Romance Psycho Lovers

[RagVi Singh]

Episode 15 posted.
Let me know — did it hit… or miss?

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Episode 15 – Fracture Point

Sabse achhi baat ye hai ki is story ke update padhte hi sabse pahle Jo cheez shuru hoti hai wo hai...Tension aur ek ankaha magar rongate khada kar dene wala ehsaas...

Do do kanyao ke bich arnav ki haalat pisne wali nazar aai is update me. Udhar anamika darling aur kavya ke bich alag hi scene create hota nazar aaya. Victim ke bare me dono ka hi opinion alag alag raha. Beshak wo apna apna opinion tha but aisa laga jaise cold war hone lagi thi dono me. Arnav decide nahi kar paaya ki kya kare?? Jaldi se laptop ki taraf dono ka dhyan kheecha Actually wo samajh gayla tha ki dono kahi catfight na karne lag jaye

Well, laptop me jo cheeze nazar aai usne alag hi scene create kar diya hai. Lag to raha tha ki anamika ka ek dark side/past hai but isme khul ke samane aa gaya hai. Anamika ki mother ka zikra hona ek alag hi turn de raha hai story ko. Well let's see ye turn aage kaun si reality ko saamne laata hai

Anamika peeche hati, distance create karte hue, jaise usse suddenly space chahiye ho, “I need to go.”

Kavya instantly react hui, “No, you don’t, tum ab iss case ka part ho.”

“Exactly,” Anamika ne calmly kaha.

Arnav uske paas aaya, “Where?”

Usne jawab nahi diya, sirf usse dekha, aur woh enough tha, kyunki Arnav samajh gaya ki woh us jagah ja rahi hai jahan woh khud bhi interfere nahi kar sakta.

“Yeh safe nahi hai,” usne last attempt kiya.

“Safe kab tha?” usne seedha poocha.

Aur uss moment me Arnav ke paas do options the — stop her, ya trust kare… aur usne dusra choose kiya, usne pocket se apni car keys nikali aur uski taraf badha di, “Take it.”

Kavya ne disbelief me uski taraf dekha, “Arnav—”

Lekin usne usse ignore kiya, “Go.”

Iske siva koi dusra option nahi tha arnav ke paas. Jaha bas na chale waha dusra option hi choose karna padta hai
Waise ye opinion sahi bhi tha kyoki kahi na kahi is option se ye to pata chal sakta hai ki killer kaun hai. Anamika ko zabardasti apne sath chipkaye rakhne se kya hi haasil ho sakta tha

Well, anamika darling key le kar chali to gai but lawda tension me bhi daal gai ki ab kya hoga?? Itni daring dikhana sahi tha??? Arnav ko uski safety ke liye secretly kuch to karna chahiye tha

Anamika ne keys li, unki fingers ek second ke liye touch hui, cold, controlled, lekin usme ek unsaid tension tha jo dono ne acknowledge nahi kiya, aur bina kuch bole woh nikal gayi.

Ye likhne ki kya zarurat thi raghu darling

Meera ko bulaaya gaya, laptop open hua, files spread hui, aur Kavya ne structured tone me start kiya, “Let’s strip this down — victim vulnerable, external influence, repeated language, emotional conditioning.”

“Target?” Meera ne poocha.

“Not the victim,” Arnav ne bina delay ke kaha.

Kavya ne uski taraf dekha, “Then who?”

Pause chhota tha, lekin heavy, “Anamika.”

Room quiet ho gaya.

“Why her?” Meera ne softly poocha.

Arnav ne socha, phir dheere se bola, “Because she doesn’t react the way she’s supposed to.”

“Controlled psyche,” Meera ne add kiya.

Kavya ne connect kiya, “So this isn’t about hurting her…”

“It’s about testing her,” Arnav ne complete kiya, phir ek aur line jo aur dark thi, “Or recreating her.”

"and what profit she can get from this" kavya ne doubt express kiya

Silence deeper ho gaya, aur iss baar kisi ne usse break nahi kiya.

Sab kuch waisa hi ho raha hai jaisa wo unknown banda chaah raha hai. Ye log do kadam aage badhne ka sochte hain but chaar kadam pichhe ho jate hain. Zaahir hai ki wo inke har movement par nazar rakhe huye hai...aur itna hi nahi wo khud bhi anamika ki tarah fully controlled aur observe karne wala banda hai...pattern ko better samajhta hai is liye use pahle se pata chal jata hai ki ye log aage kya step uthayenge. I think yahi cheez aisi hai jisse wo inse aage chal raha hai... Arnav and Kavya ko is bare me sochna hoga. Well, next target anamika hai to zaahir hai dhamaka hoga...but usi andaz me jo normal to dikhega but uska reaction normal nahi hoga. Psychology ka pace dikhega....aakhir isi ka to game chalta aaya hai starting se. Let's see what happens next

Uska phone vibrate hua, aur bina kisi doubt ke usne screen dekhi — unknown number.

Usne message open kiya.

You let her go.

Uska grip tighten hua.

Next line aayi.

Good.

Pause deliberate tha.

Phir last message screen par appear hua.

Now she’s not yours to observe… she’s mine to finish.

Aur iss baar silence wapas nahi aaya.

Kyuki iss baar… game shift ho chuka tha.

Update ka ye end bahut achha laga dear. Ek alag hi feel de gaya. Ab tension badh gai hai....is liye nahi ki kya hoga balki is liye apan ki anamika darling akel akele jo aise chali gayli hai uska kya hoyega

Anyway update was amazing as always. Brilliant writing. Keep it up. Waiting for next

 

[RagVi Singh]

Babe romance bolke khoon kharaba dikha rahi hai. Paap lagega tujhe. Anamika ki smile ke alawa kuch nhi dekha. Hame chuna laga rahi hai.

Hehehe majburi me romance wale section me dalna pada as psychological section hai nhi option me

Chalo review start karte hai...
Shuruwat se hi jo crime scene ka vibe tha wo normal investigation jaisa bilkul nahi lag raha. Aisa lag raha tha ki killer bas maar nahi raha… wo har cheez plan karke kisi adhuri kahani ko puri kar raha hai.

Mere liye Kavya aur Anamika ke bich jo spark dikha wo is episode ki sabse badi cheez thi. Dono hi apni jagah sahi hai aur yehi cheez frustrating bhi hai aur interesting bhi. Ab Kavya ka policiya dimag saboot pe focus karta hai to Anamika pattern pe trust kar rahi hai. Ab jab 2 alag type ke log honge to unke sochne ka nazariya bhi alag hoga. Arnav bechara pees raha hai dono ke bich.

Here also Anamika n kavya apna apna point prove krne me lagi hui hai and bono me pov ka hi frka hai n Arnav ko bhi pata but phir bhi voh koi side nhi le skta as consequence bhari honge phir

Laptop wali entries ne to game hi change kar diya… ab ye kahani puri tarah se Anamika se jud chuki hai.

Last reply me bhi kaha tha aur yeh spoiler bhi hai ki iss game ka centre..... Anamika hi hai

Uska apni mother se connection, ye to unexpected tha yaar.

Yepp for readers I hve planned from long

Ab ye killer aur Anamika ki mother ka kya scene hai ye to aage pata chalega but ye wala twist kamal tha. Vese ye Anamika ki maa bhi to ho sakti hai kyunki Anamika ki back story ka hame nhi pata. Ye scene ka buildup bahut ache se kiya tune.

Yahi toh main question hai

Vese Arnav neutral hai, wo naa Kavya ki side le raha hai aur naa Anamika ki aur yahi shayad uske liye acha tha.

Safety first

Nahi to bechare ke sath kuch bhi ho sakta tha .

Yup dono side dangerous hai

Vese Arnav ne Anamika ko apni car keys deke ye to dikha diya ki use Anamika par pura bharosa hai.

As if he can stop her

Use pata hai ke isme risk hai fir bhi usne Anamika ko nhi roka. Ab ye sirf ek emotional decision hai yaa usne kuch socha hai ye to aage pata chalega but mujhe to ye risky lag raha hai. Vese Kavya ka sochna bhi sahi hai, kya yaha Anamika ko akela jaane dena jaruri tha ?

Yeh turn of events bahut imp tha baki uska jana kitna imp hai yeh next episode me pata chal jaega

Aur jab wo last msg aaya, iska mtlb hai wo msg wala Banda sab kuch dekh raha hai. Use inke har ek movement ke baare me pata hai. Ye kaha hai se leke kya karne wale hai sab pata hai use. Jese ye sab kathputliya hai uske liye aur wo inhe apne hisab se nacha raha hai.

He can predict both Anamika n arnav's actions that make him dangerous

Ab target to Anamika hai but wo use marna nhi chahta.

Can't say anything

Aise lag raha hai jese wo kuch janna chahta hai, jese uska test le raha ho.

Janta toh sabkuch hai think about this what's his motive ?

Aur ye Anamika pata nhi kaha gayi hai. Ye ladkiya bhi pata nhi ese time me kyu khud ko Tees maar kha samajh leti hai. Are kisi ko sath le jaati but nhi. Ab ye kaha gayi hai ye to next update me hi pata chalega.

Don't underestimate the power of women ok

Ye wala update kafi engaging tha. Pace bhi acha tha aur jo twist aaya wo bhi kamal tha, totally unexpected n ending bhi achi thi. Bole to perfect tha.
Ab Anamika ki maa ka in sab se kya connection tha ye sab dekhna dilchasp hoga.

Thnks pacing ab thodi fast ho rhegi as story last stage pr hai

Good luck darling RagVi Singh

Thank for ur valuable review
Stay tuned

 

[vihan27]

Hehehe majburi me romance wale section me dalna pada as psychological section hai nhi option me



Here also Anamika n kavya apna apna point prove krne me lagi hui hai and bono me pov ka hi frka hai n Arnav ko bhi pata but phir bhi voh koi side nhi le skta as consequence bhari honge phir

Last reply me bhi kaha tha aur yeh spoiler bhi hai ki iss game ka centre..... Anamika hi hai

Yepp for readers I hve planned from long

Yahi toh main question hai

Safety first

Yup dono side dangerous hai

As if he can stop her

Yeh turn of events bahut imp tha baki uska jana kitna imp hai yeh next episode me pata chal jaega

He can predict both Anamika n arnav's actions that make him dangerous

Can't say anything

Janta toh sabkuch hai think about this what's his motive ?

Don't underestimate the power of women ok

Ye to tu tab bolna jab USC me meri story padhe... Ek surprise hai.. normal story hai but mujhe lagta hai padhne walo ko psnd aayegi... Women power... Ek ladki pyar me kya kar sakti hai.... Aur haa ye av change kar.. bahut bekar lag rahi hai

Thnks pacing ab thodi fast ho rhegi as story last stage pr hai

Thank for ur valuable review
Stay tuned

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Hehehe majburi me romance wale section me dalna pada as psychological section hai nhi option me

To thriller rakhna tha...readers ke sath dhokhebaazi kyo ki

 

[RagVi Singh]

To thriller rakhna tha...readers ke sath dhokhebaazi kyo ki

Uss baare me bhi socha tha but Romance hi shi lga.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Uss baare me bhi socha tha but Romance hi shi lga.

Btw I agree ek do prefix aur hone chahiye idhar...Kabhi kabhi aise concept wali story hoti hai jo in prefix par fit nahi baithti...

 

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