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I want to say ki is story ke according to ye wali situation mail nahi kha rahi abhi to kyonki behen ko hawasi dikhana or bande ke sabse bade dushman se bully karana to baki sari kahaniyon me bhi chal raha ha ye ek tarah se cuck wali feeling hi aa rahi ha
Lekin agar age jaker kuchh interesting dekhne ko milta ha wo baki story ki tarah bully wala chutiyapa nahi to story majedar ho sakti ha kyonki abhi ye bhi nahi oata ki in sabko yahan kon leke aya ha Rocky ne to wild card entry mari ha yahan jiski shayd in sabko ummid nahi thi hope age jaker horror dekhne ko mile na ki wahi adultury wala chutiyapa wahi jisme Rocky apni behen ko sudharne ki koshish kare or uski behen bar bar use heart karte jaye kyonki fir na story ka title match karega na story hope writer understand the readers feeling kyonki bhai tumhari story ki writing achhi ha lekin bas ek chij ki kami rah jati ha family love isliye jyadatar logon ko pasand nahi pati because heartbreaking scenes or suffering kon hi padhta ha aaj kal tumhari story me jyadatar suffering hi hoti ha main character ki or baki sab chahe behen ho biwi ho ya maa bas maje lete rahte han isme bhi lavanya bas maje kar rahi ha agar rocky use kuchh bol bhi dega to wo ulta use hi suna degi kyonki uski job usne hi lagwayi ha fir wahi mc hamesha ghut ghut kar jita rahega or vickey and ye sab hamesha use nichha or bully karte rahenge meri mano bhai agar jo log sahi me kahani padhne ayenge to wo ye bully wale scene padhkar hi chale jayenge kyonki unhe pata hoga at the end MC apni behen ke age haar jayega kyonki agar uski behen ko uski feeling ki jara bhi kadra hoti to wo yahan is halat me nahi hoti jabki mc uske liye raat raat bhar jagkar kama raha ha ki wo uski behen ki padhai ka kharcha utha sake or use ek achhi life de sake but in the end uski behen or uski crush characterless nikle to kon sahan karega i hope you understand my feeling
Mostly isme horror tha bas thoda sa drama dala hai...story horror adventure drama par based hai tags update kar dunga..soon.