Thriller Raghav

[chintu222]

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Police siren ki aisi tez awaaz aaj tak kabhi Hatti ki hawaaon mein nahin gunji thi, Raichur, Karnataka rajya mein ek chhota sa zilaa lekin na sirf Karnataka, pure Bharat desh ke liye yeh zilaa utna hi mahatvapurn hai jitna ki Mumbai ya Delhi, police Vans ki afra tafri ke beech 2 Ambulance bhi apne siren se wahan fele hue shor ko badhava de rahi thi

"toh ab kya karein" Constable ne wahan khade Inspector ko pucha jo Ambulance walon ko apna kaam karte hue dekh raha tha

"ab kya kar sakte hain" Inspector ne ek niraasha bhari awaaz mein kaha, woh shayad itna sharminda tha ke woh apne saath khade constable se bhi nazrein nahin mila paa raha tha

"Solanki" ek kadak awaaz inspector ko peeche se sunai di, usne turant hi apni aankhon mein faili hui niraasha ko chhupane ki koshish ki aur peeche palat ke commissioner ke paas chala gaya

"Well Done Solanki" commissioner ne Solanki se haath milate hue kaha aur apni aankhon ke saamne drashya ko dekhne laga

"this is unbelievable" Commissioner ne Solanki ko dekh kaha aur fir stretcher pe rakhi hui dead body ko dekha, saamne aag ki laptein badhti jaa rahi thi jise fire department puri tarah se kaabu mein laane ki koshish kar raha tha, Solanki ne koshish toh kaafi ki thi ki uski maayusi commissioner ke saamne bahar na aaye, lekin woh kar na saka, commissioner ne bhaanp liya uski aankhon mein uske bhaav ko dekh

"dekho Solanki" commissioner ne aagey chalte hue kaha aur Solanki bhi uske saath aagey nikal gaya

"main samajh sakta hun tumhari maayusi, lekin kuch cheesein hain jo hamare haath mein nahin hain, chaah ke bhi hum kuchh nahin kar sakte us baare mein, aur yeh sthiti bhi waisi hi hai, tumne bahut koshish ki ke"

"ke yeh aadmi zinda pakda jaaye" Solanki ne commissioner ko beech mein kaat ke kaha aur apni jeep ke paas aake ruk gaya

"Well, it is what it is, hamare haathon ke bahar hai, isse zyada mein kuchh nahin keh sakta, behtar hoga tum bhi is baare mein zyada nahin socho, main is case ki file officially close karwa deta hun, MHA ko report chahiye, main use sambhaal lunga, tum 1 hafte ki chhuti le lo, uske baad milte hain" Commissioner ne Solanki ko apna faisla sunaya aur wahan se nikal gaya

"Sir, Ambulance nikal rahi hai, yeh kuch documents hain jahan pe aapka signature chahiye" Constable ne aake Solanki ko ek file thamaayi

Solanki ne file pakdi aur jahan jahan uske signature chahiye the wahan wahan woh apni sign karne laga, file wapas karne se pehle Solanki ne fir se file ke pehle panne pe nazar daali

"teri kismat bahut acchi thi ke tujhe itni aasaan maut mili, agar mere haath zinda lagta toh teri zindagi narak ban jaati, na toh tu achhe se saans le paata aur naa hi" kehte kehte Solanki ruk gaya aur usne file constable ko thama di, jab tak wahan ki aag nahin thami, Solanki aur uske 4 constable wahin ruke hue the, aag tham jaane ke baad Solanki ne ek baar fir us jagah ka muayena liya, woh log jahan khade the woh koi chhoti jagah nahin thi, woh log ek sone ki khadaan ke paas the jahan pe 10 ghante pehle blast hua tha, us blast ki wajah se kitna nuksaan hua tha woh andaaza lagaane ke liye wahan ASI ki team maujood thi, lekin in sab se badh kar jo baat Solanki ko satta rahi thi woh thi aisi information ka haath na lagna jisse naa ki sirf India, lekin pura South East Asia khatre mein jaa sakta tha

"ASI ne apni report mein likha hai, gold mine mein blast ki wajah se jo nuksaan hua hai, agar Police time pe pahunchti toh woh nahin hota, ASI ke aanklan ke hisaab se, takreeban 1000 crore rupees ka, is blast ki wajah se nuksaan hua hai" ek hafte baad jab Solanki wapas Mumbai pahuncha, toh subah subah commissioner ne Solanki ko ek meeting mein bulaya, commissioner ke saath wahan Maharashtra CMO, Maharashtra ATS aur IB ke log bhi maujood the

"iske liye tum kya jawaab doge" Commissioner kuch keh paata usse pehle wapas ATS ke officer ne Solanki pe sawaal daaga

"IB ya ATS ki team ke pahunchne ka intezaar kyun nahin kiya tumne" fir se room mein kisi ne Solanki pe nishaana saadha

"agar main wahan kisi ka wait karta toh"

"Maatre" Commissioner ne Solanki ke bachaav mein aake ATS ke officer ko roka

"hamari taraf se jo findings hain, aur jo hamara conclusion hai, woh ek hafte ke andar main tumhare chief ko mail kar dunga, aur rahi baat Solanki ki, he is my best officer, hum yahan usko grill karne ke liye ikatthe nahin hue hain, behtar hoga hum jis kaam ke liye aaye hain wohi karein" Commissioner ne apni baat kahi aur wahan se Solanki ko wapas bahar jaane ka ishaara kiya

Solanki apni office jaake baith gaya, pura din na toh kisi se milna, na toh kisi se baat, bas apni kursi pe bethe bethe aagey aane wale khatre ke baare mein sochta raha, raat hone se pehle usne ek baar apna drawer khola aur usme padi file nikaal ke dekhne laga

"Raghav urf Raghu" naam padh ke Solanki fir apne khayalon mein chala gaya jahan sirf maayusi hi maayusi chhayi hui thi

Kaafi interesting update tha kimi ji..first update padh kar hee ye anuman ho gaya ki kahani suspense aur thrill se bhari hogi
Solannki ke ird gird hee ghumegi ye kahani aisa lagta hai...aur ye Raghav..sayad isi ki maut hui hai..anyways abhi toh suruat hai..dekhte hain kya hoga aage...
next one..!!

 

[StarDust]

chintu222 Suspense jaisa Harshit wali mein hai waisa nai hai, this is more of a crime story, life of a criminal types.

 

[chintu222]

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"Naam"

"Raghav"

"Pura naam"

"Raghav urf Raghu"

"Aakhri naam kya hai"

"Nahin pata"

"Baap"

"pata nai"

"yeh kaam kyun karte ho"

"achha lagta hai"

"crime karna achha lagta hai tujhe" Raghav ko interrogate kar rahe Solanki ne chilla ke kaha aur pehle se hi ghayal hue Raghav ko kas kar tamacha maara, Raghav pehle se hi lahu lohaan tha, 5*5 ke interrogation room mein Raghav ek lakdi ki kursi pe betha tha, uske haath peeche bandhe the, Solanki use apni belt se maar maar ke thak chuka tha, lekin Raghav tas se mas na hua

"Shinde, Kursi le jaa re, Rassi khol aur danda laa mera" Solanki ne apni shirt utaari aur Raghav ko khada kar, uske dono haath upar ki taraf karke moti si rassi se baandhe, Raghav mein jaan hi nahin bachi thi, uska chehra neeche ki aur jhuka hua tha, uske lambe baalon ki wajah se khoon se sana chehra dhaka hua tha, shareer pe koi kapda nahin, Raghav nange badan Solanki ki maar jhelta gaya, Belt se leke tel mein sanna hua danda, Solanki ne har paintra aazmaaya lekin Raghav ko kuchh farak nahin pada, Solanki 5 ghante baad khud toot gaya, zor zor se saans leke haanfne laga

"hahaha"

"hahahha"

"hahahahahhahaaaa" Raghav, Solanki ki haalat dekh zor zor se hansne laga, Interrogation room ke bahar betha havaldar bhi chaunk utha

"Insaan hai ya Shaitaan" usne khud se dheere se kaha

"5 ghante se tu mujhe maar raha hai, aur thak bhi tu hi gaya" Raghav ne Solanki ka mazaak banate hue kaha, Raghav ke honthon se khoon aise tapak raha tha jaise kisi nal se pani tapak raha tha, paseene aur khoon mein sana hua Raghav bas neeche ki or hi dekha jaa raha tha, Solanki ko kuchh bolna sujh hi nahin raha tha, kehta bhi toh kya

"tu mere"

Abhi Raghav firse kuchh bol hi raha tha ke interrogation room ka darwaza khol, bahar betha hua havaldar andar aaya aur Solanki ke kaan mein kuchh khusfusane laga

"meri rihaai ka order aaya hai Inspector" Raghav ne ek dum dheemi awaaz mein kaha aur pehli baar apna sar unchaa kar, Solanki ki aankhon mein aankhein daal kaha

"apni dhum hilaata hua jaa aur 5 minute mein mujhe rihaa kar, warna aisi jagah transfer karwaunga jahan jeene se zyada sukoon tujhe khudkhushi karne mein milega" Raghav ne Solanki ke chehre pe thookte hue kaha

"kya bola madarchod haraami gutter ki aulaad" Solanki ka khoon jaise ubalne laga, tehesh mein aake usne fir se apne belt se Raghav ko peetna chalu kiya, agle 15 min tak Raghav fir belt ki maar khata raha aur Solanki ki aankhon mein hi dekhta raha, khoon sa utar aaya tha Raghav ki aankhon mein

"Sir Sir" havaldar ne aakhir Solanki ko roka aur interrogation room ke bahar le gaya, Solanki lagatar 5 se zyada ghante use maar chuka tha, lekin usne ek bhi sawaal ka jawaab dhang se nahin diya

"yeh mere client ke papers hain, riha karo" Solanki jab apni kursi pe betha toh saamne bethe wakeel ne bina waqt ghanwaye papers uske aagey kar diye

"tum jaise logon ki wajah se hi samaaj mein aise criminals pal rahe hain, wakeel kam dalaal zyada lagte ho" Solanki ne ghin mein aake kaha aur wakeel ke diye hue papers ko table pe hi faad diya

"tumhara bhaashan sunne nahin aaya hun main, gair kanooni tareeke se tum mere client ko third degree torture de rahe ho, agar 2 minute mein mera client mere saamne nahin aata, toh abhi CMO se phone aayega aur kal subah tak tumhare transfer ke papers" Wakeel ne bina kisi bhaav ke Solanki se kaha, Solanki ke chehre ke bhaav dekh woh fir bola

"aise mat dekho inspector, main toh dalaal hun, tum kutte se kam nahin ho, abhi bhi 90 second hain tumhare paas, nai toh phone ki ghanti sunke tumhara pichhwada aisa fatega ke koi see bhi nahin paayega" Wakeel ke yeh shabd sun Solanki ek jhatke se apni kursi se utha, aur dusri taraf jaake Wakeel ke coat ka collar pakad liya

"kya bola haraamzyaade" Solanki ne abhi bas itna kaha hi tha ke station ke phone baj utha

"Phone uthao inspector, yeh tumhe tumhari aukaat dikha dega" Wakeel ne Solanki ka haath apne collar se hataya, Solanki jaanta tha ke Wakeel gidhad bhaki nahin de raha

"Raghav ko chhod do, aur aainda se agar kisi ko bhi bina papers ke third degree torture diya toh sabse pehli karyawahi tumpe hogi Mr Solanki" saamne CMO se phona tha, Solanki kuchh kehta usse pehle line cut gayi, havaldar Solanki se order liye bina hi andar gaya aur Raghav ko bahar le aaya

"zyada maara toh nahin tumhe" Wakeel ne Raghav ko dekh kaha

"Police ki aukaat is baat se pata chalti hai, ke maar maar ke yeh thak gaya hai, mujh mein abhi aur 10 ghante maar khane ki shamta hai" Raghav ne Solanki ko dekh kaha jiska chehra lala pad chuka tha, zyada kuch kahe bina Raghav aur uska wakeel bahar nikle aur apni gaadi mein beth ke wahan se chale gaye

Yeh thi Raghav aur Solanki ki pehli aur aakhri mulaqat, Solanki ne Raghav ki file wapas apne drawer mein rakhi aur apne ghar ke liye nikal gaya, pure raaste woh bas yehi soch raha tha ke aakhir Raghav ka plan tha kya, Raghav mar chuka hai lekin shayad uska plan abhi bhi zinda hai, Ragav kisi majboori se criminal nahin bana tha, use jurm karne mein mazaa aata tha, aisi soch wale insaan ko toh maar sakte ho, lekin uski soch, hamesha zinda rehti hai, woh apni soch ko sachai mein tabdeel karne mein peeche kabhi nahin hatta.

Bhadia update tha kimi ji..kaafi tagda screenplay hai
Sabse pehle toh solanki ka raghav ko yun maarna..dimag mein yhi aa raha tha ki aakhir kyun maar raha hai vo..??
Uske baad wakeel ne itni asani se use bacha liya..isse pata chalta hai ki Raghav jarur koi badi chej hai..ya tha..!!
Ek achi kahani vahi hoti hai jo reader ko har scene ko apne samne imagine karne par majboor kar de...aur aap aisa bakhoobi kar paa rahi hain
Raghav toh mar chuka..abb kya hoga..lets cc
next..!!

 

[harshit1890]

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New Year aate aate Patwardhan ke haath kuchh bhi nahin laga, checkposts ke saath saath uske har khabri ke saath woh touch mein tha, Dongri se leke Dombivili, Wadala se leke Worli, har jagah ki hulchul ki khabar leta raha, lekin kahin se kuchh haath nahi laga, woh itna bewakoof nahin tha ke ise apni jeet samajh leta, 31 December ki dopahar ko Patwardhan apni team ke saath fir Dongri pahuncha aur Raghav ki government approved wine shop ke paas khada hua, is baar Raghav pehle se hi wahan maujood tha aur apne aadmiyon se kuchh baatcheet mein laga hua tha, Raghav pleasanteries ke mood mein nahin tha, usne Patwardhan ko andekha karke apne aadmiyon se apni baat jaari rakhi

"hum is dukaan ke maalik se milna chahte hain" Shinde ne Raghav ke saamne khade hoke kaha

"main hi hun, bataiye"

"yeh raha search warrant, aur yeh liquor testing ke liye orders"

"humein khabar mili hai ke yahan nakli daaru ka dhandha hota hai"

"koi baat nahin, dukaan aapke saamne hai, jo chaahe kar lijiye" Raghav ne jawaab toh Shinde ko diya lekin uski nazrein Patwardhan pe thi, Shinde ne apne saath aaye do constables ko ishara kiya toh dukaan mein padi har ek brand ke bottle ko utha ke gaadi mein rakh diya, Shinde dukaan ke andar gaya aur apni nazar chaaro taraf ghumaane laga, dukaan kaafi badi thi, right se leke left tak takreeban 10 shelf rakhe hue the, Shinde ne fir apni team ke saath talashi shuru ki aur har shelf ko achhe se jaanchne laga, har daaru ki bottle ko utha utha ke check karne laga, upar se leke neeche, har shelf ki jaanch hui, cash counter ki jaanch hui jisme 10,000 rupaye ke alawa kuchh nahin mila, 10-15 minute Shinde ne itminaani se check kiya lekin uske haath kuchh nahin laga, bahar Patwardhan aur Raghav ek dusre ko ghoorne se unche nahin aa rahe the, Shinde ne ek nazar saamne ke shelf pe dhyan se maari toh use do shelf ke beech mein ek halki si daraar dikhi, upar se leke tak neeche usne dekha toh woh sendh nahin thi, yeh wohi daraar thi jahan se pichhli baar Raghav apne jua khaane mein gaya tha, Shinde ne apne do saathiyon ko bulaya aur unhe woh cheez dikhane laga, Shinde ne bahar khade Patwardhan ko woh bataya toh Patwardhan ne use bas ek shabd kaha

"break it" Shinde apne saathiyon ke saath wapas andar gaya aur zor laga ke woh cheez kholne lagey, Raghav ke saath betha uska aadmi khade khade paseene se bheegne laga, Raghav ki nazrein ab bhi Patwardhan pe thi jo abhi Raghav ko andekha kar us shelf ki aur dekh raha tha, Shinde aur do aadmiyon ne thoda sa aur zor lagaya dono sides se toh shelf beech se hat ke dono side ho gaye, saamne jo tha use dekh Shinde aur Patwardhan kaafi hairaan tha, saamne deewar bani hui thi jiske bharose shelf rakhe hue the, Shinde aur Patwardhan sharmsaar hoone lagey

"Sir i doubt yahan kuchh hai, we need to break this Sir"

"That is not included in your search warrant" is baar Raghav ne andar aake kaha, Patwardhan fir usko ghoorne laga

"tumhe kya lagta hai, English aur Kanoon ke baare mein sirf tum log jaante ho" Raghav ne cigarette jala ke kaha

"aur haan, yeh jo samples rakhe hain tumne gaadi mein, yeh ek laakh se upar ka maal hai, iski receipt abhi ke abhi chahiye mujhe, saath hi lab ek hafte mein result de deta hai, toh January 7 2005 tak mujhe mera maal wapas chahiye with all the lab reports" Raghav ne is baar dhuan unke chehre pe chhod kaha, Patwardhan aur Shinde ek dusre ko dekhne lagey, Patwardhan gusse se ubal raha tha, Shinde ne apni nazrein neechi ki

"Patwardhan, jo tu chahta hai tujhe zindagi bhar nahin milega"

"yeh tera ahankar hai Raghav"

"yeh mera vishwaas hai Patwardhan, khair agali baar jab tum demolition ka order laaoge, tab tak shayad yeh dukaan bhi yahan na ho, us waqt bhi tum ek dusre ko ghurte rahoge ya kahin jaake doob marna pasand karoge" Raghav unhe ulte per jaate hue dekhne laga aur apne aadmi ke saath fir apni baaton mein lag gaya, Patwardhan ki jeep jaise hi nazron ke saamne se ojhal hui, Raghav ne wakeel ko phone kiya

"do baatein hain" Raghav 2 ghante mein wakeel se milne uski office pahuncha

"ek toh abhi jo deal hui, Deewan ko uski payment lauta ke hamare paas cash mein 200 crore rakhe hue hain, filhaal toh woh sab paise Khar wale flat mein pade hain, lekin wahan zyada der rakhna khatre se khaali nahin hai"

"woh toh hoga hi, seedha tumne Patwardhan ke gale mein jo haath daala hai, khair, dusri baat kya hai"

"Patwardhan bahut jaanch padtaal kar raha hai, aaj basti mein aaya tha, jua khaane ki entrance bhi usko mil gayi thi, yeh toh maine filhaal use bandh rakha tha, mera andaaza tha jab Patwardhan ko drugs ke maamle mein kuchh nahin milega tab woh bhaukhlahat mein zaroor basti pe aake naatak karega, isliye 3 din se jua khana bandh rakha hai, lekin zyada der bandh nahin rakh sakte, roz ka 30 laakh ka galla hai"

"hmmmmm" wakeel ne bas itna hi kaha aur chhat ki or apni nazrein karke kuchh sochne laga

"Jua ke dhandhe mein tumhara kaam kaise hota hai"

"100 rupaye ke coins pe 15 rupaye hamare hote hain" Wakeel ki aankhein badi ho gayi, usne shayad galat suna ya uski calculation galat thi

"matlab"

"matlab main agar hisaab lagaun toh roz 2 crore rupaye on the table hote hain tumhare jua ke adde pe" Raghav ne haami bhari toh wakeel shayad bethe bethe kursi se girne pe aa gaya tha

"tum ek kaam karo, club aur Bar ka license le lo"

"kya faayda, agar yeh kaam legally karunga toh mujhe tax bhi itni deni padegi, upar se Bar mein liquor ka license ka paisa alag, aur yeh sab karne ke baad bhi agar main mahine ke 30 laakh ko kam se kam 50 laakh mein convert nahin kar paaya toh in sab ka faayd nahin hai, 30 laakh toh main abhi in sab ke bina nikaal leta hun, woh bhi sab hard cash"

"tum jitna tez apna dimaag chalate ho, utna hi shaant bhi rakha karo use, main yeh keh raha hun, license le lo, lekin dhandha tum waise hi karo jaise abhi kar rahe ho, arey bhai, ek baar banda club mein aa gaya, uske baad tumhare upar hai tum use jua kis tarah khilana chahte ho, isse do cheesein hogi, ek toh yeh Patwardhan ki roz wali machh machh bhi khatam hogi, aur tumhare paas legal dhandha rahega, hum apni marzi se uske profit loss ke saath khelte rahenge, tumhare dusre dhandhon mein mila cash bhi yeh books mein dikha sakte hain jab zaroorat hogi"

"yeh sab mumkin hai"

"Yeh India hai bhai, yahan kaanoon baad mein banta hai, kaanoon todne ke tareeke pehle ban jaate hain, tum yeh sab mujh pe chhod do, license kiske naam se lena hai sirf woh batao, baaki ka sab main dekh lunga" Raghav karna toh Sonia ke naam chahta tha, lekin haal hi mein diye hue kaam ko anjaam tak pahunchane wale aadmiyon ke naam Raghav ne jab wakeel se kahe toh Ranga ko vishwaas nahin hua"

"shukriya dada" Ranga ne kaha toh Raghav bas apni gardan haan mein hila ke gaadi mein beth gaya aur wahan se Sonia se milne chala gaya

"Ranga, kal sabhi aadmiyon ko ikattha kar, time aa gaya hai ab dusre dhandhon ki taraf bhi badhein" Raghav itna kehke Sonia ke flat ki taraf nikal gaya

Badhiya update tha, kal raat mein padha par reply dene ka time abhi mil raha hai
Vakeel sahi keh rela hai, kanun ko to kahin bhi gochi de do. Raghav jaisa ho hai to bacha hi
Sala ye samajh nahi aya police ko bhanak nahi machne di aur ise pta tha ki police ko mil jayega juain ka adda khair ab to ye problem hi solve.

Bhadia sama bandha hai.. Judi hui kahani hai... Sab kuch sahi chal raha hai. Ab raghav 10-12 salon mein kya banta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.

Awesome kimi ji

 

[StarDust]

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Raghav jaise hi flat mein daakhil hua Sonia use na bar mein na living room mein dikhi, Raghav ek bedroom mein ghussa toh wahan bhi nahin thi, dusre room mein Raghav jaise hi gussa use saamne Sonia dikhi, Sonia bistar ke theek beecho beech soyi thi lekin Raghav ke dhyan uspe kam, uske pure jism pe bichhe hue currency notes pe tha, Sonia ne apne badan ke upar, per se leke gardan tak, currency notes bichha rakhe the, shayad yeh uska bachpana tha ya itne paise ek saath dekh ke hui hairaani, lekin ek jagah bhi aisi nahin thi jahan se Raghav uske badan ko dekh sake, jism ka har kona currency notes ki madat se chhipaya gaya tha

"kaisi lag rahi hun" Sonia ne apne sar ko halke se ghumaa ke Raghav se puchha aur muskurane lagi, Sonia ke chehre pe khushi chhipaye na chhupti, jaise jaise second guzarte waise waise uske chehre ki muskaan aur badhati jaati, Raghav ne use kuchh jawaab nahin diya aur uske paas aake beth gaya, paas aate hi Raghav ne uske chehre pe girti uski zulfon ki ek latt ko uski aankhon se hataya aur uski aankhon mein dekhne laga, apni ungli ko chalate Raghav uske chehre se neeche aaya aur uski chuchiyon pe rakhe note ke neeche apne haath le gaya, shareer pe currency notes ke alawa kuchh nahin tha, Sonia belibaas thi

"aise kya dekh rahe ho, ladki ka jism pehle kabhi nahin dekha ya itne saare paise" Sonia fir se khilkhilane lagi, Raghav ne ghadi mein waqt dekha toh uske paas 6 ghante the, subah 4 baje apne aadmiyon ke saath meeting thi aur usse pehle yeh sab cash wakeel ke paas bhi pahunchaana tha, Raghav ne itminaan se Sonia ke jism se ek ek note hataya aur uske belibaas badan ko fir se nanga karne laga, jaise jaise Sonia ke badan se note hat rahe the, Sonia ki aankhon mein madhoshi chaane lagti, dekhte hi dekhte Sonia ki chhaatiyan aur uske pet tak ab koi note nahin bacha tha. Raghav halka sa uske shareer ki taraf jhuka aur usi chhatiyon se leke neeche pet tak Sonia ke jism pe apni jeebh ghumane laga, Sonia ke muh se halki siskari nikli aur woh apne haath Raghav ke baalon mein ghumaane lagi, Raghav thodi der uske pet tak hi seemit raha aur uski naabi ke saath apni jeebh se khelne laga, Raghav Sonia ki navel ke saath dhyan se khel raha tha, apni jeebh ek dum dheemi gati se encircle karta aur Sonia ke chehre ko dekhta, Sonia ki aankhein bandh Raghav ke baalon mein hi uljhi, Sonia Raghav ke sar pe itna zor deti jaise ki woh chah rahi ho ke Raghav kabhi yeh khel bandh hi na kare, Raghav dheere dheere kar uske badan ke nichle hisse ki taraf badha aur uski lower waist se note sarkaane laga, kuchh hi seconds mein Raghav ki aankhon ke saamne Sonia ki chut aa gayi, Raghav ne jaise hi apni jeebh wahan rakhi, Sonia ne apne dono haath peeche le jaake palang pa mazbooti se rakhe aur apne per khol diye, Raghav ne Sonia ka nyota sweekara aur dheere dheere kar uski chut ke saath khelne laga, kuchh hi der mein dono ke jism ke sholay is kadr bhadak uthe ke fir se dono ek dusre ki baahon mein baahein daale shower ke neeche gaye aur ek ghante tak apne jismo ki garmi ko thanda karne ki koshish mein lag gaye, takreeban 11.15 baje Raghav ne bistar ke side pe nazar maari toh Sonia so chuki thi, takreeben 35 min tak chala unke jismon ka khel aur uske baad 2 scotch ke neat glass, Raghav uth khada hua aur paison ko samet ke bags mein bharne laga, takreeban sab paise usne bags mein rakhe, last mein 1000 ke notes ke 3-4 bundles usne Sonia ke paas rakhey aur wahan se wakeel se milne chala gaya, ghar se nikalte nikalte 12.30 baj chuke the, Raghav ke Khar wale flat se wakeel ka ghar kuch 10 km ki doori pe thi, distance problem nahin tha, lekin beech raaste mein aane wale check posts ki samasya thi, kisi tarah main roads ko skip karke toh Raghav 2 checkposts skip kar chuka tha lekin teesra skip karna na mumkin tha, Raghav ne apni saans check ki toh scotch ki koi smell nahin thi, drunk driving ka case nahin tha, par dikki mein rakhe hue bags problem thi, Raghav gaadi ki speed dheemi dheemi karke aagey badhne laga aur check post pe aake ruka

"kahan se aa rahe ho itni raat ko" Inspector ne Raghav ko puchha

"friend se milne gaya tha"

"kahan rehta hai tera friend"

"Khar"

"ae deshmukh, gaadi check kar re saaheb ka" Inspector ne chilla ke kaha aur Raghav ko dikki kholne ke nirdesh diye, hawaldar jaise jaise gaadi ki dikki ki taraf badhta, Raghav ke chehre ka rang feeka padne lagta, abhi hawaldar ne dikki upar ki hi thi ke woh chilla utha

"saahab" Inspector ne uski zor si awaaz sun dikki ki taraf rukh kiya hi tha, ke Raghav ne accelarator pe full force se apna per rakha aur gaadi ko tezi se wahan se bhagane laga, aagey rakhe barricades ke saath khade 2 hawaldar chotil hue

"Control Room, Black Honda City, Number MH 02 AA 6262, i repeat 6262" Inspector apni jeep leke turant Raghav ka peeche karne laga, full siren mein Mumbai ki lagbhag sunsaan sadak eka ek gunj uthi, aagey Raghav ki Honda City aur peeche police ki jeep, Raghav ke mann mein bas ek hi cheez thi, pakde nahin jaana hai, Worli naake se right leke Raghav police ko chakma dene ki koshish kar raha tha lekin aagey Police ki 2 jeep pehle se hi tainaat thi, Raghav ne gear shift kiya aur speed badha di, 1 ke baad ek lagatar 3 police jeeps ki siren ka awaaz Mumbai ki hawaon mein felne laga

"jaldi kar tawde, bhaga bhaga" Inspector ne apne driver se kaha aur aagey dekhne laga jahan Raghav ki gaadi use saaf dikh rahi thi, raat ke 1.15 baje Mumbai ki sadkon pe ek gunde ki gaadi ke peeche 3 police ki jeep, ek ke baad ek 4 gaadiyan line se sadak pe chalti dikhti, Raghav gaadi chalate chalate Mumbai fort ke paas pahuncha, waise toh koi khatra nahin tha lekin fort ke paas hi docks the jahan additional police hamesha khadi rehti, Raghav ne 120 pe bhaagti hui gaadi ko left mein ghumaya aur BSE ke peeche wali gali mein pahuncha, jaise hi use aabhas hua ke police kahin nahin hai, woh turant gaadi se utra aur dikki jaldi se lock karke wahan khadi dusri gaaiyon ke beech chhup ke beth gaya, jaise hi Raghav neeche betha, uske saamne 3 police ki jeeo full speed se nikli, ganimat thi ke wahan andhera bahut tha, toh police walon ko na Raghav na uski khadi hui gaadi dikhi, Raghav ki saansein tez chal rahi aur chehra paseene se bheega hua tha, Raghav ne jaldi se apna mobile nikaala aur Ranga ko phone karke saari ghatna batayi

"aap jahan ho wahin raho bhau, apun abhi aata hai" Ranga ne kehke turant phone cut kiya aur subah ke 4 baje ke aas paas jahan Raghav tha wahan pahuncha

"bhau, bas 2 min" Ranga ne Raghav ke paas beth kaha aur apne saath laaye aadmi ko gaadi ke number plates badalne ka kaam saunpa

"sorry bhau woh police ka bahut lafda tha raaste pe isliye gali khunchon se aana pada apne ko" Ranga ne Raghav se kaha toh Raghav ne bas haan mein sar hilaya aur kuchh sochne laga, jaise hi number plates badli, Raghav ne Ranga ko gaadi di aur use wakeel ke ghar pahunchne ke nirdesh diye, Ranga turant gaadi leke nikla aur savdhaani barat ke wakeel ke paas pahuncha, udhar Raghav, Ranga ke saath aaye hue aadmi ke saath uski bike pe betha aur jaldi hi Khar wale flat pe pahuncha

"tumhari aadmi pahunch chuka hai" Raghav ne jaise hi flat ka lock khola toh uske wakeel ka phone aaya

"main 10 min mein baat karta hun" Raghav ne bas itna hi kaha aur sabse pehle jaake bathroom mein shower ke neeche khada ho gaya, Raghav ki saansein abhi bhi tez chal rahi thi, maano uska dum ghut raha tha, Raghav ke aisi harkat ki wajah se Sonia ki aankh khuli toh woh bhi Raghav ko aisi haalat mein dekh ghabra gayi, 15-20 minute ke baad Raghav shower se nikla aur Sonia ko andekha karke wakeel ko call kiya

"main tumhare aadmi ke through 1 flight ki ticket aur boarding pass bhijwa raha hun, kaam aayega, sambhaal ke rakhna"

"agar sambhaal ke rakhna hai toh woh bhi tum rakho, aur mujhe is jhamele mein aagey nahin padna, aisi jitni deal hogi utni cash har baar tumhare office ya ghar leke aana sambhav nahin hai"

"woh toh nahin hai, main iska kuchh raasta dhundhta hun, waise mujhe raasta pata hai lekin usme kharch kitna hoga woh pata karke batata hun" Wakeel ne itna kehke phone cut kiya,udhar Ranga bhi wakeel ke ghar se nikla aur jaldi se Khar wale flat pahuncha, jaise hi Ranga pahuncha, wahan uska ek dost khada tha uske intezaar mein

"yeh gaadi hai, number plate badla hai filhaal main, tu chassis ka kuchh setting kar, apne ko lafda nai chahiye zara bhi" Ranga ne use gaadi ki chaabi di aur upar Raghav se milne chala gaya, flat mein kadam rakhte hi saamne bar pe betha use Raghav dikha, Raghav ka chehra neeche ki or tha, jhuka hua niraash saa lag raha tha, Ranga ne aaj tak use aise roop mein nahin dekha tha, Ranga dheere dheere karke aagey badha aur uske paas jaake khamoshi se khada ho gaya

 

[StarDust]

Update posted
Individual replies kal

 

[StarDust]

Thanks for reading everyone

 

[Naina]

bahot hi shandar scene create kiya hai.. raghav ne sabko chakma deke bach to gaya par sayad ish ghatna ko leke padesaan bhi ho gaya hoga ki aage chalke aise kisi situation mein na phir se fansh jaye....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

 

[Naina]

Btw raghav overconfidence ka shikar ho gaya tha sayad... ushe laga hoga ki woh apne mann marzi se kuch bhi kar sakta hain ... koi nahin hain ushe pakadne wala.... par yahin par galti kar baitha laparwahi karke...

 

[Shyam Singh]

Update: -

"Sir" agli subah patwardhan ke saamne usi ki team ka ek inspector khada tha

"Shinde, details mili"

"Yes sir, call local number se nahin tha sir, call Dubai se aaya tha, wahan se koshish ki gayi thi IP call karne ki, taaki number trace na ho, lekin shayad kacha khiladi nikla, woh aisa nahin kar saka aur humein details mil gaye"

"aisa nahin ho sakta, I don't believe ke usne jo chaaha woh aisa nahin kar saka"

"matlab Sir, yeh Dubai ki detail"

"Am 99% sure ke woh galat hai, anyway, you stay on top of this" abhi patwardhan Shinde se baat kar hi raha tha ke itne mein dusra sub inspector uske paas aake khada hua

"Sir, humne khabar nikaali, bhaari maatra mein kal drugs, jaise brown sugar, hash, smack aur cocaine Mumbai mein laaya gaya hai, aur woh apne apne distribution center pe bhi pahunch gaye hain"

"get the bastard for me , will you" Patwardhan ko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab itni aasani se ho gaya aur use is baat ki bhanak bhi nahin lagi

"We can't sir"

"What do you mean by we can't"

"Sir yeh sab karne wala aadmi, Raghav, iske baare mein koi nahin jaanta, kaun hai kahan se aaya hai, kuchh nahin, even yahan ke local gangs bhi iske baare mein nahin jaante, hamare informers ka yeh maanna hai ke yeh aagey jaake yahan ke local gangs ke liye pareshaani ban sakta hai"

"matlab" Patwardhan abhi bhi kuch details miss kar raha tha

"matlab yeh Sir, ke kal jo yeh drugs laaya hai woh almost aadhe rate mein bechne wala hai, ya yun kahein ke yahan ke local gangs ka munaafa aadha karne wala hai" Patwardhan ko yahan ek mauka dikha, woh ise haath se nahin jaane dena chahta tha, Patwardhan yeh jaanta tha ke mumbai kabhi bhi local gangs se mukti nahin paa sakti, kaafi saare kaaran the uske, Drugs aur har tarah ka nasha bhi khule aam hota tha, lekin Police kuchh nahin kar sakti thi, par yeh sab side mein rakh, Patwardhan apna dhyan sirf Raghav pe rakhna chahta tha

"Shinde, do one thing, Dongri mein apna informer hai, usko bolo Yadav pe nazar rakhe aur uske saath meeting fix kare"

"Yadav, par kyun sir"

"Dongri se leke almost aadhi Mumbai mein jua ke adde jahan charas aur yeh sab drugs bikti hai, Yadav ke hisse mein aata hai, agar tumhari information sahi hai aur agar yeh aadmi Raghav, waakai mein aadhe daam pe drugs bechega toh isse sabse bada nuksaan Yadav ka hoga, Yadav se hum fir kabhi bhi nipat sakte hain, lekin main nahin chahta ke Mumbai mein ek aur keeda palne aaye"

"Right away Sir" Shinde ke saath wahan khada dusra sub inspector wahan se nikle aur seedhe Dongri pahunche, Dongri, Mumbai ki ek batthi jaise thi, wahan ki tapan pure Mumbai ko mehsus hoti thi, desi daaru ke theke, jua ke adde, drugs, cricket ke satte, har gair kanooni cheez wahan hoti thi, aur yeh sab wahan ke local MLA ki nigraani mein hota tha, Yadav ki kahaani bhi Raghav jaisi hai, lekin yadav ne kabhi seedha patwardhan ke gale mein haath nahin daala, Yadav ne badi chaturai se apna kaam set kiya aur fir local MLA ke saath rishta badha ke apne kaam ko failaya

"Yadav" dopahar ke kareeb 12 baje Yadav apne aadmiyon ke saath chai pee raha tha ke Shinde aur do constable uske saamne aa khade hue, abhi woh log wahan pahunche hi the, ke aas paas ke log Shinde aur uske aadmiyon ke gherne lagey, idhar se yadav ke aadmi bhi apni jagah tenaat ho gaye

"kya hai re inspector, subah subah chai peene aaya hai kya" Yadav apni kursi pe chauda hoke per fela ke Shinde ko dekhne laga, Shinde jaanta tha ke woh jagah Yadav ki hai, Police ki wahan koi dal nahin galne wali, aur naa hi woh Yadav ko koi nuksaan pahunchane aaya tha, usne constable se Ishara kiya aur constable aagey badh ke yadav ke kaan mein kuchh kehne laga, Yadav bhale hi wahan ka powerful aadmi ho, lekin woh dimaag ko sahi jagah pe rakh e kaam karta tha, constable ki baat sunke usne Shinde se bas ishara kiya aur wahan se apni gaadi mein beth Patwardhan ki office mein pahuncha

"patwardhan saab, Jai Mumbai Jai Maharashtar, kasa aayis" Yadav muskurate hue Patwardhan se bola aur uske jawaab ka intezaar karne laga, kadwa goont peeke Patwardhan uske paas jaa betha aur apne chehre pe halki muskurahat laa di

"yadav, seedhe kaam ki baat pe aata hun" Patwardhan ne apni baat shuru ki aur use Raghav ke baare mein batane laga, Raghav ke baare mein sun Yadav ke chehre pe shikan aane lagi, yadav samajhta tha ke yeh naya aadmi agar kaam karne laga toh usse Yadav ka hi nuksaan hoga, yadav abhi bhi kuch soch raha tha

"Yadav, police tumhare kaam ke beech nahin aayi hai ab tak uska jo bhi kaaran ho, lekin mujhe koi wajah nahin dikhti ke tumisme hamari madat na karo, isme tumhari bhi bhalaai hai aur hamara faayda bhi"

"arey Patwardhan saahib, mi madat karto na"

"aur waise bhi mera maanna hai, police ke agar dosti nahin kar sakein toh kam se kam dushmani toh nahin hi karni chahiye" yadav ne fir haske jawaab diya

"theek hai saahib, merko kuchh pata lagta hai toh main aapko bolta hun" yadav itna kehke wahan se nikal gaya aur apne adde pe pahunch ke apne 4 aadmiyon ko is kaam pe lagaya

"bhau, yeh aadmi itna zaroori kyun hai"

"yeh aadmi police ke liye agar zaroori hai, toh mere liye usse kahin zyada zaroori hai bablu" yadav ne apni cigarette jala ke kaha

"agar is aadmi ne apne par felana shuru kar diya, toh Mumbai ko apne kaabu mein karne ka sapna, sapna hi reh jaayega, upar se paison ka nuksaan hoga woh laga, behtar hai, yeh aadmi police se pehle apne haath mein lagey"

"sahi hai dada, jaise hi apne ko haath mein lagega yeh aadmi seedha isko tapkaa hi daalenge"

"nai, jaise hi tumhe iski koi khabar mile, tum seedhe mujhe aake bataoge, iska kya karna hai woh maine soch liya hai

Awesome update.. Aaj padhna shuru kiya h...