Nice and superb update....
Super fabulous update riya singh ....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai
riya singh ji....
Nice and beautiful update....
Superb fantastic

update
Fantastic update dear....
Fantastic update dear....
Riya ji Aapne ek comment ka reply kiya tha ki "story me sex hona chahiye na ki sex me story" Aap ki ye baat bahut achchhai lagi. Apki stories me sex scenes se zyada maza Baki storiy padne me aata hai.sex scenes bhi Sahi hain but actions scenes me maza aata hai aur suspense Kamal ke hoty hain. Ek Maa best story ha aapki. Ab bairav ko shayad Sanjana mareegi kyun ki vardan that ke pavitra aatma nahi maar sakti. Sanjana ne Jo gull khilaye haain Wo pavitra nahi hai. Baki writer behtar janti hain..
Shandar update riya g...
Finally wo update aa hi gaya jis ka shiddat se intezar tha..
Aik akhri yudh..teeno heros ko aik sath ladty dekhny ka intezar khatam...
Ab dekhna yeh hai ke bhomik aur dev bhairav ko wapas kaisey le kar jayen ge...
Aur ab yeh end pe goli kis ko lagi aur chalany wala hai kon
waiting for the next update....
waiting for the next update....
riya singh ji next update kab tak aayega?
Ye harday wali story konsi hai
Superb fantastic update riya singh ...
Lekin dev aur Niharika ka aise ant ki umeed nahi thi unko ko bhairav ko maar ke marna tha....
Kahani apne antim charam par he dekhna hoga ant kya hota he
Agla update kab tak aayega
Nice and superb update.....
Shandar update riya g...
Maza agaya...mujhy poora yakeen hai Dev mara nahi hai..wo hi bhairav ko mary ga..
Next update ka shiddat se intezar hai
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Bohat hi shandaar update hai. Ab dekhna hai Bhomik ji ka Kya plan hai. Kya Dev aur Niharika waqai me mar gaye hain ya sirf natak hai. Intezar rahega next update ka
Maza agaya riya ji
Samanya nari hi mar sakta sabhi ko
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai
riya singh ji....
Nice and lovely update....
waiting for the next update....
Jabardast update
waiting for the next update....
waiting for the next update....
waiting for the next update....
waiting for the next update....
Brilliant and fabulous update dear 
Waiting for next update dear riya
waiting for the next update....
bahut bahut dhnyawaad itna pyar dene ke liye, maine is format per nov 2020 se kahani likhni shuru ki thi, wo bhi tab jab kisi ne meri hi kahani jo maine dusri website per likhi thi, use yaha post kr diya tha, aur maine apni hi story padhi, aur dekha ki logo ne wo story pasand ki h, tab maine socha kyo na khud hi apn story likhu, aur fir maine apni ikhi story ye pyas bujhti hi nhi ko yaha post kiya, isliye main us insan ko bhi thanku bolna chahti hu jisne meri story yaha post ki agar wo aisa nhi karte to shayad main kabhi apni story na likh pati aur jo kahani maine dusri website per adhuri chod di thi use yaha puri na karti, aur fir aap sabka itna pyar mila ki main kuch alag sochne lagi aur fir ek kahani likh di jiska naam tha EK MAA, aur us kahani ko aap sabne itna pyar diya ki main apna pura time isi website ko dene lagi, bas din bhar apni kahani ko sochti aur aage kya likhna h wo plan karti, fir dimag me dusri kahani wo anokha h, us kahani ko bhi aapka bahut pyar mila, aur us kahani ka ant karte karte socha dono kahaniyo ko ek sath jod deti hu, aur aap sabne use pasand bhi kiya to idea aaya ki kyo na puri saga hi likh du aur sari kahaniyo ko jod du, aur fir dimag me aai rakshash,
lekin kahaniyo ko jyada time dene ki wajah se kuch family problems aane lagi, jis wajah se main yaha dhayan nhi de pai aur kahani bich me ruk gai, ek bar laga ki kahani bich me hi reh jayegi, lekin thoda time mila aur maine is kahani ko bhi pura kiya, jiska antim updat main aaj post karne ja rhi hu, aap sabne mujhe itna pyar diya h ki main khud ko bahut khas manne lagi hu, masti bahre pal jo aap sabne diye hain aapke dirty comments aur usme chipa pyar jo aapne diya wo main apni life me hamehsa miss karti thi, kyoki pariwarik jeevan me ye sab masti nhi ho sakti, isliye kahaniyo me padh padh kr enjoy karti thi lekin khud likha to aur maja aaya aur usme aap sabke masti bhare comments ne to char chand laga diye,
umeed karti hu aapka pyar aise hi mujhe milta rhe, sab thik rha to aage fir ek nai kahani lekar aaungi, aap sabka pyar pane ke liye,
bahut bahut dhnyawaad, love you all of you my pati devar ashiko bhaiyo bheno, jo mujhe jis roop me dekhna chhata ho usi roop me bahut sa pyar,
