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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)
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Nice one brother
GHORA baba ne toh shoch mai daal diya NAINA ko but still mujhe lgta hai ki NAINA ko bta dena chahiye tha PREETI ko uss se related sab kuch tanki vo bhi clear ho apne baare mai aur most importantly agar PREETI ko yeh sachai pta chli aur uss time kisi aur ke dwara like SAMRAT ke dwara usse behkave mai lane ke liye SAMRAT usse kisi tarah sach bta de (shayad SAMRAT ko tab tak pta chal jaye ki PREETI uss ki beti hai aur vo uss time yeh chal chle) like pura sach na bta kar vo usse iss baat par bhadkaye ki NAINA ko sachai pta hone ke bavjood usne PREETI ko yeh sach nhi btaya
Well yeh sab ek guess hai jo galat bhi ho skta hai
KAYA toh dil ki mareej pehlibar KARAN ko dekh kar hi ho gyi thi dekhna yeh hai ki yeh baat usse kab tak samajh aaye aur vo KARAN ko bataye halanki JYOTI ke hote thoda mushkil hai
KEEP WRITING
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sorry for late review
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...MATHUR
GHORA baba ne toh shoch mai daal diya NAINA ko but still mujhe lgta hai ki NAINA ko bta dena chahiye tha PREETI ko uss se related sab kuch tanki vo bhi clear ho apne baare mai aur most importantly agar PREETI ko yeh sachai pta chli aur uss time kisi aur ke dwara like SAMRAT ke dwara usse behkave mai lane ke liye SAMRAT usse kisi tarah sach bta de (shayad SAMRAT ko tab tak pta chal jaye ki PREETI uss ki beti hai aur vo uss time yeh chal chle) like pura sach na bta kar vo usse iss baat par bhadkaye ki NAINA ko sachai pta hone ke bavjood usne PREETI ko yeh sach nhi btaya
Well yeh sab ek guess hai jo galat bhi ho skta hai
KAYA toh dil ki mareej pehlibar KARAN ko dekh kar hi ho gyi thi dekhna yeh hai ki yeh baat usse kab tak samajh aaye aur vo KARAN ko bataye halanki JYOTI ke hote thoda mushkil hai
KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
sorry for late review
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...MATHUR
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Bhai aisa kadapi na kare kisi ki kuch piroblem ho sake he jo unhone rebu na diya. Lekin humne to diya tha na aur wo bhi update chhapne ke turant baad. To bhai humare aisi kathin priksha na le aur hum jaise bhakto par apni kripa dristi dalte hue update sigrah ati sigrah dede.Yaar aaj to had hi ho gayi itne kam reviewsocha tha aaj hi ek update dunga per sara mood hi off ho gaya .
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Nice update..
So Naina ko abhi aur intzar karna padega Karan Jyoti k Sach k bare m. Janne k liye but jb bi wo aaega m sure situation bi Kamal ki hogi . Dekhna padega ki is time sb kaise react krenge ek dusre k bare m jaan Kar..
Kher , filahal naina n preety ko Sach Ni bataya h ki wo uski bua ki beti h aur uske pita samraat h ... But ye kabtk chupa k rakh paegi Naina.. m sure kabi na kabi ye bat samne aa hi jaegi.. bs ab ye khabar samraat ya markesh Tak na pahuche ki Preety hi Samraat k ant ka Karan h kyuki agar aisa hua to wo log preety ko samay s pehle hurt karne ki koshish karenge...
Naina n to abhi dono ko sath m time spend krne ko kaha h but aisa lag Raha h ki Naina aisa karke Preety veer ko apne s alag akrna chahti h but ye bi possible ni h kyuki Naina chahe ya na chahe usko preety veer ki jarurat Padegi hi jabtk ki uski mulaqat KJ s na hojae... Uske baad Kya hoga ye baad ki baat h..
Karan ki taraf mahol khushiyo wla h filahal , Karan k kaam s sab khush h aur sath m sare family camping ki planning Kar rahe hai..
Rastal m bi next day KJ Jane Wale h shayad ye first time h Jyoti k Jane ka but wahan to KAYA h.. Jyoti ko waise bi pasand Ni ki koi Karan k aaspaas bi fatke to phir kaya ka Kya hoga Jo shayad pehle s hi Karan s Prem karti h... It's goign to be tough day bcoz Kaya k hisab s to Karan single hi h but jab Jyoti ko aath m Dekhegi to kahi Dil na tut jae uska...
Let's see kya hota h
So Naina ko abhi aur intzar karna padega Karan Jyoti k Sach k bare m. Janne k liye but jb bi wo aaega m sure situation bi Kamal ki hogi . Dekhna padega ki is time sb kaise react krenge ek dusre k bare m jaan Kar..
Kher , filahal naina n preety ko Sach Ni bataya h ki wo uski bua ki beti h aur uske pita samraat h ... But ye kabtk chupa k rakh paegi Naina.. m sure kabi na kabi ye bat samne aa hi jaegi.. bs ab ye khabar samraat ya markesh Tak na pahuche ki Preety hi Samraat k ant ka Karan h kyuki agar aisa hua to wo log preety ko samay s pehle hurt karne ki koshish karenge...
Naina n to abhi dono ko sath m time spend krne ko kaha h but aisa lag Raha h ki Naina aisa karke Preety veer ko apne s alag akrna chahti h but ye bi possible ni h kyuki Naina chahe ya na chahe usko preety veer ki jarurat Padegi hi jabtk ki uski mulaqat KJ s na hojae... Uske baad Kya hoga ye baad ki baat h..
Karan ki taraf mahol khushiyo wla h filahal , Karan k kaam s sab khush h aur sath m sare family camping ki planning Kar rahe hai..
Rastal m bi next day KJ Jane Wale h shayad ye first time h Jyoti k Jane ka but wahan to KAYA h.. Jyoti ko waise bi pasand Ni ki koi Karan k aaspaas bi fatke to phir kaya ka Kya hoga Jo shayad pehle s hi Karan s Prem karti h... It's goign to be tough day bcoz Kaya k hisab s to Karan single hi h but jab Jyoti ko aath m Dekhegi to kahi Dil na tut jae uska...
Let's see kya hota h
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Wo Nahi to kya hua Bhai ham log to haiYaar aaj to had hi ho gayi itne kam review
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chaap do update
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Aapki baat bhi Sahi hai bro lekin ye Fantasy story hai jiska writer Harry rocks hai who brings unexpected twist and turns
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As always the update was very good, you are writing very well. Naina knows nothing about Karan and Jyoti and will have to wait for the right time and Naina is yet to tell Preety the truth. Naina's decision is fine, now Preety and Veer will get some time to spend alone and maybe a little romance between the two. Overall I want to say that I like your story very much, now let's see what happens next in the story, till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You......
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Nice update Bhai
To preety Smart ki beti hai ab aayga maja
To preety Smart ki beti hai ab aayga maja