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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert) :)
Nice update wait for next update
 

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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert) :)
Bahut hi sunder update mitra, Raju ne khulna aur kholna shuru kar diya hai, thakurain ne bhi madad mangi hai, par aise kaise Raju yakeen kar le, use yakeen dilane ke liye thakurain ko kuch to apana dikhana padega :akshay: , ab ghar par bhi maal taiyar ho rahe hain to Raju ko kami nahi hone wali hai, waise kya twist aane wala hai uska intezar hai
 

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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert) :)
Nice update
 

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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert) :)
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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert) :)
gazab ka update...Raju ne ek tarah se besharami dikhaate hue apne kadam aage badha diye...ab dekhna ye hai uske kadam ladkhadahate hain ya wo aise hi besharami dikhaate hue sabko khushiyan dene me kaamyaab hoga...kahani ka dusra pehlu hai..kamya ..kamya ne shayad raju khufiya darwaaze ke baare me bataya hai..aage chalkar raju darwaaze ko khol kar kamya ko kholega...mind blowing update..keep posting mass bhai
 

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gazab ka update...Raju ne ek tarah se besharami dikhaate hue apne kadam aage badha diye...ab dekhna ye hai uske kadam ladkhadahate hain ya wo aise hi besharami dikhaate hue sabko khushiyan dene me kaamyaab hoga...kahani ka dusra pehlu hai..kamya ..kamya ne shayad raju khufiya darwaaze ke baare me bataya hai..aage chalkar raju darwaaze ko khol kar kamya ko kholega...mind blowing update..keep posting mass bhai
Thanks Siraj bhai...for a good idea and suggestion..."darwaaze ko khol kar Kaamya ko kholega".
Really good idea..knowingly or inadvertently don't know..but accha line hain. I can expand on it. Many Thanks though...:)

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Thanks Siraj bhai...for a good idea and suggestion..."darwaaze ko khol kar Kaamya ko kholega".
Really good idea..knowingly or inadvertently don't know..but accha line hain. I can expand on it. Many Thanks though...:)

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mass bhai kahani likhta hu aisi choti moti baaten dimaag me aati rehti hain...mujhe prasannta ho rahi hai ki mere kaaran aapko ek line mil gayi...kahani dumdaar tareeqe se aage badh rahi hai..koi jaldbaazi nahi dikhayi aapne yahi aapke likhne ki kala ko sabit karta hai
 

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Update 6:

2-3 ghante kaa safar tay karne ke baad Raju guruji ke ashram pahunch jaata hain.

Guruji thodi der baad raju se milne aate hain.

Guruji: aao beta…main tumhaara hi intezaar kar raha tha.

Raju yeh baat sun kar surprise ho jaata hain.

Raju: ji..main samjha nahi.

Guruji: yehi ki main jaanta hoon (tha) ki tum mujhse zaroor milne aaoge.

Raju: aapko kaise pata tha?

Guruji: khair, woh chhodo aur kaho, kaise ho?? kya samasya hain?

Raju: ji….mere dadaji ab is duniya mein nahi rahe..aur unhone mujhe bataaya tha ki main aapse milne aaon.

Guruji: sun kar bahut dukh hua…

Raju: pichle 1-2 mahinon se ghar mein sab bahut dukhi hain aur ghar mein sab par mayoosi chaayi hui hain. Pitaji aur bhai bhi ab is duniya mein nahi rahe hain. Samajh mein nahi aa raha hain ki main kya karoon.

Guruji: dekho beta…mujhe pata hain ki tum samasya se joojh rahe ho…aur us samasya kaa samadhaan bhi hain.

Raju: kya hai woh samadhaan?

Guruji: samadhaan thoda mushkil ho sakta hain lekin tum kar sakte ho.

Raju: kya?

Guruji: do option hain...pehla yeh ki tum apna ghar, zameen bech kar apne parivar ke saath koi doosre gaanv chale jaao...
Raju: kuch soctha hua...aur doosra samadhaan?
Guruji: doosra samadhaan yeh hain ki tum yahin raho..apni samasyaaon kaa muqabla karo aur unse ubhar kar aao...
Guruji: tumko sab kaa dhyaan rakhna hain, unko dushmano se bachaana hain aur unko “kushiyaan” bhi dena hain.

Raju: dhyaan aur raksha to main karoonga hi…aur samajhta bhi hoon..aakhir woh sab mere parivar ke log hain..lekin kushiyaan kaise de sakta hoon?

Guruji: dekho beta…tum ghar ke sab logon se sambhog karo..unhe khoob saara pyaar do..unko apne bacche ka maa banaao…kushiyaan apne aap aa jaayega….yaad rakho…aurat ko sab se zyaada kushi tab hoti hain jab woh maa ban jaaye.

Raju: yeh kaise sambhav hain? Woh sab mere ghar ke log hain aur main hi unse sambhog karoon? Yeh to samaaj ke khilaaf hain aur aisa hota bhi nahi hain.

Guruji: haan beta..tumne sahi socha hain…..lekin tum (aur ghar waale) jis samay se abhi guzar rahe ho..raasta apne aap nikal aayega...

Raju: phir bhi..

Guruji: unko man ki shaanti tab hogi jab unke zindagi mein accha badlaav aayega..doosre gaanv jaa kar...wahan bas kar din to guzar jaayenge..lekin unhe hamesha chinta bhi sataate rahegi...lekin badlaav kuch nahi hoga..
Guruji: Unke zindagi mein badlaav tab hoga jab woh maa banegi..chehre pe raunak aayegi..main jaanta hoon…thoda mushkil ho sakta hain..lekin tumhe bhi aabhas hoga jab tum kushiyaan unke chehre par dekhoge…ki tumne unhe khushiyon se aabaad kar diya hain.

Guruji: aur doosri baat…yeh bhi yaad rakho ki jab bhi tumko pareshaani hogi yaa phir tum koi musibat se guzar rahe honge..to tumhaare ghar waale hi tumhe sahara denge. Duniya mein aise bahut hi kam khush naseeb hote hai jinko “samaaj” sahayta karta hain unke bure din mein.

Guruji: jab ghar mein khushiyon aur shanti kaa mahol rahega to tumhe bhi man ki shaanti milegi aur tum acche se soch samajh kar apna aage ke kadam le sakte ho.

Raju: “aage ke kadam” se kya matlab hain?

Guruji: maine kaha tha naa…ki tumhe apne ghar waalon ki raksha karna hain…isi liye tumhe woh kadam bhi soch samajh kar lena hain.

Raju: main samjha nahi..thoda khul ke vistaar se bata sakoge kya guruji?

Guruji: vistaar se to nahi keh sakta..but itna zaroor kahoonga ki tumhe apne parivaar ko Thakur ke changul se bachaana hain…tumhe us se khatra ho sakta hain..wahi tumhaare kushiyon mein baadha daalne waala hain aur ghar ke logon ko nuksaan pahunha sakta hain.

Raju: ji Guruji…main poori koshish karoonga ki apne pariwaar walon ki har samay raksha karoon.

Guruji: aur koi samasya ho to mujhe bataana…tumhaari madad karne ki koshish karoonga. Mujhe abhi bahar jaana hain koi kaam se.

Raju: ji Guruji..aagya dijiye..aur unke pair choo kar aashirwaad leta hain

Guruji: sada sukhi raho..aur hamesha logon ki bhalai karo.

Raju: ji Guruji

Aur yeh keh kar Raju wahan se nikal jaata hain..

Raju: sochta hua..main is gaanv se to door aur bahar jaa nahi sakta...ghar waale bhi raazi nahi hone...hamari is gaanv mein bahut yaadein basi hui hain...

Wahan se nikal kar use (Raju) apne samasyaaon kaa samadhaan to mil gaya..lekin samasya jitna kathin samadhaan bhi utna hi kathin tha…

Uska sar chakra jaata hain…apne aap ko sambhaalte hue woh apne ghar ki or nikal jaata hain.

Author’s opinion: As per my experience, when (married) couple become parents especially for the first time, they consider it to be “one of their” happiest moments and days in life and truly blessed to become parents (in normal circumstances). I have used that as a reference point for my story.


However, would like to know your opinions and thoughts on this. Even critical comments are fine. Thanks.
Superb update. Now Raju has to take care of all the females of the house. Good. storyline.
 
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