Fantasy The Asura System

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Chapter 27
Shahi Deewarein aur Chupa hua Asura​

Dhund se bahar nikalte hi unke saamne 'The Imperial Capital: Swarn-Nagari' dikhayi di. Is shehar ki deewarein kisi pahad jitni unchi thin aur poori tarah 'White Marble' aur 'Gold' se bani thin. Deewaron par bade-bade magic-cannons lage thay jo kisi bhi Sky Realm expert ko raakh karne ki taqat rakhte thay.
"Aryan, ruko," Vanya ne uska haath pakda. Uska chehra serious tha. "Yahan ke guards ke paas 'Asura Detection Mirrors' hote hain. Agar tumne apni asli aura nahi chupayi, toh hum gate par hi pakde jayenge."
[System Command: Aura Masking Activated.]
[Status: Earth Realm Stage 1 -> Body Refining Stage 5 (Fake Rank).]
"Theek hai," Aryan muskuraya. "Ab main unke liye bas ek mamooli bodyguard hoon."
Zara ne apni caravan ko aage badhaya. "Fikar mat karo, main yahan aksar aati hoon. Tum sab mere 'servants' ban kar andar chaloge. Bas thoda neeche jhuk kar rehna."
The Imperial Checkpoint: Iron Guard ka Ghamand
Main Gate par hazaron logon ki line lagi thi. Wahan ke guards ne kaale rang ka bhari armor pehna tha aur unke haath mein chamakti hui 'Spirit Halberds' thin.
Aryan line mein khada tha, Kavya aur Vanya uske piche thin. Dono ne apne chehre pardey (veils) se dhake thay taaki unki khoobsurti hungama na khada kar de.
Tabhi, piche se ek shandaar bagghi (carriage) tezi se aayi aur line todte hue aage nikalne lagi. Bagghi par 'Lion Crest' bana tha—yeh Central Empire ke ek bade minister ka nishaan tha.
Bagghi se ek naujawan bahar nikla. Usne reshmi kapde pehne thay aur uske haath mein ek hara chamakta hua pathar tha. Yeh tha Master Lu, Central Empire ke Treasury Minister ka beta.
"Hato raste se, bhikhariyon!" Master Lu ne chillaya. Uska bodyguard, jo Earth Realm Stage 4 par tha, logon ko dhakke dekar hatane laga.
Bodyguard ne Zara ki caravan ko dekha. "Yeh kachra raste se hatao! Master Lu ko jaldi hai!"
Bodyguard ne Zara ko dhakka dene ke liye haath uthaya, lekin usse pehle hi ek haath ne uski kalaayi (wrist) pakad li.
Aryan wahan khada tha. Usne sar neeche kiya hua tha, lekin uski pakad lohe jaisi thi.
"Bhai sahib, line sabke liye hai," Aryan ne thande swar mein kaha. "Dhakka dene ki zaroorat nahi hai."
Bodyguard hairan reh gaya. Usne Aryan ki cultivation check ki—sirf Body Refining Stage 5? Ek kide ne uski kalaayi pakdi?
"Apna haath hata, varna tera poora khandaan khatam kar dunga!" Bodyguard ne apni Earth Qi release ki taaki Aryan ka haath tod sake.
Lekin Aryan hila tak nahi. Usne System ka use karke us bodyguard ki energy ko neutralize kar diya.
"Aryan, jaane do," Zara ne dheere se kaha. "Hungama mat karo."
Aryan ne bodyguard ka haath jhatak diya. Bodyguard 5 kadam piche ghista chala gaya. Sab log hairan thay—ek mamooli servant ne Earth Realm expert ko piche dhakel diya?
Master Lu ne gusse mein Aryan ko dekha. "Tum! Tera naam kya hai? Main tujhe yaad rakhunga."
Aryan ne bina darre uski aankhon mein dekha. "Mera naam 'Kismat' hai. Aksar buri waqt par hi milta hoon."
The Spirit Measurement: Ek Naya Record?
Gate par entry ke liye har kisi ko ek 'Spirit Measurement Stone' (Aatma-Maapi Patthar) ko chhuna padta tha. Yeh patthar bata deta tha ki aapka level kya hai aur aapka potential kitna hai.
Kavya aur Vanya ne asani se patthar ko chua. Unhone apni power bohot low dikhayi, isliye patthar halke neele rang mein chamka.
Ab Aryan ki baari thi.
Aryan ne patthar par haath rakha. Usne dimaag mein kaha, "System, patthar ko bewakoof banao. Itni power dikhao ki main andar ja sakun, par koi mujh par shak na kare."
Ting!
[Error: Stone is linked to the Imperial Array. If you show too little, it will trigger an alarm for 'Fake Identity'. Suggestion: Show 'Genius' level potential but 'Low' cultivation.]
Aryan ne haath rakha. Achanak, patthar se ek sunehri (gold) roshni nikalne lagi. Roshni itni tez thi ki guards apni aankhein band karne lage.
Patthar par likha aaya:
[Cultivation: Body Refining Stage 5 (Trash)]
[Potential: DIVINE RANK (Godly!)]
"KYA?!" Guards chillaye. "Potential Divine Rank hai? Lekin level itna kam kyun?"
Pure gate par sannata cha gaya. Divine potential ka matlab tha ki yeh ladka agar sahi se train kare, toh ek din Sky Realm paar kar sakta hai.
Usi waqt, gate ke andar se ek aur sawari guzar rahi thi. Ek khoobsurat parda utha, aur ek ladki ne bahar dekha. Uske sar par sunehra mukut (crown) tha. Yeh Central Empire ki Princess Ling thi.
Usne Aryan ko dekha, aur patthar ki us sunehri roshni ko. Uska dil achanak zor se dhadakne laga. "Ruko," Princess ne apne guards se kaha. "Us ladke par nazar rakho. Mujhe uski poori jaankari chahiye."
The City Life: Raaz aur Tension
Aryan aur uski team shehar ke andar ek saste musafir-khana (Inn) mein ruke. Aryan ko pata tha ki usne galti se sabki nazar apni taraf khinch li hai.
Raat ko, Inn ki chhat par Aryan akela baitha tha jab Vanya uske paas aayi.
"Aryan, tumne patthar par Divine potential dikha kar musibat bula li hai," Vanya ne chinta se kaha. "Empire ke log 'Geniuses' ko ya toh apni ghulami mein rakhte hain, ya unhe maar dete hain agar wo unke kabze mein na aayein."
Aryan ne apne haath mein Shadow Fang ko dekha. "Vanya, main chhuphkar nahi reh sakta. Mere parents ko dhoondne ke liye mujhe is Empire ki sabse unchi jagah tak pahunchna hoga. Aur uske liye... mujhe sabse bada genius banna hi padega."
Vanya ne uska haath pakda. "Main tumhare saath hoon. Lekin yaad rakhna, kal 'Imperial Academy' ke admission shuru ho rahe hain. Agar tumhe Palace ke andar jana hai, toh tumhe academy join karni hogi."
Aryan ne aasmaan mein chamakte hue Palace ko dekha.
"Academy ho ya Palace.
.. ab Aryan ka naam poore Empire mein goonjega."

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Chapter 28
Imperial Academy ka Imtehaan aur Princess ka Ishaara​

Swarn-Nagari ki subah kisi sapne jaisi thi. Suraj ki pehli kiran jab sunehre mahalon se takrati thi, toh poora shehar chamak uthta tha. Aryan apne naye mansion (jo Zara ne jugad karke dilwaya tha) ki balcony mein khada tha. Uske kandhe par Kaalu (Dragon) baitha tha, jo ab pehle se kaafi bada aur vishali lag raha tha.
"Aaj ka din bada hai, Kaalu," Aryan ne uske sar par haath phera. "Imperial Academy... wahan Empire ke sabse bade raaz chupe hain."
Ting!
[New Main Mission: Join the Imperial Academy.]
[Reward: 15,000 System Points + Skill: 'Soul Perception' (Aatma ki pehchaan).]
[Penalty: If failed, the Dark Moon Sect will find your location.]
Aryan ne ek lambi saans li. "Theek hai System, hamesha ki tarah dhamki dekar hi kaam karwaoge."
The Imperial Academy: Shaan-o-Shaukat
Jab Aryan, Vanya, Kavya aur Zara Academy ke maidan mein pahunche, toh unka sar ghoom gaya. Yeh koi school nahi, ek chota shehar tha. Charon taraf bade-bade gardens thay jahan 'Spirit Herbs' ugi thin, aur hawa mein udte hue bade-bade Gryphons (aadha shair, aadha baaz) sawariyon ko lekar ja rahe thay.
Maidan mein hazaron log jama thay. Sabne mehengi reshmi robes pehni thin aur unke paas keemti weapons thay. Aryan unke beech mein apne sadharan (simple) kapdon mein ek 'Servant' jaisa lag raha tha.
"Dekho usse," ek ameer ladka hasne laga. "Body Refining Stage 5 wala yahan kooda uthane aaya hai kya?"
"Hush!" uske dost ne whisper kiya. "Yeh wahi hai jisne gate par 'Divine Potential' dikhaya tha."
Aryan ne unhe ignore kiya, lekin uski nazrein upar VIP Balcony par gayin. Wahan Princess Ling baithi thi. Aaj usne ek laal aur sunehri (Red and Gold) shahi dress pehni thi. Uski aankhein seedha bheed mein Aryan ko dhoond rahi thin. Jaise hi unki nazrein mili, Princess ne halke se muskura kar apna glass uthaya.
"Oho! Princess tumse baat karna chahti hai?" Vanya ne Aryan ka haath itni zor se pakda ki uski haddiyan chatakne lagin. "Yaad rakhna, wo Princess ho ya Dayan, mere pati par sirf mera haq hai."
Kavya ne bhi thande swar mein kaha, "Zyada udne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Aryan. Pehle exam pass karo."
Phase 1: The Spirit Pressure (Aatmic Dabav)
Exam shuru hua. Sabse pehla test tha 'The Pillar of Will'.
Maidan ke beech mein ek kaala patthar ka khamba tha jisme se bhayanak 'Spirit Pressure' nikal rahi thi. Students ko uske paas jana tha aur jitni der wo ruk sakte thay, utne points milte.
"Yeh test dimaag aur aatma ki shakti ka hai," Proctor ne chillaya. "Shuru karo!"
Log khambe ki taraf badhne lage. Jaise-jaise wo paas jaate, unka dum ghutne lagta. Kuch log 10 kadam par hi behosh ho gaye, kuch ne khoon thook diya.
Master Lu (Treasury Minister ka beta) aage badha. Wo ghamand se 50 kadam tak chala gaya. Sab taaliyan bajane lage. "Wah! Master Lu Earth Realm Stage 4 ke barabar pressure jhel rahe hain!"
Ab Aryan ki baari thi.
Aryan dheere-dheere aage badha. Usne abhi bhi apni power 'Body Refining' par set ki hui thi. Jab wo 20 kadam par pahuncha, toh use halki thandak mehsoos hui.
"System, pressure neutralize karo," Aryan ne mann mein kaha.
Ting!
[Deducting 100 Points per second. Pressure Filter Activated.]
Aryan kisi garden mein walk karne ki tarah aage badhne laga.
30 kadam... 40 kadam... 50 kadam...
Master Lu ka chehra peela pad gaya. "Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Yeh toh sirf ek trash hai!"
Aryan 60 kadam par pahunch gaya. Wahan ka pressure itna tha ki Earth Realm walon ki haddiyan toot jayein. Lekin Aryan shant tha. Usne khambe ko chua aur wapis mud gaya.
Poore maidan mein sannata cha gaya. Princess Ling apni seat se khadi ho gayi. "Divine Potential... aur aisi mental strength? Yeh ladka kaun hai?"
Phase 2: The Combat Test (The Iron Golem)
Agla test tha ladai ka. Har student ko ek 'Ancient Iron Golem' (Magic se chalne wala lohe ka titan) se ladna tha. Golem student ke level ke hisaab se apni taqat badal leta tha.
"Aryan! Teri baari!" Proctor ne kaha.
Jaise hi Aryan stage par aaya, Golem ne apni aankhein kholi. Kyunki Aryan ne apni power Stage 5 Body Refining dikhayi thi, Golem thoda kamzor hona chahiye tha.
Lekin achanak... Golem ki aankhein laal (Red) ho gayin. Uska aura itni tezi se badha ki wo Earth Realm Stage 3 ke barabar pahunch gaya!
"Yeh kya ho raha hai?" Elder Sharma (jo bheed mein chhupe thay) chounk gaye. "Koi Golem ke saath chhed-khani (tampering) kar raha hai!"
VIP balcony mein Master Lu ka baap, Minister Lu, muskura raha tha. Usne guards ko rishwat dekar Golem ko 'Killing Mode' par set karwa diya tha taaki Aryan wahin mar jaye.
Golem ne apna bhari hathoda (hammer) uthaya aur Aryan par maara.
BOOOM!
Stage toot gaya. Aryan ne aakhri waqt par Void Shadow Step use kiya aur piche hata.
"Abe... yeh toh mujhe maarne par tula hai," Aryan ne Shadow Fang handle par haath rakha. "Theek hai, agar tum log niyam todoge, toh main bhi tameez nahi dikhaunga."
Aryan ne apni talwaar nahi nikaali. Usne bas apni mutthi (fist) band ki.
"System, saari Earth Realm Qi haath mein focus karo. Ise ek hi mukke mein dher karna hai."
Golem dubara hamla karne ke liye aage badha.
Aryan gayab hua aur Golem ke seene (chest) ke bilkul saamne prakat hua.
"Asura Fist: HEAVEN CRUSHER!"
KRA-TA-KOOM!!!
Ek bhayanak dhamaka hua. Log apni aankhein band karne lage. Jab dhuaan hata, toh sabka muh khula ka khula reh gaya.
Wo 20-foot lamba Iron Golem, jo Earth Realm ka hamla jhel sakta tha... uske seene mein ek bada sa chedd (hole) tha. Agle hi pal, wo Golem hazaron tukdon mein bikhar gaya.
Aryan ne apne kapde jhaade aur Proctor ki taraf dekha. "Pass?"
Proctor haklaya, "P-Pass... Top Marks!"
The Night Invitation
Shaam tak Aryan ka naam poori Academy mein aag ki tarah phail gaya. Wo 'Body Refining' wala ladka jisne Iron Golem ko ek mukke mein tod diya.
Aryan jab apne Inn (musafir-khana) wapis pahuncha, toh wahan ek shahi sawari khadi thi.
Ek guard aage aaya aur jhuk kar bola, "Senior Aryan. Her Highness, Princess Ling, ne aapko Palace mein dinner ke liye bulaya hai. Yeh aapke liye invitation hai."
Vanya aur Kavya ne ek saath wo invitation chinne ki koshish ki.
"Dinner?" Vanya ne daant peeste hue kaha. "Aryan, agar tum wahan gaye, toh main tumhare saare Spirit Stones Kaalu ko khila dungi!"
Zara ne maze lete hue kaha, "Arre jaane do na! Princess se dosti hogi toh mera business aur badhega."
Aryan ne invitation liya aur muskuraaya. "Main khane ke liye nahi ja raha. Mujhe pata lagana hai ki Minister Lu ne mere upar hamla kyun karwaya. Aur shayad... Princess ko mere parents ke baare mein kuch pata ho."
Aryan Palace ki taraf rawana hua.
Andheri raat mein, Palace ki deewaron ke piche ek aur saazish (conspiracy) chal rahi thi. Ek kaala saya (Shadow) Minister Lu ke paas baitha tha.
"Wo ladka khatarnak hai," saya bola.
"Fikar mat karo," Minister Lu ne kaha. "Aaj raat Princess ke
8 dinner mein... hum uska 'Asura Blood' sabke saamne nikaal lenge."

 

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