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Update 117 | November 28th 11:30 PM |
Update 118 | December 4th 11:30 PM |
Update 119 | December 8th 11:30 PM |
Update 120 | December 12th 11:30 PM |
Update 121 | December 17th 11:30 PM |
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UPDATE# | DATE |
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Update 117 | November 28th 11:30 PM |
Update 118 | December 4th 11:30 PM |
Update 119 | December 8th 11:30 PM |
Update 120 | December 12th 11:30 PM |
Update 121 | December 17th 11:30 PM |
Bhai ye kya bakchodi kri h yr?
Mood hi khrab kr dia Sara?
Urvi ko kyu mara?
And akash kha h bc?
Ab story me bss yr rhe ga ki arav kese bhar atta h prison se and urvi ko I think ek bar exiler de kr jinda kr dia jae ga and story ends?
Bss
What the actual Fuck ????
I don't have fucking words to describe the emotions I am feeling right now
Well sirf ek question hai kia Urvi bach jaye gi ????
it was the best update of the whole story till now
Dhamaka Wo bhi jor ka Udhar yu jung ki sister ke death ho gyi idhar Aarav ki sister ki bhi death ho gyi aur archana ne hi Dhokha diya Mujhe Suru se hi lag rha tha jo bahur pyar dikhata hai wo aksar dhokha deta hai Vansh ne bhi koi kasar nhi chhodi aur ye kaun si nyi jagah hai Kanha Aarav pahunch gya hai shayad ye second Arc hoga story ka Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota Hai Kis kis Memory se Aarav gayab nhi hua hoga shayad uska pack hoga Is Arc se aarav aur bhi shaktishali hoga Arav ko CWD ki three drops de di gyi Unka effect Aarav par kya hoga Ye bhi dekhne Wali Baat hogi Aarav ne yu jung Luna urf second Alpha ki Power di hai kya bhavishy me kya hota hai agle arc me dekhte hain
It's shocking update
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Best update Hain bhai...but urvi....next arc ka besabri se intezaar rahega bhai...kon Kia kehta hai pata nahin..but I think you are the best writer...keep it up...
Bhai ek request hai ho sake pori karna story main ap english words bahut zada use kar rahe ho jiske wajah kafi chize saaf nhi ho pa Rahi or na he padhne main maza aa raha hai ho sake tho Kam use Karo![]()
Bhai update ke baare me kya hi khu ek dam! Bhai lekin aap ne abhi Tak ye nhi bataya ki akash aur arav ka kya connection hai ye samaj me nhi lekin ho sakta hai ki aage aane Wale update me mile.
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Areee bhai ye kya tha kaise itna sab soch liye bhai har ek 1 fight ek dusre se jude huwe
Yoo Jung ne bhi apni sister
To bhai pack hoga ki khtam kya sare pack member bhi aarav ke shat infinte Prison mein honge pata nahi I think ab hoga kya inki ma dimag ka dahi krdiya
Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting
DAAAAMN !!!!!
I can say this is the best update ever delivered by you. story jab start hui thi to lag rha tha k thk hai werewolf ne is forum system genre introduce krwaya hai to sabhi ab isi k pichey bhagne lag gaye hai. even I had heard about this story from Werewolf's thread. but now i admit you're a fucking genius, the way you wrote this update SPEECHLESS. tareef k liye words nahi mil the.
pehly lga k arav apne father ka badla le ga after his father's flashback. but us mein khaas nai tha k yeah normal shit. par is update k bad story ne apne name k sath insaaf kiya hai. ab samj mein aya hai bisi is ka name vengeance q hai. one thing I've just clicked KYA HUMARA PROTAGONIST AB EK VILLIAN HO GAqk k ab mujhy esa hi lag rha hai k arav ab soft-hearted hero nahi rhe ga he'll be just a cold-hearted killer who just wants his revenge. lekin is k liye main sure bhi nahi hun qk shyd arav mein kuch had tak us ka true nature rhe ga we'll see then
urvi ka character fav tha almost sabhi readers ka is ki death dikhana is a very bold step by write I appreciated that. agar ye plot requirement hai to is barey mein writer ko force karna means story ka kabara karwane jesa hai. mujhy khushi hai k ap ne plot ko change nahi kiya warna hume itna zbardast update kese parhne ko milta.
to yoo-jung LUNA hai arav k pack ki to kya ye humare liye hint hai story ki heroien yehi ho gi? yoo-jung ka character to shuru se hi ek strong character tha assassin skills plus leadership bhi nazar aai hai is character mein and most importantly yoo-jung ek bold steps lene wali personality hai. is ka one of the bold move hume arav k death k bad nazar aya hai aur ek leadership bhi nazar aai thi k agar sabhi emotional ho gaye to un ki death easily ho sakti hai then she took a charge. pehly dar tha k yoo-jung apne clan ki wajah se arav ko betray kar sakti hai lekin ab to fire clan khud is ka enimy hai to kuch relief mili ko chlo abhi to esa kuch nai ho ga. lekin pta nahi q yoo-ri ki death ka bohat dukh hua hai yoo-jung k ane se lga tha k yes she can save her PER.... urvi ki death se zeyada dukh yoo-ri ki death ka hua hai qk urvi ki death k scene mein aur bhi kafi scene chal rhe the to itna feel karne ka time nahi tha lekin yoo-ri k scene ko maine dil se feel kiya. kya yoo-jung k bhi mind se arav ki memories mit jayein gi
? achanak yad aya yoo-jung luna hai mtlb alfa ki mate to akanksha ka kya scene hai phir is ka zrur btana bhai qk i forget k in kya patch up hua tha ya nai
bhenchod vansh kya ploting kar geya sala. bhai agar to isey main villain rakhne ka soch rhe ho jo k esa nahi ho ga lekin agar phir bhi soch rhe ho to bhai rehne do ye deserve nahi karta. aur archana kya bakchodi pel gai yahan pe bisi itna sweet character tha lekin acha hai ab revenge mein maza aye ga. i think akash ne jo vansh k sath kiya tha to us ne archana ko btaya ho ga to apne bete ko bachane k liye ye sab kar diya ho ga. vanshika bhi udr hi thi lift mein lekin q sabhi same time pe same place pe. aur itni bari ploting ka akash ko bilkul pta nahi lga i think akash ki security hoti thi kuch urvi k liye agar main galat nai hun to us ka kya wo kidr gai. arav prison mein keyd ho geya aur us ki memories mostly removed ho chuki hain ab to koi us ki help bhi nai kar sakta ho gai lekin ek minute arav ka pack ko to sab yad rehna hi chahiye aur us pack mein se 2 log earth pe hi hain yoo-jung aur belle inhe arav ka dard aur pareshani feel honi hi chahiye nah bhai warna pack ka feel nai aye ga. chahe ek anjana sa dar ya kuch bhi ek hint to milti hi chahiye inhe
agar bhai prison ko explore karne ka mood hai to bhai thora fast forward hi karna agar to plot requirement hai to phir to kuch ho hi nahi sakta baat hi khatam.
yr 15 20 din wait nahi ho sake ga kushish karna k thora jaldi hi update continue kar dena is update k bad to wese bhi intzaaar karna bohat mushkil hai
keep
keep posting
waiting for the next update
Unbelievable
Bro dhamekdar update bro
Bhenchod! Mood off hi ho gya.....
3 pointa ki vajha se...
1st point ek hindi story mein jarurat se jyada english use ho rahi hai jisme kuch words sar ke upar se hi nikal jate hai....
2nd point archana ka dhokha jisko maa ki muraat dikha raha tha writer aur ab ek raand bana diya....
3rd aur gandu aarav kisi ko maarke urvi ki maut ka badla bhi nahi le paya maza tab ata jab woh vahi ke vahi marta sab ko verna lambe time baad to kutta bhi pather marne wale ko kaat ke apna badla le leta hai.....
Totallly disappointing update urvi ki death
Bhai thanks Bhai itna bada update or itna accha update dene ke liye finally story title Hero ko mil gya manohar ki memory chali gai hai Akansha ki nhi gyi hai
Ye update unexpected tha mtlb ki aesa kuch hoga hum to soch rahe the urvi leading character main hai but I guess urvi is no more
Ye arc bhut ajib turn pe end hua hai bhai next ke liye wait rahega
nice update bhai kya update diya hai dimag ki sab naase hi kaam karna band kar gayi
Maine Update dobara Read kiya jisme kuch sawal Aa rhe hain
1.Vansh ke Pass CWD kanha se Aayi Jabki CWD to aarav ko prapt Hui thi kya ye vahi cheej hai jo jinho ne Vansh ko di thi ?
Nice update
It's a good update ... Unpredictable... Story
Ab khi jakr aapki story ka title samjh aaya, or update ke bare me to kya hi khun
Shaandaar zabardast zindabad.
Agle update ka besabri se intezaar.
Nice update
Great update. Bahut hi unexpected end hua is Tower Arc ka. Jahan ek taraf Yoo-Jung ki bahan Yoo-ri marr gayi wahin Aarav bhi apni bahan Urvi ko bacha nahi paya. Jahan yeh ek bahut dukh se bhara incident hai, wahin par ab dono Aarav aur Yoo-Jung ki kamzori bhi khatam ho gayi. Ab dekhna hai ki Aarav kaise apne aap ko prison world me wahan ka King banata hai. Sabse badi baat ki uski Will to Live ne sab logon se uski memory erase hone nahi di. Weh jarur laut kar aayega, bahut strong ho kar, aur sabse pehle Luna, apni female Alpha ko dhund lega. Phir to Vansh aur Archana ki khair nahi. Lekin ab usko control kaun kar payega, shayad Akansha, lekin uski memory to erase ho gayi. Next Arc interesting hoga, full of fighting and thrill. Wahan bhi Aarav ka koi romantic attachment ho jaye kisi ke saath, to weh Arc bhi aur interesting ho jayega.
Waise Urvi ko Elixir se bachaya bhi ja sakta hai, dekhte hain ki oont kis karvat baithata hai.
तारीफ़ अपने आप की करना फ़िज़ूल है, खुशबु ख़ुद बता देती है कौन सा फूल है...!!
Bro kis novel se story li hai
Are boss ye story mein kya lafda kar diya, sala dimag ka dahi ho gaya hai.
Please make everything right
You did amazing bro
Literally superb
Heads up
Awesome update Bhai![]()
Kaafi interesting things hui hai es update me ...dil khush ho gya read kr k but saath me dil bhi toot gya Urvi or Yojoong ki sister k marne se....yahan story thodi fast forward bhi hui kuch sawaalo me uljhaate hue
1.... I don't think ki Urvi ka role abhi khatam huaaa hai ...sprit clan se belong krte hai .... to Urvi k liye aage kuch naa kuch interesting sa hi hoga....May Be future me Aarav k Pagalpan ko rokne k liye wo bapis aaye.... kyuki uski body ko samhaal k le jaaya gya hai to Usko safe hi rakkha jaayega jis trha tower me uske father k body ko rakkha gya safe
2....... yahan Yojong ki Past de related baate patta to chali lekin bahut se sawaal khade kar gayi..... Fire clan ki leader ki beti batai gyi hai ..but itne high status k babjood unko itni problem kyu face krni padi.... उनकी maa ka kya huaa..... unke father me enka saath kyu nahi diya ......fire clan enke peeche laga huaa hai haath dho kar to pakka sirf Ye next successor ka nahi ho sakta Cause jinhone bhi fire clan ko enke peeche bheja hai wo Yojong k baare me kuch khaas jaante honge...3rd elder main culprit nahi ho sakti Yojong k liye
3..... archna ka ye sab karna aur without any feelings k wahan khde reh k sab chupchaap hote dekhan...kuch to bahut badde jhol ki taraf ishara kr rha hai ....May Be jis trha Ela ko majdoori kiya gya uske father k against usi trha yahan pe bhi huaa ho yaa may bhi koi big game huaa hai Aarav k saath
4..... es sab me Aakash kha gya.....itna badda kaand ho gya aur use bhanak tak nahi lagi...usko Jisko aarav k har ek pal ki Khabar rehti thi use itne badde kaand ka kese patta naa chala
5 ....... yaa phir ye sab jaanbujh k aarav k saath to nahi kiya gya taaki use es dimension me bheja jaa sake kisi khaas maksad k liye ..kisi khaas person ko us dimension se bahar nikalne k liye ..cause koi bhi us dimension se bahar nahi nikal sakta ...but may be unko malum chal gya ho ki aarav me wo ability h jo ki us dimension se bahar aa sakta hai
Kuch bhi jhol ho sakta hai ....bit over-all kehna chaahunga...behad shaandaar update rhe ab tak k aapke
But Haan...Urvi or Yoo-ri k Characters k saath hue kaand ko justify kiya jaaye
Cause ye wo Characters nahi जिन्हें sacrifice kiya jaaye
Fantastic update.
Start of new beginning.
Kya hi kadak likha hai bro
Saloooo like karrooo
Awesomes bhai
Bhai bahut lamba gap nhi le rhe ho yar. Thoda jaldi update do aur ab time se update dene ko kaha hai apne.
Update kb tk milega
Dada 10 ke phle update do
Itta late n kro
Bhai please update thoda jaldi dena
Mast,ik number
Bhai i have no words ,too good.
Keep it up.
Nice update bhot awala par Kar Maza aya gya ab new update Ka intazar ha bhaii
Not only tutorial arc has ended but also the kind hearted Aarav's chapter has been ended rather most cruelly. Yoo-jung also has suffered a cruel fate in her sister's death at the hands of her adversaries. What a tragedy and a tragic coincidence, alas. Will Aarav ever be able to avenge his sister's death, only time will tell. Congrats dear bro for your giving us such a mind-blowing update. Awaiting your new arc eagerly
Bhai Jaisa ki dekh rhe hai aap ne next arc me target 80 rakhne ko bola hai but 1 weak ki analysis karne ke baad pta chal rha hai ki 80 target complete karna kitna muskil hai 1 weak me 80 nhi touch ho rha hai to aap khud sochiye bura mat maniyega but abhi aap ki story new category me aati hai isliye abhi aapko target 60 likes rakhna chahiye aage jab aap ki story jab famous ho jaye to aap target bdha sakte hai ek bar iss baat par Sochoyega aur jo readers meri baat se agree karte hain wo like kare
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai....
Mujhe to bahut maja aaya or sath me kafi question bhi aaya ki pehle yoo jung ki behen waqai mar geyi.....akhir us car me kiski body thi......or yoo jung aage kya karegi......or sab japan kyu jaa rahe hai....or ab aate hai Aarav par......mujhe pehle se pata tha archana vansh ko bahut peyaar karti hai isiliye jab aarav urbi pehli baar aaya tab use bhi peyar diya or jab aarav vansh ke liye khatra ban geya to archana ji apni bete ke pakh me chali geyi....usne pehle isiliye peyaar dikha rahi thi.....or wahi aab khud aarav ko marnr ke liye injection laga diya or to or urbi ko khud hi goli maari........or ab aarav kis lok ki prison me pouch geya or waha se kaise wapash aata hai dekhte hai.....
Ab aata hu muddhe per.....story ke naam par......ab dekhte hai aarav ka sweet revenge ka kaise leta hai.....or baki ka kya hoga ki usko aarav yad hi na ho to.....waise me usse kaise pata chalega ki aarav kisliye or kyu un sab se badla lerahe hai.....yahi samapt karta hoon new update intejaar rehega.....ager possible hua to 5 7 dino me dene ka prays karna kyu ki ab jawda intejar nhi seh payunga ki kab story chalu hogi or kab dekhunga ki kaise aarav sabse badla lega....or aakash ka kya roll hoga isme ki uske family ko koi hurt kar rahe hai
Waiting for next update
Superb update
Update kab tak ayega bro
Bhai kya esa ho sakta hai ki next arc me ya aane Wale kisi bhi arc me akansha ko aarav ki life dobara entry ho or abki baar dono ki love story bhi dekhne ko mile ek dam made for each other wali
Already 78 Ho Gaye Hai Tension Nai Lene Ka.
Mast story
Waiting
Bro update![]()
Bhai update kab aayega
Update kab ayega bhai
Bro update kb ayega
Bhai Target to pura nhi huwa kya update mile ga jldi ya fir 15 ke baad kam se kam bata do
bahut hi shandar update
Ab to 80 likes be poory ho gaay hn to ab Q nii aa rha ha update
Jailde jailde update da do bro
Update brother
Bro.... update kab tak aayega...
Must hai Bhai
Ohh sach me itna dhyan se padhne ke bavjud ye baat kaise chhut gyi Aarav aur Urvi ke sath jab ghtna hui to wo din 2012 ka akhiri din tha but yoo jung aur yoo ri ke sath 2013 ke pahle din ghatna ghati
Means Ye ghatna Aarav ke memory erasing Process ke baad ghati Jisse ye prove ho rha hai ki Yoo jung ki Memory se Aarav delete nhi hua hai
Kyo salty bhai sahi guess kiya hai ya ab bhi wrong guess hai batana
Hahaha... Mera matlab pyar se control kerne ko tha. Urvi ke na rehne par Aarav ki personality bilkul change ho jayegi. Ek sanvedansheel aur sabki help kerne wala Aarav ab ek kroor, hinsak aur badla lene wala prani ban jayega. Waise bhi kahani ka main plot 'Venegeance. hai.
ये स्टोरी भी गई 12 के भाव मे
Ok bro
Ok bro eagerly waiting for update.
Jitne zyada update doge utne zyada likes milenge her hafte think about what I said.
Chalo matlab Mera bday pe update ayega...thanks
Sab sahi tha but vansh ko itna importance role Dena samajh nahi aaya .....
Oye tu hai kaun ye bolne wala Writer ne bola hai wait karne ka wait kar itna hi shauk hai to likh ek story fir hum log bhi dekhte hain tu kitne Update weekly deta hai aa jaate hain na jane kanha kanha se wo banda bhi apni daily life se jo time bachta hai nikalkar usme Update ki Preparation karta hai Phir usko likhta hai
आप कोंन हो। राईटर के यहा प्राइवेट चपरासी हो क्या।
जवाब देना होगा तो राइटर देगा तु अपना मुह बंद रख चमचे।
Intejar rehega
Aaj ke Update ki timing kya hogi Bhai
Eagerly waiting for your update
subah ya sham ko
Bhi subah ya sham kab aayega
15 minutes more
Bhai or kitna time lagega
Bhai update please
Bhai update kab Tak doge reply to kar do![]()
Late from the schedule