Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

[krish1152]

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[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 97













Rider or B.h aamne saamne khade hue the.bahi B.h man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki use pura bharosa tha ki uska idea kaam jarur karega. Bahi rider soch raha tha ki jarur daal me kuch kala hai. Ye yaha is tarah aaya hai matlab saaf hai kuch soch samajh kar hi aaya hoga.





Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi rider ne pehla haml kiya or apni sword ko seedha feka B.h ki taraf. Or B.h kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo uske seene me ghus gyi. Puri sword aag me dehak rahi thi. Or uske andar basi hui aatmaye us aag me jalne lagi thi. Vo chilla rahi thi.






Lekin agle hi pal B.h baha se gayab ho gya. Or rider ko sword bahi neeche gir gyi.






Ye dekhke rider puri tarah hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya. Or kaise. Ye bach kaise gya.




Tabhi rider ke pechhe se aawaj aai.






B.h- tumhare ye hathkande mujh per kaam nhi karne wale.






Main2- kyu tu buraai ka prateek hai. Or me buraai ka khatma karne wala fir kaise tu bacha.







Ye sunke B.h ne apni jeb se ek contract nikala.




B.H- ye yaad hai tujhe.



Ye kehkar usne us contract ko khol liya.





Ye dekhke rider soch me pad gya.






B.H- kaho to pad ke batau. Kya likha hai isme.




Ye ek contract tha jo hell king ne rider ko banate samay banaya tha. Or isme saaf saaf likha tha ki jiske pass ye contract rahega rider usko kabhi bhi nuksaan nhi pahucha payega. Or agar contract wala chahe to rider ko hamesha ke liye vapis bhi bhej sakta hai. Lekin isme ek or baat likhi hai ki contract wala rider ko control nhi kar sakta hai. Matlab vo rider ka istemaal apne fayede ke liye nhi kar sakta hai.




Or us book me yahi likha hua tha. Or B.h sadhna me baithke isi contract ko dhund raha tha jo use mil gya or vo yaha aagya.









B.H- ab bol kutte kya karu me tera Bapis bhej di tujhe. Hamesha ke liye. Jaha se aaya hai tu. Jahannum ki aag me.








Main2- achha hai tabhi me sochu ki tujh jaisa darpok yaha kaise aagya or khudse mujhe bula raha hai. Koi nhi udd le hawa me. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki mera bhi time aayega.vo bhi jald hi. Tab tujhe ye contract bhi mujhse nhi bacha payega.






B.h- achha lekin agar tu yaha rahega hi nhi to kaise meri band bajayega.




Ye kehkar B.h ne us contract ko padna start kiya apni full voice me.


Or jaise hi last line padke shant hua baise hi rider ki aag achanak se shant padne lagi.



Or ye dekhke rider ek dum hairan reh gya. Rider ab dheere dheere surya me badalne laga tha.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte rider puri tarah se surya me badal gya bahi surya ke andar se ek bada sa aag ka gola nikla or dur aasmaan me udd gya.




Or surya bahi behosh hone gir gya. Or ye sab dekhte hi B.h jor jor se hasne laga.





B.h- bada aaya mujhe maarne wala ab sad apni usi jahannum ki aag me. Or abujhe rokne wala koi nhi hai. Ab me amar hu.




Or jor jor se hasne lagam uski aawaj charo dishao me failne lagi.




Uske baad B.h ne apni sabhi buri shaktiyon ko aadesh diya charo taraf hahakaar machane ka. Or aisa bolte hi uske andar se 4 personality nikli jo dekhne me hi kaafi khatarnaak thi. Or charo dishao me fail gyi.




Or jaate hi apne apne kamo me lag gye. Logo ko darana unhe maarna sab kuch.





Bahi B.h ab vapis hell me nhi gya. Kyuki use prithvi pasand aayi thi. Ab vo yahi rehne wala tha. Kyuki na to use ab koi rokne wala tha na hi maarne wala.






Bahi surya ko karib 1 ghante baad hosh aaya



Maine apni haalat ko dekha or me hairan tha ki me yaha kya kar raha hu.me to bister me so raha tha.



Maine aaspass dekha to me is waqt usi jheel ke pass tha. Jise dekhke me or confuse ho gya.




Fir mujhe laga kahi me sapna to nhi dekh raha hu jaise hell king mujhe sapno me bulata tha. Isliye maine charo taraf aawaj lagai hell king ko lekin mujhe koi reply nhi mila.





Abhi me vaise hi baitha hua tha ki mere kaano me dev ki aawaj padi. To maine charo taraf dekha lekin mujhe vo dikhai nhi diya.





Dev- surya bahut badi gadbad ho gyi hai.





Main- kya hua. Or me yaha kaise aagya.






Dev- B.h aaya tha or usne tumse rider ki shaktiya cheen li hai. Or ab tum pehle jaise ban gye hi. Keval surya. Or isi ke sath B.h pehle se jyada takatvar bhi ho gya hai or usne apne chamcho ko sabhi prithvi per bhej diya hai halla machane ke liye.





Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka aisa laga jaise me koi bura sapna dekh raha hu.






Main- what. Lekin ye hua kaise.





Uske baad dev ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or sari baate sunne ke baad me to hairan hi reh gya. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha fha ki me kya karu kaise use roku.







Main- ab kya karu me. Kaise use roku. Rider tha tab tak me inki band baja sakta tha lekin ab to ye mere hatho me hi nhi aayenge.






Dev- ha me janta hu. Lekin tum fikr mat karo me hu tumhari help ke liye.






Main- kya help karoge meri. Ye bhi bata do.







Dev- mayus kyu ho rahe ho yaar.






Main- sach kahu na to me pak gya hu ye kaam karte karte. Ab vo maja nahi aaraha hai jo pehle aata tha. Ab to mujhe retire hona hai.







Dev- kya baat hai retire hoke kya karoge or.






Main- radha ko leke kahi dur pahadiyon me bas jaunga usko me bilkul bhi time nhi de pata hu. Ab apni puri life uske sath hi bitani hai.








Dev- or fir aise dushmano se kon ladega.





Main- nai peedi hai na. Maine unka jalwa dekha hai. Mujhe pura bharosa hai ki vo is jimmedari ko aasani se sambhal sakte hai.






Dev- ha baise ye baat to hai.






Main- bahi to.






Dev- theek hai. Is kaam ke Baad tum jo chaho kar lena. Lekin filhaal to tumhe inse nipatna hi padega. Kyuki or koi nhi hai jo ye kaam kar payega.







Main- ha to karunga hi. Ab batao kya karna hai or kaise karna hai.






Dev- theek hai suno. Tumhari sword hai na. Use apne dono hatho me pakado or 3 baar om namah shivaya bolo. Aisa karte hi tumhari sword normal nahi rahegi. Or tum usse B.h ko chhod ke uske baaki ke sabhi sathiyo ka nash kar paoge.







Main- or B.h ka kya hoga fir use kaise khatam karunga me







Dev- uska jab samay aayega tab me bata dunga filhaal sehro me faile aatank ko khatam karo. Chun chun kar niptaao ek ek ko. Or vanraj ko bhi le jaao sath.







Main- achha pakka aisa bolne se kaam hoga.






Dev- viswas rakho mahadev jarur apni kripa karenge tum per. Pure shraddha viswas or prem se bolna mahadev ka dhyan laga ke. Kaam jarur hoga.







Main- theek hai me kar lunga baise lagta hai tumhari help ki jarurat jald hi padegi.








Dev- jab padegi tab me tumhare samne hounga. Chinta mat karo. Filhaal ye karo or subah hone se pehle sabka Nash kardo. Baaki ka kaam baad me dekhenge.








Main- ok. Tum kehto ho to karta hu me. Chalo baad me baat karta hu me.





Ye kehkar line cut gyi hamari.




Or ab me bahi per baitha raha thodi der or sochne laga ki kya karu kaise karu.








Ab dekhte hai kya karta hai surya kya dev ne jo kaha hai vo sach hoga. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















To be continue………………………...

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Yeh toh Black Heart ne Surya ko bahot bada jhatkaa de diyaa. Rider ki saari shaktiyan chinn ki aur use wapas jahannum ki aag mein bhej diyaa.

Dev ne Surya ki madad toh ki hai dekhte hai iss madad se kya kya hotaa.

 

[krish1152]

UPDATE - 98















Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















To be continue……………………….

Mast update b.h ne kafi badiya aur khatrnaak chaal chal kar surya ko fasaya hai lagta hai ab dev ko inki help ke liye aana hoga

 

[Jaguaar]

UPDATE - 98















Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















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Toh Dev ki madad kaam kargayi. Lekin Black Heart ne earth ko hell banane ke liye bahot bada wala kaand kardiya hai. Dekhte hai ab Surya kyaa karta hai. Aur Dev uski kyaa madad karta hai.

 

[Luffy]

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Rider or B.h aamne saamne khade hue the.bahi B.h man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki use pura bharosa tha ki uska idea kaam jarur karega. Bahi rider soch raha tha ki jarur daal me kuch kala hai. Ye yaha is tarah aaya hai matlab saaf hai kuch soch samajh kar hi aaya hoga.





Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi rider ne pehla haml kiya or apni sword ko seedha feka B.h ki taraf. Or B.h kuch samajhta usse pehle hi vo uske seene me ghus gyi. Puri sword aag me dehak rahi thi. Or uske andar basi hui aatmaye us aag me jalne lagi thi. Vo chilla rahi thi.






Lekin agle hi pal B.h baha se gayab ho gya. Or rider ko sword bahi neeche gir gyi.






Ye dekhke rider puri tarah hairan tha. Ki ye kya ho gya. Or kaise. Ye bach kaise gya.




Tabhi rider ke pechhe se aawaj aai.






B.h- tumhare ye hathkande mujh per kaam nhi karne wale.






Main2- kyu tu buraai ka prateek hai. Or me buraai ka khatma karne wala fir kaise tu bacha.







Ye sunke B.h ne apni jeb se ek contract nikala.




B.H- ye yaad hai tujhe.



Ye kehkar usne us contract ko khol liya.





Ye dekhke rider soch me pad gya.






B.H- kaho to pad ke batau. Kya likha hai isme.




Ye ek contract tha jo hell king ne rider ko banate samay banaya tha. Or isme saaf saaf likha tha ki jiske pass ye contract rahega rider usko kabhi bhi nuksaan nhi pahucha payega. Or agar contract wala chahe to rider ko hamesha ke liye vapis bhi bhej sakta hai. Lekin isme ek or baat likhi hai ki contract wala rider ko control nhi kar sakta hai. Matlab vo rider ka istemaal apne fayede ke liye nhi kar sakta hai.




Or us book me yahi likha hua tha. Or B.h sadhna me baithke isi contract ko dhund raha tha jo use mil gya or vo yaha aagya.









B.H- ab bol kutte kya karu me tera Bapis bhej di tujhe. Hamesha ke liye. Jaha se aaya hai tu. Jahannum ki aag me.








Main2- achha hai tabhi me sochu ki tujh jaisa darpok yaha kaise aagya or khudse mujhe bula raha hai. Koi nhi udd le hawa me. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna ki mera bhi time aayega.vo bhi jald hi. Tab tujhe ye contract bhi mujhse nhi bacha payega.






B.h- achha lekin agar tu yaha rahega hi nhi to kaise meri band bajayega.




Ye kehkar B.h ne us contract ko padna start kiya apni full voice me.


Or jaise hi last line padke shant hua baise hi rider ki aag achanak se shant padne lagi.



Or ye dekhke rider ek dum hairan reh gya. Rider ab dheere dheere surya me badalne laga tha.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte rider puri tarah se surya me badal gya bahi surya ke andar se ek bada sa aag ka gola nikla or dur aasmaan me udd gya.




Or surya bahi behosh hone gir gya. Or ye sab dekhte hi B.h jor jor se hasne laga.





B.h- bada aaya mujhe maarne wala ab sad apni usi jahannum ki aag me. Or abujhe rokne wala koi nhi hai. Ab me amar hu.




Or jor jor se hasne lagam uski aawaj charo dishao me failne lagi.




Uske baad B.h ne apni sabhi buri shaktiyon ko aadesh diya charo taraf hahakaar machane ka. Or aisa bolte hi uske andar se 4 personality nikli jo dekhne me hi kaafi khatarnaak thi. Or charo dishao me fail gyi.




Or jaate hi apne apne kamo me lag gye. Logo ko darana unhe maarna sab kuch.





Bahi B.h ab vapis hell me nhi gya. Kyuki use prithvi pasand aayi thi. Ab vo yahi rehne wala tha. Kyuki na to use ab koi rokne wala tha na hi maarne wala.






Bahi surya ko karib 1 ghante baad hosh aaya



Maine apni haalat ko dekha or me hairan tha ki me yaha kya kar raha hu.me to bister me so raha tha.



Maine aaspass dekha to me is waqt usi jheel ke pass tha. Jise dekhke me or confuse ho gya.




Fir mujhe laga kahi me sapna to nhi dekh raha hu jaise hell king mujhe sapno me bulata tha. Isliye maine charo taraf aawaj lagai hell king ko lekin mujhe koi reply nhi mila.





Abhi me vaise hi baitha hua tha ki mere kaano me dev ki aawaj padi. To maine charo taraf dekha lekin mujhe vo dikhai nhi diya.





Dev- surya bahut badi gadbad ho gyi hai.





Main- kya hua. Or me yaha kaise aagya.






Dev- B.h aaya tha or usne tumse rider ki shaktiya cheen li hai. Or ab tum pehle jaise ban gye hi. Keval surya. Or isi ke sath B.h pehle se jyada takatvar bhi ho gya hai or usne apne chamcho ko sabhi prithvi per bhej diya hai halla machane ke liye.





Ye sunte hi mujhe laga tagda jhatka aisa laga jaise me koi bura sapna dekh raha hu.






Main- what. Lekin ye hua kaise.





Uske baad dev ne mujhe bataya ki kya hua kaise hua. Or sari baate sunne ke baad me to hairan hi reh gya. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaraha fha ki me kya karu kaise use roku.







Main- ab kya karu me. Kaise use roku. Rider tha tab tak me inki band baja sakta tha lekin ab to ye mere hatho me hi nhi aayenge.






Dev- ha me janta hu. Lekin tum fikr mat karo me hu tumhari help ke liye.






Main- kya help karoge meri. Ye bhi bata do.







Dev- mayus kyu ho rahe ho yaar.






Main- sach kahu na to me pak gya hu ye kaam karte karte. Ab vo maja nahi aaraha hai jo pehle aata tha. Ab to mujhe retire hona hai.







Dev- kya baat hai retire hoke kya karoge or.






Main- radha ko leke kahi dur pahadiyon me bas jaunga usko me bilkul bhi time nhi de pata hu. Ab apni puri life uske sath hi bitani hai.








Dev- or fir aise dushmano se kon ladega.





Main- nai peedi hai na. Maine unka jalwa dekha hai. Mujhe pura bharosa hai ki vo is jimmedari ko aasani se sambhal sakte hai.






Dev- ha baise ye baat to hai.






Main- bahi to.






Dev- theek hai. Is kaam ke Baad tum jo chaho kar lena. Lekin filhaal to tumhe inse nipatna hi padega. Kyuki or koi nhi hai jo ye kaam kar payega.







Main- ha to karunga hi. Ab batao kya karna hai or kaise karna hai.






Dev- theek hai suno. Tumhari sword hai na. Use apne dono hatho me pakado or 3 baar om namah shivaya bolo. Aisa karte hi tumhari sword normal nahi rahegi. Or tum usse B.h ko chhod ke uske baaki ke sabhi sathiyo ka nash kar paoge.







Main- or B.h ka kya hoga fir use kaise khatam karunga me







Dev- uska jab samay aayega tab me bata dunga filhaal sehro me faile aatank ko khatam karo. Chun chun kar niptaao ek ek ko. Or vanraj ko bhi le jaao sath.







Main- achha pakka aisa bolne se kaam hoga.






Dev- viswas rakho mahadev jarur apni kripa karenge tum per. Pure shraddha viswas or prem se bolna mahadev ka dhyan laga ke. Kaam jarur hoga.







Main- theek hai me kar lunga baise lagta hai tumhari help ki jarurat jald hi padegi.








Dev- jab padegi tab me tumhare samne hounga. Chinta mat karo. Filhaal ye karo or subah hone se pehle sabka Nash kardo. Baaki ka kaam baad me dekhenge.








Main- ok. Tum kehto ho to karta hu me. Chalo baad me baat karta hu me.





Ye kehkar line cut gyi hamari.




Or ab me bahi per baitha raha thodi der or sochne laga ki kya karu kaise karu.








Ab dekhte hai kya karta hai surya kya dev ne jo kaha hai vo sach hoga. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.
















To be continue………………………...

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[Luffy]

Fabulous update

UPDATE - 98















Me bahi per baitha hua tha. Or usi me subah ke char baj gye the.




Tabhi maine socha ab jo hoga dekha jayega filhaal bahi karta hu jo dev ne kaha hai.





Maine bahi per apni paalthi mari or apne dono hathon ko jod ke baith gya. Or meditation karne laga. Kyuki sabse pehle man shant karna jyada jaruri tha.




Thodi der dhyan me baithne se man ek dum shant ho gya.



Uske baad maine apni sword apne hatho me uthai sabse pehle usko pranaam kiya uske baad maine use apne dono hatho se pakda or apni aankho ko band kiya or mahadev ka dhyan lagaya.





Or jab mere man me mahadev ki chhabi aane lagi to maine Om Namah Shivaya ka jaap kiya


3 baar jaisa dev ne kaha tha.







Or jaise hi mera teesri baar jaap purn hua. Aasaman me jor ki bijali kadki jisse mera dhyan tut gya or meri aankhe khul gyi.







Or achha hi hua jo aankhe khul gyi kyuki ye najara me sayad hi kabhi dekh pata.







Aasaman se seedhi bijli meri talvar per gir rahi thi. Vo bhi lagatar. Meri talvar lagatar chamak rahi thi. Or us bijli ka asar mujhper kuch bhi nhi ho raha tha.




Karib 2 min. Tak lagatar bijli girti rahi sword per. Or achanak se gayab ho gyi fir.




Bijli ke gayab hone ke baad. Meri taralvar alag hi chamak rahi thi. Usme se bhayankar bijli ka prabaah beh raha tha. Or mere dekhte hi dekhte vo prabaah band ho gya tha. Jise dekh ke me thoda chouka lekin fir maine socha ki jab iska upyog hoga tab iski chamak Bapis aajayegi. Or yahi sochke maine ghar ki taraf doud laga di.





Me ghar pahucha seedha apne kamre me. Baha de maine airpod lagaya apne kaan me Harry ko active kiya.






Harry- sir kaha gye the aap.






Main- gya tha kahi. Tum ye batao filhaal kaha kaha tehalka macha hua hai. Or vanraj ko bhi un jagho ke bare me inform kar do.





Ye sunke Harry ne sabhi jagho ko check karna start kiya. Ab vo tha AI system. Isliye use bhut to bilkul bhi nhi dikhe bas log yaha baha bhagate hue dikhe or pareshan hote hue. Ab vo kyu pareshan the ye use nhi dikh raha tha. Kyuki vo logo ke saamne aa hi nahi rahe the.





Harry- sir halat kharab hai or ye ek jagah ka nhi balki bahut jagho per yahi haal hai.






Main- pata hai. Naam batao






Harry- sir is waqt uday pur me bhi yahi haal hai aap shuruwat bahi se keejiye.





Ye sunte hi main doud gya. Uday pur ke liye. Super fast speed se.



Harry mujhe guide kar raha tha ki kaha jana hai






Udaypur me kai ilako me haalat kharab ho rakhi thi. Ghar jal rahe the. Log mare hue raste me pade hue the.




Maine apne lences ki setting ko thermal me change kiya. Or talvar ko apne hatho me pakda or aankho ko band karke mahadev se madad mangi or aankhe kholke aage badta gya. Saamne ek unchi building thi me seedha speed me uske uper chad gha bahar se hi. Or chhat per pahucha. Or charo taraf dekhne laga.








Charo taraf baise to sannata tha lekin jaha per vo sabhi the baha per shanti nhi thi. Or mujhe bahi jana tha.




Tabhi thoda chamatkar sa hua mujhe kuch dikhne laga. Ek bhut jo apne hatho se bhayankar aag nikaal kar ek ghar ko jala raha tha.




Ye dekhke mujhe aaya gussa or maine building se seedhi chhalang lagai or speed me uski taraf gya.




5-6 galiyon se hota hua me us gali me pahucha jaha vo khada hua tha.




Vo apne aag lagane me mast tha. Or me full speed se uski taraf badta hua ja raha tha. Maine apni talvar ki nok ko aage kiya or usko faadta hua me usko speed se hi paar kar gya.




Or ruk kar jab maine mud kar dekha to uske 2 tukde bahi jameen per pade hue. Matlab saaf tha ye bhayankar kaam kar rahi hai.




Or uske khatam hote hi aag ka badhna kam ho gya.





Or fir me baha se agli destination ki taraf gya







Bahi mumbai me vanraj bhi apni powers ka bharpur upyog kar raha tha. Or jaha bhi aag lagi thi vo use bujhane me puri madad kar raha tha. Baaki bhut bhi use kaafi pareshan kar rahe the. Isliye vo apni dekhne ki power ka bharpur istemal kar raha tha. Lekin vo mar nhi rahe the jis bajah se vo bahut hi frustrate ho raha tha.




Bahi me ek ke baad ek jagah ja kar un bhuton ka kaam niptate ja raha tha. Ye talvar vakai me khaas ho gyi thi aaj. Pehle bhi khaas thi lekin aaj double khaas ho gyi thi.






2-3 ghanto me maine sabhi ko dhund dhund ke khatam kar diya. Ab sab jagah pehle jaisi shanti chha gyi thi or uper se ujala bhi ho gya tha. Jis bajah se vo vaise bhi ab sayad hi bahar aaye.







Bahi jab black heart ne ye sab dekha to uska to fuse hi udd gya. Ki surya jaisa normal insan in bhuto ko kaise maar raha hai. Aisi kya power hai uske pass. Jabki rider ki power to usne chheen li hai usse.




Ab use surya ko or parakhna tha ki ye akhir or kya kya kar sakta hai.





Isliye usne apne ek khaas aarmy ko bulava bheja taaki inka kaam hi tamam karwa de.


Or usse bhi pehle usne pure aasman me kaale badlo ko chha diya. Ye badal itne ghane the ki almost andhera hi ho gya tha samast prithvi per. Sabko laga jaise surya grahan lag gya ho. Lekin aisa tha nhi.





bahi me is waqt vanraj ke sath tha. Jise maine jab bataya ki rider ab nhi aayega tab uska bhi dimaag kharab ho gya. Use bhi samajh nhu aaya ki ab kya kare. Or Ab B.h ko kaise rokennge.





Tabhi hamne dekha ki aasman me andhera chha gya hai puri tarah se.




Vanraj- aaj grahan tha kya





Main- pata nhi.





Vanraj- to fir ye Sab kya hai.






Main- pata nahj sayad usi B.h ka hi koi kand hoga ye andhere me vo jyada takatvar rehte hai isiliye.







Vanraj- possible hai. Ab hame kya karna hai. Mera to dimaag kaam karna hi band kar chuka hai.







Main- ladna hai.






Harry- sir mumbai ke outside kuch ajeeb si halchal mach rahi hai aasman me. Aapko baha jana chahiye.






Main- aisa kya ho raha hau baha.







Harry- hole ban raha hai baha per. Apne aap.






Ye sunke ham dono hi shock ho gye.



Or hamne us jagah ke liye doud laga di.






Ham baha pahuche to hole ban chuka tha. Hame pehle laga ki ye sayad black hole hoga jo apne andar sab kuch kheech lega. Lekin hamari galat fehmi jaldi hi dur ho gyi. Kyuki ye hole bahar kheechne wala nhi tha balki ya bahar nikalne wala tha.




Bahi hame ye bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye open kaise ho raha hai. Tabhi Harry ne hame bataya ki aise hi hole kai jagaho per ban rahe hai.




Bahi B.h is waqt apni ankho ko band karke baitha hua tha or uski power se ye hole creat ho rahe the.





Ye hole dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise hamare chhate me bade bade chhed ho gye ho.





Aise kul milakar 8 chhed bane pure aasman me. Lekin filhaal unme se kuch bhi bahar nhi aaraha tha. Bas vo chhed ban hi rahe the or apna aakar le rahe the. Jo size me itne bade the ki puri mumbai sama jaaye is hole me.





Hamari kuch bhi samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki ye hole akhir bane kaise hai or inse hoga kya.



Bahi saari duniya inhe dekh rahi thi or vo bhi hamari hi tarah hairan the. Kai logo ne to alien hamle ki chetavni tak de di. Unhe laga isme se alien niklenge or unper hamla karenge. Lekin unme se filhaal kuch nhi nikal raha tha.









Tabhi aasman se hame ek aawaj aai. Or hamne uper ki taraf dekha.





B.h- surya bas ab kal tak jitni kushiya manani hai mana lo. Kyuki kal ye prithvi puri tarah se hell me badal jayegi. Or koi use nhi rok payega. Ye hole dekh rahe ho. Ye jaise hi ek line me aajayenge vaise hi tumhari barbadi shuru ho jayegi. Or in hole se bhi jyada khatarnaak cheez maine already yaha per chhod rakhi hai. Or uska jalwa bhi jaldi hi tumhe sunne ko milega.



Ye kehkar vo jor se hasne laga. Or uski gunj se pura aasman hi hill gya. Bahi mujhe or vanraj ka gussa badta hi ja raha tha.






B.h- is gusse ko sambhal kar rakho. Kyuki iski bahut jarurat padegi aange bas dekhte jaao kya hota hai. Or bacha sakte ho to bacha lo apni pyari prithvi ko. Ya fir aakhiri baar dekh lo apni is prithvj ko. Kyuki kal se iska ek naya naam padne wala hai HELL……










ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage or kya karega black heart or surya use kaise rokega
















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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Ha bhai usi movie se inspire kiya tha ye seen. Lekin us movie me jo aage hota hai vo isme nhi hoga. Keval utna part hi baisa likha hai. Aage jo bhi hoga vo alag hi hoga us movie se baaki dekhiye kya hoga aage



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Ha bhai kyuki story ab apne antim charan me chal rahi hai. Or aane wale kuch updates me complete bhi ho jayegi. Bas dekhte jaiye kya or kaise hota hai sab.



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Thanks bhailog apna sath aise hi banaye rakhne ke liye. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya hoga jab b.h or rider aamne saamne honge. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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[Rudrathakur]

To ye tarika tha ghost rider ko thikane lgane ka black heart ke paas....usns waps ghost rider ko us na-murad contract ki help se waps hell bhej diya kya ghost rider ab waps surya ko mil paayega jisse wo black heart ko maar ske ya koi aur rashta niklega B.H ko maarne ka...paras patthar bhi to nhi h surya ke paas ab...to ab dekhte h ki wo kya krta h aur kaise...wo dekhne layak hoga pr usse phle B.H prithivi ko shamshaan me tabdeel jarur kr dega uske kahe anusar hell bna dega agr jaldi hi use rokne ka koi upaaY nhi mila to...filhal uske chamcho ko to surya ne vanraj ke sath mil kr khatam kr diya dev ke dwara mili madad ke karan...ab dekhte h dev is mamle me kya help krta h surya ki..kyuki ek bhayanak khatra to us keede ke roop me prithivi pr hi h pta nhi kya kohraam machayega wo aane wale waqt me pta chl jayega..wahi jo dusra aasman se aane wala khatra hai wo kis roop me aane wala ye bhi aane wala waqt hi btayega pr pr itna tay h ki bahut tabahi hone wali h aane wale waqt me...so waiting for the next brother🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡

 

[Naik]

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us dhuye ki bajah se sabko dikhna lagbhag band hi ho gya tha.




Samar- ye kya kar raha hai ye kuch dikhai hi nhi de raha hai.






Ashk- lagta hai ye mayabi ki koi chaal hai dhuye ka aad me hamla karega ye. Avi sambhal kar rehna.






Avi- ok.




Avi apne suit ke andar tha. Or use sab dikh raha tha thoda thoda hi sahi. Use dhua hi dikh raha tha. Lekin uska AI system takshak ko detect kar raha tha. Vo jaha bhi move karta use vo dikh raha tha jaate hue.





Avi- tu to bada darpok nikla yaar. Ab chhip kar war karega tu. Saale ja apni mummy ke anchal me chhip ja or aainda yaha aana bhi mat.







Takshak- beta pyar or jung me sab kuch jayaz hota hai ye baat aaj me tumhe sikh dunga.





Ye baat khatam hui or avi ko ek jor ka jhatka laga. Or vo udta hua thodi dur ja gira.




Girte hi avi fir se khada hua. Or usne charo taraf use dekhna start kiya. Lekin ab vo use nhi dikh raha tha. Avi use detect nhi kar pa raha tha.







Bhai- i think ab hame chalna chahiye kahi ye mayabi kuch anhoni na kar de.






Main- theek hai bhai bacho ko itni traning kafi hai. Lekin aap yahi rahiye. Kyuki abhi aapke saamne ek tufaan aane wala hai. Isliye aap mujhse dur hi rahe.





Bhai- kaisa tufaan.





Main- abhi pata chal jayega. Bas dekhte jaiye.





Andhera bhi ho gya tha uper se dhua isliye takshak kisi ko bhi nhi dikh raha tha.




Or maine bhi apne kadam aage badhaye unki taraf.




Or jaise jaise me unke pass pahuch raha tha meri jalan badti ja rahi thi. Or iska matlab saaf tha ki rider aane wala hai bahar. Or yahi mujhe chahiye tha.




Jaise hi me dhuye ki andar ghusa mera rup puri tarah se ek dum badal gya. Or me rider me tabdeel ho gya.





Uske baad rider ne apna muh khola or saas ko andar kheechna start kiya. Or aisa karte hi sara dhua rider muh me ghusne laga aas pass jitna bhi dhua tha vo sara rider me andar ghus gya.




Or dhuye ke hat te hi sabko takshak dikhne laga jo is waqt avi per peeche se hamla karne hi wala tha.



Lekin usne ab tak rider ko nhi dekha tha. Or jab usne one dhuye ko gayab hote dekha to vo puri tarah se hairan reh gya.




Bahi avi or baaki sabne bhi ye karishma dekha. Or fir sabki najar takshak per gyi. Avi ki bhi.



To avi ne foran hi palat kar takshak ka hath pakada or dusre hath se use garden se utha diya or jor se jameen per patak diya.






Main2- bacho dur hath jaao usse ye mera sikaar hai.





Ye aawaj sunke sabhi ka dhyan rider per gya. Or use dekhte hi sabhi sabhi ke char kadam peeche ko hath gye. Bahi dur se veer ne jab ye najara dekha to uske bhi hosh udd gye. Kyuki use pata tha ki ye surya hi hai. Lekin use ye nhi pata tha ki ye surya aisa kaise ho gya or kyu.







Bahi jab takshak ne rider ko dekha to uski bhi sitti pitti gul ho gyi. Use samajh me nahi aaya ki ye yaha kaise aagya.




Bahi veer ko laga ki kahi bache rider per hamla na kar de isliye vo bhi baha aaya or usne sabse pehle Samar amar or ashk ko ik side chalne ko kaha vo jabardasti unhe baha se le gya. Ab keval avi hi baha bacha hua tha.




Rider ne apni najar takshak per lagai or aage badhna start kiya.



Bahi takshak ne pechhe ki taraf khisakna.




Bahi avi bhi ye sab dekhke side ko ho gya. Vo bhi dekhna chahta tha ki akhir hota kya hai.





Avi ke side hote hi rider ek hi jhatke me takshak ke pass pahuch gya.





Main2- teri mout ab aachuki hai dekh meri aankho me.





Ye sunte hi takshak ki aankhe seedhi ja mili rider ki aankho se. Or uski anakho me dekhte hi uski cheekhe nikalne lagi. Or use dikhne laga ki aaj tak usne kya kya kiya hai kis kis ko pareshan kiya hai kis kis ko mara hai sab kuch. Khaskar jabse vo black heart ki sangat me aaya tab se.






Thodi hi der me takshak ki haalat aisi ho gyi jaise kisi jale bhune kabab ki haalat hoti hai. Uska pura chehra or pura sarir bhun gya rider ki agni me. Or uske pran pakheru bhi udd gye isi me.




Uska sikaar karne ke baad rider gya jeetu ki taraf jo abhi bhi behosh hi pada hua tha.



Bahi jab sabne us takshak ki haalat dekhi to dekhte hi reh gye unhe samajh me hi nhi aaya ki ye kya hua kaise hua or kyu hua. Vo sabhi hairan the ki akhir ye hai kya cheez jisne bina kuch kiye hi iski band baja di.






Khair rider ne jeetu ko hawa me uthaya or apna muh khol kar uski soul ko chus liya. Or uske bejaan sarir ko bahi chhod diya. Jo neeche girte hi pal bhar me sad gya.




Or is tarah dono ka hi kaam tamam ho gya. Vo bhi itni aasani se jitna kisi ne socha bhi nhi tha.





Uske baad rider ne sab jagah dekha or sunghne laga lekin use kahi se bhi buraai ki gandh nhi aai. To haar kar use vapis jana pada. Or uske Bapis jaane ka matlab hai surya ka Bapis aana.





Or baha moujud charo bacho or veer sabhi ne ye najara dekha ki kaise rider Bapis se surya me badla. Or jab unke saamne surya aaya to unki hairangi ka koi thikana hi nhi tha. Vi sabhi hairan pareshan sa ek tak surya ko hi dekh rahe the.



Or main is waqt jameen per peeth ke bal leta hua tha or apni saaso ko control karne ki kosis kar raha tha.






Tabhi bhai mere pass aaye.




Bhai- ye sab kya tha. Tu aisa kaise badal gya mujhe batayega





Main- bhai ye sab hell king ka diya gya tohfa hai. Aise danavo se nipatne ke liye. Or isi ki madad se vikraal uske sathi or bhi kai jano ko me thikane laga chuka hu. Vo bhi bahut hi aasani se. Mere us rup ke aage kisi ki ek nhi chalti hai. Aapne dekha hi hoga kya hua abhi.








Bhai- lekin aisa kabse hai tu. Or tune hame bataya kyu nhi.






Main- bhai yaha aane ka mouka hi nhi mil raha tha. Aapko to pata hai me mumbai me hi reh raha hu. Itne dino se. Isiliye bata nhi paya. Socha tha bata dunga jab mouka milega or aaj mouka mil gya to bata diya.







Ashk- mujhe to dar lagne laga tha vo akhir tha kya.






Main- pata nhi lekin hoga koi black heart ka samarthak hi. Chhodo ab uski charcha. Baise amar aaj kal bahut baate chhipane lage ho tum hamse.





Ye sunte hi amar ne apni mundi neeche kar li.





Amar- sorry chachu. Vo mujhe pata nhi tha ki mamla itna bad jayega or ye aisi powers leke yaha ladne aajayega. Mujhe laga normal insan hai isko to ham sambhal hi sakte hai. Or aap sabhi bhi kitne hi kaamo me busy rehte hai isliye aapko disturb nhi karna chahte the.





Bhai- achha ab to ye bade ho gye hai surya apne liye ladkiya bhi dhund ki hai in logo ne. Apni to ab inhen koi jarurat hi nhi hai.






Avi- baise bade papa ham dono ne aisa nhi kiya hai. Isliye hame inse dur hi rakhe.



Ye kehkar avi ek side ko ho gya or uske sath ashk bhi.






Main- ha baise ye baat to hai lekin dekhte hai kab tak tum dono akele rehte hai






Ashk- ham nahi dhundne wale aap hi dhund lena hamare liye.






Main- dekhte hai. Baise avi ye suit kab banaya bataya bhi nhi tumne.






Avi- dad ye suit aise hi kisi mouke ke liye banaya tha usi robo ke sath. Or dekho aaj kaam aagya na.






Main- baise ek baat kahu. I m really proud of you all. Kya bahaduri se lade hai aaj aap sabhi. Maja hi aagya dekhke.






Ashk- baise aap aaye kab the dad.






Main- me to fight shuru hone se pehle hi aagya tha jaise hi jeetu yaha pahucha tha uske peeche me bhi aagya tha. Or tabhi se dekh raha hu yaha kya kya hua hai.







Samar- varsha kaha hai in sab me usper to dhyan hi nhi gya mera.




Ye sunte hi charo varsha ko dekhne lage.





Bhai- ghabrao mat vo ghar per hai. Vo ye sab shuru hote hi ghar per mujhe bulane aagyi thi. Kyuki use laga yaha mamla kaafi bigad sakta hai. Kyuki jeetu lazor chhod raha tha.






Main- usne vakai samajhdari se kaam liya inlogo ki tarah nhi ki khud hi ulajh pade.





Bhai- ha Verna hame pata hi nhi chalta ki yaha akhir kya chal raha hai. Or bhagwan na kare agar kisi ko kuch ho jata to.






Main- khair aisi noubat aane hi nhi wali thi. Kyuki me to tha hi yaha per. Me to bas dekh raha tha ki kab tak ye log inko sambhalte hai. Khair ab niklo ghar per. Me jata hu vapis mumbai.






Bhai- khana kha ke jaana chal ghar sabse mil bhi lena. Kitno dino se kisi ne shakal bhi nhi dekhi hai teri.




Sabhi ne bola to me bhi unke sath ghar ke liye nikal gya.








Ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.

















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UPDATE - 96













ham sab ghar pahuche. Sabhi mujhe dekhke kush ho gye the. Khaskar radha and baaki sabhi ko jo tension thi jo varsha ne di thi vo bhi ek hi jhatke me gayab ho gyi thi. Kyuki unhe pata tha ki agar me yaha aagya tha matlab sab sahi se nipat gya hoga or ab tension lene ka koi matlab nhi haj.





Dad- tum kab aaye surya.





Main- abhi aaya tha dad




Dad- aao aao.



Uske baad main baitha or hamari gappe chalu ho gyi. Sabne puchha ki kya hua tha to maine bata diya sab kuch sirf rider wali baat ko chhodke. Jise sunke sabhi en chain ki saas li. Or sabhi kush bhi ho gye amar or nidhi ke baare me jaankar. Unhe to yakeen hi nhi ho raha tha ki amar ki gf ban gyi hai. Kyuki amar is mamle me thoda shy type ka banda hai veer ki tarah.





Amar- dekhiye ab jo aap logo ko sab pata chal gya hai to me bata du abhi is baat ko bhul jaiye kyuki abhi mera shadi ka koi irada nhi hai. Or ye baat maine baha bhi bol di hai. Isliye jab sahi samay aayega tab aap log kar deejiyega hamari shadi lekin filhaal jaisa chal raha hai chalne de.







Amom- ha beta bahut bada ho gya hai tu. Badi badi baate karne laga haj. Dekha papa aapne.





Dad- ha beta dekh bhi raha hu or sun bhi raha hu. Koi na hamare bhi din aayenge. Tab dekhenge isko. Filhaal isko chhod dete hai. Baise photo to dikha bahu ki. Ya hame hi jana hoga dekhne.





Ye sunke amar Sharma gya or ashk ne apne mobile me nidhi ki photo nikali or sabko dikhai. Ek hi jhalak me nidhi sabko bha gyi or sabhi is rishte ke liye raazi ho gye.




Dad- jara phone lagao nidhi ke dad ko. Mujhe unse baat karni hai.





Amar- kya baat karni hai aapko.





Dad- karni hai kuch phone lagao.





Ye sunke amar ne kampte hatho se phone lagaya nidhi ke pita ko.





N dad- ha beta kaise ho.






Dad- ji me amar ka dad bol raha hu jay pratap singh.





N. Dad- hello sir




Dad- namaste ji mujhe abhi jaankari mili hai ki amar or nidhi ek dusre se pyar karte hai or aap ko bhi is baat ki jaankari hai





N. Dad- ji mujhe bhi kal hi pata chala tha.





Uske baad dono ko baate chalti hi rahi formal baate






Baate hone ke baad sabne khana khaya or uske baad sabhi sone chale gye. Jaha radha ke sath aaj mera bhi mood ban gya or hamne apni kaam leela ko aage badhaya.









Bahi dusri taraf black heart ki sadhna almost puri ho chuki thi or usne apni aankhe bhi khol li thi. Or uske chehre ki muskaan hi bata rahi thi ki usko sadhna safal ho gyi hai.




Sadhna se uthte hi uski hasi charo taraf gunj gyi.





B.H.- ab batata hu tujhe rider ki me kya cheez hu. Bhale hi mere baap ne meri mout ka saman ready kar liya ho lekin iska use koi fayeda nhi hone wala hai. Ye baat ab vo jaan jayega.





Ye kehkar vo baha se seedha gya apne darbar me. Jaha uske kai log moujud the jo baaki jagho per black heart ka parcham lehrane gye the. Vo apni jeet ki khabar or sath me kai tohfe bhi laaye the. Or un tohfon me jyada tar to sirf ladkiya hi thi.





Black heart apni gaddi per baitha or fir uske baad ek ek karke sabhi ne apni apni khabar sunaai jise sunke black heart ki kushi doguni ho gyi. Or uske liye laaye gye tohfe dekhke to uski kushi ka koi thikana hi nhi raha.





B.H- sach aaj ka din to hamesha ke liye yaad gaar ban gya hai ek ke baad ek kush khabri aati hi ja rahi hai. Aaj itni kushi ho rahi hai jitni me bata nhi sakta. Or in tohfo ko dekhke to maja hi aagya. Vakai me





Ye sunke sabi ne black heart ka abhivadan kiya





In sabke baad black heart ne apne ek khaas se takshak ki jaankari leni chahi. To usne jo khabar black heart ko di. Usse uska khushnuma din ka bahi ant ho gya.





Or black heart turant hi baha se apne kamre me chala gya jaha sath me uska khaas bhi gya.





B.h- kya hua tha pure bistaar se batao.




Uske baad usne puri detail di ki kaise usne ek ladke ko aage kiya surya se badla lene ke liye or kaise uske bacho ne uski band bajai or fir last me kaise rider ne aake uski jaan leli.



Ye sab sunke black heart ko kahi na kahi shak hua ki kahi ye surya hi to rider nhi haj. Kyuki usne pehle bhi hame roka hai or fir aisa khatarnaak insan dusra kaha milta pitaji ko jo mujhse takkar le sake.




Lagta hai ab prithvi jana hi padega.






Ye sunke uske khaas ne use rokne ki kosis ki use samjhane ki kosis ki lekin black heart apna man bana chuka tha or dusri baat rider ka kaam lagaane le liye use prithvi per to baise bhi jana hi padega.






Ye kehkar black heart baha se gayab ho gya.


Or agle hi pal vo prithvi per tha. Or prithvi per ek bahut hi purane se kabristan me.





Baha pahuch kar usne charo taraf apni najar doudaai



Uske baad usne apni jeb se ek contract nikala jo uske pitaji ka tha. Usme kuch aisa likha tha jise padne ke baad black heart ki power kai guna bad jaane wali thi.




Or uska irada bhi bahi tha. Usne us contract ko khola or apni puri aawaj me use tez tez padna shuru kiya. Iski language kuch alag hi thi. Lekin iska asar dikhne laga tha.



Kyuki uske shabdo ko sunte hi pure world me se murda or bhuto aatmao ka ek hi disha me prasthan hone laga tha. Or unki manjil black heart hi tha. Jameen me se ukhad ukhad kar murde bahar nikalne lage the aatmao or bhut hawa me tezi se udte hue contract ki taraf khiche chale aarahe the.



Or inki sankhya itni thi ki ginti karte karte hi kai saal nikal jaaye. Anginat the ye sabhi.






Or contract pura hone tak black heart ke charo taraf unka mela lag gya tha. Or jaise hi black heart ne last line khatam ki pad ke usi ke sath vo sabhi black heart ke andar samane lage.



Or aisa hote hi black heart ne apni dono baho ko khol diya or sabko apne andar samane ka aamantran de diya or ek ek karke sabhi shaktiyan uske andar jaane lagi. Uske muh se cheekhe bhi nikal rahi thi. Kyuki power bahut jyada thi. Lekin black heart janta tha ki vo itni takat ko sambhal sakta hai. Or aisa hi ho raha tha.





Thodi hi der me baha moujud sari shaktiyan uske andar chali gyi thi. Or itni power ke andar pahuchte hi uska chehra or bhi bhayanak ho gya tha. Ab vo pehle se or bhi jyada daravana or khatarnaak lagne laga tha.







Iske baad black heart bahut jor se hansa or uski hasi charo dishao me fail gyi. Raat wale jaanwar bhi darke apne apne bilo me chhup gye.





Uske baad vo baha se gayab ho gya. Or surya ke ghar se thodi duri per pahucha. Usi ke gaav me usi jheel ke pass jaha takshak ka ant hua tha.





Uske baad usne apni aankho ko band kiya or rider ko yaad kiya or use apne pass bulane ka aadesh dene laga. Vo baar baar rider ko bula raha tha.





Bahi surya ko soya hua tha. Uski neend achanak se khul gyi thi. Vo bhale hi is waqt surya ke rup me tha lekin vo puri tarah surya bhi nhi tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise surya ko hypnotize kar diya gya ho.



Vo uthte hi neend me chalne laga or chal kar ghar se bahar nikal aaya. Or jaise hi vo ghar se bahar nikla uska rup ek dum se badal gya or vo rider ban gya. Or baha se doudte hue vo usi jheel ke pass ja pahucha jaha black heart uska intjar kar raha tha.



Thodi hi der me vo black heart ke saamne tha.






Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the or black heart usko dekhke muskura raha tha kyuki uska andaja sahi nikala tha. Kyuki rider surya hi hai ye baat usne confirm kar liya tha.






B.H- kya haal hai andar chhipe hue surya. Badi tariff suni hai tumhari.







Main2- filhaal use andar hi rehne do. Or mujhse milo. Badi der kardi meharba aate aate. Kabse intjar tha tumhara.







B.H- ha intjar to mujhe bhi tha lekin tumhara nahi. Lekin ab chuki tum bhi Bapis aagye ho to bahut purane hisaab hai jo tumse chukta karna hai. Aaj un sabhi ka hisaab dene ke liye ready rehna mere baap ke paltu kutte.





Ye sunte hi rider ne use ghura or apna ek kadam aage badhaya.




Jise dekhke b.h hasne laga.






B.H- ohhh bura laga kutte.




Ye bolke vo hasne laga.





B.H- Bhale hi kitna hi akad dikha le lekin rahega to kutta hi. Vo bhi mere baap ka. Or abse mera.





Ye kehkar vi fir se hasne laga bahi rider khada hua bas use hi khunnas me dekh raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki aaj iski kahani yahi khatam kar dunga.









Baaki ab dekhiye next update me ki indonk ki fight me akhir kya hota hai or kaise.
















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