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Incest Soul Swap[Koi Bhi Body Me Ghus Jana]

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Raja maurya

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Update - 4

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Mere nikkar utarte hi maa chaunk kar meri taraf dekhne lagi...

"Kya hua ?"

Mene maa se poochha...

"Aap...ye k..kya ?"

Maa kuchh kehna hi chahti thi par...

"Lolipop chahiye na ?"

Mene maa ki baat beech me kaat te huye kaha...

"P..par.."

Maa kuchh ghabrayi si lag rhi thi...

"Are kya hua ?"

Mene maa se poochha..

"V..v..Vo aapne Lolipop kaha tha par ye to l...lu.."

Maa sharm ke maare kuchh keh nahi paa rhi thi...unka chehra ekdum laal ho gya tha...

"Lullipop hai"

Mene maa ki baat complete ki...

Lullipop hi thi mere papa ke paas...4 inchi lullipop...haaye rabba ! Ye papa bhi na 🤦🏻

Khair ab jo hai isi se kaam chlana hoga...ab mene apna matlab papa ka lullipop haath me liya aur use masalne lga...

Maa ko us tarah zameen par betha dekh aur apne Lullipop ko hilane ki vajah se papa ki lullipop ab 5 inchi hogyi thi...

"Chalo jaldi se chooso ise...lullipop tayyar hai..."

Mene haste huye maa se kaha...

"P..par ?"

Maa ne fir kuchh poochha chaha...

"ARE AB KYA HAI ?"

Mene maa se chilla ke poochhaa... actually mujhe pta tha mai chilla rha hu..papa ki acting bhi to karni thi..

"Vo..ekbaar aapne mujhe aapki..lul.."

Itna keh kar maa ruk gyi...

"Aage bolo jaldi jaldi !"

Mene hadbadi machate huye kaha..

"Yaad hai ek baar aapne mujhe apni lullipop chusayi thi par 5 second baad hi aap shant hogye the aur bed par sone chle gye the.."

Maa ne poori baat short me kahi...

Aur maa ki is baat ko sunkar mene to apna sar hi Peet liya...

Ye mere nihaayti baapu...5 second bhi naa tik paya...chalo ab mai bhi to try Karu...


"Puraani baaten chhodo aur lullipop chaarto.."

Mene papa ka raub bnate huye kaha...

"J..ji"

Maa ne kaha aur mere L ke paas aa kar use kisi kutte ki tarah chaatne lgi...

Oh fuck !

Madar !

Aah...

Aah...

Maa ki lullipop chatayi se mai khud par se hosh khone lga tha aur ab meri hawas poori tarah se mujh par chadh chuki thi...


"Saali kutiya !"

Mere munh se cheekh nikal gyi...

Par maa nahi ruki aur mene zabardasti apni lullipop maa se chhudwai..

Par maa ruki hi nahi...

Bhencho pta nahi kya bhoot chadhaa meri maa par vo mere lullipop ko apne munh se chhod hi nahi rhi thi...

"Chhod de kutiya warna Teri khari nahi.."

Mene maa ke baal pakad kar apni lullipop maa ke munh se chhudwayi...

Oh !

Hmm !

Mai agar maa ko rokta nahi to shayd abhi hi mai ejaculate (virya nikalna / jhadna / paani nikalna) kar deta...

"Tu...tujhe to mai..."

Itna keh kar mai maa ko chanta maarne ke liye aage badha par Achanak se mere haath ruk gye...

Pta nahi kyu Mai Papa ki tarah hi harkat kar rha tha...kyu ? Ye pta nahi...

SoulSwap...

Vo article mene aadha adhura hi padha tha...

Jald se jald mujhe vo article poora padhna hoga...

Behrahal mene khud ko roka aur apne ghutno ke bal beth kar maa ka chehra apne haatho me le liya...

Maa meri is harkat se ekdum se sehm gyi...

"Mujhe maaf kardo...Mai khud par kaabu nahi rakh payi..."

Vo girgidate huye boli...

"Chhup...theek hai...sab theek hai.."

Mene pyaar se maa ko puchkaarte huye kaha...

Ab maa aur mai ek doosre ki aankho me dekh rhe the...

"Chalo ab..ekdum pyaar se choosna ok ?"

Mene maa se kaha...

"J..ji"

Maa ne kaha...

Mene maa ke maathe par ek kiss ki aur fir vaapis se usi position (mai khada tha aur maa ghutno par thi)me aagya...

Maa mere paas aayi aur meri aankho me dekhte huye meri lullipop apne munh me bhar li aur choosne lgi..

"Oh...Aah..."


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Maa bohot tezi se aur anand lete huye meri lullipop choos rhi thi...

Mad-hoshi me to unki aankh bhi aadhi khuli aur aadhi band thi...

Mai is samay khud ko swarg me mehsoos kar rha tha...

"Mmm..hmm"

"Ahh ahh"

"Slurp"

"Puchh"

"Aur andar aur andar"

"Jeebh jeebh ka istemaal karo"

"Slurp...umm"

In aawazo se poora room goonj rha tha...


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Maa beech beech ke mere lullipop ko taaj ko halka sa kaat bhi rhi thi..

"Poora munh me lo jaldi...ab chocolate aane wali hai.."

Mene kaha...

"Hmmm"

Maa ne haa me uttar Diya aur mera pura lora...oops...papa ki poori lullipop munh me bhar li...


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Ab mujh se rha nahi jaa rha tha...aur mene maa ke gale me hi ejaculate kar diya...

Maa me meri lullipop itni andar li thi ki unki naak mere Lullipop ke uspar wali skin par touch ho rhi thi...

"Deepthroat baby ! Fuck yeah !"

Excitement me meri cheekh nikal gyi...

Maa ne mera poora cum (virya / paani) pee liya...aur meri taraf Shak bhari nazro se dekh rhi thi...

Maa ko is tarah se khud ko dekhte huye mujhe ehsaas huya ki Josh Josh me mene kahi apni pol - Patti to nahi khol di ?

"Kya hua ?"

Mene khud ko confident rakhte huye mummy se poochha...

"Aap daaru peeke aaye ho kya ?"

Maa ne poochha...

Aur mene unki baat par koi reply nahi Diya aur apni lullipop maa ke munh me fir se daal di...

"Aayi badi poochh taachh karne wali..chal jaldi se lullipop clean/saaf kar meri"

Mene maa se kaha...

"Hmm..umm"

Maa ne munh me liye mere hathiyar ko choos kar aur chaat kar poora saaf kar diya...

"Good girl !"

Mene maa se kaha...aur

*ZzzzzzzzZ*

Achanak se mujhe ek jhatka lga..

Aur meri aankho ke saamne andhera chaane lga...

"What The ?"

Mujhe esa mehsoos huya ki mere shareer se mere praan hi nikal gye ho...aur mai zameen par gir pda...

Ab meri aankho ke saamne sirf andhera tha aur jese hi meri aankhein khuli mene khud ka sar ke bal apne bed par ulta khada paaya ...


"Ohh...."


"Nahi..nahi..."

*dhadaam*

Me bed par gir pda...

"Iski
Maiya ka saiy.."

Mai apni kismat ko Kos hi rha tha par ek minute...Maiya ka saiya ....


Papa ?


"AKSHU !!!!!!! AKSHU !!!!! AKHSU !!!!"

Mummy ki tez chillane ki aawaze aayi...

"Haye Rabba mad gya Mai to "

Mene apne sar par haath mara aur jaldi se neeche bhaga...


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Aaj ke liye itna hi...ek update miss karne ki bharpayi Mai jald hi ek saath do update de kar kar dunga...

Ye update kesa lga btana zaroor

Please !

Namaste 🙏
Mast update bhai
 

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Bhai aaj update aayega ya nhi?kyoki technically twenty minutes hi bache hai

Awesome updates

Bro superb update.
Dhire dhire tumhari writings evolve ho rahi hai.
Ab dekhna ye bhi rahega ki soul swap hone ke baad host ko kuch yaad bhi rehta hai ya nhi.
Or agr apna Hero puri tarah se host ki body ko kaise control krta hai.
Thoda sa demanding hu update ko lekr mai kuki mujhe story pasand hai.
Umeed krta hu ap regular rahoge or sath hi sath update bade bhi krte jaoge.
Per day update k according iss update ka size decent hai.
Ek do baar hero ko kisi situation me bhi fasana soul swap k chakkar me, jisse thoda real touch bhi aaye.
Else thanks for the update

Shandaar update

Sahi h baap ke shariir m beta ab maa se Maza lega woh bhi lolipop chusa ker
Dekhte h maa ko akhsu ki lolipop Kaisi lagti b
Badhiya shaandar update

Akshu n apne lolipop ki cream apni maa ko pila di lekin yeh cream nikalte hi wapas pita k shriir se apne sharir m pahoch gaya
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update

Mast update bhai

Nice updated
∆ 1 & 3 - Thank You very much 😁 is update ke liye mene gifs add karne ki Sochi thi par unka size 2mb tak jaa rha tha jo normally load hone me time leta hai isliye fir simple pics hi add kar diye 😐😅...

I'm gonna evolve from charmander to Charizard 😎 filhaal I'm chameleon 🥲(Pokemon fans assemble ✨)

Ye bhi ek interesting point hai ki ' host ' yaani ki jiska shareer hero ne technically ' possessed '
Use kuchh yaad rehta hai ya nahi...hero SoulSwap ki technique aur usse related baaton ko sahi se jaanta nahi hai...aadhi adhuri jaankari le ke hero maa ch*** gya 😂

Ab dekhna hoga papa kahi sidhaar to nahi gye 🤦🏻🥹

1 - 2 baar nahi ye hero to kayi baar fasegs SoulSwap ke chakkar me 🥲...

Aapko story pasand hai mujhe bhi pasand hai 🤘🏻🙃

Is udpate ka size decent hai 🙂...me guarantee nahi dunga par meri koshish rahegi isi size ki ya is se bade size ka update dene ki 💜

Dhanyawad ✨

∆ 2,4,7,8 - Thank You very much guys 💜

∆ 5 & 6 - Thank You ! Shayd aapne padh hi liya hoga par fir bhi mai btata hu maa ko akshu ki nahi balki apne patidev ki 'lullipop' bohot pasand aayi😂

Ye baat bhi hai ki AKSHU ejaculate karne ke baad hi achanak se apne shareer me wapis pohunch chuka hai aur neeche se mummy chilla rhi hai...

Kahi SoulSwap me galti se papa upar to nahi nikal liye? Dekhte hai agle update mai..

Aapke reviews ke liye dhanyavad 🥲✨
 
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Update - 5

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"AKSHU !!!!!!! AKSHU !!!!! AKHSU !!!!"

Mummy ki tez chillane ki aawaze aayi...

"Haye Rabba mad gya Mai to "

Mene apne sar par haath mara aur jaldi se neeche bhaga...

Seedhiyon se utarta hua Mai foran mummy papa ke room me gya...

Waha par mene dekha ki papa zameen par besudh pade hai aur maa aankho me aansu liye mujhe dekh rhi thi..

"akshu dekhna beta tere papa ko kya ho gya hai..."

Maa rote huye boli...

Mene bhi dhyaan se papa ko dekha...nikkar pehne besudh se Dale the vo zameen par..

Achha jin logo ko confusion ho rhi ho ki kese ye hua yaani ki papa mummy to nange the na ? Fir kese ye hua ?

Darasal maa ne jaldi se saari pehn li thi aur papa ko nikkar...

Mai jaldi se kitchen me bhaga aur ek glass paani le aaya...

Aur papa ke munh par poora paani udhel diya...

"Dhat ! Teri maa ki"

Papa gaali dete huye uthe aur mujhe ek laat maar kar door kar diya...

"Kya kar rha tha tu ?"

Papa ne mujh se poochha...

"Kya kar rha tha mai ? "

Mene bhi unse usi lehze me poochhaa aur maa ko ab samajh aa rha tha ki ab agar mene ek aur shabd bola to unka baalam thanedaar meri gypsy bnake chalwayega....


"Akshu tu apne room me jaa"

Maa ke kehne par Mai chup chap apne room me chla gya...

Ye jo abhi jo Kuchh bhi hua bohot confusing tha...matlab pehle to baapu behosh hua fir maa ne bulaya aur bhencho jab baapu ko hosh aaya to laat maar kar bhaga diya...

Ye aakhir hua kya ?

Koi sense aayi is baat ki ?

Mai apne room me ghusa aur wahi website kholi jaha par SoulSwap ka article tha..

"Jese hi website khuli tab mere saamne ek notification pop u hua..."

Kya tum abhimanyu ki kahani padhoge...aur mene jald me hasi pe click Kiya aur....


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-------ABHIMANYU & Z-Virus-------------

Bharat me Mumbai ke Thane region ke ek apartment ke room me..

Ek halki si aawaz me ek 18 saal ka nojawan gaana gaa rha tha....

"Hmmmm....Aaj din chadheya tere rang var gaa ! ...Phool sa hai khila Aaj din...Rabba mere naam kar use pana chaahu raat din jise....tenu Dil da vaasta....Aaj din chadheya !"

Vo insaan apne baalon par rubberband lga rha tha....

Vo ladka fir khud se kehta hai...

- waah abhimanyu ! waah ! Kyaa aawaz hai tumhari...ladkiyan to Fida hai tum pe...chalo dekhe to xforum khol kar kahani ka koi update aaya ya nahi ?...

Ji ha is insaan ka naam hai..Abhimanyu...gora rang ...kaale lambe gardan Tak aate baal..muh par ek smile jo hamesha bani rehti hai...

Abhimanyu - haa bhai ! Dekha jaaye The Hypnotizer ka Naya update aaya ya nahi !?....

Abhimanyu apne laptop par Xforum ke writer Abhinav ka deewana tha...usne forum kholi or The Hypnotizer thread par gya...waha usne dekha ki kahani ka koi update to aaya nahi balki writer ne kahani ka season 1 khatm kar Diya hai or kahani filhal hiatus (paused) par hai....

Abhimanyu - Shit yaar ! Ye writers bhi na .... Ek to inki kahani padho shuru se end Tak...or fir ye log achaanak se apni thread band kar dete hai ...ye koi tareeka hota hai kya ? Or or ye kya reason Diya hai ? Meri Kahani bachho jesi hai...arey yaaar !

Abhimanyu fir thread scroll karta hai or vo dekhta hai ki writer ne ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke baare me socha hai ....Abhimanyu ko ye padh kar thodi Khushi milti hai...

Abhimanyu - Waah to bhaisahab apni thread complete kare Bina nayi kahani shuru kar rhe hai ...wah ji wah ....dekhe to kya hai inki nayi kahani.... Mystery Of The Horror Village ? Yeh kya English me hai kya ?

Abhimanyu forum par type karta hai or baaki readers se sawal poochhne lgta hai...

Forum par :

Abhimanyu - are bhaiyo ! Ye writer ne ye koi nayi kahani chalu ki hai kya ?

Thodi der baad kuchh comment aate hai...

Peaku RP - haa bro ! Nayi story chalu hone wali hai ...isme zombies honge or ek haunted village me kuchh to hoga ! Mujhe to ye padh ke hi excitement ho Rahi hai...

Ketan#0 - horror story hai ye ...writer fir se kuchh unique likhne wale hai...or shayd Asura bhi hai story me..as a character..

Pocketleague - Dekhte hai writer ne aaj ki hi date boli thi first update ke aane ki...

Daymere - Bole to excited for the story ! Kyuki 1 hi update aayega jisme poori kahani hogi

Abhimanyu - achha ?! chalo dekhte hai kesi story aati hai...i hope ki is story ko bhi Writer Season 1 karke end na karde...(⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)

.......


Abhimanyu fir apna laptop band kar ke kitchen me Khana bnane jaata hai...Darasal abhimanyu apni padhai ki vajah se yaha par akela reh Raha tha ...or vese bhi abhimanyu jaata bhi kaha use maa papa ab is duniya me the nahi or Naa hi uska koi pariwar tha...ek ladki uski life me thi bhi wo bhi.....kher chhodo ..

Abhimanyu khana bnata hai ...khaane me usne maggi banayi thi...tabhi uske bahar ghar ka Mausam bigdne lgta hai...

Abhimanyu maggi lekar aata hai aur maggi khaate khaate vo fir apne laptop ko kholta hai...use vaha par dikhta hai ki Abhinav ki nayi story ka update aa gya hai...

Abhimanyu - waah Bhai waah ! Story to Hindi me hai chalo padhta hu kya hai isme unique ?...bas sex scenes hone chahiye aachhe ...maza aayega 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。....


Abhimanyu fir story padhne lgta hai....

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Update - 1

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Year - 2023

Poori duniya Zombie apocalypse ke chapet me aa gyi thi...Iski shuruwat kesi Hui pata nahi ....duniya khatam hone se pehle American Sanstha NASA or bhartiya Sanstha ISRO ne poori duniya ko yeh bataya tha ki is apocalypse (mahamari)ka kaaran ek asteroid (Ulkapind)hai jo ke kisi anya solar system se earth par aa gira hai ..usi par ye virus tha jo ki poori duniya me fel gya...

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Z - Virus....

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Ham logo ko ek ajeeb sa system mil gya tha ....Survival system Naam tha us system ka...

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Ham logo ko alag alag tarah ki Quests (task/mission) mil rhe the...

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Kaala kadha - infinite storage space ki powers deta hai

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Me (Abhinav) apne dost Matasura(Asura) ke saath Mumbai ke RV college me padhta tha...jab humne dekha ki kese insaan ek doosre ko kaat kaat kar khaa rhe hai to me or Asura bohot dar gye...par fir bhi kyuki hamne bohot saari films , comics ,novels padh rakhi thi zombies par isliye hame pta tha ki hame ab kya karna hai...

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Bharat ke Madhya Pradesh me Yamita naam ka ek gaaon tha...vaha par logo ne ek group banaya tha zombies se ladne ka !....

Vaha par ek ladki rehti thi Kriti or vo.....

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[Abhimanyu ke Ghar ke bahar zor-zor se hawa chalne lgi or tez bijli girne lgi
*Boom* *takakakaaaaaa*..... Abhimanyu par fir bhi kahani padhta rehta hai ]

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Yakshini Devi ne btaya ki Meri or Kriti ki beti hi is apocalypse ko rok sakti thi.....

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Daayan...rakht pishach...preta....

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Karthik baba ....

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Asura ko zombies khaa rhe the or me kuchh nahi kar paa rha tha....

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Abhinav - Ankush me tujhe chhodunga nahi...

Ankush kriti ke upar beth kar uske saath ....chiii .....

Abhinav - ankush !!!!! Nahi !!! Chhod de kriti ko !!!

Ankush fir kriti ko zombies ke paas fek deta hai...kriti ko zombies noch noch kar khaa rhe hote hai....

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Me apne aap ko goli maar leta hu....duniya poori tabah ho jaati hai...

The End !

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Abhimanyu update 1 ki kahani poori padh leta hai ... abhimanyu ki aankho me aansoo hote hai...

Abhimanyu - Yaar rula diya isne to ...sex scene to mile nahi ulta din or kharab kar diya ....or ye story ka naam tha Mystery Of the Haunted Village haina ? Par iska naam to survival in the Haunted Village hona chahiye tha .. mystery kyu likha fir?

Abhimanyu fir apni maggi ka bowl kitchen ki sink me rakh deta hai....ab abhimanyu apne room ke hall me jaata hai...vaha vo TV on karta hai..TV par abhimanyu news wala channel laga deta hai...TV ke news channel par ek footage chal rhi thi....

|Ek insaan doosre insaan ko kaat kaat ke khaa rha tha or vo insaan dard se tadap tadap kar mar gya or fir vo mra hua insaan fir se Zinda ho kar chalne lgta hai|

News Anchor - Aaj Bharat or poori duniya me kuchh log bohot hi ajeeb bartaav kar rhe hai...jaanwaro ki tarah behave kar rhe hai or ek doosre ko kaat rhe hai.... scientists ka manna hai ki ek nya Virus fel chuka hai poori duniya me...


Abhimanyu ab thoda sa shock hone lga tha...


Abhimanyu - Ye to bilkul abhinav ki story me jesa likha tha vesa hi ho rha hai...

[Abhimanyu ke ghar ke bahar ek or baat Bijli girti hai *chatchatkchak* *Boom*]

News Anchor - ISRO or NASA ka kehna hai ki ek virus poori duniya me sabhi jeewit praniyon ko apna shikaar bana rha hai...Ise unhone Z- Virus ka naam diya hai...

Abhimanyu - Fuck ! Yeh to bilkul sach hai....Saale Abhinav ke bachhe Tumhari story sach kese ho gyi ?....tumhari story to ab is duniya ki reality ban chuki hai...

Achanak se Abhimanyu ke ghar ki TV me se dhuaa aane lgta hai or TV phuk jaati hai....

Abhimanyu ko fir apne dimaag me ek ajeeb robot jesi Aawaz sunayi deti hai...

{! Survival System Activated!
! Username - Abhimanyu!
! Occupation - Student!
! Talent - Can Masturbate (Hilana/Hasthmethun) continuously upto 7 times!
! Ability - None!
!User stats :
- Strength - 9
- Intelligence - 11
- Charisma - 8
- Agility - 7
- Stamina - 15
- Vitality - 6!}

Abhimanyu ka sar chakraane lgta hai... abhimanyu 2 minute tak shaant hokar tez or gehri saanse leta hai....

Abhimanyu - Yaar us Abhinav ki kahani to sach hogyi hai...iska matlab hai ki jesa jesa abhinav ne likha hai aage duniya me vesa hi hoga...yaani ki Abhinav sach me Marne wala hai...mujhe Abhinav ko bachana hoga !..

Fir abhimanyu apne survival system par ek baar Nazar maarta hai...

Abhimanyu - Hmmm...baaki sab to theek hai par yeh be*nchod masturbation(hilana/Hasthmethun) koi talent hota hai kya ?.....

[*Dham*Tak*Knock ! Knock !*]

Tab hi abhimanyu ke flat ke gate par kisi ke khat khatane ki awaaz aati hai....

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Aaj ke liye itna hi.....Ye story me nya twist kesi lgi batana zaroor...Agar kahani me kuchh galti ho to please comment me btaye..

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyavad..

Namaste 🙏


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"AKSHU !!!!!!! AKSHU !!!!! AKHSU !!!!"

Mummy ki tez chillane ki aawaze aayi...

"Haye Rabba mad gya Mai to "

Mene apne sar par haath mara aur jaldi se neeche bhaga...

Seedhiyon se utarta hua Mai foran mummy papa ke room me gya...

Waha par mene dekha ki papa zameen par besudh pade hai aur maa aankho me aansu liye mujhe dekh rhi thi..

"akshu dekhna beta tere papa ko kya ho gya hai..."

Maa rote huye boli...

Mene bhi dhyaan se papa ko dekha...nikkar pehne besudh se Dale the vo zameen par..

Achha jin logo ko confusion ho rhi ho ki kese ye hua yaani ki papa mummy to nange the na ? Fir kese ye hua ?

Darasal maa ne jaldi se saari pehn li thi aur papa ko nikkar...

Mai jaldi se kitchen me bhaga aur ek glass paani le aaya...

Aur papa ke munh par poora paani udhel diya...

"Dhat ! Teri maa ki"

Papa gaali dete huye uthe aur mujhe ek laat maar kar door kar diya...

"Kya kar rha tha tu ?"

Papa ne mujh se poochha...

"Kya kar rha tha mai ? "

Mene bhi unse usi lehze me poochhaa aur maa ko ab samajh aa rha tha ki ab agar mene ek aur shabd bola to unka baalam thanedaar meri gypsy bnake chalwayega....


"Akshu tu apne room me jaa"

Maa ke kehne par Mai chup chap apne room me chla gya...

Ye jo abhi jo Kuchh bhi hua bohot confusing tha...matlab pehle to baapu behosh hua fir maa ne bulaya aur bhencho jab baapu ko hosh aaya to laat maar kar bhaga diya...

Ye aakhir hua kya ?

Koi sense aayi is baat ki ?

Mai apne room me ghusa aur wahi website kholi jaha par SoulSwap ka article tha..

"Jese hi website khuli tab mere saamne ek notification pop u hua..."

Kya tum abhimanyu ki kahani padhoge...aur mene jald me hasi pe click Kiya aur....


°°°°°
-------ABHIMANYU & Z-Virus-------------

Bharat me Mumbai ke Thane region ke ek apartment ke room me..

Ek halki si aawaz me ek 18 saal ka nojawan gaana gaa rha tha....

"Hmmmm....Aaj din chadheya tere rang var gaa ! ...Phool sa hai khila Aaj din...Rabba mere naam kar use pana chaahu raat din jise....tenu Dil da vaasta....Aaj din chadheya !"

Vo insaan apne baalon par rubberband lga rha tha....

Vo ladka fir khud se kehta hai...

- waah abhimanyu ! waah ! Kyaa aawaz hai tumhari...ladkiyan to Fida hai tum pe...chalo dekhe to xforum khol kar kahani ka koi update aaya ya nahi ?...

Ji ha is insaan ka naam hai..Abhimanyu...gora rang ...kaale lambe gardan Tak aate baal..muh par ek smile jo hamesha bani rehti hai...

Abhimanyu - haa bhai ! Dekha jaaye The Hypnotizer ka Naya update aaya ya nahi !?....

Abhimanyu apne laptop par Xforum ke writer Abhinav ka deewana tha...usne forum kholi or The Hypnotizer thread par gya...waha usne dekha ki kahani ka koi update to aaya nahi balki writer ne kahani ka season 1 khatm kar Diya hai or kahani filhal hiatus (paused) par hai....

Abhimanyu - Shit yaar ! Ye writers bhi na .... Ek to inki kahani padho shuru se end Tak...or fir ye log achaanak se apni thread band kar dete hai ...ye koi tareeka hota hai kya ? Or or ye kya reason Diya hai ? Meri Kahani bachho jesi hai...arey yaaar !

Abhimanyu fir thread scroll karta hai or vo dekhta hai ki writer ne ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke baare me socha hai ....Abhimanyu ko ye padh kar thodi Khushi milti hai...

Abhimanyu - Waah to bhaisahab apni thread complete kare Bina nayi kahani shuru kar rhe hai ...wah ji wah ....dekhe to kya hai inki nayi kahani.... Mystery Of The Horror Village ? Yeh kya English me hai kya ?

Abhimanyu forum par type karta hai or baaki readers se sawal poochhne lgta hai...

Forum par :

Abhimanyu - are bhaiyo ! Ye writer ne ye koi nayi kahani chalu ki hai kya ?

Thodi der baad kuchh comment aate hai...

Peaku RP - haa bro ! Nayi story chalu hone wali hai ...isme zombies honge or ek haunted village me kuchh to hoga ! Mujhe to ye padh ke hi excitement ho Rahi hai...

Ketan#0 - horror story hai ye ...writer fir se kuchh unique likhne wale hai...or shayd Asura bhi hai story me..as a character..

Pocketleague - Dekhte hai writer ne aaj ki hi date boli thi first update ke aane ki...

Daymere - Bole to excited for the story ! Kyuki 1 hi update aayega jisme poori kahani hogi

Abhimanyu - achha ?! chalo dekhte hai kesi story aati hai...i hope ki is story ko bhi Writer Season 1 karke end na karde...(⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)

.......


Abhimanyu fir apna laptop band kar ke kitchen me Khana bnane jaata hai...Darasal abhimanyu apni padhai ki vajah se yaha par akela reh Raha tha ...or vese bhi abhimanyu jaata bhi kaha use maa papa ab is duniya me the nahi or Naa hi uska koi pariwar tha...ek ladki uski life me thi bhi wo bhi.....kher chhodo ..

Abhimanyu khana bnata hai ...khaane me usne maggi banayi thi...tabhi uske bahar ghar ka Mausam bigdne lgta hai...

Abhimanyu maggi lekar aata hai aur maggi khaate khaate vo fir apne laptop ko kholta hai...use vaha par dikhta hai ki Abhinav ki nayi story ka update aa gya hai...

Abhimanyu - waah Bhai waah ! Story to Hindi me hai chalo padhta hu kya hai isme unique ?...bas sex scenes hone chahiye aachhe ...maza aayega 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。....


Abhimanyu fir story padhne lgta hai....

-------------------

Update - 1

°°°°°
Year - 2023

Poori duniya Zombie apocalypse ke chapet me aa gyi thi...Iski shuruwat kesi Hui pata nahi ....duniya khatam hone se pehle American Sanstha NASA or bhartiya Sanstha ISRO ne poori duniya ko yeh bataya tha ki is apocalypse (mahamari)ka kaaran ek asteroid (Ulkapind)hai jo ke kisi anya solar system se earth par aa gira hai ..usi par ye virus tha jo ki poori duniya me fel gya...

--------

Z - Virus....

---------

Ham logo ko ek ajeeb sa system mil gya tha ....Survival system Naam tha us system ka...

--------

Ham logo ko alag alag tarah ki Quests (task/mission) mil rhe the...

-------

Kaala kadha - infinite storage space ki powers deta hai

--------

Me (Abhinav) apne dost Matasura(Asura) ke saath Mumbai ke RV college me padhta tha...jab humne dekha ki kese insaan ek doosre ko kaat kaat kar khaa rhe hai to me or Asura bohot dar gye...par fir bhi kyuki hamne bohot saari films , comics ,novels padh rakhi thi zombies par isliye hame pta tha ki hame ab kya karna hai...

----------

Bharat ke Madhya Pradesh me Yamita naam ka ek gaaon tha...vaha par logo ne ek group banaya tha zombies se ladne ka !....

Vaha par ek ladki rehti thi Kriti or vo.....

---------

[Abhimanyu ke Ghar ke bahar zor-zor se hawa chalne lgi or tez bijli girne lgi
*Boom* *takakakaaaaaa*..... Abhimanyu par fir bhi kahani padhta rehta hai ]

---------

Yakshini Devi ne btaya ki Meri or Kriti ki beti hi is apocalypse ko rok sakti thi.....

------------

Daayan...rakht pishach...preta....

---------

Karthik baba ....

---------

Asura ko zombies khaa rhe the or me kuchh nahi kar paa rha tha....

---------

Abhinav - Ankush me tujhe chhodunga nahi...

Ankush kriti ke upar beth kar uske saath ....chiii .....

Abhinav - ankush !!!!! Nahi !!! Chhod de kriti ko !!!

Ankush fir kriti ko zombies ke paas fek deta hai...kriti ko zombies noch noch kar khaa rhe hote hai....

---------

Me apne aap ko goli maar leta hu....duniya poori tabah ho jaati hai...

The End !

°°°°°

Abhimanyu update 1 ki kahani poori padh leta hai ... abhimanyu ki aankho me aansoo hote hai...

Abhimanyu - Yaar rula diya isne to ...sex scene to mile nahi ulta din or kharab kar diya ....or ye story ka naam tha Mystery Of the Haunted Village haina ? Par iska naam to survival in the Haunted Village hona chahiye tha .. mystery kyu likha fir?

Abhimanyu fir apni maggi ka bowl kitchen ki sink me rakh deta hai....ab abhimanyu apne room ke hall me jaata hai...vaha vo TV on karta hai..TV par abhimanyu news wala channel laga deta hai...TV ke news channel par ek footage chal rhi thi....

|Ek insaan doosre insaan ko kaat kaat ke khaa rha tha or vo insaan dard se tadap tadap kar mar gya or fir vo mra hua insaan fir se Zinda ho kar chalne lgta hai|

News Anchor - Aaj Bharat or poori duniya me kuchh log bohot hi ajeeb bartaav kar rhe hai...jaanwaro ki tarah behave kar rhe hai or ek doosre ko kaat rhe hai.... scientists ka manna hai ki ek nya Virus fel chuka hai poori duniya me...


Abhimanyu ab thoda sa shock hone lga tha...


Abhimanyu - Ye to bilkul abhinav ki story me jesa likha tha vesa hi ho rha hai...

[Abhimanyu ke ghar ke bahar ek or baat Bijli girti hai *chatchatkchak* *Boom*]

News Anchor - ISRO or NASA ka kehna hai ki ek virus poori duniya me sabhi jeewit praniyon ko apna shikaar bana rha hai...Ise unhone Z- Virus ka naam diya hai...

Abhimanyu - Fuck ! Yeh to bilkul sach hai....Saale Abhinav ke bachhe Tumhari story sach kese ho gyi ?....tumhari story to ab is duniya ki reality ban chuki hai...

Achanak se Abhimanyu ke ghar ki TV me se dhuaa aane lgta hai or TV phuk jaati hai....

Abhimanyu ko fir apne dimaag me ek ajeeb robot jesi Aawaz sunayi deti hai...

{! Survival System Activated!
! Username - Abhimanyu!
! Occupation - Student!
! Talent - Can Masturbate (Hilana/Hasthmethun) continuously upto 7 times!
! Ability - None!
!User stats :
- Strength - 9
- Intelligence - 11
- Charisma - 8
- Agility - 7
- Stamina - 15
- Vitality - 6!}

Abhimanyu ka sar chakraane lgta hai... abhimanyu 2 minute tak shaant hokar tez or gehri saanse leta hai....

Abhimanyu - Yaar us Abhinav ki kahani to sach hogyi hai...iska matlab hai ki jesa jesa abhinav ne likha hai aage duniya me vesa hi hoga...yaani ki Abhinav sach me Marne wala hai...mujhe Abhinav ko bachana hoga !..

Fir abhimanyu apne survival system par ek baar Nazar maarta hai...

Abhimanyu - Hmmm...baaki sab to theek hai par yeh be*nchod masturbation(hilana/Hasthmethun) koi talent hota hai kya ?.....

[*Dham*Tak*Knock ! Knock !*]

Tab hi abhimanyu ke flat ke gate par kisi ke khat khatane ki awaaz aati hai....

°°°°°

Aaj ke liye itna hi.....Ye story me nya twist kesi lgi batana zaroor...Agar kahani me kuchh galti ho to please comment me btaye..

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyavad..

Namaste 🙏


°°°°°
Bhai kya hogya tumhe?
Thoda bohot samjh me na aaye to chlta hai but ye update to sar k upar se nikl gya mere.
Mene bhi unse usi lehze me poochhaa aur maa ko ab samajh aa rha tha ki ab agar mene ek aur shabd bola to unka baalam thanedaar meri gypsy bnake chalwayega....
Best part laga update ka.
Dialogue dilevery mast hai.

Suggestion: jyada story se divert na ho jao.kosish karo story theme ya characters ke aas paas hi rhe.
 
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Bhai Agar story likh ne ka Maan nahi hai to koy likh Rahe ho Har bar soch ta hu ki ab story achi ho gi ab achi ho gi magar mood kharab Kar dete ho mai khe na to nahi chahata magar khe na pad raha hai ki Agar likh ne ka Maan naho to jabar10ti maat likh ho koi or story continue Kar lo magar mood maat kharab karo apna bhi or humara bhi pls bura maat Maan na 🙏
 

MAD DEVIL

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Update - 5

°°°°°

"AKSHU !!!!!!! AKSHU !!!!! AKHSU !!!!"

Mummy ki tez chillane ki aawaze aayi...

"Haye Rabba mad gya Mai to "

Mene apne sar par haath mara aur jaldi se neeche bhaga...

Seedhiyon se utarta hua Mai foran mummy papa ke room me gya...

Waha par mene dekha ki papa zameen par besudh pade hai aur maa aankho me aansu liye mujhe dekh rhi thi..

"akshu dekhna beta tere papa ko kya ho gya hai..."

Maa rote huye boli...

Mene bhi dhyaan se papa ko dekha...nikkar pehne besudh se Dale the vo zameen par..

Achha jin logo ko confusion ho rhi ho ki kese ye hua yaani ki papa mummy to nange the na ? Fir kese ye hua ?

Darasal maa ne jaldi se saari pehn li thi aur papa ko nikkar...

Mai jaldi se kitchen me bhaga aur ek glass paani le aaya...

Aur papa ke munh par poora paani udhel diya...

"Dhat ! Teri maa ki"

Papa gaali dete huye uthe aur mujhe ek laat maar kar door kar diya...

"Kya kar rha tha tu ?"

Papa ne mujh se poochha...

"Kya kar rha tha mai ? "

Mene bhi unse usi lehze me poochhaa aur maa ko ab samajh aa rha tha ki ab agar mene ek aur shabd bola to unka baalam thanedaar meri gypsy bnake chalwayega....


"Akshu tu apne room me jaa"

Maa ke kehne par Mai chup chap apne room me chla gya...

Ye jo abhi jo Kuchh bhi hua bohot confusing tha...matlab pehle to baapu behosh hua fir maa ne bulaya aur bhencho jab baapu ko hosh aaya to laat maar kar bhaga diya...

Ye aakhir hua kya ?

Koi sense aayi is baat ki ?

Mai apne room me ghusa aur wahi website kholi jaha par SoulSwap ka article tha..

"Jese hi website khuli tab mere saamne ek notification pop u hua..."

Kya tum abhimanyu ki kahani padhoge...aur mene jald me hasi pe click Kiya aur....


°°°°°
-------ABHIMANYU & Z-Virus-------------

Bharat me Mumbai ke Thane region ke ek apartment ke room me..

Ek halki si aawaz me ek 18 saal ka nojawan gaana gaa rha tha....

"Hmmmm....Aaj din chadheya tere rang var gaa ! ...Phool sa hai khila Aaj din...Rabba mere naam kar use pana chaahu raat din jise....tenu Dil da vaasta....Aaj din chadheya !"

Vo insaan apne baalon par rubberband lga rha tha....

Vo ladka fir khud se kehta hai...

- waah abhimanyu ! waah ! Kyaa aawaz hai tumhari...ladkiyan to Fida hai tum pe...chalo dekhe to xforum khol kar kahani ka koi update aaya ya nahi ?...

Ji ha is insaan ka naam hai..Abhimanyu...gora rang ...kaale lambe gardan Tak aate baal..muh par ek smile jo hamesha bani rehti hai...

Abhimanyu - haa bhai ! Dekha jaaye The Hypnotizer ka Naya update aaya ya nahi !?....

Abhimanyu apne laptop par Xforum ke writer Abhinav ka deewana tha...usne forum kholi or The Hypnotizer thread par gya...waha usne dekha ki kahani ka koi update to aaya nahi balki writer ne kahani ka season 1 khatm kar Diya hai or kahani filhal hiatus (paused) par hai....

Abhimanyu - Shit yaar ! Ye writers bhi na .... Ek to inki kahani padho shuru se end Tak...or fir ye log achaanak se apni thread band kar dete hai ...ye koi tareeka hota hai kya ? Or or ye kya reason Diya hai ? Meri Kahani bachho jesi hai...arey yaaar !

Abhimanyu fir thread scroll karta hai or vo dekhta hai ki writer ne ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke baare me socha hai ....Abhimanyu ko ye padh kar thodi Khushi milti hai...

Abhimanyu - Waah to bhaisahab apni thread complete kare Bina nayi kahani shuru kar rhe hai ...wah ji wah ....dekhe to kya hai inki nayi kahani.... Mystery Of The Horror Village ? Yeh kya English me hai kya ?

Abhimanyu forum par type karta hai or baaki readers se sawal poochhne lgta hai...

Forum par :

Abhimanyu - are bhaiyo ! Ye writer ne ye koi nayi kahani chalu ki hai kya ?

Thodi der baad kuchh comment aate hai...

Peaku RP - haa bro ! Nayi story chalu hone wali hai ...isme zombies honge or ek haunted village me kuchh to hoga ! Mujhe to ye padh ke hi excitement ho Rahi hai...

Ketan#0 - horror story hai ye ...writer fir se kuchh unique likhne wale hai...or shayd Asura bhi hai story me..as a character..

Pocketleague - Dekhte hai writer ne aaj ki hi date boli thi first update ke aane ki...

Daymere - Bole to excited for the story ! Kyuki 1 hi update aayega jisme poori kahani hogi

Abhimanyu - achha ?! chalo dekhte hai kesi story aati hai...i hope ki is story ko bhi Writer Season 1 karke end na karde...(⁠◠⁠‿⁠◕⁠)

.......


Abhimanyu fir apna laptop band kar ke kitchen me Khana bnane jaata hai...Darasal abhimanyu apni padhai ki vajah se yaha par akela reh Raha tha ...or vese bhi abhimanyu jaata bhi kaha use maa papa ab is duniya me the nahi or Naa hi uska koi pariwar tha...ek ladki uski life me thi bhi wo bhi.....kher chhodo ..

Abhimanyu khana bnata hai ...khaane me usne maggi banayi thi...tabhi uske bahar ghar ka Mausam bigdne lgta hai...

Abhimanyu maggi lekar aata hai aur maggi khaate khaate vo fir apne laptop ko kholta hai...use vaha par dikhta hai ki Abhinav ki nayi story ka update aa gya hai...

Abhimanyu - waah Bhai waah ! Story to Hindi me hai chalo padhta hu kya hai isme unique ?...bas sex scenes hone chahiye aachhe ...maza aayega 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。....


Abhimanyu fir story padhne lgta hai....

-------------------

Update - 1

°°°°°
Year - 2023

Poori duniya Zombie apocalypse ke chapet me aa gyi thi...Iski shuruwat kesi Hui pata nahi ....duniya khatam hone se pehle American Sanstha NASA or bhartiya Sanstha ISRO ne poori duniya ko yeh bataya tha ki is apocalypse (mahamari)ka kaaran ek asteroid (Ulkapind)hai jo ke kisi anya solar system se earth par aa gira hai ..usi par ye virus tha jo ki poori duniya me fel gya...

--------

Z - Virus....

---------

Ham logo ko ek ajeeb sa system mil gya tha ....Survival system Naam tha us system ka...

--------

Ham logo ko alag alag tarah ki Quests (task/mission) mil rhe the...

-------

Kaala kadha - infinite storage space ki powers deta hai

--------

Me (Abhinav) apne dost Matasura(Asura) ke saath Mumbai ke RV college me padhta tha...jab humne dekha ki kese insaan ek doosre ko kaat kaat kar khaa rhe hai to me or Asura bohot dar gye...par fir bhi kyuki hamne bohot saari films , comics ,novels padh rakhi thi zombies par isliye hame pta tha ki hame ab kya karna hai...

----------

Bharat ke Madhya Pradesh me Yamita naam ka ek gaaon tha...vaha par logo ne ek group banaya tha zombies se ladne ka !....

Vaha par ek ladki rehti thi Kriti or vo.....

---------

[Abhimanyu ke Ghar ke bahar zor-zor se hawa chalne lgi or tez bijli girne lgi
*Boom* *takakakaaaaaa*..... Abhimanyu par fir bhi kahani padhta rehta hai ]

---------

Yakshini Devi ne btaya ki Meri or Kriti ki beti hi is apocalypse ko rok sakti thi.....

------------

Daayan...rakht pishach...preta....

---------

Karthik baba ....

---------

Asura ko zombies khaa rhe the or me kuchh nahi kar paa rha tha....

---------

Abhinav - Ankush me tujhe chhodunga nahi...

Ankush kriti ke upar beth kar uske saath ....chiii .....

Abhinav - ankush !!!!! Nahi !!! Chhod de kriti ko !!!

Ankush fir kriti ko zombies ke paas fek deta hai...kriti ko zombies noch noch kar khaa rhe hote hai....

---------

Me apne aap ko goli maar leta hu....duniya poori tabah ho jaati hai...

The End !

°°°°°

Abhimanyu update 1 ki kahani poori padh leta hai ... abhimanyu ki aankho me aansoo hote hai...

Abhimanyu - Yaar rula diya isne to ...sex scene to mile nahi ulta din or kharab kar diya ....or ye story ka naam tha Mystery Of the Haunted Village haina ? Par iska naam to survival in the Haunted Village hona chahiye tha .. mystery kyu likha fir?

Abhimanyu fir apni maggi ka bowl kitchen ki sink me rakh deta hai....ab abhimanyu apne room ke hall me jaata hai...vaha vo TV on karta hai..TV par abhimanyu news wala channel laga deta hai...TV ke news channel par ek footage chal rhi thi....

|Ek insaan doosre insaan ko kaat kaat ke khaa rha tha or vo insaan dard se tadap tadap kar mar gya or fir vo mra hua insaan fir se Zinda ho kar chalne lgta hai|

News Anchor - Aaj Bharat or poori duniya me kuchh log bohot hi ajeeb bartaav kar rhe hai...jaanwaro ki tarah behave kar rhe hai or ek doosre ko kaat rhe hai.... scientists ka manna hai ki ek nya Virus fel chuka hai poori duniya me...


Abhimanyu ab thoda sa shock hone lga tha...


Abhimanyu - Ye to bilkul abhinav ki story me jesa likha tha vesa hi ho rha hai...

[Abhimanyu ke ghar ke bahar ek or baat Bijli girti hai *chatchatkchak* *Boom*]

News Anchor - ISRO or NASA ka kehna hai ki ek virus poori duniya me sabhi jeewit praniyon ko apna shikaar bana rha hai...Ise unhone Z- Virus ka naam diya hai...

Abhimanyu - Fuck ! Yeh to bilkul sach hai....Saale Abhinav ke bachhe Tumhari story sach kese ho gyi ?....tumhari story to ab is duniya ki reality ban chuki hai...

Achanak se Abhimanyu ke ghar ki TV me se dhuaa aane lgta hai or TV phuk jaati hai....

Abhimanyu ko fir apne dimaag me ek ajeeb robot jesi Aawaz sunayi deti hai...

{! Survival System Activated!
! Username - Abhimanyu!
! Occupation - Student!
! Talent - Can Masturbate (Hilana/Hasthmethun) continuously upto 7 times!
! Ability - None!
!User stats :
- Strength - 9
- Intelligence - 11
- Charisma - 8
- Agility - 7
- Stamina - 15
- Vitality - 6!}

Abhimanyu ka sar chakraane lgta hai... abhimanyu 2 minute tak shaant hokar tez or gehri saanse leta hai....

Abhimanyu - Yaar us Abhinav ki kahani to sach hogyi hai...iska matlab hai ki jesa jesa abhinav ne likha hai aage duniya me vesa hi hoga...yaani ki Abhinav sach me Marne wala hai...mujhe Abhinav ko bachana hoga !..

Fir abhimanyu apne survival system par ek baar Nazar maarta hai...

Abhimanyu - Hmmm...baaki sab to theek hai par yeh be*nchod masturbation(hilana/Hasthmethun) koi talent hota hai kya ?.....

[*Dham*Tak*Knock ! Knock !*]

Tab hi abhimanyu ke flat ke gate par kisi ke khat khatane ki awaaz aati hai....

°°°°°

Aaj ke liye itna hi.....Ye story me nya twist kesi lgi batana zaroor...Agar kahani me kuchh galti ho to please comment me btaye..

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyavad..

Namaste 🙏


°°°°°

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