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Update no :- 128
Wahi dusri or

Sab aaj ghumne firne k kaaran thak chuke the or bister pe lette hi sabko nind aaaagayi thi.

Ghar ka har ek member chen ki nind so raha tha sivay ek ko chod ker , jo or koi ni apna hero karan hi tha.

Karan ki ankho me nind dur dur tak ni thi , thi to bas dukh or or chinta ka bhav.

Kuch to baat thi jiske kaaran karan chintit or dukhi tha.

Karan kuch der to yu hi leta raha , lekin thodi der baad usse raha na gaya or wo jyoti ko dhire se apne se alag kkerta h , jo uske sine se lage so rahi thi or wo teleport ho gaya.

Teleport ho sidhe karan pahunch gaya ek bade se ghar k ek kamre me jisme andhera ho rakha tha.

Or samne ek bister pe ek pyari si ladki soyi hui thi , jiske chahre pe duniya bhar ki masumiyat to thi , lekin uski ankho k aaspas ansuo k nishan pad gaye the.

Jise dekh saf hi pata chal raha tha ki vo sone se pahale khub hi royi thi or rote rote hi so gayi.

Us ladki ki ye halat dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha , wo bina aawaz kiye dhire dhire us ladki k pas gaya or wahi bister k side m wo ghutne k bal beth gaya or halke se uske hath ko apne hatho me le bolne laga.

Karan :- janta hu , mere is vyavahar se tumhe kitni taklif ho rahi h meri gudiya , tujhe kitna kasht pahunch raha h mere katu shabdo se .

Per mera yakin maan meri gudiya , meri pyari radha , jitna kasht or pida tujhe mere shabdo se mil rahi h ,usse kayi guna dukh or pida tere is bhai ko mil rahi h .

Yakin maan meri gudiya m aaj bhi tera wo hi bhaiya hu , jo kuch bhi sah sakta h per apni radha or baki apni bahano k ankho me ansu ni.

Per meri gudiya tumne past me galti hi esi ki h gudiya jis kaaran tujhe or tere is bhai hum dono ko is kasht ko jhelna pad raha h.

Janta hu m jo bhi hua usme na to teri na hi riya di ki puri tarah se galti ni thi , parantu tumhe or di dono ko ye sikhna aavashyak hoga ki rishte me yadi vishwas na ho , jto us rishte ka koi matlab ni rahata.

Karan kuch der yu hi radha ka hath pakde khud se hi bolta raha , karan ki shakti k prbhav se radha ghahri nind me so rahi thi.

Per gahari nind me hote hue bhi achanak tab uske chahre udasi ki jagah ek pyari si muskan aagayi , jese use pata chal gaya ho , ki uska bhai uske pass betha h.

Ye radha ka karan k liye prem hi to tha , jiske kaaran use nind me bhi apne bhai k sparsh ka pata chal gaya .

Mana radha ne past me jo kiya tha wo galat tha , lekin karan ka kahana sahi tha , uski usme puri tarah se bhi galti ni thi .

Or use ab apni galti ka sache man se pachtava bhi tha , ye radha ka prem hi to tha , jisne dand nayak ki apne liye narajgi ko khatam ker diya tha.

Karan abhi yu hi betha tha ki usko apne man me jyoti ki aawaj sunayi di.

Jyoti :- bhai kaha h aap.

Karan :- bas abhi aaya gudiya

Karan dhire se radha k hath ko wapas sahi se rakhta h or karan k or dhire se uth ker jane laga.

Lekin jate jate wo fir se ruka or ek baar wapas se radha k pass gaya or ek pyar bhari kiss uske mathe pe ker dali.

Karan k kiss kerte hi radha ka sharir kuch second k liye chamakne laga or fir jab wo wapas normal hui to ab vo bilkul pahale jese ho gayi thi.

Matlab ki ab uske chahre ka noor lot aaya tha , uski ankho k dhabbe gayab ho gaye or uska kamzoor sharir wapas se healthy ho gaya.

Karan muskurata hua waha se gayab ho gaya or karan k jate hi radha jo karan k prabhav se ghahri nind me so gayi thi , ab wo uth gayi thi.

Radha uthte hue :- bhaiiiiiii.....

Wo jaldi uth ker k kamre ki light on ker idher udher ese ghumne lagi , jese k kisi ko dhund rahi ho.

Radha :- bhai to yaha ni h , to mane jo mahasus kiya kya wo koi sapna tha.

(Udas hote hue ) hmm shayad sapna hi hoga or vese bhi vo ab yaha kyu aayenge (nam ankho se) mane gunah hi esa kiya h

Tabhi radha ki najar samne lage mirror pe padi , or jese hi usne khud ko dekha wo chonk gayi , apne aap ko pahale jesa dekh.

Radha ko karan ka ahasas hone or apne aapko pahale jesa dekh , ab uske man me ek positiveness peda hho gayi thi , or usne apne bhai ko wapas pane ka nirnay ko or bhi drid ker liya.

Or ek muskan k sath wo wapas sone chali gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Jyoti apne bed pe bethi karan ka intezar kar rahi thi , tabhi karan waha prakat hua.

Karan jaker jyoti k pas betha h or ek side se jyoti ko seene se laga k pucha.

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri gf soyi ni abhi tak.

Jyoti :- ab jis ladki ka bf adhi adhi raat ko bahar ghum raha ho usse chup ker to nind kaha aayegi meri jaan.

Karan kuch ni bolta.

Jyoti pyaar se :- itni raat ko kaha gaye the bhai aap.

Karan hichkicate hue :- kuch ni gudiya bas yu hi nind ni aarahi thi to socha thoda bahar ghum aayu.

Jyoti karan ka jhut pakadte hue ankh dikhate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii...

Karan :- are batata hu yaar , darati kyu h.

Karan fir use sari baat batata h jyoti ko , jisse sun jyoti boli.

Jyoti pyar se karan k galo ko sahalate hue :- to isme chupane wali kya baat h bhaiya , jabki aap jante ho ki aap mujhse jhut ni bol sakte.

Or m bhale hi radha se naraj hou , per wo aapke sath sath meri bhi pyari bahan or m bhi aapke jitna hi usse pyar kekerti hu , or m ye bhi janti hu ki aapke or radha k bich kya hua tha.

Per bhai hum jo bhi ker rahe h , usiki bhalayi k liye hi to ker rahe h , taki use rishto ki ahamiyat ka ahasas ho.

Karan :- per gudiya , tumne dekha ni , kya halat bana li thi usne apni , kitni kamzor ho gayi thi vo or bhua ne bhi mujhe bataya tha, wo apna bilkul khayal ni rakhti or na hi dhang se khati piti h, to tumhi batao ,kese najar andaz ker du m apni radha ko.

Jyoti :- mane esa kab kaha bhai aap use najar andaz ker dijiye , m jo kahana chah rahi hu , vo samjhiye bhai.

Karan kuch der sochta raha or fir uske chahre pe muskan aagayi.

Usne jyoti k dono galo or hotho pe kiss kerte huhue bola

Karan :- m samjh gaya meri gudiya tum kya kahana chahti ho , you are so smart my lil sister ,sach me yaar tum na hoti to mera kya hota .

Jyoti karan k gaal khichte hue :- I know my cutie golu brother.

Karan jyoti ka hath hatate hue :-. Are yaar esa mat ker , tu to janti h na , mujhe ye pasand ni ki mere koi gal khinche.

Jyoti masti kerte hue dobara khichte :- per mujhe tto bahut pasand h , apne bhaiya k ye gol matol gal , man to kerta h kha jau inhe.

Karan. :-. Are baap re lagta h pret raj ne tumhe vardan de ker galti ker di.

Jyoti ;- esa kyu.

Karan :- or ni to kya bhuto ki rani banker khud bhi chudel hi ban gayi h , jab dekho mujhe khane ki hi bate kerti rahati h , lagta h ab kamra change kerna padega.

Jyoti jhutmut ka gussa kerte hue :- kya bole m chudel , ruko abhi batati hu ki chudel kya hoti h.

Karan ne bhagne ki koshis ki per jyoti ne use daboch liya or uske uper chad gayi

Jyoti :- ab m apko dikhati hu chudel kya hoti h .

Or ye bol k jyoti jhuk ker karan k pahale ek gal pe kiss kerti h .

Karan :- are wah ager sari chudele esi ho jaye to logo k to maje ho jaye.

Lekin tabhi jyoti ne karan k us gal ko kiss kerte hue kaat liya .

Or esa hi usne karan k dusre gaal pe kiya .

Karan :- ouch kya ker rahi h.

Jyoti :- kyu abhi to bade maje aarahe the na aapko ,lo or maje lo.

Jyoti ne esa 3 char baar kiya or fir usne karan k hoto p bhi kat liya.

Lekin tabhi karan ne moke ka fayda utha ker jyoti k hotho ko chum kiss ker liya .

Jisse ek baar jyoti chonki or sharma gayi , lekin karan ne ek hatho se se jyoti k chahre ko uper kiya or uski najro ko apni najaro se milaya.

Jese hi dono ki najre mili kuch der wo dono ek dusre ki ankho me kho se gaye or

Karan :- I love u jyoti

Jyoti :- I love u tooooo bhai.

Ye bolne k baad dono ko pata hi na chala dono k honth kab ek dusre se kab mil gaye.

Or fir shuru ho gayi dono k hoto ki prem roopi jang, jisme kabhi jyoti k uper wale hoth chum raha tha , to kabhi niche wale .

Jyoti bhi karan ka bharpoor sath de rahi thi , dhire dhire karan or jyoti ki kiss halki si wild hone lagi , karan ne jyoti ko pith se pakad k palat gaya , ab karab uper tha or jyoti niche.

Karan ki chati jyoti k chati se puri tarah chuki hui thi , unke bich hava nikalne ki bhi jagah na thi .

Tabhi jyoti ne apni jibh karan k hotho se lagayi , karan jyoti ka ishara samjh gaya or usne apna muh khol jyoti ki jibh ko muh me leliya or use chusne laga.

Undono ki kiss kafi der tak chali , fir jyoti ne aaj kuch aagaya badhne ki sochi or usne karan k ek hath ko pakad apne ek sthan pe rakh diya.

Karan ne hath jhat se hath hatate hye bola :- gudiya kya abhi ye sab sahi hoga , mere khayal se hume or kuch time llena chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu sahi ni hoga bhai , m aapse pyaar kerti hu or ap mujhse .

Ha m ye baat ache se janti hu ki aapko mere jism se ni meri aatma se prem h.

Parantu bhai ye prem krida ya kam krida bhi to prem ka hi ek hissa h or prem se judi koi chij bhala galat kese ho sakti h.

Or vese bhi aaj ni to kal humme ye sab to hona hi h , kyunki humari niyati hi esi h , to fir insab me esa jhijhakna kyu.

Karan :- hmm baat to teri sahi h , thik h , ager tu aage bhadna chahti h or isme teri marji h to thik h , per abhi isse jyada ni.

Jyoti :- ok baba , ab apne or mere romantic mood ko kharab mat kijiye mr sharma.

Karan ankh marte hue :- are jo hukum mis sharma.

Or phir dono me kissing start hui or fir ek baar jyoti ne apne sine pe karan ka hath rakha , is bar karan thoda jhijakte hue jyoti k boobs ko halke se sahalate hue dabane laga.

Jisse jyoti chihunk uthi , kyunki ye jyoti ki life ka first experience tha , verna aajkal ki ladkiya to 16 sal ki umer me hi kya kya ker chuki hoti h .

Lekin ye karan k liye uska nischal prem or asha k sanskaro ka asar tha , jiske kaaran in sab chijo ki or usne dekha bhi ni tha.

Jyoti :-. Aah bhai aaram se.

Karan piche hatate hue :- kya hua gudiya , mane kahi jyada jor se to na daba diya.

Jyoti sharmate hue apne matha little hue :- oh god , bhai you are so cute , kitne bhole ho , lekin buddu bhi , lagta h aapko abhi bahut kuch sikhana hoga.

Karan bhondu si shakal bana ker :- ab mane kya kiya .

Jyoti haste hue :- kuch ni mere golu bhaiya.

Ab chaliye aaj k liye bahut ho gaya romance , ab so jaiye kal swati di aane wali h.

Ye bol vo karan ko side m leta usse chipak ker so gayi .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- jaipur

Kulbhata ko aatank mukt ker naina or uske dost jaipur ki or nikal gaye the , jo waha se kuch 70 km ki duri pe hi sthit tha .

Gadi preety drive ker rahi thi or naina aage uske sath me bethi hui thi or aaj un dono saheliyon ne veer ko piche patak diya tha.

Dono hi chup chap bethi thi , naina ka samjh me aata h ki vo apna yantra khone k kaaran udaas thi , lekin preety kyu , aaiye jante h.

Veer :- kya baat h bhai aaj to chamatkar ho gaya , ek gadi me do do ladkiya bethi h , fir bhi itni shanti.

Preety gusse muh ferte hue : - haamm.

Veer preety k galo pe hath pherte hue ;- kya baat h bhai , aaj meri jaan itni gusse m kyu h.

Preety naina se :- sister tum bol do inhe , ki mujhe inse koi baat ni kerni .

Veer :- esa kyu bhai , janeman itna to sitam mat dhao apne is aashiq per.

Veer ki ye baat sun preety or naina dono ki hasi chut gayi , lekin preety ne khud ko control kiya.

Naina haste hue :- kya baat h jiju , aap to pure k pure romeo ho gaye.

Veer :-. Vo kya h na sali sahiba , ab jiski aapki sister jesi beautiful or pyari gf hogi , vo romeo to banega hi na.

Naina ;- vo to thik h ,per lag raha h , hamari sister yani ki aapki gf naraj h aapse .

Veer :- vahi to , jara aap puchiye to sahi ki unke sajan se esi kya galti ho gayi ki vo yu muh felaye bethi h.

Preety veer ki bate sun to sharmate hue ander hi ander bahut khush ho rahi thi , per usne apna jhuta gussa dikhate hue boli.

Preety :- sister kah do apne jiju se , jo apni mangetar se itni badi baat chupaye ki uske pas bhi powers h , to wo bhala gussa na hogi to aari utaregi

Naina :- oh ho love birds , gf bf se sidha mangetar , bahut fast ja rahe ho , ager esa hi chalta raha to kuch dino m kahi ye news na mile mujhe ki m masi banne wali hu.

Preety naina k mukka marte hue :- kya sister kuch bhi bolti ho.

Nains :- vese veer preety ka gussa to jayaj h , tumne itni badi baat humse chupayi kyu , or tumhe ye mahan shiv rudraksh kaha se mili

Veer :- tum janti ho iske baare me.

Naina :- ha veer tumhare gale me mojud ye shiv rudraksh koi aam rudraksh ni ek bahut hi durlabh rudraksh ki mala h , jiske bij keval himalay me paye jate h , inhe swayam bhagavan shankar ka roop mana jata h , ye tumhare pas kaha se or kab aayi.

Itna to m janti hu ki ye tumhare pas shuru se to thi ni , verna thakur k pret ka vaar tumhara kuch na bigad pata iske hote hue.

Veer man me :- lagta h ab sach batane ka samay aagaya h.

Veer :- naina m tumhe iske bare me jarur bataunga , lekin rk jagah aaram se beth ker , pahale hum jis kaam k liye jaipur ja rahe h vo to pura ker le.

Naina veer ki baat maan jati h or fir 3no jaipur pahunchte h or waha sabse pahale ek hotel m 2 room book ker thoda aaram kerte h or fir nikal jate h , jaipur k sabse pavitra sthano me se ek galta ji tirth ki or.

Galta ji basically surya temple h , per yaha or bhi kayi devi devtao ke prasidh temples h.

Yaha per ek kund bhi , jiske pani k strot ka aaj tak koi pata na laga paya, lekin iske snan se milne wala punya ganga snan jitna hi h.

Naina or uske dost yaha jaker sabse pahale kund me snan kerte h or fir kuch mandiro k darshan kerte h.

Fir naina apne us tute hue yantra ko ek kele ke patte me lapet k last baar dekhte hue boli.

Naina :- maaf kerna baba , apki beti aapki is antim nishani ko na sambhal payi , parantu abhi bhi aapki ye bet har ni manegi , wo kese bhi kerke apni maa yani aapki bahan ko jarur mukt kerwayegi or us dusht samraat ka ant karegi.

Ye bolte hue usne apne us yantra ko kund me visarjit ker diya.

Or fir 3no friends thoda bahut jaipur ghumne k baad sidha apne hotel pahunche .

Jaha naina or preety ne phir se veer ne apne sawalo ki bhochar ker di.

Tab veer ne unhe rokte hue.

Veer :-. Are ruko bhai , jara sas to lo.

Veer :- yaad h preety m jab master ji k kaam or naina ki salamti ki dua mangne delhi gaya tha.

Veer ne fir shuru se leker ant tak sari kahani naina or preety ko bata di

Preeti :- to tum ye kahana chahte ho ki karan bhai or jyoti di ne tumhe shaktiya or mala di or unke pass bhi shaktiya bhi h

impossible, aakhir 2 aam insano k paas itni shakti kese ho sakti ho.

Veer :- tum kahi majak to ni ker rahi jaan , humne ab tak itna kuch dekha or itne experience hue , fir bhi tumko esa lag raha h.

Naina sari kahani sun kahi kho si gayi thi.

Naina :- naam kya bataya tumne unka veer .

Veer :- karan or jyoti.

Naina ne to jese ye naam suna use to mano ek alag hi anubhuti hui , mano jesa barso pahale khoyi koi amulya chij ya sambhandh use mil gaya ho, uske man ko ek anokhi shanti or tripti mahasus hui.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp apne dono rakshaso k sath apne plan bana raha tha ki ek doot bhagta hua aaya.

Doot :- pranam maharaj.

Vp :- itna ghabraye hue kyu ho bolo

Doot :- maharaj ek heran ker dene wali khabar h, rani vrushali ab ni rahi.

Vp chonker uchhalte hue :- kyaa , kisne kisne kiya ye sab.

Doot :- maharaj jyada to ni pata , per guptacharon ka kahana h ki 2 insano ne rani ko parajit ker unhe atmdah pe majbur ker dala.

2sra doot :- are murkh mahaprabhu ko puri khabar to bata.

(Vp ) mahaprabhu ham jo kah rahe h vo shat pratishat sahi h , rani k ant ka kaaran un 2 manushy me se ek yuvak tha , jisse wo prem ker bethi , parantu vo yuvak kisi dusri ladki se prem kerta h , jo ki ek trittya h , or uski wo premika bhi unke sath mojud thi ranbhumi m rani vaishali k khilaf.

Vp :-. Asambhav, kahi madira pan to ni kiya tumne murkh , jo ye bakwaas ker rahe ho.

Doot :- ni maharaj mane jo bhi kaha vo purntah satya h

Jalasur :- maharaj kahi esa to ni ki wo rakshak karan hi vo yuvak tha .

Aagneysur :- ni mere hisab se to esa asambhav h kyunki humare guptacharon ki 24 ghante unper najar h, or unki suchna k anusar wo dono apne shahar se bahar tak na gaye.

Vp.gusse se :- to ye sab kiya kisne , kon naya shatru aagaya h ab yu achanak hum danvo ka or kon h vo gaddar trittya , jo apne hi kul ki shatru bani hui h.

(Kuch der shant rahane k baad ) samraat kaha h , kya usko itna bhi gyaat ni ki uske rajya me hi uski hi prajati ki ek trittya bhagwat pe uter aayi h.

Doot :- mahaprabhu , maharaj samraat apni tantra sadhna k liye apne gupt sthan pe gaye h or rajya ki bagdor yuvraj markesh ko sambhla ke.

Vp gusse se :- kya samraat ka dimag kharab ho gaya h , jo usne markesh ko itni bada dayitv diya h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo murkh budhi ka bilkul prayog ni kerta , bas apne jhute ahankaar me lipt ho keval bal se kam leta h .

(Apne duto se) ab meri shakal kya dekh rahe ho murkho jao pata lagao kaha h samraat.

Doot :- jo aagya maharaj.

Ye bol ker doot waha se nikal gaye.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi

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Romantic Update Bhai

Karan aur Jyoti ab pyaar ki seedhiyo pe dheere2 chadh rahe hai... aur wahi Radha ne bhi Karan ko manane Ka nirnay dradh kar liya...

Dusri or Naina ko Karan aur Jyoti ke bare Mai pata chal gaya shayad ab inka milan hone wala hai... Kyu ki ab VP ko bhi unke bareme gyat hone wala hai...

Eagerly waiting 4 next update
 

Iron Man

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Super fantastic mind-blowing dhashu update
To karan or jyoti ka pyar ek kadam aage bdh gya hai .
Karan shayd ab jld hi radha aur Riya ko sabak dekar maff kr de.
To naina ko karan or jyoti ke bare pta chl gya , use bhi kuchh mhshush ho rha hai.
Ummid h ab jld hi karan or naina milenge ab samrat ke taraf se vp aa gya hai to naina team karan ke bina unka samna nhi kr skti .
Waiting for next awesome update
 

Aakash.

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We can never be angry with the one we love, the same is happening with Karan, on the one hand he is angry with Radha and Riya, on the other hand he loves both very much and maybe soon he forgives both his sisters too.
Both Karan and Jyoti are in love with each other and are slowly getting lost in the depths of love. this is just the begining.
Veer tells Naina and Preeti how he has gained powers and after hearing the whole story, Naina gets to know about Karan and Jyoti.
A very beautiful update, now let's see what happens next in the story. Waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You....:heart:
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kafi achha pyar or manodasha ka varnan kiya h karan ka.
Wahi Jyoti or Karan ke bich romantic scene bhi kamal ka.
Veer Naina or Preety ki masti achhi lagi or unko sari kahani bhi pata chal gyi.
Or idhar patallok me halchal shuru ho gyi , ye to hona hi tha.
After all ek fantastic or kamal ka update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


Update no :- 128
Wahi dusri or

Sab aaj ghumne firne k kaaran thak chuke the or bister pe lette hi sabko nind aaaagayi thi.

Ghar ka har ek member chen ki nind so raha tha sivay ek ko chod ker , jo or koi ni apna hero karan hi tha.

Karan ki ankho me nind dur dur tak ni thi , thi to bas dukh or or chinta ka bhav.

Kuch to baat thi jiske kaaran karan chintit or dukhi tha.

Karan kuch der to yu hi leta raha , lekin thodi der baad usse raha na gaya or wo jyoti ko dhire se apne se alag kkerta h , jo uske sine se lage so rahi thi or wo teleport ho gaya.

Teleport ho sidhe karan pahunch gaya ek bade se ghar k ek kamre me jisme andhera ho rakha tha.

Or samne ek bister pe ek pyari si ladki soyi hui thi , jiske chahre pe duniya bhar ki masumiyat to thi , lekin uski ankho k aaspas ansuo k nishan pad gaye the.

Jise dekh saf hi pata chal raha tha ki vo sone se pahale khub hi royi thi or rote rote hi so gayi.

Us ladki ki ye halat dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha , wo bina aawaz kiye dhire dhire us ladki k pas gaya or wahi bister k side m wo ghutne k bal beth gaya or halke se uske hath ko apne hatho me le bolne laga.

Karan :- janta hu , mere is vyavahar se tumhe kitni taklif ho rahi h meri gudiya , tujhe kitna kasht pahunch raha h mere katu shabdo se .

Per mera yakin maan meri gudiya , meri pyari radha , jitna kasht or pida tujhe mere shabdo se mil rahi h ,usse kayi guna dukh or pida tere is bhai ko mil rahi h .

Yakin maan meri gudiya m aaj bhi tera wo hi bhaiya hu , jo kuch bhi sah sakta h per apni radha or baki apni bahano k ankho me ansu ni.

Per meri gudiya tumne past me galti hi esi ki h gudiya jis kaaran tujhe or tere is bhai hum dono ko is kasht ko jhelna pad raha h.

Janta hu m jo bhi hua usme na to teri na hi riya di ki puri tarah se galti ni thi , parantu tumhe or di dono ko ye sikhna aavashyak hoga ki rishte me yadi vishwas na ho , jto us rishte ka koi matlab ni rahata.

Karan kuch der yu hi radha ka hath pakde khud se hi bolta raha , karan ki shakti k prbhav se radha ghahri nind me so rahi thi.

Per gahari nind me hote hue bhi achanak tab uske chahre udasi ki jagah ek pyari si muskan aagayi , jese use pata chal gaya ho , ki uska bhai uske pass betha h.

Ye radha ka karan k liye prem hi to tha , jiske kaaran use nind me bhi apne bhai k sparsh ka pata chal gaya .

Mana radha ne past me jo kiya tha wo galat tha , lekin karan ka kahana sahi tha , uski usme puri tarah se bhi galti ni thi .

Or use ab apni galti ka sache man se pachtava bhi tha , ye radha ka prem hi to tha , jisne dand nayak ki apne liye narajgi ko khatam ker diya tha.

Karan abhi yu hi betha tha ki usko apne man me jyoti ki aawaj sunayi di.

Jyoti :- bhai kaha h aap.

Karan :- bas abhi aaya gudiya

Karan dhire se radha k hath ko wapas sahi se rakhta h or karan k or dhire se uth ker jane laga.

Lekin jate jate wo fir se ruka or ek baar wapas se radha k pass gaya or ek pyar bhari kiss uske mathe pe ker dali.

Karan k kiss kerte hi radha ka sharir kuch second k liye chamakne laga or fir jab wo wapas normal hui to ab vo bilkul pahale jese ho gayi thi.

Matlab ki ab uske chahre ka noor lot aaya tha , uski ankho k dhabbe gayab ho gaye or uska kamzoor sharir wapas se healthy ho gaya.

Karan muskurata hua waha se gayab ho gaya or karan k jate hi radha jo karan k prabhav se ghahri nind me so gayi thi , ab wo uth gayi thi.

Radha uthte hue :- bhaiiiiiii.....

Wo jaldi uth ker k kamre ki light on ker idher udher ese ghumne lagi , jese k kisi ko dhund rahi ho.

Radha :- bhai to yaha ni h , to mane jo mahasus kiya kya wo koi sapna tha.

(Udas hote hue ) hmm shayad sapna hi hoga or vese bhi vo ab yaha kyu aayenge (nam ankho se) mane gunah hi esa kiya h

Tabhi radha ki najar samne lage mirror pe padi , or jese hi usne khud ko dekha wo chonk gayi , apne aap ko pahale jesa dekh.

Radha ko karan ka ahasas hone or apne aapko pahale jesa dekh , ab uske man me ek positiveness peda hho gayi thi , or usne apne bhai ko wapas pane ka nirnay ko or bhi drid ker liya.

Or ek muskan k sath wo wapas sone chali gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Jyoti apne bed pe bethi karan ka intezar kar rahi thi , tabhi karan waha prakat hua.

Karan jaker jyoti k pas betha h or ek side se jyoti ko seene se laga k pucha.

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri gf soyi ni abhi tak.

Jyoti :- ab jis ladki ka bf adhi adhi raat ko bahar ghum raha ho usse chup ker to nind kaha aayegi meri jaan.

Karan kuch ni bolta.

Jyoti pyaar se :- itni raat ko kaha gaye the bhai aap.

Karan hichkicate hue :- kuch ni gudiya bas yu hi nind ni aarahi thi to socha thoda bahar ghum aayu.

Jyoti karan ka jhut pakadte hue ankh dikhate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii...

Karan :- are batata hu yaar , darati kyu h.

Karan fir use sari baat batata h jyoti ko , jisse sun jyoti boli.

Jyoti pyar se karan k galo ko sahalate hue :- to isme chupane wali kya baat h bhaiya , jabki aap jante ho ki aap mujhse jhut ni bol sakte.

Or m bhale hi radha se naraj hou , per wo aapke sath sath meri bhi pyari bahan or m bhi aapke jitna hi usse pyar kekerti hu , or m ye bhi janti hu ki aapke or radha k bich kya hua tha.

Per bhai hum jo bhi ker rahe h , usiki bhalayi k liye hi to ker rahe h , taki use rishto ki ahamiyat ka ahasas ho.

Karan :- per gudiya , tumne dekha ni , kya halat bana li thi usne apni , kitni kamzor ho gayi thi vo or bhua ne bhi mujhe bataya tha, wo apna bilkul khayal ni rakhti or na hi dhang se khati piti h, to tumhi batao ,kese najar andaz ker du m apni radha ko.

Jyoti :- mane esa kab kaha bhai aap use najar andaz ker dijiye , m jo kahana chah rahi hu , vo samjhiye bhai.

Karan kuch der sochta raha or fir uske chahre pe muskan aagayi.

Usne jyoti k dono galo or hotho pe kiss kerte huhue bola

Karan :- m samjh gaya meri gudiya tum kya kahana chahti ho , you are so smart my lil sister ,sach me yaar tum na hoti to mera kya hota .

Jyoti karan k gaal khichte hue :- I know my cutie golu brother.

Karan jyoti ka hath hatate hue :-. Are yaar esa mat ker , tu to janti h na , mujhe ye pasand ni ki mere koi gal khinche.

Jyoti masti kerte hue dobara khichte :- per mujhe tto bahut pasand h , apne bhaiya k ye gol matol gal , man to kerta h kha jau inhe.

Karan. :-. Are baap re lagta h pret raj ne tumhe vardan de ker galti ker di.

Jyoti ;- esa kyu.

Karan :- or ni to kya bhuto ki rani banker khud bhi chudel hi ban gayi h , jab dekho mujhe khane ki hi bate kerti rahati h , lagta h ab kamra change kerna padega.

Jyoti jhutmut ka gussa kerte hue :- kya bole m chudel , ruko abhi batati hu ki chudel kya hoti h.

Karan ne bhagne ki koshis ki per jyoti ne use daboch liya or uske uper chad gayi

Jyoti :- ab m apko dikhati hu chudel kya hoti h .

Or ye bol k jyoti jhuk ker karan k pahale ek gal pe kiss kerti h .

Karan :- are wah ager sari chudele esi ho jaye to logo k to maje ho jaye.

Lekin tabhi jyoti ne karan k us gal ko kiss kerte hue kaat liya .

Or esa hi usne karan k dusre gaal pe kiya .

Karan :- ouch kya ker rahi h.

Jyoti :- kyu abhi to bade maje aarahe the na aapko ,lo or maje lo.

Jyoti ne esa 3 char baar kiya or fir usne karan k hoto p bhi kat liya.

Lekin tabhi karan ne moke ka fayda utha ker jyoti k hotho ko chum kiss ker liya .

Jisse ek baar jyoti chonki or sharma gayi , lekin karan ne ek hatho se se jyoti k chahre ko uper kiya or uski najro ko apni najaro se milaya.

Jese hi dono ki najre mili kuch der wo dono ek dusre ki ankho me kho se gaye or

Karan :- I love u jyoti

Jyoti :- I love u tooooo bhai.

Ye bolne k baad dono ko pata hi na chala dono k honth kab ek dusre se kab mil gaye.

Or fir shuru ho gayi dono k hoto ki prem roopi jang, jisme kabhi jyoti k uper wale hoth chum raha tha , to kabhi niche wale .

Jyoti bhi karan ka bharpoor sath de rahi thi , dhire dhire karan or jyoti ki kiss halki si wild hone lagi , karan ne jyoti ko pith se pakad k palat gaya , ab karab uper tha or jyoti niche.

Karan ki chati jyoti k chati se puri tarah chuki hui thi , unke bich hava nikalne ki bhi jagah na thi .

Tabhi jyoti ne apni jibh karan k hotho se lagayi , karan jyoti ka ishara samjh gaya or usne apna muh khol jyoti ki jibh ko muh me leliya or use chusne laga.

Undono ki kiss kafi der tak chali , fir jyoti ne aaj kuch aagaya badhne ki sochi or usne karan k ek hath ko pakad apne ek sthan pe rakh diya.

Karan ne hath jhat se hath hatate hye bola :- gudiya kya abhi ye sab sahi hoga , mere khayal se hume or kuch time llena chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu sahi ni hoga bhai , m aapse pyaar kerti hu or ap mujhse .

Ha m ye baat ache se janti hu ki aapko mere jism se ni meri aatma se prem h.

Parantu bhai ye prem krida ya kam krida bhi to prem ka hi ek hissa h or prem se judi koi chij bhala galat kese ho sakti h.

Or vese bhi aaj ni to kal humme ye sab to hona hi h , kyunki humari niyati hi esi h , to fir insab me esa jhijhakna kyu.

Karan :- hmm baat to teri sahi h , thik h , ager tu aage bhadna chahti h or isme teri marji h to thik h , per abhi isse jyada ni.

Jyoti :- ok baba , ab apne or mere romantic mood ko kharab mat kijiye mr sharma.

Karan ankh marte hue :- are jo hukum mis sharma.

Or phir dono me kissing start hui or fir ek baar jyoti ne apne sine pe karan ka hath rakha , is bar karan thoda jhijakte hue jyoti k boobs ko halke se sahalate hue dabane laga.

Jisse jyoti chihunk uthi , kyunki ye jyoti ki life ka first experience tha , verna aajkal ki ladkiya to 16 sal ki umer me hi kya kya ker chuki hoti h .

Lekin ye karan k liye uska nischal prem or asha k sanskaro ka asar tha , jiske kaaran in sab chijo ki or usne dekha bhi ni tha.

Jyoti :-. Aah bhai aaram se.

Karan piche hatate hue :- kya hua gudiya , mane kahi jyada jor se to na daba diya.

Jyoti sharmate hue apne matha little hue :- oh god , bhai you are so cute , kitne bhole ho , lekin buddu bhi , lagta h aapko abhi bahut kuch sikhana hoga.

Karan bhondu si shakal bana ker :- ab mane kya kiya .

Jyoti haste hue :- kuch ni mere golu bhaiya.

Ab chaliye aaj k liye bahut ho gaya romance , ab so jaiye kal swati di aane wali h.

Ye bol vo karan ko side m leta usse chipak ker so gayi .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- jaipur

Kulbhata ko aatank mukt ker naina or uske dost jaipur ki or nikal gaye the , jo waha se kuch 70 km ki duri pe hi sthit tha .

Gadi preety drive ker rahi thi or naina aage uske sath me bethi hui thi or aaj un dono saheliyon ne veer ko piche patak diya tha.

Dono hi chup chap bethi thi , naina ka samjh me aata h ki vo apna yantra khone k kaaran udaas thi , lekin preety kyu , aaiye jante h.

Veer :- kya baat h bhai aaj to chamatkar ho gaya , ek gadi me do do ladkiya bethi h , fir bhi itni shanti.

Preety gusse muh ferte hue : - haamm.

Veer preety k galo pe hath pherte hue ;- kya baat h bhai , aaj meri jaan itni gusse m kyu h.

Preety naina se :- sister tum bol do inhe , ki mujhe inse koi baat ni kerni .

Veer :- esa kyu bhai , janeman itna to sitam mat dhao apne is aashiq per.

Veer ki ye baat sun preety or naina dono ki hasi chut gayi , lekin preety ne khud ko control kiya.

Naina haste hue :- kya baat h jiju , aap to pure k pure romeo ho gaye.

Veer :-. Vo kya h na sali sahiba , ab jiski aapki sister jesi beautiful or pyari gf hogi , vo romeo to banega hi na.

Naina ;- vo to thik h ,per lag raha h , hamari sister yani ki aapki gf naraj h aapse .

Veer :- vahi to , jara aap puchiye to sahi ki unke sajan se esi kya galti ho gayi ki vo yu muh felaye bethi h.

Preety veer ki bate sun to sharmate hue ander hi ander bahut khush ho rahi thi , per usne apna jhuta gussa dikhate hue boli.

Preety :- sister kah do apne jiju se , jo apni mangetar se itni badi baat chupaye ki uske pas bhi powers h , to wo bhala gussa na hogi to aari utaregi

Naina :- oh ho love birds , gf bf se sidha mangetar , bahut fast ja rahe ho , ager esa hi chalta raha to kuch dino m kahi ye news na mile mujhe ki m masi banne wali hu.

Preety naina k mukka marte hue :- kya sister kuch bhi bolti ho.

Nains :- vese veer preety ka gussa to jayaj h , tumne itni badi baat humse chupayi kyu , or tumhe ye mahan shiv rudraksh kaha se mili

Veer :- tum janti ho iske baare me.

Naina :- ha veer tumhare gale me mojud ye shiv rudraksh koi aam rudraksh ni ek bahut hi durlabh rudraksh ki mala h , jiske bij keval himalay me paye jate h , inhe swayam bhagavan shankar ka roop mana jata h , ye tumhare pas kaha se or kab aayi.

Itna to m janti hu ki ye tumhare pas shuru se to thi ni , verna thakur k pret ka vaar tumhara kuch na bigad pata iske hote hue.

Veer man me :- lagta h ab sach batane ka samay aagaya h.

Veer :- naina m tumhe iske bare me jarur bataunga , lekin rk jagah aaram se beth ker , pahale hum jis kaam k liye jaipur ja rahe h vo to pura ker le.

Naina veer ki baat maan jati h or fir 3no jaipur pahunchte h or waha sabse pahale ek hotel m 2 room book ker thoda aaram kerte h or fir nikal jate h , jaipur k sabse pavitra sthano me se ek galta ji tirth ki or.

Galta ji basically surya temple h , per yaha or bhi kayi devi devtao ke prasidh temples h.

Yaha per ek kund bhi , jiske pani k strot ka aaj tak koi pata na laga paya, lekin iske snan se milne wala punya ganga snan jitna hi h.

Naina or uske dost yaha jaker sabse pahale kund me snan kerte h or fir kuch mandiro k darshan kerte h.

Fir naina apne us tute hue yantra ko ek kele ke patte me lapet k last baar dekhte hue boli.

Naina :- maaf kerna baba , apki beti aapki is antim nishani ko na sambhal payi , parantu abhi bhi aapki ye bet har ni manegi , wo kese bhi kerke apni maa yani aapki bahan ko jarur mukt kerwayegi or us dusht samraat ka ant karegi.

Ye bolte hue usne apne us yantra ko kund me visarjit ker diya.

Or fir 3no friends thoda bahut jaipur ghumne k baad sidha apne hotel pahunche .

Jaha naina or preety ne phir se veer ne apne sawalo ki bhochar ker di.

Tab veer ne unhe rokte hue.

Veer :-. Are ruko bhai , jara sas to lo.

Veer :- yaad h preety m jab master ji k kaam or naina ki salamti ki dua mangne delhi gaya tha.

Veer ne fir shuru se leker ant tak sari kahani naina or preety ko bata di

Preeti :- to tum ye kahana chahte ho ki karan bhai or jyoti di ne tumhe shaktiya or mala di or unke pass bhi shaktiya bhi h

impossible, aakhir 2 aam insano k paas itni shakti kese ho sakti ho.

Veer :- tum kahi majak to ni ker rahi jaan , humne ab tak itna kuch dekha or itne experience hue , fir bhi tumko esa lag raha h.

Naina sari kahani sun kahi kho si gayi thi.

Naina :- naam kya bataya tumne unka veer .

Veer :- karan or jyoti.

Naina ne to jese ye naam suna use to mano ek alag hi anubhuti hui , mano jesa barso pahale khoyi koi amulya chij ya sambhandh use mil gaya ho, uske man ko ek anokhi shanti or tripti mahasus hui.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp apne dono rakshaso k sath apne plan bana raha tha ki ek doot bhagta hua aaya.

Doot :- pranam maharaj.

Vp :- itna ghabraye hue kyu ho bolo

Doot :- maharaj ek heran ker dene wali khabar h, rani vrushali ab ni rahi.

Vp chonker uchhalte hue :- kyaa , kisne kisne kiya ye sab.

Doot :- maharaj jyada to ni pata , per guptacharon ka kahana h ki 2 insano ne rani ko parajit ker unhe atmdah pe majbur ker dala.

2sra doot :- are murkh mahaprabhu ko puri khabar to bata.

(Vp ) mahaprabhu ham jo kah rahe h vo shat pratishat sahi h , rani k ant ka kaaran un 2 manushy me se ek yuvak tha , jisse wo prem ker bethi , parantu vo yuvak kisi dusri ladki se prem kerta h , jo ki ek trittya h , or uski wo premika bhi unke sath mojud thi ranbhumi m rani vaishali k khilaf.

Vp :-. Asambhav, kahi madira pan to ni kiya tumne murkh , jo ye bakwaas ker rahe ho.

Doot :- ni maharaj mane jo bhi kaha vo purntah satya h

Jalasur :- maharaj kahi esa to ni ki wo rakshak karan hi vo yuvak tha .

Aagneysur :- ni mere hisab se to esa asambhav h kyunki humare guptacharon ki 24 ghante unper najar h, or unki suchna k anusar wo dono apne shahar se bahar tak na gaye.

Vp.gusse se :- to ye sab kiya kisne , kon naya shatru aagaya h ab yu achanak hum danvo ka or kon h vo gaddar trittya , jo apne hi kul ki shatru bani hui h.

(Kuch der shant rahane k baad ) samraat kaha h , kya usko itna bhi gyaat ni ki uske rajya me hi uski hi prajati ki ek trittya bhagwat pe uter aayi h.

Doot :- mahaprabhu , maharaj samraat apni tantra sadhna k liye apne gupt sthan pe gaye h or rajya ki bagdor yuvraj markesh ko sambhla ke.

Vp gusse se :- kya samraat ka dimag kharab ho gaya h , jo usne markesh ko itni bada dayitv diya h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo murkh budhi ka bilkul prayog ni kerta , bas apne jhute ahankaar me lipt ho keval bal se kam leta h .

(Apne duto se) ab meri shakal kya dekh rahe ho murkho jao pata lagao kaha h samraat.

Doot :- jo aagya maharaj.

Ye bol ker doot waha se nikal gaye.

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Wahi dusri or

Sab aaj ghumne firne k kaaran thak chuke the or bister pe lette hi sabko nind aaaagayi thi.

Ghar ka har ek member chen ki nind so raha tha sivay ek ko chod ker , jo or koi ni apna hero karan hi tha.

Karan ki ankho me nind dur dur tak ni thi , thi to bas dukh or or chinta ka bhav.

Kuch to baat thi jiske kaaran karan chintit or dukhi tha.

Karan kuch der to yu hi leta raha , lekin thodi der baad usse raha na gaya or wo jyoti ko dhire se apne se alag kkerta h , jo uske sine se lage so rahi thi or wo teleport ho gaya.

Teleport ho sidhe karan pahunch gaya ek bade se ghar k ek kamre me jisme andhera ho rakha tha.

Or samne ek bister pe ek pyari si ladki soyi hui thi , jiske chahre pe duniya bhar ki masumiyat to thi , lekin uski ankho k aaspas ansuo k nishan pad gaye the.

Jise dekh saf hi pata chal raha tha ki vo sone se pahale khub hi royi thi or rote rote hi so gayi.

Us ladki ki ye halat dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha , wo bina aawaz kiye dhire dhire us ladki k pas gaya or wahi bister k side m wo ghutne k bal beth gaya or halke se uske hath ko apne hatho me le bolne laga.

Karan :- janta hu , mere is vyavahar se tumhe kitni taklif ho rahi h meri gudiya , tujhe kitna kasht pahunch raha h mere katu shabdo se .

Per mera yakin maan meri gudiya , meri pyari radha , jitna kasht or pida tujhe mere shabdo se mil rahi h ,usse kayi guna dukh or pida tere is bhai ko mil rahi h .

Yakin maan meri gudiya m aaj bhi tera wo hi bhaiya hu , jo kuch bhi sah sakta h per apni radha or baki apni bahano k ankho me ansu ni.

Per meri gudiya tumne past me galti hi esi ki h gudiya jis kaaran tujhe or tere is bhai hum dono ko is kasht ko jhelna pad raha h.

Janta hu m jo bhi hua usme na to teri na hi riya di ki puri tarah se galti ni thi , parantu tumhe or di dono ko ye sikhna aavashyak hoga ki rishte me yadi vishwas na ho , jto us rishte ka koi matlab ni rahata.

Karan kuch der yu hi radha ka hath pakde khud se hi bolta raha , karan ki shakti k prbhav se radha ghahri nind me so rahi thi.

Per gahari nind me hote hue bhi achanak tab uske chahre udasi ki jagah ek pyari si muskan aagayi , jese use pata chal gaya ho , ki uska bhai uske pass betha h.

Ye radha ka karan k liye prem hi to tha , jiske kaaran use nind me bhi apne bhai k sparsh ka pata chal gaya .

Mana radha ne past me jo kiya tha wo galat tha , lekin karan ka kahana sahi tha , uski usme puri tarah se bhi galti ni thi .

Or use ab apni galti ka sache man se pachtava bhi tha , ye radha ka prem hi to tha , jisne dand nayak ki apne liye narajgi ko khatam ker diya tha.

Karan abhi yu hi betha tha ki usko apne man me jyoti ki aawaj sunayi di.

Jyoti :- bhai kaha h aap.

Karan :- bas abhi aaya gudiya

Karan dhire se radha k hath ko wapas sahi se rakhta h or karan k or dhire se uth ker jane laga.

Lekin jate jate wo fir se ruka or ek baar wapas se radha k pass gaya or ek pyar bhari kiss uske mathe pe ker dali.

Karan k kiss kerte hi radha ka sharir kuch second k liye chamakne laga or fir jab wo wapas normal hui to ab vo bilkul pahale jese ho gayi thi.

Matlab ki ab uske chahre ka noor lot aaya tha , uski ankho k dhabbe gayab ho gaye or uska kamzoor sharir wapas se healthy ho gaya.

Karan muskurata hua waha se gayab ho gaya or karan k jate hi radha jo karan k prabhav se ghahri nind me so gayi thi , ab wo uth gayi thi.

Radha uthte hue :- bhaiiiiiii.....

Wo jaldi uth ker k kamre ki light on ker idher udher ese ghumne lagi , jese k kisi ko dhund rahi ho.

Radha :- bhai to yaha ni h , to mane jo mahasus kiya kya wo koi sapna tha.

(Udas hote hue ) hmm shayad sapna hi hoga or vese bhi vo ab yaha kyu aayenge (nam ankho se) mane gunah hi esa kiya h

Tabhi radha ki najar samne lage mirror pe padi , or jese hi usne khud ko dekha wo chonk gayi , apne aap ko pahale jesa dekh.

Radha ko karan ka ahasas hone or apne aapko pahale jesa dekh , ab uske man me ek positiveness peda hho gayi thi , or usne apne bhai ko wapas pane ka nirnay ko or bhi drid ker liya.

Or ek muskan k sath wo wapas sone chali gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Jyoti apne bed pe bethi karan ka intezar kar rahi thi , tabhi karan waha prakat hua.

Karan jaker jyoti k pas betha h or ek side se jyoti ko seene se laga k pucha.

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri gf soyi ni abhi tak.

Jyoti :- ab jis ladki ka bf adhi adhi raat ko bahar ghum raha ho usse chup ker to nind kaha aayegi meri jaan.

Karan kuch ni bolta.

Jyoti pyaar se :- itni raat ko kaha gaye the bhai aap.

Karan hichkicate hue :- kuch ni gudiya bas yu hi nind ni aarahi thi to socha thoda bahar ghum aayu.

Jyoti karan ka jhut pakadte hue ankh dikhate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii...

Karan :- are batata hu yaar , darati kyu h.

Karan fir use sari baat batata h jyoti ko , jisse sun jyoti boli.

Jyoti pyar se karan k galo ko sahalate hue :- to isme chupane wali kya baat h bhaiya , jabki aap jante ho ki aap mujhse jhut ni bol sakte.

Or m bhale hi radha se naraj hou , per wo aapke sath sath meri bhi pyari bahan or m bhi aapke jitna hi usse pyar kekerti hu , or m ye bhi janti hu ki aapke or radha k bich kya hua tha.

Per bhai hum jo bhi ker rahe h , usiki bhalayi k liye hi to ker rahe h , taki use rishto ki ahamiyat ka ahasas ho.

Karan :- per gudiya , tumne dekha ni , kya halat bana li thi usne apni , kitni kamzor ho gayi thi vo or bhua ne bhi mujhe bataya tha, wo apna bilkul khayal ni rakhti or na hi dhang se khati piti h, to tumhi batao ,kese najar andaz ker du m apni radha ko.

Jyoti :- mane esa kab kaha bhai aap use najar andaz ker dijiye , m jo kahana chah rahi hu , vo samjhiye bhai.

Karan kuch der sochta raha or fir uske chahre pe muskan aagayi.

Usne jyoti k dono galo or hotho pe kiss kerte huhue bola

Karan :- m samjh gaya meri gudiya tum kya kahana chahti ho , you are so smart my lil sister ,sach me yaar tum na hoti to mera kya hota .

Jyoti karan k gaal khichte hue :- I know my cutie golu brother.

Karan jyoti ka hath hatate hue :-. Are yaar esa mat ker , tu to janti h na , mujhe ye pasand ni ki mere koi gal khinche.

Jyoti masti kerte hue dobara khichte :- per mujhe tto bahut pasand h , apne bhaiya k ye gol matol gal , man to kerta h kha jau inhe.

Karan. :-. Are baap re lagta h pret raj ne tumhe vardan de ker galti ker di.

Jyoti ;- esa kyu.

Karan :- or ni to kya bhuto ki rani banker khud bhi chudel hi ban gayi h , jab dekho mujhe khane ki hi bate kerti rahati h , lagta h ab kamra change kerna padega.

Jyoti jhutmut ka gussa kerte hue :- kya bole m chudel , ruko abhi batati hu ki chudel kya hoti h.

Karan ne bhagne ki koshis ki per jyoti ne use daboch liya or uske uper chad gayi

Jyoti :- ab m apko dikhati hu chudel kya hoti h .

Or ye bol k jyoti jhuk ker karan k pahale ek gal pe kiss kerti h .

Karan :- are wah ager sari chudele esi ho jaye to logo k to maje ho jaye.

Lekin tabhi jyoti ne karan k us gal ko kiss kerte hue kaat liya .

Or esa hi usne karan k dusre gaal pe kiya .

Karan :- ouch kya ker rahi h.

Jyoti :- kyu abhi to bade maje aarahe the na aapko ,lo or maje lo.

Jyoti ne esa 3 char baar kiya or fir usne karan k hoto p bhi kat liya.

Lekin tabhi karan ne moke ka fayda utha ker jyoti k hotho ko chum kiss ker liya .

Jisse ek baar jyoti chonki or sharma gayi , lekin karan ne ek hatho se se jyoti k chahre ko uper kiya or uski najro ko apni najaro se milaya.

Jese hi dono ki najre mili kuch der wo dono ek dusre ki ankho me kho se gaye or

Karan :- I love u jyoti

Jyoti :- I love u tooooo bhai.

Ye bolne k baad dono ko pata hi na chala dono k honth kab ek dusre se kab mil gaye.

Or fir shuru ho gayi dono k hoto ki prem roopi jang, jisme kabhi jyoti k uper wale hoth chum raha tha , to kabhi niche wale .

Jyoti bhi karan ka bharpoor sath de rahi thi , dhire dhire karan or jyoti ki kiss halki si wild hone lagi , karan ne jyoti ko pith se pakad k palat gaya , ab karab uper tha or jyoti niche.

Karan ki chati jyoti k chati se puri tarah chuki hui thi , unke bich hava nikalne ki bhi jagah na thi .

Tabhi jyoti ne apni jibh karan k hotho se lagayi , karan jyoti ka ishara samjh gaya or usne apna muh khol jyoti ki jibh ko muh me leliya or use chusne laga.

Undono ki kiss kafi der tak chali , fir jyoti ne aaj kuch aagaya badhne ki sochi or usne karan k ek hath ko pakad apne ek sthan pe rakh diya.

Karan ne hath jhat se hath hatate hye bola :- gudiya kya abhi ye sab sahi hoga , mere khayal se hume or kuch time llena chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu sahi ni hoga bhai , m aapse pyaar kerti hu or ap mujhse .

Ha m ye baat ache se janti hu ki aapko mere jism se ni meri aatma se prem h.

Parantu bhai ye prem krida ya kam krida bhi to prem ka hi ek hissa h or prem se judi koi chij bhala galat kese ho sakti h.

Or vese bhi aaj ni to kal humme ye sab to hona hi h , kyunki humari niyati hi esi h , to fir insab me esa jhijhakna kyu.

Karan :- hmm baat to teri sahi h , thik h , ager tu aage bhadna chahti h or isme teri marji h to thik h , per abhi isse jyada ni.

Jyoti :- ok baba , ab apne or mere romantic mood ko kharab mat kijiye mr sharma.

Karan ankh marte hue :- are jo hukum mis sharma.

Or phir dono me kissing start hui or fir ek baar jyoti ne apne sine pe karan ka hath rakha , is bar karan thoda jhijakte hue jyoti k boobs ko halke se sahalate hue dabane laga.

Jisse jyoti chihunk uthi , kyunki ye jyoti ki life ka first experience tha , verna aajkal ki ladkiya to 16 sal ki umer me hi kya kya ker chuki hoti h .

Lekin ye karan k liye uska nischal prem or asha k sanskaro ka asar tha , jiske kaaran in sab chijo ki or usne dekha bhi ni tha.

Jyoti :-. Aah bhai aaram se.

Karan piche hatate hue :- kya hua gudiya , mane kahi jyada jor se to na daba diya.

Jyoti sharmate hue apne matha little hue :- oh god , bhai you are so cute , kitne bhole ho , lekin buddu bhi , lagta h aapko abhi bahut kuch sikhana hoga.

Karan bhondu si shakal bana ker :- ab mane kya kiya .

Jyoti haste hue :- kuch ni mere golu bhaiya.

Ab chaliye aaj k liye bahut ho gaya romance , ab so jaiye kal swati di aane wali h.

Ye bol vo karan ko side m leta usse chipak ker so gayi .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- jaipur

Kulbhata ko aatank mukt ker naina or uske dost jaipur ki or nikal gaye the , jo waha se kuch 70 km ki duri pe hi sthit tha .

Gadi preety drive ker rahi thi or naina aage uske sath me bethi hui thi or aaj un dono saheliyon ne veer ko piche patak diya tha.

Dono hi chup chap bethi thi , naina ka samjh me aata h ki vo apna yantra khone k kaaran udaas thi , lekin preety kyu , aaiye jante h.

Veer :- kya baat h bhai aaj to chamatkar ho gaya , ek gadi me do do ladkiya bethi h , fir bhi itni shanti.

Preety gusse muh ferte hue : - haamm.

Veer preety k galo pe hath pherte hue ;- kya baat h bhai , aaj meri jaan itni gusse m kyu h.

Preety naina se :- sister tum bol do inhe , ki mujhe inse koi baat ni kerni .

Veer :- esa kyu bhai , janeman itna to sitam mat dhao apne is aashiq per.

Veer ki ye baat sun preety or naina dono ki hasi chut gayi , lekin preety ne khud ko control kiya.

Naina haste hue :- kya baat h jiju , aap to pure k pure romeo ho gaye.

Veer :-. Vo kya h na sali sahiba , ab jiski aapki sister jesi beautiful or pyari gf hogi , vo romeo to banega hi na.

Naina ;- vo to thik h ,per lag raha h , hamari sister yani ki aapki gf naraj h aapse .

Veer :- vahi to , jara aap puchiye to sahi ki unke sajan se esi kya galti ho gayi ki vo yu muh felaye bethi h.

Preety veer ki bate sun to sharmate hue ander hi ander bahut khush ho rahi thi , per usne apna jhuta gussa dikhate hue boli.

Preety :- sister kah do apne jiju se , jo apni mangetar se itni badi baat chupaye ki uske pas bhi powers h , to wo bhala gussa na hogi to aari utaregi

Naina :- oh ho love birds , gf bf se sidha mangetar , bahut fast ja rahe ho , ager esa hi chalta raha to kuch dino m kahi ye news na mile mujhe ki m masi banne wali hu.

Preety naina k mukka marte hue :- kya sister kuch bhi bolti ho.

Nains :- vese veer preety ka gussa to jayaj h , tumne itni badi baat humse chupayi kyu , or tumhe ye mahan shiv rudraksh kaha se mili

Veer :- tum janti ho iske baare me.

Naina :- ha veer tumhare gale me mojud ye shiv rudraksh koi aam rudraksh ni ek bahut hi durlabh rudraksh ki mala h , jiske bij keval himalay me paye jate h , inhe swayam bhagavan shankar ka roop mana jata h , ye tumhare pas kaha se or kab aayi.

Itna to m janti hu ki ye tumhare pas shuru se to thi ni , verna thakur k pret ka vaar tumhara kuch na bigad pata iske hote hue.

Veer man me :- lagta h ab sach batane ka samay aagaya h.

Veer :- naina m tumhe iske bare me jarur bataunga , lekin rk jagah aaram se beth ker , pahale hum jis kaam k liye jaipur ja rahe h vo to pura ker le.

Naina veer ki baat maan jati h or fir 3no jaipur pahunchte h or waha sabse pahale ek hotel m 2 room book ker thoda aaram kerte h or fir nikal jate h , jaipur k sabse pavitra sthano me se ek galta ji tirth ki or.

Galta ji basically surya temple h , per yaha or bhi kayi devi devtao ke prasidh temples h.

Yaha per ek kund bhi , jiske pani k strot ka aaj tak koi pata na laga paya, lekin iske snan se milne wala punya ganga snan jitna hi h.

Naina or uske dost yaha jaker sabse pahale kund me snan kerte h or fir kuch mandiro k darshan kerte h.

Fir naina apne us tute hue yantra ko ek kele ke patte me lapet k last baar dekhte hue boli.

Naina :- maaf kerna baba , apki beti aapki is antim nishani ko na sambhal payi , parantu abhi bhi aapki ye bet har ni manegi , wo kese bhi kerke apni maa yani aapki bahan ko jarur mukt kerwayegi or us dusht samraat ka ant karegi.

Ye bolte hue usne apne us yantra ko kund me visarjit ker diya.

Or fir 3no friends thoda bahut jaipur ghumne k baad sidha apne hotel pahunche .

Jaha naina or preety ne phir se veer ne apne sawalo ki bhochar ker di.

Tab veer ne unhe rokte hue.

Veer :-. Are ruko bhai , jara sas to lo.

Veer :- yaad h preety m jab master ji k kaam or naina ki salamti ki dua mangne delhi gaya tha.

Veer ne fir shuru se leker ant tak sari kahani naina or preety ko bata di

Preeti :- to tum ye kahana chahte ho ki karan bhai or jyoti di ne tumhe shaktiya or mala di or unke pass bhi shaktiya bhi h

impossible, aakhir 2 aam insano k paas itni shakti kese ho sakti ho.

Veer :- tum kahi majak to ni ker rahi jaan , humne ab tak itna kuch dekha or itne experience hue , fir bhi tumko esa lag raha h.

Naina sari kahani sun kahi kho si gayi thi.

Naina :- naam kya bataya tumne unka veer .

Veer :- karan or jyoti.

Naina ne to jese ye naam suna use to mano ek alag hi anubhuti hui , mano jesa barso pahale khoyi koi amulya chij ya sambhandh use mil gaya ho, uske man ko ek anokhi shanti or tripti mahasus hui.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp apne dono rakshaso k sath apne plan bana raha tha ki ek doot bhagta hua aaya.

Doot :- pranam maharaj.

Vp :- itna ghabraye hue kyu ho bolo

Doot :- maharaj ek heran ker dene wali khabar h, rani vrushali ab ni rahi.

Vp chonker uchhalte hue :- kyaa , kisne kisne kiya ye sab.

Doot :- maharaj jyada to ni pata , per guptacharon ka kahana h ki 2 insano ne rani ko parajit ker unhe atmdah pe majbur ker dala.

2sra doot :- are murkh mahaprabhu ko puri khabar to bata.

(Vp ) mahaprabhu ham jo kah rahe h vo shat pratishat sahi h , rani k ant ka kaaran un 2 manushy me se ek yuvak tha , jisse wo prem ker bethi , parantu vo yuvak kisi dusri ladki se prem kerta h , jo ki ek trittya h , or uski wo premika bhi unke sath mojud thi ranbhumi m rani vaishali k khilaf.

Vp :-. Asambhav, kahi madira pan to ni kiya tumne murkh , jo ye bakwaas ker rahe ho.

Doot :- ni maharaj mane jo bhi kaha vo purntah satya h

Jalasur :- maharaj kahi esa to ni ki wo rakshak karan hi vo yuvak tha .

Aagneysur :- ni mere hisab se to esa asambhav h kyunki humare guptacharon ki 24 ghante unper najar h, or unki suchna k anusar wo dono apne shahar se bahar tak na gaye.

Vp.gusse se :- to ye sab kiya kisne , kon naya shatru aagaya h ab yu achanak hum danvo ka or kon h vo gaddar trittya , jo apne hi kul ki shatru bani hui h.

(Kuch der shant rahane k baad ) samraat kaha h , kya usko itna bhi gyaat ni ki uske rajya me hi uski hi prajati ki ek trittya bhagwat pe uter aayi h.

Doot :- mahaprabhu , maharaj samraat apni tantra sadhna k liye apne gupt sthan pe gaye h or rajya ki bagdor yuvraj markesh ko sambhla ke.

Vp gusse se :- kya samraat ka dimag kharab ho gaya h , jo usne markesh ko itni bada dayitv diya h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo murkh budhi ka bilkul prayog ni kerta , bas apne jhute ahankaar me lipt ho keval bal se kam leta h .

(Apne duto se) ab meri shakal kya dekh rahe ho murkho jao pata lagao kaha h samraat.

Doot :- jo aagya maharaj.

Ye bol ker doot waha se nikal gaye.

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Next day karan or jyoti subah jaldi uth ker teyar ho nashte ki table pe aajate h

Jaha shivani or sonam pahale se mojud thi

Shivani or sonam :- good morning bhai and di

Karan :- good morning my little sisters.

Fir karan or jyoti table pr beth gaye .

Karan :- choti maa jaldi khana laiye na badi bhuk lagi h.

Kavya :- bas beta 5 min.

Jyoti :- petu kahike, bhaiya jara thoda control kiya kero , verna ye 7 packs se family pack banne me time ni lagega.

Karan :- e chipkali tu apna kam ker na , ek to itne salo baad choti maa k hatho ka khana nasib hua h, ni tooo.

Jyoti :- ni to se aapka kya matlab h , kya m itna bura khana banati hu.

Karan :- are mane esa kab kaha.

Karan or jyoti me yu hi thodi nok jhok ho rahi thi , jiska unki 2no bahane has has k maje le rahi thi.

Tabhi kavya vaha khana leker aati h , or bolti h

Kavya :- bas bas ab ladna band kero or khana khao.

Tab sabhi khana khane lagte h , tabhi kavya karan se puchti h.

Kavya :- lalla , tumne or jyoti ka aage ka kya socha h

Karan :- filhal to choti ma , soch raha hu aaj ja ker apni marksheet or degree college se collect ker lu or fir vacation k baad private me post graduation karunga or sath me aapka office me hath bata lunga.

Kavya :- ni beta uski koi jarurat ni h , tum abhi apni studies p dhyan do , office ko m sambhal lungi ,

Jyoti :- per choti ma.

Kavya :- per choti ma.

Kavya :- per wer kuch ni , mane kaha na , vese bhi abhi to tumhari umer khelne kudne ki h .

Or abhi tumhari choti ma itni bhi budi bhi ni hui h jitna tum sab soch rahe ho.

Karan kavya k piche jaker piche Se uske gale me bahe dal :- kis bevkuf ne aapse kaha ki aap bhudi ho gayi ho choti ma, aap to aaj bhi utni hi beautiful ho, mera bas chale to aapko abhi apni gf bana lu.

Kavya sharmate hue karan k halke se chapat lagate hue :- hat pagal koi ni mili to apni maa se hi flirting kerta h.

Shivani majak kerte hue :- vese bhaiya ki baat me dam to h , maa or bhai ki jodi jamegi bhi.

Sonam :- ha baat to sahi h , ab koi ye bhi batado , ma ko ab maa bolna h ya bhabhi

Ye bol.sab hasne lage or kavya sharmake lal ho gayi.

Kavya sabse :- thahro badmasho, tum sab ko abhi batati hu , subah subah koi ni mila to mujhe ye hi chedne lage.

Ye bol wo sabki or badi , tabhi sabhi bhai bahan haste hue kamre ki karan k kamre ki or bhag gaye.

Thodi der baad karan or jyoti teyar hoker college jane k liye ready ho gaye , tabhi shivani boli.

Shivani :- bhai hum ghumne jayenge tab jayenge , per aaj kyu na yu hi thoda city ghumne chale.

Jyoti :- not bad, esa kerte h na bhai , college se degree collect kerne k baad movie dekhne chale or fir dinner bhi bahar ker lenge.

Karan :- ye acha idea h , m abhi choti ko is bare me bata bhi deta hu or unhe bhi hum sath leker chalenge

Karan kavya k pas jata h jo kitchen me kam ker rahi hoti h , karan piche se jaker use hug ker leta h.

Kavya :- kya baat h , aaj mere lala ko bada pyaar aaraha h apni choti ma pe.

Karan :- ab jiski itni sunder ma kum gf ho , uspe pyar to aayega hi na.

Acha choti ma aap jaldi se ready ho jaiye , hum sabne aaj movie or bahar dinner ka program banaya h.

Kavya :- are ni ni beta m tum bacho k sath waha kya karungi , tum sab ghum aao na.

Karan or baki sab kavya ko bahut bolte h , per wo baad ka bolke tal deti h.

Karan :- ok choti ma , is baar to man raha hu , per next time esa ni chalega.

Kavya karan k gaal chumte hue :- ha mere lala or vese bhi m to apne bf k sath special date pe hi jaungi .

Kavya ne bas karan ne ye baat karan k majak me sath dete hue kahi thi , uske man me sirf or sirf karan k liye mamta roopi prem hi tha .

Kavya ko bye kerke charo bhai bahan ki toli nikal padi college ki or , karan or uski bahane jab college pahunche to unhe dekh kafi students heran ho gaye.

Kyunki sabko ye news pata thi ki karan or jyoti ki death ho chuki h , karan or jyoti vese bhi apne college me kafi famous the , isliye unhe sahi salamat dekh kafi sare students ne unhe gher liya , jo undono k ya to classmates the , ya kese na kese unko jante the.

Karan or jyoti bhi itne time baad apne college k sathiyon se milker bahut khush the .

Lekin kuch ankhe thi jo karan or jyoti ko jinda dekh ker bilkul khush ni ththi , balki unki ankhon me gusse k angare saf saf najar aarahe the,per unhonne filhal chup rahana hi sahi samjha.

Kuch der baad karan or jyoti sabse milker principal office me jate h .

Principal bhi bahut khush hota h karan or jyoti se milker

Principal :- I m very happy beta aap dono bilkul sahi salamat ho.

Karan :-. Bas sir ye to aapke ashirwad ki kripa h.

Jyoti :-. Sir humara final ka result

Principal :- oh ha , congratulations bacho , aap dono ne firse is sal pure state me top kiya h.

Karan or jyoti ye sun khush hote h ,vese inke liye ye koi nayi baat ni thi , per tha to khushi ka hi pal na.

Karan :- thanks sur , mane or jyoti ne socha h ki hum apni post graduation bhi yahi se kere , if u don't mind sir , kya hum college vacations k baad se join ker sakte h.

Principal :- ha ha kyu ni beta , no problem , tum dono brilliant students ho , to tumhari request ko kese accept ni karunga.

Tum jabse chaho again college join ker sakte ho.

Fir thodi der baad karan or jyoti principal se vida le , canteen me pahunchte h , jaha unki dono bahane unka hi wait ker rahi hoti h.

Karan or jyoti jab unhe khushkhabri dete h to wo dono bahut khush hoti h , fir karan or uski bahane nikal padi mall ki or.

Wahi karan or jyoti k jane k baad karan or jyoti , wo banda ek phone kerta h or kuch baat ker phone rakh deta h or shetani hasi hasne laga.

Wahi dusri or

Naina or uske dost jo braham rakshasi ki duniya me fas gaye the , ab yaha se bahar nikalne ka upaay soch rahe the.

Naina :- dosto ab yaha se bahar nikalne ka ek hi rasta h.


Veer :- wo kya naina ,


Naina :- yahi ki hume aage bhadna hoga or kese na kese brahmrakshaso ki rani tak pahunch , uska ant kerna hoga.

Veer :- per hum usko marenge kese.

Naina :- Uska ek upaay hi h veer

Ye bol naina veer ko vo upaay batati h.


Preety :- ager yahi ek rasta h sister to chalo fir der kis baat ki.

Naina :- preety tum kuch der aaram ker lo , tum kafi kamzor ho gayi ho ladayi me.

Preety :- don't worry sister m thik hu , or ab aaram to mission complete hone k baad hi karungi , bade time baad koi takker ka dushman mile h .

Preety ka josh dekh naina bas muskurati h or wo log gufa se bahar nikal ker jese hi bahar aate h to pate h ki vo log ek jungle me h

Naina :- preety ager tum thik ho to kya tum pata ker sakti ho hume kis or jana hoga.

Preety apni ankh band ker apni shaktiyon se pata ker batatati h ki maharani ka mahal pashchim disha ki or h

Preety pahale khud k sath naina or veer ko invisible kerti h , or fir teleport ho vo sidha mahal k bahar ki or pahunch jati h.

Invisible hone k kaaran wo aaram se mahal k ander pahunch gaye , wo maharani ko dhundte dhundte us sabha ki or pahuch gaye jaha per maharani ka darbar lagta tha.

Waha jaker wo log dekhte h , ek bade se singhasan pe ek jini bethi h , jiske hatho me ek talvar jesa hathiyar tha, jo bahut hi khubsurat thi , jo or koi ni balki maharani hi thi or vaha uske samne darbari khade the.

Maharani :- mahamantri trityao k bare me kya khabar h

Mahamantri :- rani sahiba , jabse aapne markesh ko dhul chatayi h , jabse wo log shant pade h apne ilake me, parantu

Rani :- parantu kya mahamantri .

Mantri :- ek buri khabar h maharani , rajya k bahar mojud humare mandir k pujari ki kisine nirmam hatya ker di h.


Rani gusse se :- kya , or ttum log us hatyare ko dhundne k bajay mere pass muh uthaye aagaye, jao or abhi k abhi chanbin ker pata lagao , kisne kiya ye dussahas.

Rani ka adesh sun mantri or sare sabhasad waha se nikal gaye.

Tab rani bhi vaha se uth ker chali gayi,

Naina :- preety jaldi chalo , yahi moka h humare pas , wo dekho jiski hume jarurat h vo samne h

Naina or uske friends abhi singhasan k pas gaye hi the ki achanak se wo visible ho gaye or vo chij waha se gayab ho gayi.

Tabhi un 3no ko piche se hasne ki aawaz aayi jo rani ki thi.

Rani :- kya socha tha tum logo ne , ye choti moti maya se vrushila(rani ka nam ko bevkoof bana dogi).

Heran hone ki jarurat nu h murkho , tum meri duniya me ho , jis samay tumne is duniya me apna pahala kadam rakha tha , usi samay mujhe tumhare bare me sab kuch pata chal gaya tha.

Naina :- jab sab kuch jan hi chuki ho to ye bhi jan lo vrushila, adharm chahe kitna bhi takatwar ho , dharm se ni jit sakta , abhi bhi samay h ,masum ganv valo ka picha chod do, unhone jo kiya anjane me kiya.

Preety :- verna.

Rani :- haha , verna kya , jab tera yuvraj hi mera kuch na bigad saka to ek gadar trittya, jiski shaktiya bhi abhi puri tarah jagrit ni , vo mera kya bigadegi

Sipahiyon bandi bana lo in dono ladkiyo ko, or ye ladka to mujhe bha gaya h , abse yahi mera pari or tumhara raja banega.

(Veer ki ankho me ankhe dal ) kyu banoge na mere pati , sunder yuvak.

Naina :- veer uski ankho me mat dekhna.

Naina ne esa isliye kaha tha , kyunki brahamrakshasiyo ki ankho me sammohan shakti hoti h , jo kisi ko bhi unke prem jal me fasa sakti h , per naina ne jab tak veer ko roka , tab tal shayad der ho chuki thi , kyunki veer ka jwab sun naina or preety ko to apne kano p vishwas na hua.


Veer ghutno k bal beth rani ka hath chumte hue hath chum leta h , or ha bol deta h.

Preety chilayi rote hue :- ni veer tum esa ni ker sakte

(Rani se ) ni chodungi tumhe kamini

Ye bol preety rani ki or badhi , per ye kya rani ne ek second me preeti ko ked ker diya , naina ne apna yantra nikal ker rani ki or jese hi kerna chaha

Rani ne apni shakti se naina k hath pe prahar kiya , jise uska yantra dur ja gira or rani ne use bhi bandh diya.

Rani :- dal do in dono ko karawas me, inka fesla kal sari praja k samne hoga.

Preety veer veer chilati rahi , per rani k sammohan ki vajah se veer p koi asar na pada or naina or preety ko kaidkhane m dal diya gaya

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Sab aaj ghumne firne k kaaran thak chuke the or bister pe lette hi sabko nind aaaagayi thi.

Ghar ka har ek member chen ki nind so raha tha sivay ek ko chod ker , jo or koi ni apna hero karan hi tha.

Karan ki ankho me nind dur dur tak ni thi , thi to bas dukh or or chinta ka bhav.

Kuch to baat thi jiske kaaran karan chintit or dukhi tha.

Karan kuch der to yu hi leta raha , lekin thodi der baad usse raha na gaya or wo jyoti ko dhire se apne se alag kkerta h , jo uske sine se lage so rahi thi or wo teleport ho gaya.

Teleport ho sidhe karan pahunch gaya ek bade se ghar k ek kamre me jisme andhera ho rakha tha.

Or samne ek bister pe ek pyari si ladki soyi hui thi , jiske chahre pe duniya bhar ki masumiyat to thi , lekin uski ankho k aaspas ansuo k nishan pad gaye the.

Jise dekh saf hi pata chal raha tha ki vo sone se pahale khub hi royi thi or rote rote hi so gayi.

Us ladki ki ye halat dekh karan ka dil tadaf utha , wo bina aawaz kiye dhire dhire us ladki k pas gaya or wahi bister k side m wo ghutne k bal beth gaya or halke se uske hath ko apne hatho me le bolne laga.

Karan :- janta hu , mere is vyavahar se tumhe kitni taklif ho rahi h meri gudiya , tujhe kitna kasht pahunch raha h mere katu shabdo se .

Per mera yakin maan meri gudiya , meri pyari radha , jitna kasht or pida tujhe mere shabdo se mil rahi h ,usse kayi guna dukh or pida tere is bhai ko mil rahi h .

Yakin maan meri gudiya m aaj bhi tera wo hi bhaiya hu , jo kuch bhi sah sakta h per apni radha or baki apni bahano k ankho me ansu ni.

Per meri gudiya tumne past me galti hi esi ki h gudiya jis kaaran tujhe or tere is bhai hum dono ko is kasht ko jhelna pad raha h.

Janta hu m jo bhi hua usme na to teri na hi riya di ki puri tarah se galti ni thi , parantu tumhe or di dono ko ye sikhna aavashyak hoga ki rishte me yadi vishwas na ho , jto us rishte ka koi matlab ni rahata.

Karan kuch der yu hi radha ka hath pakde khud se hi bolta raha , karan ki shakti k prbhav se radha ghahri nind me so rahi thi.

Per gahari nind me hote hue bhi achanak tab uske chahre udasi ki jagah ek pyari si muskan aagayi , jese use pata chal gaya ho , ki uska bhai uske pass betha h.

Ye radha ka karan k liye prem hi to tha , jiske kaaran use nind me bhi apne bhai k sparsh ka pata chal gaya .

Mana radha ne past me jo kiya tha wo galat tha , lekin karan ka kahana sahi tha , uski usme puri tarah se bhi galti ni thi .

Or use ab apni galti ka sache man se pachtava bhi tha , ye radha ka prem hi to tha , jisne dand nayak ki apne liye narajgi ko khatam ker diya tha.

Karan abhi yu hi betha tha ki usko apne man me jyoti ki aawaj sunayi di.

Jyoti :- bhai kaha h aap.

Karan :- bas abhi aaya gudiya

Karan dhire se radha k hath ko wapas sahi se rakhta h or karan k or dhire se uth ker jane laga.

Lekin jate jate wo fir se ruka or ek baar wapas se radha k pass gaya or ek pyar bhari kiss uske mathe pe ker dali.

Karan k kiss kerte hi radha ka sharir kuch second k liye chamakne laga or fir jab wo wapas normal hui to ab vo bilkul pahale jese ho gayi thi.

Matlab ki ab uske chahre ka noor lot aaya tha , uski ankho k dhabbe gayab ho gaye or uska kamzoor sharir wapas se healthy ho gaya.

Karan muskurata hua waha se gayab ho gaya or karan k jate hi radha jo karan k prabhav se ghahri nind me so gayi thi , ab wo uth gayi thi.

Radha uthte hue :- bhaiiiiiii.....

Wo jaldi uth ker k kamre ki light on ker idher udher ese ghumne lagi , jese k kisi ko dhund rahi ho.

Radha :- bhai to yaha ni h , to mane jo mahasus kiya kya wo koi sapna tha.

(Udas hote hue ) hmm shayad sapna hi hoga or vese bhi vo ab yaha kyu aayenge (nam ankho se) mane gunah hi esa kiya h

Tabhi radha ki najar samne lage mirror pe padi , or jese hi usne khud ko dekha wo chonk gayi , apne aap ko pahale jesa dekh.

Radha ko karan ka ahasas hone or apne aapko pahale jesa dekh , ab uske man me ek positiveness peda hho gayi thi , or usne apne bhai ko wapas pane ka nirnay ko or bhi drid ker liya.

Or ek muskan k sath wo wapas sone chali gayi.

Wahi dusri or

Jyoti apne bed pe bethi karan ka intezar kar rahi thi , tabhi karan waha prakat hua.

Karan jaker jyoti k pas betha h or ek side se jyoti ko seene se laga k pucha.

Karan :- kya baat h bhai , meri gf soyi ni abhi tak.

Jyoti :- ab jis ladki ka bf adhi adhi raat ko bahar ghum raha ho usse chup ker to nind kaha aayegi meri jaan.

Karan kuch ni bolta.

Jyoti pyaar se :- itni raat ko kaha gaye the bhai aap.

Karan hichkicate hue :- kuch ni gudiya bas yu hi nind ni aarahi thi to socha thoda bahar ghum aayu.

Jyoti karan ka jhut pakadte hue ankh dikhate hue boli.

Jyoti :- bhaiiiiii...

Karan :- are batata hu yaar , darati kyu h.

Karan fir use sari baat batata h jyoti ko , jisse sun jyoti boli.

Jyoti pyar se karan k galo ko sahalate hue :- to isme chupane wali kya baat h bhaiya , jabki aap jante ho ki aap mujhse jhut ni bol sakte.

Or m bhale hi radha se naraj hou , per wo aapke sath sath meri bhi pyari bahan or m bhi aapke jitna hi usse pyar kekerti hu , or m ye bhi janti hu ki aapke or radha k bich kya hua tha.

Per bhai hum jo bhi ker rahe h , usiki bhalayi k liye hi to ker rahe h , taki use rishto ki ahamiyat ka ahasas ho.

Karan :- per gudiya , tumne dekha ni , kya halat bana li thi usne apni , kitni kamzor ho gayi thi vo or bhua ne bhi mujhe bataya tha, wo apna bilkul khayal ni rakhti or na hi dhang se khati piti h, to tumhi batao ,kese najar andaz ker du m apni radha ko.

Jyoti :- mane esa kab kaha bhai aap use najar andaz ker dijiye , m jo kahana chah rahi hu , vo samjhiye bhai.

Karan kuch der sochta raha or fir uske chahre pe muskan aagayi.

Usne jyoti k dono galo or hotho pe kiss kerte huhue bola

Karan :- m samjh gaya meri gudiya tum kya kahana chahti ho , you are so smart my lil sister ,sach me yaar tum na hoti to mera kya hota .

Jyoti karan k gaal khichte hue :- I know my cutie golu brother.

Karan jyoti ka hath hatate hue :-. Are yaar esa mat ker , tu to janti h na , mujhe ye pasand ni ki mere koi gal khinche.

Jyoti masti kerte hue dobara khichte :- per mujhe tto bahut pasand h , apne bhaiya k ye gol matol gal , man to kerta h kha jau inhe.

Karan. :-. Are baap re lagta h pret raj ne tumhe vardan de ker galti ker di.
Jyoti ;- esa kyu.

Karan :- or ni to kya bhuto ki rani banker khud bhi chudel hi ban gayi h , jab dekho mujhe khane ki hi bate kerti rahati h , lagta h ab kamra change kerna padega.

Jyoti jhutmut ka gussa kerte hue :- kya bole m chudel , ruko abhi batati hu ki chudel kya hoti h.

Karan ne bhagne ki koshis ki per jyoti ne use daboch liya or uske uper chad gayi

Jyoti :- ab m apko dikhati hu chudel kya hoti h .

Or ye bol k jyoti jhuk ker karan k pahale ek gal pe kiss kerti h .

Karan :- are wah ager sari chudele esi ho jaye to logo k to maje ho jaye.

Lekin tabhi jyoti ne karan k us gal ko kiss kerte hue kaat liya .

Or esa hi usne karan k dusre gaal pe kiya .

Karan :- ouch kya ker rahi h.

Jyoti :- kyu abhi to bade maje aarahe the na aapko ,lo or maje lo.

Jyoti ne esa 3 char baar kiya or fir usne karan k hoto p bhi kat liya.

Lekin tabhi karan ne moke ka fayda utha ker jyoti k hotho ko chum kiss ker liya .

Jisse ek baar jyoti chonki or sharma gayi , lekin karan ne ek hatho se se jyoti k chahre ko uper kiya or uski najro ko apni najaro se milaya.

Jese hi dono ki najre mili kuch der wo dono ek dusre ki ankho me kho se gaye or

Karan :- I love u jyoti

Jyoti :- I love u tooooo bhai.

Ye bolne k baad dono ko pata hi na chala dono k honth kab ek dusre se kab mil gaye.

Or fir shuru ho gayi dono k hoto ki prem roopi jang, jisme kabhi jyoti k uper wale hoth chum raha tha , to kabhi niche wale .

Jyoti bhi karan ka bharpoor sath de rahi thi , dhire dhire karan or jyoti ki kiss halki si wild hone lagi , karan ne jyoti ko pith se pakad k palat gaya , ab karab uper tha or jyoti niche.

Karan ki chati jyoti k chati se puri tarah chuki hui thi , unke bich hava nikalne ki bhi jagah na thi .

Tabhi jyoti ne apni jibh karan k hotho se lagayi , karan jyoti ka ishara samjh gaya or usne apna muh khol jyoti ki jibh ko muh me leliya or use chusne laga.

Undono ki kiss kafi der tak chali , fir jyoti ne aaj kuch aagaya badhne ki sochi or usne karan k ek hath ko pakad apne ek sthan pe rakh diya.

Karan ne hath jhat se hath hatate hye bola :- gudiya kya abhi ye sab sahi hoga , mere khayal se hume or kuch time llena chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu sahi ni hoga bhai , m aapse pyaar kerti hu or ap mujhse .

Ha m ye baat ache se janti hu ki aapko mere jism se ni meri aatma se prem h.

Parantu bhai ye prem krida ya kam krida bhi to prem ka hi ek hissa h or prem se judi koi chij bhala galat kese ho sakti h.

Or vese bhi aaj ni to kal humme ye sab to hona hi h , kyunki humari niyati hi esi h , to fir insab me esa jhijhakna kyu.

Karan :- hmm baat to teri sahi h , thik h , ager tu aage bhadna chahti h or isme teri marji h to thik h , per abhi isse jyada ni.

Jyoti :- ok baba , ab apne or mere romantic mood ko kharab mat kijiye mr sharma.

Karan ankh marte hue :- are jo hukum mis sharma.

Or phir dono me kissing start hui or fir ek baar jyoti ne apne sine pe karan ka hath rakha , is bar karan thoda jhijakte hue jyoti k boobs ko halke se sahalate hue dabane laga.

Jisse jyoti chihunk uthi , kyunki ye jyoti ki life ka first experience tha , verna aajkal ki ladkiya to 16 sal ki umer me hi kya kya ker chuki hoti h .

Lekin ye karan k liye uska nischal prem or asha k sanskaro ka asar tha , jiske kaaran in sab chijo ki or usne dekha bhi ni tha.

Jyoti :-. Aah bhai aaram se.

Karan piche hatate hue :- kya hua gudiya , mane kahi jyada jor se to na daba diya.

Jyoti sharmate hue apne matha little hue :- oh god , bhai you are so cute , kitne bhole ho , lekin buddu bhi , lagta h aapko abhi bahut kuch sikhana hoga.

Karan bhondu si shakal bana ker :- ab mane kya kiya .

Jyoti haste hue :- kuch ni mere golu bhaiya.

Ab chaliye aaj k liye bahut ho gaya romance , ab so jaiye kal swati di aane wali h.

Ye bol vo karan ko side m leta usse chipak ker so gayi .

Wahi dusri or

Location :- jaipur

Kulbhata ko aatank mukt ker naina or uske dost jaipur ki or nikal gaye the , jo waha se kuch 70 km ki duri pe hi sthit tha .

Gadi preety drive ker rahi thi or naina aage uske sath me bethi hui thi or aaj un dono saheliyon ne veer ko piche patak diya tha.

Dono hi chup chap bethi thi , naina ka samjh me aata h ki vo apna yantra khone k kaaran udaas thi , lekin preety kyu , aaiye jante h.

Veer :- kya baat h bhai aaj to chamatkar ho gaya , ek gadi me do do ladkiya bethi h , fir bhi itni shanti.

Preety gusse muh ferte hue : - haamm.

Veer preety k galo pe hath pherte hue ;- kya baat h bhai , aaj meri jaan itni gusse m kyu h.

Preety naina se :- sister tum bol do inhe , ki mujhe inse koi baat ni kerni .

Veer :- esa kyu bhai , janeman itna to sitam mat dhao apne is aashiq per.

Veer ki ye baat sun preety or naina dono ki hasi chut gayi , lekin preety ne khud ko control kiya.

Naina haste hue :- kya baat h jiju , aap to pure k pure romeo ho gaye.

Veer :-. Vo kya h na sali sahiba , ab jiski aapki sister jesi beautiful or pyari gf hogi , vo romeo to banega hi na.

Naina ;- vo to thik h ,per lag raha h , hamari sister yani ki aapki gf naraj h aapse .

Veer :- vahi to , jara aap puchiye to sahi ki unke sajan se esi kya galti ho gayi ki vo yu muh felaye bethi h.

Preety veer ki bate sun to sharmate hue ander hi ander bahut khush ho rahi thi , per usne apna jhuta gussa dikhate hue boli.

Preety :- sister kah do apne jiju se , jo apni mangetar se itni badi baat chupaye ki uske pas bhi powers h , to wo bhala gussa na hogi to aari utaregi

Naina :- oh ho love birds , gf bf se sidha mangetar , bahut fast ja rahe ho , ager esa hi chalta raha to kuch dino m kahi ye news na mile mujhe ki m masi banne wali hu.

Preety naina k mukka marte hue :- kya sister kuch bhi bolti ho.

Nains :- vese veer preety ka gussa to jayaj h , tumne itni badi baat humse chupayi kyu , or tumhe ye mahan shiv rudraksh kaha se mili

Veer :- tum janti ho iske baare me.

Naina :- ha veer tumhare gale me mojud ye shiv rudraksh koi aam rudraksh ni ek bahut hi durlabh rudraksh ki mala h , jiske bij keval himalay me paye jate h , inhe swayam bhagavan shankar ka roop mana jata h , ye tumhare pas kaha se or kab aayi.

Itna to m janti hu ki ye tumhare pas shuru se to thi ni , verna thakur k pret ka vaar tumhara kuch na bigad pata iske hote hue.

Veer man me :- lagta h ab sach batane ka samay aagaya h.

Veer :- naina m tumhe iske bare me jarur bataunga , lekin rk jagah aaram se beth ker , pahale hum jis kaam k liye jaipur ja rahe h vo to pura ker le.

Naina veer ki baat maan jati h or fir 3no jaipur pahunchte h or waha sabse pahale ek hotel m 2 room book ker thoda aaram kerte h or fir nikal jate h , jaipur k sabse pavitra sthano me se ek galta ji tirth ki or.

Galta ji basically surya temple h , per yaha or bhi kayi devi devtao ke prasidh temples h.

Yaha per ek kund bhi , jiske pani k strot ka aaj tak koi pata na laga paya, lekin iske snan se milne wala punya ganga snan jitna hi h.

Naina or uske dost yaha jaker sabse pahale kund me snan kerte h or fir kuch mandiro k darshan kerte h.

Fir naina apne us tute hue yantra ko ek kele ke patte me lapet k last baar dekhte hue boli.

Naina :- maaf kerna baba , apki beti aapki is antim nishani ko na sambhal payi , parantu abhi bhi aapki ye bet har ni manegi , wo kese bhi kerke apni maa yani aapki bahan ko jarur mukt kerwayegi or us dusht samraat ka ant karegi.

Ye bolte hue usne apne us yantra ko kund me visarjit ker diya.

Or fir 3no friends thoda bahut jaipur ghumne k baad sidha apne hotel pahunche .

Jaha naina or preety ne phir se veer ne apne sawalo ki bhochar ker di.

Tab veer ne unhe rokte hue.

Veer :-. Are ruko bhai , jara sas to lo.

Veer :- yaad h preety m jab master ji k kaam or naina ki salamti ki dua mangne delhi gaya tha.

Veer ne fir shuru se leker ant tak sari kahani naina or preety ko bata di

Preeti :- to tum ye kahana chahte ho ki karan bhai or jyoti di ne tumhe shaktiya or mala di or unke pass bhi shaktiya bhi h

impossible, aakhir 2 aam insano k paas itni shakti kese ho sakti ho.

Veer :- tum kahi majak to ni ker rahi jaan , humne ab tak itna kuch dekha or itne experience hue , fir bhi tumko esa lag raha h.

Naina sari kahani sun kahi kho si gayi thi.

Naina :- naam kya bataya tumne unka veer .

Veer :- karan or jyoti.

Naina ne to jese ye naam suna use to mano ek alag hi anubhuti hui , mano jesa barso pahale khoyi koi amulya chij ya sambhandh use mil gaya ho, uske man ko ek anokhi shanti or tripti mahasus hui.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- patal lok

Vp apne dono rakshaso k sath apne plan bana raha tha ki ek doot bhagta hua aaya.

Doot :- pranam maharaj.

Vp :- itna ghabraye hue kyu ho bolo

Doot :- maharaj ek heran ker dene wali khabar h, rani vrushali ab ni rahi.

Vp chonker uchhalte hue :- kyaa , kisne kisne kiya ye sab.

Doot :- maharaj jyada to ni pata , per guptacharon ka kahana h ki 2 insano ne rani ko parajit ker unhe atmdah pe majbur ker dala.

2sra doot :- are murkh mahaprabhu ko puri khabar to bata.

(Vp ) mahaprabhu ham jo kah rahe h vo shat pratishat sahi h , rani k ant ka kaaran un 2 manushy me se ek yuvak tha , jisse wo prem ker bethi , parantu vo yuvak kisi dusri ladki se prem kerta h , jo ki ek trittya h , or uski wo premika bhi unke sath mojud thi ranbhumi m rani vaishali k khilaf.

Vp :-. Asambhav, kahi madira pan to ni kiya tumne murkh , jo ye bakwaas ker rahe ho.

Doot :- ni maharaj mane jo bhi kaha vo purntah satya h

Jalasur :- maharaj kahi esa to ni ki wo rakshak karan hi vo yuvak tha .

Aagneysur :- ni mere hisab se to esa asambhav h kyunki humare guptacharon ki 24 ghante unper najar h, or unki suchna k anusar wo dono apne shahar se bahar tak na gaye.

Vp.gusse se :- to ye sab kiya kisne , kon naya shatru aagaya h ab yu achanak hum danvo ka or kon h vo gaddar trittya , jo apne hi kul ki shatru bani hui h.

(Kuch der shant rahane k baad ) samraat kaha h , kya usko itna bhi gyaat ni ki uske rajya me hi uski hi prajati ki ek trittya bhagwat pe uter aayi h.

Doot :- mahaprabhu , maharaj samraat apni tantra sadhna k liye apne gupt sthan pe gaye h or rajya ki bagdor yuvraj markesh ko sambhla ke.

Vp gusse se :- kya samraat ka dimag kharab ho gaya h , jo usne markesh ko itni bada dayitv diya h , ye jante hue bhi ki wo murkh budhi ka bilkul prayog ni kerta , bas apne jhute ahankaar me lipt ho keval bal se kam leta h .

(Apne duto se) ab meri shakal kya dekh rahe ho murkho jao pata lagao kaha h samraat.

Doot :- jo aagya maharaj.

Ye bol ker doot waha se nikal gaye.

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