Fantasy The Super Boy

[The Rock Aditya]

Update 40
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[The Rock Aditya]

Zabardast update bhai keep posting

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Bahut hi lajawab update

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Awesome update

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Nice update bro

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Bhut bhut

shandar updated bro

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Awesome update bro

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[The Rock Aditya]

Wahhh bohat shandar update bro Maza a gya

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Nice update

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Supper fantastic update

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[The Rock Aditya]

Bhai apki story bhut achi hai aur concept bji bilkul new hai. Lekin is main jo beech k scene hain woh thore lambe lagte hain mtlb aesa lgta hai ke un scenes ko ziyada kheencha ja raha hai hata k unhe skip kiya jaskta hai. Main koi professional writer to nahe hon lekin agar parhne main ek aam bande ko yeh lamba lag raha hai or main usse skip bhi krrha hon to phr us main changes bante hain.

Thanks bro for your lovely comments aise hi sath bane rahiye.
Bhai apki bat sahi hai ki mai beech me scene ko lamba kar deta hu lekin aap yakin maniye agar mai us scene ko skip kar diya story padhne me aap sab ko maja nhi aayega aur mai mai is story me jo bhi likhta hu pure details ke sath likhta hu