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Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)

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Bhai tumhara sawal samaj me hi nahi AA raha hai mujhe. Aapko update chhota as raha hai ye problem hai ya Kya hai. Jara saaf sabdo me kahe..pls

First part1 ke muqable chota aa raha hai
Second fight scene ko kabhi adhura mat karna
 

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UPDATE 36










aise hi 2 din nikal chuke the lekin kahi SE kuch bhi khabar nahi aai thi. Matlab sab jagah Shanti chayi Hui thi. Dheere dheere sab normal hote ja rahe the. Aisa kuch nhi ho raha tha jisse kisi per shak Kiya Jaye.


Lekin agle din bahut kuch hua jisne pore desh ko hila Diya. Jaisa us plan me hame pata Chala tha. Baisa nhi hua lekin usse kafi milta julta jarur hua.




Darashal agle din Delhi,Mumbai,or Banglore me ek sath bomb blast hue. Sabhi blast metro me hue the. In jagah ki metro me bahut hi jyada bheed hoti hai. Jisse casualty hazaro SE badkar lakho ho gyi thi. Or sab se hairan ki baat ye thi ki sabhi jagah ek hi fix time per hi bomb blast hua. Jisse sabhi jagah ki sarkaro ko halat kharab ho gyi. Or Chouhan. Saab ki to neend hi Haram ho gyi. Kyuki unki itni security ke baad bhi ye blast ho gya. Unko itni fatkar lag chuki thi ki Kya batao.



Halaki kahi na kahi chook to Hui thi. Sabhi jagah per red alert jari tha fir bhi bomb sabhi ki najro se Bach kaise gya.yahi sabse Badi chinta ka subject tha. Or isko lekar Chouhan ne sabhi ki khatiya khadi Kar rakhi thi.





Chouhan- tum mujhe ye batao ki ye bomb anadr gya kaise.




J- sir sambha hai ki kisi ne unki madad ki ho. Ham sabhi CCTV check Kar rahe hai. Ummid hai ki usse hame koi na koi saboot jarur milega.



Chouhan- jaldi Karo. Agar aaj KE aaj koi achhi khabar Mene PMO me nahi di. To vo Meri naukri kha jayenge. Or me tum sab ki noukari kha jaoga. Ye baat bheje me set karke rakhlo.




J- ha sir samaj gya.




Uske baad Chouhan ne sunny or Baki ki team ko call Kiya.




Chouhan- kaha ho Tum log



Sunny- sir ham Mumbai me hi hai.




Chouhan- kuch pata bhi hai ya Ghar me hi ghuse hue ho.




Sunny- sir ham bhi usi kaam me lage hue hai. Aarav- sabhi jagah ki bariki se janch Kar raha hai. Jaise hi koi lead milegi ham log aage bad jayenge. Or aapko bhi inform Kar denge.




Chouhan- theek hai jaldi dhundo. Ye salo ko aaj KE aaj pakadna hai.




Sunny- done sir aap thoda wait keejiye jaldi aapko result denge ham.



Chouhan- ok. Do it.




Uske baad unke bech koi baat nhi Hui.




Sunny- aarav beta kuch Mila ya nahi.




Aarav- mil gya hai. Ek safai karmchari hai. Us per Mera shak ja raha hai. Isko pakdo ye aage ki lead dega.




Rishi- kaha milega ye.




Aarav- iski deatail nikal li hai. Ye dharavi me rehta hai. Baha jao or baha ke logo se Jara sambhal Kar rehna. Sare satkele hote hai.



Rishi- ha ham dekh lenge. Tu us per najar rakh.




Aarav- ha mene Harry ko kaam per laga Diya hai.usse coardinate lete rehana. Tab Tak me Baki jagah ka CCTV check karta hu.




Sunny- ok.




Uske baad bo dono baha SE nikal gye us aadmi ko pakadne KE liye. And aarav lag gya Baki jagah ki details dekhne me. 1 ghante me usne sabhi jagah ka 1-1 aadmi spot Kiya jis per shak ja sakta tha.




Usne turant hi Chouhan ko call Kiya.




Chouhan- ha aarav




Aarav- sir teeno jagah per 1-1 aadmi hai jisne in sab ki madad ki hai. Yaha Mumbai ka aadmi to sunny or rishi pakad layenge lekin Delhi or Banglore ka aapko dekhna padega.




Chouhan- theek hai bolo Kon hai.




Aarav- sir teeno jagah per ek ek safai karmi ko spot Kiya gya hai. Jo sabse last me train se Bahar nikle. Or Maine sabhi security ki janch ki lekin kahi SE bhi us bomb ko anadr nhi Le Jaya ja sakta tha. Isliye mujhe seedha shak in aadmiyo per hi ja raha hai. Kyuki yahi hai vo log Jo Bina koi checking ke bhi andar Bahar ja sakte hai. Ye andar Jaye time bomb Le gye honge or kahi bhi usko fit kar Diya hoga.




Chouhan- ha theek hai unki detail hhejo jaldi. Me dekhta hu yaha Delhi me or Banglore KE liye bhi kisi ko Bolta hu.



Aarav- ok sir Maine bhej di hai AAP dekhiye.




Chouhan- ek min.



Chouhan ne kisi ko kaha check Karne ko. To teeno ki detail thi. Or teeno ki photo address bagera sab that usme.




Chouhan- ha mil gyi. Theek hai inko abhi pakadata hu. Tum mujhe baha ka update de Dena jaise hi vo aadmi pakda Jaye.




Aarav- ok sir.




Chouhan- or Surya and Baki kaha hai.




Aarav- sir koi idea nahi hai. Mera bhi unse koi contact nnhi hua hai. Me pata karta hu.



Chouhan- ok




Uske baad aarav ne Harry se hamare bare me pochha




Harry- sir Surya sir is waqt yahi Mumbai me hi hai. And Baki Bhai Banglore gye hai. And Rony or aadil Delhi me hai.




Aarav- vo sab baha ab Kyu gye hai. Baha ab Kya hai.




Harry- pata nhi Kya hai.mujhe jyada info abhi nahi mili hai. Baki itna confirm hai ki V is waqt yahi hai Mumbai me. Use spot Kiya gya tha airport per. Halaki usne apna huliya badla hua tha. Lekin Maine use pakad liya. Or uske sath or bhi log aaye hai karib 15 log. Jo baha se in cities me chale gye the. To Bhai and Rony unhi aadmiyo ko dhundne gye hai. And Surya sir. Us V KO dhund rahe hai. Jaha bhi uski info mil rahi hai.vo baha ja rahe hai.or bomb blast me bhi sayad inhi logo ka hath ho sakta hai.


Ye sab bate aarav ke Kan me Harry bol raha tha. tabhi aarav ke dusre kaan me ek aawaj aayi.





V- kaisa hai aarav. Mujhe miss Kiya.





Aarav ne jab peeche mud ke dekha to uski halat to kharab nahi Hui lekin thoda ghabra jarur gya kyuki samne bahi V khada hua tha. Is baat per Harry ne turant hi Surya ko inform Kar diya ki V kaha hai.





Aarav- tu yaha Kya Kar raha hai.




V- kuch nhi yaha SE gujar raha tha. To Socha tujhse milta chalu.




Aarav- bahut Badi galti ki Jo yaha aagya.




V- are dekho to Kon bol raha hai. Sale computer KE keede. Mujhe sirf ek baat Janna hai. Agar Bata dega to me yaha se Chala jaoga. Or agar nhi bataya to Teri lash ko Surya ke liye chhod jaoga.





Aarav- Meri lash… mast joke tha. Jara hath to laga KE dikha.




V- challange karta hai Kya.




Aarav- ha yahi samaj le.




V- to yahi sahi.




Uske baad jaise hi V thoda aage bada usko ek jabardast punch laga jisse Sala udte hue deewal per ja laga. Uske hosh hi udd gye ki kisne use Mara kyuki samne keval aarav hi khada hua tha. Or muskura raha tha.




Aarav- are gir gye kahi chot to nahi lagi. Utho utho or pakdo mujhe.




V fir SE khada hua. Or isbaar vo bhi ready tha. Isliye apni full speed se aage bada…. Lekin apki baar pehle se bhi jyada powerful punch uska intjaar Kar raha tha. Jaise hi use laga vo fir se udta hua deewar per laga lekin is baar vo deewar ko todta hua aar paar ho gya.





Aarav- are Mera baby fir gir gya. Kahi lagi to nahi beta. Baise tum Kya Janna chahte the Jara batao to. Me Kya batao tumhe.





V- ye tu kaise Kar raha hai. Kya Tere andar bhi usne kuch Kar Diya hai Kya.




Aarav- me tujhe Kyu batao. Tu khud itna bada hai tuhi pata lagale.




V- (man me) jab ye nahi Kar raha to Kon Kar raha hai ye. Or itna powerful punch to Surya ka bhi nahi hai. Or vo to yaha hai hi nahi. Fir Kon ho sakta hai. Ek baar fir se try karta hu.





Bo fir se aarav ki taraf bhaga usne isbaar kuch on Kiya uske suit me. Taki use pata chal sake. Jaise hi aage bada abki baar use itni powerful kick lagi ki Sala ek Ghar se dusre Ghar me gira udta hua. Uska matha hil gya ki Kon maar raha hai mujhe. Or koi dikh bhi nahi raha hai. Mere Lance's bhi nahi dekh pa rahe hai usko. Aisa Kon aagya. Dekho sayad suit ke camera ne kuch dekha ho.



Uske aankho me lage lences me abhi halhi ka video chalne laga lekin usme bhi kuch khas use samaj nhi aaraha tha. Tabhi use lagne KE time usne video ko slowmotion me play Kiya. Itna slow ki ek mini se mini sec ke liye use kuch dikh gya. Usne us jagah pause liye or zoom karke dekha or jaise hi use thodi sakl saaf dikhi. Uska bheja fry ho gya ki ye kaise sambhav hai.




V- Surya.









To be countinue………...
Toh mamu log ne apni chaal is tarah se chali blasts karwa kar par usne yeh ghalati kar di ke woh arav ke zariye harry ke baare mein jaanne ke liye surya ki hi den mein aa gaya....
 

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main- ha be me hi hu. Teri himmat kaise Hui mere pariwar ke taraf najar uthane ki. Aaj tu gya kaam se.





Meri aawaj sunke usne peeche ki taraf muda. Or mujhe dekhkar uski halat hi kharab ho gyi. Kyuki Meri aankhe bahut hi khatarnak tarike se chamak rahi thi. Ek dum laal.




V- Surya tu yaha kaise aaya or kab.




Main- Kyu tujhe call karke aata Kya. Sale Teri himmat kaise Hui aarav ko hath lagane ki.





V- Maine abhi lagaya nahi hai usko hath. Dekh to baat samaj.




Main- baat samajne ka time gya ab tu dekh ki jab Meri satakti hai to me Kya karta hu. Bahut time se tune udham macha rakha hai. Aaj usko me shan't Kar dunga.





Ye kheke me aage bada. To speed mode me aagya lekin mujhe fir bhi slow hi lag raha tha.mera gol chakkar laga raha tha or ek dum se ek side se mere per hamla Karne ki kosis ki. Lekin Maine uski garden ko bahi pakad liya.sala bahi latak Kar reh gya. Maine usko ek hath se pakad rakha tha. Or dusre hath se uske thobde per Maine punches ki barsat Kar di. Sale ka pora mask Maine tod Diya. Uske naak se khoon behne laga. Tabhi usne mujhe thoda dhakka deke door ko Kar Diya. And khud mere se door ko hone laga.


Main fir se uske pass gya.




Main- Kyu be dar lag raha hai Kya Jo mere se door bhag raha hai.




V- tu Surya nahi ho sakta. Maine use hataya hai. Me janta hu bo kaise react karta hai. Lekin Tera sab kuch change hai. Tu jarur koi or hai. Sach batao Kon ho tum.




Main- me to Surya hi hu. Beta.ab tu chahe koi bhi bahana bana le. Aaj tujhe me jinda nhi chhodne Wala.




V- dekh last warning de raha hu. Maan ja nahi to bahut pachhtayega.




Main- achha aisa Kya karega tu. Jisse mujhe pachtana padega. Jara me bhi to dekhu.




V- dekh fir mat kehna ki Maine bola nahi.




Main- ha chal nahi bolunga. Ab Kar Kya karna chahta hai.





V- theek hai to aaja.



Fir vo khada hua ab uski halat theek hogyi thi.


Maine Socha iske samne thoda normel hi rehta hu.



Usne fir mere uper baar karna suru Kar Diya. Kabhi hath to kabhi pair. Lagatar bo baar karta ja raha tha. Or vo bhi achhi khasi speed se. Or me lagatar uske baro ko duk karta ja raha tha. Karib 2 min. Baad jab jyada ho gya to Maine ek super punch uski chest me jad Diya. Jisse vo fir se kuch door deewar per ja laga. Sale ki halat hi kharab ho gyi.




Main- Kya hua. Badi bate Kar raha tha. Ek bhi punch mujhe chhu bhi nahi paya.



V- (man me) ye Sala isko ho Kya gya hai. Iske punches ki power bahut bad gyi. Or speed bhi. Agar jyada der yaha ruka to pakka ye mujhe yahi jinda gaad dega. Yaha SE filhal bhagne me hi hoshiyari hai. Lekin bhagu kaise ye mama to yaha SE hilega bhi nahi. Ha ek idea hai. Meri team ko bulana padega.)



Fir v apne suit me kuch karne laga. Or Karne KE baad fir se khada hua. Or Meri taraf fir se bhaga speed se. Jitna tez ho sakta tha utna. Jo ki kafi tez tha. Mere lences ne uski move ko pakad liya. Jaise hi usne mujhper hamla karne ki kosis ki. Maine uska hath pakad Kar bahi SE mod diya. Or speed se hi uske ghutne per itni jor ki laat Mari ki uske 2 tukde ho gye. Or is sab se vo bahi KE bahi gir gya.



Mujhe pata tha isko recover hone me karib 3-4 ghante lagenge. Agar Maine ise Jane Diya to. Lekin aaj me use chhodne ke mood me nhi tha.




V- Surya ruk ja aage mat bad. Dekh mere hath or pair dono tod diye. Ab Kya marega mujhe. Rukja bahi.




Main- ha be aaj Mera tujhe jinda chhodne ka koi mood nhi hai.




V- mat Kar aisa.



Main- mujhe ek bajah Bata tujhe na Marne ki.



V- me Bata dunga lekin tu mujhe abhi mat maar.



Main- to Bata na. Me bhi to dekhu ki tere jaisa kamene ke pass akhir bajah Kya hai.




V- dekh ruk ja aage mat bad.



Main- Kyu na Badu.




Maine aage badkar uski fir se uthaya or uski garden SE pakad Kar bahut hi jor SE neeche ki taraf dhakelta hua Le gya. Ham 10 floor per the. Or Maine jab use speed force se dhakela to ham seedha 8th floor KE ek flat me aa pahuche. Uski halat kharab hoti ja rahi thi.maine laite laite hi uske dusre hath ko bhi pakad me Kiya or ghuma Diya. Sala apne dono hatho se hath dho baitha.



In sab KE baad me khada hua to dekha us flat me rehne bale hame bahut hi ajeeb tarike se dekh rahe the. Ki ham kaise chhat tod ke neche aagye.



Maine unhe ignore Kiya or us ko apne kandho per utha Kar me us flat se bahar aagya or seediyo se fir se me seedha aarav me room me Chala gya jaha aarav baitha hua tha. Jab usne hame ek sath dekha to bola.




Aarav- isko utha Kyu rakha hai. Maar dena.




Main- marunga lekin sale or bhi log dekh rahe the baha to yaha le aaya.


Fir Maine usko bahi neeche patak Diya. And apni sword ko nikal liya. Taki iski garden ko dhad se alag Kar saku.tabhi kuch log or baha aagye Jo sayad uski team hi the. Unke hatho me guns thi. Jaise hi unhone trigger ki taraf ungli badai. Maine super speed mode on Kiya and vo sab jaise bahi KE bahi ruk Gaye. Main aage bada or line se sabhi ki gerden ko dhad se alag Kar doya.meri sword se. Or me aage bad kar aarav ko ek side me khada Kar diya. Or fir jaise hi me ruka. Sabhi ki gerden ek sath neeche gir gyi. Lekin unki ungli trigger daba chuki thi isliye kuch goliya kamre me chal hi gyi. Or goliya chalate hue hi vo sab neeche gir gye. Or ye najara dekh Kar Us V ki to Nani hi mar gyi. Sale ko samaj hi nahi aaya ki ye hua kaise. Tez to vo bhi tha lekin itna tez to sayad vo soch bhi nhi sakta tha.




Or fir jab Maine uski taraf dekha to uska gala hi sukh gya.



V- dekh Surya mat maar mujhe ek baar to maar chuka hai ab Kyu maar raha hai.




Ye line sunte hi me thoda choka ki Maine isko pehle kab Mara hai.



Main- Maine tujhe kab Mara hai pehle.




V- Mara hai tune




Main- kab or usse pehle ye Bata ki tu hai Kon. Or Mera Rasta Kyu kaat raha hai. Or tera vo scientist dost kon hai Jo tum sab per experiment Kar raha hai. Or usse Meri Kya dushmano hai.




V- sab Bata dunga lekin mujhe marna nahi.



Main- pehle Bata fir sochunga is bare me.




V- theek hai suno. Darashal me VANS hu Tera Bhai. Or prakash ka beta.




Ye sunke ham dono ko hi tagda jhatka laga ki ye kaise jinda ho gya or ustak kaise pahuch gya.




Main- tu us Tak kaise pahucha.




Vans- darashal jab tune mujhe maar Kar dafna Diya tha. Tab pata nahi kaise mujhe vo aadmi apne sath legya. Or usne mujhe per experiment karke mujhe jinda kardiya.jab Maine usse puchha to usne bataya ki vo bahut Dino se tumhara peecha Kar raha tha. Jaise hi use mouka Mila usne mujhe Bahar nikal liya.




Main- hai Kon vo.



Vans- vo tujhe us Wolfpack ka akhiri boss yaad hai. Jise tune junkyard me Mara tha.




Main- ha yaad hai.



Vans- ye usi ka beta hai. Or us waqt vo usi jagah per moujood tha. Or jab usne tujhe super speed se bhagte dekha or apne baap ko marte dekha to tujhse badla lene ki Sochi. Lekin vo ye nahi Kar sakta tha. Kyuki tu super human tha. Isliye usne bhi pehle super human ka formula banane ki Sochi or lag gya kaam me. Lekin sath hi usne kisi tarah us scientist ke bare me suna Jo ek insan ko jinda Kar sakta tha. Usne use kisi tarah apne sath milaya or mujhe bhi apni kabr se Bahar nikal Kar barf me daal Diya. Uske baad vo log apni research me lag gye. Or jab unko safalta mil gyi to mujhper experiment Kar Diya Jo safal bhi ho gya. Or me bhi Teri hi tarah super human ban gya.uske baad hamne fir se apna business badane ka plan banaya or sath me Tere khatme ka bhi. Taki aage koi bhi hamari takkar ka na Bache or ham pori dunia per bekauff raaj Kare. Or sab sahi bhi ja raha tha. Uski technology or formule se me bhi kafi advance ho gya tha. Jiske bajah se Maine tujhe us din haraya bhi tha. Or hamne fir jagah jagah SE or bhi dead body ka intjaam Kiya or un per experiment karne lage. Or hamne apni ek alag aarmy bana li. Or Jo bhi chhipa hua Paisa tha Wolfpack gang ka hamne uska istemaal Kiya or apna ek empire bana liya. Jisko koi nhi tod sakta tha.lekin tune sab kharab Kar Diya. Or kuch Meri galtiyo ki bajah se.





Main- us scientist ka naam Kya hai.



Vans- uska naam Senoy hai. Or vo bhi ek kabil scientist hai.




Main- uske bare me or Kya janta hai.



Vans- jyada kuch nhi bas itna hi jitna Maine tujhe bataya hai.




Main- dekh kuch mat chhipa Verna bahut mehga padega tujhe.



Vans- Bhai pakka me kuch nhi janta. Uski history usne kabhi batai hi nhi mujhe. Bas itna hi bataya tha ki vo us insan ka hi beta hai. Jisko tune junkyard me Mara tha. Us Wolfpack ka last boss Jo tha.




Main- or uski koi aulad bagera to nahi hai na.



Vans- kuch keh nhi sakte. Ho bhi sakti hai.ye nhi bhi ho skati hai. Maine use kabhi kisi se baat karte nhi dekha hai.



Main- ab ye Bata ki vo milega kaha.abhi kaha hai vo. Taki me uski Leela bhi samapt Kar du.




Vans- Bhai hamare pass bas ek hi base bacha hua hai. Jo Russia ke pass beech samudra me hai. Vo bhi bahi hai.




Main- pagal mat bana baha kuch log hai bas. Maine khud baha ka najare dekhe hai. Baha na to tu tha na hi vo. Isliye ab Sach bol.kaha chhipa hua hai vo.




Vans- Bhai ham bahi the. Usne kuch alag prakar ki technology ko use Kiya hai.us base me. Agar ham Bahar se exray scanner bhi lagale to bhi andar ki bahut so jaankari nahi milti hai. Jaise ham his jagah per kaam karte hai vo pora area to Bahar SE kisi bhi keemat per nahi dikhne Wala chahe AAP kuch bhi Kar lo.




Main- Matlab vo bahi milega.



Vans- Bhai agar vo baha se bhag gya ho to keh nahi sakta baki vo bahi milega. Or uske aalwa mujhe or kisi bhi base ki koi jaankari nhi hai.jitna mujhe pata tha Maine sab Bata diya hai ab mujhe chhod do.




Main- tujhe agar chhod Diya. To fir tu theek hoke samne aajayega mujhse ladne. Ab me Karu bhi to Kya karu.tu hi Bata.



Vans- pakka Bhai me ab kabhi bhi tumhara Rasta nhi katunga.




Aarav- Bhai Kya lagta hai ye Sach bol raha hai ya blunder maar raha hai.




Main- mujhe to sab jhoot lag raha hai. Tu hi Bata



Aarav- mere khyal se sayad Sach bol raha hai.lekin pakka nahi keh sakta.




Abhi ham yahi soch rahe the ki isko mare ya chhod de.





Bahi in sab se koso door.



Senoy- apne base per baitha yaha ka pora najara dekh raha tha. Ki yaha Kya ho raha hai. Usne Surya ki fight bhi Delhi and vans ka confession bhi.



Senoy- (apne AAP se) Sala darpoke daga de gya. Lekin koi baat nhi. Me janta tha ki ye waqt jaldi hi aayega. Lekin Surya abhi ye sab khatm nhi hua hai. Abhi to iski shuruwat hi Hui hai. Abhi bhi mere pass aise bahut se weapon hai jinko me istemaal Kar sakta hu. Lekin ab Teri speed bad chuki hai.to iska Matlab ek hi hai. Or vo hai. Double formula. Jo ab me bhi karunga. Or Tere se jyada powerful banaoga unhe me. Taki tu unke samne bilkul nahi tik paye. Wait Kar tujhe jaldi hi najara dikhaoga.


Or agar yaha aana chahta hai to aaja. Tujhe yaha bhi achha khasa surprised hi milega. Bach sakta hai to Bach Jana………………………












To be countinue………...
 

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Toh mamu log ne apni chaal is tarah se chali blasts karwa kar par usne yeh ghalati kar di ke woh arav ke zariye harry ke baare mein jaanne ke liye surya ki hi den mein aa gaya....

Ha Bhai bas yahi galti Kar di isne..aage dekhte hai Kya hota hai....



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First part1 ke muqable chota aa raha hai
Second fight scene ko kabhi adhura mat karna

Bhai Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki thoda time ka problem hai. Isliye update thoda chhota lag sakta hai. Baki me din me 2 to deta hi hu. Or rahi baat fight ko adhura chhodne ki to vo Maine isliye chhoda kyuki vo keval ek entry thi Surya ki. Or jaise hi Hui update Maine pora Kar Diya. Agle me thoda twist Jo dalna tha.....




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Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Aaj hi poori story padh dali
Ek dum kaabile taarif

Thanks Bhai .........



Ummid hai aapko aage bhi pasand aayegi......


Apna sath u hi banaye rakhe.....
 

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Yaar ye toh mazedar tha v ke hosh hi udd gaye bhai v ka chapter close kar dena kyuki itne log mare gaye toh isse chodna bewkufi hogi

Ha Bhai uska chapter end hi samjho..aap...

Dekhte jaiye aage Kya hota hai...bahut Maja aayega....



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Wawooooo jhkaaaaas superrrrrr update
Ye laga v ko punch,kick yahooooo
Ab ay ga Maza tor phor mai

Ha Bhai lekin thodi Kam hi Todd fod Hui hai. Lekin aage bahut hai....


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