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mai komal ke ghar pahuch gaya. ab mai soch raha tha uske ghar ka bell bajaun ya nahi. komal gate kholegi bhi ya nahi. jab mai class 7 me tha tab komal ke ghar aaya tha kyunki ek class project mujhe aur komal ko saath me karna tha. aaj itne din baad aakar thoda ajib lag raha tha. mai fir bhi door bell baja diya.
kuch der me gate khula aur saamne se koml aayi. komal jaise hi mujhe dekhi wo thoda chouk gayi.
komal boli-ravi tum yahan...
mai to soch rakha tha mujhe kya bolna hai.
mai bola-haan wo thoda tumse kaam tha. mai PN college me admission le raha hoon. form bhi le aaya aaj to usme mujhe kuch kuch samajh nahi aa raha isliye socha tumse help le loon. koi problem to nahi hai na. problem hai to bata do. mai baad me puch lunga.
mera baat sunkar wo ajib tarike se mujhe dekhne lagi.
komal boli-lekin tum to science liye the 12th me. PN college me to science hai hi nahi.
mai bola-haan wahi to isliye to form me doubt hai.
mai fir bola-tum agar bura na mano to mai tumhare ghar ke andar aa jau baith ke baat kar lenge yahan gate pe khade khade achha nahi lag raha.
komal ko fir se ajib laga kyunki ek to mai achanak se uske ghar aa gaya ab mai uske ghar me andar aane ki baat kar raha hoon.
ab komal bhi mujhe bachpan se jaanti thi to achanak se mana nahi kar paayi.
wo boli-aao andar baith ke baat karte hai.
fir hum dono komal ke ghar me andar aa gaye aur bahar wale kamre me baith gaye.
mai bola-aunty kahan hai dikh nahi rahi.
meri baat sunte hi is baar komal thoda kathor hokar boli-jis kaam se aaye ho wo kaam karo. aunty kahan hai auncle kahan hai ye sab se kya karoge. tum apne kaam se aaye ho ya meri mummy papa se milne aaye ho.
maine socha nahi tha komal itna rude hokar bolegi lekin mai bola-sorry sorry aur mai apna form nikala aur us se puchne laga ki commerce me koun sa subject easy rahega wo koun sa subject lene wali hai. komal ye sab mujhe achhe se bata di.
mai bola-thank you komal aur mai uske ghar se nikalne laga.
jaise hi mai gate se nikalne wala tha komal boli-ravi...
aur mai ghum gaya.
komal boli-sorryyyy.....aur komal ki ankh nam ho gayi.
abhi itna hua hi tha ki andar se jor se awaj aaya - koun ghus aaya hai humare ghar me bahar niklo. bahar niklo...
ye sunte hi komal mere taraf se doud ke apne maa ke pass gayi aur bolne lagi-maa ye anjaan nahi hai.. mera friend hai... mera friend hai..
ye bol bol kar komal apne maa ko andar wale kamre me le gayi.
mai to bas darwaje pe khada tha aur apni kismat pe muskura raha tha lekin mujhe komal ke liye dukh bhi ho raha tha.. mujhe aaj pata chal gaya ki kyun komal ke mama ji ne mujhe chuna. komal ki maa alzheimer ki patient hai aur ye baat mai ek jhalak me hi bata sakta hoon kyunki jab mera medical complete hua tha aur mai ek doctor ke under practice kar raha tha tab mujhe ek alzheimer ka patient mila tha. ye bimari aksar 65-70 saal ke logon ko hoti hai isme log chije bulne lag jate hai. lekin ye bimari khatranak tab ban jata hai jab ye kisi ke saath koi trauma juda ho. matlab kisi pe kabhi atyachar hua ho ya fir koi dukh kisi ko khone ka. isme log ek hi baat ya ek hi action bahut baar repeat karte hai. anjaani chijo se ya anjaane logon se darte hai.
mai kuch soch raha tha tab tak komal apne maa ko shant kara kar aayi aur mujh dekhte hi boli-sorryyyy tum jaao tum khade kyun ho. mera ye roj ka hai. meri maa ko ek problem hai.
mai bola-tumhari maa ko alzheimer hai. matlab bhulne ki bimari.
meri baat sunte hi komal mujhe ek tak dekhne lag gayi jaise soch rahi ho ise kaise pata chala kyunki koi sirf ek baar me aise nahi bata sakta.
waise to mai bahut bada doctor tha mujhe in sab ka bahut jaankari tha lekin ye jaankari mai dikha nahi sakta tha. logon ke najron me mai abhi ek 12th pass ladka tha.
mai bola- komal bura na maano to mai tumhari maa ki dawayi dekh sakta hoon.
fir mai ek jhuthi kahani banate hue bola-mere gaav ki ek taai ji thi unhe bhi yahi bimari tha . mai unke saath bahut samay raha hoon to mujhe bahut kuch idea hai.
meri baat sunte hi komal boli-tum baitho mai aati hoon.
mai fir se uske ghar me akar baith gaya. komal andar se medical report aur dawa sab lekar aayi.
komal boli- jab mai class 10th me gayi thi tab se maa ko ye bimari hai. bahut sare doctor ko dikhaya lekin fayda nahi hua. fir mere chacha ek doctor ke baare me bataye jinke pass ek mahine se dikha rahi hoon. ab maa me kaafi sudhar hai.
fir komal doctor ki badayi karte hue boli-tumhe pata hai ye doctor bahut padhe likhe hai. india me doctory fir london se therepy fir america me practice karke aaye hai.
mai komal ki baaton pe jada dhyan na dete hue unka medical report dekh raha tha kyunki mere andar ka doctor jaag raha tha.
report dekhne ke baad mai pahla dawa dekha aur usi me mujhe thoda ajib laga.
mai komal ko pucha-aunty ko low blood pressure hai kya.
koml boli-nahi..
mujhe ye baat khatka kyunki ek dawa aisa tha jo blood pressure badhata hai.
mai aur dawa dekhne laga tabhi komal boli-mai ek dawa to lana hi bhool gayi. ye dawa doctor sir ka best hai. ye sirf unke pass hi milta hai aur koi medical shop me nahi milta.
ye bolkar wo andar gayi tabtak fir se komal ki maa kamre se nikli aur mujhe thoda ajib najron se dekhne lagi jaise kuch yaad karne ki kosis kar rahi ho.
mai samajh gaya wo mujhe pahchan ne ki kosis kar rahi hai.
mai bola-ji mai ravi hoon. ravi... komal ka friend.
aunty ke mooh se bas itna hi nikal paya ravi.. tabtak komal aa gayi.
komal apne maa ko boli-maa ye ravi hai mera friend hai. koi problem nahi hai aap chalo aaram karo aur komal fir se aunty ko andar bistar pe sula kar aa gayi.
komal fir jo dawa nikali wo dawa dekhte hi mera past mere saamne aa gaya. komal ke haath me ek packet me aise chote chote laal laal goli the.
ye bilkul thik waisa hi red dikh raha tha jaisa mujhe komal ke mama ne diya tha thik time travel ke samay.
mai turant komal se pucha- agli baar doctor ke pass tum kab jaogi aunty ko lekar.
komal boli-4 din baad jayenge.
mai bola-mai bhi saath chalun kya.
komal boli-uski jarurat nahi hai.
mai bola-tum akeli jaati ho mai bhi jaunga to tumhe thoda help ho jayega aur mai bhi doctor sir se mil lunga.
komal boli-thik hai.
mai bola-achha mai chalta hoon. mai yahi baitha rahunga to jhuth muth ka tumhe pareshan karta rahunga. ye bolkar mai use sari dawai aur report wapas kar diya lekin dawa wapas karte samay ek red wali mai chura liya aur wahan se nikal gaya.
mai fir wahan se sidha ghar aaya. maa din ka khana bana chuki thi to hum dono khana khaye fir maa sone chali gayi.
mai maa ki diary pahle padh chuka tha lekin maa diary me bahut jagah date nahi likhti isliye mujhe jan na tha abhi tak diary me kya kya likha hua jis se mujhe pata chal jayega maa ko aage kab kab problem hua tha. kyunki maa diary me kisi ka naam nahi likhti thi bas apne sapne aur apna dukh yahi likhti thi.
maa soyi hui thi to mai ekdum chori chori kamre me gaya akdum chor jaisa dheere se almirah khola aur maa ka diary nikal kar dusre kamre me aa gaya aur diary dekhne laga. jab mai diary me dekh liya kahan tak likha hua hai to mujhe andaja hua ki jaise hi mai is ghar se nikla tha maa ko kuch to problem aaya tha jiske baad maa yahan rahna nahi chahti thi aur maa yahan se bhai ke pass chali gayi thi. aur agar mai sahi hoon to mere jaane ke 7 din ke andar hi maa ko problem suru ho gaya tha. koi tha yahan is sahar me jo maa ko pareshan kar raha tha. aur samay ke hisab se in 7 din me hi wo hone wala hai matlab mujhe ghar ke bahar bhi najar rakhna padega. ye soch ke mujhe thoda tension to hua lekin mujhe khud pe bharosa tha ki mai maa ki madad kar paunga.
mai wapas se diary rakh diya aur maa ke pass hi let gaya.