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Fantasy Pyar Se Pyar Tak ( incest+ fantasy+ romance + revenge + Magical )

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Kailash scene :

Ek ladka khoon se latpat halat main Apne gutno per betha hua tha aur uske samne samast Devi devta indra dev vayu dev agni dev Varun dev surya dev aur bi bohut se devta kade the aur uske samne

Mahadev Vishnu bagwan bramdev Ganesh sab kade the toh mahadev us ladke se bola

Mahadev : Tumne Pap Kiya Hain iska dand Tumhe milkar Rahega

Ladka Kuch Nahin bola chupchap apna sir niche Karke betha Raha

Mahadev : Tum main Shaktiyan bohut ziyada Hain jitne hum tridev main Hain utni shaktiyan Tum main Hain ishi liye shayad Tum main aehankar AA gaya tha tumhari waja se na Jane Kitne beguna log mare gaye Hain Kya kabhi Tumne uske bare main Socha Hain hum ne Tum tridev ne milkar Tumhe jamn diya take Tum is sansar main bad rahe pap ko khatam kar sakho Lekin aj tumhari waha se aj hum apne faisle per pachta Rahe Hain ke hum ne tumko janm kyun diya bolo koi jawab Hain tumhare pass iska

Ladka pahle khamosh Raha phir bola

Ladka : Hume maaf Karke mahadev humse Jo galti hui Hain hum usko sudarna chahte Hain kripay ap mujhe ek moqa de main wachan deta Hain sab thek kar dunga aur mujse ko pap hua Hain uska dand bi milkar Rahega yeh wachan Hain Mera apse

Mahadev : ochit Hain hum Tumhe ek moqa dete Hain Tum Jo bi Karna Chahte ho woh karo

Ladka muskurane ladta Hain Lekin agle hi per chilla kar Bolta hain

Ladka : Rudrrrrrraaa...

Itna bolte Hain asman main bijliya kadatni lag jati Hain aur agle hi pal ki ulka se bi tez aur bade akar wala insan us ladke ke samne beth jata Hain toh ladka aghe bad kar uske kan main Kuch bolta Hain

Aur rudra muskurate hue waha se ud jata Hain

Kuch der bad sabhi ishi soch main the ke yeh kaha gaya ke achanak ek wispot hua wispot itne zor ka tha ke pure bramhand mIn uski gonj Thi

Us dhamake ke bad rudra wapis AA kar ladke ke samne beth kar Bolta hain

Rudra : Malik apka kaam ho gaya Hain

Ladka aghe bad kar rudra ke kan main Kuch bolta Hain toh rudra herani se us ladke ki taraf dekta Hain toh woh ladka haan main sir hilata Hain aur uske Saath hi Rudra wapis waha se gayab ho jata Hain toh ladka wapis mod kar tridev ko pranam karta Hain aur toda Piche hat kar niche beth jata Hain aur apni ankheen band kar ke ek mantr padta Hain ushi se Saath ladke ke body se 7 bade star ⭐ Nikal kar Kahi chale jate Hain

Phir ladka ek aur mantr padta Hain toh uske body se 10 chamakte hue diamond Nikal jate Hain Jo alag alag color ke the

Woh Kahi gayab ho jate hain

Uske bad us ladke ki body se Vishnu bagwan ka Sudarshan chakra aur Saath main uske sare astra Nikal kar gayab ho jate hain

Phir mahadev ka trisool aur pasupad astra ke Saath Saath aur ki Kuch astra Nikal jate Hain

Aur phir bramdev ke bi power aur astra Nikal kar gayab ho jati Hain

Phir ladka utha kar mahadev se Bolta hain

Ladka : agar ho sakhe toh mujhe maaf kar Dena main in shaktiyou ke yuga Nahin Jo ishi Liye main yeh pran leta ho jab tak main is shaktiyou ke yogya Nahin Jo JATA jab tak main ia shaktiyou ko daran Nahin karoga aur Maine Jo pap Kiya Hain uski yahi saza hain aur main apne aradya Narayan ki tapasya karoga jab tak ap mujhe shama na karde aur Darshan naa de yeh pran Hain Mera

Yeh keh kar woh waha se ladkadate hue Chala jata Hain aur uske Jane ke bad sab Devi devta baate Karne lag jate Hain

Wahi woh ladka waha se ek gufaa main beth kar tap Karne lagta hain

Aur dekte hi dekte din din se mahine aur mahine se saal guzar jate Hain aur woh gufa bi adha totha hua tha toh Barish andhi tufan bohut Kuch aya tha Lekin woh ladka apna tap Nahin tod ta aur ishi tarha Apne tap main betha rehta Hain woh ladka puri tarha ek pahad main sama gaya Lekin phir bi usne apna deyan Nahin todha bohut samay tak apna deyan Karne ke bad bi Jab Vishnu bagwan ne us ladke ko Darshan Nahin diya toh sam chintit ho gaya aur sabhi devta bramlok gaye

Indradev : pranam bramdev

Bramdev : Kaho indra dev Tum sabhi devta yaha kese

Indradev : ap toh jante Hain hum sabhi devta yaha kyun aye Hain phir kyun poch Rahe Hain ap

Bramdev : ha hum jante Hain aur hum bi ishi bare main soch rahe Hain

Indradev : to bataiye koi Hal Hain is samasya ka

Bramdev : Tum fikar mat karo indradev hum jald hi Narayan se milne jayege is samasya ko lekar Tum chinta naa karo

Indradev : thek Hain bramdev him pratiksha karega

Phir sabhi devta waha se chale jate Hain aur brabdwv waha se sidhe Narayan se Milne waikunt chale jate Hain

Bramdev Vishnu bagwan se baat karta Hain toh ushe pata chalta Hain ke woh jald hi us ladke se Milne Jane wala Hain toh bramdev waha se chala jata Hain

Toh Vishnu bagwan waha se gayab hokar us ladke se Milne ponch jata Hain

Vishnu bagwan : ankeen koli vats

Ladka apni ankheen kolta Hain aur Vishnu bagwan ko pranam karta Hain

Vishnu bagwan : Kaho Kya wardan chahiye

Ladka : mujhe maaf karde bagwan mujse Jo pap hua Hain maaf kar de mujhe

Vishnu bagwan : thek Hain Lekin aghe se deyan rakna aisi bool phir naa hi pae tumse

Ladka : danyawad bagwan

Vishnu bagwan : putra ab Tum puri tarha yugya ho gaye ho apni shaktiyan daran Karne ke liye toh phir se us sab ka aawahan karlo

Ladka : Nahin bagwan main aisa Nahin Karna Chahta

Vishnu bagwan : aisa kyun

Ladka : kyunke woh shaktiyan Bina mehnat Kiya diye Gai hain jis se muj main phir se aahankar AA jayega to main yeh Chahta ho ke main is bar yeh shaktiyan apni mehnat se hasil Karna Chahta ho

Vishnu bagwan : ha mera bi yahi sujhao Hain tumhare liye

Ladka : Lekin yeh Hoga kese

Vishnu bagwan : us ke Liye Tumhe prithvi lok main janm Lena Hoga

Ladka : Lekin yeh kese Hoga kyunke yeh kalyug chal Raha Hain aur jaha tak mujhe pata Hain koi bi Devi devta avatar Nahin le Sakta darti per phir main kese

Vishnu : main yeh kab Keh Raha ho ke Tum jamn lo main yeh Keh Raha ho ke Tum darti per Jao

Ladka : woh kese

Vishnu bagwan : main Tum per ek aisa mantr padhoga jis se Tum phir se Apne bal pan main chale Jao ge

Ladka : thek Hain main taiyar hi us ke liye

Vishnu bagwan : Lekin ek baat yad rakna

Ladka : aur woh Kya

Vishnu bagwan : jab Tum darti lok per jaoge tab 18 Saal tak Apne parivar ka shuk apno ka prem mata pita ka prem ek Behan ka prem Kuch bi Nahin milega Tumhe jab Tum 18 Saal ke ho Jao uske bad Tumhe yeh sab milega aur jab Tum 20 Saal ke ho Jao tab Tumhe Apne saktiyou ek ek ansh mile ga jis ki madad se Tumhe apni baqi ki shaktiyan hasil Karni hongi thek Hain

Ladka : thek Hain main. Taiyar hi Mera ek sawal Hain ap se

Vishnu : haan main Janta ho Kya sawal hai. Tumhara aur tumhare sawal ka jawab Hain haan woh zaror ayega uske Liye Tumhe taiyar rehna hoga

Ladka : is bar agar woh AA gaya toh main pran leta ho aisi mout Dunga usko ke yamraj bi uski atma lejane se darega yeh wachan Hain Mera apse

~~~see you in next update ~~~

Agar koi galti ho Gai ho toh maaf Karna baqi like aur comment lazmi Karna shukarya
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Update 2



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Raat ke kareeb 2 baje Rahe Hain har taraf Kali Raat ka sannata Chaya hua Hain aur aisa lag Raha Hain ke tufan bi aane wala Hain aur is anheri Kali Raat main ek bacha jiski age kareeb 8 Saal Hain ko bag Raha Hain us Bache ke kapde jagha jagha se patte hue the dekne main woh bacha Kisi Ameer Ghar ka lag Raha Hain us Bache ke sir se khoon bu Nikal Raha the woh bacha bagte bagte achanak gir gaya aur usko Dard bi bohut hua Dard ke mare uske moo se chik Nikal Gai



" Aaaaaiiiiii maaaaaaaa"



Lekin agle hi pal woh foran kada ho gaya aur Bina Apne Dard ki chinta Kiya bagne lada



Aur woh bacha bagte bagte achanak ruk gaya kyunke uske samne ek bohut badi nadi Thi jis main bohut ziyada matra main Pani tha aur us nadi main 1 magarmach bi tha

Jis ki waja se waha per Raat ko toh Kiya din main bi dar ki waja se gao walo main se koi bi Pani Nahin Lene aata tha aur us nadi ke Saath ek bayanak jungle ki tha Jo nadi ke Saath dusri taraf tha gao walo ka kehna Hain ke us jungle main Bhoot aur Preet Rehte Hain jis waja se waha koi Nahin jata aur aj tak Jo bi insan waha gaya Hain waha se koi bi wapis Nahin aya Hain aur 3rd Rasta tha Jo wapis gao ko jata Hain ab yahi 3 rahte us Bache ke pass tha agar woh nadi main khood gaya toh woh magarmach usko kha Jayega aur agar woh jungle main gaya toh woh Bhoot usko pakad lenge aur agar woh wapis gao gaya toh woh log usko pakad lenge Jo usko Marne AA Rahe Hain ab kare toh kare Kya aur jaye toh jaye kaha yahi us Bache ko Samaj Nahin AA Raha tha



Abhi woh bacha soch hi Raha tha ke uske piche 3 admi AA gaye Jo dekne main gunde lag Rahe tha jaise hi us gundo ki Nazar is bacha per padti Hain woh gunde khush ho jate hain woh woh Kisi ko phone karta Hain



Gunda : Hello Bhai woh bacha mil gaya Hain ap foran Aa Jao



Samne se : **********



Gunda : are yeh nadi Hain na jis main magarmach Hain ushi nadi ke pass jaldi aa Jao



Samne se : *********





Phir woh gunda call cut kar deta Hain aur aghe bad kar us bacha se Bolta hain



Gunda : ale ale ab Bach kar kaha baghe ga kaha tha na ke Kahi mat bagta phir kyun bagha tu ab toh Teri jaan lekar hi dum laoga



Bacha us gunde ki baat sunkar dar jata Hain aur rone ladta Hain aur Bolta hain



Bacha : mujhe chod do uncle Marna mere papa apko Nahin chode ge



Gunda us Bache ki baat sunkar hasne lagta hain aur Bolta hain



Gunda : hahahahaha Kya kar lega ho Tere ki Ghar se Tere ko kidnap Karke le aye aur usko pata bi Nahin Chala



Aur woh bacha phir se rone lag jata Hain aur Bolta hain



Bacha : papa maa dadaji ap sab kaha ho please mujhe bacho please



Aur is Bache ki baat sunkar woh sab gunde hasne lad jate Hain



Abhi woh bacha roo hi raha tha ke waha per ek 3 jebs aakar ruk jati Hain aur un jeps main 10 se 15 admi utar kar AA jate Hain ek gunda sabse aghe chal Raha tha dekne main yahi sabka leader rah Raha tha



Leader : very good pakya tune to Kamal kar diya yar Bhai zaror Teri is Kam se khush hokar Tumhe inam denge



Gunda ( yeh wahi Hain Jo abhi us bacha se baat kar Raha tha iska Naam pakya Hain



Pakya : sukarya Bhao aur woh Raha with bacha jo bag gaya tha



Leader aur un ke Saath sab gunde us bacha ki taraf AA jate Hain



Aur jaise bi us bache ki Nazar us leader per padti Hain aur bacha aur bi ziyada dar jata Hain aur apna Rona band kar deta Hain Aur dar ki waja se tar tar kampne lag jata Hain



Aur is Bache ki yeh halat dek kar sab log hanse lad jate hain toh leader sab ko chup Karwa kar us Bache se Bolta hain



Leader : tere ko bola tha na maine ki agar bagne ki Zara se bi Koshish ki toh tujhe mar Dunga lekin tu Nahin mana koi baat nahin ab tu dek main Tere Saath Kya karta ho



Phir leader mud kar Apne gundo se Bolta hain



Leader : Jao re le Aao isko Apne adde per



Aur woh bacha jaise hi yeh sunta Hain woh dar ke mare behosh ho jata Hain aur uska phair slip hokar niche nadi main gir jata Hain aur yeh seen dekhkar sab gunde bag kar us bache ko pakad ne ki koshish karte Hain Lekin der ho chuki Thi woh ladka nadi main gir jata Hain



Toh sab gundo ki ab pat chuki Thi kyunke woh jante the ke agar galti se bi agar yeh baat us ko pata Chale jis ne is Bache ko Yaha per inke pass rakha tha woh in sab ko mar dale ga



Leader : are haramiu yeh Kya kar diya ab toh boss hum sab ke Saath Saath hamari family ko bi mar dale ga agar usko pata Chala toh



Gunda 1 : Bhai hum ne Kuch Nahin Kiya balke uska hi phair pisal kar gir gaya



Leader : abe chup kar safai na de balke yeh soch ke ab boss ko Kya jawab Dena Hain



Pakya : Bhai agar ap kahe toh mere pass ek idea Hain



Leader : to jaldi bak na chup kyun Hain



Pakya : bhai gao main woh bikhari Hain na us Bache ki bi age is Bache jitni Hain toh kyunna us Bache ko gadi ke niche kuchal kar de aur boss se jhoot bole ke yeh wahi Hain jis ko apse hamare pass bejhe tha Lekin ek din humse bag gaya aur sab sadak per jaa Raha tha tab gadi se tok diya isko



Leader : idea to acha Hain Kam karega Kya



Pakya : are Bhai 💯 % kaam karega sur waise bi paise to us logo ne aj dene hi the ya shayad de bi diye ho aur Kal humko boss khud phone kare ke bache ko Mardo phir



Leader : ha tu thek Keh Raha Hain chal chal kar boss ko call kare



Phir sab waha se chale jade Hain Apne adde per kareeb 10 minute bad jab ponchte Hain toh leader Apne boss ko phone karta Hain kareeb 3 ring ke bad samne se call utha ta Hai



Toh leader Bolta hain



Boss : haa jagha bol itni Raat ko call kyun ki Hain tune



Jagha : sorry boss apko pareshan Nahin Karna Chahta tha Lekin bohut zarori Kam tha apse



Boss : haa bol Kya hua Hain



Jagha : boss jis bache ko Apne hamare pass bejha tha uski feroti ke pase mil gaye Hain Kya



Boss : ( gusse main ) abe harami itni Raat ko Kya ishi baat ke Liye phone Kiya hain Kya



Jagha : Nahin Bhai baat Kuch aur Hain



Boss : Kya baat hain jagha sab thek toh Hain na



Jagha : bhai so bacha galti se Yaha se bag gaya tha lekin jaise hi woh sadak per poncha toh ek gadi ne usko tok diya aur woh wahi per mar gaya toh



Boss : acha chal koi baat nahin Hain waise bi paise mil gaye Hain toh tension mat le Kal subhe us bache ki body un ki haveli ke samne pank Dena thek Hain



Jagha : thek Hain boss ap fikar mat karo hoo Jayega



Phir woh call cut kar deta Hain aur Bolta hain



Jagha : Kam ho gaya Hain ab Suno Meri baat diyan se pakya tu aur (ek aur gunde ki taraf ishara karte hue ) tu Tum dono abhi ke abhi city Jao waha se thek waise hi kapde le Aao Jo us bache ne pehne the thek Hain aur Yaha ka kar us kapdo ko jagha jagha pad Dena aur bad main gande per Karna thek Hain



Pakya : ho Jayega Bhai



Jagha : thek Hain tun niklo jaldi se



Woh dono nikal jate Hain aur unke Jane ke bad jagha Bolta hain



Jagha : 2 ya 3 log niklo aur us Bache ko kidnap Karke ke Aao jaldi se thek Hain



3 gunde nikal padte Hain aur kareeb 30 minute main AA jate Hain us bikhari Bache ko kidnap Karke le aate Hain Joke behosh ho Chuka tha phir us bikhari Bache ko bi wahi torchar karta Hain Jo us Bache ke Saath Kiya tha aur jaise hi woh Piche hatta Hain pakya aur woh gunda bi AA jate Hain toh jagha unko dek kar Bolta hain



Jagha : Tum log itne jaldi kese AA gaye



pakya : Bhai jaise kadne ap ne bole the thek waise hi kapde humko raste per mol gaye the aur woh bi ushi tarha jis tarha hum ko chahiye the toh hum usko mar kar le aae



Jagha : yeh acha Kiya Tum ne chalo ab apna bacha hua Kam karte Hain



Phir us mare hue Bache ko woh kapde pehana kar apni jep main dal kar Nikal padne the apni Manzil ki taraf kareeb 2 gante ke bad apni Manzil per ponch kar us bacha ko wahi per dal kar chupchap Nikal jate Hain



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Next Day



Mumbai city main samudar ke kinare ek family picnic manane ayi Thi

Us family main 2 ladke aur ek ladki Thi aur husband wife



Short introduction



Mahesh desai ( age 36 ) iska chota sa dukan Hain electronic ka



Wife : Smita desai : (age 35 ) yeh house wife Hain inki love married hui Hain inke 2 bete aur ek beti Hain



1st beta arun Desai ( age***) 8th lad Raha Hain



2nd kanta : (age***) 5th pad Rahi Hain



3rd beta Manav Desai (age****) yeh bi 5th pad Raha hain



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Bache kelte kelte samunder ki taraf chale jate Hain aur jab uski Nazar waha per oade ek Bache per padti Hain toh woh chilaa te hue bag kar apni maa bap ki taraf chale jate Hain aur bolte Hain



Arun : mom dad waha per Pani main koi Hain



Mahesh : are bete koi Hain Hain Jao khelo tang naa karo



Kanta : Nahin dad Bhai sach bol Rahe Hain waha per koi Hain



Mahesh: thek Hain Chali main bi dekta ho ke Kon Hain



Phir jab waha per Mahesh jaa kar dekta Hain ke ek waha per Sach main ek bacha Hain jab woh dekta Hain ke woh abhi
tak zinda Hain woh with foran usko waha se hospital lekar Chala jata Hain







Guy's update Bada Dena chahta tha ksin mobile main only 2% charge reh gaya Hain sorry





~~~see you in next update ~~~~~



Agat koi galti ho gayi ho toh maff Karna and Pasand aye toh like aur comment lazmi dena sukarya
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