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Dev the lover

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Maza aeyga Ravyaan plan Bana raha tha Dev or anu ke liye or Dev ne use hi fasa diya maza aeyga ladai me
Haa bhai ravyaan ka par plane toh pata chalega hi thanks bhai
 
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Bhut hi jabardast update
To dev ne cobra gang ke sabhi dushmano ko bilkul hi silently kill kar diya
To ravayaan ananya ke pass pahuch gaya lekin ab uska samna dev se hoga dekte hai ab aage kya hota hai
Thank you bhai
Abb kiska samane kaise rahega wahi dekhana intersting hai
 

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UPDATE 24

( Raat Ki Jung End )


Raat ka andhera aur bhi gehra ho chuka tha. Viper ka hideout ek battlefield ban gaya tha. Khoon ki boo hawa me ghul chuki thi, aur zameen par sirf laashon ka dher tha. Dev ke haathon se maut ka tamasha abhi bhi jaari tha. Cobra gang ka ek bhi aadmi zinda nahi bacha thaโ€ฆ sirf ek ko chhod karโ€”Ravyaan.

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Haste hue, bechaini chhupane ki koshish me) "Dev! Tum bhi? Tumhe toh Cobra ke logon ka samna karna chahiye thaโ€ฆ"

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Pistol ghumate hue, ek thandi awaaz me) "Kiya tha. Sab khatam ho chuke hain."

Ravyaan ke chehre ka rang udd gaya. Halki si thartharahat uske haathon me dikh rahi thi. Usne ek nazar aaspaas daaliโ€”har taraf sirf maut ka nazara tha.

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Aankhon me darr) "Tuโ€ฆ tune sabko maar diya?"

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ "Aur tu jo next haiโ€ฆ bas uska intezaar kar raha hoon."

Tabhi, peeche se ek awaz aayi. Ek confident, nishchit awaz.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ "Bhai, isse aapke upar chhodna chahiye ya main khud nipta loon?"

Dev ne dheere se muskurakar Ananya ki taraf dekha. Uske chehre pe ab na dar tha, na confusionโ€”sirf ek alag si chamak thi. Dev ne phir apni nazar Ravyaan ki taraf ghumai.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Ek thandi awaaz me) "Iska faisla sirf main karunga."

Ravyaan ne bhaagne ki koshish ki, lekin Ananya ne turant ek kadam aage badhakar uska rasta rok diya.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ (Gusse se) "Tu bhaag nahi sakta, Ravyaan."

Ravyaan ne ek pal bhi waste nahi kiyaโ€”usne apni pistol uthai aur seedha Ananya par target kiya!

๐Ÿ’ฅ BANG!

Lekin jaise hi usne trigger dabaaya, Ananya ka body ekdum natural reflex ke saath neeche jhuk gaya. Jaise koi anjaan shakti uske movements guide kar rahi ho. Goli uske baal ke ek strand ko bhi nahi chhoo saki.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ (Ek ajeeb sa confidence) "Tu slow hai, Ravyaan."

Usne Ravyaan ke haath par ek zor ka punch maara, jisse pistol uske haath se gir gayi. Ek aur baar Ravyaan ne punch maarne ki koshish ki, magar Ananya neeche jhuk gayi aur ek low kick se uske ghutne pe attack kar diya. Ravyaan ka balance hil gaya. Uski aankhon me dar thaโ€”Ananya waise nahi lad rahi thi jaise pehle.

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Ghabrakar) "Teriโ€ฆ"

Aur uske kehne se pehle Ananya ka ek aur punch uske face pe padaโ€” jo itna zor ka tha ki Ravyaan peeche gir gaya.

Ravyaan ne dekha ki base me rukna maut bulane jaisa hai. Wo turant ek side flip maar kar peeche hata, aur ek hidden sidearm nikal li!

๐Ÿ’ฅ BANG! BANG!

Goli seedha Dev ke taraf ja rahi thi, magar Dev ne bina kisi hesitation ke ek side roll kiya aur ek stone pillar ke piche cover le liya.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Andar hi andar) "Jungle tak bhaag ke bhi tu zinda nahi bachegaโ€ฆ"

Ravyaan bina peeche dekhe jungle ki taraf daud gaya! Uske jooton ke neeche sukhaye hue patton ki awaaz raat ki sannate me gunj rahi thi. Saans phuli hui thi, magar dar usse aur tez bhaga raha tha.

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Andar hi andar) "Bas ek baar jungle pahunch jaun, phir tu mujhe kabhi nahi dhoond paayega, Dev!"

Par Dev waisa shikaar nahi tha jo apni shikaar ko bhaagne de.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Ek chhoti si smile) "Tujhe laga tu bhaag sakega? Galti kar di."

Dev aur Ananya dono jungle ke andher me ek shadow ki tarah ghus gaye. Dev ka har kadam, har movement planned thaโ€”jaise uske dimaag me ek maansik map ho.

Jungle ka andhera ghana ho chuka tha. Hawa me mitti aur sard raat ki boo thi. Peeche se patton ki halki awaaz aayiโ€”jaise koi jungle me slowly move kar raha ho.

Aur ussi momentโ€ฆ

๐Ÿ’ฅ PISHH!

Ek single suppressed shot!

Goli seedha Ravyaan ke pair me lagi. Uska shareer ek jhatke se neeche gira.

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Cheekh kar) "AAHHH!!"

Uske haathon me mitti chipak gayi thi, aur pair se khoon beh raha tha. Usne bhaagne ki koshish ki, magar ab wo sirf apni maut ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Ek kadam uske saamne pada.

Phir ek aur.

Dev dheere se jungle ke andher se ek shadow ki tarah aage badha. Uska chehra ekdum emotionless tha. Koi shabd nahi, koi emotion nahiโ€”sirf maut ki sannata.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ "Bhai, iska kaam ab khatam."

Dev ne apni pistol Ravyaan ke forehead par laga di.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Cold voice) "Kya socha tha, ki meri Anu ko apni baato me fasa lega?"

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ (Darte hue) "Dev, pleaseโ€ฆ yaar ek mauka deโ€ฆ!"

Dev ne uski aankhon me dekha, aur ek second ka break liya.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ "Mauka chahiye?"

๐Ÿ‘ค Ravyaan โ€“ "Haanโ€ฆ pleaseโ€ฆ"

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Ek chhoti si hansi ke saath) "Chal, ek diya."

๐Ÿ’ฅ PISHH!

Ek aur suppressed shot.

Ek second me silence.

Ravyaan ka laash neeche gir gayi. Jungle ki mitti uske khoon se bhig chuki thi.

Dev ne dheere se apni gun holster me rakhi, aur Ananya ki taraf dekha.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ (Dheere se) "Khatam?"

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Ek chhoti si smile) "Abhi sirf shuruwaat hai."

Jungle ki thandi hawa ab bhi behti ja rahi thi. Pedon ki halki sarasarahat aur mitti ki basi khushbu ne raat ko aur gehra bana diya tha. Dev aur Ananya ab ek bhayanak ladaayi jeet chuke the. Unke saamne Ravyaan ki laash padi thi, khoon abhi bhi zameen par tapak raha tha.

Ananya ki aankhon me ek ajeeb si chamak thiโ€”jeet ki khushi, ek naya ehsaas. Uska saans tez chal raha tha, lekin uske chehre pe sukoon tha.

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ (Halki hasi ke saath) "Bhai, hum jeet gaye!"

Dev uske chehre ko ghoorta raha, jaise usme kuch dhoondh raha ho. Uski aankhon me emotions ki ek gehri lehar thiโ€”pyaar, fikr, aur ek ajeeb sa rishta jo dono ko samajh nahi aata tha.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Gehri awaaz me) "Haan Anu, magar asli jung abhi baaki hai."

Ananya ne Dev ki aankhon me dekha, ek pal ke liye sab kuch ruk gaya. Uska dil tez dhadak raha tha, jaise uss raat ki syaahi me sirf dono ek dusre ke liye bane ho.

Aur phir, bina soche, bina kisi sharam ke, Ananya ne apne haath Dev ke gale me daal diye aur uske lips ko apne lips se lock kar liya.

๐Ÿ’‹ CHUMMA ๐Ÿ’‹

Ek gehra, intense, aur pyaar bhara kiss.

Dev ek pal ke liye ekdum still ho gaya. Ananya ki saansein uske chehre pe lag rahi thi. Uske lips naram the, pyaar bhare, jaise ek ajeeb si lagan thi us kiss me.

Lekin uske samajhne se pehle hi, ek tez hawa ka jhoka aaya!

๐ŸŒช๏ธ SHHHHHH...!

Hawa ekdum tez ho gayi. Mitti, patte, aur dhool charo taraf udne lage. Dev ne turant apna haath Ananya ki aankhon pe rakh diya.

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Dheere se) "Anu, aankhein band rakho, dhool chali jaaye toh bataana."

Hawa aur tez ho gayi, jaise kisi ne jaan ke isko aur badhaya ho. Dev ki grip aur tight ho gayi, Ananya uske bilkul paas thi.

Phir jaise hi hawa rukiโ€ฆ

๐Ÿ‘€ Ananya ne dheere se apni aankhein kholiโ€ฆ

Aur dono ne jo dekha, usne unke hosh uda diye!

๐Ÿฉธ Ravyaan ki body gayab thi!

๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€๐Ÿฆฐ Ananya โ€“ (Chauk ke) "Bhai... bhai... body kahan gayi??"

๐Ÿฆพ Dev โ€“ (Shock me) "Yeh kaise ho sakta haiโ€ฆ?"

Ravyaan ka laash wahi thi sirf ek minute pehle. Lekin ab, sirf khoon zameen par tha woh bhi naam matraโ€ฆ laash ka koi naam-o-nishaan nahi tha!

Kya sach me Ravyaan mar chuka tha? Ya koi aur taqat is jungle me thi jo Dev aur Ananya ko abhi samajh nahi aayi thiโ€ฆ?
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