Fantasy Un-Deikhi Muhabbat (2)

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Index​	Family Introduction​
Main Character Introduction in Detail​	Some Dialogue​

 

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Update--8​

Mueed: Ek min haan sab waheen hn jungle pura khali hai.

Mein: Uda de.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Mein aur Jhon Gadi se ja rahey they abhi Jungle thoda sa hi Cross kia tha k ek dhamaka sunayee dia dhamaka itna zor daar tha k humarey kaan kch sec k liey band ho gaey they hum wahan se nikley aur sehar se door ek ghar main gaey.

Attorney General: Jis ka darr tha wohi hua abhi khaber milli hai k jis jungle main who Terrorist rehtey they wahan dhamaka hua hai aur wahan takreeban 200 se zyada laashein milli hn.

Baba: Mein ne tou pehley hi kaha tha.

Attorney General: Ab tou maloom per hi gya hai k aap ka beta Djævel hai tou usey Griftaar krna ho ga humein.

Baba: Aap ko lagta hai k aap merey betey ko pakad saktey hn.

Attorney General: Haan kiun nai aap k Betey ko kon nai janta hum abhi usey Griftar krney k liey Army bheijh detey hn.

Baba: Jis ko marney k liey aap ki army aur Police naakam rahi us ko merey betey ne 1 ghantey main khatam kr dia us ko pakadney k liey aap apni army bheijh rahey hn jantey hn America, Russia, China aur Uk jesay mulk k Head us sey kaam krwatey hn who aap ko usey griftaar krney ko kahein gey maan lia ijazat mill gai phr bhi like I said before you can't even touch his shadow.

Attorney General: Tou Theek hai hum Aap ko griftar kr letey hn aap k peeshay peeshay tou who aaye ga hi na.

Baba: Showk se kijeay lekin ek baat kaan khol kr sun lein Ontario Canada k Naqsay se Khatam ho jaey ga ager Nishani rahi bhi Tou Kabristan k Naam pe rahey gi Acha mein chalta hn meri Beti aa gai ho gi mujhey us sey milna hai Ager aap ka irada ab bhi mujhey Griftar krney ka hai tou merey ghar Police bheijh dijeay ga.

Ami: Mera bacha Meri jaan kesa hai ab kaheen chout tou nai lagi.

Choti: Mama mera Sir bhari hai dard ho raha hai.

Ami: Aaja mein tujhey sula doon jab sou k uthey gi na tou theek ho jaey ga.

Ami choti ko apney room main le gaeen aur usey sula dia aur bahir aa gaeen yahan Mueed aur Imran beithey baatein kr rahey they Ami bhi haal main aa k beith gaen.

Ami: Aly kahan hai who theek tou hai na.

Mueed: G who bilkul theek hai 1 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Awaz: Kon 1 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Jab sab ne awaz ki traf deikha tou Baba aa gaey they Baba bhi un k sath beith gaey.

Baba: Kahan hai meri bachi theek tou hai na.

Ami: G bilkul theek hai sou rahi hai bas sir bhari tha aur sir dard kr raha tha.

Baba: Theek hai abhi souney do baad main mill loon ga Aly kahan hai.

Mueed: Asal main Terry ne Choti ko kidnap kia tha tou us pe inaam bhi hai usi ko maar k Parcel krna hai bas 1 se 2 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Baba: (shocked) Terry Gabriel?

Mueed: G wohi.

Mein: Jhon Camera on kr her Media k Channel pe live jaey yeh.

Jhon: Yes sir.

Jhon ne Camera On kia aur Laptop pe kch kia jis sey Duniya k sarey barey Media Channel Hack ho gaey aur us pe Ek chair pe beitha Shaksh nazer aaney laga jo k filhaal behosh tha jesay hi yeh scene hua Her badey Mulkon main hulchal mach gai kiun k sab jantey they k yeh Terry Gabriel hai mein us k pass gya aur usey hosh main laya us ne apni aankhein kholeen aur idher udher deikhney laga khud ko nayee jagah deikh k heran hua aur samney mujhey deikh k Shocked bhi hua.

Terry: Tum mein kahan hn.

Djævel: Tum es waqt Duniya main Nowhere ho tumhein duniya ka koi bhi shaksh ya koi bhi Technology nai doondh sakti samney camera deikh rahey ho Aaj Duniya ka her Shaksh tumhein deikh raha hai jin ka pesa tum ne chori kia hai.

Terry: Lekin hum tou wahan Jungle main they aur merey aadmion ka kia hua.

Djævel: Who sab marey gaey ab tumhari bari hai.

Terry: Tum asal main ho Kon?

Djævel: Mein Burayee krney walon ka Soul Reaper hn jantey ho mein kitney logon ko maar chuka hn 10999 tumhein mila 11000.

Terry: Tum Insaan nai ho saktey.

Djævel: Bilkul sahi kaha mein Insan nai hn Insan hota tou 10999 jo ab tuk mar chukey hn who zinda hotey es k liey dill Murda krna perta hai baton main bht time waste kr lia ab tumhara time ho chuka hai so Good Bye.

Mein ne Talwar nikali aur ek hi jhatkey main us ki Gerdan dhar se alag kr di us k baad mein Camerey k pass aaya.

Djævel: Es k body parts main bheijh raha hn Airport se wasool kr lena.

Mein Jhon ko kaam de k wahan se nikla aur Ghar ki traf nikal para 45 min main ghar pouncha tou sab hall main beithey they siwaey Choti k mein un k pass ja k beith gya.

Ami: Beta tu theek tou hai na.

Mein: G Ami mein theek hn Choti kahan hai.

Ami: Sou rahi hai.

Mein: Who theek tou hai na.

Ami: Haan beta who bilkul theek hai bas sir main dard tha es liey sou rahi hai.

Baba: Aur kia bana Terry ka.

Mein: Body Parts parcel kr diey hn.

 

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[Naik]

Update--6

Ami: Per tum ne tou apney Baba ko kaha hai na k 5 ghantey tuk kch nai kro gey.

Mein: Who unhey yahan se bheijney k liey kaha hai Mein zyada deir tuk intezaar kr nai sakta.

Waheen Doosri traf Baba Ontario ki Cabinet Office gaey yahan unho ne Attorney General aur Ministers ko bulwa lia tha sab hall main beithey they aur baba aur un main behas chal rahi thi.

Baba: Aap ko jaldi se meri beti ko lana ho ga aap k pass 5 ghantey hn.

Attorney General: Seriously, Aap achi trhah se jantey hn k aap ki beti ko kis ne kidnap kia hai aur es waqt kahan hai who khud apni ek army rakhta hai hum chah k bhi koi aesa kaam nai kr saktey jissey Public ki ungliyan hum pe uthein hum un se baat krney ki koshish kr rahey hn U know that.

Baba: Lekin merey betey ko kon samjhaye ga who pura pagal hai apni behan ko le k us ki jaan basti hai us main usi ne aapko 5 ghantey diey hn werna.

Attorney General: Werna kia.

Baba: Who es sehar ko Canada k Naqsay se hi mita de ga.

Baba ki baat sun k wahan sab hansney lagey kiun k un k nazdeek yeh ek Joke se kam nai tha lekin Baba serious khadey they.

Attorney General: Kia karey ga aap ka beta haan kia karey ga yeh Joke hai haan ek Sehar ko khatam krna joke hai.

Baba: Aap nai jantey k mera Beta kon hai ager jaan letey tou meri baat aesay hans k hawa main na uda detey.

Attorney General: Jantey hn Gov ko Dhamki deney se aap k betey k sath kia ho ga.

Baba: Ohhh U don’t even know what my Son really is U can’t even touch his Shadow.

Attorney General: We will not Arrest your son we will kill him if he done some stupidity that we don’t like.

Baba: Aap ne Djævel ka naam suna hai.

Yeh naam suntey hi wahan beithey sab k sab ek dafa khadey ho gaey aur phr beith gaey lekin sab aankhein phadey Baba ko deikh rahey they k yeh naam unho ne kiun lia.

Attorney General: ( ghabraey huey ) Yeh naam aap ne kiun lia es naam ka es case se kia connection hai.

Baba: TTP ne Female American doctor ko kidnap kr lia tha aur us ka Sir kaat k Public kia tha who Djævel ki Friend thi tou aap ko maloom ho ga k Djævel ne TTP ka kia haal kia tha jisey NATO nai rok pai usey akeley ne 90% khatam kr dia tha.

Attorney General: Yeh humein maloom hai mein yeh puch raha hn k yahan us ka kia kaam hai yahan us ka naam kiun lia aap ne.

Baba: Ab jab us ki behan ko koi Kidnap karey ga tou who kahan chup beithey ga bulkey pehley se zyada tabahi machaye ga.

Attorney General: ( ghabratey huey ) Matlab aap ka beta.

Baba: G mera Beta hi Djævel hai.

Tabhi Baba ka phone baja unho ne deikha tou Ami ki call thi.

Baba: Haan Salma bolo kia baat hai.

Ami: Aly nikal chukka hai.

Ami ki baat sun k baba Shocked ho gaey aur dharam se chair pe beith gaey.

Baba: Theek hai.

Attorney General: Kia hua.

Baba: Aap late ho chukey ho mera beta nikal chukka hai.

Attorney General: What? Aap ne kaha tha k 5 ghantey hn humarey pass.

Baba: Shaid usey location pata chal gai hai who risk nai leta bas ab yeh dua krein k us ki Behan ko hulki si bhi kharosh na aaye ho werna who tou marein gey hi sath main Ontario main abadi ho gi ya nai.

Mein: Mueed mera Mask tyaar hai na.

Mueed: Already tyaar hai.

Mein: Aaj Canada bhi Djævel ka asal roop deikhey ga.

Mueed: Merey liey kia hukam hai.

Mein: Jesay hi Jhon se location pata chalti hai wahan chal aur merey isharey ka wait kr Choti ko le k nikal jaen mein wahan sab sambhal loon ga.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Mein: Haan Jhon bol kia pata chala.

Jhon: Sir it’s Terry behind this.

Yeh suntey hi Mueed ne mari break who bhi aesi k Car ne drift mari.

Mueed: Tumharey kehney ka matlab who Terry Gabriel hai.

Jhon: Yes sir.

Mein: Theek hai Location batao.

Jhon: I’m sending on your phone.

Mein ne Conference call lagayee.

Awaz: Who’s there?

Mein: Djævel.

Yeh naam suntey hi kch deir santi rahi aur wahan se kch kusr pusr ki awazein aayen us k baad jaldi main phone pakda gya yeh they American President, UK PM, Russian President, Chinese President.

Awaz: Yes Djævel.

Mein: I’m about to kill Terry Gabriel your amount.

American President: $1B

UK PM: 50M Euro.

Russian President: From me $1.5B.

Chinese President: I will give u $2B

Mein: I’m sending you the Account Number transfer it you will get his body parts.

Sab: Ok.

Mein: Mueed inhey woh account number send kr jesay hi pesay aayen usey Choti k account main transfer kr dein yaad rahey koi trace na kr paey.

Mueed: Ho gya.

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[Naik]

Update--7​

Mein: Mueed inhey woh account number send kr jesay hi pesay aayen usey Choti k account main transfer kr dein yaad rahey koi trace na kr paey.

Mueed: Ho gya.

Ontario ka ek hissa jo k Forest main pheila hua hai lekin wahan ek Terrorist group ne qabza kr rakha tha jo k sarey k sarey Forest main pheiley huey they aur us Forest k dermyan main ek mehal type ghar tha jo k en ka head office type tha yahan en ka leader rehta tha Security k sath.

Es group ko koi bhi nai janta tha na hi es k head ko koi janta tha k kon hai aur yeh Group kia chahta hai Govt of Canada ne bhi kayee baar nipatney ki koshish ki lekin nai kr pai koi na koi aesa chakker chal jata k enhey peechay hanta perta lekin aaj yeh Group Djævel k hath chad gya tha.

Terry Gabriel American Nationalist tha jis ne American, UK, Russia, China aur bht se badey mulkon ki Economy ko Nuqsaan pounchaya tha aur terrorist attack krwaey they yeh basically IT se belong krta tha jis ne Tamam Badey Mulkon k Banks se paisa chura k apney accounts main transfer krwaya tha aur unhi paison se terrorist attack kerwaey they Raqam kch $80B ki thi jo k es ne churayee thi.

Es pe un tamam Mulkon ne Head Money rakhi thi jinhey es ne loota tha jab Aly ki call American President, UK PM, Russian President aur Chinese President ko mili aur unhey pata chala k Djævel Terry ko marney ja raha hai tou unho ne apni Price Berha di kiun k unhey yakeen tha k Terry ab zyada time k liey Zinda nai bachey ga.

Mueed; Amount aa gai aur yeh gai Choti k account main ek baat bata yeh sab Choti k account main kiun who tou choti hai usey es ka maloom bhi nai tou yeh sab kiun.

Mein: Meri Kismat bht khraab hai ager aesa din aaya k mujhey ghar shodna para ya mein mara gya tou Choti ko koi takleef na ho Zindagi main who Rani ban k rahey that it.

Mueed: Djævel ko marney main kis ki himmat.

Mein: Djævel ko marney main himmat na ho lekin Aly pe humla tou ho sakta hai na Duniya nai janti k Djævel kon hai aur na hi janey nai tou Family pe khatra berh jaey ga.

Mueed ne Gadi roki Jhon ander beith gya aur Gadi phr se chalney lagi.

Jhon: Sir Weapon are ready aur humein bas thoda aur aagey jana hai wahan ek ghar main saman hai us ko le k hum Pedal hi jaengey kiun k us k 1 Km k baad hi Jungle shuru ho jata hai Mueed us ghar k pass hi rukey ga.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Mueed ne Gadi ek ghar k samney roki jo k shupa hua tha Mein ander gya kaprey change kiey Mask pehna pichay do Talwar latkayeen Jhon ne bhi kaprey change kiey aur Ek sniper uthayee jis pe silencer tha aur us ki 10 mag bhi le leen aur dono nikley Jungle ki traf yahan Jhon ghaib ho gya aur Mein Samney se chalta hua janey laga.

Jab Mein Jungle k samney pouncha tou wahan mojud 10 Terrorist merey samney aa gaey aur mujhey gheir lia.

1: Kon ho tum aur yahan kia krney aaye ho jantey nai yahan aana manah hai even Police aur Army ko bhi.

Mein: Djævel.

1: Kon Djævel.

Mein: Soul Reaper Djævel.

Meri Awaz kaheen aur se sun k unho ne jab meri traf deikha tou mein un k peechay khada tha jungle k ander ki traf tabhi koi neechay gira jab unho ne deikha tou who #1 tha jo mujh se baat kr raha tha us ka sir hi jism se alag ho chukka tha unhey apni aankhon pe yakeen hi nai hua k itni jaldi within Sec koi kesay ek jagah se move ho k doosri jagah ja sakta hai upper se apney sathi ka hall deikh k hi darey huey they.

Abhi who kch krtey un sabhi k body parts un k jism se alag ho chukey they aur who mar chukey they Mein phr se aagey berhney laga ab scene yeh tha k Terry apney room main beitha sarey Jungle pe nazer rakhta tha kiun k who IT main master tha tou us ne Setlite se access le rakhi thi jab bhi Jungle main kaheen masla hota tou Terry apney bandon ko us location pe rawana kr deta lekin yahan baat ulat thi yeh baat Mujhey maloom thi aur us ka tod tha Mueed jo k khud IT main Phd holder tha ( Joke tha itni umer main kon Phd krta hai ) us ne us ka system hi hack kr lia tha aur usey wohi dikha raha tha jo usey dikhana chahta tha.

Mein aagey berh raha tha phr se samna hua es baar yeh hua k aadhey mein ne marey aadhon ki khopriyan Jhon ne kholeen mein phr se aagey berhney laga esi trhah us mehal numa ghar tuk pounch gya jo k Security main ghira hua tha wahan takreeban 30 k kareeb bandey they aur sirf bandey hi nai Janwer type bndey jo k Terry ne apney liey khaas chun k rakhey they.

Mein: Jhon position le le aur zyada se zyada khatam kr merey pass time nai hai werna mein akela enhey marta.

Jhon: G sir.

Mein: Mueed Ready reh Jhon Choti ko le k kisi bhi waqt aa sakta hai jesay hi Choti terey pass pounchay tu Terry ka system unlock kr dein aur nikal jaen yahan se.

Mueed: Theek hai Aly.

Mein ne un pe humla kr dia aur Jhon ne bhi un ki khopriyan kholni shuru kr dein Shareer se hi janwer nai they takat main bhi janwer they lekin apney ko kia apney ko tou bas katna hai mein wohi krney laga Rasta clear kr k mein Ghar k ander gya tou ander Terry hall main hi beitha tha aur thoda dara hua bhi tha mein us k pass ja k khada ho gya.

Mein: Meri Behan kahan hai.

Terry: That room.

Mein wahan gya tou Choti bed pe behosh leti hui thi mein us k pass gya usey goad main uthaya aur bahir le aaya mein ne Jhon ko ander bula lia tha usey Choti ko de k bheijh dia.

Mein: So Terry yahan shupa beitha hai tu tou.

Terry: So.

Mein: Kch nai terey sir pe bht bhari inam hai ager tu ne meri behan ko Kidnap na kia hota tou shaid aagey bhi jeeta kia dushmani hai teri merey baap se.

Terry: Mera kaam tujhey pata hi ho ga bank accounts hack krna aur lootna terey baap ka bhi krnachahta tha kiun k us main bht zyada raqam hai lekin nai kr paya I can’t hack that account zindagi main pehli baar fail hua esliey usey dhamki di nai mana tou us ki beti ko Kidnap kia k shaid maan jaey lekin.

Mein: Teri itni buri kismet thi k who Djævel ki behan nikli.

Terry: Haan.

Mein: Haan Mueed bol.

Mueed: Choti merey pass aa gai hai.

Mein: Theek hai who bag Jhon ko de k yahan bheijh aur 5 min baad Terry ka system unlock kr dein.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Mein: Tou mein kahan tha haan ab terey sath kia ho ga mager tention na le tujhey moqa doon ga bas thoda intezaar kr le.

Jhon: Sir Bag.

Mein: Filhall apney pass rakho aur Terry Mian apney jitney bhi sathi hn jungle main un ko yahan bula le tujhey ek moqa aur deta hn ager who mar gaey tou tu bhi marey ga ager mein mar gya tou tu Djævel ban jaen.

Terry: Theek hai.

Terry ne sab terrorist ko apney mehal aaney ko kaha aur sab ko ek sath ander aaney ko kaha aur yahan mojud mujhey khatam krney ko kaha jesay hi Terry ne msg de dia tou Mein ne us ki gerdan pe kch kia jissey who behosh ho gya.

Mein: Jhon jaldi se es Building ko bomb se berh do jaldi aur niklo yahan se.

Jhon: Yes sir.

Mein ne Terry ko uthaya aur nikla bahir Jhon ne bhi Bomb fit kr diey they phr hum wahan se nikley aur gadi main Terry ko dala aur nikal gaey.

Mueed: Haan Aly bol.

Mein: Deikh sab ikhatta ho gaey Terry k ghar.

Mueed: Ek min haan sab waheen hn jungle pura khali hai.

Mein: Uda de.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Action scene thoda or khaternaak tareeke likha ja sakta tha lekin chalo koyi nahi
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[Naik]

Update--8​

Mueed: Ek min haan sab waheen hn jungle pura khali hai.

Mein: Uda de.

Mueed: Theek hai.

Mein aur Jhon Gadi se ja rahey they abhi Jungle thoda sa hi Cross kia tha k ek dhamaka sunayee dia dhamaka itna zor daar tha k humarey kaan kch sec k liey band ho gaey they hum wahan se nikley aur sehar se door ek ghar main gaey.

Attorney General: Jis ka darr tha wohi hua abhi khaber milli hai k jis jungle main who Terrorist rehtey they wahan dhamaka hua hai aur wahan takreeban 200 se zyada laashein milli hn.

Baba: Mein ne tou pehley hi kaha tha.

Attorney General: Ab tou maloom per hi gya hai k aap ka beta Djævel hai tou usey Griftaar krna ho ga humein.

Baba: Aap ko lagta hai k aap merey betey ko pakad saktey hn.

Attorney General: Haan kiun nai aap k Betey ko kon nai janta hum abhi usey Griftar krney k liey Army bheijh detey hn.

Baba: Jis ko marney k liey aap ki army aur Police naakam rahi us ko merey betey ne 1 ghantey main khatam kr dia us ko pakadney k liey aap apni army bheijh rahey hn jantey hn America, Russia, China aur Uk jesay mulk k Head us sey kaam krwatey hn who aap ko usey griftaar krney ko kahein gey maan lia ijazat mill gai phr bhi like I said before you can't even touch his shadow.

Attorney General: Tou Theek hai hum Aap ko griftar kr letey hn aap k peeshay peeshay tou who aaye ga hi na.

Baba: Showk se kijeay lekin ek baat kaan khol kr sun lein Ontario Canada k Naqsay se Khatam ho jaey ga ager Nishani rahi bhi Tou Kabristan k Naam pe rahey gi Acha mein chalta hn meri Beti aa gai ho gi mujhey us sey milna hai Ager aap ka irada ab bhi mujhey Griftar krney ka hai tou merey ghar Police bheijh dijeay ga.

Ami: Mera bacha Meri jaan kesa hai ab kaheen chout tou nai lagi.

Choti: Mama mera Sir bhari hai dard ho raha hai.

Ami: Aaja mein tujhey sula doon jab sou k uthey gi na tou theek ho jaey ga.

Ami choti ko apney room main le gaeen aur usey sula dia aur bahir aa gaeen yahan Mueed aur Imran beithey baatein kr rahey they Ami bhi haal main aa k beith gaen.

Ami: Aly kahan hai who theek tou hai na.

Mueed: G who bilkul theek hai 1 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Awaz: Kon 1 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Jab sab ne awaz ki traf deikha tou Baba aa gaey they Baba bhi un k sath beith gaey.

Baba: Kahan hai meri bachi theek tou hai na.

Ami: G bilkul theek hai sou rahi hai bas sir bhari tha aur sir dard kr raha tha.

Baba: Theek hai abhi souney do baad main mill loon ga Aly kahan hai.

Mueed: Asal main Terry ne Choti ko kidnap kia tha tou us pe inaam bhi hai usi ko maar k Parcel krna hai bas 1 se 2 ghantey main aa jaey ga.

Baba: (shocked) Terry Gabriel?

Mueed: G wohi.

Mein: Jhon Camera on kr her Media k Channel pe live jaey yeh.

Jhon: Yes sir.

Jhon ne Camera On kia aur Laptop pe kch kia jis sey Duniya k sarey barey Media Channel Hack ho gaey aur us pe Ek chair pe beitha Shaksh nazer aaney laga jo k filhaal behosh tha jesay hi yeh scene hua Her badey Mulkon main hulchal mach gai kiun k sab jantey they k yeh Terry Gabriel hai mein us k pass gya aur usey hosh main laya us ne apni aankhein kholeen aur idher udher deikhney laga khud ko nayee jagah deikh k heran hua aur samney mujhey deikh k Shocked bhi hua.

Terry: Tum mein kahan hn.

Djævel: Tum es waqt Duniya main Nowhere ho tumhein duniya ka koi bhi shaksh ya koi bhi Technology nai doondh sakti samney camera deikh rahey ho Aaj Duniya ka her Shaksh tumhein deikh raha hai jin ka pesa tum ne chori kia hai.

Terry: Lekin hum tou wahan Jungle main they aur merey aadmion ka kia hua.

Djævel: Who sab marey gaey ab tumhari bari hai.

Terry: Tum asal main ho Kon?

Djævel: Mein Burayee krney walon ka Soul Reaper hn jantey ho mein kitney logon ko maar chuka hn 10999 tumhein mila 11000.

Terry: Tum Insaan nai ho saktey.

Djævel: Bilkul sahi kaha mein Insan nai hn Insan hota tou 10999 jo ab tuk mar chukey hn who zinda hotey es k liey dill Murda krna perta hai baton main bht time waste kr lia ab tumhara time ho chuka hai so Good Bye.

Mein ne Talwar nikali aur ek hi jhatkey main us ki Gerdan dhar se alag kr di us k baad mein Camerey k pass aaya.

Djævel: Es k body parts main bheijh raha hn Airport se wasool kr lena.

Mein Jhon ko kaam de k wahan se nikla aur Ghar ki traf nikal para 45 min main ghar pouncha tou sab hall main beithey they siwaey Choti k mein un k pass ja k beith gya.

Ami: Beta tu theek tou hai na.

Mein: G Ami mein theek hn Choti kahan hai.

Ami: Sou rahi hai.

Mein: Who theek tou hai na.

Ami: Haan beta who bilkul theek hai bas sir main dard tha es liey sou rahi hai.

Baba: Aur kia bana Terry ka.

Mein: Body Parts parcel kr diey hn.

Aise bande ko itni asaan maut thoda or tadpana tha tab marte baherhal jo bhi tha zaberdast tha
Dekhte h ab aage kia hota h
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[King]

Superb update

 

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"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

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