Fantasy The Asura System

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16

CHAPTER 17	CHAPTER 18
CHAPTER 19

Is duniya mein taqat ka matlab sirf muscle nahi hai, balki "Prana" (Qi/Energy) ko control karna hai. Jo jitna zyada Prana control kar sakta hai, wo utna bada Devta (God) ban sakta hai.
Yahan Power Levels ko 5 Bade Realms (Darjon) mein baanta gaya hai.
1. Body Refining Realm (Sharir Shudhikaran)
Ye sabse basic level hai. Yahan cultivators apni body ko lohe (iron) jaisa strong banate hain.
* Taqat: Ek mukke se bada patthar todna, ghode se tez bhaagna.
* Umar (Lifespan): 100 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Normal disciples, guards, aur shuruaat ka Aryan/Vicky.
2. Spirit Awakening Realm (Aatma Jagran)
Yahan cultivator apni 'Qi' ko shareer se bahar nikal sakta hai.
* Taqat: Magic attacks karna (Aag, Barf, Bijli fekna). Talwaar mein energy daalna (Sword Qi).
* Umar: 200 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Abhi ka Aryan, Kavya (Ice Queen), Vikram (haarne se pehle).
3. Earth Realm (Prithvi Yoddha)
Ye wo log hain jo kisi shehar (city) ke Malik ya Sect ke Elders hote hain.
* Taqat: Hawa mein kuch der chalna (Air Walk). Ek hamle se chota pahad tod dena. Inki skin par normal talwaar asar nahi karti.
* Umar: 500 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Elder Shang, Elder Sharma, Sect Leaders.
* Note: Aryan ka agla target yahi level hai taaki wo apne parents ko dhoond sake.
4. Sky Realm (Aakash Samrat)
Ye log legends hote hain. Pure desh (Empire) mein gine-chune log hi yahan pahunchte hain.
* Taqat: Bina kisi sahare ke Udna (True Flight). Akele pure shehar ko raakh kar dena. Inhe maarna namumkin ke barabar hai.
* Umar: 1000 saal tak.
* Kaun hai yahan: Imperial Generals, Aryan ke Parents ke dushman (Dark Sect Leaders).
5. Asura / God Realm (Devta / Rakshas)
Ye power ki peak hai. Yahan pahunchne wala insaan nahi rehta, wo Bhagwan ban jata hai.
* Taqat: Duniya ke niyam (Laws of Nature) badal dena. Space aur Time control karna. Amar (Immortal) ho jana.
* Kaun hai yahan: Ancient Legends, aur Future Aryan.
Special Factors (Jo Level se alag hain):
* Bloodline (Khoon):
* Aryan ke paas "Asura Bloodline" hai. Iska matlab hai ki agar Aryan Level 2 par hai, tab bhi wo Level 3 walon ko hara sakta hai. Ye 'Cheat' hai.
* Spirit Beasts (Janwar):
* Jaise Kaalu (Void Dragon). Level 1 ka Dragon bhi Level 5 ke insaan ko kaccha chaba sakta hai.
* The System:
* Baaki log saalon mehnat karte hain, Aryan Points use kark
e instantly strong ban sakta hai.

 

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Chapter 16
Parchhayi ka Khel aur Andhere ka Mehmaan​

Aryan ka mansion shahar ke shor-sharabe se door, Core Peak ke kinare par tha. Raat ka sannata tha, aur chaand baadalon ke piche chupa hua tha.
Aryan apne training hall ke beechon-beech, zameen par palathi maar kar (cross-legged) baitha tha. Uske saamne wo golden-glow karti hui kitaab "Divine Art: Void Shadow Steps" hawa mein tair rahi thi.
[Training Phase: Step 1 - Merging with Darkness]
Aryan ki aankhein band thin. Wo apne andar ki 'Qi' (Prana Energy) ko mehsoos karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
"System ne kaha tha ki is technique ko seekhne ke liye mujhe apni Qi ko apne pairon ki 'Meridians' (naso) mein ulta (reverse) ghumana padega," Aryan ne socha. "Yeh khatarnak hai. Agar galti hui, toh pairon ki nasein phat sakti hain."
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li.
Usne apni neeli 'Spirit Qi' ko apne pet (Dantian) se nikaal kar dheere-dheere apni janghon (thighs) ki taraf dhakela.
Zzzzz...
Dard! Ek tez current jaisa dard uske pairon mein dauda. Aisa laga jaise hazaron suiyan (needles) ek saath chubha di gayi hon. Aryan ka sharir paseene se bheeg gaya, lekin usne process nahi roka.
"Focus Aryan... Dard bas dimaag ka waham hai," usne khud ko samjhaya.
Dheere-dheere, dard kam hone laga aur uski jagah ek Thandak (Coolness) ne le li.
Aryan ke pairon ke aas-paas jo parchhayi (shadow) thi, wo hilne lagi. Wo parchhayi paani ki tarah liquid ban gayi aur Aryan ke pairon par chadne lagi, jaise koi kala saanp ho.
Achanak, Aryan ne aankhein kholi. Uski aankhon mein ek kala dhuaan (black smoke) tair raha tha.
"Void Step!"
SWISH!
Aryan apni jagah se gayab ho gaya.
Koi awaaz nahi. Koi hawa ka jhonka nahi.
Wo seedha 10 meter door, kamre ke doosre kone mein prakat hua.
"Wow..." Aryan ne apne haath dekhe. "Main chala nahi... main fisla (slipped) space ke through. Yeh toh teleportation jaisa hai!"
Lekin khushi manane ka waqt nahi mila.
Grrrr...
Kamre ke kone mein so raha Kaalu (Dragon) achanak uth gaya. Uske kaan khade ho gaye aur wo darwaze ki taraf dekh kar ghurrane laga. Uske muh se halki aag nikal rahi thi.
Aryan turant alert ho gaya. Kaalu kabhi bina wajah nahi ghurrata.
"System? Koi hai kya?"
Ting!
[Warning: Hostile Intent Detected.]
[Enemy: 1 Person.]
[Location: Outside the Garden. Approaching fast.]
[Power Level: Early Earth Realm (Level 3)!]
Aryan ka dil dhadak utha. "Earth Realm? Level 3? Elder Shang ke level ka banda yahan kya kar raha hai?"
Aryan ne turant apni Shadow Fang sword uthayi aur battiyan (lights) bujha di.
"Agar wo takatwar hai, toh hume dimaag se ladna hoga."
Mansion ka Garden
Bahar ghana andhera tha. Hawa mein jhingur (crickets) ki awaaz thi.
Ek saya (shadow) mansion ki diwar se kood kar garden mein aaya. Usne kaale kapde pehne thay aur chehre par ek Safed Mask tha jis par koi chehra nahi bana tha (No-Face Mask).
Yeh ek professional Assassin tha.
Assassin ne hawa ko soongha. "Target yahi hai. Asura Bloodline... uska khoon bohot keemti hai."
Uske haath mein ek khnajar (dagger) tha jispar hara zehar (poison) laga tha. Wo bina kisi awaaz ke ghaas par chalta hua Aryan ke bedroom ki khidki ki taraf badha. Earth Realm cultivator hone ke naate, wo hawa mein apne kadam halka kar sakta tha.
Jaise hi wo khidki ke paas pahuncha aur andar koodne wala tha...
SHING!
Andhere mein se ek talwaar nikli, seedha uski gardan ki taraf.
Assassin experienced tha. Usne turant apne dagger se block kiya.
CLANG!
Chingariyan (sparks) udi.
Aryan andhere se bahar nikla, talwaar haath mein liye. "Bina invitation ke aana buri baat hai, Mehmaan ji."
Assassin ki aankhein mask ke piche hairan thin. 'Ek Spirit Awakening (Level 2) ke bache ne mujhe sense kar liya? Kaise?'
Assassin ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo piche hata aur hawa mein gayab ho gaya.
"Gayab?" Aryan ne idhar-udhar dekha.
[System Warning: Behind you!]
Aryan ne bina soche apni nayi technique use ki.
"Void Step!"
Aryan wahan se gayab hua.
Usi pal, Assassin ka khnajar wahan se guzra jahan Aryan ki gardan thi. Agar Aryan ek second bhi late hota, toh uska sar dhad se alag ho jata.
Aryan garden ke doosre kone mein prakat hua. Uski saansein phool gayi thin.
"Yeh fast hai. Bohot fast."
Assassin fir se Aryan ki taraf lapka. Is baar usne apni 'Earth Qi' release kar di. Zameen hilne lagi aur Assassin ki speed doguni (2x) ho gayi.
"Marr ja!" Assassin pehli baar bola. Uski awaaz fatte hue baans (bamboo) jaisi thi.
Aryan ke paas sochne ka waqt nahi tha. Seedhi takkar mein wo Earth Realm wale se nahi jeet sakta. Use apni nayi technique ka faayda uthana hoga.
Aryan ne apni aankhein band ki.
'Shadows... Shadows are my friends.'
Assassin ka khnajar Aryan ke dil ke paas pahuncha.
Lekin Aryan ne block nahi kiya. Wo... Parchhayi mein ghul gaya.
Assassin ka hamla hawa mein laga.
"Kya?!"
Isse pehle ki Assassin sambhal paata, Aryan uske piche ki parchhayi (shadow) se nikla.
"Asura Sword Art: Backstab!"
SQUELCH!
Aryan ne apni Shadow Fang Assassin ki peeth mein ghusa di.
Lekin Earth Realm cultivator ki body bohot strong hoti hai. Talwaar sirf 2 inch andar gayi aur muscles mein atak gayi.
Assassin chillaya aur ghoom kar Aryan ke chehre par ek laat (kick) maari.
BAM!
Aryan door ja gira. Uske muh se khoon nikal aaya.
"Shit... Iski skin toh patthar jaisi hai. Meri talwaar zyada andar nahi ja rahi."
Assassin ne apni peeth se khoon saaf kiya. Wo ab gusse mein tha.
"Ache tricks hain bache. Lekin power ka farak tricks se nahi bharta. Ab main tujhe tukdon mein kaatunga."
Assassin ne hawa mein haath uthaya. Uski Qi ikhatthi hokar ek bade Haath (Giant Hand) ki shakal lene lagi.
"Earth Crushing Palm!"
Aryan zameen par gira hua tha. Wo giant energy hand uske upar girne wala tha.
Agar ye laga, toh Aryan ki chutney ban jayegi.
[System Suggestion: Use Kaalu.]
Aryan ki aankhein chamki. "Oye haan! Bhukkad!"
Aryan ne seeti (whistle) bajayi.
Mansion ki chhat (roof) se ek chota kaala rocket launch hua.
Kaalu!
Kaalu ne hawa mein muh khola. Abhi wo chota tha, toh wo aag nahi fek sakta tha, lekin uske paas 'Void Dragon' ki ek special power thi.
"VOID BITE!"
Kaalu ne Assassin ke banaye hue us 'Giant Energy Hand' par daant gadaye aur... ek bada hissa kha gaya!
CRUNCH!
Energy ka wo haath hawa mein hi bikhar gaya.
Assassin ki aankhein phati reh gayin. "Mera attack... kha gaya? Yeh kaunsa janwar hai?!"
Is confusion ka faayda Aryan ne uthaya.
"Good boy Kaalu!"
Aryan ne apni aakhri bachi hui saari energy pairon mein daal di.
"Void Shadow Steps: Phantom Rush!"
Aryan ek hi pal mein Assassin ke saamne pahuncha. Is baar usne Assassin ki body par nahi, balki uski Gardan (Neck) par nishana lagaya jahan koi armor nahi tha.
Aur is baar Aryan ne apni Asura Aura (Fear) ko Assassin ki aankhon mein jhonk diya.
Assassin ek second ke liye darr se jam (freeze) gaya.
Aur wo ek second hi Aryan ko chahiye tha.
SHWING!
Ek clean cut.
Aryan Assassin ke piche land kiya. Wo ghutanon ke bal baith gaya, buri tarah haanf raha tha.
Piche, Assassin khada raha.
Fir dheere se... uska sar (head) apni jagah se khiska aur zameen par gir gaya.
THUD.
Assassin mar chuka tha.
Aryan zameen par let gaya. "Baap re... Earth Realm walon se ladna mazaak nahi hai."
Kaalu Aryan ke paas aaya aur uska chehra chatne laga.
Aryan ne use pyaar se sehlaya. "Tu toh hero nikla bhai. Kal tere liye double meat."
Aryan ne himmat karke utha aur Assassin ki body search ki. (Lootna zaroori hai).
Uski jeb se kuch Spirit Stones mile, ek zeher ki bottle mili, aur ek Kaala Token mila.
Us Token par ek nishaan bana tha: Ek toota hua Chaand (Broken Moon) aur uske piche ek Sanp (Snake).
[System Analysis]
[Item: Token of the 'Dark Moon Sect'.]
[Organization Type: Assassin Guild based in Central Empire.]
[Note: They are enemies of the Royal Asura Family.]
Aryan ne Token ko apni mutthi mein bheench liya.
"Toh unhe pata chal gaya hai ki main zinda hoon. Yeh sirf pehla Assassin tha. Ab aur aayenge."
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha.
"Aane do. Jab tak wo aayenge, main unka swagat karne ke liye taiyaar rahunga."

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