• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy THE INHERITOR(A PATH TO DESTINY)

xforum

Welcome to xforum

Click anywhere to continue browsing...

What do you think about the story?

  • Story needs a change

    Votes: 2 5.0%
  • I should stop writing

    Votes: 2 5.0%
  • Story is good. Should be written like this

    Votes: 37 92.5%

  • Total voters
    40
Status
Not open for further replies.

Kratos

Anger can be a weapon if you can control it use it
1,297
4,247
159
ab tak aapne pada jaha rudra aur samaara apna pyar bhara din bitate hai..

update - 5

Ab aage..

rubal aur kaayra bhi ab bade ho gaye the..sab samajhne lage the..janha rubal bilkul rudra ki parchai thi. use bhi apne dad ki tarah ek successful businessman banna tha. rudra rubal me apni jhalki dekhta tha..wahi kaayra ke liye to rubal hi sab kuch tha aisa nahi tha ki wo samaara ko pyar nahi karti ya fir nitigya aur amayra but uske liye rubal ki har baat pahle aati thi dusro se. aur rubal bhi apni behno se pyar karta tha..but kaayra se uska jyada attachment tha. shayad twins hone ki wajah se aur rubal ko bhi yahi lagta ki wo un sab ka ek lauta bhai hai..jaha kayra aur rubal is waqt *** saal ka the. wahi unse teen saal choti nitigya thi. aur usse 2 saal choti amayra thi.

jab nitigya rubal ko kahti ki agar mom dad ek aur bhai le aaye to ispar rubal kuch nahi bolta tha..kyonki ek din usne samaara aur uski friend ko baat karte hue sun liya tha ki ab bas yaar chaar bacche ho gaye hai...ab aur nahi chaiye aur mere paas ladka aur ladki dono hai.

baki ki baate to rubal ke palle nahi padi but bacche nahi chahiye ye uske chote se bheje me baith chuki thi. to uski yahi soch ban chuki thi ki uska koi bhai ya bahan nahi aane wali..

aise hi december ke mahine me jaha itni kadake ki thand padti wahi rudra ko kisi company ki deal ke liye Russia jaana pada uske saath samaara bhi jaane wali thi. waise samaara business me kabhi itna interest nahi dikhati thi. wo tabhi interest leti jab usko lagta ki lena chahiye..kyonki rudra easily sab manage kar leta..but yaha russia ki deal ke liye samaara ka jana jaruri tha..kyonki rudra yaha par jo company khareed raha tha. wo usko samaara ke naam par purchase karne ki soch raha tha. to rudra aur samaara baccha party ko apni friend ke paas chodh kar russia ke liye nikal chuke.. apne privet jet se aur late night tak ye log russia pahuch bhi gaye the.

waha airport se seedha ye log hotel gaye kyon ki deal to ab kal hi sign ho paayegi..

ithake hone ke kaaran dono bed par girte hi so gaye.
dusra din inka company ki formality me hi beeta aur finally sham hone tak rudra ne company bhi khareed li. ab karne ke liye to kuch nahi tha to socha thand me russia ka maja liya jaaye. aise hi russia ghumte ghumte samaara ne bola ki rudra hum log Siberia chale ghumne..is thand me sibera ka maja hi kuch aur hoga..

rudra - pagal to nahi ho gayi ho waha lagbhag saal ke 12 hi mahine barf rahti hai aur is december me tumhe siberia ghumne ki padi hai.

samaara - main pagal nahi tum ho gaye ho..itna accha weather hai.chalo na baby.

rudra - achha weather abe ye mausam haddiya gala dene wala hai..

samaara - to tum nahi chal rahe ho...kahi tum thande to nahi pad gaye mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki mr. malik ki garmi ab khatam hone ke kagar par hai..aur by the waumy tumhari fitness kaha gayi...ghus gayi..

rudra - meri fitness par ungali mat karo main tumse jyada fit hoon. aur rahi baat garmi ki to uska jawab tumhe pata hai rubal, kaayra nitigya aur amayra ke roop me...apni ek eye wink karte hue...bolo ab chup kyon ho gayi madam.

samaara - chup raho tum..bas bakwaas karwa lo..muh nahi jaise gatar ho gaya ho.

rudra - are main to tumhe bol raha tha kahi waha ki barf me jam na jaao.

samaara - tum is baat ki tension mat lo..ab chalo jalidi waise bhi abhi after noon ka time hai..aur raat hone tak hum log aa jayenge.

rudra - chalo fir...ye log car se waha ke lie nikal lete hai..apne guards lo chodh kar kyonki mahashay ko apni biwi ke sath quality time bitana tha jo inke upar bhari padne wala tha...samaara ki jid kya rang layegi...aage dekhte hai.
 
Last edited:

Aryanv

Active Member
1,319
4,010
158
ab tak aapne pada jaha rudra aur samaara apna pyar bhara din bitate hai..

update - 5

Ab aage..

rubal aur kaayra bhi ab badi ho gaye the..sab samajhne lage the..janha rubal bilkul rudra ki parchai thi. use bhi apne dad ki tarah ek successful businessman banna tha. rudra rubal me apni jhalki dekhta tha..wahi kaayra ke liye to rubal hi sab kuch tha aisa nahi tha ki wo samaara ko pyar nahi karti ya fir nitigya aur amayra but uske liye rubal ki gmhar baat pahle aati thi dusro se. aur rubal bhi apni behno se pyar karta tha..but kaayra se uska jyada attachment tha. shayad twins hone ki wajah se aur rubal ko bhi yahi lagta ki wo un sab ka ek lauta bhai hai..rubal is waqt saat saal ka tha.

jab nitigya rubal ko kahti ki agar mom dad ek aur bhai le aaye to ispar rubal kuch nahi bolta tha..kyonki ek din usne samaara aur uski friend ko baat karte hue sun liya tha ki ab bas yaar chaar bacche ho gaye hai...ab aur nahi chaiye aur mere paas ladka auur ladki dono hai.

baki ki baate to rubal ke palle nahi padi but bacche nahi chahiye ye uske chote se bheje me baith chuki thi. to uski yahi soch ban chuki thi ki uska koi bhai ya bahan nahi aane wali..
aise hi december ke mahine me jaha itni kadake ki thand padti wahi rudra ko kisi company ki deal ke liye Russia jaana pada uske saath samaara bhi jaane wali thi. waise samaara business me kabhi itna interest nahi dikhati thi. wo tabhi interest leti jab usko lagta ki lena chahiye..kyonki rudra easily sab manage kar leta..but yaha russia ki deal ke liye samaara ka jana jaruri tha..kyonki rudra yaha par jo company khareed raha tha. wo usko samaara ke naam par purchase karne ki soch raha tha. to rudra aur samaara baccha party ko apni friend ke paas chodh kar russia ke liye nikal chuke.. apne privet jet se aur late night tak ye log rusaia pahuch bhi gaye the.

waha airport se seedha ye log hotel gaye kyon ki deal to ab kal hi sign ho paayegi..

ithake hone ke kaaran dono bed par girte hi so gaye.
dusra din inka company ki formality me hi beeta aur finally sham hone tak rudra ne company bhi khareed li. ab karne ke liye to kuch nahi tha to socha thand me russia ka maja liya jaaye. aise hi russia ghumte ghumte samaara ne bola ki rudra hum log Siberia chale ghumne..is thand me sibera ka maja hi kuch aur hoga..

rudra - pagal to nahi ho gayi ho waha lagbhag saal ke 12 hi mahine barf rahti hai aur is december me tumhe siberia ghumne ki padi hai.

samaara - main pagal nahi tum ho gaye ho..itna accha weather hai.chalo na baby.

rudra - achha weather abe ye mausam haddiya gala dene wala hai..

samaara - to tum nahi chal rahe ho...kahi tum thande to nahi pad gaye mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki mr. malik ki garmi ab khatam hone ke kagar par hai..aur by the waumy tumhari fitness kaha gayi...ghus gayi..

rudra - meri fitness par ungali mat karo main tumse jyada fit hoon. aur rahi baat garmi ki to uska jawab tumhe pata hai rubal, kaayra nitigya aur amayra ke roop me...apni ek eye wink karte hue...bolo ab chup kyon ho gayi madam.

samaara - chup raho tum..bas bakwaas karwa lo..muh nahi jaise gatar ho gaya ho.

rudra - are main to tumhe bol raha tha kahi waha ki barf me jam na jaao.

samaara - tum is baat ki tension mat lo..ab chalo jalidi waise bhi abhi after noon ka time hai..aur raat hone tak hum log aa jayenge.

rudra - chalo fir...ye log car se waha ke lie nikal lete hai..apne guards lo chodh kar kyonki mahashay ko apni biwi ke sath quality time bitana tha jo inke upar bhari padne wala tha...samaara ki jid kya rang layegi...aage dekhte hai.
Fantastic update
 

Kratos

Anger can be a weapon if you can control it use it
1,297
4,247
159
abhi tak hero ka koi sta pata nhi asa hi rha to story ka lora lg gayn ga
BC...story ke laude lage ya kuch aur tumhe tension lene ki jarurat nahi hai. likh main raha hoon. read karna ho to karo nahi to mat karo
 

Kratos

Anger can be a weapon if you can control it use it
1,297
4,247
159
Ab tak aapne padha ki rudra aur samaara ek business deal ke liye russia jaate hai. waha samaara siberia jaane ki jid karti hai. jispar rudra usko lekar Siberia chala jaata hai.

update - 6

Ab aage..

dono car se siberia jaate hai. chand ghanto ke safar ke baad jab ye log waha pahuchte hai..to waha ke najare me jaise dono ke hosh gumane ke liye kafi the. door tak faile hui barf ki chadar khili khili dhoop upar se december ka mahina...ek alag sa pal tha dono ke lie..ye log siberia pahuch kar waha aas paas ki jagah ghumte hue romance karne lagte hai.

quality time spend karne me itna kho jaate hai. ki time ka pata hi nahi chalta. kyonki kuch der baad sham bhi hone wali thi. suraj mano taiyaar khada tha doobne ke liye mahaj kuch ek ghante me..itne me samaara jid karti hai ki...

samaara - mujhe altai maountain jaana hai.
rudra - are you out of your mind..tumne time dekha hai ki kya hua hai. abhi sham hone wali hai mahaj kuch ghanto me aur hume wapas jaake ghar ke liye bhi nikalna hai..bacche waha akele hai..aur to aur mausam bhi kuch theek nahi lag raha.

samaara - rudra baby chalo na please. humare paas time hi kaha rahta hai. tum business me busy ho jaoge kuch time baad baacho ke school khul jaayenge fir wahi boring life..tumhara office, in logo ka school ab aaye hai to thoda ghumne me kya jaa raha hai. aur kaun sa humari flight chuti jaa rahi hai aye hum log apne plane se hai. hotel humara hai. fir kya tension aur rahi baat baccho ki to wo waha divya ke ghar me maje se hai..to unki bhi tension nahi hai.

rudra - kuch der sochte hue...hmmm chalo fir but iske baad sidhe hotel jaa ke samaan lekar NY ke liye rawana honge..aur mujhe is baat par koi discussion nahi chahiye.

samaara - ok..ok.!! par abhi to chalo nahi to baat karne ke chakkar me late ho jaayenge..pata nahi inka ye faisla kya rang laayega aage.

uske baad ye log altai mountain pe masti karte hue athkheliya karte romance karte hue nikal jaate hai..

altai mountain par pahuch kar...samaara aur rudra ke muh se ek sath wow...what a beauty kuch der time spend karne ke baad rudra kahta hai..samaara dekho suraj bhi doobne wala hai ab hume wapas chalna chahiye.

khair samaara ka man to nahi tha par ruk bhi to nahi sakte..in dono ke wapas nikalne tak suraj bhi doob chuka tha..mausam me is samay chalne wali sard hawao ka shor tha...jo inki kya kisi ki bhi haddi galane ke liye kaafi tha. ye log abhi aadhe raste par bhi nahi pahuche honge. jo hawa abhi halki halki chal rahi thi. wo bhi dheere dheere tej hone lagi..jispar rudra kahta hai..lagta hai tufaan aane wala hai..jaldi chalo samaara.

samaara - chal to rahi hoon ab kya udne lag jaau.

rudra - udne ka to pata nahi par abhi yaha se nahi nikle to jamne me time nahi lagega.

samaara - hmm..ye log teji se neeche utar hi rahe the. ki dekhte dekhte barfili hawao ne tufaan ka roop le liya..jisko dekh kar rudra aur samaara dono ke chehre aane wale pal ko soch kar peele pade hue the..samaaea pata nahi kya sochne me lagi thi..ki use kuch sunai nahi de raha tha.

rudra chillaya samaara socho nahi bhaago ab tej chalne se kuch nahi hoga bhagonwarna is tufaan me dafan hone me time nahi lagega..main isiliye kah raha tha..ye bolte hue rudra chup ho gaya kyonki samaara ki aankho me usne nami dekh li thi..

samaara - ruuuuddraaa hume kkkucch hoga tto nahi..bacche waha akele hai..mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye sab hoga..

rudra - kuch nahi hoga main hum dono ko yaha se sahi salamasalamat le kar jaunga.. ab bhago jaldi. jaldi bhagne ke chakkar me dono ludakte hue altai se neeche ludakne lage.ludakate hue ye log neeche jangal me ja pahuchte hai aur samaara ke hatho se rudra ka hath choot jata hai.

thodi der baadrudra ko hosh aata hai to wo apne aap ko jungle me paata hai..wo karhate hue utha hai..ludakne ki wajah se uske hath aur chehra thoda sa chil gaya tha. Aachanak use samaara ka dhyan aata hai..wo samaara samaara chillate hue dhoodhne lagta hai. par afsos kaafi cheekhne chillane ke baad bhi jab samaara ki koi aawaj nahi aati..rudra rone lagta hai chillane lagta uski cheekh uska dard us jungle ke har kone me suna jaa sakta tha..pagalo ki tarah betaahsha idhar se udhar hosh o hawaas khoye bhaga fir raha tha..honto par sirf ek naam samaara...akahir kaar thak haar kar baith jaata hai aur chillate hue rone lagta hai..usko lag raha tha ki agar samaara nahi mili to wo baccho se kya kahega ki wo unki mom ka dhyan nahi rakh paaya. kaise rahenge wo aur wo khud bhi kaise rahega..nahi nahi ye main kya soch raha hoon..kuch nahi ho sakta use jisne saari umra bhagwan ko nahi maana ab wo hi ro to kar please god mujhe milwa dijiye usse kaha dhudhdu please..tabhi koi aadmi uske paas aata hai. aur uske kandhe par haath rakh kar kahta hai kya tum theek ho.

rudra rote hue meri samaara nahi mil rahi..
aadmi - pahle relex ho jaao..chinta mat karo dono mil kar dhundhte hai..us aadmi ke rahne se rudra ko himmat mil rahi thi..kahir kuch waqt dhudhne ke baad unhe samaara mil bhi jaate hai..jo ki ek ped pe latki padi thi..rudra to samaara ko aise dekhte hi girne hi lagta hai..tab wo aadmi usse kahta hai..ki just calm agar tum panic karoge to use kaise sambhaloge..pahle use utar te hai dono mil kar samaara ko utarte hai neeche. usko rudra se jyada chot aayi hui thi aur sabse badi baat wo behosh thi. rudra use neeche leta kar samaara utho aakhe kholo dekho ab hum theek hai..samaara utho please aakhe kholo..par no response..

aadmi - aaram se ek kaam karo ise uthao mera cottage yahi paas me hai..wahi chal kar iska ilaj karte hai.

rudra uski baat maan kar fauran haa kar deta hai..kyonki is time wo unknown peraon uske liye angel se kam nahi tha.

kuch der yuhi chalne ke baad wonus person ke cottage me pahuch jate hai..andar ek room me bed par rudra samaara ko letata hai..aur hosh me lane ki koshish karta hai..tab wo aadmi kahta hai..

person - ruko ek kaam karo ye pila do isse hosh aa jayega thodi der me..

rudra usko dekhta hai..jiske hath me ek laal rang ka transparent liquid hota hai..tab wo aadmi kahta hai yakeen karo ise kuch nahi hoga..tab rudra us liquid ko samaara ke muh me daal deta hai...

person - tension na lo subah tak hosh me aa jaygi..filhal tum bhi chalo aur apni haalat theek kar lo nahi to tumhari wife ko accha nahi lagega hosh me aane ke baad iske baad wo log gate band karke bahar aa jate hai..jaha tudra apne ghav saaf karke bahar kursi me baith jaata hai..

tab wo aadmi kahta hai.ek kaam karo ye thodi lakdiya hai inko jala kar andar room me rakh do..kyonki yaha than to waise barah mahine rahti hai..par saal ke aakhir me kuch jyada hi..jis par rudra sahmati se jawab dekar un lakdiyo ko jalakar andar room me rakh deta hai.

rudra - insab je chakkar me tumhara naam to puchna hi bhool gaya. aur tumhara shukriya ada karna bhi..kya naam hai.

aadmi - mera naam bael hai..aur tumhara
rudra - rudra malik..
bael - the rudra malik..man with a billons of worth.
rudra - are aisa kuch nahi hai..aur sahi kahu to tumne aaj meri aur meri baccho ki life mujhe lauta di..agar aaj samaara ko kuch ho jaata to main bata nahi sakta ki main kya karta.
bael - hey..just relax kuch nahi hua hai use subah tak theek ho jaayegi..dekho raat bhi kaafi ho gayi hai ab tumhe bhi aaram karna chahiye. baaki baate subah karenge..chalo ek baar tumhari wife ko dekh lete hai..fir tum bhi aatmram karna..
rudra - chalo. uske baad dono room me aakar samaara ko dekhte hai.. jo kaap rahi hoti hai. jise dekhte hai rudra ghabra jaata hai. bael ise dekho mya ho raha hai..ye itna kaap kyon rahi hai.

bael - lagta hai thand se kaanp rahi hai.ek kaam karo tum iske paas let kar ise apne badan ki garmi do.

rudra - par abhi ye behosh hai..aur upar se aisi halat maine bina iski marji ke kuch nahi kiya fir ab kaise koi aur rasta nahi hai..

bael - koi aur nahi hai aur waise bhi tum iske husband ho. aur je jaruri hai..itna kah ke wo room band kar deta hai. aur idhar rudra samaara ke sare kaode nikalta hai. fir apne saare kapde nikal ke blanket ke andar let kar smaara ko garmi dene lagta hai..heat dete dete kab wo apna sperm uske nadar chodhta hai use bhi nahi pata chalta..aur dono neend ki aagosh me chale jaate hai..samaara ka kaapna bhi ab band ho gaya tha.idhar rudra bhi so chuka tha. par wahi aadhi raat me ek aadmi jungle ke andar chala jaa raha tha. uske hath me kaale kapde me lipti hui ek cheej thi. juch der chakne ke baad wo aadmi ek jagah par aake rukta hai..aur us cheej ke upar se wo kapda hatane lagta hai..dikhne me wo ek book thi..fir us book ko ek patthar pe rakh ke wo use kholta hai aur knife se apna hath kaat kar khoin ki kuch boonde us kitaab par girata hai aur ek prayer bolne lagta hai..jaise jaise wo prayer bol raha tha waise waise waha ka vatavarn bhi badalne laga hawaye joro se chalne lagi..aasman me baadal phatne lage the.msusam ka roop badalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte waha pe dhua failne laga aur us dhue se nikal kar 8 log khade hue...
ye 8 the..
Paimon - iske under 200 legend of demons hai.

Beleth - iske under 85 legends of demons hai.
Purson - 22 legends of demons ka ruler hai.
Asmodai - 72 and also have golden seal but idke under ke demons low level ke hai.
Vine - 36
Balam - 40 legends of demons ka ruler hai.
Zagan - 33 legends of demons ka ruler hai.
Belial - 80 legends of demons ka ruler hai.
kaam ho gaya bael. mere hisab se tumne apna kaam bhaut acche se kiya hoga.

bael - yes my lord jaisa aaone kaha tha waisa hi kiya..hai..

paimon - to chalo ritual shuru karte hai.
iske baad sab log us book ke charo aur khade ho jaate hai..aur fir
 
Last edited:
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top