Romance The boy's life

[Yasasvi1]

Me the queen (Yasasvi1 )
First time to nahi per ek or pryas kuch likhne ka ...sokh bhot ha but kisi na kisi resion ki wajh se kai baar himmat nahi hoti kai baar kismat kai baar jiwan...so first maan lo to bhi koi fark nahi padega so me likh rahi hu ek ladke pe base story ye mere khud ke POV pe hoga ki mera hisab seek ladka kya sochta ha or kya kar sakta h isme ager mwra andaza kuch galt ho to bata dijiyaga story sabki hisab se chalagi first persion kehisab se bhi or writer view se bhi



Story bilkul hatke hogi...
Update pta nahi kab aayange...
Sab aap logo pe nirbhar karaga...
Bas seen ye hoga jese jese story aage badhi tab tak bhi pta nahi hoga ki kya ho sakta h
it means anything will be
unexpected...

But story reality ke bhot pass hogi ek middle class boy pe hogi...may be aage kya hoga kuch andaza nahi h

 

[Yasasvi1]

update kuch hi der me

 

[Yasasvi1]

index....ke liya jagha (yadi story badi bani to)

 

[Adharma]

Good luck Yasasvi1 (⁠人⁠ ⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠)

 

[parkas]

For starting new story thread.....

 

[Yasasvi1]

Update 1

Subha subha ki dhop khli khli si thi... jo sidhe na aake us railway station pe tirchi pad rahi thi...
Aas pass me hariyali charo or faili thi...mosam me ghuli halki si thand kal raat hi hui barish ki gawahi de rahi thi ...
Us sation per ek malgadi khadi thi or subha ki phali tarin aane wali thi...
Samay tha lagbhag sabke ghar se nikalne ka satition per kafi yatri khade the or wait kar rahe the apni tarin ke aane ka...
Kafi shor sharaba or subha ki thand ne mahol kafi aacha bana rakha tha warna aaj ke time me log ek dusre ko dekhna pasand na kare ...
Asa time me logo ka yu apno ke sath beth kar train ka wait karna apne aap me ek annad ka anubhaw ha jo aaj ke time pe mil pana thoda muskil h...
Asa mahol me aachanak logo ka dharyan ek or jata ha ek or ke logo ko sunta ha...
"yara bare yara bare bol na kude phaliyan we es gallo shadiyya . ghar aale karan di ta life goriye yara di yaari te deepnd kardi"...(Na Na Na - Karan aujla )
log be like - kon ha ye chmu......bsdika rajasthan me Punjab sun raha h .
per agle hi pal jese unhone uski tarf dekha...cho...yahi atak jati h baat...
Kuki ladka black jens pink shrt black mask me ladka plus jutte normal hi the per

ye getup usko ek mast look de raha tha asa nahi h ladka khubsurt tha bhot per ye time or situation ke according handsome to lag raha tha
Na keval ladkiyon ko ladke bhi ghoor rahe the kuki unhone phala isko kabhi dekha nahi tha ...
But wo yaha se roj jata tha....per khate hana station wahi hota ha yatri badal jate h..
Per wo kisi ki bhi trf na dhyan dete
Or wo bas apni dhun me chala ja raha tha na kisi ki trf dekh raha tha na soch raha tha kuki uske man me chal raha tha log kya soch rahe honge kitna chutiya ha ye ladka... "aacha ha mene mask phana ha warna sakal dekh ke shyad koi mih pe bol jata"....asa bolke wo apne balo me hath ghumaata ha jo kafi resmi the
Or ek aache look ko justify karte the ...or wesa bhi ye baal itne bade or itne aache asa hi nahi the in ballo ko rakhne ke liya kiitna stugle karna padta ha aap ye sirf wo ladka hi janata tha ek sarkari adhikari ka beta hoke bade baal rakhana ...amir hokr garibo ko dil se khana dene wala jesi baat h..jo ki bhot muskil se hota h

Dhire dhire usne dono side maalgadi ke dabbo ke bich hath rakha or zoom karke kuda maalgadi ke bich se per itne me aawaz aai....khatak...khat ...khat khat...jo ki maal gaadi ke chalte time hoti ha ladka ghabara gaya ...per sukar h ye uske kudne ke baad hua...fir usne line paar kari or ptri paar karke wo aata ha

Ek bade se gate ke saamne us se just phala wo ek jagha apne hath jodke aaya tha.....






Wo kha aaya tha ku aaya tha or kya tha uska maksad usne kiske aage hath jode ye jannenge next update me

Aap apna keemati voot...soory comment ...sorry apna review...soory apni ray jarur de ki kesi lagi ...
Or baki jesa me phala bata chuki hu sabkuch unexpected hone wala ha ..

 

[Yasasvi1]

For starting new story thread.....

Thank you so much praksh ji posted.

Good luck Yasasvi1 (⁠人⁠ ⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠)

Thanks and update posted.

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

Me the queen (Yasasvi1 )
First time to nahi per ek or pryas kuch likhne ka ...sokh bhot ha but kisi na kisi resion ki wajh se kai baar himmat nahi hoti kai baar kismat kai baar jiwan...so first maan lo to bhi koi fark nahi padega so me likh rahi hu ek ladke pe base story ye mere khud ke POV pe hoga ki mera hisab seek ladka kya sochta ha or kya kar sakta h isme ager mwra andaza kuch galt ho to bata dijiyaga story sabki hisab se chalagi first persion kehisab se bhi or writer view se bhi



Story bilkul hatke hogi...
Update pta nahi kab aayange...
Sab aap logo pe nirbhar karaga...
Bas seen ye hoga jese jese story aage badhi tab tak bhi pta nahi hoga ki kya ho sakta h
it means anything will be
unexpected...

But story reality ke bhot pass hogi ek middle class boy pe hogi...may be aage kya hoga kuch andaza nahi h

First of all for your new story..
Aur jaan ke achha laga ki hum laundo ki life pe bhi koi story likh raha hai..
Secondly story kabhi bhi start karna to ye soch ke kabhi mat karna ye story mai readers ke liye likh rahi hu.. humesha ye sochna story mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..kyonki at the end ye soch ke likhogi ki ye story readers ke liye likh rahi ho to kuch specific time period ke baad interest apne aap khatam ho jaata h..
To jab bhi likho ye soch ke likho ye story meri h aur mai apne khud ke liye likh rahi hu..
Baaki aagle update ki pratiksha rahegi..

 

[Adirshi]

for new story
Finally laundo ke liye aaya kuch

Update pta nahi kab aayange...

Jabi bhi aaye mere ko tag maar dena bas

 

[Adirshi]

1st update