarike se tut chuki hai.


Jahan kiya huya..? Kiya je usi lardke ka kam hai jiske varw mein tum bol rhi thi..? Ek police wale ne lardki se poocha.


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Milte gai agle update mein……….
Bahut jabardast update bhai bahut acha kaam kiya hero ne us ladki ko bacha liya aur shuruaat me jarur pit gaya hero but baad me kya dhulai Kari sabki maja aa gaya ladki bhi achi thi jo police ko lekar aa gayi nahi toh usi jagah koi aur ladki hoti toh aise musibat se nikalne ke baad dubara nahi aati hero ko bachane
 
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Update 8………..




Jab sahil ne apne class mein pervesh krne ke leye darwaja khola, toh veh je dekhkar heran reh gya ke abhi tak class mein koi student nhi aeya tha. Jab sahil ne time dekha toh paeya ke abhi classes shuru hone mein 15 minutes ka samay hai.


Kiya kaise, mein toh bhut dhere chal raha tha aur upr se mein eoh ghatna mein fas gya tha.


Sahil ke hath abhi v kaanp rhe the. Ussee samaj nhi a rha tha te uske sath abhi thorde samay pehle huya kiya..? Abhi kucch der pehle woh lardko se fight kar raha tha. Aur kuch hi der vaad woh school ki taraf bagh raha tha.


Phir v mein itni jaldi kaise pahunch sakta hoon…… mein kitni teez bagh raha tha…?


Sahil ne apni seat par ja kar apna bag rakh diya aur beth kar intezar krne laga apne dost vishav ka.


Areee tum ajj mere se v pehel kaise a gye….? Aisa toh kabhi nhi huya ke tum……… school mein jldi a jayo, yeh baat vishav ne class mein ate huye sahil se kahi.


Yeh tumhare kaprdo ko kiya huya…? Tum kaha se aa rhe ho tumhre kaprde v gande hai aur upr se tum ajj kuch lag v alag rhe hoo, vishav ne tipni krte huyee sahil se yeh baat khi.


Tumne mujh par diyan dia iske lye apka shukriya.


Sahil apne mn mein kaash je sab pehle jaisa ho jaye. Bss abh ek school hi hai jahan woh aram se jee skta hai jahan use apne dusre jeevan ke bare mein chinta karne ki jarurat nhi hoti.


Halanaki, sahil ke sharer mein ho rhe badlavon ke karn abh use apni dohri zindagi ko alag rakhna kathin lag rhaa tha.


Apni soch se bahar akar sahil ne vishav se pucha…….. Vishav tum toh games aur kitabe pardte rehte ho. Kiya tumhe werewolf ke vare mein kuch pata hai…..?


Yeh sawal sunte hi vishav ke chehre pe ek halki muskan phail gyi.


Oh, mujhe toh lagta tha ke tumhari in sab chezon mein koi ruchi nhi hai. Par abh tum aisa sawal mat puchna ke je batao Werewolf or vampires mein sabse jyda takatvar kon hai.


Sahil:- nhi nhi vampires nhi mujhe bas werewolfs ke vare mein hi jankari chaheye. Ke veh karte kiya hai. Aur tumhe toh pata hi hai mein internet chalane mein itna acha nhi hoon.


Vishav ke leye yeh ek ajeeb baat thi ke sahil in ajeeb cheezon mein achanak kaise dilchaspi lene laga. Kyuke abhi kuch din pehle sahil tennis player ke varre mein comic pardh raha tha aur wo ek professional tennis player banna chahta tha.


Vishav :- acha theek hai toh suno. Yeh un cheezon par v nirbhar hai ke aap jankari kaha se parapt kar rhe hai. Chandi ki bullets, jaduyi plants, bites aur bhut kuch isi traha ki cheeze samne ati hai par yeh sab harek book aur internet par alag alag jankari milti hai.


Haan par ek cheez sab mein common hai aur woh hai full moon. Purnima ki raat. Kehte hai ke purnima ki raat ko ek Werewolf sabse jyda takatvar hota hai. Aur agar woh khud par apna kaboo nhi rakh pata hai toh woh apne doston ko bhi kaha sakta hai.



Yeh sab sun kar sahil ek gehri chinta mein doob giya aur uski haath ki hateliyan parseene se beegh gyi.


Sahil ke aisa dekh kar vishav ne poocha kiya tum theek toh ho na…?


Sahil ne socha ke usse kiya bata dena chaheye vishav ko is ke vare mein. Par sahil abhi v puri tarah clear nhi tha ke veh ek altered hai v ja nhi. Halanki agar veh vishav ko apne vare mein sab bataye toh veh je jaan sakta tha ki veh altered ban gya hai.


Kiya veh vishav ko suitcase ke vare mein v bata de. Aur ke woh ek gang mein shamil ho gya hai. Nhi nhi mein use je sab nhi bata sakta…….. Is se uspar v asar parde ga agar meine use is sab mein shamil kar liya toh kahin underdog gang uske sath v kuch na kar de. Je problem meri hai aur ise mein hi theek karoon ga.


Ek var phir darwaja khula aur adhiyaapak class mein enter huya. Sabhi bache akar apne apne bench par beth gye.


Aur teacher ke peeche ek aur sakhs chalte huye class mein enter huyi.


Uske lambhe kalle ghane baal the. Aur woh class ke sahmne a kar khardi ho gyi.


Jis pal sahil ne us lardki ko dekha.


Use dekh sahil ka dil dhardkane laga. Sahil ka dil itni tez dhardak raha tha ke use uski awaaz v ane lagi thi.


[BPM is increasing]



[BPM 140]


[BPM 145]


Lardki ko ghurte huye use kuch awaz sunai di. Jab sahil ne neeche dekha toh paeya ke usne desk ko vrdi jor se pakard rakha tha. Sahil ki majboot pakard ke karn desh tutne v laga tha aur uske anguthe ke nakhoon vardh gye the aur lakrdi mein guse huye the.


Aree nhi yeh phhir se ho raha hai mere sath. Aur sahil ghabrane laga jiske karn uska dil aur tezz dhardkna shuru ho gya.


[BPM 150]


Yeh system mujhe preshan kar raha hai


[BPM 155]


Sahil ne apne aap ko shant karne ke vare mein socha. Usne apni akhein band ki aur lmbhi lamhi saanse shuru kar diya. Usne apne dimag se sab kuch nikal dia.


Ek sadhu ki tarah kuch mat socho aur jhi baat sahil ek mantr ki tarah apne man mein dorahta raha.


Hello everybody….


Apni mithi awaaz se us lardki ne sari class ka dhiyan apni tarf kendrit kar liya


Mera naam Harsimran Kaur Bawa hai. Aap sabhi se milkar acha laga. Mein hali mein is city mein ayi hoon. Mujhe umeed hai ki aap sab meri madad krenge aur mein bhut utsuk hoon aap sabhi ke sath agge vardhne ke leye.


Tabhi ek chaatr "Bawa" kiya je mayor ki beti toh nhi hai.


Aree haan ho skata hai je usi ki beti ho. Sunne mein aeya hai ke veh bhut acha bakti hai logo ko naye mayor se bhut ummeden hai.


Yeh sab battein sun kar harsimran thorda peeche hat gyi aur uska chehra thorda laal pard gya.


Sabhi chaattr aps mein battein krne lag gya.


Tabhi teacher uche savar mein bola. Kiya abh sabhi chup karoge. Is se koi fark nhi pardta ki veh mayor ki beti hai. Mein aap sab se je asha karta hoon ki aap ise v sirf ek chaatr ki tarah hi vevhaar krenge.



Harsimran ko ek khirdki ke paas ki seat par teacher ne bitha dia akele. Simran ek mayor ki beti hai isse toh sabhi ka dhiyan us par tha hi lekin harsimran itni sunder thi ke sabhi lardke usi ko hi dhiyan se dekh rhe the.


Jab se simran class mein ayi thi sahil ki usse nazar nhi hat rhi thi. Sahil var var simran ko hi dekh raha tha. Aur jab v woh use dekhta uske dil ki dhardkan vardhne lagti.


Sahil apne aap ko bss shant rakh raha tha.


Sahil ko dekh kar vishav bola tu use kutte ki tarah kyu ghoor raha hai ve.


Vishav ko bolta dekh teacher bola vishav tum claas mein chup nhi beth sake……. Kiya. Toh tumhari jhi saja hai ke tum ajj harsimran ko pura school dikhayo ge.


Sabhi classes khatam hone ke vad vishav ne sahil se poocha kiya tum chalo ge mere sath simran ko school dikhane..?


Nhi mein nhi chalunga mujhe ek kaam hai. Mein jaldi mein hoon. Aur ise pehle vishav Sahil se kuch keh pata sahil ke apna bag uthaeya aur chal diya.


Jldi se niklne ke peeche ek karn tha ke sahil jab v us lardki ko dekhta tha uske dil ki dhardkan vardhne lagti thi agar use lardki ke itne paaas aur baat krne ki mile gi toh uska kiya hi hoga.


Aur dusra karn tha underdog gang. Abhi toh gang ko uske ghar ke varw mein kuch pata nhi tha kyuke usnrme adress hi galat diya tha sab veh gang mein shamil huya tha. Lekin aisa toh nhi tha ke veh pata nhi laga sakte hai. Isi liye sahil school mein ek bande se milna chahta tha jisne isko gang mein shamil kiya tha.


Sahil ko jata dekh vishav ko ajeeb laga… par jab uski nazar neeche bench par gyi toh usne dekha


Yeh… yeh bench ko kiya huya je tut kaise gya aur is par haath aur ungliyon ke nishan je koi insaan nhi kr sakta hai….. Inti takat kisi insaaan mein nhi ho sakti hai….



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Milte hai agle update mein……….

Bahut jabardast update bhai lagta hai ye wahi ladki hai aur itni sunder hai ki Hero ke dil ki dhadkan badh jati hai aur usne kya halat kardi hai Desk ki ab Vishav ko shak ho jayega aur dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
 

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Bahut jabardast update bhai new characters ache Lage kafi powerful bhi hai aur ab dheere dheere Hero ki bhookh meat khane ke liye badh rahi hai aur special police altered force bhi hero ke piche hai
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Yeh dekhte hue ki suitcase mein jo kuchh bhee tha, vah sahil ko ek parivartit( altered) mein badalne mein saksham tha, underdog ko ab tak uski talaash mein hona chaahie. haalaanki, abhi tak sahil ne gang ke kisi bhee sadasy ko school ke pravesh dvaar par uski prateeksha karte nahi dekha, vah keval yah maan sakta tha ki Karn ne unhne abhi tak soochit nahi kiya tha, sayed kisi v karan se.



Yah din ka ant tha, isilye sahil ko pata tha ki Karn kahaan hoga. Unke school mein sabhi ko kuchh extracurricular activities mein bhaag lena jaruri tha. Kyuke activity mein baagh lene se manah karna asambhav tha, isliye Karn ne kisi tarah se teachers ko ek jyotish club banane ke lie kaha tha. Aur achi kismat se, vah club ka ekmatar sadasy tha, jiske leye use school mein chuti ke vad v rukna pardta tha.


Chhat kee or jaane vaale daravaajon ko kholte hue, sahil ne karn ko balcony mein khade hokar skool ke maidaan kee or dekhate hue dekha. uske baal jo thorde vaddhe the woh hava nein udh rhe the.


Yeh aisa tha jaise karn photoshoot ke lie poj de raha ho. Aur isme koi doraye nhi hai ke veh modeling mein jaa nhi sakta hai. Aur karn tha v handsome ke koi v lardki uspar mar mite.


"Karn," sahil ne karn ko pukaaravah. Sahil varde dhiyan se idr udar dekhte huye kkarn ke pass gya ke kahin gang ke aur log toh nhi hai ass pass. Yadi yah kisi prakaar ka jaal nikla to vah bhaagne ke lie taiyaar ho gaya. "mujhe aapke saath baat karni hai."



Sahil kee harkaton ko dekhkar, karn ne apne hasi ko dabaane ki koshish ki, jiske karan sahil ko aashchary hua.



Karn:-"tumnhe chinta karne ki jarurat nhi hai, underdog gang nhi jaanta ki tum yahaan ho." "mujhe yakeen tha ki tum mere paas aaoge aur tum sahi samay par aye ho."


Karn:- "tumne vaastav mein kafi hangaama kiya hai. mujhe pata tha ki tum paise kamane ke lie betaab ho, mere hisab se underdog gang tumhe acha paisa v deti hai. maine jo suna hai usse tum kafi saksham aur vishvas wale transpoter maane jaate ho, to mujhe je batsyo dusri side ne tumhe kitne paise dye hai.


Sahil:- "aisa nahi hai!!!" mein kisi v dusri gang se paise nhi leye hai.


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Sahil apne man mein…… ( nhi mein karn ko jo kuch v waha huya nhi bata sakta hoon. Aur vese v koi us baat ka zakeen nhi kre ga.)


Karn:- "haan, tum sahi hi bol rhe ho, mujhe kabhi bhi nhi laga ke tum double cross kar sakte hoo. Vese v tum apni bhen Joyti aur maa ki bhut fikar karte hoo.


Apni maa aur bhen ka zikar hote hi sahil ka dil jor-jor se dhadkane laga.


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Kuch maheene pahle sahil ke ghar kee sthiti aur bhi kharaab ho gyi thi. usne dekha tha ki gahr par bhut sare letters a rhe hau, aur use sandeh hone laga tha ki uski maa apni muskaan ke peechhe ek bada dard chhipa rahi hai.


Madad karne ke lie betaab, sahil ko paise kamaane ka raasta khojne kee jaroorat thee, sahil ek school mein jata tha jo 10+2 tak hi tha uske paaa koi v degree nhi thi na hi koi skill jiski wajah se use nokri mil nhi sakti thi aur shote mote kamo mein itna paisa v nhi tha.


Aise hi ek din sahil kaam ke baare mein sochte huye ja raha tha ke veh ek chhaatr ke paas se gujra. Toh sahil ne dekha ki usne gold ki ghardi aur gold ki moti chain gale mein dal rakhi hai. Aur uske kprde v bhut mehnge aur branded lag rhe the. Sahil ne socha ke…… isne jitne paiso ki cheezze pehni hai……. Agar uske ghar ki sare kaprde v mila deye jayen tab v kam hi honge.


Sahil ko pata tha ke is lardke ka naam karn hai kyuke jis ilake mein sahil rehta tha waha par kuch gine chune hi ameer log the.


Jo b ho lekin karn sahil se kuch jyda varda v nhi tha umer mein. Lekin uske pass paisa bhut tha jo uske rehn sehn ko dekh kar pata chlta tha.



Sahil apne parivar ki madad karna chahta tha toh ek din veh karn ke pass pahunch gya. Sahil ne dekha ki lunch break chl rhi hai aur karn sabse peecha betha hai aur khirdki se bahr ghoor raha hai.


Usne dekha ke karn kuch kha nhi raha hai bss bahr hi dekh raha hai. Aur koi v uske ass pass nhi betha a woh ekala hi betha tha. Sahil uske pasa gya aur pass se hi ek khali chair utha ke uske sahmne beth gya.


Sahil:- kiya tumhe koi problem toh nhi hai agr mein tumhare pass beth jayon.


Sahil ko pata tha ke students karn ko ingnore karte hai. Kyuke veh lardayi jaggrda karta rehta tha aur je afwaah v the ke karn bure kaam karke paise kamata hai. Lekin je cheez sahil ko karn ke pasa jane se nhi rok saki.


Sahil:- mein tumse je janne aeya hoon ke mein paise kaise kama sakta hoon.


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Aaageee ke baagh ke leye milte hai agle update mein……….
Kafi intresting character hai ye Karn chalo bura rasta hi sahi usne hero ki madad toh kari
 

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Update 9 B……….



Karn mein jahan tumse yeh janne aeya hoon ke mein tumhari tarah paise kaise kama sakta hoon. Haan mein janta hoon hum ek dusre ko jante nhi hai. Aur na hi muje je pata hai tum kiya kaam karte hoo ja tumhare mata pita ameer hai. Bss mujhe paise kamane hai air uske lye mujhe agar tumhare leye kahan lana hoga mein woh v layon ga. Mujhe koi fark nhi pardta bss mujhe paise chaheye.

Jab karn ne sahil ki baaton ko suna toh use laga ke je lardke ke mn pakka hai. Je paise kamane ke liye agar keh raha hai je kuch kare ga. Toh je kare ga hi kyuke iski akhon mein determination dikh rhi hai. Par dekhte hai ke yeh determination iske andr kitni der tak rehti hai.

Phir sahil ko pata chala ke karn kiya kaam karta hai. Aur phir karn ne sahil ko underdog gang se introduce karwaeya. Aur sahil unka transpoter ban gya.

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Tum aram se kharde ho sakte hoo sahil. Meine kuch v nhi bateya hai underdog gang ko tumhare bare mein. Par woh tumhe dhoondh bhut garamjoshi se rhe hai. Pata nhi tumhe unse kiya cheez chura li hai. Par vese v abh woh cheez lotane mein bhut der ho gyi hai. Mujhe lagta hai tumhe woh bhut torture v karenge aur kiya pata mar v de.

Sahil ko je sab pehle se hi pata tha jo larn ne usse bola tha par abh karn ke muh se sun kar use aur v tension ho rhi thi….. Kyuke je bhut serious baat thi….. Uska toh woh jo karna hai krenge hi par uski family use v woh kuch na kuch kar sakte hai.

Lekin sochne ki baat je v hai ke karn ne abhu tak underdog gang ko inform kyu nhi kiya hai. Kiya je mujse kuch chahta hai. Kyuke hum itne v ache dost nhi hai aur itna v hamre mein kuch nhi hai ke karn ko meri fiker ho.

Itna kiya soch rhe ho tum sahil. Jhi toh nhi ke meine unhe kyu nhi bateya toh sunu. Mein khud underdog gang ko chhordna chahta hoon. Aur tumhe toh pata hai hi ke us gang ko chhoordna kitna mushkil hai. Upar se mein unke gang ke vare mein janta v bhut kuch hoon.

Par je namumkin nhi hai ke ho na sake mere paas ek plan hai jisse hum khud ko protect kar sakte hai aur gang ko chhordh v sakte hai.

Sahil ko samj nhi a raha tha ke woh iska kiya jawwab de. Sahil koi v clue nhi tha ke woh agge kre ga kiya upr se underdog gang ka dar or abh karn ka je plan.

Acha toh batayo kiya plan hai tumhara karn. Kaise kro ge tum je sab…?

Sahil dekho hum kisi aur varde gang mein toh ja nhi sakte kyuke underdog gang unhe paise de kar hame kabje mein le legi toh. Hamare pass ek hi option hai ke hum apna hi khud ka ek gang bna le aur tum bano ke mere bafadar kutte.

Karn ke muh se khud me leye kutta shabd sun ke sahil ko bhut gussa aeya. Par woh apna gussa pee gya kyuke je sahi time nhi tha gussa karne ka. Underdog gang toh pehle hi uske peeche pardi huyi hai agr woh karn ke upr gussa krta hai kahi woh underdog gang ko bata na de aur uska kaam tamam ho jaye.

Mein gang ko karn ke is plan ke vare mein bata kat v nhi bach sakta hoon mujhe toh woh mare ge aur ise v mar denge.

Apni soch se bahr atte sahil ne karn ko bola. Kaise je kaise possible hai khud ki ek gang banana aur hme log follow kyu karenge vese hi kitne log toh underdog gang aur colour gang mein shamil hai. Hamare sath kon dega.

Aree sahil jara apne aaspaas dekhi hum kaha khrde hai kitna varda school hai je hume aram se transporter mil jayen ge school se hi. Aur mere pass hai kuch log jo bhut mahir hai strong hai aur lardhne ke leye tiyar hai aur je mere upar hai mein unhe kaisa chalata hoon aur usne kaise kaam nikalta hoon.

Bass der hai kaam shuru karne ki sab acha giya toh hamara v ek varda gang hoga aur koi v dusra gang hamse direct panga nhi lega. Toh kiya kehte ho tum doge mere sath.

Mere pass or koi rasta v nhi hai. Acha theek hai mein hoon tumhare sath. Par tumhe promise krna parde ga ke tum mere vare mein aur mere privar ke vare ke underdog gang ko nhi batayo ge.

Jarur, mein tumse promise karta hoon aur karn ne sahil se hath mileya.


Tabhi sahil ko ek notification mili.

[ deal ho gyi hai. Par kiya tum karn par apna mark lagna chahte ho.]


Par je nhi bateya gya tha kaisa mark or je kiya kre ga. Sahil ne system se is vare mein poocha par utne bakt mein hi karn ne apna hath hata liya. Aur message gayeb ho gya.

Aur karn chal parda ground ki or. Sahil ne v ground mein jane ki sochi kyuke use v extracurricular activity par dhiyan dena tha.

Jaise hi sahil gya…. Karn…. Ke pass ek lardki ayi jo chupi hoi thi.

Karn:- toh je wohi lardka hai jiske vare mein tum bol rhi thi jisne tumhe subah colour gang se bacheya tha..?

Lardki:- haan je vahi hai. Isne hi unko mara tha aur unki halat dekh kar lag raha tha veh abh hospital se mahina bhar nhi niklne bale.

Je sun mar karn ke chehre par ek vardi c smile a gyi.

Lagta yeh sal bhut hi acha jaye ga…….



Milte hai next update mein agge ki kahani lekar……
Bahut jabardast update bhai toh mayor ki ladki HarSimran alag hai aur ye ladki Karn ke sath hai aur acha plan hai Karn un badi gangs se bachne ka dekhte hai kaise hota hai ye sab
 

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Update 10…………





Sahil jab karn se baat karke ground mein aeya toh woh ek jagah kahrda ho kar sochne laga. Karn se hoi baat ke karan sahil ka mood itna acha nhi tha.


Aree kiya tum theek ho……. Vishav ne sahil ke pass kar usse poocha. Mujhe nhi pata tum kahan gye the lekin abh tumhe apne aap ko shant karna hoga kyuke hume bulane hi wale hai rugby 🏉 practice ke leye.


Dono dost baki bacho ke pass jaker bench pa beth jate hai… aur sunne lagte hai apne PT teacher ka lecture.


Lekin sahil ka teacher ke bolne par bilkul dhiyan nhi tha woh tih baass uske aur karn ke vich huyi deal ke vare mein hi soch raha tha.


Sahil ko je pata nhi chala ke kab karn ne baat karte bakt uski jeb mein burner phone dal dia. Burner phone ek normal….. Buttons wala phone hota hai you nrmly gangs use karti hai ek durse se baat krne ke leye. Karn ne usko niya phone v dia aur jisme sim v thi…. Jiska no. abhi tak sahil ko v nhi pata tha


Mujhe nhi pata ke kab ur akise usne je meri pocket mein dal dia.


Mujhe iske vare mein tab pata chala jab meri jaab mein kuch vibrate huya. Jab mein check kiya toh veh phone tha jispar message tha.


[je tumhara niya phone hai aur tum iska no. Kisi ko v maat dena. Aur koi v tumse kaam hoga mein tumhe is se contact karu ga isi leye ise hamesha charge hi rakhna.]


Toh karn mujhe apne bafadar kutte ki tarah hi mane ga.


Sahil koi is baat se gussa ana shuru ho gya…. Parantu usne khud ko niyantrit kiya aur sochne laga ke kyu usne gang ko join kiya hai.


Apne privar ke leye.


Muje kuch der ke leye karn jaise woh chahta hai vese hi karna hoga. Mujhe underdog gang se khud ko aur apne parivar ko safe rkhna hai. Koi baat nhi mein kuch vajt ke leye je sab bardast kar longa mere privar ki suraksha ka sawal hai.


Tabhi sahil ke kano mein PT sir ki oochi awaaaz pardi tumhara diyan kider hai bache. Jise se sahil apni soch se bhar aeya.


SIR fir bole lagta hai tum sab bacho ko motivation ki jarurat hai.


Toh sir ne whistle bajayi aur lardkiya ko group playground mein aeya aur ground mein bane benches par beth gya.


Sahil ne dekha ke un girls ke beech jo ajj nayi lardki ayi hai simran woh v hai.


Tu kabh tak us lardki ko gurta rhe ga sahil…. Vishav bola.


Sahil ne simran se apni nazren hateya aur lambhi lambhi sanse lena shuru kar diya…. Kyuke uske dil ki dhardkan bhut tez ho gyi thi aur….. Sahil ke pent mein uska lund v kharda hone laga tha….. Par sahil ne khud ko cntrol kiya.


Vishav bola sahil tumhe pata hai jab mein simran ko school ghuma raha tha toh usne bateya ke usko v video games khelna bhut psand hai… aur usne je v bateya ke… woh martial arts ki training v le rhi hai aur us se v achi baat usee v tumhari tarah altered fights dekhna bhut pasnd hai……. Tumhari uske saath achi bane gi…..toh kyu tum usse baat karo kiya pata woh tumse paat jaye.


Par sahil ne is baat par koi reaction nhi diya…. Uska pura dhiyan khud ko shaant karne mein tha.


Jab Vishav ne je dekha toh usne fir se poocha tum theek toh ho na sahil…. Subah v tum ajjeeb dikh rhe the aur…. Tum werewolf ke vare mein v pooch rhe the… agr koi baat hai toh tum mujhe bata sakte hoo mein tumhari madad kar sakta hoon.



Nhi mein theek hoon abh vishav….. Koi baat nhi hai.


Tabhi phir se sir ki awwaz ayi….. Toh abh toh hamare pass dekhne ke leye darshak v hai… aur mujhe pata tum mein se kuch toh jarur in lardkiyo ko impress karne ki kohsish karo ge aur apna pura zor laga do ge. Chalo phir shuru karte hai.



Pischli var ki tarah is var v rohit ko ball pakrd kar bhagna tha aur baki bacho ko use defend karna tha. Sir ke kehne par tin tin karke lrdke ayenge aur rohit se ball chiin ne ki kohsish kare ge.


Ajj v vesa hi huya jitne v groups gye koi v rohit se ball nhi le paeya. Last mein bache sahil vishav aur ek aur lardka. Tino lardke agge gaye….. Par sahil ne apna dhiyan sahmne rohit par hi rakha uska dil toh kar raha tha simran ko dekhne ka par use dar tha ke agar uski heartbeat phir se tez ho gyi aur woh transform ho gya toh… bhut varda panga ho jaye ga.


Tabhi sahil ke kano mein lardki ki awaz pardi vesw toh v dur kharda tha par jab se use system mila hai… woh abh dur ka v sun sakta tha.


Ek lardki woli simran toh tumhe in lardko mein se konsa pasnd aeya hai……ek mayor ki lardki hone ke karn bhut si lardkia simran se dosti karna chahti thi.


Tabhi ek aur lardki boli…. Simran…. Mujhe pata hai… tumhe rohit hi pasnd aeya hoga… aur vese v jo sahmne tin lardke kahrde hai unmein se do toh altered fights hi dkehte rehnte hai pata nhi kiya milta hai inko lardyi jaghrda dekh kar.


Simran:- mujhe v altered fights bhut pasnd hai aur rhi rohit ki baat toh woh acha hai uski body v kafi lean hai aur woh vardi furti se move v karta hai. Par in sabhi lardko ke romantically kisi mein v interested nhi hoon. Haan agr inmein se koi mujhe martial arts mein hara de shaed phir mein dekhongi.


Simran ka aisa jawab us lardki ki bolti band kar deta hai…. Par woh lardki boldi hai… aree wo altered fights achi hoti hai hehehehe…


Kitni fake hai je lardkian…. Simran apne mn mein sochti hai… tabhi mein apne dad se bol rhi thi ke kisi ko v je mat pata lagne dena ki mein mayor ki beti hoon.


Sahil je sab sun raha tha….. Aur simran ki boli last line ke agar muje koi fight mein hara de toh mein uske vare mein sochungi.


Sahil ke face par ek smile a gyi.


Agar meine rohit ko ajj hara diya toh ise pata chale ga ke mein strong hoon aur ho skta hai simran mere mein intrest v lena chalu kar de.


[quest received]



[tumharu umer ka har lardka sirf doo cheezon ke vare mein hi sochta hai ek paisa aur dusra lardki. Toh use dikha do abh ke kon hai alpha male]


[task: rohit se ball lo]



[reward 10 exp]


Sahil ne sahmne achanak aise quest ane ke karn woh thorda distract ho gya tha. Par sir ki wistel ke chalte woh v chokana ho gya.


Rohit ne baghna shuru kiya….. Aur woh bhut asani se vishav ko paar kar giya kyuke vishav ne use rokne ki koi khaas kohsish v nhi ki. Aur dusre lardke ko v rohit ne asani se dodgekar diya…. Us lardke ne kohsish toh vishav se jyd aki thi lekin rohit jaise athlete ke leye je asaan hi tha.


Abh bacha hamara hero sahil… jo khud ko…… motivate kar rha tha is ke leye.


[BPM 130]



[BPM 135]


[BPM 140]


Sahil ne v apni heartbeat ko kabbo karne ki bilkuo v kohsish nhi ki…. Aur…. Dord lga di rohit ki taraf…sahil…. Ini tez gati se bagha tha ki uske per ke neche se ghaass v ukhard gyi.


Jab rohit ne sahil ko khud ki tarf itni tez ate dekha use samj a gya ke aabh uske paas ek hi rasta hai ke woh spin ( roll) kare.


Mein pehle se bhut tezz hoon sahil ne khud ko aur cheerup kiya…… mein abh is rohit ko hara kar hi rahunga.


Jaise hi rohit spin karne ko huya sahil uske sahme pahunch gya aur uska kanda rohit ke kande par laga….. Aur rohit ke haath se baal hawa mein choot gyi aur woh khud peeche udta huya gir gya….. Sahil ne kisi ache player ki tarah hawa mein udhti baal ko pakrd liya.


Yes…… yess… yess…… mein ball pakrd li.


Tabhi shil ke kano mein whistle ki awwaz goonji….. Bhut acha sahil ise kehte hai perfect tackle tum team mein selected ho.


Apni ankho ke kone se sahil ne lardkio ki tarf dekhne ke vare mein socha….jab usne un oar dhiyan dia toh usne sune ke kuch lardkian toh uske vare mein bhura bhala bol rhi hai kyuke usne unke piyare rohit ko chotil kar diya. Par sahil ne sab ko ignore kiya aur apna dhiyan simran par le gya…… par simran ne expression normal the usne baas itna hi bola ke…..lardke ne acha kiya.


Sahil ke le abh ke leye je norml sa comment v sahi tha.


Tuh je werewolf thing itni v bekar nhi hai agar mein ise ache se use karna seekh loon.


[agli poornima mein abhi 13 din bache hai]


Koi baat nhi jitna jaldi ho utna hi acha hai.



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Milte hai next update mein…….
Bahut jabardast update bhai Simran ko impress karne ke liye hi sahi but hero ne apan task Rohit se ball chinne ka pura kar liya aur kuch had tak normal hi sahi comment thik thak kar diya hero ke liye saari ladkiyon se alag hai Simran
 

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[quest pura huya]

[10 exp prapt huyi]

"Adbhut prdarshan! kya aap sabane dekha ?!" PT Teacher Sahil ke prdarshan se khush najar aa rahe the. "pichhale hafte vah apni gaand par leta niche parda tha, aur ab usne Rohit ko hara diya."

Sahil bhi apne pardarshan se parbhaavit tha, aisa kuchh uske lie pehle kar pana asambhav hota. Haalaanki Rohit ke momevent aur speed ko follow karna Sahil ke leye bhut mushkil tha. Prantu uske pass system hone ki wajah se je kar pana aassaan ho gya.

"Tum team mein hoo aur pehle match mein khel rahe ho, PT teacher chillaaye.

Sahil, ek pal ke lie bhool gaya ki uske saath kya hua tha, achaanak usne dekha ki Rohit abhee bhee jameen par tha aur veh jaldee se uski madad krne ke leye uske paass aaya.

Sahil: mein maaafi chahta hoon Rohit tum theek toh ho na tumhe kahin chot toh nhi lagi.

(sahil ko dar tha ke kahin usne rohit ki kucch haddiyan toh nhi tord di……kuke woh abhi v aapni shakti ko control karna seekh raha tha.)

Rohit: nahi mein theek hoon.

(rohit ne dekh ke sahil ka dhiyan uski tarag nahi hai,balki woh toh peesche lardkiyon taraf dekh raha hai.)

Rohit: lagta hai sir ka motivaton ka tareeka tumhe bhut pasand aeya.

Tabhi sir ki awwaz phir se ayi lardko chalo sab saman uthayo jahan se aur sports rrom mein rakh kar ayo.

Vishav v in helpers mein ek tha….jab usne sahil dowara pakrdi ball ko uthakar dekhya toh paeya ki baal puncture ho gyii hai aur usper hath ke panch nakhun ke vich mein ghusne ke nishaan bane huye hai.

Akhir Sahil tum mujse chupa kiya rahe ho….pehle class ka bench aur abh je rugby ball. Tumne apne sath kuch toh kiya hai jo tum mujhe apne vare mein bata nhi rahe ho. Aisa ko toh kabhhi nahi huya ke tum mujhse battein chupayo.

Jab Vishav ne sahil ki aur dekha toh paeya ke sabhi use team mein shamil hone ke le shubkamnaye de rahe the.

Ghar jate vakt sahil ke face par ek smile thi. Vese itna v bura din nhi tha ajj mera. Tabhi sahil ko yaad aeya ke abhi musibten kam nhi huyi hain.
Agr meri heartbeat bhut jayda vardh gyi toh kiya mein fully transform ho jayonga . kiya hoga jab mera pura wolf ban jayoonga kiya mere v sharer par baal a jayenge. Lekin woh kiya baat thi mark wali jab mein karn se hath mila raha tha.

Iske vare mein sochte hi sahil ke sahmne screen par mark ke vare mein jankari a gyi.

[ bond mark]


[agar tum je mark uspar lagate ho jisse tum koi del ja promise karte ho toh unme se ek alag kisam ka scent aeya ga jis se tum us inssan ko track kar sakte ho. Aur agar koi je promise tordta hai toh usper se mark hat jaye ga.]

[aur jo mark torde ga woh hamara agla shikar ban jaye ga.]

[aur unka shikar karne ke vaad vaad tumhe system inaam v dega]


Oh shit……meine karn par mark lagane ka moka hath se jane diya.

Toh kiya je mark invisible hga jise sirf mein hi dekh sakta hoon aur dusri baat jo mark tordega use mujhe hunt karna hoga. Toh kiya iska matlab mujhe unhe marna parde ga……?

Bhure pehlu ko side par rakh kar sahil ne ache pehlu par dhiyan dena theek samja. Aur usne socha ke kaise usne rohit se baal ko chheen liya.

Us task ko pura karne ke lye mujhe 10 exp mili aur aun lardko ko jinhe meine subah hareya tha usse mujhe 40 exp matlb total huyi 50 exp . Toh kiya hoga jab meri exp 100 ho jaye gi . kiya mein aur powerfull ho jayunga ja mujhe koi new skill mile gi.

Isi sab ke bare mein sochte huye sahil ke dimag mein 2 kg meat khane ka quest v yaad a gya aur dusra gym jane wala.

Toh sahil chal parda gym ki taraf. Gym mein jate hi usne dekha ke sabi log uski tarf dekh rhe hia kyuke woh abhi v school uniform mein hi tha…. Jis se unhe pata lag raha tha ke mein ek nosikhiya hoon aur je mera pehla din hai gym ka. Meine gym mein ek din ka trail lena ka socha.

Abh mein karon kiya aise hi koi v weight utha loon… aur je system ne mujhe abhi tak kuch kaha kyu nhi karne ko. Sahil confused sa hokar gym mein parde equipments ko dekh hi raha tha ke ek trainer uske pass chlta huya aeya.

Hi mein hoon personal trainer aur tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai ke tum naye ho… chalo mein tumhari madad karta hoon tumhara pehla din hai toh je free hai.

Chalo mein tumhe guide karta hoon ke konsse equipment kis kaam ate hai. Aur pehle tumhara weight aur body fat check karte hai phir mein tumhara diet plan v bana donga.

Trainer ne sahil ko kuch bolne nhi diya aur use weight machine par chardah diya.

Sahil apne mn mein je personal trainer toh salesman se v bhure hote hai. Mein toh jahan aeya tha ke mein apna karunga aur kar ke chalta banu ga. Pta nhi mein is trainer ki batton mein kaise a gya.

Sahil ka weight check karne ke baad trainer use….. Bench press machine ki taraf le gya. Sahil ne dekha ke upar pehle se weight parda huya hai. Par trainer ne uspaer aur weight dala aur bench par let kar barbell ko push karna shuru kiya aur sath sath mein sahil ko je v batane laga ke kaise karna hai.

Je mujhe sach mein sikhna hi chahta hai ja… bss mere shamne show off kar raha hai kyuke mein ek nya lardka hoon.

Trainer ruka aur usne sahil ko ek bar try karne ke leye bola aur khud pesche ja kar kharda ho gya support ke leye.

Mein kabhi pehle gym nhi aeya mujhe toh itna v nhi pata hai ke mein kitna weight utha v sakta hoon.

Tranier apne man mein je lardka lagta hai meri body aur muscles dekh kar impress nhi huya hai. Lgta hai ise pata hi nhi hai ke aisi body baname mein kitni mehnant lagti hai mein rod se bajan kam nhi karunga jab je ise utha nhi paye ga toh ise pata chale ga.

Sahil v kuch nhi bola aur late gya bench press ke bench par. Sahil ne jaisa trainer ne bola tha pura vaise hi starting position le li.

Je bacha ki starting postion toh bhut sahi a…… ise dekh kar koi bol nhi sakta hai ke je iska pehli var hai trainer be sahil ki starting postion ko dekh kar socha.

Phir sahil ne apna jor lageya aur rack se rod ko tight pakrdte huye bajan utha liya. Sahil ko pehle toh bajan kafi bhari laga.

[BPM 100]


[BPM 110]

[BPM 120]


[ apki takat vardh rahi hai.]

Aur sahil ne varde amram se perfect position mein rod ko apni chest ke pass aleya aur phir upar push kar diya. Aur rod ko reck par rakh diya. Aur apne mathe se parsena pahunch kar bench se uth khrda huya.

Kiya meine acha kaam kiya…?

Trainer sahil ko aisa karte dekh heran tha…. Ek nya lardka jiski umer v kuch jyda nhi hai usne pehli var mein hi 80 kg bajan utha liya… woh v itni asaani se.

Tabhi sahil ko notification ayi.

[ tumne pehli var bajan uthaeya hai.]


[ mein tumhe ajj ke leye tumhara je quest complete man leti hoon. Lekin abh tumhe yaad se roz workout karna hoga ta ke tum body werewolf ke leye fit rhe.]

[ daily quest competed.]


[ 10 exp rewarded.]

Waah mujhe laga tha ke mujhe jyda der workout karna parde ga. Par je toh acha hai aur sahil gym se nikal gya apne trainer ko heran chhoordh kar.

Je jaan kar ke system uske harek quest( task or mission) ko pura karne ke leye exp deta hai toh usne socha mere pass paise toh hai hi kyu na ajj 2kg meat khane ka quest v pura kiya jaye. Woh chal parda meat ki shop par. Aur 2 kg meat lekar chal parda apne ghar ki taraf.

Par ek baat use…. Khaye ja rhi thi ke jab woh shop par tha toh meat ko dekh kar use kuch ho raha tha uska dil kar raha tha ke wo je sara meat kacha hi kha jaye lekin usne khud par cntrol kiya aur jaldi se meat lekar niklna hi sahi samja.

Chalte chalte sahil ruk gya.

Mein itna sara meat ghar leja kar khud cook karke nhi lha sakta hoon mom ko lage ga ki mein raksash ho jo akel hi itna meat kha raha hoon. Aur agr ohnu ne pucha ki mere pass itne paise kaha se aye phir mein unhe kiya jawab dunga.

Plastic bag mein rakha meat sahil dekh pa rah tha… uske muh mein pani a raha tha… use lag raha tha jaise uska khoon ubal raha hai meat ki scent se hi. Sahil ne phir apne ass pass dekha toh use koi nazar nhi aeya. Toh woh ek gali mein ghus gya aur ik khali buliding mein pahunch gya.

Jaise hi woh kahli buliding mein pahuncha sahil ko pata hi nhi chala ke kab uske hathon ke nakhon varde ho gye aur uske palastic bag ko cheer diya.

Sahil ko samjate der nhi lagi ke werewolf ne uspar kabja kar liya hai. Usne kache meat ka ek varda sa tukrda utheya aur apne dandton se vardi asani se use cheer kar khane laga. Jab sara meat woh kha gya.

Toh use notification mili.

[ Daily quest completed]


[10 exp received]

Jaise ke ham karte hi hai…. Sahil ne apni shirt ki sleeves se apna muh saaf kiya. Aur uski sleeve lhoon s bhar gyi.

Meine kabhi v kisi altered ko aisa karte nhi suna hai na dekh hai par mere sath hi aisa kyu ho raha hai. Kiya mein koi monster ban gya hoon.

Aur sahil chal parda apne gahr ki taraf apne man mein aise bhure bechar leye. Par jaise hi woh apne gahr ke gande surroundings ko dekhta hai toh use yaad ata hai woh je kyu kar raha hai.

Acha toh je system agar game ke jaisa hi hai toh… mujhe apne aap ko jaldi hi level up karna hoga..jitna mera level hoga mein utna hi aur itni jaldi powerfull banuga. Par problem yeeh hai ke paise kahan se ayen ge itne.

Tabhi sahil ne apna phone nikala aur message type karne laga.

[mein underdog gang ke paas vapis nhi ja sakta hoon toh kiya tum mujhe paise de sakte ho. Aur mein uske badle tumhare liye kaam kroonga.]

Je text message sahil ne karn ko bhej diya. Aur sahmne se karn ka v reply a gya.

[mujhe aaaj raat ko school ke gate ke pasa milna aur haaan akele hi aana.]





Milte hai next update mein.
Bahut jabardast update bhai Rohit se ball cheen kar use reward Mila aur fir gym me bhi aur ab meat khane par bhi bahut sahi kar raha hai hero ab dekhte hai raat me kya hota hai Karn paise dene ke badle hero se kya karwata hai
 

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School khatam hote hi vishav chal parda apne ghar ki tara. Par ajj pehli var woh akela chal kar apne ghar ja raha tha. Kyuki hamesha sahil uske sath hi jata tha. Vishav pne dost ke leye chintit tha je baat usee khaaye jaaa rhi thi ke kuch toh hai jo sahil kuch ajjeb bartaab kar raha hai.

Pehle class ka bench, phir ajj rohit ko dur udah kar ball cheen lena , aur rugby ball mein daansee sahil ke nakhun. Kiya…….sach mein sahil ek werewolf ban gya hai.

Vishav pehla hi tha jo apne ghar pahunha tha kyuki uske parents scientists the aur woh dusre shehar kaam karne jate the. Jiske karn unke ghar ka khrach acha chal raha tha. Aur jab v kaam ke batt uske parents ghar atte the toh veh bhut thake hote the.

Vishu isileye apni pardhayi par jyda dhiyan deta tha kyuki veh apne mata pita ki tarah ek companay mein employee ki tarah kaam nhi karna chahta tha uska sapna thaa ki uski ek vardi c mansion ho aur bhut sari lardkiyan uske ass paass rhe. woh v sahil ki tarah ek altered ban nee ke sapne dekhta tha. Kyuki woh v shanoshokat se jeena chahta tha.

Par kuch battein thi jo vishu mein sahil se alag thi. Vishu hamesha uptodate rehta tha koi v nayi khoj ja technology ho vishu uske vre mein pardta tha aur jankari rakhta tha. Apne mata pita ki tarah hi usme dimag ki koi kami nhi thi. Ager koi v aisi khabar ati thi ke vigiyaniko koi nayi hadiyan(fossils) zameen ke neeche se mili hai toh woh us khbar ki teh tak jakar puri jaaan kari nikalta tha.

Apne kamre mein enter karte hi vishu apne oc ke sahmne ja kar beth gya jisee usnee khud apne hatho se built kiya tha. Uske desk par ek se jayda screen thi. Vishu ne apna pc on kiya aur uski ungliyan chalne lagi keyboard par.

Agar sahil sach mein hi werewolf ban gya hai toh jaab pura chaand nikle ga toh woh khud par se kaaboo kho dega, aur je bhut khatrnakh sabit ho sakta hai uski maa, bhen, aur sahed mere leye v.

Vishu ke dimag mein je atte hi use pata tha ke use kiya search karna hai.

“Werewolf ko kese mara jaye”

Jaise hi usne je search kiya uske sahmne bhut sare information a gyi jaia ki hum search karte hai ati hai. Kisime likha tha ke werewolf hote hi nhi hai, kisime likha tha ke je ek supernatural jeev hote hai, toh kisime je likha tha ke werewolf ek dog ke jaisa hi altered jeeb hota hai jise marne mein kutte se jyda mehnat karne pardti hai.

Vishu ko woh nhi mila jo woh dhoondh raha tha toh usne socha kyu na woh pehle check kare ek vaar ke sahil sach mein werewolf hai ja nhi. Toh usne apna drawer khola jisme pure chandi ka locket parda huya tha. Kyuke use je jaankari parapat huyi thi ke chandi se werewolf ko chot pahunchayi ja sakti hai.

Kuch der aur research karne ke vaad use ek aur jaankari mili ke werewolf chocolate ko digest nhi kar pata hai. Use je idea bhut acha laga kyuke je woh hi safe rasta tha test karne ka aur use pata v chal jaye ga ke sahil werewolf hai v ja nhi. Toh usne turant apna dusra daraaj dekha jisme woh chocolate rakhta tha prantu uski futi kismat chocolate v khatam ho chuki thi.

Kyu na mein bahr ja kar dukan se chocolate le ayun. Par problem je thi k raat ho chuki thi aur raat ko gunde mawali ja raaj chalt tha. Lekin phir v vishu ne himmet ki aur chal parda dukan ki taraf.

Dukan ki taraf jate kismat se vishu ko koi gangs ke log nazar nhi aye. Par jaise hi woh dukan ke pass pahuncha use waha kuch lardke kharde dikhe jo daru aur cigarette pi rahe the aur un sabji ke paas bikes v thi.

Jaise unke pass se gujarte huye vishu ki nazar unmein se ek lardke se mili toh woh lakda bola mujhe is tarah kiya dekh rhe ho agar tumne mujhe aisa dekha toh mein tumara muh tordh doonga.

Vishu ne unko ignore kiya apni nazre neeche ki aur tezi se dukan ke andar chala gya jahan usne bhut sari chocolate kharidi aur fat fat waha se chal parda.

Kuch dur chalte hi vishuek gali se guzar raha tha jo bhut sunsan thi aur kuch hi lights chal rhi thi. Abhi woh thorda darta huya agge vardh hi raha tha ke uske sahmne ek bike akar khardi ho gyi.

Meine bola tha na tum mujhe aise ghoor nhi sakte ho bache abh tumhari kher nhi. Sahmne kharde latrdke ne bike se utarte huye bola aur baki uske sathi kuch hi dur kharde dekh rhe the .



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Kahi ye Vishu hero ko maarne ki toh nahi soch Raha hai ab fas gaya bechara
 
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