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Bhai gussa kyu hote ho....wo kya hai update itna badha hai ki kya likkhu kuch samajhme nhi aata isiliye main review nhi deta bhai......story jabardast hai........
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Enigma bro, awesome writing yaar, buss ik chothi request hai..story full kaim Chal rai hai.. But Jehde Eh character full hariyanvi language use karde hai na.. Oh poora samajh nai aanda, je odda kuch solution ho sakde ta please try karii bro.. Thanx
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Bhut zabardast or lajawab update.
Komal or ritu arjun ky sath bhut axxi feelings sy chalti Han
Naani na Jo manju KO bag diya or kaha ka ya pehan kar pooja ma Anna to shyad arjun ka sy pooja ma manju ky Bethany ky zydya chances Han phr arjun khud bhi manju KO uski right place deny ky liya koi decision ly chuka ha.
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Komal or ritu arjun ky sath bhut axxi feelings sy chalti Han
Naani na Jo manju KO bag diya or kaha ka ya pehan kar pooja ma Anna to shyad arjun ka sy pooja ma manju ky Bethany ky zydya chances Han phr arjun khud bhi manju KO uski right place deny ky liya koi decision ly chuka ha.
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Boht hi umda update tha ??.
Rameshwar ji to wo kaali mercedez dekh kar pareshan hi hogye the lekin andar ka mahoul dekh kar muskura diye. Shadi ka pehla shagun sangwan ji lekar aaye. Lekin chota sangwan pariwarik zimmedari itne ache se nibhata h aaj pata chala.
Update ke shuruaati bhag me jo pariwarik baatchit aur hasi mazak dekhne ko mila hai wo behad hi shandar tha.
Col. Sahab bhi har tarike se apna sahdog de rhe fir chahe wo apna hotel deni wali baat ho, khali plot dena ya phir apna bhabhi ko unke gaav le jana aur nimantran dene ka kaam apne zimme lena.
Waise jab madhuri didi ka rishta karke laute the toh madhuri ne hone wale pati ka naam abhishek bataya tha aur abhi aapne gorav likha hai...us chiz ko dekh lijiye thoda
Waha nanihaal me to alag hi mahoul chaya hai. Chaaro mamiya sath hi unki betiya bgi intezar me baithi h arjun ke. Mamta mami ki aag to badhti hi ja rhi jisko bujhana ab rajesh mama ka na raha.
Bhai komal aur ritu didi ke sath arjun ke atulniya prem par to koi tippani karna mere bas ka to nahi ?.
Udhar aacharya ji diye us uphar se arjun ko aaj ye samajh aagya ki wo unke liye kitna khas h or use ek pariwarik sadasya hi mante hain. Jiske baad ab shadi ka pehla nimantran unhi ko jane wala h arjun ki taraf se.
Waha nanihaal me pahuchte hi uss khike huye lal gulab se darshan hogye
Udhar saroj ji ko bhi pata hai ki unke jane k bad ghar pe kya hoga aur indirectly full permission deke chali gyi h wo to.
Manju pregnant hai aur arjun ne to jaise pehle hi sochkar rakh liya h ki beti hi hogi. Wese kuch samay se wo sach me jaise manju ko bhul hi gaya tha lekin ab uskp ehsas aur ye drid bhi kar liya hai wo manju ko sath rakhega.
Aur jis hisab se apne wo akhiri line likhi h to lagta h zarur aage chalkar ye baat ek bada rup legi.
Jo bhi ho wo aage ja kar hi pata chalega. ?
Rameshwar ji to wo kaali mercedez dekh kar pareshan hi hogye the lekin andar ka mahoul dekh kar muskura diye. Shadi ka pehla shagun sangwan ji lekar aaye. Lekin chota sangwan pariwarik zimmedari itne ache se nibhata h aaj pata chala.
Update ke shuruaati bhag me jo pariwarik baatchit aur hasi mazak dekhne ko mila hai wo behad hi shandar tha.
Col. Sahab bhi har tarike se apna sahdog de rhe fir chahe wo apna hotel deni wali baat ho, khali plot dena ya phir apna bhabhi ko unke gaav le jana aur nimantran dene ka kaam apne zimme lena.
Waise jab madhuri didi ka rishta karke laute the toh madhuri ne hone wale pati ka naam abhishek bataya tha aur abhi aapne gorav likha hai...us chiz ko dekh lijiye thoda
Aur yaha shayad madhu/renuka hona chahiye tha.
Panditji ki sidhi-sadhi baat bhi kai baar hansi chuta deti hai.
Waha nanihaal me to alag hi mahoul chaya hai. Chaaro mamiya sath hi unki betiya bgi intezar me baithi h arjun ke. Mamta mami ki aag to badhti hi ja rhi jisko bujhana ab rajesh mama ka na raha.
Bhai komal aur ritu didi ke sath arjun ke atulniya prem par to koi tippani karna mere bas ka to nahi ?.
Udhar aacharya ji diye us uphar se arjun ko aaj ye samajh aagya ki wo unke liye kitna khas h or use ek pariwarik sadasya hi mante hain. Jiske baad ab shadi ka pehla nimantran unhi ko jane wala h arjun ki taraf se.
Waha nanihaal me pahuchte hi uss khike huye lal gulab se darshan hogye
Ye kya tha bhai, jaali mehman mtlb kya ye in bade logo ka koi pehle se socha hua koi kadam tha. Aur manju ka apne pati ki maut ke baad bhi sabke samne befikri se arjun ka pehnaya mangalsutra pehenna to yahi darshata hai ki wo bhi sab janti hai. Tabhi ese aaram se un sab k samne aa gyi wo. Aur sunanda ji ne shayad us bag me koi khandani joda diya hoga manju ko.
Udhar saroj ji ko bhi pata hai ki unke jane k bad ghar pe kya hoga aur indirectly full permission deke chali gyi h wo to.
Manju pregnant hai aur arjun ne to jaise pehle hi sochkar rakh liya h ki beti hi hogi. Wese kuch samay se wo sach me jaise manju ko bhul hi gaya tha lekin ab uskp ehsas aur ye drid bhi kar liya hai wo manju ko sath rakhega.
Aur jis hisab se apne wo akhiri line likhi h to lagta h zarur aage chalkar ye baat ek bada rup legi.
Jo bhi ho wo aage ja kar hi pata chalega. ?
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Tintin bhiya (aka3829) aapko to bas Komal-Ritu ka naam dekh kar he aankon mein pyaar aa jaata hai .. arre unkil aapko kaunse angle se in teeno bhai-beheno ka milan erotic nahi laga .. inhone apne milan ko erotic na banane mein kaunsi kasar chhodi hai .. aur aaj tak iss story mein sabse jyaada agar kisi ka erotic scene raha hai to Arjun - komal ka aur uske baad Arjun - ritu ka .. sabse shareefo wala pyaar agar abhi tak kisi se kiya hai to wo sirf apni maa Rekha ji se .. nahi to baki sab ke saath to ye saare paitre aazmata hai .. upar-neehe aage-peeche chaaro dishao se sabko poorn avlokan kar leta hai .. bas apni maa se fat-ti hai .. waha isko sharam aa jaati hai .. doodh ka dhula baccha ...
aur ye Billi420 aaj kal kuch jyaada he meow-meow nahi karne lagi hai .. sab jageh apni naak marti fir rahi hai .. pata nahi iski theory alag he level par chalti hai .. pehle ek se to nipat jaane diya karo yaar .. abhi to Arjun Manju ke saath he hai .. aur inn mahashay ko Manju ke bhavishay ko lekar chinta hone lagi hai .. kabhi Rishabh ka 2min wale scene se bhi inko dikkat hai .. ab kya wo apne gharwali ke saath bhi nahi kar sakta tha kya .. aur waise bhi kisi ke marnoprant aisi baat nahi karte .. jis-se uski aatma ko dukh pahuche ..
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to iss baar Sanjeev-Radhika aur Gaurav-Madhuri ki shaadi mein bahut saare logo se milna hone wala hai .. ek to Radhika bhabi waise he Police officer hai aur inka pariwaar bhi Rameshwar ji ke 'sansar' ki tarah he falafula hai .. magar abhi Madhuri didi ke sasural ko lekar jyaada baate nahi hui ...
par iss baar in dono bhai-behen ki shaadi ke bahane Lalita ji ke maayke mein bhi ghumne ka avsar pradaan hoga .. shayad tab tak ghar mein Tara se alag ek aur Driver taiyaar ho jaaye .. par Arjun ko gaadi seekhayega kaun .. aur ek aur baat Pandit ji ke ghar aur Col. saab ke ghar ke beech mein kaunsa plot aa gaya .. jisko ye samtal karane ki baat kar rahe the .. kyonki inke gharo ki diware to apas mein zudi hui hai ...
kal Rakesh maama aur unke bhanje ke naye college ke udhghatan hone wala hai .. magar ghar ki mahilao mein isko lekar itna jyaada utsah nahi dikha .. inki to apni alag he kichddi pak rahi hai .. aur Kanchan aur Swati bhi apni tigdam bhidane mein lagi hai .. muzhe to lagta hai in sab bechariyo ke armaano par paani na fir jaaye .. kyonki pehle he Arjun ki neend poori nahi hui hai .. wo kal se he bhaag daud karne mein laga hua hai .. raat ko Komal-Ritu ne baazi maar li .. dinn mein Annu Menaka ke ghar par apne maze lene mein lagi hui thi .. aur yaha #### sheher mein nanihaal mein aate he Manju ne apna haq maang liya .. aur abhi 4ro maamiya apni jugat mein hai .. aur inki betiya apni mein .. aas to bindiya bhi lagaye baithi hai .. par uske taare itne buland kaha .. aur kal raat ko Ritu ke saath mahayudh mein pehle he apne sipahi ko Arjun ghayal kara chuka hai to shayad wo uspe jyaada jor na daale ...
well distant relatives ke rukne ka intezaam to col. saab ke 30 kamre wale hotel mein ho jaayega .. aur chhaddo aur aiyaasho ko Sangwan ji ke farmhouse par rukwa denge jo 2 gali ke faasle par hai .. par abhi tak Dharamveer ji ke security wali team nahi aayi jo .. Rameshwar ji ke ghar par raat ko pehra dene wali hai ...
ye chusai - chudai to chalti rahegi magar security issue jyaada important hai .. magar meri iss tipaani ko padh kar kaiyo ke peeche chunchune lag jaayenge ...
aaj jab chhat par Arjun apni sab premikao ki samanta apni badi behen se kar raha tha .. to muzhe ek baar ko to lagne laga tha ki kahi ye Rekha ji ka naam na le le .. ki kaun Komal didi ke samaan hai .. abhi apne saare patte kholna jaayaz bhi nahi ...
lagta hai Aacharya ji bhi biking ke shokeen hai aur collector bhi .. chalo aaj to Arjun gaanv jaane ki jaldi mein tha .. magar kisi aur dinn tafseel se Aacharya ji ke ghar ghoomenge .. isi beech Arjun chandigarh bhi ho aayega .. aur Col. saab ke peeche wala lawn bhi taiyaar ho jaayega .. jaha par Romelia ji badi shiddaht ke saath fulwari ko taiyaar karne mein lagi hai ...
waise kisi bhai ne ek point uthaya tha ki abb shayad security ki wajah se Arjun ko uske ghar wale chandigarh na bheje .. ho sakta hai .. dekhte hai Rameshwar ji ne kuch aur socha ho .. waise unhe apni pautiyo ki suraksha ko lekhar apne vajir par poora bharosa hai .. abhi na to yaha Shankar ji hai aur Sanjeev hospital mein admit hai .. Narinder chacha to US mein he rehne wale hai agle 15 dinn .. unka to seedhe shaadi mein he aana ho paayega .. khair hone ko to Gulati ji aur Lucky n' party bhi hai .. par us sab se pehle to Bijender ki shaadi ka dekhna hai .. waha par shankar ji ko he kanyadaan karna hai .. aur uski moti behen Babita ka pallu bhi Ghollu se bandhna hai .. itne kuch dino mein Chandro dadi bhi kuch theek ho jaayengi .. aur waise bhi Sushila buaji iss baar Arjun ko to apne saath he chipkaaye rakhegi .. jab tak unke dono baccho ko shaadi nahi nimat jaati .. tab tak to ghar par sara kaam ghar ki ladkiyo ko he dekhna padega ...
waise Bijender ki shaadi mein to Balbir aur Vikas bhai bhi saath he rahegne to Vikas ke saath uski nayi-naveli dulhan Parul bhi to rahegi .. aur shayad saath mein unki nakchadi saali sahiba bhi chipak le .. aur waha to Muskaan bhi jaayegi .. aakhir uske bade bhai-behen ki shaadi hai ...
ab ek to Komal didi ki mulakaat Annu walia se karani hai .. aur wo bhi aaj kal mein he honi hai .. uske baad na to Arjun par time hai aur fir Annu bhi chali jaayegi .. waise ho sakta hai ye kaam Komal Menaka ke maadhyam se kar le ...
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aaj ke liye itna he bahut hai .. is-se jyaada main ungli nahi karna chahta ..
aur ye Billi420 aaj kal kuch jyaada he meow-meow nahi karne lagi hai .. sab jageh apni naak marti fir rahi hai .. pata nahi iski theory alag he level par chalti hai .. pehle ek se to nipat jaane diya karo yaar .. abhi to Arjun Manju ke saath he hai .. aur inn mahashay ko Manju ke bhavishay ko lekar chinta hone lagi hai .. kabhi Rishabh ka 2min wale scene se bhi inko dikkat hai .. ab kya wo apne gharwali ke saath bhi nahi kar sakta tha kya .. aur waise bhi kisi ke marnoprant aisi baat nahi karte .. jis-se uski aatma ko dukh pahuche ..
...to iss baar Sanjeev-Radhika aur Gaurav-Madhuri ki shaadi mein bahut saare logo se milna hone wala hai .. ek to Radhika bhabi waise he Police officer hai aur inka pariwaar bhi Rameshwar ji ke 'sansar' ki tarah he falafula hai .. magar abhi Madhuri didi ke sasural ko lekar jyaada baate nahi hui ...
par iss baar in dono bhai-behen ki shaadi ke bahane Lalita ji ke maayke mein bhi ghumne ka avsar pradaan hoga .. shayad tab tak ghar mein Tara se alag ek aur Driver taiyaar ho jaaye .. par Arjun ko gaadi seekhayega kaun .. aur ek aur baat Pandit ji ke ghar aur Col. saab ke ghar ke beech mein kaunsa plot aa gaya .. jisko ye samtal karane ki baat kar rahe the .. kyonki inke gharo ki diware to apas mein zudi hui hai ...
kal Rakesh maama aur unke bhanje ke naye college ke udhghatan hone wala hai .. magar ghar ki mahilao mein isko lekar itna jyaada utsah nahi dikha .. inki to apni alag he kichddi pak rahi hai .. aur Kanchan aur Swati bhi apni tigdam bhidane mein lagi hai .. muzhe to lagta hai in sab bechariyo ke armaano par paani na fir jaaye .. kyonki pehle he Arjun ki neend poori nahi hui hai .. wo kal se he bhaag daud karne mein laga hua hai .. raat ko Komal-Ritu ne baazi maar li .. dinn mein Annu Menaka ke ghar par apne maze lene mein lagi hui thi .. aur yaha #### sheher mein nanihaal mein aate he Manju ne apna haq maang liya .. aur abhi 4ro maamiya apni jugat mein hai .. aur inki betiya apni mein .. aas to bindiya bhi lagaye baithi hai .. par uske taare itne buland kaha .. aur kal raat ko Ritu ke saath mahayudh mein pehle he apne sipahi ko Arjun ghayal kara chuka hai to shayad wo uspe jyaada jor na daale ...
well distant relatives ke rukne ka intezaam to col. saab ke 30 kamre wale hotel mein ho jaayega .. aur chhaddo aur aiyaasho ko Sangwan ji ke farmhouse par rukwa denge jo 2 gali ke faasle par hai .. par abhi tak Dharamveer ji ke security wali team nahi aayi jo .. Rameshwar ji ke ghar par raat ko pehra dene wali hai ...
ye chusai - chudai to chalti rahegi magar security issue jyaada important hai .. magar meri iss tipaani ko padh kar kaiyo ke peeche chunchune lag jaayenge ...
aaj jab chhat par Arjun apni sab premikao ki samanta apni badi behen se kar raha tha .. to muzhe ek baar ko to lagne laga tha ki kahi ye Rekha ji ka naam na le le .. ki kaun Komal didi ke samaan hai .. abhi apne saare patte kholna jaayaz bhi nahi ...
lagta hai Aacharya ji bhi biking ke shokeen hai aur collector bhi .. chalo aaj to Arjun gaanv jaane ki jaldi mein tha .. magar kisi aur dinn tafseel se Aacharya ji ke ghar ghoomenge .. isi beech Arjun chandigarh bhi ho aayega .. aur Col. saab ke peeche wala lawn bhi taiyaar ho jaayega .. jaha par Romelia ji badi shiddaht ke saath fulwari ko taiyaar karne mein lagi hai ...
waise kisi bhai ne ek point uthaya tha ki abb shayad security ki wajah se Arjun ko uske ghar wale chandigarh na bheje .. ho sakta hai .. dekhte hai Rameshwar ji ne kuch aur socha ho .. waise unhe apni pautiyo ki suraksha ko lekhar apne vajir par poora bharosa hai .. abhi na to yaha Shankar ji hai aur Sanjeev hospital mein admit hai .. Narinder chacha to US mein he rehne wale hai agle 15 dinn .. unka to seedhe shaadi mein he aana ho paayega .. khair hone ko to Gulati ji aur Lucky n' party bhi hai .. par us sab se pehle to Bijender ki shaadi ka dekhna hai .. waha par shankar ji ko he kanyadaan karna hai .. aur uski moti behen Babita ka pallu bhi Ghollu se bandhna hai .. itne kuch dino mein Chandro dadi bhi kuch theek ho jaayengi .. aur waise bhi Sushila buaji iss baar Arjun ko to apne saath he chipkaaye rakhegi .. jab tak unke dono baccho ko shaadi nahi nimat jaati .. tab tak to ghar par sara kaam ghar ki ladkiyo ko he dekhna padega ...
waise Bijender ki shaadi mein to Balbir aur Vikas bhai bhi saath he rahegne to Vikas ke saath uski nayi-naveli dulhan Parul bhi to rahegi .. aur shayad saath mein unki nakchadi saali sahiba bhi chipak le .. aur waha to Muskaan bhi jaayegi .. aakhir uske bade bhai-behen ki shaadi hai ...
ab ek to Komal didi ki mulakaat Annu walia se karani hai .. aur wo bhi aaj kal mein he honi hai .. uske baad na to Arjun par time hai aur fir Annu bhi chali jaayegi .. waise ho sakta hai ye kaam Komal Menaka ke maadhyam se kar le ...
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aaj ke liye itna he bahut hai .. is-se jyaada main ungli nahi karna chahta ..
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