Fantasy THE FIGHTER

[Vipul]

Update No 8



Main abhi un sab ko dekh kar situation ko samjhna ki koshish hi kar rha tha ka un main sa ak gunda ko gaand main zabrdast khujli hoi or wo bola

gunda.....dekh ka rha ho ba maro sala ko


main chahta to in sab bhen ka bhaiyon ko yhi mar sakta tha lekin is trha road pa main kisi ki nzar main nhi ana chahta tha is liya mana dor lga di jungle ki taraf jo ka kuch duri pr hi tha mujha bhagta dekh wo sab mera picha holiya


gunda 2....kya bhai is bacha ka liya ham sab ko la kar aya is ka liya to apna kallu hi kafi tha



gunda 1.....man me......biss na to bila tha ka ya bhut khatrnak ha asa ha wasa ha or ya ya to sala bhag rha ha apn logo sa hamin kya is ko tapka ka apna pasa la kr niklta hain..............pakro ba sala ko



Ab main bhagta hua jungla ka bich pohnch gya tha main wha pa ruka or un sab chmman chutiyo ka intezar karna laga itna wo sab lambi lambi sansain lata hua wha pohncha main to aaram sa khra tha sala itna bhgya tha jack na ab to kuch feel hi nhi hota jitna marzi bhag lo jab un sab ki sansain kuch thik hoi to main bola






Main.....kyu picha pra ho ba mera


gunda ........hamm hamm ak minute zara sans la lu hufffffff

kuch waqt bd jab sansain darust hoi sab ganduo ki




gunda......ham tera murder krna aya hain



Mana apna sir pit liya....to tab sa yha khra kya lorupanti kar rha ho jldi kro ba mujha ghar bhi jana ha


sab gunda mujha hairani sa ghoor rha tha ka ya kya bak rha ha phir sab meri taraf bhaga or ya mana nikali apni dagger phir kya tha ho gyi shuru maha bharat wo tha karib 40 50 or main akela main un ki tarf tazzi sa bhaga or wo meri taraf jha sa bhi main guzrta ga rha tha kisi ka hath pr cut lagata ja rha tha kisi ka sina pa jo bhi samna ata khi na khi dagger usa lag hi jata ab hal ya tha ka gunda dar sa aga nhi arha tha or main pura khoon sa sana pra tha gundo ki to halat hi patli ho gi thi koi yha pra tha to koi wha or main aaram sa khra tha baki jo 5 10 bach gya tha wo bhagna ko hua lekin main phela hi un sab ka pass pohnch chuka tha 9r phir kya tha


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khaccccccccccccchhh
khaccccccvccccccccvccccch

or sab nicha pra ro rha tha


Gunda1.....bhai bhai plz chor da plz chir da hamin ak baar sirf sirf ak baar chor da hamara biwi bacho ka kya ho ga


Main......salo bhenchodo nikammo phrla khyal nhi aya tum sab ko ka tumhara biwi bacha bhi hain maderchodo ab maro sab ja sab




Gunda....nhi nhi nhi bhai plz plz chor da ham teri gulami krain ga bhai plz plz chor da


Mujha in sab pr taras agya wasa bhi main in sab ko marna wala to tha nhi bs dara hi rha tha or ya sab fattu dar bhi gya or gulami walli baat sun kar ak idea aya mind main



Main.....thik ha main tum sab ko zinda chor du ga lekin aj sa tum mera liya kam kro ga wo bhi puri wafa dari ka sath ager koi ulta sidha plan kiya mera khilaf to main tum main sa kisi ko nhi maru ga janta ho kisa maru ga main




Gunda...darta hua...kis ko bhai


Main....tum sab ka ghar main ghus kar tumhara pura khandan ko kaat kar un ka tukra kar ka kutto ko khila du ga or tumhara har chahna wala or jan pehchan wala ka hath pair kaat kar road par bhik mangvau ga meri baat sun kar un sab ki phar 4×4 ho gyi sab darta hua


jiii bhai ham sab ap ka liya kaam krain ga



Main.gooood sab kafi samjhdar lgata ho to jhanduo tum sab ganduo ka koi kotha(Adda) ha kya or tum sab ka leader kon ha



Gunda 1...bhai haan hamara ak adda ha or in sab ka leader main hu


MAin....acha ha bhut acha to tera naam kya ha ba loru leader


Gunda...Parkash naam ha mera bhai




main .....to apna adda ka address do mujha kal main wha par au ga koi bhi wha ager mojjud na hua to sab ki gaand mari jai gi samjh or kal sab apna huliya bdal kar ana bhenchodo kya hal bna rakha ha ba khuda ka itna lamba baal irni lambi darhi
or ya gold chains bhenchod kya ha ya or apna hathyar dekho ba sala aouth indian movies sa inspired ho kya sab kal acha kapra phen kar or clean shave ho kar pohnch gana adda pa or ya sab main kal tum logo sa discuess karu ga ka kon lora mujha marna chahta ha or ha ba tum main sa koi jao or shopping maal sa branded kapra or shoes la kar ao jaldi bhago ak gunda jisa thori kam chot lagi thi wo forran gya or kuch dair main kuch acha kapra la aya mana purana kapro sa khoon wgara saaf kiya or ak side ho kar new kapra or shoes phana or chal diya ghar ki tarf aj in sab ka chakker main pura 2 hours late ho gya tha main jab ghar pohncha to mom gate pr hi khari thi


Mom....kha tha tu kab sa darwaza pr kharri hu asa karta ha koi mujha lga to phir sa mujha cho......or ya bol kar wo rina lagi mana bhut mushkil sa mom ko chup karwaya or ander chal diya ya din bhi asa hi guzr gya agli subha main khushi khushi collage ki taraf chal diya main jab collage main enter hua to mujha rishab dikha jo thori hi door tha main us ki tarf hi ga rha tha ka achank zooooooooooooom or ya mainurta hua ja kar dur gira

zooooooooooooom or ya mainurta hua ja kar dur gira
Bhai yeh kya sallu bhai bi aa gaye story main aur ate hi karname bhi suru kar diye
Nice update bhai

 

[Rocky 4]

Dost thoda update bada Kardo agar itna time hi lena hai, Vaise bahut interesting hai story..... I really appreciate you

 

[Pass1234]

Mst Bhai
Ur raghuvir sing ka Kuch smj Nahi aya

 

[Winsam20]

Nice update bro waiting for next

 

[Black water]

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

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[Aryanv]

Awesome update

 

[u.sir.name]

Update no 7


MEGA UPDATE





Main paidal ghar ki tarf ga rha tha or apni hi soch main gum tha ka sab kasa react krain ga mujha dekh kr kya khu ga sab sa kha tha oura 1.6 saal achank mujha kuch feel hua main foran plta ak gadi kafi speed sa ak kr takrna walli thi ka main side ho gya car ki ak side mujha thori touch hoi or mera balance bigar gya or main nicha gir gya kuch log dorta hua aya or meri help ki uthna main iland pa training sa or dhyan main baithna ki wjha sa meri sences kafi acha ho gya tha is liya aj main bach gya warna main to aj gya tha itna main ak larki nikli car sa dikhna main kafi hot thi short dress or car dekh kr lag rha tha ka koi amer baap ki bigri hoi aulaad ha




Larki....dikhta nhi ha kya andha ya road kya tera bapp ka ha jo asa chal rha ha bech main marna ha kya pata nhi kha kha sa a jata hain bikhri na ho to



wasa bikhri sun kr ajeeb nhiblga kyu ka meei halaat bikhri sa zyda buri thi is waqt


Main ......pr main to apni side main chal rha car to ap itni fast or carless ho kr chla rhi thi jasa ya road ap ka baap ka ho



Larki....tum teri itni aukaat janta ha main kon hu mera baap ka naam janta ha tu



Main....tera baap ka naam mujha kasa pata tera baap ragni kanth ha kya jo usa har koi jana ga



Itna main ak larka jo us ka sath hi bahir nikla tha wo aga aya


Larka.......zyda ur mat teri aukaat kya ha ba sala bikhari



bikhari ......bikhar......bikhari...bikhari sun sun kr main pak chuka tha ab mujha bhi gussa a rha tha


Larka .....sala maderccccccccc aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

is phela wo mujha galli deta mana ak kick mari su ka chest pa or wo urta hu dir ga kr us car sa takrya us ka mu sa khoon niklna lga or wo bheosh hogya or idhar sari public shock main bhi heran tha sala ak halki si kick hi to mari thi ya itna kyu dur ur gya shyad meri ohysical abilities kuch zyda hi bar gyi thi is sa phela ka public hosh main ati or wo larki kuch or bolti main wha sa chori chori katt liya




itna waqt bd apna ghar ko dekh rha tha ak alag hi feeling a rhi thi mujha chaha jitna bhi dukh diya ho is ghar na pr ghar to ghar hota ha na main aga brha or bell bjai kuch dar bd darwaza khula samna mom khri thi





Mom......ji khiya kisa milna ha ap ko


shyad is huliya ki wjha sa mom pehchan nhi rhi thi mujha


Main.....Maa


Mom itna sun kar phela to shock hoi phir dhyan sa mera chehra ko dekhna lagi




Mom......Kkkkkaarrn




Main....Maa


Mom roti hoi mera gla lag gi main mom ko chup krvana main lga hu tha pr mom to chup hona ka naam hi nhi la rhi ham gate pr hi khra tha or ata jata sab log hamin hi dekh rha tha main maa ko ander la kr gya maa ko to kuch hosh hi nhi tha ka kya ho rha ha main jab ander gya o sab ander hi tha main jab maa ko ander la kar aya to sab tezzi sa uth ka meri tarf ay koi mujha pehchan nhi ska jab mujha nhi pehchan nhi ski to in ki to baat hi or ha



Rahul....mom mom..kya hua ap ko a tuna kya kiya mom ka sath tu ha kon ander kis sa puch kr ghussa tu


main bilkul chup tha vanshika jldi sa pani la kr i mom a liya jab mom na pani piya or un ko kuch hosh aya to


maa .......karan tu agya beta tu agya tu tu mera samna ha mujha pata tha tu zarror aya ga mera bacha main jnti thi tujha kuch nhi huva sab jhoot bolta tha main jnti thi or phir sa mom rona lgi





Or mom ki baato na baki sab pr bomb phor diya sab herani sa meri tarf dekh rha tha



Dad... k karan tu zinda ha kha tha tu otna waqt tak ham sab ko lga tu tuu...


dad ki baat khtam hona sa pehla hi main bol pra




Main.. ...yhi na ka main mar gya tha


Dad a kar mera gla lag gya un ki aankho main ansu tha or meri aankhain herani sa phati pri thi ka yha to main shock da rha tha pr ya to ulta ho gya ya to mujha hi shock da rha hain in ko kab sa meri parva hona zarror koi natak kr rha hoon ga is waqt tamash krna thik nhi ho ga ya soch kr main is waqt chup hi rha us ka bd rahul bhi ak kr mujh sa mila pr na to wo khush tha or na hi naraz us to koi farak hi nhi pra shyad or vanshika bs itna bol kr nikal li ka tumhain dekh kr acha lga



Dad or mom na aankho main nami liya mujh sa bs ak hi swaal kiya ka main kha tha ab ta



Main.....mujha kuch logo na kidnap kar liya tha main bri mushkil sa un ka changul sa azad hu phir jab main wha sa nikla to pata chla ka main ak iland pr hu us iland pr koi boat ya ship nhi ati jati jati thi un kidnapers ko shyad lga ho ga ka koi jungli janwar mujha kha gya main 1.6 saal whi pr rha ak din wha sa ak ship guzri mana jab usa dekha to foran us ki taraf dora jab un logo kinazer mujh pr pari to wo is iland pr ak insam ko dekh kr bhut heran hua main unhain apni puri khani btayi ka kasa main wha pr puhncha or yha survive kiya us ka bd 3 din lga mujha yha pohnachna main jb yha pohncha to pata chla ka 1.6 saal bit chuka ha mujha gyab hua or phir foran main ap ka pass agya


Mom meri aatam katha jo ka sara rasta soch kr main aya tha sun kar bohat hi zyda emotional ho gi sab meri story asa sun rha tha jasa ka main koi zombie land sa akela bach kr aya hu



Mom...par beta apni halat to dekh ya sab kya huliya bna rkha ha


Main....mom us iland pr shopping malls or salons nhi tha


meri is baat pr sab hans diya ya baat mana thora mahol ko halka karna ka liya boli thi kyo ka mom dad kuch zyda hi dukhi ho rha tha mom ka to smjh main ata ha pr dad ka kuch samjh nhi a rha ka ya itna emotional kyu ho rha hain us ka bad mom mujha room main la gyi main ak baar mast sabun sa raggr raggr kr nhaya main jab towel band kr baher nikla tak to mom ak tak meri body ko hi dekha ga rhi thi


main ......kya hua mom asa kya dekh rhi hi

Mom...beta to itna waqt iland pr rha ya jim main itni achi body to sirf FIGHTERS ki hi joti ha



main....ara meri maa wha pr rha iland pa to sara kam khud krta tha or thori bhag dori main body bhi achi ho gyi


Mom...or teri hieght bhi to brh gyi ha


Mom....choro na ya sab ap bhi kya la kr beth gyi ho

phir main dad mujha bahir lagya main sirf 1 2saal bd aya tha lekin shher kuch bdla bdla sa lag rha tha dad mujha ak barbel shop pr la gya wha meri zara acha sa shave karwi mera baal bhi cut krwa kr stylish bna diya purana kapra to chotta ho gya tha so kuch shopping ki new cloths liya jab main cloth change kr ka apna ap ko mirror main dekha to



main....man me......maaaaa ki aaankh kya lag rha hu main bc main to chikna ho gya ba kya yaar main bhi khud ki tarif kar rha hu pr ho bhi ho : """ EAST AND WEST"""""

""" I AM THE BEST""""


Main jab nicha aya to sab ghar waka mujha hi ghoor ghoor kar dekh rha tha




Dad.......mera bacha to ak dam hero lag rha ha


Mom.....sach main karan tu bhut handsome lag rha ha


Vanshika.....Acha lag rha ho


or mana ghur kr usa dekha ya zindgi ka phela comment kiya tha usna mujh pr rahul to sala shyd jal rha tha apan sa dekh kr mu uder kar liya



Sab dinning table pr aith mera hi wait kar rha tha aj meri pasand ka khana bna tha nain jab khana baith to bc sara khana khtam krna kabd mujha kuch chain aya or sab phir sa mujha ghoorna lga bc kya ha ya sab jab dekho jhoorna lgta bhencho chamiya ho kya main man me main bola itna saal iland pr phal or ghaas pus kha kr gaand soj gyi thi



main....wo kafi din bd ghar ka khana khya na to control hi nhi hua



Mom....hyyy mera bacha main rozz tumhain apna hatho sa khilau gi


Main...khush hota hua.....kyu nhi zarror maa u r the best mom in the world or mana mom ko gla lga liya


dad ......beta ab aga kya krna ha ab tum aga prhna chahta ho ya nhi




main......ji main prhna chahta hu


Dad .....to main tumhara admission Sk collage main karva du ga


Sk collage apni city main hi ha or kafi mehnga collage ha yha pr zyda ter amer maa baap ka bacha hi ata hain kuch din phela hi result announce hu tha 12th kamujha yaad aya mera to result card hi nhi ha ezam diya hi nhi yo result kard kha sa ay ga


main....pr mera result card to ha nhi exam to diya nhi mana



dad....us ki tention mat lo wo main kuch na kuch kar lu ga

main....ok then main zara bahir ghoom kr ata hu


mom...beta Rahul karan ka sath ga zara rasta main thori baatain bhi kr lana ka dosra sa




Rahul ko dekh kr main samjh gya ka wo mana krna wala ha wo mana karta us sa pehla hi main bol pra



Main.....no mom i want to go alone main bacha nhi hu jo Rahul ko sath la kr jau


Main ya bol kr nikal gya bahir or baki sab ak br phir sa whi shock main jo larka na aj tak bhai bhai krta rehta tha aj sidha Rahul pa agya or jo confidence wo mujh main dekh rha tha aj tak nhi dekha tha unho na mujh main




Idhar main bahir nikal kr ghoom phir hi rha tha ka samna sa ak larka dorta hua a kr mera sa kuch dor gora us ka picha kuch gunda pra tha wo us lark ko pitna lga usa dekh kr mujha apni yaad agyi main bhi to asa hi tha pehla or ya yaad ata hi main uth kr chal diya us tarf phir kya tha wo sirf 5 log tha jata hi tut pra main un pr ak kick ak punch sab ko or public tamsha dekh rhi thi or gunda bechara bhaag rha tha picha sa ak aadmi logo ko side pr krta hua aga aya mujha dekhta hi us ki phat gyi matha pa pasina ana lga wo foran wha sa bhaga or kisi ak jgha ja kr jldi sa phona nikal kr kisi ko phone krna lga dosri tarf ak aadmi ak alishan mahal jasa ghar main ak bari si chair pr betha tha us ka as pass bhi kuch log betha tha shyad kisi masla pr charcha kr rhaus ka phone jab ring hua phone pr name dekh kr wi muskra diya



Aadmi 1...haa bol birju kya hal ha kafi din bd call ki

Admi 2.....b b bhai wo wo wwo




Aadmi 1 ......kya hua itna ghabra kyu rha ha aj pheli bar tujha itna ghabrya ho dekh rha hu


Aadmi......bhai wo wo wo zinda haa


Admi 2.....abe kon zinda ha shi shi bol tujha hi kya gya ha


Admi 1.....bhai R R Raghuveer singh Thakur zinda ha



Aadmi 2 apni cgair sa khra ho gya us ka matha pr is waqt pasina agya koi bhi us dekh krbta skta tha ka ya is waqt kitna dara hua ha



Admi...k k kya bak rha ha Raghuveer ko ham na apna hatho sa mara tha wo z z zinda k kasa ho sakta ha



Admi1......main apni aankho sa dekha ya bilkul whi tha bhai ab kya hoga bhai bhai ab wo hamin zinda nhi chora ga



Admi 2 is waqt khud bolna ki halat main nhi tha to us na phone cut kiya or ba sud ho kr kursi pr gir gya

Jabardast update brother....
to ghar wapsi ho hi gayi....baki sab ka to nature samajh mein aata hai....par yeh dad ka nature kaise change ho gaya....
keep writing.....
keep posting.......

 

[Lp143]

update no ...9


main kafi buri tarha sa gira tha lekin mujha koi khass chot nhi lagi Rishab or kuch or students meri taraf bhaga main bhi kuch sambhl chuka tha is liya sidha khra hua


main.....man me......kya gandi kismat ha apni har koi meri bjana chahta ha bc har koi mujha hi tohkta phir rha ha aj is ki chachi chod du ga mc halwa ha kya jo hr koi thok da ga ya sab sochta hua main khra hua or





Main......abe andha ha kyaa dikhai nhi data



itna main ak khooburat . si larki bahir nikli sach main bhut beautiful larki thi ak bar to main bhi kho gya



larki......... sorry sorry sorrry sir ap ko lagi to nhi na wo actually mujh sa car zara out of control ho gyi i m sorry sir ap khi chot nhi ai na



Main.....nhi nhi its ok main thik hu zyda nhi lagi mujha ap ko car zara aaram sa drive karni chahiya aj ap kisi ki jaan bhi la sakti thi


meri baat sun kar us larki na apna sar nicha kar liya mana bhi baat ko zyda nhi brhaya pehla to socha tha koi larka ho ga nikalta hi sala ki gaand mar lu ga but ya to larki ha upr sa maffi bhi mang li to choro kya bhasad machani ha faltu main


Main bhi Is ka bd kuch na bola or kapra saaf karta hua chal diya Rishab ka sath canteen ki taraf


Rishab......waah bhai to bhut samjhdar ho gya ha ba ab to tu kafi alag lagta ha mujha pehla sa




Main.....waqt ka sath sab bdal jata ha mera dost main to bs ak simple sa insan hu




Rishab....chl ab zyda dialouge bazzi na kar or wo dekh corner wala table pr kafi haryali ha apni o kismat hi phutti ha ba koi milti hi nhi




main.....abe sharam kar sala haryali dekhta dekhta andha na ho jaiyo



Rishab.....chup ba kalli zuban tera ko kya tu to aaram sa larki pata la ga sala mc asi body bna rakhi ha jasa koi wrestler ho lekin meri tarf dekh apan ko to dekh kar hi guzara krna ka ha ba manhoos




main....acha acha zyda bakchodi na kar




us ka bd ham logo na classes attend ki free lecture main apn log canteen main hi baitha tha ka wo subha walli larki jis na car thokki thi wo ka hamara pass baith gyi





Larki......Subha ka liya phir sa sorry sir plz mujha maaf krdain


main.....its ok u don't need to say sorry mana ap ko subha hi maaf kardiya tha





Larki......kya ham dost ban sakta hain




main....of course kyu nhi




larki......By the way my name is Mishal singh Thakur





us ka naam sun kar Pata nhi kyu Rishab ki aankhain bari ho gi




Rishab......Kya ap ka dad ka naam Vishal singh thakur ha




Mishal.....ji bilkul



main...to kasa janta ha in ka dad ko





Rishab.....ara un ko kon nhi janta ha yaar wo bhut bra buisnessman hain un ka naam to india ki jani mani hastiyo main ata ha lekin wo to dusri city main hota hain na or ap yha




mishal.....wo actually main yha prhna ka liya is city main ai hu mujha ya collage bhut psand ha us ki ak wjha meri friends bhi hain jo yha rehti hain is city main or is collage main hi prhti hain wasa apna naam nhi btaya apna





Rishab.....ooioh haan my name is Rishab sharma or ya ha mera bachpan ka dost karan


Mishal......nice to meet u karan and Rishab acha main ab chlti hu meri friends wait kar rhi hain


ya bol kar wo ak dosra table pr ja kr apna friends ka sath baithu gyi or asa hi collage time bhi khtam ho gya jab ham parking sa nikal tha yha to ham na mishal ko jata hua dekha wo ak yellow colour ki lamborgini main ja rhi thi or spn log muu khola usa dekh rha yha subha to itna dhyan nhi diya is pr par ab lagta ha rishab shi bhoonk rha tha is ka baap sach main koi raees ho ga aj main bhi mom ko bol kara aya tha ka rishab ka sath jana ha late ho gya gi pr asal main mujha un gundo ka adda pa jana tha is liya rishab ko by bol kar chl dya main bhi un ganduo ka kotha pr main jab wha pohncha to ak tuta photta sa ghar tha jisa in lorouo na apna adda bna rakha tha main jb ander gya to sab na mujha slam kiya ak baar to pehchan main hi nhi aya kafi acha dikh rha tha sala cleean shave upr sa acha kapra




main.....bhencho ya adda ha tum logo ka laant ha ba tum sab pr sala paapi log




gunda.....bhai jo bhi incone hoti ha mushkil sa ghar chlta ha kha sa adda bnay ga apn log




main.....aj sa tum sab ki kismat bdla gi tum sab ki kismat main likhu ga us sa pehla mujha btao apn ko matna kis na bajha tha tum loru log ko




gunda.....bhai ....bhai woooo woo
bhut khtrnak ha choro na usa ham koi ooo

us ki baat khtam hona sa pehla .......chup ba gandu jitna pucha utna bol bs wrna yhi gar du ga




meri baat sun kar wo bhut ghabra gya or bola




gunda 1.....bhai wo ham Rana kuldip singh ka ak admmi na ap ko marna ki supari di thi


main......kon ha ya kuldip singh................

wow super update Bhai

aaj update pad Kar story ke liyr lagav jayda ho Gaya hai ab to rojana update ka hi wait rahega

really bro. Aaj update pad kar bahut maja aa gaya

waiting for next update

 

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