Romance The unwanted shadi

[ak_kkr]

Tuesday ko aayega update yan Wednesday ko

Bro it's tuesday today. Plz give the next update.

 

[ravi0909]

B

 

[ravi0909]

A

 

[krit68]

Bas apne viwe badane k liya ate hai aur bada sa u likh dete hai

Abe tumlog pagal ho kya
Wo likh hi rha hoga usme post krne me problem aa gya shayad
Ek baar phle bhi ho chuka h

Wait Karo raat tak aa hi jayega update

 

[sam207]

Bhai kuch log bahut complaint kar rahae hai mein bas yeh bta du ki mein bahut zyada busy hu . Mujhe views badane ka koi shonk nhi hai agar hota toh koi incest yan interfaith story likh kar views bada leta . Waise bhi yeh story meri priority nhi hai . Meri priority meri personal life hai .mein bas story time paas le liye likh raha hu aur iske mujhe koi paise nhi milte hai .meri zindagi mein 10 pareshaniya hai unko chorr ke mein story nhi likh sakta jab mujhe time milega story likh dunga nhi toh nhi likhunga

 

[operas]

Bhai itna serious mat lo aise 2 char gadhe har jagah hote hai, aap Marzi se update do

Bhai kuch log bahut complaint kar rahae hai mein bas yeh bta du ki mein bahut zyada busy hu . Mujhe views badane ka koi shonk nhi hai agar hota toh koi incest yan interfaith story likh kar views bada leta . Waise bhi yeh story meri priority nhi hai . Meri priority meri personal life hai .mein bas story time paas le liye likh raha hu aur iske mujhe koi paise nhi milte hai .meri zindagi mein 10 pareshaniya hai unko chorr ke mein story nhi likh sakta jab mujhe time milega story likh dunga nhi toh nhi likhunga

 

[ravi0909]

Baki sab gadhe hai ...ek akle tu hosiyar hai ...hai na bhai

 

[kingkhankar]

Yehi site hi manhoos hey.
Jab koi writer story start karta hey to koi personal problem nehi hota.
Jab story thoda flow mein chalta hey to pata nehi kahan se personal problems madhumakhi ke jeisa life mein ghus jata hey.
Yeh sirf ek writer ka issue nehi hey, maximum writers is stage se gujarte hein.
Jo readers jyada involved/attached rahte hein story mein, woh sab se jyada cheated feel karte hein.

Abhi sirf yehi pray kar sakte hein ki writers ke personal problems kuch kam ho.

 

[11 ster fan]

Yehi site hi manhoos hey.
Jab koi writer story start karta hey to koi personal problem nehi hota.
Jab story thoda flow mein chalta hey to pata nehi kahan se personal problems madhumakhi ke jeisa life mein ghus jata hey.
Yeh sirf ek writer ka issue nehi hey, maximum writers is stage se gujarte hein.
Jo readers jyada involved/attached rahte hein story mein, woh sab se jyada cheated feel karte hein.

Abhi sirf yehi pray kar sakte hein ki writers ke personal problems kuch kam h

Maine to kai story aise hi band hote dekh liya hai ....lekin " koi to rok lo " by pritam da abhi bhi personal problem ke wajah se ruke hue story me par hai

 

[kingkhankar]

Maine to kai story aise hi band hote dekh liya hai ....lekin " koi to rok lo " by pritam da abhi bhi personal problem ke wajah se ruke hue story me par hai

Pritam da is a great writer. You can see the dedication he had during his writing days.
"Koi to rok lo" story mein hero ke alawa baki sab enjoy kiye the, sab se jyada to saayad hero ke papa

I still read it some times for time pass..