Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

naha aya yar late night

12-15-16 ab aur kitna age jana padega

Koi baat nehin just take your time

Kb tak

Bhai zabardast update hai
Aarav ka seen nahi dikha bhai wo seen dikha dete yaar
ab next update ka intezar rhega usme hi dekhne ko mile ga

Nice update bhai super fantastic update

Awesome update brother bhut din bad itna bda update Mila hai hope you are doing well in your life

बहुत ही गलत जगह अपडेट खतम किए हो,
एक साथ बहुत ही अलग अलग लोगों अलग अलग परिस्थिति से गुजर रहे है।
Devour सूना हुआ लग रहा है, क्या सच में?

Dhamekedaar update tha Bhai . Congrats for the amazing update. Awaiting your upcoming update anxiously

Nice update

It seems Aarav has reached just in time...

Msst bhai
Hopefully yha arav unhe bachne aw ho gya

Awesome update Bhai
Waiting for next

nice update

Good update.
Happy Birthday...

Aarav abhi bhi zindagi or maut se lad Raha hai

Ishika ko Aarav ki yaad AA Rahi hai Deepak ko dekh k lagta hai k Aarav ki zarurat yahan bhi hai

Sonia jism ki aag mein jal rahi hai woh Aarav k liye

Akansha or uski team jo Aarav ko bachana chahti hai woh khud apni Jaan ko mushkil mein.daal chuki hai

Deveor ki entry yeh kafi kuch badal degi iss ladai mein

Har bar ki tarah mast update dia hai bhai...agle update ka besabri se intejar rahega...

Nice update bro

Nice update

Great update. Very apt title, 'Past Wounds'. This fits for all three, for Aarav, carrying a heart of an evil god, ex Mother Spirit, which is sucking Qi and Mana from Aarav's core, also for Rahul, whose not only past but even birth was full of miseries, and also for Ishika, who is wrongfully involved in a scandal with her teacher Vishnu.

Aarav ka Tinkerbell ke mana ko drain hone se bachane ke liye usko apne core se bahar fenkna, Demon Wolfs ka apne Alpha ko bachane ke liye apna Mana dena, aur ant me Rahul ka apne dard ko sahan kerte huye Aarav ki help karna, everything was very well written.

Udhar Sonia Aarav ki yaadon ko bhula nahi pa rahi hai, jaldi hi Vansh se door ho jayegi. Ishika ke sar ke dard ka raaz bhi pata chal gaya, waise bhi uski saheli Nandani ne uske dimag me Aarav ke sath sex kerne ki baat bhar di hai. Ab yeh Deepak ek naya villain aa gaya hai, lekin iski Aarav se kya dushmani hai. Kya ise shak hai ki Aarav ne iske bhai ko maara hai, ya phir Aarav ki vajah se Ishika uske kaabu me nahi aa rahi hai, ya phir weh Aarav ke Blue Moon Project ko hijack kerna chahta hai, isi liye usne Aarav ki secretary Esha ko apne jaal me fasaya hai.

Idhar Level Up Tower me Akansha, Malia, Mia aur Tarun 100th floor par pahunch chuke hain. Kya khoobi se Akansha ne Portals ko use kiya hai apni team ko aage badhane ke liye. Ab yeh 'Devour' to Aarav hi use kar sakta hai, to weh theek mauke par wahan pahunch gaya. Ab yeh kaise wahan pahuncha, uska Mana kaise fill hua, yeh to agle update me pata chalega. Sabse badi baat, 'Bazaar Points' se usne kya khareeda.

Again, a great update. All areas were covered. Bas, Aarav ke baare me abhi bhi latka diya hai.

Amazing update

awesome bro

Awesome update

Superb and nice update brother.... Waiting for next update

Thank you bhai ek bahot jabardast update dene ke liye. Bahot romaanchak aur majedaar update tha bhai maja aa gaya. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai

Wonderful update Bhai

Superb update

Super Fantastic update bro
Waiting for next

Awesome update

प्रतीक्षा है

Super & Awesome story h kitne ache tarh se likh gya h

Har update ek alag excitement se bhara hota h

Bhai Aaj update ka din kya Aaj update do ge

No Bhai bas gus Kiya tha

G0od Eysa hi H0na Chahiye

Bro aik baat puchni thi
Ye story jo ap likh rahe ho
Kya kisi novel per based hai agar hai to konsi novel perr

Awesome update bro
Aur Deepak ishika ke sath Aisa kyu ker rha hai aur wo bhi Aarav se badla lene ke liye

Great update

Nice update waiting for next

Nice update
Plz ab updates regular dijiyaga
Aap ki story best ja rahi hai ab Tak.

Acha Kiya bhai ab date nhi dete
Fir log Aisa smajte hai ki jaise paisa dekar update ka intezar kar rahe hai
Kuch bhi bole de rhe hai

Awesome update

Waiting for next update

प्रतीक्षा है

Good update.. waiting for the next update

प्रतीक्षा हैं

Bahut shandaar update bhaiya

Waiting for next update

Waiting

Story band to ni hogi?? kuki wo time table chart ni hai aur bhai kabhi itna time leta ni hai update dene me

प्रतीक्षा रहेगी

Thanks Bhai waiting

Waiting

Waiting

Okk bhai...

Waiting

Is story jesi koi novel hai to btao bhai

Waiting

Bhai abhi mood Nahin banaa kya??

Lmbe gp se aye hai ab mood nhi bn rha hai bhai ka update dene ka

Monday night is coming to an end shortly, dear bro. Hope you have not gone to bed early tonight

Bhai kya hua soo to nahi gae na aap

Most probably ab update morning me hi aaye ga

Update please

Waiting bhai

Sun Bhai, Maine bhi ek story start ki hai. Koi trick wrick bataiyo zara kaise audiance ekattha karni hai, kaise ek honest audiance base banana hai, kaise unhe revos dene ke liye majboor karna hai aur kaise unse like wike karvana hai.
Wo kya hai na Mai naya hu yaha pe aur bhai tu purana khiladi hai.
Isliye bataiyo zara kuchh ho batane layak to.
I will really appreciate your effort.

waiting brotha

aj to update read kar k hi sona hai chahe subah office deri se hi q nah jana pare

Bhai kitni der mai aa rha h update intejar krte krte 2 baj gaye

So jao bhai writer sahab ko intezaar karwana achha lgta hai

We will wait bhai take your time

Kb tak editing hoga bhai

Update 67 has been posted Guys!!! ​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Index has been updated ​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Sun Bhai, Maine bhi ek story start ki hai. Koi trick wrick bataiyo zara kaise audiance ekattha karni hai,

Lekin sensei to ap ho na

Sun Bhai, Maine bhi ek story start ki hai. Koi trick wrick bataiyo zara kaise audiance ekattha karni hai, kaise ek honest audiance base banana hai, kaise unhe revos dene ke liye majboor karna hai aur kaise unse like wike karvana hai.
Wo kya hai na Mai naya hu yaha pe aur bhai tu purana khiladi hai.
Isliye bataiyo zara kuchh ho batane layak to.
I will really appreciate your effort.

Honestly! Trick mujhe bhi nahi pata, Start me kuch log aye the batane ke liye ke ye karo ya wo karo, Lekin main ne kabhi dhayan nahi diya, Audience ko banao nahi kamao i think


Lekin kuch tips de sakta hu! Sab se pehle khud ka kuch likhne ki try karo, I think same story AK 25 ne bhi likhi thi I'm not sure! Nvm


Haan, Basically jab story original hoti hai tab he reviews ka bhi maza aye ga, Kyu ke aise me ap khud ko respect karte ho, Ap ki tarha he kuch aur bhi translation per stories ayi thi, Lekin sab ke saath wohi huwa ke kuch time ke baad unka intrest khatam ho gaya aise me audience kanha se aye gi? Kyu ke un wirters mehnat nahi lagi hoti.


Jab original likho gye aur beech me mehnat bhi karo gye to story chhodne ke khayal se bhi phate gi, I'm not saying ke translation buri cheez hai, Basically ap unhe entertainment provide ker rahe jo novel aur aisi cheeze enjoy nahi ker sakte hai, Lekin aise main ap unse ap ke kaam ko respect karne ke liye nahi keh sakte, Agar ap audience ke liye ker rahe ho to equal hardwork bhi necessary hai, Agar sirf translation hai to reviews bhi waise he aye gye, Agar tricks se ache aye bhi to wo satisfy nahi ker sake gye, it's pretty late now, Sayonara!!!

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Most probably ab update morning me hi aaye ga

De diya raat ko he

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Lmbe gp se aye hai ab mood nhi bn rha hai bhai ka update dene ka

Exactly

 

[Devil is alone]

Nice Update....
Aarav ne apna pehla apprentice bna he liya wo bhi Rahul ko....

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Said ismail]

Awesome fantastic superb update bro.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR

 

[Your Sensei]

Lekin sensei to ap ho na

Honestly! Trick mujhe bhi nahi pata, Start me kuch log aye the batane ke liye ke ye karo ya wo karo, Lekin main ne kabhi dhayan nahi diya, Audience ko banao nahi kamao i think


Lekin kuch tips de sakta hu! Sab se pehle khud ka kuch likhne ki try karo, I think same story AK 25 ne bhi likhi thi I'm not sure! Nvm


Haan, Basically jab story original hoti hai tab he reviews ka bhi maza aye ga, Kyu ke aise me ap khud ko respect karte ho, Ap ki tarha he kuch aur bhi translation per stories ayi thi, Lekin sab ke saath wohi huwa ke kuch time ke baad unka intrest khatam ho gaya aise me audience kanha se aye gi? Kyu ke un wirters mehnat nahi lagi hoti.


Jab original likho gye aur beech me mehnat bhi karo gye to story chhodne ke khayal se bhi phate gi, I'm not saying ke translation buri cheez hai, Basically ap unhe entertainment provide ker rahe jo novel aur aisi cheeze enjoy nahi ker sakte hai, Lekin aise main ap unse ap ke kaam ko respect karne ke liye nahi keh sakte, Agar ap audience ke liye ker rahe ho to equal hardwork bhi necessary hai, Agar sirf translation hai to reviews bhi waise he aye gye, Agar tricks se ache aye bhi to wo satisfy nahi ker sake gye, it's pretty late now, Sayonara!!!

Bhai maine tujhe trick batane bola tha, tune to mera astitva hi khatam kar diya... lol

Ghani beijjati ki hai chhore tane, manne copy paste writer bol ke. Khair koi ni jaisi karni vaisi bharni. Thank you for your hard words btw, you really deserve to be an otaku.

Baki Maine to apni thread par mast sticky wisticky laga ke reader logo ko dhamka ke rakha hai, ki agar update chahiye to like target pura kro aur revo do, nahi to apun update nahi dene wala.

Khair dekhte hain kab tak chalti hai apni ye dukan.
And for the suggestion btw.

 

[Jitu0786]

UPDATE 67 ~
(APPRENTICE)

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Level Up Tower
Floor 39 ~ 1 Hour Ago......,


“Ughhhh! Y-Ye kaafi nahi hai”



Rahul ne dard se karahte huwe kaha, Uski baat sun ker Tinkerbell pareshan hone lagi, Ye Mana bhi Aarav ke liye kaafi nahi tha, Ab aise me usko aur Mana kanha se mil sakta tha.


[URGENT HEART STABILIZATION REQUIRED]


[You have an Evil God Heart inside your body, To stabilize your body, you must fill at least 50% of the Heart with Mana, If you fail to do this, you will die.


[If you succeed in filling 50% of the Heart with Mana
• You will earn 5,000 Bazaar Points
• Your body will become stabilized]

[Current Progress: 10% Filled]


Tinkerbell ke saamne quest ke notification aa gye, Usko ab pata lag gaya tha ke Aarav ke andar kya cheez hai, Lekin Tinkerbell ne uske baare me pehle kabhi nahi suna tha.


Lekin uske paas abhi ye sochne ka samay nahi tha, Abhi ye baat zaroori thi ke heart sirf 10% bhara hai, Usko 50% per le jaana ke baare me soch ker he Tinkerbell kaanp rahi thi.


Tinkerbell(Exhale): Fuuuuu ~ Rahul! Mere liye raasta banao.


Rahul: Huh?


Tinkerbell: Main ek baar dobara Aarav ke andar jaane wali hu! Lekin itni energy ke hote huwe main paas bhi nahi aa sakti.


Rahul(Groan): Ughhhhh!


Rahul ne Energy ko kheenchna shuru ker diya, Usne Tinkerbell ke liye ek raasta bana diya, Raasta bante he Tinkerbell bhi andar chali gayi.


*Zzzzzzppppppppp*



Aarav ke andar energy ka toofan aya huwa tha, Uske andar ki halat bohat bigad chuki thi, Lekin ye heraani sirf ek pal ke liye he thi, Tinkerbell ne upar daikha to Aarav uske saamne Spirit or Wind core ko alag ker raha tha.



Tinkerbell: Aarav???



Tinkerbell tezi se Aarav ke paas chali gayi, Aarav ki spirit madham ho rahi thi, Ye sirf uski image thi, Evil heart uski image ki bhi Energy ko kheench rahi thi.


Tinkerbell: A-Aarav! Tumhari image gayab ho rahi hai, Hum ne galti ker di hai, Hamay aise bina prepration ke kuch bhi nahi karna chahiye tha, hum-



Aarav: Seriously? Abhi tum ye kehne ke liye waapis ayi ho?


Aarav ki baat sun ker Tinkerbell bilkul he chaunk gayi, Usko lag raha tha ke Aarav Abhi pareshan ho ga, Lekin Aarav bilkul shant tha.


Aarav: Main ne tumhe baahir phenka tha kyu ke tum raaste me thi! Lekin tum phir se andar aa gayi?


Tinkerbell: L-Lekin....Lekin tum ne to mujhe Mana khinchane se bachane ke liye baahir phenka tha na?


Aarav(Groan): Ughhh! Aur tumhe aisa kyu laga?


Tinkerbell: Kyu ke tum khatre me the! Aur Rahul baahir se tumhe Mana de raha tha aur tumhe aur bhi mana chahi-



Aarav: Ughhhh! Seriously? Abhi mere paas kuch batane ka samay nahi hai, Lekin ye sun lo ke sab kuch mere control me hai.



Tinkerbell: Huh?



Tinkerbell ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke Aarav kya keh raha hai, Usko kuch bhi control me dikhayi nahi de raha tha, Lekin usko ye bhi pata tha ke Aarav ye baat bina kisi reason ke nahi kahe ga, Usne chup chap Aarav ko sab sambhalte daikhne ka soch liya.



Aarav: Binding!


Aarav ne dono core ko pakadte huwe unhe spirit thread se baandh diya, Lekin Aarav yanhi nahi ruka, Usne dono Core ko Evil god ke heart se bind ker diya.


Ye karte he Aarav ke Qi cores ki energy threads ke andar se flow hote huwe Evil heart ke andar jaane lagi aur uske andar energy ka unstable flow stable hone laga.


Tinkerbell: Tumhara shuru se ye plan tha kya?


Aarav: Yes, Ab main dono Core ko ek saath Use ker sakta hu! Ek tarha se mere paas 2 core hai, Lekin ye dono meri body per pressure nahi banaye gye, Kyu ke dono ek saath kaam kare gye, Aise main dono cores ko ek core ki tarha manage ker saku ga.



Tinkerbell sirf ye sun ker he dang reh gayi thi, Aise situation me sab log sirf khud ko bachane ke baare me soch sakte hai, Lekin Aarav aisi situation ko bhi apne favor me use ker raha tha.



Tinkerbell: Lekin hamay abhi bhi Evil god heart ko fill karna ho ga! Uske liye hum kya kare gye?


Aarav: Ye situation bhi predictable thi! Ye situation utni bhi kharab nahi hai, Actually ye bhi mere liye achi situation hai.


Tinkerbell: Huh? Kya tum seedhe seedhe bata sakte ho?


Aarav ne ek baar uski taraf daikha aur bina kuch kaahe system windows ko daikhne laga, Usne ek baar notification ko ache se dobara padh liya aur taiyar ho gaya.



Aarav: Inventory!


Aarav ke saamne uski inventory ki window aa gayi, Aarav uske andar kuch dhoondne laga, Usko kuch dhoondne ke baad he inventory me rakhe huwe Mana stone mil gye.


Tinkerbell: Ye stone!!!


Aarav: Haan, Ye infinity prison ke monsters ke Mana stone hai! Zyada stones already use ho gye hai, Lekin mere paas abhi bhi 73 stones baaki bach gye hai.


Tinkerbell: Fuck! Main ne ye to socha he nahi ke ye bhi ho sakta hai, Lekin tum ne bhi mujhe bataya nahi?


Aarav: Batane ka koi kaaran tha kya? Lekin ye bhi hamare liye acha ho gaya, Hamay pata lag gaya ke Rahul kitna loyal hai.


Aarav ne sab kuch socha tha, Lekin usne kabhi ye nahi socha tha ke Rahul uske liye itna aage badh jaye ga.



Aarav: Ab ye sab khatam karne ka samay aa gaya hai!


[Devour]


Aarav ne ek baar me 73 ke 73 stones ko devour ability se kha liya, Uski body ke andar energy ka ek bada toofan aa gaya, Lekin Evil god ka heart energy ko seedhe kheenchne laga.


[Current Progress: 43% Filled]


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Level Up Tower
Floor 100 ~ 3:17 AM

*Sniff*


*Sniff*


“Aarav???”



Akansha ki aankhon me ansoo ane shuru ho gye the, Usko vishwas tha ke uske saamne khara vyakti Aarav he hai, Lekin usko dar bhi tha ke ye uski aankhon ka dhoka na ho.


*Pat*


Aarav ne Akansha ke sar per haath rakh ker uske balo per haath fairane laga, Uske haatho ka ehsaas mehsoos karte he Akansha ka sabar ka bandh toot gaya aur usne aage badh ker Aarav ko banhon me bhar liya.


Akansha(Sob): Kanha reh gye the? *Sniff* Pata hai kitna dar gayi thi main? Mujhe pata tha ke ap ko kuch nahi ho ga.....Lekin, Andar ek dar sata raha tha....Kyu karte ho aisa? Kya milta hai tang ker ke?


Akansha Aarav se lipate huwe shikayat karne lagi huwi thi, Lekin wanhi baaki sab heraan the, Un sabhi ko ek pal ke liye laga tha ke dragon unhe khatam ker de ga.


Lekin ek pal me unke saamne Aarav aa gaya aur usne puri fire ko ek pal me gayab ker diya, Mia ke liye ye pehli baar tha ke usne Aarav ko asli shaktiyon ko daikha ho.



Wanhi Tarun sirf Aarav ko sahi daikh ker khush tha, Uski aankhon me ansoo nahi lekin chehre per muskurahat thi.


Aarav: Relax! Ab main aa gaya hu na? Ab tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi hai.


Aarav usko shant karne ki koshish ker raha tha, Lekin Akansha phir bhi usko chhodne ka naam bhi nahi le rahi thi, Usne Aarav ko aise pakda huwa tha jaise agar wo chhode gi to Aarav kanhi gayab ho jaye ga.


Mia: Umm, Guys! Main ye moment barbad nahi karna chahti, Lekin hamay uska pehle kuch karna ho ga na?


*Grrrrooowwr*

Awaaz sunte he un sabhi ka dhayan unke upar khare dragon per chala gaya, Dragon khara sirf unhe gusse se ghoot raha tha, Ye daikh ker Mia bhi heraan thi.


Mia(Groan): Mujhe dragon se aisi halat me ladne ki koi khawahish nahi hai! Lekin phir bhi ye aise shaant kyu hai?


Mia abhi bhi dard se karah rahi thi, Uski halat kuch khaas achi nahi thi, Lekin usko dragon ki shaanti dara bhi rahi thi


Tinkerbell: [Master! Ye dragon ap ke title se dar nahi raha, Ye gussa hai]


Aarav: [Hmm! Probably ye Hexarion ka purana bacha ho ga, Maybe first ya second]



Tinkerbell: [Ye ho sakta hai! Kyu ke ye dragon bakiyon ki tarha nahi hai, Ye kam se kam Hexarion ke ek sar ke barabar ki shakti rakhta hai, Ye ruke ga nahi]


*Grrrrooowwr*


Dragon ek baar dobara Unki taraf badhne laga, Usko aage ate daikh sabhi Aarav ki taraf daikhne lage, Lekin Aarav kuch bhi nahi ker raha tha.



Akansha: Aarav, Hamay kuch karna ho ga! Kya hamay bhaagna chahiye?


Aarav: Naah! Yanha hum bhaagne ke liye aye hai kya?


Akansha: Phir kya hum ladne wale hai?


Aarav: Abhi nahi! Abhi mujhe kisi aur ko ladte huwe daikhna hai.


Akansha: Kisko?


Aarav: Usko!


*Boooom*


Ek bada bolder seedhe dragon ke muh per lag gaya, Sabhi log heraan ho gye, Kyu ke bolder chota nahi tha, Sabhi ne bolder ane wali disha me daikha to unhe udhar koi khara dikhayi diya.


Akansha ne usko daikha to Akansha ko uska chehra familiar laga, Lekin usko yaad nahi aa raha tha ke wo usko kanha mili hai.


Akansha: Huh! A-Aarav, Y-Y-Ye?


Aarav(Nod): Haan! Tum sahi soch rahi ho.


Akansha ko uski aankhon per vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Uske saamne khara vyakti koi aur nahi uska cousin brother Rahul tha.



Akansha: Lekin ye Rahul kaise?


*Thud*


Ek taraf se bhaagte huwe Shadow Aarav ke paas aa gaya, Aarav ne yanha ane ke liye Shadow ki he madad li thi, Ek guardian hone se shadow ke paas kisi bhi floor per jaane ki authority thi.


Uski authority ki madad se Aarav samay rehte yanha aa gaya tha, Aarav Rahul ko bhi saath le aya tha, Usko pata karna tha ke Rahul kya ban gaya hai?


*Grrrrooowwr*


Dragon ek baar dobara gusse se daharne laga, Uski nazar ab ki baar Rahul ki taraf thi, Lekin Rahul ladne ke liye taiyar bilkul shaant khara huwa tha.


*Woooosh*


Rahul ek jhatke ke saath bhaagne laga uski raftar bohat tez nahi thi, Lekin uski speed human bhi nahi thi, Lekin Rahul sirf tez nahi bhaag raha tha wo raaste me aa rahe bade pattharon se bach raha tha.


*Fwoooooosh*


Dragon ne muh khola aur Rahul ki taraf aage phainkne laga, Uska attack ek AoE attack tha, Rahul ke paas dodge karne ke liye samay nahi tha.


Rahul: Hard Body!!!



Rahul ek jagha khara ho gaya, Lekin usko zyada damage nahi ho raha tha, Ye daikh ker sabhi heraan reh gye, Unhone dragon ki fire ko taste kiya tha.


Unhe pata tha ke ye attack kitna powerful tha, Lekin Rahul usko bina kisi dikkat ke endure ker raha tha.


Tinkerbell: [Stone Body?]


Aarav: Huh?


Tinkerbell: [I'm sorry! Stone body ogres ki ek ability hai, Ogre unki body ko kuch samay ke liye stone ki tarha hard bana sakte hai]


Aarav: [Aur tum keh rahi ho ke ye ability Rahul ke paas hai?]


Tinkerbell: [Yes, I'm not sure, Lekin i think ke Rahul Monster's ko sirf khata nahi hai unki abilities bhi copy ker sakta hai]


Aarav: [Meri devour ki tarha?]


Tinkerbell: [Naah! Tumhari devour ek cheat ability ki tarha hai, Tum unki abilities ko chura lete ho, Lekin Rahul alag hai, Uski body abilities ko seekh sakti hai, Lekin unka Level bohat low ho ga]


Aarav: [Kaise?]


Tinkerbell: [Rahul ek tarha se khud ko wo monster bana sakta hai! Lekin sirf uski abilities ke liye, Stone Body young ogre use karte hai, Adult ogres steel body use karte hai, Lekin uski stone body bhi complete nahi hai, Usne utna damage reduce nahi kiya hai]



Ab Aarav ko samajh aa gayi thi, Rahul abilities ko apna bana sakta tha, Lekin ye sirf copy karne tak tha, Unhe grow Rahul ko khud karna padna tha.


Rahul abhi bhi ladne ke liye khara huwa tha, Uske sharir per bohat se ghav ban gye the, Lekin Rahul phir bhi peeche nahi hat raha tha.



*Woooosh*



Rahul ek baar dobara bhaagne laga, Lekin ab ki baar uski movements bilkul alag thi, Rahul beech me pattharon ko uthate huwe Dragon ko maar raha tha, Ye Dragon ko aur bhi gussa dilane laga.


*Grrrrooowwr*


Dragon ek baar dobara aag phainkne laga, Lekin ab ki baar Rahul ne ek bada jump le liya aur seedha dragon ke muh per aa gaya.



Rahul: Hiyah!



*Booooom*


Rahul ne ek zordar punch seedhe dragon ke muh per maar diya, Rahul size me uske saamne ek chinti ki barabar tha, Lekin uske punch ne dragon ko bhi peeche hone per force ker diya tha.



*Woooosh*


Rahul hava me he tha ke dragon ki tail seedhe Rahul ke lag gayi, Rahul seedhe neeche gir gaya, Lekin dragon yanhi ruka nahi aur usne ek baar dobara aag phainkni shuru ker di.


*Fwoooooosh*



*Gasping*


Ab ki baar Rahul ko bohat damage mila tha, Uske liye khara rehna bhi mushkil ho raha tha, Dragon abhi bhi bilkul sahi khara huwa tha, Lekin Rahul ka sharir kaanpne laga tha.


*Wooosh*


Dragon ne uske pankh failaye aur unko hilane laga, Uske aage rakhe sabhi pathar seedhe rahul ki taraf chale gye, Rahul unhe dodge nahi ker sakta tha, Rahul unhe block karne ka prayas karne laga.


Lekin uska luck uske saath nahi tha, Rahul ek patthar se takra ker peeche gir gaya, Uska sharir khoon se latpat ho gaya, Uski saanse bhi bhaari hone lagi.


“Kya main marne wala hu?”



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Veer's House
Mumbai ~ 5:19 PM



*Chuckle*



*Turn*



Sushmita haath me ek photo album pakde muskurate huwe usko daikh rahi thi, Shaam ka time tha aur dhoop khatam hone lagi thi, Sushmita terrace per ek kone me baithi album ko daikh rahi thi.


Sushmita(Smile): Kitne pyaare the tum!


“Kon pyaara tha?”


Meera ne bhi upar ki taraf ate huwe sawal kiya, Usne Sushmita ki awaaz sun li thi, Sushmita bhi ek pal ke liye dar gayi.


Meera: Batao na, Kon pyaara tha?


Sushmita: Madam ji! Main apne bache ki purani tasveere daikh rahi thi.


Meera: Aww, Sweet! Kanha hota hai tumhara beta?


Sushmita: Mera beta? Bohat dur, Itna dur ke main usko daikh bhi nahi sakti.


Meera: Kya matlab?



Sushmita: U...hhhh! Usko kuch kaam tha to wo kanhi gaya huwa hai.


Meera: Hmm! Lagta hai tumhe bohat pyaar hai tumhare bache se?


Meera ka sawal sun ker Sushmita chup reh gayi, Uske paas uske saval ka uttar nahi tha.


Sushmita: Kaash ke ye pyaar me samay rehte pehchan sakti! Lekin tab to shayad meri aankhon per jaise pati bandh gayi thi.


Meera: Kya matlab?


Sushmita(Tearful): Shayad main duniya ki sab se buri Maa thi! Kehte hai ke ek Maa se zyada uske bache ko koi pyaar nahi ker sakti, Lekin main shayad ek sachi Maa kabhi ban he nahi saki.


Sushmita ki ungaliyan ek tasveer per Rahul ke chehre per ruk gayi, Uski aankhe nam ho gayi, Uski awaaz ladkhadani shuru ho gayi.



Sushmita(Sobbing): Bohat zakhm diye hai main ne apne bache ko! Hamesha usko khud ki khamiyon ke liye kosti rahi hu, Lekin uski kya galti thi ke usko aisa jeevan mila, Jab usko meri sab se zyada zaroorat thi tab he main ne svarthi ban ker usko dukh diye.


Meera: Khud ko aise nahi kaho! Shayad tumhara beta aisa nahi sochata ho ga.


Sushmita: Nahi! Usko main ne jo zakhm diye hai aise bhar nahi sakte, Kaash ke main ne ek baar usko pucha hota ke usko kya chahiye? Usko kya ban'nna hai? Uska din kaisa gaya? Usko kya pasand hai? Usko kit *Sniff*


Sushmita ke shabd beech me ruk gye, Uski aankhon se ansoo behne shuru ho gye, Meera ne aage ho ker usko gale se laga liya, Sushmita bhi uske kandhe per sar rakh ker rone lagi.


Meera: Shaant! Shaant!



Sushmita: Lekin ab main sirf usko ek baat kehna chahti hu! Main maafi maangna chahti hu.....Wo maaf nahi kare ga.....Lekin phir bhi main ek baar usko batana chahti hu ke main usko kitna pyaar karti hu, Sirf ek baar aur....



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Level Up Tower
Floor 100 ~ 3:49 AM



*Groaning*



Rahul neeche gira dard se karah raha tha, Uski saanse abhi bhi chal rahi thi, Lekin uski halat uthne layak nahi thi, Rahul ye samajh gaya tha ke uske aur dragon ke beech ka level difference bohat bada hai.


Akansha(Shivering): A-Aarav, Hamay kuch karna ho ga! Dragon Rahul ke paas pohanchne wala hai.


Tarun: Akansha theek keh rahi hai! Hum ap ke liye raasta ban-


Aarav: Lekin main ye kyu karu?


Akansha&Tarun: Huh?


Aarav: Kya har baar tumhe meri zaroorat ho gi? Aise me tum mere liye kuch kaise ker sako gye?


Dono Aarav ke javab se heraan reh gye, Unhone socha bhi nahi tha ke Aarav unhen kuch aisa kahe ga.


Aarav: Agar tum dono ko uski chinta ho rahi hai to yanha kyu khare ho?



*Grrrrooowwr*


Dragon ne aage ho ker Rahul ko kuchalna chaha, Lekin Rahul uchalte huwe peeche ho gaya, Usne dodge to ker liya, Lekin uski halat aur bhi buri ho gayi thi.


Rahul(Gasping): Main dobara dodge nahi ker saku ga! Mujhe kuch karna ho ga, Aise main lad nahi saku ga.



*Fwoooooosh*


Dragon ne ek baar dobara aag ko Rahul ki taraf phenk diya, Rahul ne dobara stone body ka use kiya, Lekin ab ki baat usko damage bohat zyada mil raha tha.


Rahul ghutnon per aa gaya, Uska sharir sun per gaya tha, Uske liye abhi hilna bhi mushkil tha, Rahul apne saamne ant daikh sakta tha.



*Swooosh*


*Stab*


*Grrrrooowwr*


Achanak Dragon ki aankh ke aage ek portal khula aur uske andar se ek sword nikal ker seedhe dragon ki aankh me ghus gayi, Dragon ki aankh me ek bada ghaav ban gaya.



Rahul: Huh?


Rahul ne sar utha ker daikha to uske bilkul saamne Akansha aur Tarun khare huwe the, Akansha ki sword se Dragon ka khoon tapak raha tha


Rahul: Aka.... Akansha!



Akansha(Turn): Thank You! Rahul!



Akansha ki awaaz sunte he Rahul ka sharir kaanp gaya, Ye awaaz sun'nne ka Rahul 2 saal se intezar ker raha tha, Rahul usko dobara daikh ker khush tha, Lekin aisi situation me nahi.


Rahul(Groan): Akansha! Tumhe bhaagna ho ga.


Rahul ne bachi huwi shakti jutane ke baad mushkil se ye shabd kahe, Akansha ne uski taraf daikha to usko ek baar dobara uska purana Rahul dikh gaya.


Rahul jo hamesha uski chinta karta aya tha, Sushmita ki maar ke baad marham lagane ane wala Rahul, Usme abhi bhi kuch nahi badla tha.


Tarun: I'm sorry Mr. Rahul! Lekin hum ab ruk nahi sakte, Boss ko hum per vishwas hai, Hum unka bharosa tootne nahi de gye.


*Fwoooooosh*


Dragon ne ek baar dobara muh khol liya, Ye daikhte he Tarun ne Akansha ka haath pakad liya, Uske haath me Mana transfer Artifact pakda huwa tha.


[Mana Leech]



Dragon bilkul Tarun ki range me tha, Tarun ne uska Mana kheenchna shuru ker diya aur usko Akansha ko transfer karne laga.



*Fwoooooosh*


Dragon ne aag phainkni shuru ker di, Lekin Akansha ne apne saamne ek portal bana diya, Dragon ki aag uske andar jaane lagi, Lekin Akansha yanhi ruki nahi aur usne uska dusra portal seedhe dragon ke upar bana diya.



*Grrrrooowwr*



Dragon ki khud ki fire he ek portal se hote huwe dusre portal se nikal ker usko lagne lagi, Dragon dard se karahane laga.


*Cough*


Akansha zor se khaanste huwe neeche baith gayi, Uske muh se khoon nikalne laga, Usne aisi energy kabhi portal se nahi guzari thi.


Rahul: Akansha!!!


【Request from Shadow】


【Shadow is requesting that you take on Rahul as your apprentice.】


【Accept Shadow's Request?】


[Yes] ~ [No]



Aarav khara sab ki ladai daikh he raha tha ke uske saamne notification aa gaya, Usne Shadow ki taraf daikha to wo pehle se usko daikh raha tha.


Aarav: Tumhe sach me Rahul ki itni chinta hai? Huh, Shayad tumhe wo ladka sach me pasand aa gaya hai?


Shadow: Grrrrr


Aarav: Huh, Apprentice! Never thought ke main kisi ko apna Apprentice banaunga, Lekin pehli baar hai ke tum ne mujhse kuch maanga hai.......Alright!





【Apprenticeship Established】


[Congratulations! You have taken on Rahul as your apprentice]


[By sharing a bit of your energy with Rahul, you will help boost his growth and abilities]

[You can now buy useful skills, Abilities, and equipment for Rahul in the System Bazaar. Anything you buy will automatically go to him]

[You can also communicate telepathically with Rahul if he is close by. This lets you give him instructions, provide guidance, and check on his progress]

[Other benefits of the apprenticeship include:

- You'll get updates when Rahul levels up or achieves something
- Some of the experience Rahul gains will be shared with you
- You can assign Rahul certain tasks and missions to complete for you]


[The bond between master and apprentice has been forged. May your teachings help Rahul reach new heights]


*Swish*



Akansha ne bhaagte huwe Dragon ko halka cut diya, Lekin ye uske liye damage bhi count nahi ho sakta tha, Akanksha ne khud ko bohat mushkil se sambhala huwa tha.


Tarun bhi uski limit per tha, Usne dragon se bohat Mana le liya tha, Lekin phir bhi dragon puri energy se bhara huwa tha, Lekin itna heavy Mana Tarun ke liye dikkat ban raha tha.


Dono ek saath ho ker bhi dragon per dent bhi nahi laga sake the, Unhen vishwas tha ke baat agar bigdi to Aarav beech me aye ga, Lekin wo uske bina he ladna chahte the.


Dono uske liye kuch karna chahte the, Lekin unki halat aage ladne wali nahi thi.


*Grrrrooowwr*


Dragon ek baar dobara hava me uth gaya aur aag phainkne ke liye taiyar ho gaya, Ab ki baar wo move karne ke liye taiyar tha, Aise Akansha ka portal usko hit nahi ker sakta tha.


Tarun(Gasping): Ye sach me ek monster hai! Kya hum sach me ye dragon maar sakte hai?


Akansha(Gasping): I don't know!



Akansha ladna chahti thi, Lekin wo sach se muh bhi nahi pher sakti thi, Dragon unki league se bohat baahir tha, Unke liye dragon per ek serious attack bhi mushkil tha.


Akansha: Lekin hamay aage badhte rehna ho ga! Main give up nahi ker sakti.


Tarun(Smirk): Aur na he main haar manu ga! Hum end tak ladte rahe gye.


Dono ek baar dobara ladne ke liye taiyar ho gye, Lekin abhi unhen dragon ke incoming attack se bachna tha, Akansha portal banane ke liye taiyar ho gayi.


Akansha: Let-


*Ka-booooom*


Akansha kuch karne lagi thi ke achanak se dragon ghoomte huwe neeche gir gaya, Akansha aur Tarun dono muh khole daikhte reh gye.


“Main bhi haar nahi manu ga”



Unke saamne Rahul Dragon ki tail pakde khara huwa tha, Unhen vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Lekin sach ye he tha ke Rahul ne dragon uski tail se pakad ker ghooma ker neeche phaink diya tha.



“Woaaaah”


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Veer's House
Mumbai ~ 7:27 PM


*Screech*


Nandini ne ghar ke saamne car ko khari ker diya, Uske saath he passenger seat per Ishika baithi huwi thi, Nandini usko fikar ki nazron se daikhne lagi.


Ishika: Nandu! Kya please tum mujhe aise daikhna band karo gi?


Nandini: Aur main ye kyu karu? Pata hai tum ne mujhe kitna dara diya tha? Babes tum literally ek chichore ki bahon me gir gayi thi, Who knows ke main na ati to kya kya hota?


Ishika ne Deepak ki sabhi harkate Nandini ko bata di thi, Nandini ka turant Deepak ka muh todne ko mann karne laga, Lekin ishika ne usko rok diya



Ishika: Lekin tum ayi na? Ab aisi bestie ho to darna kya?



Nandini: Enough! Abhi ye maske se kaam nahi chale ga, Eshu, Tumhe Vishnu ki yaadein bhulani ho gi.



Ishika: Hmm ~



Nandini ne ek baar ishika ko daikha to wo uncomfortable ho rahi thi, Nandini ne usko aur force karna sahi nahi samjha aur usko khud relax hone dena chaha.


Nandini: Fine! Lekin ab agar chichora kuch bhi kare to udhar se bhaag ana ya phir uska auzaar kaat ke ana, Samajh gayi?


Ishika(Smile): Samajh gayi! Ab tum uska kuch na kaat dena........Thanks!


Nandini: Chal ab ye drame band ker de! Kal mile gye, Bye!


*Click*


*Thud*


Ishika car se baahir aa gayi, Nandini usko wave ker ke udhar se chali gayi, Ishika bhi andar chali gayi.


“Di!”


Ishika ko peeche se awaaz ayi to usne peeche daikha, Uske peeche se Tanu haath me kuch packets pakde bhaagte huwe aa rahi thi.


Ishika: Tanu, Ye sab kya hai? Aur yun bhaag kyu rahi ho?


Tanu(Gasping): Di.....huh......Di, Main ap ka wait ker rahi thi! Actually, Main khana banana seekhna chahti hu.


Ishika: What?


Tanu: Yup! Main kuch banana chahti hu.


Ishika: Aur ye sab khana banane ke liye ingredients hai?


Tanu(Nod): Yup! Main ne sushmita Aunty se pucha tha, Unhone list bana di, Main sab kuch khud pasand ker ke layi hu.


Ishika(Smile): Good! Phir kya banane wali ho?


Tanu: Biriyaniiii!


Ishika: Yummy! Aisa karo tum fresh ho lo tab tak main bhi shower le leti hu, Phir hum kitchen me mile gye?


Tanu: Okay!


Tanu andar bhaag gayi, Uske andar hote he ishika ne paas rakhi chair ko pakad liya, Uski halat abhi bhi theek nahi thi, Usne check up karwa liya tha, Lekin doctor ke according wo bilkul theek thi.


Ishika sab se bachte huwe uske kamre ki taraf chal di, Uska aim abhi uska kamra tha, Uske kadam ladkhada rahe the, Lekin wo aage badhti rahi.


*Woof*


Usko ek taraf se fluffy ki awaaz ayi, Usne udhar daikha to fluffy Aarav ke kamre ke baahir khari huwi thi, Ishika apne kamre me pohanchna chahti thi, Lekin uske kadam udhar ki taraf badh he nahi rahe the.


Ishika: Ye main kya ker rahi hu?


Ishika ke kadam khud he Aarav ke kamre ki taraf badhne lage, Uska dimagh usko rukne ke liye keh raha tha, Lekin uska shariri aur dil usko aage badha rahe the.


Ishika Aarav ke kamre ka darwaza khol ker andar aa gayi, Kamre me koi bhi nahi tha, Ishika aage badhne lagi usko ek chair per Aarav ka blazer rakha huwa dikh gaya.


Ishika ne blazer uthaya aur usko le ker Aarav ke bed per gir gayi, Usne blazer zor se bheench liya, Usko Aarav ki khushbu aa rahi thi blazer se, Ishika usko naak ke paas rakh ker lait gayi.


Ishika: Ye kya ker diya hai tum ne mujhe?


Ishika ne kaha aur uski aankhe bhaari hone lagi, Ishika wanhi Aarav ke bed per laiti huwi soo gayi
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 5K words ka tha, Umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aye ga Target hamara wohi hai 90 likes ke liye, Milte hai agle update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]

Very powerful and super update