Thriller THE PUNISHMENT (Completed)

[AK 25]

Hello dosto, Kaise hain aap sab,,,,,

Ek lambe waqt ke baad main ek baar fir se aap sabke saamne haazir hua hu ek writer ke roop me. Mera maanna hai ki hame god se jo gift milta hai use ignore karke ham sukoon se ji nahi sakte. Aap kitna bhi us cheez ko apne andar daba ke rakhiye magar uski aab aapko apne asar se zarur prabhaavit karti rahti hai. Uske baad majbur ho kar hi sahi magar aapko us raaste par aana hi hota hai jiske liye vidhata ne us khaas gift ke sath aapko bheja hota hai.

Mere kuch aziz dosto ne mujhe kayi baar kaha ki main apni kahaniyo ko restart karu magar na iske pahle likhne ki ichchha hoti thi aur na hi wakt aur halaat iske anukool hote the. Khair baate to bahut hain jo hoti rahengi magar yaha par zikra uska hona zaruri hai jiske liye ye thread khola hai.

THE PUNISHMENT​

Ek short murder mystery likhne ki koshish ki hai. Ummid karta hu aap sabko pasand aayegi. Aap sabka sath aur pyaar milta rahega yahi aasha karta hu.

for new story bawa

 

[Chutiyadr]

Hello dosto, Kaise hain aap sab,,,,,

Ek lambe waqt ke baad main ek baar fir se aap sabke saamne haazir hua hu ek writer ke roop me. Mera maanna hai ki hame god se jo gift milta hai use ignore karke ham sukoon se ji nahi sakte. Aap kitna bhi us cheez ko apne andar daba ke rakhiye magar uski aab aapko apne asar se zarur prabhaavit karti rahti hai. Uske baad majbur ho kar hi sahi magar aapko us raaste par aana hi hota hai jiske liye vidhata ne us khaas gift ke sath aapko bheja hota hai.

Mere kuch aziz dosto ne mujhe kayi baar kaha ki main apni kahaniyo ko restart karu magar na iske pahle likhne ki ichchha hoti thi aur na hi wakt aur halaat iske anukool hote the. Khair baate to bahut hain jo hoti rahengi magar yaha par zikra uska hona zaruri hai jiske liye ye thread khola hai.

THE PUNISHMENT​

Ek short murder mystery likhne ki koshish ki hai. Ummid karta hu aap sabko pasand aayegi. Aap sabka sath aur pyaar milta rahega yahi aasha karta hu.

congratulations masoom bhai...
Story shuru kar di bataya bhi nahi

 

[Black water]

Congratulations for new story

 

[TheBlackBlood]

for new story thread

Shukriya iron bhai,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

for new story bawa

Shukriya AK 25 bhai,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

congratulations masoom bhai...
Story shuru kar di bataya bhi nahi

Shukriya Chutiyadr sahab,,,,,

Aap galat ilzaam laga rahe hain mujh par. Kal maine aapko tag kiya tha yahi batane ke liye magar aap aaye hi nahi to meri kya galti,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Congratulations ? for new story

Shukriya ABHISHEK TRIPATHI bhai,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Finally....

Shukriya Pta nhi bhai,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Congratulations for new story

Shukriya Black water bhai,,,,

 

[Naina]

Hello dosto, Kaise hain aap sab,,,,,

Ek lambe waqt ke baad main ek baar fir se aap sabke saamne haazir hua hu ek writer ke roop me. Mera maanna hai ki hame god se jo gift milta hai use ignore karke ham sukoon se ji nahi sakte. Aap kitna bhi us cheez ko apne andar daba ke rakhiye magar uski aab aapko apne asar se zarur prabhaavit karti rahti hai. Uske baad majbur ho kar hi sahi magar aapko us raaste par aana hi hota hai jiske liye vidhata ne us khaas gift ke sath aapko bheja hota hai.

Mere kuch aziz dosto ne mujhe kayi baar kaha ki main apni kahaniyo ko restart karu magar na iske pahle likhne ki ichchha hoti thi aur na hi wakt aur halaat iske anukool hote the. Khair baate to bahut hain jo hoti rahengi magar yaha par zikra uska hona zaruri hai jiske liye ye thread khola hai.

THE PUNISHMENT​

Ek short murder mystery likhne ki koshish ki hai. Ummid karta hu aap sabko pasand aayegi. Aap sabka sath aur pyaar milta rahega yahi aasha karta hu.

for new story Shubham ji....