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Sorry bro par mein story me sex scene nahi rakhna chahta
Lekin romance full rahega
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Chapter 3: Talwaar-baazi aur Ice Queen ka Hamla
Vicky ka daant todne ke baad, Aryan seedha apne toote-foote hut (jhopdi) mein bhaag aaya. Uska dil abhi bhi zor-zor se dhadak raha tha. Darr se nahi, excitement se!
"Maine sach mein Vicky ko peeta? Woh bhi ek thappad mein?" Aryan apni hatheli (palm) ko ghoor raha tha.
Tabhi System ka notification baja.
Ting!
[System Notice: Aapne Sect ke rules tode hain (Fighting inside Treasure Pavilion). Par kyunki aapne 'Cool' tareeke se mara, System aapko +10 Points deta hai.]
"Waah! Maarne ke bhi points?" Aryan khush ho gaya. "System, ab wo 'Sword Technique' dikhao jo mujhe Zara se mili thi."
Hawa mein ek purani kitaab (book) prakat hui. Us par likha tha: "Basic Wind Slash".
Aryan ne socha use padhna padega, par jaise hi usne kitaab ko chuua, System ne pucha:
[Skill Book Detected. Do you want to learn instantly?]
[Yes / No]
"Arre waah, padhne ki bhi zaroorat nahi? Yeh toh cheat hai! YES!"
Jaise hi Aryan ne 'Yes' socha, wo kitaab gayab ho gayi aur roshni ban kar uske maathe (forehead) mein ghus gayi. Aryan ko halka sa dard hua, jaise kisine dimaag mein USB drive laga di ho. Agle hi pal, use talwaar chalane ke saare basic moves yaad aa gaye.
"Aisa lag raha hai main pichle 10 saal se talwaar chala raha hoon," Aryan ne ek lakdi ki dandi (stick) uthai aur hawa mein ghumayi.
Swoosh!
Hawa katne ki awaaz aayi. Aryan ki aankhon mein chamak aa gayi. "Ab time hai isse test karne ka."
Raat ho chuki thi. Surya Sect ke piche jo ghana jungle tha, wahan Aryan akele practice karne gaya. Wo din mein practice nahi kar sakta tha kyunki agar kisi ne dekha ki 'Trash Aryan' achanak expert ban gaya hai, toh sawal uthenge.
Aryan ne ek sookhe hue ped (tree) ko target banaya.
"Focus... Speed... Power!"
Aryan ne dandi ko talwaar ki tarah pakda aur Agility Boost (jo abhi bhi thoda bacha tha) use karte hue hamla kiya.
"Wind Slash!"
Krrrakkk!
Wo mota ped ek hi jhatke mein aadha kat gaya aur zameen par gir pada.
"Oye teri!" Aryan ki aankhein phati reh gayin. "Yeh toh khatarnak hai! Agar yeh kisi insaan par lagta toh..."
Abhi wo apni taareef kar hi raha tha ki achanak...
Jungle ka taapmaan (temperature) girne laga. Hawa mein thandak aa gayi. Aryan ke muh se bhap (steam) nikalne lagi. Ped-paudhon par barf (frost) jamne lagi.
Aryan kaanpne laga. "Yeh... yeh thand kahan se aayi? Abhi toh garmi thi!"
Tabhi piche se ek thandi aur jaanlewa awaaz aayi.
"Toh chupa-rustam (hidden expert) yahan chupa hai."
Aryan ke rongte khade ho gaye. Yeh awaaz... wo isse kabhi nahi bhool sakta.
Aryan dheere se piche muda.
Chaand ki roshni mein, Kavya khadi thi.
Uske haath mein wahi neeli 'Ice Sword' thi. Uske lambe baal hawa mein udd rahe thay, aur uska chehra bilkul expressionless tha—jaise koi barf ki gudiya (doll).
Lekin uski aankhon mein gussa saaf dikh raha tha.
"S-Senior Sister Kavya!" Aryan ne hichkichate hue kaha. "Aap... aap yahan itni raat ko? Kya chaand dekhne aayi hain?"
Kavya ne koi jawaab nahi diya. Wo dheere-dheere aage badhi. Har kadam ke saath zameen par barf jamti ja rahi thi.
"Subah tumne mujhe 'I Love You' bola aur bhaag gaye," Kavya ne thande swar mein kaha. "Main pure Sect mein us 'himmatwale' chor ko dhoond rahi thi. Mujhe laga koi senior disciple hoga jo mazaak kar raha hai. Par mujhe kya mila? Ek 'Trash' disciple jiske paas koi cultivation nahi honi chahiye thi."
Kavya ne apni talwaar Aryan ki gardan (neck) ki taraf point ki.
"Sach batao. Tum kaun ho? Ek Trash disciple ped (tree) ko ek jhatke mein kaise kaat sakta hai? Kya tum kisi dushman clan ke spy (jasoos) ho?"
Aryan ka dimaag tezi se daudne laga. Agar usne kaha 'System hai', toh wo maara jayega. Agar usne jhoot bola, toh bhi maara jayega.
Ting!
[Emergency Mission!]
[Target: Kavya is suspicious.]
[Option A: Fight her. (Chance of winning: 0% - You will die).]
[Option B: Run away. (Chance of success: 5% - She is faster).]
[Option C: Use your charm/shamelessness.]
[Mission: Kavya ko convince karo ki tum usse sach mein pyar karte ho, isliye tumne mehnat karke power hasil ki.]
[Reward: Kavya won't kill you (for now).]
[Penalty: Death by freezing.]
Aryan: 'Yaar yeh System mujhe har baar marwane ke chakkar mein kyun rehta hai?!'
Talwaar ki nok Aryan ke gale ko chhu rahi thi. Khoon ki ek boond nikli.
Aryan ne ek gehri saans li. Usne darrna band kiya aur seedha Kavya ki aankhon mein dekha. (Acting mode: ON).
"Spy? Jasoos?" Aryan ne dukh bhari awaaz mein kaha. "Senior Sister, agar main spy hota, toh main subah aapse wo baat kyun kehta?"
Kavya ki talwaar thodi hil gayi. "Toh tumne wo kyun kaha?"
Aryan ne dramatic style mein aasmaan ki taraf dekha. "Kyunki... main aapse pyaar karta hoon! Jab maine aapko pehli baar dekha tha, usi din maine kasam khayi thi ki main strong banunga. Main 'Trash' hoon, mujhe pata hai. Lekin aapke liye... sirf aapke barabar khade hone ke liye, maine din-raat khoon-paseena ek karke practice ki hai!"
Aryan ne toote hue ped ki taraf ishara kiya. "Yeh taqat... yeh sab aapki wajah se hai. Aap meri inspiration hain, Kavya ji!"
Kavya sunn reh gayi. Usne zindagi mein bohot se ladke dekhe thay jo uski khubsurti ke peeche paagal thay, par kisi ne aise baat nahi ki thi.
"Jhoot!" Kavya chillayi, lekin uske gaalon par halka sa gulaabi rang (blush) aa gaya tha. "Koi ek din mein itna strong nahi ban sakta!"
"Pyaar mein insaan kya kuch nahi kar sakta," Aryan ne dialogue maara.
Kavya ne apni talwaar neeche kar li, lekin wapis myaan (sheath) mein nahi rakhi. Wo Aryan ko confusion se dekh rahi thi.
"Tum... ajeeb ho," Kavya ne kaha. "Theek hai. Agar tumhari yeh taqat asli hai, toh prove karo."
"Kaise?" Aryan ne pucha.
"3 mahine baad 'Outer Sect Tournament' hai," Kavya ne kaha. "Agar tum Top 10 mein aaye, toh main manungi ki tumhara pyaar (ya jo bhi yeh natak hai) sach hai. Aur agar tum haar gaye..."
Kavya ki aankhein chamki. "...toh main khud tumhe apne haathon se maar dungi taaki tumhari 'Trash' life khatam ho jaye."
Aryan ne sookha thook gatka. 'Top 10? Wahan toh monster disciples aate hain!'
Lekin System ne notification diya:
[New Main Quest: Win the Outer Sect Tournament.]
[Reward: Mystery Lottery Box + Title 'Rising Star'.]
Aryan muskuraaya. "Challenge accepted, Senior Sister. Main sirf Top 10 mein nahi aaunga... main wo tournament jeetunga. Aapke liye."
Kavya palat gayi taaki Aryan uska chehra na dekh sake (wo thoda impress thi). "Badi baatein. Dekhte hain zinda rehte ho ya nahi."
Wo hawa ke jhonke ki tarah wahan se gayab ho gayi, bas piche thodi si barf aur meethi khushboo chhod gayi.
Aryan wahin zameen par baith gaya. Uski taangein kaanp rahi thin.
"Bach gaya... baap re, ladki hai ya freezer!"
Lekin Aryan ke chehre par smile thi.
"Tournament, huh? Ab toh ladna padega. Aur jeetna bhi padega."
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A Silent devil
Devil Behind the Words 😈🖋️
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Thank you bro reply karne k liye
Agar sex na bhi ho toh bhi theek hai
Pr baaki request ko bhi agar poori kr sako toh mehrbani hogi
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Pic or gif ka bhi use karna
Characters k emotions mindset motive (etc) woh b jitne zyadha ho utna hi hum un k sath connect kar payenge
Baki ap writer hai ap hum se behtar jante hai
Agar sex na bhi ho toh bhi theek hai
Pr baaki request ko bhi agar poori kr sako toh mehrbani hogi
Power aur un k level etc ko detail k sath discuss karna
Pic or gif ka bhi use karna
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Chapter 4: Nakli Dawai aur Gobar ka Raaz
Agli subah, Aryan bohot jaldi uth gaya.
Raat ko Kavya ke saath hui mulakaat ne uske andar ek nayi aag laga di thi. Lekin josh se pet nahi bharta, aur sirf hawa mein talwaar ghumane se cultivation nahi badhti.
"System, mera status dikhao."
Ting!
[Host Profile]
* Name: Aryan
* Rank: Body Refining - Stage 3
* Combat Power: 45 (Average Stage 3 disciple is 30)
* Skills: Basic Sword Technique (Maxed)
* Inventory: Divine Body Cleansing Pill (1).
"Hmm," Aryan ne socha. "Stage 3 theek hai, lekin Tournament jeetne ke liye mujhe kam se kam Stage 7 ya 8 par hona padega. Aur uske liye mujhe 'Spirit Stones' aur 'Cultivation Pills' chahiye."
System ne turant suggestion diya:
[Tip: Medicine Hall mein aaj 'Pill Distribution Day' hai. Wahan free mein kooda (low quality) pills milti hain, lekin aap wahan 'Jugaad' kar sakte hain.]
"Jugaad? Yeh hui na baat!"
Aryan ne apne fate-purane kapde change kiye (jo abhi bhi fate hue hi thay) aur Medicine Hall ki taraf nikal gaya.
Surya Sect ka Medicine Hall.
Yahan hawa mein jadi-bootiyon (herbs) ki kadwi aur meethi khushboo mixed thi. Hazaron disciples line lagakar khade thay taaki unhe apne hisse ki pills mil sakein.
Hall ke beech mein ek bada sa platform tha. Wahan ek ghamandi sa ladka, safed coat pehne khada tha. Uska naam Rohan tha. Wo ek Apprentice Alchemist tha aur Sect ke Elder ka bhatija tha.
Rohan haath mein ek chamakti hui laal goli (Red Pill) pakad kar chilla raha tha:
"Dekho sab log! Yeh hai meri nayi creation—'Fire Blood Pill'. Isse khate hi tumhari taqat doguni (2x) ho jayegi! Iski keemat sirf 50 Spirit Stones hai!"
Bheed paagal ho gayi.
"Mujhe chahiye!"
"Bhai, mujhe do! Main 60 Stones dunga!"
Aryan bheed mein piche khada tha.
"50 Stones? Mere paas toh 5 bhi nahi hain," Aryan ne mayusi se socha.
Tabhi System ki screen Rohan ke haath mein pakdi pill par focus ho gayi.
Ting!
[Scan Complete.]
[Item: Defective Fire Blood Pill]
[Quality: Trash (15% Purity)]
[Ingredients: Fire Grass, Rotten Root, and... Trace amounts of Wild Boar Dung (Suar ka Gobar).]
[Side Effects: Eating this will cause explosion diarrhea for 3 days.]
Aryan yeh padh kar zor se has pada. "Bwahaha! Gobar?!"
Uski hassi itni zor ki thi ki poore Hall mein sannata cha gaya. Sab log mud kar Aryan ko dekhne lage.
Rohan ka chehra gusse se laal ho gaya. "Kaun hai wo? Kaun hasa meri Masterpiece par?"
Bheed hat gayi aur Aryan akela khada reh gaya.
"Oh, toh tu hai," Rohan ne Aryan ko upar se neeche tak dekha. "Trash Aryan. Tu yahan kya kar raha hai? Aur tu hasa kyun?"
Aryan ne apni hassi control ki aur bola, "Maaf karna Senior Rohan. Bas mujhe ek joke yaad aa gaya."
"Joke?" Rohan gusse mein aage aaya. "Tujhe meri pill joke lagti hai? Yeh pill maine khud banayi hai! Isme 90% purity hai!"
Aryan ne sar hilaya. "90%? Senior, mujhe toh lagta hai aapne ginti galat seekhi hai."
Sab log saansein rok kar dekhne lage. Aryan aaj marne wala tha. Rohan Alchemist Hall ka sabse favorite disciple tha.
[System Mission: Expose the truth publicly.]
[Reward: 50 System Points + Respect from Hidden Elder.]
Aryan muskuraya. "Senior, agar bura na maanein, toh kya main wo pill dekh sakta hoon?"
Rohan ne ghamand se pill Aryan ki taraf fek di. "Le dekh le gawaar. Tujhe samajh bhi nahi aayega."
Aryan ne pill ko soongha, fir use ungliyon mein ghumaya.
"Hmm," Aryan ne zor se bola taaki sab sun sakein. "Fire Grass... theek hai. Rotten Root... thoda purana hai par chalega. Lekin Senior, aapne isme 'Binding Agent' ke liye kya use kiya?"
Rohan thoda ghabraya par bola, "Wo... wo mehengi 'Spirit Clay' hai!"
"Spirit Clay?" Aryan ne pill ko wapis Rohan ko diya. "Senior, jahan tak mujhe pata hai, Spirit Clay se 'badboo' nahi aati. Isme se toh Jungli Suar (Wild Boar) ki smell aa rahi hai."
Bheed mein khus-phus shuru ho gayi.
"Kya? Suar?"
"Chee!"
Rohan chillaya, "Bakwaas band kar! Tu ilzaam laga raha hai?!"
Aryan ne shanti se kaha, "Agar main jhooth bol raha hoon, toh Senior, aap khud is pill ko kha kar dikha dijiye. Agar aapko agle 10 minute mein pet mein dard nahi hua, toh main yahin apna sar phod lunga."
Rohan ka paseena nikalne laga. Use pata tha ki usne sasti cheezein milayi hain (profit ke liye), par use nahi pata tha ki koi ise pakad lega. Agar usne khayi, toh uska pet kharab hona pakka tha. Agar nahi khayi, toh sab samjhenge wo jhootha hai.
"Main... main kyun khaun? Yeh bechne ke liye hai!" Rohan haklaya.
"Darpok," Aryan ne dheere se kaha, par sabne sun liya.
"Tu!" Rohan ne apna haath uthaya Aryan ko marne ke liye.
"RUKO!"
Ek bhari aur gambheer awaaz aayi.
Hall ke piche se ek boodha aadmi nikal kar aaya. Uske baal safed thay aur usne Alchemist ki golden robe pehni thi.
Sab log turant jhuk gaye. "Greetings, Elder Sharma!"
Elder Sharma seedha Aryan ke paas aaye aur uske haath se pill le li. Unhone use soongha aur tod kar dekha. Fir unhone gusse mein Rohan ko dekha.
"Nalaayak!" Elder ne Rohan ke sar par ek thappad mara. "Is ladke ne sahi kaha. Tune isme 'Spirit Clay' ki jagah sasta 'Earth Mud' aur gandagi milayi hai taaki paise bacha sake? Tu Alchemist banega?!"
Rohan ke pair kaanpne lage. "Maaf kar dijiye Master! Galti ho gayi!"
Elder ne Aryan ki taraf dekha. Unki aankhon mein curiosity thi.
"Ladke, tumhara naam kya hai? Tumhe kaise pata chala ki isme kya milawat hai? Tum toh Body Refining stage par ho, tumhare paas 'Soul Perception' nahi ho sakti."
Aryan ne mann mein System ko thank you bola.
"Elder, mera naam Aryan hai. Main... bas kooda uthata hoon, toh mujhe gandagi ki pehchaan ache se hai," Aryan ne humble banne ki acting ki.
Elder Sharma zor se hase. "Hahaha! Bahut badhiya! Sachai dekhne ke liye aankhein nahi, dimaag chahiye hota hai."
Elder ne apni pocket se ek bottle nikali aur Aryan ko di.
"Yeh lo. Yeh asli 'Bone Forging Pills' hain. Yeh tumhare inaam hain sach bolne ke liye."
Aryan ne bottle pakdi. System screen chamki.
[Item: High-Grade Bone Forging Pills (100% Purity)]
[Quantity: 5 Pills]
Rohan side mein khada Aryan ko ghoor raha tha, uski aankhon mein nafrat thi. Aryan ne use dekh kar ek 'Smirk' (kutil muskaan) di aur wahan se nikal gaya.
Hall se bahar aate hi Aryan khushi se naachne laga.
"5 High-Grade Pills! Isse toh main kam se kam Stage 5 tak pahunch jaunga!"
Lekin use nahi pata tha ki Elder Sharma abhi bhi use dekh rahe thay.
"Is ladke mein kuch khaas hai," Elder ne socha. "Ispar nazar rakhni hogi."
Wahi doosri taraf, Rohan apne doston ke saath khada tha.
"Aryan... tune meri beizzati karayi hai. Tournament mein tujhe main nahi, mera bada bhai Vikram dekhega. Tab tujhe koi Elder nahi bacha payega."
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