Fantasy The Super Boy

[The Rock Aditya]

Update 47
Update posted bro deri ke liye mafi chahta hu dosto​

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Jabardast update
Shanaya abhi bhi Utna khul ker support nahi ker paa rahi hai Pratik ka ,bahar bhale hi Shanaya abhi nhi batana chah rahi hai Pratik ke baare me but Ghar me tou wo uska full support tou ker hi sakti hai ,ghar me tou wo dono pati patni hai ....khair dekhte hai kab Shanaya puri tarah se Pritik ka support karegi aur pushpa me kis baat ki akad hai jo wo itna ukhadi ukhadi rahti hai

Shanaya bahar aur ghar dono khul kar is liye suport nhi kar rahi hai kyuki wo abhi pratik ko apna pati nhi manti hai aur jis din wo pratik ko apna pati man legi wo uske liye puri duniya se lad jayegi aur puspa me akad is bat ki hai ki wo khud paise wali aur pratik ko ek garib samjhti hai dusri bat wo malhotra house se nikale jane ka karan partik ko hi manti hai.
Waise thanks for comment bro aise hi sath bane rahe

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Bahut hi badhiya
Bahut hi badhiya roman-chik update Bhai

Thanks bro for your lovely comments

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Bhai ye hua to alag hi maza aa jayega dono ki chemistry dekhkar, inki Bonding majbut karao aap .tab shanaya nd family ko realise ho ki kya khoya h .
jo inlogo ne gamand pal rakha h use tuthe dekhne me maza aayega

Abhi to nhi lekin bad me ye ho sakta hai kyuki abhi to pratik ke dil me sirf aur sirf Shanaya hai ho sakta hai aage chal kar koi aisa mod aaye ki payal is story ka 2nd heroin ban jaye ye sab to aage story me pata chalega.
Waise thanks for comment

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Nice Update Bro Keep Posting

Thanks bro

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Bhut hi badhiya update

Thanks bro

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Shandar update bro,

Thanks bro

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Bhai kuch kha nhi ja sakta ki kya hoga ... Jo sakta hai payal pratik sa bahut pyaar karna lag Jaye aur itna ki woh pratik ko pane ka leeya kuch bhi kare toh wahi Shanaya sayad abhi dost mani hai pratik ko ... Ab dekhta hai aage kya kya hoga inn dono pati patni ka jiwn mai ....

aisa ho sakta hai nhi aisa hi hoga payal ke man me pratik ke liye ek tarfa pyar hoga aur ye pyar pagalpan me bhi badal sakta hai.
Thanks bro for your lovely comments

 

[The Rock Aditya]

ये दो बार हो गया।

खैर अच्छा अपडेट।

पर प्लीज पायल को अभी इंक्लूड मत करो।

Thanks bro for your lovely comments mai is par dhyan nhi diya thanks mujhe batane ke liye

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Niraj ki or achche se dhulayi honi chahiye thi or sabse badi pratik ko apna chehra dhak ker Niraj or uske dosto ki dhulayi kerni chahiye uske baad shanaya or Payal ke samne apna chehra khilna chahiye
Yeh Pushpa me kia baat ka attitude h kia pratik achcha nahi dikhta kia bas uska pehnawa abhi modern tiyp nahi isliye or paisa nahi isliye or jis dein yeh sab ho gaya tab kia
Baherhal yeh hadsa ne Shanaya ke Dil me Pratik ke soft corner tow ban hi gaya h or lagta h Payal ka bhi yahi haal h
Baherhal ab dekhte h Narayan ke birthday party me pratik ki beizzati hoti h ya fir wah wahi
Badhiya shaandar update

Thanks for your Suggestion bro.
But kya hai na ki ek bar ki galti to bhagwan bhi maf kar deta hai is liye pratik Rohit ko jyada nhi mara aur ha pratik ne apna chehra is liye nhi dhaka ki uska pura dhyan Shanaya par tha ki kahi use kuchh ho na jaye is liye usse galti ho gayi lekin ek aur bat hai Rohit pratik ka chehra dekh liya hai is liye wo aisa kuchh karega ki pratik pure mumbai par raj karne lagega aur wo kaise karega ye apko story me pata chalega.
Ye Puspa ka attitude nhi balki wo pratik par gusa hai kyuki wo malhotra house se nikalane ka karan pratik ko hi samajhti hai aur use aisa lagta hai ki uski beti ke sadi pratik ho gayi hai is liye uski beti ke jindagi barbad ho gaya.
Thanks bro for your lovely comments aise hi sath bane rahe

 

[The Rock Aditya]

Nice update
Keep going

Thanks bro