Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running (restart)

[Rohan008]

Friends next update to kal aajayega raat ko , per ye kya dosto din b din story pr review ana kam hote ja rahe h, jo mujhko bilkul acha ni lag raha

intzaar rhega bhai

 

[Harry rocks]

intzaar rhega bhai

Bhai aaj k update ka to review dedo , matlab update 129 ka

 

[Rohan008]

nice update bro.
let's see what will you serve in the next update.
Karan Jyoti cuddling was cute.
Markesh had killed the Dayan.
no clue about the person may be Karan.
who come next to Naina, we will get to know in next update.
hoping good adventure with Swati.
brilliant update.
keep rocking bro.

 

[Stone cold]

Update no :- 129
Wahi dusri or

Megha hamesha ki tarah samraat k mahal m mojud us mayavi bagiche m mojud ped k niche bethi thi , chahre pe is asha k bhav k sath ki ek din uski beti yani naina apne ........ K sath yaha aayegi or use mukt kerwayegi

Lekin aaj uska dil na jane kese bahut khush tha , aaj use bahut hi shubh abhas ho rahe the , jise dekh trijata(wo rakshasi jo megha ka waha khayal rakhti thi ) bhi bahut khush thi.

Trijata :- kya baat h beti aaj bahut khush najar aarahi ho , shukar h ishvar ka jo tumhe muskurate hue to dekh payi , verna hamesha tumhe dukhi dekh mujhe bhi bahut dukh hota tha beti.

Megha :- ha amma ,aaj man atyadhik harshit ho raha h , subah se hi bahut hi shubh aabhas bhi ho rahe h .

Esa pratit ho raha h amma , jese ki vo vakt aagaya h , jab is dusht samraat ka ant hoga.

Trijata :- beti mujhe bhi esa lagta h ki tera abhas uchit h , guptacharon se abhi abhi suchna mili h ki mahashaktishali brahamrakshasi vrushali ab ni rahi .

Megha :- ye to hona hi tha mata , paap chahe kitna bhi shaktishali kyu na ho , dharm k aage jyada samay tak tik ni sakta

Abhi megha or trijata k bich baate ho hi rahi thi ki achanak trijata bolte bolte ruk gayi .

Ye dekh megha kuch bolti usse pahale hi usne paya ki uske aas pas mojud har chij har pahare dar apni jagah sthir ho chuke h , arthat us sthan ka samay ruk chuka tha

Or tabhi achanak ek bahut tez roshni waha us bagiche me fel gayi .

or jab wo roshni hati to , samne khade shaks ko dekh megha k chahre pe khushi or herani dono dikhayi dene lagi.

Kyunki samne or koi ni sakshat shani dev khade the.

Megha turant uth ker unke pas gayi or unke charno me dandvat pranam ker ghutno p beth hath jod boli.

Megha :- prabhu aap , itne varsho pashchat aapke darshan ker m dhanya hui prabhu m dhanya hui.

Shani dev :- sada sobhagwati bhavah , tumhara kalyaan ho putri utho.

Megha uthate hue boli :- prabhu aapka yaha aana aakaran to ni ho sakta .

Apitu aapka aana mujhe is baat ka sanket kar raha h ki m aaj jo subah se aabhas ker rahi hu , vo satya h .

Shani dev :- ha putri ,tumhara purvaabhas bilkul uchit h , ha putri samay aachuka h tumhari mukti ka.

Megha khush hote :- kya arthat mere 3no.......... Mujhe lene aarahe h.

Per kab prabhu , aapki is bhakt ki aankhe taras gayi h apne ..... Ki ek najar dekhne ko , ye anchal apni mamta lutane k liye tadaf raha h prabhu.

Shani dev :- bas ab kuch hi samay shesh rah gaya h putri , is dusht k samrajy k ant ka.

Niyati ne mere hatho ko bandh rakha h putri , verna m kabka is dusht ki ked se mukt kerwa deta

Parantu m esa ker ni sakta , kyunki esa kerne k liye mujhe samraat ka vadh kerna padta , parantu esa kerna brahamaji k vardan ka anadar hota.

Megha :- m samjh sakti hu prabhu , aapka uter dayitv keval mujh tak simit ni , apitu pure sansar ka dayitv apke kandho per h prabhu.

Mujhe ab tak yaha ked rahane ka bhi koi khed na raha prabhu , kyunki ab jo hoga wo acha hi hoga , kyunki mere pyare bacho k uper se ab sabhi sankat k badal jo hatne wale h, jiski hume varsho se pratiksha thi.

Or aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad prabhu , jo aapne is maa ko ye shubh samachar de use itna sukh pradan kiya.

Shani dev :- putri m tumhare harsh ko samjh sakta hu or yakin mano aane wale us pal k liye m tumse jyada utsahit hu , parantu.

Megha :- parantu kya bhagavan

Shani :- parantu putri ye milan ka tum sab k aane wale jivan pe kya prabav padega yahi vichar se m chintit hu, kyunki bhut kal me liye gaye tumhare nirnay k kaaran aaj prishtithiya bahut hi gambhir ho chuki h .

Mane karan ko us din kese na kese to sambhal liya , chahe bhale hi wo is kaaran rusht bhi ho gaya ho, parantu bhavishya m parinam or bhi bhayanak ho sakte h putri , jinhe keval tum hi sambhal paogi.

Megha pahale to kuch chintit hui per fir usne khud ko sambhal shani dev se bola.

Megha :- prabhu karm mane kiya h to karmfal bhi mujhe hi swikar kerna hoga na karmfal data , aap chintit na hoiye prabhu , mujhe apne karan pe purntah vishwas h , vo koi bhi galat kadam ni uthayega or fir usko sambhalne k liye uski ek ni uski 2 2 shaktiya bhi uske sath hongi na

Shani dev man me :- yahi to chinta ka vishay h putri,

Shani dev :- uchit kaha tumne putri .

Fir shani dev megha ko kuch nirdesh de waha se gayab ho gaye or megha bhi khushi se aaker apne sthan pe beth gayi , jiske sath hi samay apni raftar se wapas chal pada.

Wahi dusri or

Karan subah jaldi uth jata h kyunki aaj swati jo aane wali thi , tabhi uski najar uski gudiya uski jaan jyoti pe gati jo ek bache jese chipke uske sine pe sir rakh so rahi thi.

Jo bahut hi cute lag rahi thi , bilkul ek dam bache jesi , jise dekh karan ko khud ko rok ni paya or uske hotho ko chum liya or bola.

Karan :- good morning meri darling bahana.

Karan k esa kerte hi jyoti ne apni jhil si nili or ghahri ankhe khol di , jinme karan kho sa gaya or jyoti bhi karan ko kiss kerti hui boli.

Jyoti :- good morning mere janu bhaiyu , per ye kya bhaiya itni jaldi kyu uthaya , sone do na , aapki baho me bahut sukoon milta h

Karan :- sukun to mujhe bhi bahut milta h meri jaan , per aaj swati didi aane wali h na , to jaldi se utho or fresh ho ker aayo.

Jyoti bacho jesi masti kerte hue :-. Ni mujhe abhi ni uthna , or na hi aap mujhe apni baho se alag karoge mujhe or sona h.

Karan shetani muskan k sath :- lagta h meri chipkali ese ni manegi , lagta h mujhe hi kuch kerna hoga .

Jyoti ankh band m hi :- aapko jo kerna h kijiye , lekin apne mujhe apni baho se aalag kiya na to aapki kher ni hogi aaj.

Karan :- ok

Karan ne kuch soch jyoti ko apne uper le liya or uske dono per apne kamar ki dono or kerke ek hath se uski pith or ek hath se uski back ko pakad k dhire se utha.

Karan ko hilta dekh jyoti karan k or kaske lipat gayi or apna sir uske kandho pe rakh liya.

Karan bed se uth ker jyoti ko god me liye hue hi bathroom m lejata h or shower k niche jaker shower on ker deta h.

Or karan k esa kerte hi jese hi thanda thanda pani jyoti k badan p gira , jyoti uchal padi , wo to shukar h wo karan ki majbut baho me thi , verna vo gir sakti thi

Wo jhat se ek baar dar k karan k sine se chipak gayi , jyoti ki is harkat se karan hasne laga , jise dekh jyoti chidte hueusje sine pe marne lagi.

Jyoti :- gande bhaiya, humesha mujhe tang kerte rahate ho.

Karan :- are ab isme meri kya galti tune hi to kaha tha , jo kerna h karo bas mujhe apni baho se alag mat kerna , dekho mane aabhi tak vesa hi kiya h.

Jyoti :- fir bhi yaar, chalo ab niche to utaro.

Lekin karan to fir se jyoti k chahre me khone laga , jyoti ki jhulfo pr pani ki rimjhim girti bunde , uski khubsurti ko char chand laga rahi thi , uski surahi dar gardan bhigne ki vajah se or bhi chamak rahi thi , jo karan ko or bhi attract ker rahi thi , jiski abhas use apne niche ho rahi halchal se ho raha tha.

Or ho bhi kyu na jyoti jesi khubsurat ladki , jiske liye khubsurat shabd bhi kam pad jaye , jo karan ki shakti uski premika uski jan , uski baho me itne romantic pose m jo thi, or uper se jyoti ne keval is time ek patla sa sleeveless white top or ek choti si pink shorts pahani hui thi, to ab aap khud hi apne hero ka hal samjh lo.

Karan ko khud ko yu ghurta pa ker jyoti sharmate hue boli :- bhai ese mat ghuro , mujhe sharm aati h.

Karan jyoti ko chedte hue :- acha ji meri gf ko sharm bhi asti h mujhe to abhi pata chala , verna kal raat ko kya bol rahi thi, bhai dabao na , bahut maja aaraha h

Ye bol karan hasne laga or jyoti k gal to sharm k mare laal tamatar jese ho gaye or usne apna muh karan k sine me chipa liya.

Karan dhire se jyoti ka chahra uper kerta h or uski ankho m ankhe dal bola.

Karan :- to kya khayal h mis sharma , raat ka adhura romance abhi pura kare .

Jyoti sharmate hue kuch ni boli , bas ankhe band ker apne hoth aange ker dali , jise karan green signal samjh gaya.

Or usne bina der kiye jyoti k honto ko apne hotho ki giraft me leliya, or fir shuru hui undono k hotho ki prem rupi jang , jisme kabhi jjyoti jit rahi thi to kabhi karan , per har kisiki bhi ho rahi ho , per aanand dono ko aaraha tha.

Karan bhi aaj thoda aage bhada or ab vo jyoti k hotho ko chod jyoti ki gardan ki or bhada , jisko chumte hue vo jyoti k gandan p giri pani ki bundo ko pine laga.

Jyoti anand k gote khati hui karan ki baho me siskiya le rahi thi :- aah bhai , bahut maja aaraha h.

Karan :- gudiya apni ankhe khol na or bhi maja aayega.

Per jyoti apni ankhe ni kholti , tab karan ko ek idea aaya or usne wo kiya jisse ek dam se jyoti chihunkh uthi or khush bhi ho gayi.

Karan ne jyoti ko divar se sata ker apna ek gath uske boobs per rakh diya tha , jiske kaaran esa hua.

Karan muskurate hue:- yahi chahati thi na gudiya tum.

Jyoti kuch na boli or josh se karan k hotho ko apni giraft me leker uske hotho ka ras pine lagi

Karan bhi uska bharpur sath dete hue , apni jaan apni bahan k anchuye ruyi jese mulayam boobs ko dabane laga .

Jyoti karan k is dohre waar ko jyada der jhel na payi or jese hi laga use ki wo apne charm pe ppahuchne waali h , to wo jhat se karan k sine se chipak or apni bahe karan ki gardan me dal ker apne sine se karan k shirtless sine ko ragadte hue kiss kerne lagi or kuch hi minto baad uska orgasm ho gaya.

Karan bhi jyoti k badan ki ragad ko (jo uske kissing start kerne ke sath hi uske private part se jyoti ka private part rub ho raha tha kapdo k uper se ) bardasht na ker paya or wo bhi jyoti k sath wahi friege ho gaya.

Or jese hi dono kaam krida ki duniya se bahar aaye to dono ek dusre ko is halat me dekh buri tarah sharmane lage.

Jyoti karan k sine me hamesha ki tarah muh chipane lagi , fir karan bola .

Karan :- m janta hu gudiya tu mujhse atah prem kerti h or mujhe wo har ik sukh dena chahti h , jo ek premika apne premi ko deti h , jisme kaam krida or sex bhi include h.

Or yakin maan gudiya m bhi esa hi chahata hu , tujhe har wo sukh dena chahta hu , jo ek premi apni premika ko deta h , chahe wo mansik ho ya sharirik.

Jyoti :- fir bhai aao hamesha itna jijhakte kyu ho , kyu aap aage ni badh rahe.

Karan :- meri gudiya meri baabaat ko samjhne ki koshis ker , tum meri bahan hi ni meri jindgi ka pahala prem bhi ho or m ni chahata ki humara milan , jiske baad hum dono sharirik roop se bhi ek ho jayenge vo esa vesa ho , m us shubh avasar ko bahut hi khas banana chahta hu , jesa kisi premi ne bhi apni premika k sath esa na kiya ho , isliye m tumse hamesha intezaar kerne ko kahata hu, kya tu esa ni chahti

Jyoti :- bhai , eesi kon premika ni chahegi ki uske jivan sathi k sath uska milan uska first sex khas na ho, isliye aapko jesa thik lage aap kijiye bhai per..

Karan :- per kya gudiya.

Jyoti karan k sine m muh chipate hue uske sine pe ungliya ferte hue :- per thoda bahut romance to ker hi sakte h na bhaiya , I mean foreplay , u know na.

Jyoti ki baat sun karan hasne laga or bola :- acha baba ok , ab chale kya vese bhi bahut late ho gaye h hum.

Tabhi kamre k bahar se kavya ki aavaj aayi.

Kavya :- lalla , jyoti beti uth gaye kya.

Karan :- ha choti ma bas 15 min me hum aarahe h.

Kavya :- ok beta.

Ye bol wo waha se chali gayi , tabhi jyoti boli :- bhai aap ab bahar jaiye , bahut late ho raha h.

Karan :- chal na gudiya bahut din ho gaye or aaj moka bhi h , sath me hi nahate h , jese pahale nahate the.

Jyoti ko isme koi problem ni thi , isliye usne ok bol diya.

Fir karan ne apni pant utaar di or jyoti ne bhi apne bhige hue kapde utar diye.

Is time karan keval ek v - shape underwear or jyoti blue bra or panty me thi.

Or dono k hi undergarments pe dhabe the , jo unke kuch minute pahale prem lila ki nishani thi , jise dekh dono ek baar to sharmaye, lekin fir vo khud hi has pade.

Fir dono bhai bahan vese hi ek sath nahaye , lekin ab undono k bich premi premika vala ni balki bas bhai bahan vala masum pyaar tha.

Dono ek dusre ko nahalate bina kisi shararat k or fir apne kapde pahan nikal jate h , kamre k bahar jaha dining table per uski sari bahane or rohan intezaar ker raha tha,radha or riya bhi waha mojud thi.

Karan or jyoti sabko good morning wish kerte h or fir karan bola.

Karan :- good morning radha , good morning riya di .

Karan ko esa kerta dekh rohan sonam chonk gaye or unke chahre pe thode gusse k bhav bhi aagaye , jo praman the ki , vo abhi tak radha or riya se naraj h or jyoti bas karan ki is harkat pe muskura rahi thi.

Radha or riya bhi pahale chonki or baad me khush ho gayi , ho bhi kyu na , us hadse k baad or lotne k baad , aaj pahali baar karan ne samne se unse itne mithe swar me baat jo ki thi

Radha :- good morning bhaiya

Riya :- good morning bhai.

Radha :- bhai kese ho aap , raat ko nind to ache se aayi na.

Karan fir thode se rukhe swar me :- achi thi , or nind achi mujhe bhala kyu ni aayegi , (jyoti ko side se apne se chipkate hue )meri pyari gudiya jo mere sath so rahi thi.

Karan k rukhe swar ko sun radha ka chahra firse murjha gaya , esa isliye kyunki jab karan or uske bich sab kuch pahale jesa tha , to wo roj apne bhai yani karan se subah milte hi ye swaal kerti thi , jisme uska karan k liye prem or chinta saf saf jhalakti thi , or aaj karan k mood ko itna acha dekh or samne se usse baat kerte dekh , usne ye swal dobara kiya

Wahi talilf to karan ko bhi hui , per usne fesla kal rat ko hi ker liya tha jyoti k samjhane se ki vo ab radha ko nazarandaz ni karega , or dhidhire dhire use uski sikh deker use maaf bhi ker dalega.

Rohan karan se :- kyu be kamine hume itni subah subah bula liya ir khud lad sahab ki tarah late aaraha h

Karan :- abe isme meri koi galti ji h , puch teri jyoti bahan se iske kaaran hi hume deri hui.

Ye baat karan ne jyoti ki or dekhte hue sabse najre bacha ankh marte hue boli , jisse jyoti sharma gayi.

Rohan :- chal jhute , meri bahan kabhi deri ni kerti , tu hi h ek late latif, kyu jyoti.

Jyoti :- or ni to kya bhai , ye janab ti ghode bech k so rahe the , badi muskil se uthaya h mane.

Yu bolke jyoti ne apna sara thikra karan k sir p dal diya.

Rohan :- dekha m to bol hi raha tha , ki mana apni jyoti me 30 40 kg extra h per apni jyoti aalsi ni h.

Ye bol rohan has pada or sath me karan bhi .

Jyoti :- bhai apne fir se mujhe moti bola, aaj to aap gaye .

Ye bol jyoti rohan k piche bhagne lagi or yu hi masti majak k sath sabne khana finish kiya or sab railway station pahunch gaye swati ko pick kerne .

Or jesa ki apne india ki khasiyat kaho ya ajuba train hamesha ki tarah late thi.

Aakhir apni india h hi esa desh jaha 1.30 bhi jaker kisi se station pe puch sakte h ki bhaisahab ye 1 baje wali train kab tak aayegi.

Karan apne sabhi dosto k sath platform pe swati ka intezaar kerne Laga .

Thodi der baad train aagayi or swati uteri jise dekh sab uski or bhage , sabse pahale jaker jyoti swati k gale mili .

Swati bhi itne dino baad apni student kam.choti bahan ko dekh bahut khush hui.

Fir karan bhi age badh swati k gale mila , jise dekh swati khush to hui , per jhuta gussa dikhate hue, karan or jyoti k kan khichte hue.

Swati :- kyu re shetano , ab bada didi didi ker rahe ho or ese ek baar bhi phone bhi ni kerte.

Karan dard ka natak kerte hue :- aah dard ho raha h , ab chod bhi dijiye na madam .

Ye sunte hi swati muskurate hue karan k halke se chapat lagate hue :- badmash tu ni sudhrega.

Darasal karan or jyoti jab chote the or swati se tution lete the tab swati ko vo kabhi kabhi madam bolker chidate the , or swati bhi chidti thi or wo unhe baar baar yahi bolti k vo use didi bole.

Fir kuch der yu hi bhai bahano ka milap k baad sab karan k ghar ki or nikal gaye.

Wahi dusri or

Ek aadmi raat ko sunsaan raste se gadi chalaye kahi se apne ghar ki or lot raha tha ki tabhi use raste me ek orat lift mangti dikhi .

Dikhne m wo aaspas k ganv ki hi lag rahi thi , us admi ne gadi roki to wo orat boli.

Orat :- sahab mujhe aage , shivpuri tak chod denge , wo darasal meri aakhiri bus chut gayi h or yaha rukna surakshit ni h.

Aadmi :- hmm , thik h betho.

Orat gadi m beth gayi or aadmi gadi chalane laga . Tabhi orat boli.

Orat :- sahab aapko yu itni raat ko in jungle m safar kerte dar ni lagta.

Admi :- isme dar kesa , ye to mera kam h, konsa yaha jungli janvar h


Orat :- janvar to ni sahab per mane suna h yaha dayane ghumti h , jo is raste pe aane wale har musafir ko maar dalti h.

Aadmi us orat ki or dekhte hue :- ab usse kya darna jo pahale hi mar chuki ho, m kisi se ni darta , chahe wo dayan ho ya pret.

Abhi us admi ne itna bola hi tha ki wo orat bhayanak aawaz me boli.

Orat :-. Acha tu kisi se ni derta , jara m bhi to dekhu.

Orat ki aawaz sun aadmi ne jhat se car rok jese hi uski or dekha to kya paya ki wo orat koi insan ni ek dayan thi , jo ab apne asli roop m aagayi thi or bahut bhayanak thi.

Dayan haste hue :- bahut bahadur ban raha tha na , ab dekhte h ki tu apni mot se kese bachta h

Ye bol dayan ne jo hi us aadmi ka gala paka, to uska hath jalne laga or wo chilane lagi

Dayan tadapte hue :- kon h tu , ye sab kese hua.

Tab us admi ne kamini muskan k sath apni ful sleeve shirt k hath ka button khola.

Or jese hi us dayan ki najar us aadmi k hath pe padi uski fat k hath me aagayi or uske muh se bas itna hi nikla.

Dayan :- tttttritya .

Admi :- ha or wo bhi koi mamuli trittya ni , trittyao ka yuvraaj markesh.

Gadi se bahar nikal

Ji ha dosto wo aadmi or koi ni markesh tha.

Markesh ka naam sun dayan ki halat kharab ho gayi or wo gadi se bahar nikali or markesh k pero m gir k mafi mangne lagi.

Dayan :- malik mafi , mujhe bevkuf ko maaf ker dijiye m aapko pahachan na payi.

Markesh tez aawaz me :- apni jaban nikal bahar .

Markesh ki tez aawaz sun dayan dar k mare wesa hi kerti h or us darinde ne dayan ki jibh khich k nikal di , jisse wo dayan tadafne lagi, lekin jibh na hone ki vajah se chila na payi.

Markesh :- galti to tune ki h tuch dasi , per sirf mujhe pahuchane ki hi ni , ager teri sirf ye galti hoti to shayad tu bach bhi jati , lekin tune galti ni ek apradh kiya h , ek insaan ko trishastra ka raaz bata ker .

Bhaiya samrat ne tere khandan ko bade bharose se is raaz ko raaz rakhne ki jimedari di thi , per tu ni mani ab iski ek hi saza h , wo h keval mot.

Ye bol markesh ne us dayan ki gardan tod ke usko nark pahuncha diya.

Markesh :- ni chodunga tumhe m dusht ladki , ab tera samna trittyao k yuvraaj se hoga.

Per sala samjh ni aaraha aakhir wo kon tha , jisne is dayan se trishastra ka raaz uglvaya , jo bhi ho ab vo bhi jald hi marega

Ye bol markesh waha se apni gadi leker nikal gaya.

Wahi dusri or

Naina raat ko yuhi apni jindagi me chal rahi uthal puthal k bare me sochte hue shahr ki khubsurti ko nihar rahi thi , jo raat ko lights ki roshni me jagmaga raha tha .

Tabhi naina ko apne piche kisi k hone ka abas hua or vo jhat se piche ghumi.

Piche ghumte hi usne jis shaks ko apne samne paya , unhe dekh vo chonk gayi or thodi khush bhi hui or uske muh se bas itna nikla .

Naina :- aap yaha

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

Stay tuned

Note :- sorry for late update friends , and ha ek baat bata du , markesh ne jiska jikra kiya wo kaal ni h , isliye ab aap guess kijiye wo kon ho sakta h ya sakti h

Jabardast Bhai

Ab bohot jald Naina & KJ Megha ko Samrath ke kaid se mukt kardegi magar KJ Megha ke kya lagte hai?.... Aur ye Naina kyu chock gayi Kahi iske Baba to Nahi hai ye?...

Aur yaha Markesh bhi Naina ki khoj Mai nikla hai magar abhi tak Dandnayak apna kartavya purn Karne nikla Nahi... Akhir kab Hoga inka Naina se Milan?

 

[FRIDAY]

Very romantic & hot update....

Jioty aur karan dheere dheere se aur kareeb a rahe hai.Isse unka pyar aur zyada bad raha hai.
Megha ko bhi Naina ke aane ka avas ho gya.Shani ke darshan se wo bhi nishchit ho gya.Magar karan ke leke Shani chintit kiu hai?
Awesome update....
Milte hai next update me....
Tab tak ke liye....
Ta-ta!

 

[Mathur]

Nice one brother

KJ ki bonding kaafi shi chal rhi hai aur RADHA aur RIYA ko unki sikh bhi deni hai well SWATI ke samne toh koi panga nhi hoga itna pka hai

MEGHA ne teeno kaha mtlb uska ASHA ke sath koi na koi relation tha aur hum sabko pta hai ki NAINA aur KJ do alag alag MAA ki santane hain toh koi na koi ASHA se hi blood relation possible hai kahin vo ASHA ki koi behan toh nhi jo sach janti ho aur ASHA ka bacha apni kokh mai transfer kiya ho yan kahin vo ASHA ka hi koi roop toh nhi like CHAYA maa bhi toh ek roop hi thi vaise hi MEGHA bhi ek roop yan saya ho ASHA ka well yeh mera kaafi confidence vala guess hai

MARKESH khud maidan mai aaya hai mtlb kaafi jyada serious topic hai kyunki vo toh NAINA ke case mai bhi nhi aaya tha aur ab TRISHASTRA ke case mai nikal kar aaya hai toh yeh baat samjhi ja sakti hai ki vo SHASTRA kitna powerful aur SAMRAT yan kisi aur ke liye kitna khatarnak ho skta hai

jaise hume pta hai 2 part mil chuke hai shatra ke ek KARAN ke pass hai toh dusra NAINA ke pass mtlb JYOTI hi bachi hai usse hassil karne se aur yeh shastra jab teeno part milenge tabhi kaam krta hai mtlb KJ aur NAINA ka aamna samna hoga aur MEGHA ne TEENO kaha tha mtlb teeno shayad sath milkr MEGHA ko aazad karayenge

NAINA ke pass master ji ke alava koi aur aa skta hai iska doubt hai kya pta koi new character bhi ho as NAINA toh kuch hi bando se mili hai VEER aur PREETY bhi ho skte hain jo shayad NAINA ka yantra thik krke usse surprise dene ke liye aayen ho
Well mai guess hi kar skta hoon

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
Sorry for late review
YOUR REGULAR READER

 

[Dark Devil]

Superb update HARRY BHAI
kaafi dino baad review de Raha hu
Uske liye sorry pehle to

Ye Wala update badhiya tha
Maza aa gya. Hope to see some
More romantic scenes in future too.
Bhai agar aap sex scene daal rahe
Ho to wo aap pe depend karta hai.


Ye markesh k pass itna dimaag
Kaha se aa gya ki use trishastra
Ki leak Hui bàat k baare mein pata
Chal Jaye. Ek baar to lag Raha k
VP hi markesh ko maar dega.
Waise Naina ki MAA ne aisi konsi
Galti ki Hui hai Jo future mein
Karan ko effect Kar sakti hai.

Karan kàb pahunchega apne
Dada aur Nana k Ghar aur kaise
Wo waha ki problems ko solve
Karega. Aur ek khaas baat Karan
Aur Jyoti ka Naina k saath kàb
Milan hoga kyunki Naina ko
Karan and Jyoti ki jaroorat padegi
Samrat se ladne k liye.

I think Naina ko ab rukk k thoda
Dhayan lagane ki avashyakta hai
Jisse wo bhi apni soyi Hui shaktiyon
Ko jagrit Kar sake kyunki ab to uska
Yantra bhi uske paas nai hai.

Naina ne is Safar ki shuruat mein ek
Baar apna gusse Wala Roop gaon walo
Ko dikhaya tha use apni us taqat ko Bahar
Laana chahiye aur use control bhi karna
Chahiye. Naina Kya Karan ki second wife
Hogi kyunki Sonam ka to pata chal gya
Hai ki uske Dil mein Karan k liye Kya feelings
Hai.

Waise Karan Radha aur Riya ko kàb maaf
Karega kyunki ab to kaafi samay beet gya
Hai Radha aur Riya ko is saza ko bhogte hue.
Karan aur Jyoti ko ab in dono ko maaf Kar
Dena chahiye aur unhe bhi khusi Deni
Chahiye jiske liye wo bechari kitne maheeno
Se Taras Rahi hai.

Waiting for the next update

 

[Aakash.]

Sorry for the late review bro, I was busy with some work. Great update as always.
Shani Dev has told the good news to Megha and she is very happy to hear this. The love between Karan and Jyoti continues to grow and the physical relationship of the two is slowly moving forward. Glad that soon the resentment between Radha Riya and Karan will go away.
Harry brother, you are writing a very good story, now let's see what happens next in the story till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You....

 

[Awara Ashiq]

Nice update

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Har ek scene lajawab dikhaya h aapne.
Chahe vo megha or Shani Dev ki baten ho ya Karan or Jyoti ka hansi mazak or romans ya fir markash ka kroor role.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar