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UPDATE - 49


Ab tk aapne dekha dosto ki hum Sb ek Red GATE ke ander fas gaye the jaha 2 ELVES aa kr hum pr surprise Attack krke hmare ek huntur ko maar dete hai. Lakin kirti ko mai bacha leta hu. Wahi Gate ke bahar Namit mera pata laga kr Anurag ko mere paas le chlne ko kahta hai. Sachin bhi Gate ke bahr aa gaya hota hai. Jise manoj sari situation smjhata hai. Aur use ye bhi pata chalta hai ki Gate ke ander Uske guild ke alawa bhi 2 log gaye hue hai.


AB AAGE.....

Vikash ( sabse aage khada ho kar baki sare hunturs ko dekhte hue ) " Mai ek baar fir se aap sub ko kud se introduce karwa deta hu. "
" Mai A Rank hunturs Vikash hu. "
" Ab jbki hum sub ye baat jaan gaye hai ki, ye ek Red GATE hai. Mai tm sub ke yaha jinda bache rahne ki jimmedari leta hu. "
" Lakin mai samay se phle itni jldi is baat ka dawa nahi kar sakta hu ki tum sub apne ghr wapas laut paoge. "
" Hme yaha na jane kitne month bitane pad sakte hai, is baat ke intejar me ki DENGOUN ka Gate wapas se open ho jaye. Lakin is baat ki bhi koi guarantee nahi hai ki hum tab tak jinda bhi bache rahenge ki nahi. "
" Ek Red GATE ka Rank kam se kam B Rank hota hai. "
" Aise khatarnak jagah pr itne sare logo ko manage karna bhut muskil hoga. "
" Isiliye mai ye DENGEON clear krne ke liye, apne sath ek alg team bana raha hu. "

Mai ( ye sub sun kr apne man me ) ' Kya ? '
' Ye kya bakwas hai ? '

Mere taraf baki logo ka bhi yahi haal tha. Fir Vikash aage kahta hai.

Vikash " Agr hum yahi rukte hai to, ya to hum cold se mar jayenge ya wo wapas se hum pr ghat laga kr Attack kr denge. "
" Agar mere sath is DENGOUN ko clear krne ke liye koi nahi bhi jayega tb bhi mai akele ye kaam karne jaunga. "
" To kon mere sath jana chahata hai ? "

Kai sare hunturs Vikash ki baat sun kr uske sath jane ko ready ho jate hai.

" Chlo sath me chalte hai. "
" Mai bhi chlunga tmhare sath. "
" Mai bhi. "

Aise hi lagbhag mujhe aur kirti ko chor kr baki sare hunturs Vikash ke sath jane ko ready ho gaye the.

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Inke jinda bache rahne ke chances increase ho jayenge agr ye A Rank hunturs ke sath rahte hai to. '


DHUPPP...... Aaahh....

Abhi ye sb ho hi raha tha ki Vikash ek huntur ko apne hath se dhakka dete hue kahta hai " Tum nahi. "
( Uske piche khade do aur hunturs, mere, aur kirti ki taraf ungli dikha kr ) " Aur na hi tum. "
" Tum. "
" Tum. "
" Aur Tum. "
" Ye bahut durbhagya ki baat hai, lakin mai apne sath koi bhi C Rank ya usase niche wale hunturs ko nahi le ja sakta. "

Ye sunte hi C Rank wale 3 hunturs aur kirti akdam se dar jate hai. Baki bache B Rank ke Hunters bhi surprise ho jate hai. Lakin wo bhut kush bhi hote hai ki wo Vikash ke sath ja skte hai.
Lakin mujhe in sb bato se koi fark nahi padta hai.

Vikash " Red Gate ke ander agr aap ek din bitaoge to, wo bahar ke 1 hour ke barabar hoga. "
" Aur sbse khrab situation me aapko yaha na jane kitne months bitane honge. Is baat ke wait me ki ya to Boss Monster mar jaye ya Gate kud se open ho jaye. "
" Aisi condition me mai apne sath koi bhi dead weight nahi le jana chahata. "

One of C Rank huntur ( shocked hote hue ) " hum dead weight hai ? "

Vikash " Itne disappointed mt ho.. "
" Agr tum sb log, hum logo ke boss Monster ko marne tak kud ko jinda bachaye rakhne me safal rahte ho to. Tum sb bhi safely apne ghar ko wapas ja skte ho. "

One C Rank huntur " Lakin fir bhi.... "

Abhi sub hunturs isi conversion me lage hue the ki ek B Rank female huntur jiska name Ragini tha wo Vikash se kahti hai " Excuse me. "
" Mai unlogo ke sath jana cahti hu. Isme kisi ko koi problem to nahi hai na ? "

Vikash ( use ghurte hue ) " Jaisi Tmhari marji. "
( Apne man me ) ' A Rank wale ke sath rahne ki jagah apni team badal lena ? '
' Kya ye in sb se sympathy dikha rahi hai ? '
' Ye ladki aakhir hai kon ? '

Vikash ( tino C Rank huntur ki taraf dekh kr ) " Quki ab hmare team me ek khali jagah hai. To mai tmlogo ki side se ek aur person ko le skta hu. "

Ye sun kr Jise vikash ne dhakka diya tha wo C Rank huntur jldi se kahta hai " M... Mai chlunga. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Ragini ( hmari side aati hui dhire se ) " Ye banda Vikash... "
" Isne notice nahi kiya tha ki arrow hmari taraf aa rahi hai. "
( Mujhe dekh ke ) " Tum E Rank huntur nahi ho na. Maine sahi kaha na ? "

Mai , Ragini ko dekhta hu to wo ek beautiful nd charming girl thi. Jiski aakhe green aur hair straight nd long the.



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OUTSIDE OF THE DENGEON

Manoj ( apne man me ) ' Rider ka vishwas jitne ke liye, Mujhe uske raj ko secret rakhna hoga. Lakin mai Master Sachin dekha kahu ? '
( Sachin se ) " Mujhe yakin hai wo ek aisa huntur hai jo REAWAKENED hua hai. "

Sachin ( Mujhse ) " Kya tumhe yakin hai. "
" Ki ye sirf tumhara anuman nahi hai ? "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mere paas koi satik aur sahi answer nahi hai is baat ka. '
( Sachin se ) " Well !! Filhal ye sirf mera anuman hi hai. Lakin.... "

Sachin ( Bich me hi Manoj ki baat ko kaat kr DENGEON ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Tb to sirf ek hi person hai jisase mai ummid kr skta hu. Aur wo Vikash hai. "

Manoj ( Sachin ki taraf dekh kr kud se ) ' Agr master kud Huntur Rider se mile hote, tb sayad wo meri baat pr yakin krte. '


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Tabhi waha ek band black suit uniform me aata hai. Usne apne aakho pr black color ka chsma laga rakha tha. Wo apne 50+ me lag raha tha. Uske face pr kafi juriya thi. Lakin is age me bhi energetic lag raha tha.
Ye WHITE TIGER GUILD'S ke 1st Department of management ka chief tha. Jiska name Ganesh tha.

Ganesh ( Sachin ke samne apna sir jukha kr smile ke sath ) " Vikash ko waha koi problem nahi hogi. "
" Hunter Vikash ke training result bahut hi jyada impresive hai. "
" Strength ke mamle me wo WHITE TIGER GUILD ke abhi ke main Attack force ke members se kahi bhi piche nahi rahega. "

Sachin ( ye sub sun kr ek rahat ki saas lete hue ) " hufff.....!!! "
" Chlo bhagwan ka shukr hai. "
( Apne man me ) ' Vikash ek A Rank huntur hai. '
' In sub bato ko sun kr aisa lagta hai. Wah ek aisa banda hai jise highly Rank hunturs ke samne bhi ignore nahi kiya ja sakta hai. '
' Agar aisa banda is Raid ka Captain hai to, wo B Rank hunturs ko sahi se command kr skta hai. Itna kafi hoga unke is DENGOUN ko clear kr ske. '

Ganesh ( Kamini hasi ke sath Manoj se ) " Jo afwahe maine suni hai uske hisab se..... Ek E Rank huntur jo ki sayad Reawakened hua hai ? "
" Tum abhi usi ke bare me Master sebaat kar rahe the na ? "
" Lakin mai batana chahunga, Hmara Vikash aise kisi hunturs se bahut jyada upar hai jiske paas koi foundation hi nahi hai. "

Manoj ( Ganesh ko ghur ke dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Jb wo sb is Gate se bahar nikalenge tb hum dekh lenge kon sahi hai. Mai ya tum !! '


VROOM.... VROOM.....
BEEPPPP...........


Tabhi in sub logo se thodi duri par ek black color ki Car aa kr rukti hai.

CRACK.....
Tap... Tap... Tap....


Aur uske back door ko open krke ek banda bahar aate hue kahta hai " Huh !! Yaha kya hua hai ? "
" Maine pakka suna tha ki ye ek C Rank Gate hai. "
" Kya ye Ek A Rank gate me change ho gaya hai ? "
( Smile ke sath ) " White Tiger guild ke itne important Master yaha kya kar rahe hai ? "

Ji ha dosto ye koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Jo is Black Car se back door se utrate hue ye sb kah raha tha.
Wo chl kr Sachin ki taraf jane lagta hai. Aur uske piche piche Anurag bhi usi taraf chl deta hai.
Sare log Namit ko yaha dekh kr surprise ho jate hai.

Sachin ( Namit ki taraf dekh kr Surprise hote hue ) " Namit ? "

Manoj ( bahut jyada surprise se haklate hue ) " Y... Ye person to ? "

Ganesh ( Surprise ke sath ) " Ye to N....Namit hai. "
" SCAVENGER GUILD ka S Rank huntur Namit. "

Namit ( Apne chasme ko kamini smile ke sath thoda niche krte hue sachin se ) " Bahut din ho gaye tmse mile hue Sachin. "

Sachin " Tum India me kya kr rahe ho ? "

Namit " Mai yaha apne kuch business ke karan ruka hua hu. Lakin mujhe bikul ummid nahi thi ki tum, mujhe yaha miloge. "
" India such me itni bhi jyada badi country nahi hai. "

Sachin ye sb sun kr gusse me aa jata hai. Jiske karan uske Red hair white color me change ho jate hai. Sath me glow krne lagte hai.

Sachin ( gusse se ) " Mere question ka answer do. "
" Ek aadmi jise abhi United States me hona cahiye tha wo yaha India me kya kar raha hai aur White Tiger guild ke area me uska kon sa business hai ? "

Namit ( smile krte hue ) " White Tiger guild ka area ? "
" Tb to mai tmse kuch puchna cahta hu... "
" Kya wo ghtiya huntur tmhare Guild me enter ho gaya hai ? "
" kya soch kr tmne Use recruit kiya apne Guild me ? "
" Mai us E Rank ke bacche ke bare me aata kar raha hu. "

Sachin ( confused ho kr ) " E Rank ? "
" Tum kiske bare me baat kr rahe ho ? "

Namit " Mai RIDER ke bare me baat kr raha hu jo abhi is Gate ke ander gaya hai. "

Sachin ( Surprise hote hue apne man me ) ' Rider ? '
' Aakhir Namit usko kaise janta hai ? '


Tap.... Tap.... Tap....

Namit aage ja kr gate ko touch krte hue kahta hai " ye kya .... "
" Kya ye Ek Red Gate hai ? "



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INSIDE THE DENGEON

Mai, Ragini se kuch bate rah raha tha.

Mai " Mai bhi tmse ek question puchna cahta hu. "
" Tum log new recruits hote hue bhi ab tak is DENGOUN ke andar itne saant kaise ho ? "

Ragini " Phla lesson hme yahi sikhaya jata hai ki DENGEON ke ander kuch bhi ho skta hai. "
( Vikash ki taraf isara krke ) " specially Vikash ko special coaching mili hui hai. "
" Use aise taiyar kiya gaya hai ki wo White Tiger guild ke main Attack force ko join kr ske. "

Ab tak sare hunturs do group me divide ho kr aamne samne khade ho chuke the. Fir Vikash hm sb se kahta hai " Hum sb is raste ko follow krte hue aage badhenge. "

Mai " Thik hai to hum log jangal ke ander se hote hue aage badhenge. "


Tap.... Tap... Tap.....

Fir Vikash ke group wale waha se janelagte hai.

Vikash ( jate hue ) " Meri subkamna tm sub ke sath hai. "


Tap.... Tap... Tap...

Hum sb bhi unke opposite jangal ki taraf nikal padte hai.

Mai ( Vikash ke group ko ) " Meri subkamna bhi tm sb ke sath hai. "


Tap.... Tap.... Tap.....

Hum sb jangal ke ander se hote hue aage badhte ja rahe the. Mai sbse piche apne paint ke pocket me dono hath dale chl raha tha. Mere sath Ragini bhi chl rahi thi.
Mai sare jungle ko dhyan se dekh raha tha. 100 feet se bhi uche uche tree chro taraf faile hue the. Unke karan jyada roshni niche nahi aa pa rahi thi. Lakin fir bhi itna to aa rahi thi ki hme sb aaram se dikh raha tha.
Chro taraf snow hi snow faila hua tha.

Ragini ( meri taraf dekh kr ) " To.. kya tum mere question ka answer nahi doge ? "

Mai ( chro taraf dekhte hue ) " Well... Mai nahi janta tm kya kahna cahti ho. "

Ragini ( mujhe dekh ke apne man me ) ' Ye person kam se kam A Rank huntur to hoga hi. '
' Nahi ! Sayad.... '



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VIKASH GROUP

Tap.... Tap.... Tap......

Vikash group ke sare hunturs aage badhte hue ja rahe the.
Tabhi ek jagah vikash kuch dekh kr ruk jata hai aur kahta hai " Idiots... "

Ek B Rank huntur " Huh ? Kya hua ? "

Vikash ( ek tree ki taraf ishara krte hue ) " waha dekho. "

B Rank huntur " Y... Ye to.. "

Samne tree pr bear ke panjo ke bahut bade bade nishan the.

Vikash " Unhe patiently wahi pr hmara aane ka intejar Krna cahiye tha. "
" Quki jangal ICE BEAR ka ilaka hai. "
" Bs ek inexperienced E Rank huntur ke chlte, wo baki sare innocent log bahut jald hi marne wale hai. "

Ek B Rank huntur ( Vikash ko dekh ke smile krte hue ) " Tmko kya lagta hai ek E Rank huntur ko kabhi koi proper coching bhi mili hogi ? "

Vikash " Aisa kabhi nahi ho skta. Wo bs ek E Rank huntur hai. "
( Apne man me kuch sochte hue ) ' Wait... '
' Us team me kuch C Rank aur ek B Rank huntur bhi hai. '
' To mai aisa kyu soch raha hu ki wo E Rank huntur unka Leader hai ? '
' Jo bhi ho, mujhe usase kya. '
' Bhut hi jld wo sb marne wale hai. '


DHADAAMMMM......

Vikash apne back pr rakhe hue us big shield ko apne aage jamin pr kada karte hue " Hum sb sirf kud ke bharose hai. "
" To fight ke liye ready ho jao. "


SWOOSSS.....

Sare hunturs se Itna kah kr wo apna AXE apne right hath me le leta hai. Aur apne shield ko apne aage left hand se pakd kr baki sabhi hunturs ke sath fight ko ready ho jata hai.


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OUTSIDE OF THE DENGEON

Namit ( gusse se Gate ko dekhte hue ) " Mai itni dur se yaha bs iske liye aaya tha aur ye is Red gate ke ander ja kr fas gaya. "
" Ab to Rider ke face ki ek jhlak bhi dekhna bahut mushkil hai. "

Namit ( apne man me ) ' Aakhir ye sare log is Rider ko le kr itna utsuk ( keen ) kyu hai ? '







Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

To A rank hunter ne andar apni alag hi group bna li hai or vo alag disha me chla gya Vahi ek B rank girl ne unka group chhod kr rider, Kirti or bache huye C rank hunter ke sath apna alag hi group bnakr jungle ki taraf chale gye hai dekhte hai rider Kaise in sabki suraksha karte huye yha se bahar nikalta hai Vahi us A rank hunter ko ice bear ke panjo ke nishan dekhne ko mile hai jisse Usne fighting ke liye satark rahne ko kaha hai group ko...
Nomit to dungan ke bahar aa gya hai or uska rider ke bare me white tiger guild ke S rank boss se puchhna unki najro me sak ke ghere me la rha hai dekhte hai Vo kya karte hai rider ko is Nomit se bchane ke liye...

Update was Exilent but writing skill or behtar kar sakte ho bhaya, aapme potential hai aisa karne ki or mujhe aisa kyo lag rha hai jaise quantity me fark pad rha hai Aapke update ki, ha aisa ho sakta hai ki baar baar seen Kai tukdo me baatne se aisa mahsus ho rha ho... Ab Jaisa bhi hai samajh lena bhai...
Ek suggestion Yadi Kai seen ek hi update me dikhane hai to aapko jyada matter write Karna padega bhaya kam me maza nhi aayega ulta maza kirkira ho jayega...
 

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UPDATE - 49


Ab tk aapne dekha dosto ki hum Sb ek Red GATE ke ander fas gaye the jaha 2 ELVES aa kr hum pr surprise Attack krke hmare ek huntur ko maar dete hai. Lakin kirti ko mai bacha leta hu. Wahi Gate ke bahar Namit mera pata laga kr Anurag ko mere paas le chlne ko kahta hai. Sachin bhi Gate ke bahr aa gaya hota hai. Jise manoj sari situation smjhata hai. Aur use ye bhi pata chalta hai ki Gate ke ander Uske guild ke alawa bhi 2 log gaye hue hai.


AB AAGE.....

Vikash ( sabse aage khada ho kar baki sare hunturs ko dekhte hue ) " Mai ek baar fir se aap sub ko kud se introduce karwa deta hu. "
" Mai A Rank hunturs Vikash hu. "
" Ab jbki hum sub ye baat jaan gaye hai ki, ye ek Red GATE hai. Mai tm sub ke yaha jinda bache rahne ki jimmedari leta hu. "
" Lakin mai samay se phle itni jldi is baat ka dawa nahi kar sakta hu ki tum sub apne ghr wapas laut paoge. "
" Hme yaha na jane kitne month bitane pad sakte hai, is baat ke intejar me ki DENGOUN ka Gate wapas se open ho jaye. Lakin is baat ki bhi koi guarantee nahi hai ki hum tab tak jinda bhi bache rahenge ki nahi. "
" Ek Red GATE ka Rank kam se kam B Rank hota hai. "
" Aise khatarnak jagah pr itne sare logo ko manage karna bhut muskil hoga. "
" Isiliye mai ye DENGEON clear krne ke liye, apne sath ek alg team bana raha hu. "

Mai ( ye sub sun kr apne man me ) ' Kya ? '
' Ye kya bakwas hai ? '

Mere taraf baki logo ka bhi yahi haal tha. Fir Vikash aage kahta hai.

Vikash " Agr hum yahi rukte hai to, ya to hum cold se mar jayenge ya wo wapas se hum pr ghat laga kr Attack kr denge. "
" Agar mere sath is DENGOUN ko clear krne ke liye koi nahi bhi jayega tb bhi mai akele ye kaam karne jaunga. "
" To kon mere sath jana chahata hai ? "

Kai sare hunturs Vikash ki baat sun kr uske sath jane ko ready ho jate hai.

" Chlo sath me chalte hai. "
" Mai bhi chlunga tmhare sath. "
" Mai bhi. "

Aise hi lagbhag mujhe aur kirti ko chor kr baki sare hunturs Vikash ke sath jane ko ready ho gaye the.

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Inke jinda bache rahne ke chances increase ho jayenge agr ye A Rank hunturs ke sath rahte hai to. '


DHUPPP...... Aaahh....

Abhi ye sb ho hi raha tha ki Vikash ek huntur ko apne hath se dhakka dete hue kahta hai " Tum nahi. "
( Uske piche khade do aur hunturs, mere, aur kirti ki taraf ungli dikha kr ) " Aur na hi tum. "
" Tum. "
" Tum. "
" Aur Tum. "
" Ye bahut durbhagya ki baat hai, lakin mai apne sath koi bhi C Rank ya usase niche wale hunturs ko nahi le ja sakta. "

Ye sunte hi C Rank wale 3 hunturs aur kirti akdam se dar jate hai. Baki bache B Rank ke Hunters bhi surprise ho jate hai. Lakin wo bhut kush bhi hote hai ki wo Vikash ke sath ja skte hai.
Lakin mujhe in sb bato se koi fark nahi padta hai.

Vikash " Red Gate ke ander agr aap ek din bitaoge to, wo bahar ke 1 hour ke barabar hoga. "
" Aur sbse khrab situation me aapko yaha na jane kitne months bitane honge. Is baat ke wait me ki ya to Boss Monster mar jaye ya Gate kud se open ho jaye. "
" Aisi condition me mai apne sath koi bhi dead weight nahi le jana chahata. "

One of C Rank huntur ( shocked hote hue ) " hum dead weight hai ? "

Vikash " Itne disappointed mt ho.. "
" Agr tum sb log, hum logo ke boss Monster ko marne tak kud ko jinda bachaye rakhne me safal rahte ho to. Tum sb bhi safely apne ghar ko wapas ja skte ho. "

One C Rank huntur " Lakin fir bhi.... "

Abhi sub hunturs isi conversion me lage hue the ki ek B Rank female huntur jiska name Ragini tha wo Vikash se kahti hai " Excuse me. "
" Mai unlogo ke sath jana cahti hu. Isme kisi ko koi problem to nahi hai na ? "

Vikash ( use ghurte hue ) " Jaisi Tmhari marji. "
( Apne man me ) ' A Rank wale ke sath rahne ki jagah apni team badal lena ? '
' Kya ye in sb se sympathy dikha rahi hai ? '
' Ye ladki aakhir hai kon ? '

Vikash ( tino C Rank huntur ki taraf dekh kr ) " Quki ab hmare team me ek khali jagah hai. To mai tmlogo ki side se ek aur person ko le skta hu. "

Ye sun kr Jise vikash ne dhakka diya tha wo C Rank huntur jldi se kahta hai " M... Mai chlunga. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Ragini ( hmari side aati hui dhire se ) " Ye banda Vikash... "
" Isne notice nahi kiya tha ki arrow hmari taraf aa rahi hai. "
( Mujhe dekh ke ) " Tum E Rank huntur nahi ho na. Maine sahi kaha na ? "

Mai , Ragini ko dekhta hu to wo ek beautiful nd charming girl thi. Jiski aakhe green aur hair straight nd long the.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

OUTSIDE OF THE DENGEON

Manoj ( apne man me ) ' Rider ka vishwas jitne ke liye, Mujhe uske raj ko secret rakhna hoga. Lakin mai Master Sachin dekha kahu ? '
( Sachin se ) " Mujhe yakin hai wo ek aisa huntur hai jo REAWAKENED hua hai. "

Sachin ( Mujhse ) " Kya tumhe yakin hai. "
" Ki ye sirf tumhara anuman nahi hai ? "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Mere paas koi satik aur sahi answer nahi hai is baat ka. '
( Sachin se ) " Well !! Filhal ye sirf mera anuman hi hai. Lakin.... "

Sachin ( Bich me hi Manoj ki baat ko kaat kr DENGEON ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Tb to sirf ek hi person hai jisase mai ummid kr skta hu. Aur wo Vikash hai. "

Manoj ( Sachin ki taraf dekh kr kud se ) ' Agr master kud Huntur Rider se mile hote, tb sayad wo meri baat pr yakin krte. '


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Tabhi waha ek band black suit uniform me aata hai. Usne apne aakho pr black color ka chsma laga rakha tha. Wo apne 50+ me lag raha tha. Uske face pr kafi juriya thi. Lakin is age me bhi energetic lag raha tha.
Ye WHITE TIGER GUILD'S ke 1st Department of management ka chief tha. Jiska name Ganesh tha.

Ganesh ( Sachin ke samne apna sir jukha kr smile ke sath ) " Vikash ko waha koi problem nahi hogi. "
" Hunter Vikash ke training result bahut hi jyada impresive hai. "
" Strength ke mamle me wo WHITE TIGER GUILD ke abhi ke main Attack force ke members se kahi bhi piche nahi rahega. "

Sachin ( ye sub sun kr ek rahat ki saas lete hue ) " hufff.....!!! "
" Chlo bhagwan ka shukr hai. "
( Apne man me ) ' Vikash ek A Rank huntur hai. '
' In sub bato ko sun kr aisa lagta hai. Wah ek aisa banda hai jise highly Rank hunturs ke samne bhi ignore nahi kiya ja sakta hai. '
' Agar aisa banda is Raid ka Captain hai to, wo B Rank hunturs ko sahi se command kr skta hai. Itna kafi hoga unke is DENGOUN ko clear kr ske. '

Ganesh ( Kamini hasi ke sath Manoj se ) " Jo afwahe maine suni hai uske hisab se..... Ek E Rank huntur jo ki sayad Reawakened hua hai ? "
" Tum abhi usi ke bare me Master sebaat kar rahe the na ? "
" Lakin mai batana chahunga, Hmara Vikash aise kisi hunturs se bahut jyada upar hai jiske paas koi foundation hi nahi hai. "

Manoj ( Ganesh ko ghur ke dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Jb wo sb is Gate se bahar nikalenge tb hum dekh lenge kon sahi hai. Mai ya tum !! '


VROOM.... VROOM.....
BEEPPPP...........


Tabhi in sub logo se thodi duri par ek black color ki Car aa kr rukti hai.

CRACK.....
Tap... Tap... Tap....


Aur uske back door ko open krke ek banda bahar aate hue kahta hai " Huh !! Yaha kya hua hai ? "
" Maine pakka suna tha ki ye ek C Rank Gate hai. "
" Kya ye Ek A Rank gate me change ho gaya hai ? "
( Smile ke sath ) " White Tiger guild ke itne important Master yaha kya kar rahe hai ? "

Ji ha dosto ye koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Jo is Black Car se back door se utrate hue ye sb kah raha tha.
Wo chl kr Sachin ki taraf jane lagta hai. Aur uske piche piche Anurag bhi usi taraf chl deta hai.
Sare log Namit ko yaha dekh kr surprise ho jate hai.

Sachin ( Namit ki taraf dekh kr Surprise hote hue ) " Namit ? "

Manoj ( bahut jyada surprise se haklate hue ) " Y... Ye person to ? "

Ganesh ( Surprise ke sath ) " Ye to N....Namit hai. "
" SCAVENGER GUILD ka S Rank huntur Namit. "

Namit ( Apne chasme ko kamini smile ke sath thoda niche krte hue sachin se ) " Bahut din ho gaye tmse mile hue Sachin. "

Sachin " Tum India me kya kr rahe ho ? "

Namit " Mai yaha apne kuch business ke karan ruka hua hu. Lakin mujhe bikul ummid nahi thi ki tum, mujhe yaha miloge. "
" India such me itni bhi jyada badi country nahi hai. "

Sachin ye sb sun kr gusse me aa jata hai. Jiske karan uske Red hair white color me change ho jate hai. Sath me glow krne lagte hai.

Sachin ( gusse se ) " Mere question ka answer do. "
" Ek aadmi jise abhi United States me hona cahiye tha wo yaha India me kya kar raha hai aur White Tiger guild ke area me uska kon sa business hai ? "

Namit ( smile krte hue ) " White Tiger guild ka area ? "
" Tb to mai tmse kuch puchna cahta hu... "
" Kya wo ghtiya huntur tmhare Guild me enter ho gaya hai ? "
" kya soch kr tmne Use recruit kiya apne Guild me ? "
" Mai us E Rank ke bacche ke bare me aata kar raha hu. "

Sachin ( confused ho kr ) " E Rank ? "
" Tum kiske bare me baat kr rahe ho ? "

Namit " Mai RIDER ke bare me baat kr raha hu jo abhi is Gate ke ander gaya hai. "

Sachin ( Surprise hote hue apne man me ) ' Rider ? '
' Aakhir Namit usko kaise janta hai ? '


Tap.... Tap.... Tap....

Namit aage ja kr gate ko touch krte hue kahta hai " ye kya .... "
" Kya ye Ek Red Gate hai ? "



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INSIDE THE DENGEON

Mai, Ragini se kuch bate rah raha tha.

Mai " Mai bhi tmse ek question puchna cahta hu. "
" Tum log new recruits hote hue bhi ab tak is DENGOUN ke andar itne saant kaise ho ? "

Ragini " Phla lesson hme yahi sikhaya jata hai ki DENGEON ke ander kuch bhi ho skta hai. "
( Vikash ki taraf isara krke ) " specially Vikash ko special coaching mili hui hai. "
" Use aise taiyar kiya gaya hai ki wo White Tiger guild ke main Attack force ko join kr ske. "

Ab tak sare hunturs do group me divide ho kr aamne samne khade ho chuke the. Fir Vikash hm sb se kahta hai " Hum sb is raste ko follow krte hue aage badhenge. "

Mai " Thik hai to hum log jangal ke ander se hote hue aage badhenge. "


Tap.... Tap... Tap.....

Fir Vikash ke group wale waha se janelagte hai.

Vikash ( jate hue ) " Meri subkamna tm sub ke sath hai. "


Tap.... Tap... Tap...

Hum sb bhi unke opposite jangal ki taraf nikal padte hai.

Mai ( Vikash ke group ko ) " Meri subkamna bhi tm sb ke sath hai. "


Tap.... Tap.... Tap.....

Hum sb jangal ke ander se hote hue aage badhte ja rahe the. Mai sbse piche apne paint ke pocket me dono hath dale chl raha tha. Mere sath Ragini bhi chl rahi thi.
Mai sare jungle ko dhyan se dekh raha tha. 100 feet se bhi uche uche tree chro taraf faile hue the. Unke karan jyada roshni niche nahi aa pa rahi thi. Lakin fir bhi itna to aa rahi thi ki hme sb aaram se dikh raha tha.
Chro taraf snow hi snow faila hua tha.

Ragini ( meri taraf dekh kr ) " To.. kya tum mere question ka answer nahi doge ? "

Mai ( chro taraf dekhte hue ) " Well... Mai nahi janta tm kya kahna cahti ho. "

Ragini ( mujhe dekh ke apne man me ) ' Ye person kam se kam A Rank huntur to hoga hi. '
' Nahi ! Sayad.... '



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VIKASH GROUP

Tap.... Tap.... Tap......

Vikash group ke sare hunturs aage badhte hue ja rahe the.
Tabhi ek jagah vikash kuch dekh kr ruk jata hai aur kahta hai " Idiots... "

Ek B Rank huntur " Huh ? Kya hua ? "

Vikash ( ek tree ki taraf ishara krte hue ) " waha dekho. "

B Rank huntur " Y... Ye to.. "

Samne tree pr bear ke panjo ke bahut bade bade nishan the.

Vikash " Unhe patiently wahi pr hmara aane ka intejar Krna cahiye tha. "
" Quki jangal ICE BEAR ka ilaka hai. "
" Bs ek inexperienced E Rank huntur ke chlte, wo baki sare innocent log bahut jald hi marne wale hai. "

Ek B Rank huntur ( Vikash ko dekh ke smile krte hue ) " Tmko kya lagta hai ek E Rank huntur ko kabhi koi proper coching bhi mili hogi ? "

Vikash " Aisa kabhi nahi ho skta. Wo bs ek E Rank huntur hai. "
( Apne man me kuch sochte hue ) ' Wait... '
' Us team me kuch C Rank aur ek B Rank huntur bhi hai. '
' To mai aisa kyu soch raha hu ki wo E Rank huntur unka Leader hai ? '
' Jo bhi ho, mujhe usase kya. '
' Bhut hi jld wo sb marne wale hai. '


DHADAAMMMM......

Vikash apne back pr rakhe hue us big shield ko apne aage jamin pr kada karte hue " Hum sb sirf kud ke bharose hai. "
" To fight ke liye ready ho jao. "


SWOOSSS.....

Sare hunturs se Itna kah kr wo apna AXE apne right hath me le leta hai. Aur apne shield ko apne aage left hand se pakd kr baki sabhi hunturs ke sath fight ko ready ho jata hai.


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OUTSIDE OF THE DENGEON

Namit ( gusse se Gate ko dekhte hue ) " Mai itni dur se yaha bs iske liye aaya tha aur ye is Red gate ke ander ja kr fas gaya. "
" Ab to Rider ke face ki ek jhlak bhi dekhna bahut mushkil hai. "

Namit ( apne man me ) ' Aakhir ye sare log is Rider ko le kr itna utsuk ( keen ) kyu hai ? '







Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Bahut Hi bahtreen update hai bhai...
 

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Super update hai Bhai
Sukriya RAJIV SHAW bhai.
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Fantastic update
Sukriya Mahakaal bhai.
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Good update

But main yeh bolna chahta hu last ke 2 aaj ka milkar 3 update hl gaye jisme rider ke scenes proper nahi the usse jyada other persons ke scene jyada the woh bhi jarurat se jyada mind mat karna but yahi hai baat
Bhai jaruri nahi her Update me hero hi hero chaya rahe story ko aage build up karne ke liye uske aur bhi supporting character ko time dena padta hai. To ye to aam baat hai. Aager hr Updates me hero hi hero chaya rahega to story ka maja bekar ho jayega.

aur itne baar scene change karne ki vjha se update ka maza kharab ho jata hai is update mein lagh bhag 9 baar apne scene change kiya jis se koi bhi scene acha nahi laga mujhe main bs yeh bolna chahta hu itni baar scene change mat kiya karo
5 baat scene change hue hai Bro. Aur ha aapki ye baat admit krta hu ki scenes change hone se ye update chota lag raha hai. Us baat ka mai aage dhyan rakhunga.
Aur bhai jb story ke demand hai ki multiple scenes ek time pr hi chl rahi hai. To usko to dikhana hi padega na.
Baki sukriya aapka valuable suggestion ke liye Akdu Insan bhai.
Mai in baato pr gaur jarur karunga.
 

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Zabardast Update Rider Bhai






Maza Aagayaa
Sukriya Though_Guy bhai.
Aise hi support krte rahiye.
Waise Sunday Me Mujhe Mega Update Ki Ummid Thi Aapse Kher Jo Mila Ham Usi Me Santusht Hai





Keep It Up Bade Bhai
Bhai ab daily update dena padta hai to aisa possible nahi ho pata hai. Waise bhi bahut hi kam writer hai yaha jo Daily Update deta hai.

superb update bro...:drunk::drunk:
. but aaj Sunday h so aaj to doo update d diya kro..:vrumvrum1::vrumvrum1:
Sukriya SinghChandan bhai.
Aur bhai daily Update dene ke karan ye possible nahi ho pata hai.
Mujhe bhi job family bahut kuch dekhna hota hai.
Baki kabhi possible hua to dekhenge.:writing:

Update ache hai Story bhi achi jari hai bas thodi slow hori, lagra hai har update bas 5-10 mints hi story ko aage badha raha hai.

Overall very good
Aisa aapko lag raha hai bhai jbki last Update me story gate ke ander almost 1day nd bahar 1 hour complete hone wala hai. Aur bhai jaha chije , scenes important hai wo to dikhana hi padega.
Baki mai jitna ho ske is bare me kuch krne ki kosis krunga.
Sukriya Avir bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍

Superb update
Sukriya A.B.KING bhai.
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Nice update Bhai
Sukriya Ajay bhai.
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Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya ab to jabardast fighting ka intezar hai.
Sukriya Scorpionking bhai.
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Sukriya Arvind Sharma bhai.
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Baher badi tareef ho rahi h vikas ki woh ek team leader h lekin yaha kuch hi nikla
Yeh vikas tow bada chalu cheez nikla saare takatwer hunter ko apne saath le lia or kamjoro ko Rider k saath chhod dia lekin use nahi pata ki uske saath kia hone wala h
Yahi to special coching hai ki phle kud ke bare me socho aur jitna ho ske utna apne aap ko strong rakho sbse phle apne kamjori ko dhundh kr kud nikal do. Usne yahi kaam kiya mostly powerful huntur selfish hi hote hai.
Ragini n achcha dimag lagaya jo yeh team m aa gayi
Ragini ne Rider ko arrow ko pakdte hue dekh liya tha. Jbki Vikas bhi Arrow ko aate hue nahi dekh paya tha. Aur yahi baat usne notice ki .
Baherhal dekhte h kon si team mese kitne log bach ker aate h
Haa ye to dekhna bahut intrusting hoga.
Idher baher Namit or Sachin don S rank hunter h tow yeh dono bhi milker yeh gate nahi khol payenge kia
Dekhte h aage kia hota h aage
Badhiya zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Ab wo to ye dono hi jane baki ke aapke kuch questions ke ans aaj mil jayenge.
At tha end sukriya Naik bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍

Toh finaly namit pahuch he gaya but sadly mil nahi paya but maza ane wala h is red gate se bi rider bahut kuch leke nik lega aur A rank vikash babu ko shock lagne wala h ....aur sayad sab bhul rahe rider ke pass dead army bi h ...ha ha ha mast fight dhekne ko milegi ...
again super duper update bro..
keep going....
Aapne ye baat bahut sahi kahi hai apne hero ke paas dead army hai jo yaha bahut kaam aane wali hai. Aur phle rider gate se bahr to nikal paye wahi bahut hai. Baki use yaha se kya milega wo bhi dekhna bhut intrusting hoga.
Aapke review ke liye bhut bhut sukriya Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Aur aap bhi ab bhut se point notice krne lage ho.:hellrider:
 

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To A rank hunter ne andar apni alag hi group bna li hai or vo alag disha me chla gya Vahi ek B rank girl ne unka group chhod kr rider, Kirti or bache huye C rank hunter ke sath apna alag hi group bnakr jungle ki taraf chale gye hai dekhte hai rider Kaise in sabki suraksha karte huye yha se bahar nikalta hai Vahi us A rank hunter ko ice bear ke panjo ke nishan dekhne ko mile hai jisse Usne fighting ke liye satark rahne ko kaha hai group ko...
Ha Vikash kud ko bahut smart smjho raha hai. Lakin usase tej to Ragini nikli jo uske group se Rider ke group me chli gayi.
Nomit to dungan ke bahar aa gya hai or uska rider ke bare me white tiger guild ke S rank boss se puchhna unki najro me sak ke ghere me la rha hai dekhte hai Vo kya karte hai rider ko is Nomit se bchane ke liye...
Sachin to kuch nahi krega quki wo to Rider ko janta bhi nahi hai. Wo bs is liye gussa hai ki Namit uske area me aaya hai.
Update was Exilent but writing skill or behtar kar sakte ho bhaya, aapme potential hai aisa karne ki or mujhe aisa kyo lag rha hai jaise quantity me fark pad rha hai Aapke update ki, ha aisa ho sakta hai ki baar baar seen Kai tukdo me baatne se aisa mahsus ho rha ho... Ab Jaisa bhi hai samajh lena bhai...
Ek suggestion Yadi Kai seen ek hi update me dikhane hai to aapko jyada matter write Karna padega bhaya kam me maza nhi aayega ulta maza kirkira ho jayega...
Aapne ye baat sahi kaha Xabhi bhai. Mujhe bhi is baat ka pata chl cuka hai.
Aage se aise Update aayenge to bade hi rahenge taki logo ko maja aaye.
Nd last me aapka bhut bhut sukriya Xabhi bhai.

Bahut Hi bahtreen update hai bhai...
Sukriya ROAN R bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍

Sukriya bhai.
Plz add some figting seen s
Ab aapko yahi dekhne ko milega.😉
 

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Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai, kirti se milta hu aur use ek raid ke liye le jata hu taki wo smjh ske uske aur baki hunturs ke bich kya antar hai. Namit bhi delhi me aa gaya tha. Use lene aur us pr najar rakhne ke liye Monitoring division ka Anurag airport gaya tha. Fir mai White Tiger guild ke Manoj ko bol kr ek C Rank DENGOUN ke gate me jane ki request krta hu. Unke baki Recruit ke sath hum gate ke ander jate hai tbhi wo change ho kr Red gate me change ho jata hai.


AB AAGE...

Anurag , Namit ko airport se receive krke ek mast lack car me drive krte hue le ja raha tha.
Namit car me piche aaram se baitha hua tha.

Namit ( Car ko ek look dekh kr ) " Nice car. "

Anurag ( drive krte hue ) " Lakin, fir bhi ye Kisi S Rank ke Hunter ke travel krne ke liye kafi nahi hai. "

Namit ( window se bahar dekhte hue ) " Well , such kahu to jis speed se ye car chl rahi hai isase acha to mai bhag kar jana pasand krunga. "

Ye sun ke Anurag car ke speed meter ki taraf dekhta hai. Jo ki 90 - 100 km / hour ki speed show kr rahi thi.

Namit ( Anurag se ) " Koi baat nahi, ye batao ki mere bhai ka antim sanskar kaisa raha . "

Anurag " Hme uski body DENGEON sebahr nahi la sake usase phle hi time khtam ho gaya tha. Aur uska antim sanskar privetly kiya gaya. "
" Kya tum uski jaha kabr hai waha jana cahoge ? "

Namit ( wapas bahar dekhte hue ) " Mujhe mare hue logo me koi interest nahi hai. "
" Mujhe kewal mere bhai ke mari hui body me interest hai. "

Anurag " To fir tum kaha jana pasand karoge ? "

Namit " Jahir si baat hai iska answer ek DENGEON hai. "
( Evil smile ke sath ) " Mai use ek DENGEON me dundunga. "
" Ghtiya hunturs pakka ek DENGEON me hi milte hai. "

Anurag ( Namit ko dekhte hue ) " Tum unhe India ke countless no. Of gate me aakhir kaise dundhoge. Tumne kuch socha hai ? "


Tab... Tab... Tab...

Namit apna phone nikal kr usme kuch krne lagta hai aur kahta hai " 21th century me ye koi badi problem nahi hai. "
" E Rank Rider, aisa lagta hai ki wo jst abhi kuch der phle hi ek DENGEON me enter hua hai. "
" DENGEON ke ander ke rule is bahari duniya ke rule se bilkul alga hota hai. "
" Ye to tum jante hi hoge ? "
" Mai unhe wahi ander maar kar dfna du ya nahi, isase tmhara koi matlab nahi hona cahiye. "

Anurag ( santi se ) " Haaa !! "



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INSIDE THE DENGEON

Hum sb DENGEON ke ander khich chuke the. Aur waha charo taraf bs snow hi snow faili hui thi. Uche -2 ped the. Show continuously gir rahi thi. Bhut hi tej thandi hawa bhi chl rahi thi.
Sare tree bhi snow se lade pade the. DENGEON ka gate bhi gayab ho cuka tha. Ye sb dekh kr sare hunturs ek dusre se dar aur surprise se kahne lagte hai.

" Ye kya hai ? "
" Ye to kisi DENGEON ki tarah nahi dikh raha hai. "
" sath me Gate bhi gayab ho cuka hai. "

Mai ( chro taraf dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Mujhe yaha abhi tak Kuch bhi ajib aur shuk karne jaisa feel nahi hua hai. '
' Kya is gate ne hm sub ko simply bs yaha transfer kr diya hai ? '

Kirti ( mujhse ) " Uhmmm... Kya yaha hmare sath kuch galat hua hai ? "


HISSS...... HISSS.......

Tabhi bahut speed se do ice ke bane hue ekdam sharp arrow hmare group ki taraf aate hai. Jinme se ek ka nishana kirti ka face tha.

TAK......

In aate hue Arrow ko mai aasani se dekh leta hu aur turant hi apne left hath ko aage karke mai kirti ke samne wale Arrow ko pakd leta hu.

GUPP...... Aaahhhh........
DHADAAMMMM............


Lakin dusra Arrow ja kr sidhe ek huntur ke sir ke aar paar ho jata hai. Aur wo wahi khtam ho jata hai.

Ahhhhh..... Ahhhhh.....

Kirti aur baki sare hunturs ye sb dekh kr ekdam se dar jate hai. Jinme se kuch ki to dar se chik hi nikal jati hai.
Aur sb hunturs chillate hue kahne lagte hai.

" Ye kya hai ? "
" Koi chup kr ghat lagaye hue hum pr hmla kr raha hai. "
" Us tree ke upar dekho. "
" Yahi log hai wo. "

Hum sb log arrow jidhar se aaya tha usi director me upar tree ki taraf dekhte hai.
Waha tree ke dalo pr 2 log khade dikhayi dete hai. Unke sath me bow and arrow tha. Sath me unki aakhe blue color ki chmak rahi thi. Lakin unka face nahi dikh raha tha hme.

Kuch huntur chilla padte hai " ICE ELVES ?"

Mai ( unko dekhte hue apne man me) ' ICE ELVES, itni duri se bhi mai inko sense nahi kr paya. '

Jo inse kabhi mila hua nahi rahte hai. Wo inke liye ICE ELVES ka word use krte hai.
Lakin jo inka samna kisi fight me kar cuke hote hai. Wo inke liye ek dusre word ka use krte hai .
Wo ELVES jaise beautiful word ki taraf nahi hota hai. We unko hunturs ko bina daya dikhaye , bahut hi khatarnak tarike se marne ke liye aisa kahte hai.

" HYAKKI "

Iska matlab hota hai ' Night Parade of One Hundred Demon ' . Mtlb ye itne jyada khatarnak hote hai ki inmen 100 deamon ke equal strength hoti hai.



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OUTSIDE THE GATE

WHITE TIGER GUILD'S ke Master Sachin ab tak Red Gate ki jagah pr aa chuke the.

Tap... Tap... Tap....
BUZZZZZZ....... BUZZZZZZ......


Wo chl kr Gate ke paas kr usko touch karte apna hath ander dalne ki kosis krte hai.

Sachin " Ye bahut tightly band ho cuka hai. "
" Ye to musibat ki baat ho jayegi. "
" Kya ye C Rank gate nahi tha ? "

Manoj " Aap sahi kah rahe hai sir ye C Rank Gate hi tha. "

Sachin ( Manoj se ) " Kya tumne Indian Hunturs Guild ko call kiya ? "

Manoj ( nirash hote hue ) " Ha maine kiya tha. "
" Lakin wo hme pagal bana rahe hai. Aur kah rahe hai ye pakka C Rank Gate hi hai. "

Sachin ( gusse se daat piste hue ) " Wo sale harami. "
( Apne man me ) ' Red Gaye kewal Higher Rank ke gates me Appear hota hai. '
' wo kahna cahte hai wo magical energy is gate ke dusre side ke different world se aa rahi hai wo bs ek C Rank Gate ki jitni hai ? '
' Isme jarur kuch galtiya hui hai. Quki jo Gaye mere samne khada hai wo km se km B Rank ka to hai hi. '
' agar hum badkismati hue ho yeA Rank ya usase bhi higher ka ho skta hai. '

Manoj " Kya hum is gate ko apne Magical energy sensor se measure kre ? "

Sachin " Jb se Gate Red color me badal gaya hai. Uske baad se Magical energy flow hona band ho cuka hai. To ye karne ka koi fayda nahi hai. "
" Abhi ki current Status ke hisab se , aisa koi bhi rasta nahi hai jisase hum is gate ki ranking ka pata laga sake. "
" Hmare kitne members Gate ke andar gaye hai ? "

Manoj " 12 log sir. "

Sachin " Aur unme se kitne log high Rank wale hai ? "

Manoj " Unme se ek A Rank Vikash hai jise is Raid ka Leader banaya gaya hai. Aur 7 B Rank huntur hai. "

Sachin ( apne man me ) ' Ek A Rank aur 7 B Rank huntur... '

Vinay ( Gate ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Kya new recruit's thik honge ? "

Sachin ( apne man me ) ' Ye Gate pakka Ya to B Rank ya A Rank ka hoga. '
' Mai S Rank hone ki probability nikal deta hu jiske wajagh se puri country khatre me aa skti hai. '
( Gate ki taraf dekh kr bakiyo se kahte hue ) " Agar ye ek B Rank DENGOUN hai to ise clear krne ke liye kam se kam 3 A Rank hunturs ki jarurat padegi. "
" Lakin Agr ye ek A Rank DENGEON hai to ise clear krne ke liye km se km Ek S Rank aur 10 A Rank hunturs ki jarurat padegi. "
" Is liye agr ye ek A Rank DENGEON hai to, hmare liye yahi acha hoga ki hum sbko mara hua hi smjhe. "
" Lakin aur wo lucky hua to mere khyal se sayad 2 ya 3 A Rank aur B Rank hunturs jinda wapas aa jayenge. "

Manoj ( Thoda darte hue ) " D... Darsal Sir !! baat aisi hai ki do aur log is Gate ke andar gaye hai jo hamre Guild ka hissa nahi hai. "

Sachin ( piche mud kr Manoj se ) " Aur wo do log kon hai ? "

Manoj " Unme se ek Huntur aisa hai jis pr haal me hi meri najar padi hai. "

Sachin ( intrest ke sath ) " Ek huntur jine Chief Manoj ko majboor kr diya us pr najar rakhne ko ? "

Manoj " Ji aap bikul thik kah rahe hai. "

Sachin " Aur us huntur ki Ranking kya hai ? A ya B Rank ? "

Manoj santi se apna sir bs naa me hila deta hai.

Sachin " To kya Ek S Rank huntur is Gate ke ander hai ? "

Manoj ( ek lambhi saas lete hue ) " Nahi !! Wo ek E Rank huntur hai. "



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INSIDE THE DENGEON

Hmare samne ek huntur ki body padi hui thi jisko un ELVES ne mara tha.

Mai ( uski body ko dekh ke apne man me kahta hu ) ' Inki najre bahut tej hai. '
' Inhone hmare Attack force me se 2 sbse kamjor huntur ko itni dur se bhi dekh liya. '
( ELVES ki taraf dekh kr ) ' Agr yahi 2month phleki baat hoti to inme se ek arrow ka nishana meri taraf hota. '

Mai dhyan se dekhta hu to ab mujhe unka face bhi saaf dikh raha hota hai. Undono ke kaan lambe aur nukile the. Dono smile kr rahe hote hai.
Tabhi Unme se ek apne anguthe se mujhe chidata hai. Sayad jo Arrow maine pakda tha wo isi ka tha.


TADAK......

Mai ye dekh kr apne hath me pakde hue us ice ke arrow ko tod deta hu. Aur smile krte hue unko dekh kr kud se kahta hu ' Ohh.... !!! ' Mai tmhe apne hatho se marunga. '

Run.... Run.....

Aur uske hi agle second dono waha pedo se bhut teji se gayab ho jate hai.
Hum sb abhi ye sb dekh hi rahe the ki vikash kahta hai " Mere khyal se to Mujhe nahi lagta ki ye hmara swagat kar rahe the. "
" Mujhe pakka nahi pata ki tum logo me se kitne log is situation ko smjh rahe ho. Lakin mai bata du ki hum sub ek Red Gate ke ander hai. "
" Hum yaha se tab tk bahar nahi ja skte jb tak ki, ya to hum sare yahi mare jaye ya fir isase phle Gate open ho jaye. "

Jo hunturs ye baat nahi jante the wo sb ye sunte hi shocked ho jate hai aur dar se kahte hai.

" Ek Red GATE ? "

Kirti ( mujhse ) " Sir ! Ye Red Gate kya hota hai ? "

Mai " Ye ek special Gate hota hai jo hme ek dusre world se jodta hai. "
" Ek baar agr hmne iske andar kadam rakh diya to ye puri tarah se band ho jata hai. Aur bahar se hmari madad ko koi bhi iske ander nahi aa skta hai. "
" Ye ek aisi jagah hai jaha se hum tb tak bach kr bhag nahi skte jb tak ki hum ya to Boss Monster ko na maar de ya fir ye Gate apne aap open na ho jaye. "
" Sidhe sabdo me kahe to hum yaha bahut buri tarah fas chuke hai. "








Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 
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