Update 9
News reporter - aaj ek fhir ek baar insaniyat ke naam par sawal khada ho gya aaj fhir ek 19 saal ki ladki ka berahmi ke sath rape kar ke uske backbone ko tod diya or sath me uske gale ke nas bhi break kar diya jis ladki ke sath rape hua wo hospital me apne akhri sans le rahi hai usne 4 rapist ka name liya
Ab aage ....
Aise hi sub khana kha lete hai aaj dono bachho ka first day tha school ka to ghar par special khana bna tha to sub log aaj ek sath khana kha rahe the khana khane ke baad bachhe log cartoon dekhne lage Sangeeta or radha kitchen ki saaf safai krne lage or Guddu Rajesh bahar ghumne chale gaye raste Rajesh bola
Rajesh- ye ho kya raha hai apne desh me daily rape case nikal raha hai but fhir bhi kanoon kuch nhi kr raha hai aise repist ko bich sadak pr jala dena chahiye
Guddu-ye bus samaj ko chutiya banate hai
Sale or kuch nahi
Rajesh- bhai hume bhi dar lagta hai kahi kirti ke sath kuch galt na ho jaye
Guddu - are tension mt le kirti ke sath unke 2 bhai hai kirti ko kuch nhi hoga
Rajesh- fhir bhi har time to nhi rah sakte dono or wo khud bhi abhi chhote hai
Guddu- dono chhote jarur hai but bade bade ko maat de sakte hai or rahi baat kirti ke self defence ki to thodi badi ho jaye to
Teeno bachho ko Karate class lga denge
Rajesh - haa ye thik rahega but agar kahi Neel or kartik aise nikal gaye to i mean tapori ban gaye to wo dono bhi ladkiyon ko chhedne lage to kya hoga
Guddu - Rajesh tujhe tere sanskar or bharosha nhi hai kya
Rajesh- hai but fhir bhi
Guddu- yaar tu sochta bahut hai jane de na
Tu abhi se itna mt soch wo hamare bache hai bharosha rakh un par tu bus aaj or kal ka soch itna dur ki sochne ki jarurat nhi hai bhai thik hai chal ghar chalte hai
Rajesh- sahi bola bhai tu chal chalte hai kahi lene ka dene na ho jaye madam gussa hogi to lag jayegi
Or dono huste huye gha ki taraf chal diye
Ghar pahuch kar ek baar bade pyar se apne dono bachho ko dekha or so gya
Aise hi waqt fhir apni raftaar pakad liya isse raftaar me Neel kartik or Kajal ki dosti ekdum pakki ho gayi thi Neel padayi me man laga kar padta or her saal top krta tha to Kajal bhi second aa jati thi or kahte sangt ka asar hota hai to kartik bhi 3rd no. Le kr hi aata hai inn teeno me apas me. Battle lagta tha ki kon first aayega or har saal Neel jeetata tha or ye dekh kr hamare principal sir bhi bade khus hote the ki unki poti acchhe sangat me hai
idhar Rajesh ne bhi apni khud ki ek auto le liya tha or udhar Damodar ne bhi apni wafadari dikhate huye pure imandari se kaam kiya or apne boss ka 2 no. business pure india tk faila diya jisse unki bahut profit hua issme Miss Rita bhi bahut help kiya damodar ka aise hi 9 saal ho gye the Neel, kartik or Kajal ab 7th se 8th class me aa chuke the or kirti bhi 10th pass kar ke collage me ja chuki thi shradha or kirti ek hi clg me thi to dono sath jaate the
Airport pr ek admi badi deri se airport se bahar jate huye logo ko dekh raha raha tha jaise wo kisi ka intezar kar raha ho tabhi ek 35 saal ka admi ek lady or ek ladki me sath aate huye dikhta hai jisse dekh kr admi ne uske pass gya or bola
(Jo admi airport pr khda tu usse admi 1 or jo apne family ke sath aya tha usse admi 2 likhunga )
Admi1 - welcome to Mumbai sir
Admi 2 - thank you Rohit maine jaisa kaha tha tumne waisa kr diya Mahim me ek banglow bana diya
Rohit - ji sir apne jaisa kaha tha waisa kr diya
Admi - thik hai chalo fhir chalte hai
Rohit - ji sir
Introduction
Suresh sharma : ye 35 saal ke hai or ye india ke top businessman me ek hai inke baas besumaar paisa hai itna ki jitna ye puri jindgi aram se kha kr gujar sakte hai but dil ke bahut achhe hai kabhi koi ghamand nhi or apni beti or wife se bahut pyar krti hai unke beti ke kids par wo mumbai sift huye the
Sushila sharma : ye 32 saal ki hai ye suresh ki wife hai ye bahut khubsurat hai or ye ek housewife hai suresh or sushila ki ek hi beti hai
Jayshree Sharma : ye abhi 14 saal ki hai ye apne mummy papa ki ladli hai or bahut latkhat hai or jiddi bhi bahut jo ek baar bol diya wo usse chahiye hi chahiye abhi madam ko mumbai me rahne ka bhoot sawar hai
Chalo dekhte hai aage kya hoga
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Stay with me
News reporter - aaj ek fhir ek baar insaniyat ke naam par sawal khada ho gya aaj fhir ek 19 saal ki ladki ka berahmi ke sath rape kar ke uske backbone ko tod diya or sath me uske gale ke nas bhi break kar diya jis ladki ke sath rape hua wo hospital me apne akhri sans le rahi hai usne 4 rapist ka name liya
Ab aage ....
Aise hi sub khana kha lete hai aaj dono bachho ka first day tha school ka to ghar par special khana bna tha to sub log aaj ek sath khana kha rahe the khana khane ke baad bachhe log cartoon dekhne lage Sangeeta or radha kitchen ki saaf safai krne lage or Guddu Rajesh bahar ghumne chale gaye raste Rajesh bola
Rajesh- ye ho kya raha hai apne desh me daily rape case nikal raha hai but fhir bhi kanoon kuch nhi kr raha hai aise repist ko bich sadak pr jala dena chahiye
Guddu-ye bus samaj ko chutiya banate hai
Sale or kuch nahi
Rajesh- bhai hume bhi dar lagta hai kahi kirti ke sath kuch galt na ho jaye
Guddu - are tension mt le kirti ke sath unke 2 bhai hai kirti ko kuch nhi hoga
Rajesh- fhir bhi har time to nhi rah sakte dono or wo khud bhi abhi chhote hai
Guddu- dono chhote jarur hai but bade bade ko maat de sakte hai or rahi baat kirti ke self defence ki to thodi badi ho jaye to
Teeno bachho ko Karate class lga denge
Rajesh - haa ye thik rahega but agar kahi Neel or kartik aise nikal gaye to i mean tapori ban gaye to wo dono bhi ladkiyon ko chhedne lage to kya hoga
Guddu - Rajesh tujhe tere sanskar or bharosha nhi hai kya
Rajesh- hai but fhir bhi
Guddu- yaar tu sochta bahut hai jane de na
Tu abhi se itna mt soch wo hamare bache hai bharosha rakh un par tu bus aaj or kal ka soch itna dur ki sochne ki jarurat nhi hai bhai thik hai chal ghar chalte hai
Rajesh- sahi bola bhai tu chal chalte hai kahi lene ka dene na ho jaye madam gussa hogi to lag jayegi
Or dono huste huye gha ki taraf chal diye
Ghar pahuch kar ek baar bade pyar se apne dono bachho ko dekha or so gya
Aise hi waqt fhir apni raftaar pakad liya isse raftaar me Neel kartik or Kajal ki dosti ekdum pakki ho gayi thi Neel padayi me man laga kar padta or her saal top krta tha to Kajal bhi second aa jati thi or kahte sangt ka asar hota hai to kartik bhi 3rd no. Le kr hi aata hai inn teeno me apas me. Battle lagta tha ki kon first aayega or har saal Neel jeetata tha or ye dekh kr hamare principal sir bhi bade khus hote the ki unki poti acchhe sangat me hai
idhar Rajesh ne bhi apni khud ki ek auto le liya tha or udhar Damodar ne bhi apni wafadari dikhate huye pure imandari se kaam kiya or apne boss ka 2 no. business pure india tk faila diya jisse unki bahut profit hua issme Miss Rita bhi bahut help kiya damodar ka aise hi 9 saal ho gye the Neel, kartik or Kajal ab 7th se 8th class me aa chuke the or kirti bhi 10th pass kar ke collage me ja chuki thi shradha or kirti ek hi clg me thi to dono sath jaate the
Airport pr ek admi badi deri se airport se bahar jate huye logo ko dekh raha raha tha jaise wo kisi ka intezar kar raha ho tabhi ek 35 saal ka admi ek lady or ek ladki me sath aate huye dikhta hai jisse dekh kr admi ne uske pass gya or bola
(Jo admi airport pr khda tu usse admi 1 or jo apne family ke sath aya tha usse admi 2 likhunga )
Admi1 - welcome to Mumbai sir
Admi 2 - thank you Rohit maine jaisa kaha tha tumne waisa kr diya Mahim me ek banglow bana diya
Rohit - ji sir apne jaisa kaha tha waisa kr diya
Admi - thik hai chalo fhir chalte hai
Rohit - ji sir
Introduction
Suresh sharma : ye 35 saal ke hai or ye india ke top businessman me ek hai inke baas besumaar paisa hai itna ki jitna ye puri jindgi aram se kha kr gujar sakte hai but dil ke bahut achhe hai kabhi koi ghamand nhi or apni beti or wife se bahut pyar krti hai unke beti ke kids par wo mumbai sift huye the
Sushila sharma : ye 32 saal ki hai ye suresh ki wife hai ye bahut khubsurat hai or ye ek housewife hai suresh or sushila ki ek hi beti hai
Jayshree Sharma : ye abhi 14 saal ki hai ye apne mummy papa ki ladli hai or bahut latkhat hai or jiddi bhi bahut jo ek baar bol diya wo usse chahiye hi chahiye abhi madam ko mumbai me rahne ka bhoot sawar hai
Chalo dekhte hai aage kya hoga
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Stay with me
Black water
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