Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani

[Shetan]

Ek bahut hi behatreen story ka akhir end ho hi ho gaya but maza bahut aaya or shetan ji apki story ki khasiyat h ki story reader ko end Tak bandhe rakhti h, jisne ek bar story read karni shuru ki wo end Tak story ko nahi chhorega or daily update ka wait karta rahega, zabardast

Thankyou very very much Krishna. Aap story ke bahot bad me aae. Magar fir bhi aap ne mera bahot sath diya. Jab comments aur likes ka akal pada tab aap ke Likes aur comments ne jese jivan dan diya ho. Ek month bad ek new story start karungi. Muje umid hai ki aap sath nibhaoge. Lot of thanks Krishna.

Ho sake to meri contest story ko bhi support kar do. Comment aur Like dekar.

https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2025-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.172987/page-3#post-10722914

 

[Shetan]

𝐀𝐰𝐞𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐮𝐩𝐝𝐚𝐭𝐞

Lot of thanks Aliyaa. Story khatam hui. Ab next month new story start hogi. Tum jarur sath nibhana.

Ho sake to meri contest story ko bhi support karo. Comment aur Like dekar.

https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2025-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.172987/page-3#post-10722914

 

[Shetan]

Wow heart touching updates the madam, Really rongte khade ho gaye.
Par muje dukh hua ki Kamini mari gai.
Jab Khushi ke pal aaye tab hi kuch yesa hota he jo hum soch nhi sakte.
Really Abhi kamini ko Aapne jinda rakha hota to maza aata.
End bahut Ascha tha, me Aapse ye puchna chahta tha ki saya ka yhi end he yea story ka aage bhi part he.

Ronnie mene puru kosis ki story ke end ko bahetar banane ki. Sayad aap sab romanchit bhi hue. Kosis karaungi next year part 3 likhne ki.


Ho sake to meri is sal contest story ko bhi support karo. Comment aur Like dekar

https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2025-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.172987/page-3#post-10722914

 

[muhammadfaridkhan]

Thankyou so much. Filhal to meri contest story ko support kar do. Like aur comment dekar.

https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2025-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.172987/page-3#post-10722914

Ye kaisy karty Hain

 

[Shetan]

Ye kaisy karty Hain

Jo link di uspar click karo.

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[Krishna kumar]

Thankyou very very much Krishna. Aap story ke bahot bad me aae. Magar fir bhi aap ne mera bahot sath diya. Jab comments aur likes ka akal pada tab aap ke Likes aur comments ne jese jivan dan diya ho. Ek month bad ek new story start karungi. Muje umid hai ki aap sath nibhaoge. Lot of thanks Krishna.

Ho sake to meri contest story ko bhi support kar do. Comment aur Like dekar.

https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2025-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.172987/page-3#post-10722914

Shetan ji apki contest story ko like bhi karenge or comment bhi karenge but ye story open to ho hi nahi Rahi, kaise like comment kare? Or meri police wali biwi story ke update bhi shuru karo, apki wo story bhi mujhe behad pasand aayi h

 

[Shetan]

Shetan ji apki contest story ko like bhi karenge or comment bhi karenge but ye story open to ho hi nahi Rahi, kaise like comment kare? Or meri police wali biwi story ke update bhi shuru karo, apki wo story bhi mujhe behad pasand aayi h

Is link pe jao meri story ka name aaega. Niche sopilar hoga. Use click karo to story aa jaegi.



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[Shetan]

Ye kaisy karty Hain

Janab jaruri nahi ki tag karo. Review thread me jakar meri story ka name likho. Niche mera name likho. Aur uske bad story kesi lagi review do. Ho jaega.

 

[dirty_thoughts]

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(3)

Jis wakt rajkumari Debrina ne kampar ko sambhog karne ki shart rakhi. Us wakt Kampar sirf isi lie taiyar nahi huaa ki vo apna makshad pura kar sake. Ek karan ye bhi tha ki use us kamukh madhur sangit ka bhi asar ho raha tha. Magar vo sangit rajkumari ke lie nahi tha. Vo tha rani zeba ke lie. Jesa ki debrina ne kampar ko bataya tha ki rani ka kam to sirf khoon pina aur sambhog karna hi hota hai. Rani zeba apne kaksh me aa gai.
Darsal zeba ko aaoga ki har se koi fark nahi pad raha tha. Bhale hi vo bhi Liyaka se bejati sun ke aai ho. Zeba ko bas apne zund me rani bana rahena tha. Zeba befikra thi. Kyo ki Liyaka ke sar par jung hai. To vo zeba par hamla nahi karegi. Bahatar hoga ki har ke gam ko khushiyo ki aad me chhupa diya jae. Apne kaksh me aate hi use intjar tha ki kuchh nar uska dill bahelane ke lie aa jae.
Rani zeba ke kaksh me kuchh 4,5 majbut takatwar nar aae. Aur vo khade ho gae. Vo nar pahele se hi nagna the. Unke ling latke hue niche ki taraf zul rahe the. Zeba ne un mardo ki taraf dekha.

Zeba ; me ab tak kal ki har bhuli nahi hu. Me chahti hu ki tum sare milkar muje us gam ko bhulne me meri madad karo.

Bolte hi vo sare nar zuk gae. Vo jante the ki unhe kya karna hai. Tabhi vaha ek aur pishaj aaya. Jo zeba ka ashik tha. Aur zeba bhi use bahot pasand karti thi. Zaiko. Zaiko ne pahele to un khade nar ko dekha. Jo sare nagna the. Fir vo zeba ki taraf dekhta hai. Vo zeba ki taraf aage badha to zeba bhi uski taraf kadam badhati hai. Vo bich me akar khadi ho gai. Zaiko Zeba ke karib aaya.

Zeba ; muje taiyar karo zaiko.

Zaiko ne apni rani ka hukam mana aur zeba ko nanga karne laga.

Pal bhar me hi zeba nangi ho gai. Zaiko khud bhi apne kapde utarne laga. Aur vo bhi nanga ho gaya. Vo sayad pahele se hi taiyar tha. Iske lie uska ling pahele se hi tanav me sidha khada tha. Nanga hote usne apna hath rani zeba ki taraf badhaya. Par rani ne use apna hath nahi diya. Balki khud hi uske bagal se hoti hui vaha ek bade se bad ke upar chali gai. Zaiko use bas dekhta raha. Zeba jate hi bade se bad par petke bal ulti late gai.

Zeba ; aao muje khush karo.

Sare zeba ki taraf aane lage. Zaiko bhi uski taraf aane laga to use zeba ne rok diya.

Zeba ; nahi... Tum nahi. Muje jitane ke lie tumne kuchh bhi nahi kiya.

Zaiko bechara kya bolta. Par vo ye janta tha ki zeba apna gussa uspar nikal rahi hai. Esa pahele bhi ho chuka tha. Halaki ye zaiko ko pasand nahi tha. Par zaiko uska joda nahi tha. Uske pas to koi bhi hak nahi tha. Vo bas khada raha. Aur baki jo nangna avatha me jo nar the. Vo aage aae. Aur sare zeba ke pas uske bad par chadh gae. Zeba vahi kar rahi thi. Jo us zund ki rani karti hai.
Jab vo sare nar bad par aae to sare ke sare bade pyar se rani par tut pade. Bade pyar ze vo zeba ko chum rahe the. Zeba ko maza aane laga. Vo zeba ke badan se khelne lage to zeba bhi unka sath dene lagi.

Zaiko jise ye pasand nahi tha. Aur vo pahele bhi ye sab kai bar dekh chuka tha. Vo aur jyada tanav mahesus karne laga. Vo bhi nangna ho chuka tha. Aur sab dekhte hue vo bhi apne ling se khelne laga. Zeba ko vo sare ek sath bhog rahe the. Aur zeba uska luft uthate hue zaiko ko hi dekh rahi thi.
Use zaiko ko nicha dikhane me jyada maza aa raha tha. Ki tabhi kisi ke aane ki ahat hui. Khel slow tha. Is lie zeba ab tak baheki nahi thi. Vaha ek chudel akar khadi ho gai.

Chudel ; meri rani rajkumari apne kaksh me nahi hai. Use dhudha ja raha hai. Par vo kaha hai pata nahi chal raha.

Sunte hi ekdam se zeba khadi ho gai. Sare gulam pichhe ho gae. Zeba bhi nangna khadi ho gai aur soch me pad gai.

Zeba ; kya aur kuchh jo yaha muje na pata ho???

Chudel ; nipeti jasusi karte pakdi gai hai. Sayad vo jasusi kar rahi thi.

Zeba ; thik hai. Pata karo ki rajkumari nahi hai. Iski khabar bahar kis kis ko pata hai.

Chudel ; ab tak bahar kisi ko pata nahi hai meri rani. Par jald hi unhe pata chal jaega.

Zeba ; hmmm (sochte hue) uska muh khulvao. Jao sare.

Sabhi bahar chale gae. Rani bahar jane ke lie taiyar ho gai. Ki tabhi zaiko vaha aa gaya

Zaiko ; meri rani ek aur buri khabar hai.

Zeba ; me tumse hamesha kuchh bahetar ki unid karti hu. Par najane kyo tum muje hamesha buri khabar hi sunate ho. Kaho ab kya ho gaya??

Zaiko ; rani zund bagawat karne ki kosis me hai. Vo rajkumari ko dekhna chahte hai.

Zeba ; rajkumari nahi hai. Ye tum bhi jante ho ki agar rajkumari hanare pas nahi hai to vo muje rani nahi manenge. Tumhe unhe rokna hoga.

Zaiko ; to kya me unpar brassa ko chhod du.

(Brassa ek esa shetani jiv hai jo kabhi vafadar nahi hota. Vo koi bhi uske samne aae. Inshan pishaj har kisi ko chabane lagta hai)

Zeba ; jo karna hai karo. Magar yaad rahe ki mere log na mare. Kyo ki bagawat bhi ho to mere log jyada ho. Samze.

Zaiko ; samaz gaya meri rani.

Zeba ; agar aaj tun kamyab rahe to rajkumari hamesha ke lie tumhari gulam hogi.

Zaiko khush ho gaya. Aur vo khada hokar vaha se chale gaya. Vo tabahi machane ke lie taiyar tha.

(3.1)

Zaiko ke jane ke bad rani bahar nikli. Vo apne pishaji kano se khusur pusur sun sakti thi.

Jab rajkumari uske pas nahi to ham use apni rani kyo mane.
Jarur bagawat to hogi hi. Vese bhi vo hamari rani ki katil hai.
Rani ladhna nahi janti to kya huaa. Ham to ladhna jante hai na.

Par achanak jab unhone bhi rani hi ahat suni to vo sari chup ho gai. Aur rani ke aate hi sabhi ne apna sar niche zuka liya. Jo ek rani ke san man me kiya jata hai.

Ek pal ke lie mano sannata hi chha gaya. Jo chudele bagawat ki bat kar rahe the. Vo sari chup hi ho gai.

Zeba ; kya mere pishaji kan aaj kal kuchh galat sun ne lage hai. Kya me bimar ya kamjor hu.

Koi kuchh bhi nahi bola.

Zeba ; abhi kuchh pal pahele mere kano ne bagawat sabd ko suna. Kya mene kahi galat to nahi sun liya.

Tabhi ek chudel bich me bol utthi.

Chudel ; hamari Rajkumari kaha hai??

Zeba ne uski taraf bahot gusse se dekha.

Zeba ; (gussa) vo yahi hai. Mere pas. Surakshit aur salamat.

Ek ne himmat ki to sabhi ne himmat ki. Jiske zeba ko umid nahi thi.

Chudele ; ham apni rajkumari ko dekhna chahte hai.

Ha bilkul. Hame dikhao. Vo kis hal mein hai.

Zeba ; mene kaha na. Vo thik hai. Aur mere pas hi hai. Use kuchh nahi huaa.

Chudele ; agar rajkumari nahi to tum rani bhi nahi. Feshla tumhare hath me hai. Hame rajkumari dikhao. Ham tumhe rani man ne ko taiyar hai.

Zeba ke tewar ekdam se badal gae.

Zeba ; ohhhh to tumhe apni rajkumari se milna hai. Kyo???

Chudele ; bilkul.

Zeba jor se chillai.

Zeba ; zaiko........

Sare soch me pad gae ki rani kya karne vali hai. Vo sari ki sari alag alag hone lagi. Taki unpar kahi se ek sath hamla na ho jae. Magar zeba ne kuchh aur hi socha tha.

(3.2)

Jab zeba aur un chudelo ki bahas chal rahi thi. Mahel se bahar ek khandar jesa ek aur mahel tha. Us mahel se kisi janwar ki bhayanak gurra ne ki aavaj aa rahi thi. Ise jadui takat aur shetani shaktiyo se hi kaid kiya gaya tha. Jise zaiko ne zeba ke hukam par khula chhod diya. Aur buri bhayansk aavaj se chikhta huaa vo jiv bahar nikla.

Ye shetani jiv ka name brassa hai. Brassa bahot hi badbudar janwar jo chudel ho ya koi inshan ya fir koi bhi jiv ho. Ise turanr pakad kar chabane lagta. Brassa sab se jyada aag aur suraj ki roshni se hi darta hai. Khula hone ke bad vo mahel ki taraf hi badhme laga. Vaha rani khud ko safe karne ke bad un chudelo ki taraf hi dekhne lagi.
Par achanak jab unhone brassa ki aavaj suni to vo samaz gai ki unki jaan khatee me pad chuki hai. Vo sari ek sath hokar ladhne ko taiyar ho gai. Ye unko bhi pata tha ki unme se bahoto ki jaan jane vali hai.

(3.3)

Jab zeba aur un chudelo ke bich vivad chal raha tha. Tab kampar ke dhokhe se pakdi gai nipeti ki halat kharab ho rahi thi. Use chandi ke taro se bani chabuk mari ja rahi thi. Aur nipeti karah rahi thi.

Nipeti ; (dard) ahhhhh.....

Nipeti kaid hui aur yaha tak pahochte vo apni chalaki se jinda rahi. Khud chudel hone ke bavjud bhi vo ek inshan se dhokha tak kha gai. Magar in sab ke pichhe to sirf ek hi makshad tha. Sirf apni rajkumari. Par abhi tak use apni rajkumari ka hal kya hai. Ye nahi malum tha. Mahel ke andar kya ho raha hai. Ye use malum nahi tha.
Tabhi zeba ke paksh ke nar pishaj jo 4 the. Aur vahi nipeti ko torcher kar rahe the. Unhone nipeti ko lalkarna shuru kar diya. Nipeti ko gandhi galiya dene lage. Lekin rajkumari ke paksh ki kuchh chudele bagawat shuru kar chuki thi. Unhone un charo par hamla kar diya. Aur nipeti ko azad kar diya.

Chudel ; rajkumari yaha nahi hai nipeti. Tum jaldi karo.

Nipeti samaz gai ki kampar use lejane me kamyab ho gaya. Chahe marji ho ya na ho. Nipeti ko apna vachan bhi nibhana tha.

Nipeti ; kya rajkumari ki aur koi khabar?? Ki vo kaha hai???

Chudel ; ye to kisi ko nahi pata. Par bagawat shuru ho chuki hai. Zund me afra tafri hai. Sayad kahi zeba ne unhe mar diya hai. Magar hame lash bhi nahi dikha rahi.

Nipeti ; vo mari nahi hai. Me janti hu. Ki vo kaha hai??? Par sayad hame aur jyada sathi chahiye.

Chudel ; lekin vo mushkil hai. Zeba ne hamate sathiyo ko dhokhe se kaid kar liya hai. Aur unko brassa ke hawale kar diya.

Tabhi kisi chudel ki dardnak chikhne ki aavaj aai. Ek chudel ko brassa ne apne panjo aur jabdo me daba liya tha. Aur jinda hi use chabane laga tha. Chandi ki chabuk se ghayal nipeti. Us aavaj ko sunkar mahel ki taraf dekhti hai.

Chudel ; lagta hai hamare bahot se sathi mare jaenge.

Nipeti ; nahi aaj to hargij nahi


Nipeti ek jordar chhalang lagati hai. Aur mahel ke sarwaje se andar. Uske hatho me vahi chabuk thi. Jo chandi ki thi. Vo andar aai to dekha ki chudele gher gher kar use lalcha rahi hai. Kuchh 3,4 chudele to mari hui padi thi. Nipeti ne bade se darwaje ko band kiya. Aur joro se chillai.

Nipeti ; sare upar chhat ki satah par ho jao.

Sab ne vahi kiya. Par vo chudele bhi samaz gai ki agar koi ek chudel brassa se ladhegi to bahot jald mari jaegi. Par brassa ne bhi nipeti ko dekha. Aur vo uski taraf dhire dhire badhne laga. Dhire dhire vo joro se nipeti ki taraf badhta hai. Aur vo jese hi nipeti ke karib aaya. Nipeti ne joro se jump karte chabuk ghumai. Nipeti ne brassa ki ek ankh fod di. Dard se pagal brassa aur jyada hinshak ho gaya.
Vo dard ke mare itni jor se ghuma ki iski badi lambi puchh ki chapet me nipeti aa gai. Brassa to kai bar un mahel ki deewaro se takraya. Magar nipeti bhi dard se ek taraf karah rahi thi.

Nipeti jyada ghayal ho rahi thi. Aur use khoon ki jyada jarurat thi. Vo kamjor pad rahi thi. Vahi brassa ki sirf ek ankh futi thi. Magar ek salamat thi. Aur usne usi ankh se ek taraf dard se karahti nipeti ko dekha. Vo nipeti ki taraf mudne laga. Sari chudele dar rahi thi.. unhone nipeti ko aagah karne ki kosis ki.

Chudel ; nipeti... Nipeti... Vo aa raha hai nipeti.

Nipeti ne bhi use dekha. Vo lad khadati khadi hui. Aur fir se ek bar us chandi ki chabuk ko lekar khadi hui. Vo bhi use dekh kar taiyar thi. Brassa sirf ek ankh se use dekhte hue nipeti ki taraf bhaga. Par vo jese hi karib aaya. Nipeti jump karne ki bajay uski taraf bhag ke sarkne lagi. Aur vo chabuk us brassa ke pau me lapet kar chhod deti hai.
Apni hi gati se girte sarkte brassa mahel ke darwaje ki taraf sarak gaya. Darvaja tod kar vo bahar gira. Nipeti ne vaha farsh par pade ek hathiyar ko utthaya. Jo bhale ke jesa tha. Aur ekdam satik nishana. Us brassa ki dusri ankh par.
Brassa tadpta dhup me fas gaya. Ankh na hone ke karan vo galat disha me bhagta aur kisi na kisi chijo se takrata. Dhire dhire vo jal gaya. Rajkumari ki paksh ki sari chudele azad ho gai. Magar ab vo do guto me bat chuki thi. Lekin dusra gut kaha tha. Bahot dhudhne par vaha na zeba mili. Aur nahi uske paksh ki chudele.

Chudele ; vo kaha gai hogi???

Nipeti ; vo rajkumari ko hasil karne me nakamyab rahi. Sayad bhag gae hogi.

Chudele ; to ab ham kya kare???

Nipeti ; sabi samundar me kudo. Abhi din hai. Hame pani ke raste jana hoga. Me janti hu ki rajkumari kaha gai hogi.

Jo kampar chahta tha. Vo ho raha tha. Zeba ka aadha zund kampar ki taraf na chahte hue bhi ladhne ko majbur hone vala tha. Kyo ki rajkumari kampar ke sath thi.

Ek alag aur vishal sanskar racha phir use sahi aur sucharu roop se leke aage badna.. ye sirf aap kar sakti hai

Reeta aur Uske Bete ka Maa Beta ka prem aur hasi mazak

Kumurta ka shandar 'Kutneeti' wala andaz aur kahani ka apna paradox

Everything is just perfect

 

[Shetan]

Ek alag aur vishal sanskar racha phir use sahi aur sucharu roop se leke aage badna.. ye sirf aap kar sakti hai

Reeta aur Uske Bete ka Maa Beta ka prem aur hasi mazak

Kumurta ka shandar 'Kutneeti' wala andaz aur kahani ka apna paradox

Everything is just perfect

Thankyou very very much dirty_thoughts. Muje khushi hui ki aap updates enjoy kar rahe ho. Bas ab jyada update nahi bache story samzo khatam hi ho chuki hai.