Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

I'll be honest ke mujhe kahin pe bhi pehle 10 chapter padhne mein itna jor padha hoga...do baar padh ke sab smjh aaya

Starting ke updates mein newbie tha Usko baad mein edit karne ka socha tha per original he zyada sahi lag raha tha to kiya nahi

Ek cheez meri bahut bada doubt hai kabhi story real life mein chalte hai fir beech mein level up tower seedhe...shyad woh scene past ka tha...?

Aarav wasn’t actually traveling between worlds! He was just remembering all those moments shown in the updates.

I should’ve used a different color for the past scenes, but oh well, never mind

Urvi mein main khudko self insert kar chuki hoon...isliye pls usko kuch mat karna atleast lol

Ye to galat ker gayi tum

Story mein magic hai to uske upar kuch rules bhi hone chaiye nhi toh log chamatkar bolte hai usse.

Aarav ek error ki tarha he hai Ye aage Yoo-Jung bhi clear kare gi! Ye abilities uske paas magically nahi ayi har ek ke peeche kuch na kuch reason hai

hinglish mein padhne mein thoda jor toh padhta hai kyuki litrpg padhne ke aadat english mein hi hai. Skill, abilities, unique abilities...man you have done your research.

I had to

One thing Aarav wahan cave mein pehle pahucha fir woh Alpha wala scene baad mein kyu kiya?

Kyu ke uski tab he sense ban rahi thi Mere according wo scene shuruaat mein likhta to uska charm khatam ho jata wo tension khatam ho jati

Also Will to live ab Devour main badal chuke hai

Ye kab huwa? Dono alag alag abilities hai

One request ke sabke cards aur jo bhi sill vagarh hai first page mein mention kar do pls...taaki ref mil sake.

Main ne abilities ke naam first page per likhe the! Lekin shayad ab cards add karne ho gye

So, Andrew tank hai ab clear ho rha hai team formation. Yeh shadow ke peeche kya raaz...khair Isabelle ko toh bacha liya.
What? Andrew died? Mujhe laga uska aur bhi role hoga story mein

Demon wolf evolve ho gya...Aarav general...yeh thoda upar se gya pls explain.

Aarav general? Ye to mere bhi sar ke upar se gaya

Urvi ka scene bahut emotional tha usko laga ke usne apne bhai ko kho hi diya hai, (my favourite character, I read somewhere from spoilers ke tum usse maar doge seriously man why the cold heart )

Writer logo ko apne fav character kabhi nahi bataya karo! Unko he maarne mein zyada maza ata hai

aur yeh kya Team US yahan uske ghar kaise pahuch gye? Behind the scenes bhi alag hi chal rha hai.

Behind the scenes? Wo saamne he to huwa hai sab kuch

I feel ke yahan 20 chapters toh easily ban skte the events ko aur detail mein likhte toh.

Main ne jab start ki thi to ye sab 6 updates mein likhne ki sochi thi

Khair koi nhi ek arc toh dete hi hoon main kise bhi story ko smjhne ke liye. Let's see how you gon build up from here, story ache but I'll give my honest rating at the end abhi starting mein bas writing skills ache hai itna bol skte hoon. Also, count this as my first review!

Ye story trial and error type story hai mere liye! Yanha main different different ideas try ker ke daikh raha hu kanha main strong hu aur kanha main weak hu aur kya readers ko zyada khinchati hai

Main ne jo actual stories sochi thi wo sab iske baad aye gi aur ye probably summer ke end tak ya winter ke mid mein complete ho jaye gi

I'm at chapter 10 currently iirc. This will be my bookmark for later ref.

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 111​	5th March 11:30 PM​
Update 112​	10th March 11:30 PM​
Update 113​	18th March 11:30 PM​
Update 114​	22nd March 11:30 PM​
Update 115​	27th March 11:30 PM​

 

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Bhai next update kb tak aayega

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 111​	4th March 11:30 PM​
Update 112​	8th March 11:30 PM​
Update 113​	13th March 11:30 PM​
Update 114​	17th March 11:30 PM​
Update 115​	21st March 11:30 PM​

Schedule Updated

 

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Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 111​	4th February 11:30 PM​
Update 112​	8th February 611:30 PM​
Update 113​	13th February 11:30 PM​
Update 114​	17th February 11:30 PM​
Update 115​	21st February 11:30 PM​

Feb.?

 

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Bhai next update kb tak aayega

4th March

 

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Feb.?

Old schedule ka code utha liya

 

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Schedule Updated

Feb ? Phir se

 

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Feb ? Phir se

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