Incest Raju – Sab kaa Rakhwala aur Khushiyaan dene waala (completed)

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Update 8:
Agli Subah:

Agli subah sab apne kaarya mein busy the…lekin Raju ki “nazar” mein koi farak nahi tha..

Thodi der mein Aaru naha kar bahar aati hain…usko dekh kar raju ke dil ki dhadkanen ruk jaati hain…woh bahut hi sexy nazar aati hai..thoda bheega badan, khule baal..tight blouse..uska thoda matak kar chalna…lekin raju ko yeh dekh kar thoda dukh bhi hota hai ki woh safed saadi pehni hui hai (vidhwa jo thi)..use lagta hain…abhi to woh jawaan hai..acche acche rangon ki saadi pehani chahiye…lekin usko bhi dukh hota hai ki uska bhai ab is duniya mein nahi raha. Woh aur pakka nischay kar leta hai ki woh ghar ki halat ko sudhaarega aur sab ko khushiyon se bhar dega.

Aisa hi kuch drishya uske mausi kaa tha…woh bhi ghar mein saari, tight blouse…aur balkhaati kamar…Raju ke to hosh hi ud jaate hai..kyunki woh talakshuda thi…mast mast saadiyaan pehnti thi..

Ratna ki teekhi nazar raju par padti hain…use samajh mein nahi aata ki aisa kyon ho raha hai.

Woh apne kamre mein jaati hai aur andar se raju ko awaz de kar bulati hai.

Raju jab andar jaata hai to Ratna use poochti hai ki woh aisa kyun kar raha hain?

Raju thoda “bhola” bante hue poochta hai..

Kya hua maa? Aap kya pooch rahi ho? Mujhe pata nahi hai.

Ratna: jhoot mat bol. Main teri maa hoon…teri nazar sab jaanti hoon.

Raju chup rehta hain…kuch nahi kehta.

Ratna phir se poochti hain…to is baar raju ke chehre par ek kaatil muskaan aa jaati hai.

Ratna dekh kar hairan ho jaati hai aur poochti hai ki raju kyun has raha hain

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa (usne Guruji se milne ke baad soch liya tha ki ab sharam ki koi gunjaaish nahi hain…sharmaayega to woh “aage” nahi badh paayega).

Ratna: haan bata…aisa kya hua hai ki main dekh rahi hoon ki kal se teri nazar badal gayi hai.

Raju: kya karoon maa…bhagwaan ne tum sab ko bahut sundar aur sexy banaaya hai.

Ratna: ekdum hairaani ke saath..yeh kya keh raha hain? Pehle to tu aisa nahi tha..aur aisi baatein bhi nahi karta tha..

Raju: haan..lekin ab….itna bol kar ruk jaata hai.

Ratna pareshaan ho jaati hai aur phir se poochti hai raju se.

Raju: sach mein bataaon maa…mujhe thodi sharam aa rahi hai. (thoda natak bhi karta hain).

Ratna yeh baat sun kar aascharya ho jaati hai aur kehti hai bata…

Raju: dheere se uske kaan ke paas aa kar…maa..maine kal raat ko….(itna bol kar ruk jaata hain)

Ratna jab ye baat sunti hai to uska mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai. Pasine chhootne lagta hai uske chehre se..

Ratna: bol naa..raat ko…

Raju: kal raat ko paani peene jaa raha tha..to tumhaare kamre se kuch aawaazein aayi…

Ratna yeh baat sun kar uski dil ki dhadkan ruk jaati hain…kya kehna hai use samajh mein nahi aata…

Woh wahan se bahar aangan mein bhaag jaati hai aur raju kaatil muskaan ke saath woh bhi bahar aa jaata hai.

Woh apne khet chala jaata hai aur kaam mein busy ho jaata hai. Ghar mein Ratna ekdum khoi khoi si rehti hai.

Yeh baat dono Aaru aur Sudha bhi dekhti hai aur Ratna se poochti hai..lekin Ratna baat ko taal deti hai.

Udhar khet mein raju jab kaam kar raha hota hai to uska ek dost uske paas aata hai aur mithai deta hai.

Raju: kya hua? Mithai kis liye?

Dost: main mama ban gaya hoon…didi ko kal ladka hua hai..

Raju: badhiya..badhai ho..

Dost: theek hai..chal yaar ghar..tu bhi bacche ko dekh le aur didi se mil le.

Raju: nahi yaar chhod..phir kabhi aata hoon.

Uska Dost zid karta hai aur use apne ghar le jaata hai.

Woh uske dost ke didi se milta hai aur bacche ko bhi dekhta hai..

Aadha ghante ke baad jab woh jaane ko hota hai to use kuch “strike” hota hai..aur uske dimag ki bijli jal uththi hai..

Woh palat kar dekhta hai ki dost ki didi “bahut khush” dikh rahi hai..chehre pe laali aur apne bête ko bade pyaar se dekh aur dulaar rahi hai.

Use dektha hai to Raju ke hosh ud jaate hain…

Use sach mein nazar aata hai ki uski didi kitni khush hain…aur use guruji ki baat yaad aati hain…(unko maa banaao…khushiyaan apne aap aa jaayegi…update 6).

Raju ko uske dost ki didi mein baari baari se ratna, aaru, sudha aur sandhya kaa chehra nazar aata hain…

tab woh aur bhi pakka thaan leta hai ki ghar mein sab ko khushiyaan dena hain lekin kab aur kaise yeh abhi use pata nahi tha.

Thakur ke Ghar:

Agli subah Thakur apne kaam se shehar gaya tha..

Kaamya apne wafadaar naukar ko bula kar kehti hai ko woh raju ko usse milne ghar laaye..lekin dhyaan rahe ki koi naa dekhe ki Raju usse milne aaya hai.

Naukar: Ji Malkin..

Naukar yeh keh kar gaanv ki or nikal jaata hai raju ko dhoondhne…

Raju ko Naukar uske khet mein dekh leta hai aur uske paas aa kar kehta hai ki malkin use bula rahi hai.

Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai ki achanak malkin ko raju se kya kaam hai aur use kyun bula rahi hai.

Phir bhi raju naukar ke saath Kaamya se milne chala jaata hai. Raaste mein naukar kehta hai ki woh dhyaan rakhe ki koi use makaan mein jaate naa dekhe.

Raju bina kisi ko dikhe makaan chale jaata hai aur kaamya ke kamre mein jaata hai use milne.

Raju: Namaste malkin. Aapne bulaaya mujhe..Kya kaam hain?

Kaamya: Namaste Ramu..haan maine hi tumhe bulaaya tha..kisi ne dekha to nahi tumhe yahan aate hue

Raju: ji nahi, kisi ne nahi dekha.

Kaamya: zyaada waqt nahi hai..main seedhi baat par aati hoon.

Raju:Ji kahiye..

Kaamya: Thakur bahut zaalim aur kroor aadmi hai. Mera yahan jeena haram kar diya hai..mujhe unse unke changul se bacha lo. Mera yahan hamesha dum ghuta hain..mujhe aisa lagta hain ki main ek pinjre mein band hoon. Isiliye main tumse madad maanga rahi hoon ki tum mujhe yahan se bacha lo..

Raju: Thakur aisa kyun karte hai..mujhe nahi pata..lekin main kaise aapki madad kar sakta hoon?

Kaamya: Us din jab tum mere gaadi ko theek kiye the..us din jab main ghar aayi to Thukur ne mujhe bahut maara (aur apna zakham bhi dikhati hai Raju ko)

Raju: main kaise aapko bacha sakta hoon? Aap to ghar ki malkin ho.

Kaamya: Malkin to sirf naam ki hoon..yahan mera koi nahi sunta aur sab Thakur se darte hai.

Raju: Ji..lekin phir bhi mujhe pata nahi ki aap mere se kyun madad maang rahi ho. (Raju ko Guruji ki baat yaad aati hai ki Thakur se uske parivaar waalon ko khatra hain). Isiliye woh bahut saavdhaani se baat kar raha tha.

Kaamya: haan, mujhe pata hain…maine pata kiya hai..tum bahut acche ladke ho aur logon ki madad bhi karte ho. Us din, jab meri gaadi kharab ho gayi thi..tumhaare alaawa aur koi madad karne nahi aata (agar pata bhi chalta to). Tum ne aakar meri madad ki jiski main bahut aabhaari hoon.

Raju: phir bhi convince nahi ho paata aur theek hai keh kar baat ko taal deta hai.

Raju kehta hai use kaam hai aur woh malkin ko bol kar wahan se nikal jaata hai. Kaamya bhi kehti hai ki jaldi se nikal lo…Thakur ke aane kaa waqt aa gaya hai.

Jaate waqt Kaamya kehti hai ki agar tum mujhse milne aana chahate ho to peeche waale raaste se aana aur is darwaaje se (ekdarwaaje ki taraf point kar ke) andar aana…tumhe koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

Raju ghar se nikalte waqt….pata nahin kyun..woh Thakur ke room mein jaata hai aur uska muvaayna karta hain…kuch khaas to dikhta nahi but kuch maile kapde use wahan pade hue dikhte hai jise woh andekha kar deta hai aur chupke se nikal jaata hai.

Raaste mein phir se woh soch mein pad jaata hai ki malkin usi se kyun madad maang rahi hai.

Khair, woh sab baate bhool kar woh ghar aa jaata hai aur Sandhya aur Sudha ko lalchayi nazar se dekhta hai jo saadi mein bahut sexy lag rahi thi.

Sudha: munna, aisa kya dekh raha hain?

Raju: mausi, dekh raha hoon ki aap kitni sexy ho…aur kaatil muskaan deta hai.

Sudha kaa mooh khula ka khula reh jaata hai raju ki baat sun kar. Usne kabhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sudha thoda sharma jaati hai aur kehti hai aisi behki behki baatein kyun kar raha hain?

Raju: main kya behki baat kar raha hoon…jo hai so keh raha hoon..aur udhar dekho…kaise maaji (Aaru ki saas Sandhya) bhi matkaate hue chal rahi hai..

Sudha: haai re daiyya…tu bahut bigad gaya hai munna….teri maa ko bataana padega..

Raju: to bataao naa..main bhi to dekhoon ki aap maa ko kya bataaogi…ki tum bahut sexy ho?

Sudha sharma kar wahan se bhaag jaati hai aur Raju muskuraa kar reh jaata hai.

Raat ko Ratna ko raju ki baatein yaad aati hai aur chup chaap so jaati hai bina koi “harkat” kiye.

Lekin baaki ke kamre mein kal waali (Ratna ke kamre) kaa haal tha..

Teeno apni choot aur choochi ko masalti hui kaam agni mein jal rahi hoti hai.

Sudha ko raju ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh aaine ke saamne khade ho kar apne aap ko nihar rahi hoti hain…woh dekhti hai ki woh kitni bala ki khoobsurat hai..

Nasheeli aankhen..blouse mein mast chupi hui chuchiyaan…jo bahar aane ko tadapti hai..

Palat kar dekhti hai to thoda utha hua pichwada…uff..qayamat lag rahi thi..

Yehi sab soch kar woh bhi jalti hui bistar par jaake so jaati hai.

Agli subah…(another twist)…(Spoiler Alert)

Wonderful update, story is moving at a fast pace, Najar of Raju has changed so is his attitude and his mother has realized his changed attitude. another good part is the showing both houses, and involving kamaya too.

 

[komaalrani]

Update 9:

Agli subah…

Agli subha, sab log apne kaam mein busy ho jaate hai…raju bhi apne kaam se khet chala jaata hai…Ratna bhi apna kaam kar ke ghar saaf kar ke nahane ke liye sochti hai.

Ghar kaa kaam poora ho gaya tha..sirf raju kaa kamra hi reh gaya tha..sochti hai woh kamra bhi saaf kar ke naha kar aati hoon.

Ratna raju ke kamre mein jaati hair aur saaf safai mein jut jaati hai.

Jab woh raju kaa bistar theek kar rahi hoti hai to ek chhiti neeche gir jaati hai…(Raju dadaji kaa chhiti padh kar destroy karna bhool jaata hai aur takiye ke neeche rakh deta hai).

Out of curiosity, Ratna woh chhiti uthaati hai aur use khol kar padhne lagti hai…jaise hi woh chhiti padti hai, uske chehre ke rang ud jaate hai. Use samajh mein nahi aata ki jo woh chhiti mein padh rahi hai sahi yaa galat hai.

Woh chupchaap chhiti apne paas rakh leti hai aur baaki kaa kaam karke naha kar ke apne baaki kaamon mein vyast ho jaati hai.

Unknown to Raju, woh apne kaam mein aur doston se gappe maarne mein laga rehta hai..aur sham ko ghar wapas aa jaata hai.

Raat ko dinner ke baad jab sab sone chale jaate hai to

Ratna: raju ek baar mere kamre mein aana to zara

Raju: ji aaya..

Kamre mein aane ke baad Ratna woh chhiti nikalti hai aur Raju ki aankhon mein dekhte hue kehti hai…kya hai yeh?

Raju ki haalat bigad jaati hai..usko bhi pasina aane lagta hai..but woh kuch nahin kehta.

Jab Ratna zor deti hai to Raju kehta hai..haan yeh chhiti sahi hai..dadaji jaane se pehle mujhe bata kar gaye the aur maine hi use apne kamre mein rakha tha.

Ratna: to kya to guruji se milne gaya tha? Us din jab maine poocha to tune baat taal diya tha.

Raju: haan, gaya tha..unse milne.

Ratna: to kya kaha guruji ne?

Raju: main bata nahi sakta..bahut mushkil hai.

Ratna gussa karti hai aur bahut try karti hai lekin raju batata nahi hai. Phir dono so jaate hai.

Ratna ko chinta ho jaati hai ki Raju Guruji se kyun milne gaya..aur Guruji ne Raju se kya kaha..

Agli subah bhi Ratna bahut try karti hai..lekin Raju batata nahi hai…Ratna bhi gum sum se rehti hai jo Aaru aur Sudha bhi notice karti hai.

Jab woh dono poochti hai to baat ko taal deti hai…woh raju se baat bhi nahi karti…raju bhi pareshaan ho jaata hai aur use bhi chinta lagne lagti hai ki Ratna usse baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai.

Aise hi do din guzar jaate hai lekin koi kuch baat nahi karta.

Teesre din:

Raju..theek hai maa..ek kaam karo..main khet ke nikal raha hoon..tu bhi wahan aa jaa…

Ratna: kyun…

Raju: tum aao to sahi..phir batata hoon.

Ratna bhi apna kaam karke raju se milne khet jaati hai. Ratna ko dekh kar raju apne aadmiyon se kehta hai ki woh kuch ghante ke baad aayega..aur woh sab apna kaam karte rahe aur Raju Ratna ko lekar nikal jaata hai.

Ratna ko samajh mein nahi aata ki Raju kya kar raha hai. Ratna raju se poochti hai ki use woh kahan lekar jaa raha hai.

Raju kuch nahi batata aur use lekar nikal padta hai.

Ratna: kahan jaa rahe hai?

Raju: chalo..sahi jagah le jaa raha hoon…

Ratna raaste bhar chinta karte rehti hai lekin use pata nahi chalta ki Raju kahan le jaa raha hai use..

2-3 ghante ke safar ke baad

Raju aur Ratna guruji ke paas jaate hai. Ratna ko samajh mein nahi aata aur kehti hai hum kahan aa gaye hai? (Remember…sirf dadaji hi milne guruji se yahan milne aaye the…naa Hariya, naa Ratna, naa Ravi…)

Raju kehta hai…5 min…sab pata chal jaayega..

5 min baad jab guruji aate hai to dono unko pranaam karti hai. Ratna jab poochti hai to Raju kehta hai..yehi guruji hai jinse main milne aaya tha. (iske pehle Ratna kabhi bhi Guruji se mili nahi thi)

Raju ki baat sun kar Ratna aascharya chakit ho jaati hai..lekin phir bhi guruji ko pranaam karti hai.

Guruji: unko bitha tha hai aur poochta hai ki unka yahan (Guruji ke paas) kaise aana hua..

Raju: Guruji, 3 din pehle maa ko pata chal gaya tha ki main aapse milne aaya hoon..aur jaanana chahti hai ki meri aapse kya baat hui hai…mujh mein bataane ki himmat nahi hui to main hi use yahan aapke paas lekar aaya.

Ratna: Ji Guruji..raju ki baat sahi hai…main jaan naa chahati thi ki aapne unko kya kaha hai aur kya samadhaan diya hai hamaare samasyaaon kaa..

Guruji phir sab baatein Ratna ko vistaar se batate hai (Jo Guruji ne raju ko bataaya tha)…Ratna unki baatein sun kar laal peeli ho jaati hai aur use kuch samajh nahi aata.

Ratna: Guruji, yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Samaaj waale kya kahenge? Humein samaaj mein rehna hai aur logon se milna bhi hota hai.

Guruji: main jaanta hoon..doosra raasta yeh hai ki tum apni zameen jayadad bech kar kahin aur chale jaao..aur khush raho. Lekin kya pata…doosri jagah jaa kar bhi tum log khush reh paaoge?

Ratna: yeh naa mumkin hai..yeh zameen hamaare purkhon ki hai..aur bahut kadi mehnat ki baad humne use sambhaal kar rakha hai aur wahi hamaare aam dani kaa saadhan hai.

Guruji: sahi kaha beti…Raju ko apne pariwaar ke saath zameen ki bhi raksha karni hogi woh Thakur ki gandi nazar se.

Guruji: ek aur baat yaad rakho beti…tum aur tumhaare ghar waale hi raju ki dekhbaal karogi jab yeh sankat mein aayega …Ratna ko kuch samajh nahi aata hai to guruji se pooch hi leti hai..

Guruji: main itna hi kahoonga aur aage kuch nahi. Mera aashirwaad tum sab logon ke saath hai..khush raho aur khushiyaan paao.

Ratna aur Raju Guruji ko pranaam karke unka aashirwaad lekar ghar ke liye nikalne ko hote hai.

Guruji: Raju beta, tum bahar jaao…aur Ratna ko rukne ko kehta hai.

Thodi der baad Ratna bhi bahar jaati hai…aur Raju aur Ratna ghar ki or nikal jaate hai.

Raaste mein….maa ab to samajh gayi naa…maine tumhe ghar mein kyun nahi bataaya…haan..aur sach bataana…agar yeh baat main tumhe ghar mein bataata to kya tum vishwaas karti?

Ratna raju ki taraf dekh kar…bilkul nahi…lekin ab guruji ki baatein sun kar vishwas karna mushkil hai lekin unki baat ko thukra bhi nahi sakti. Hum log bhi unhe maante the..Ab hum yeh ghar, gaanv, zameen to chhod kar nahi jaa sakte naa…jo bhi karna hai, humein yahin reh karna hai… aur jo bhi museebat aayegi use mil kar saamna karna padega.

Jab tu aur Ravi paida hue the (yeh baat keh kar Ratna ki aankhon mein aasoon aa jaate hai kyunki ab Ravi nahi raha)…raju samajh jaata hai aur use apne gale se laga leta hai.

Ratna: jab tum dono paida hue the..to main aur tumhaare baapu bahut khush the…laga hamein duniya ki saari khushiyaan mil gayi hai.

Raju: haan…main samajh sakta hoon.

Ratna: guruji ki baat bhi sahi hai…dekh naa…Aaru ki abhi umar ki kya hai? Use to abhi bahut jeena hai..khushiyaan paana hai..lekin itni kam umar mein hi vidhwa ho gayi hai.

Sudha kaa bhi yehi haal hai…woh bhi jawaan hai..lekin uske jeevan mein bhi bahut kathinaayen hai…beta..tu hi kuch kar sakta hai unke jeevan mein khushiyaan laane ke liye.

Raju: Ji dekhta hoon maa…kya kar sakta hoon…

Aisi hi baatein karte hue Ratna aur Raju apne ghar jaane lagte hai.

Raaste mein Thakur apni gaadi mein kahin jaa raha hota hai aur woh unko cross karta hai…dono (teeno) ki nazar milti hai…raju aur Ratna undekha kar ke nikal jaate hai.

Thakur (sochta hai)…saali yeh hariya ke ghar mein sab ek se badh kar ek maal hai…unko kisi bhi haal mein chodna hi hoga…kuch karna padega…aur apne lund ko masal deta hai..

Aise hi gande khayalon se woh aage nikal jaata hai aur Raju aur Ratna ghar aa jaate hai.

Raaste mein jab raju Thakur ko dekhta hai to use thoda uncomfortable feel hota hai.

Ghar aa kar sab apne kaam mein lag jaate hai..

Raat ko jab so rahe hote hai to Raju ko bahut uncomfortable feel hota hai…aur karwatein lete rehta hai…use bahut uljhan hoti hai…achanak use kuch yaad hai aur “nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” cheek kar uth jaata hai…uske chehre par pasina aa jaata hai aur badan kaampne lag jaata hai.

Uski cheek sun kar charo mahilaayen daud kar raju ke paas aati hai aur uski haalat dekh kar pareshaan ho jaate hai.

Ratna daud kar raju ko apne baahon mein leti hai (pyaar aur mamta se…koi vasna nahi)..aur uske sar par ungliyaan chalati hai..

Aaru se kehti hai ki woh paani laaye…Sudha aur Sandhya bhi pareshaan ho jaate hai.

Ratna jab poochti hai to Raju kehta hai ki usne koi bura sapna dekha..aur woh uth gaya tha. Ratna use pyaar se samjhaati hai…aur thodi der baad sab normal ho jaate hai.

A small back story:

Raju ko sote samay use Thakur ke ghar mein “woh kapda” yaad aata hai jab woh uske kamre mein gaya tha jab woh Kaamya se mil kar bahar nikal raha tha aur usko dekhta hai…actually, woh “kapda” Ravi ke shirt ke pocket kaa hissa tha..jisme “R” type kaa nishaan tha (R embroidery on shirt pocket).

Author’s note: Not sure how many agree or have observed..but I have seen that generally, twins like to wear the same type of clothes and make (& other accessories as well..like shoes, school bags, tiffin box, etc).. This is my personal real life experience. Parents with twins can understand this.

Back to story:

Usi type kaa “R” word kaa shirt uske paas bhi tha…jab use yeh yaad aata hai to woh jhatke se uth jaata hai…uska chehra aur badan poora pasine se bhar jaata hai.

End of back story.

Situation jab shaant ho jaata hai to Ratna kehti hai ki woh aaj raat Raju ke paas hi soyegi (or vice versa). Baaki teeno bhi sehmati dete hai aur chale jaate hai..aur rej jaate hai Raju aur Ratna…

Raju ko phir bhi neend nahi aati hai…Ratna yeh jaanti hai aur raju se kehti hai ki so jaa beta..sab theek ho jaayega…bhagwaan pe bharosa karo.

Lekin phir bhi raju ko neend nahi aati hai to Ratha use apne baahon mein le leti hai…dheere dheere dono ki aankh milti hai..aur Ratna apne honth Raju ke honth par rakh kar ek gehra chumban deti hai..Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai but jaldi hi samajh jaata hai aur woh bhi Ratna ke kiss kaa jawaab deta hai. Woh dheere se haath badha kar uski chuchi par rakhne ki koshish karta hai but Ratna uska haath wahan se hata deti hai aur dheere se kehti hai…abhi nahi…shaant ho jaa…sab samay sahi hoga to sab dikhaaungi tujhe..


Ravi bhi baat maan jaata hai aur phir dono ki aankh lag jaati hai…

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[komaalrani]

Update 9:

Agli subah…

Agli subha, sab log apne kaam mein busy ho jaate hai…raju bhi apne kaam se khet chala jaata hai…Ratna bhi apna kaam kar ke ghar saaf kar ke nahane ke liye sochti hai.

Ghar kaa kaam poora ho gaya tha..sirf raju kaa kamra hi reh gaya tha..sochti hai woh kamra bhi saaf kar ke naha kar aati hoon.

Ratna raju ke kamre mein jaati hair aur saaf safai mein jut jaati hai.

Jab woh raju kaa bistar theek kar rahi hoti hai to ek chhiti neeche gir jaati hai…(Raju dadaji kaa chhiti padh kar destroy karna bhool jaata hai aur takiye ke neeche rakh deta hai).

Out of curiosity, Ratna woh chhiti uthaati hai aur use khol kar padhne lagti hai…jaise hi woh chhiti padti hai, uske chehre ke rang ud jaate hai. Use samajh mein nahi aata ki jo woh chhiti mein padh rahi hai sahi yaa galat hai.

Woh chupchaap chhiti apne paas rakh leti hai aur baaki kaa kaam karke naha kar ke apne baaki kaamon mein vyast ho jaati hai.

Unknown to Raju, woh apne kaam mein aur doston se gappe maarne mein laga rehta hai..aur sham ko ghar wapas aa jaata hai.

Raat ko dinner ke baad jab sab sone chale jaate hai to

Ratna: raju ek baar mere kamre mein aana to zara

Raju: ji aaya..

Kamre mein aane ke baad Ratna woh chhiti nikalti hai aur Raju ki aankhon mein dekhte hue kehti hai…kya hai yeh?

Raju ki haalat bigad jaati hai..usko bhi pasina aane lagta hai..but woh kuch nahin kehta.

Jab Ratna zor deti hai to Raju kehta hai..haan yeh chhiti sahi hai..dadaji jaane se pehle mujhe bata kar gaye the aur maine hi use apne kamre mein rakha tha.

Ratna: to kya to guruji se milne gaya tha? Us din jab maine poocha to tune baat taal diya tha.

Raju: haan, gaya tha..unse milne.

Ratna: to kya kaha guruji ne?

Raju: main bata nahi sakta..bahut mushkil hai.

Ratna gussa karti hai aur bahut try karti hai lekin raju batata nahi hai. Phir dono so jaate hai.

Ratna ko chinta ho jaati hai ki Raju Guruji se kyun milne gaya..aur Guruji ne Raju se kya kaha..

Agli subah bhi Ratna bahut try karti hai..lekin Raju batata nahi hai…Ratna bhi gum sum se rehti hai jo Aaru aur Sudha bhi notice karti hai.

Jab woh dono poochti hai to baat ko taal deti hai…woh raju se baat bhi nahi karti…raju bhi pareshaan ho jaata hai aur use bhi chinta lagne lagti hai ki Ratna usse baat kyun nahi kar rahi hai.

Aise hi do din guzar jaate hai lekin koi kuch baat nahi karta.

Teesre din:

Raju..theek hai maa..ek kaam karo..main khet ke nikal raha hoon..tu bhi wahan aa jaa…

Ratna: kyun…

Raju: tum aao to sahi..phir batata hoon.

Ratna bhi apna kaam karke raju se milne khet jaati hai. Ratna ko dekh kar raju apne aadmiyon se kehta hai ki woh kuch ghante ke baad aayega..aur woh sab apna kaam karte rahe aur Raju Ratna ko lekar nikal jaata hai.

Ratna ko samajh mein nahi aata ki Raju kya kar raha hai. Ratna raju se poochti hai ki use woh kahan lekar jaa raha hai.

Raju kuch nahi batata aur use lekar nikal padta hai.

Ratna: kahan jaa rahe hai?

Raju: chalo..sahi jagah le jaa raha hoon…

Ratna raaste bhar chinta karte rehti hai lekin use pata nahi chalta ki Raju kahan le jaa raha hai use..

2-3 ghante ke safar ke baad

Raju aur Ratna guruji ke paas jaate hai. Ratna ko samajh mein nahi aata aur kehti hai hum kahan aa gaye hai? (Remember…sirf dadaji hi milne guruji se yahan milne aaye the…naa Hariya, naa Ratna, naa Ravi…)

Raju kehta hai…5 min…sab pata chal jaayega..

5 min baad jab guruji aate hai to dono unko pranaam karti hai. Ratna jab poochti hai to Raju kehta hai..yehi guruji hai jinse main milne aaya tha. (iske pehle Ratna kabhi bhi Guruji se mili nahi thi)

Raju ki baat sun kar Ratna aascharya chakit ho jaati hai..lekin phir bhi guruji ko pranaam karti hai.

Guruji: unko bitha tha hai aur poochta hai ki unka yahan (Guruji ke paas) kaise aana hua..

Raju: Guruji, 3 din pehle maa ko pata chal gaya tha ki main aapse milne aaya hoon..aur jaanana chahti hai ki meri aapse kya baat hui hai…mujh mein bataane ki himmat nahi hui to main hi use yahan aapke paas lekar aaya.

Ratna: Ji Guruji..raju ki baat sahi hai…main jaan naa chahati thi ki aapne unko kya kaha hai aur kya samadhaan diya hai hamaare samasyaaon kaa..

Guruji phir sab baatein Ratna ko vistaar se batate hai (Jo Guruji ne raju ko bataaya tha)…Ratna unki baatein sun kar laal peeli ho jaati hai aur use kuch samajh nahi aata.

Ratna: Guruji, yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Samaaj waale kya kahenge? Humein samaaj mein rehna hai aur logon se milna bhi hota hai.

Guruji: main jaanta hoon..doosra raasta yeh hai ki tum apni zameen jayadad bech kar kahin aur chale jaao..aur khush raho. Lekin kya pata…doosri jagah jaa kar bhi tum log khush reh paaoge?

Ratna: yeh naa mumkin hai..yeh zameen hamaare purkhon ki hai..aur bahut kadi mehnat ki baad humne use sambhaal kar rakha hai aur wahi hamaare aam dani kaa saadhan hai.

Guruji: sahi kaha beti…Raju ko apne pariwaar ke saath zameen ki bhi raksha karni hogi woh Thakur ki gandi nazar se.

Guruji: ek aur baat yaad rakho beti…tum aur tumhaare ghar waale hi raju ki dekhbaal karogi jab yeh sankat mein aayega …Ratna ko kuch samajh nahi aata hai to guruji se pooch hi leti hai..

Guruji: main itna hi kahoonga aur aage kuch nahi. Mera aashirwaad tum sab logon ke saath hai..khush raho aur khushiyaan paao.

Ratna aur Raju Guruji ko pranaam karke unka aashirwaad lekar ghar ke liye nikalne ko hote hai.

Guruji: Raju beta, tum bahar jaao…aur Ratna ko rukne ko kehta hai.

Thodi der baad Ratna bhi bahar jaati hai…aur Raju aur Ratna ghar ki or nikal jaate hai.

Raaste mein….maa ab to samajh gayi naa…maine tumhe ghar mein kyun nahi bataaya…haan..aur sach bataana…agar yeh baat main tumhe ghar mein bataata to kya tum vishwaas karti?

Ratna raju ki taraf dekh kar…bilkul nahi…lekin ab guruji ki baatein sun kar vishwas karna mushkil hai lekin unki baat ko thukra bhi nahi sakti. Hum log bhi unhe maante the..Ab hum yeh ghar, gaanv, zameen to chhod kar nahi jaa sakte naa…jo bhi karna hai, humein yahin reh karna hai… aur jo bhi museebat aayegi use mil kar saamna karna padega.

Jab tu aur Ravi paida hue the (yeh baat keh kar Ratna ki aankhon mein aasoon aa jaate hai kyunki ab Ravi nahi raha)…raju samajh jaata hai aur use apne gale se laga leta hai.

Ratna: jab tum dono paida hue the..to main aur tumhaare baapu bahut khush the…laga hamein duniya ki saari khushiyaan mil gayi hai.

Raju: haan…main samajh sakta hoon.

Ratna: guruji ki baat bhi sahi hai…dekh naa…Aaru ki abhi umar ki kya hai? Use to abhi bahut jeena hai..khushiyaan paana hai..lekin itni kam umar mein hi vidhwa ho gayi hai.

Sudha kaa bhi yehi haal hai…woh bhi jawaan hai..lekin uske jeevan mein bhi bahut kathinaayen hai…beta..tu hi kuch kar sakta hai unke jeevan mein khushiyaan laane ke liye.

Raju: Ji dekhta hoon maa…kya kar sakta hoon…

Aisi hi baatein karte hue Ratna aur Raju apne ghar jaane lagte hai.

Raaste mein Thakur apni gaadi mein kahin jaa raha hota hai aur woh unko cross karta hai…dono (teeno) ki nazar milti hai…raju aur Ratna undekha kar ke nikal jaate hai.

Thakur (sochta hai)…saali yeh hariya ke ghar mein sab ek se badh kar ek maal hai…unko kisi bhi haal mein chodna hi hoga…kuch karna padega…aur apne lund ko masal deta hai..

Aise hi gande khayalon se woh aage nikal jaata hai aur Raju aur Ratna ghar aa jaate hai.

Raaste mein jab raju Thakur ko dekhta hai to use thoda uncomfortable feel hota hai.

Ghar aa kar sab apne kaam mein lag jaate hai..

Raat ko jab so rahe hote hai to Raju ko bahut uncomfortable feel hota hai…aur karwatein lete rehta hai…use bahut uljhan hoti hai…achanak use kuch yaad hai aur “nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” cheek kar uth jaata hai…uske chehre par pasina aa jaata hai aur badan kaampne lag jaata hai.

Uski cheek sun kar charo mahilaayen daud kar raju ke paas aati hai aur uski haalat dekh kar pareshaan ho jaate hai.

Ratna daud kar raju ko apne baahon mein leti hai (pyaar aur mamta se…koi vasna nahi)..aur uske sar par ungliyaan chalati hai..

Aaru se kehti hai ki woh paani laaye…Sudha aur Sandhya bhi pareshaan ho jaate hai.

Ratna jab poochti hai to Raju kehta hai ki usne koi bura sapna dekha..aur woh uth gaya tha. Ratna use pyaar se samjhaati hai…aur thodi der baad sab normal ho jaate hai.

A small back story:

Raju ko sote samay use Thakur ke ghar mein “woh kapda” yaad aata hai jab woh uske kamre mein gaya tha jab woh Kaamya se mil kar bahar nikal raha tha aur usko dekhta hai…actually, woh “kapda” Ravi ke shirt ke pocket kaa hissa tha..jisme “R” type kaa nishaan tha (R embroidery on shirt pocket).

Author’s note: Not sure how many agree or have observed..but I have seen that generally, twins like to wear the same type of clothes and make (& other accessories as well..like shoes, school bags, tiffin box, etc).. This is my personal real life experience. Parents with twins can understand this.

Back to story:

Usi type kaa “R” word kaa shirt uske paas bhi tha…jab use yeh yaad aata hai to woh jhatke se uth jaata hai…uska chehra aur badan poora pasine se bhar jaata hai.

End of back story.

Situation jab shaant ho jaata hai to Ratna kehti hai ki woh aaj raat Raju ke paas hi soyegi (or vice versa). Baaki teeno bhi sehmati dete hai aur chale jaate hai..aur rej jaate hai Raju aur Ratna…

Raju ko phir bhi neend nahi aati hai…Ratna yeh jaanti hai aur raju se kehti hai ki so jaa beta..sab theek ho jaayega…bhagwaan pe bharosa karo.

Lekin phir bhi raju ko neend nahi aati hai to Ratha use apne baahon mein le leti hai…dheere dheere dono ki aankh milti hai..aur Ratna apne honth Raju ke honth par rakh kar ek gehra chumban deti hai..Raju thoda surprise ho jaata hai but jaldi hi samajh jaata hai aur woh bhi Ratna ke kiss kaa jawaab deta hai. Woh dheere se haath badha kar uski chuchi par rakhne ki koshish karta hai but Ratna uska haath wahan se hata deti hai aur dheere se kehti hai…abhi nahi…shaant ho jaa…sab samay sahi hoga to sab dikhaaungi tujhe..


Ravi bhi baat maan jaata hai aur phir dono ki aankh lag jaati hai…

Proof of pudding lies in eating. If a story in a few updates is liked by more than 2 lakh viewers that is the biggest support and readers are enjoying it. Good, you have started using GIF. It is good that you have taken mother of Raju to Guruji so that her inhibition has gone and now she too will enjoy a relationship with his son for the sake of the family. Nice turn

 

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First of all, let me congratulate you on 2 lakh plus views,

Thank you so much Madam...its all because of good people like you. Yours (& other friends) support is what keeps me going!!

Many Thanks once again!!

komaalrani

 

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Proof of pudding lies in eating. If a story in a few updates is liked by more than 2 lakh viewers that is the biggest support and readers are enjoying it. Good, you have started using GIF. It is good that you have taken mother of Raju to Guruji so that her inhibition has gone and now she too will enjoy a relationship with his son for the sake of the family. Nice turn

Thank you for your kind review...Just to let you know...have taken your advice of plotting the story as it moves forward..Hopefully the story will also have some more turns (lekin abhi uske baare mein kuch socha nahi hain...but should happen...).
Raju taking his mother into confidence is the most essential part of the story...
Thanks once again.

komaalrani

 

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Wonderful update, story is moving at a fast pace, Najar of Raju has changed so is his attitude and his mother has realized his changed attitude. another good part is the showing both houses, and involving kamaya too.

Thank you for your kind review...yes, you are right...Story will move at both houses parallely...ultimately colliding (or atleast merging) at some point.

Thanks once again.

komaalrani

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice update

 

[Abhi123]

Bhai kab naya update de rahe ho..