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Incest Pizza Delivery..A horror story

Kya story ko bada rakhna chahiye


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Creepy story

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I want to say ki is story ke according to ye wali situation mail nahi kha rahi abhi to kyonki behen ko hawasi dikhana or bande ke sabse bade dushman se bully karana to baki sari kahaniyon me bhi chal raha ha ye ek tarah se cuck wali feeling hi aa rahi ha

Lekin agar age jaker kuchh interesting dekhne ko milta ha wo baki story ki tarah bully wala chutiyapa nahi to story majedar ho sakti ha kyonki abhi ye bhi nahi oata ki in sabko yahan kon leke aya ha Rocky ne to wild card entry mari ha yahan jiski shayd in sabko ummid nahi thi hope age jaker horror dekhne ko mile na ki wahi adultury wala chutiyapa wahi jisme Rocky apni behen ko sudharne ki koshish kare or uski behen bar bar use heart karte jaye kyonki fir na story ka title match karega na story hope writer understand the readers feeling kyonki bhai tumhari story ki writing achhi ha lekin bas ek chij ki kami rah jati ha family love isliye jyadatar logon ko pasand nahi pati because heartbreaking scenes or suffering kon hi padhta ha aaj kal tumhari story me jyadatar suffering hi hoti ha main character ki or baki sab chahe behen ho biwi ho ya maa bas maje lete rahte han isme bhi lavanya bas maje kar rahi ha agar rocky use kuchh bol bhi dega to wo ulta use hi suna degi kyonki uski job usne hi lagwayi ha fir wahi mc hamesha ghut ghut kar jita rahega or vickey and ye sab hamesha use nichha or bully karte rahenge meri mano bhai agar jo log sahi me kahani padhne ayenge to wo ye bully wale scene padhkar hi chale jayenge kyonki unhe pata hoga at the end MC apni behen ke age haar jayega kyonki agar uski behen ko uski feeling ki jara bhi kadra hoti to wo yahan is halat me nahi hoti jabki mc uske liye raat raat bhar jagkar kama raha ha ki wo uski behen ki padhai ka kharcha utha sake or use ek achhi life de sake but in the end uski behen or uski crush characterless nikle to kon sahan karega i hope you understand my feeling

Mostly isme horror tha bas thoda sa drama dala hai...story horror adventure drama par based hai tags update kar dunga..soon.
 

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Thanx dev vro...

Hahaha yarr kosish hoti reality me story lekar chalne ki...aaj ka time aisa hi hai .bharosa kre maine aisa dekha hai baap majduri kar raha hai beti clubs me ghum Rahi hai..
Are me to aise ajjkal news me realy wale crime files padh raha hun or soch raha hun ki kahin aisa apne sath na ho jaye jahan kahin saga beta maa ko marker kha gaya to kahin behen ne apne yaar ke sath milkar pura pariwar marwa diya ghor kalyug ha bhai
Vro wo sympathy thi...jo usne kiya..

Usne apni reputation ko bachane ke liye sab dosh rocky par daal diya..


Vro jab ankho par hawas paise ki patti bandhi ho to kuch dikhai nahi deta..
Or jab utarti ha or reality ka ahsas hota ha to na idhar ka na udhar ka
Chor aisa hi karte hai pakde jane par..

Isme aisa nahi hoga vro jo pichli stories me hua..ki roye aur maaf kar de..
Yaad rakhna apne shabdon ko apne shabdon ko satya karna
Exactly

Let's see .jab truth reveal hoga...

Abhi uski inoncent hai jo ab nafrat me badal rahi hai..jab fatega to sab beh jayenge.
Mujhe bas fatne ka intejar ha
 
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@creepystory incest main theme rakho . Audiance ko incest sex dekna hai. It's request aap ki sabi story adultery pe hai. Hero sirf naam story mai hai. Is story pe thoda hero pe focus karo .🎉❤️
 
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@creepystory incest main theme rakho . Audiance ko incest sex dekna hai. It's request aap ki sabi story adultery pe hai. Hero sirf naam story mai hai. Is story pe thoda hero pe focus karo .🎉❤️
Try karunga vro but jahan par story ki mang hui wahan to dunga hi dusri baat agar hua to short me kar dunga..maine kai baar kaha hai story kirdaro ke according run hoti hai.
 

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Creepy bro idhar ek or bada update do mujhe janna ha ki inme se kiski gand pehle tuti

Update bhai

Tumne isse pehle bhi horror story likhi ( train wolfman waali) howl magar wah complete nahi kari, tum pehle us story ko to complete karo.
Achha horrible update thaa

Tumhaari saari story me full of violence, crime hota hai, mujhe lag raha hai isme bhi hogaa.

I want to say ki is story ke according to ye wali situation mail nahi kha rahi abhi to kyonki behen ko hawasi dikhana or bande ke sabse bade dushman se bully karana to baki sari kahaniyon me bhi chal raha ha ye ek tarah se cuck wali feeling hi aa rahi ha

Lekin agar age jaker kuchh interesting dekhne ko milta ha wo baki story ki tarah bully wala chutiyapa nahi to story majedar ho sakti ha kyonki abhi ye bhi nahi oata ki in sabko yahan kon leke aya ha Rocky ne to wild card entry mari ha yahan jiski shayd in sabko ummid nahi thi hope age jaker horror dekhne ko mile na ki wahi adultury wala chutiyapa wahi jisme Rocky apni behen ko sudharne ki koshish kare or uski behen bar bar use heart karte jaye kyonki fir na story ka title match karega na story hope writer understand the readers feeling kyonki bhai tumhari story ki writing achhi ha lekin bas ek chij ki kami rah jati ha family love isliye jyadatar logon ko pasand nahi pati because heartbreaking scenes or suffering kon hi padhta ha aaj kal tumhari story me jyadatar suffering hi hoti ha main character ki or baki sab chahe behen ho biwi ho ya maa bas maje lete rahte han isme bhi lavanya bas maje kar rahi ha agar rocky use kuchh bol bhi dega to wo ulta use hi suna degi kyonki uski job usne hi lagwayi ha fir wahi mc hamesha ghut ghut kar jita rahega or vickey and ye sab hamesha use nichha or bully karte rahenge meri mano bhai agar jo log sahi me kahani padhne ayenge to wo ye bully wale scene padhkar hi chale jayenge kyonki unhe pata hoga at the end MC apni behen ke age haar jayega kyonki agar uski behen ko uski feeling ki jara bhi kadra hoti to wo yahan is halat me nahi hoti jabki mc uske liye raat raat bhar jagkar kama raha ha ki wo uski behen ki padhai ka kharcha utha sake or use ek achhi life de sake but in the end uski behen or uski crush characterless nikle to kon sahan karega i hope you understand my feeling

Bro update kab doge ....

Are me to aise ajjkal news me realy wale crime files padh raha hun or soch raha hun ki kahin aisa apne sath na ho jaye jahan kahin saga beta maa ko marker kha gaya to kahin behen ne apne yaar ke sath milkar pura pariwar marwa diya ghor kalyug ha bhai

Or jab utarti ha or reality ka ahsas hota ha to na idhar ka na udhar ka



Yaad rakhna apne shabdon ko apne shabdon ko satya karna



Mujhe bas fatne ka intejar ha

@creepystory incest main theme rakho . Audiance ko incest sex dekna hai. It's request aap ki sabi story adultery pe hai. Hero sirf naam story mai hai. Is story pe thoda hero pe focus karo .🎉❤️
Episode is coming
 

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Episode 2.
The guests...


Some time ago same night.




Thodi fursta bhi meri jaan zara bahon ko dijiye.. aaj ki raat maza husn ka ankho se ligiye...



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pub me kano ko fadne wala gana baj raha tha...aahana apni teeno friends shivangi , avni shristhi ke sath dance kar rahi thi...sath me ram ke teeno dost they..raj rony Harman...



Ye lav kab tak ayegi ..ahana ne nratya karte hue pucha...

Ram : kya keh rahi ho sunai nhi de raha hai...

Ahana: lav ab tak aayi kyo nahi...is bar ahana ram ke kaan me chikhi...


Ram : pata nahi viky gaya hai lene .



Ahana : use call karo...itna time nahi lagta use...


Ram : kya yaar.


Ram jhunjhla kar shor se dur call karne chala gaya...



Ahana apni friends ke sath dance karne lagi...


Shrishti ne isharo me pucha ram kaha gaya...aahana ne use vaise hi ishara diya call karne gaya hai....



Itne me rony aur drink le aya aur sab pine lage...


Shrishti : aaj inka plan hai...kya kehti ho..shrishti pass akar ahana ke kaam me chillai...


Ahana muskura di...



AHana : yaar wo insist kar raha hai ram..



Shrishti: enjoy yarr by the way inki planning hai sath me karne ki...pata hai tujhe...

Ahana : whatttt...mai nahi karne wali....



Srishti : isme thrill hai yaar sonch kar dekh ham sab friends apne boyfriends ke sath...how lustful it to be... please mana mat karna..


Ahana : no...aisi jagah chalenge jahan jyada room ho but ek dusre ke sath nahi...


Hi
. baby single ho..itne me ek ladka akar ahana ke piche se chipakne laga...


AAaahhhh...usi samay ram agaya tha...ate hi usne us ladke ke laat mari...ram ko ladta dekh sabhi ruk gaye aur uske dost uske pass ane lage..

Ahana hairani se dekhne lagi...



TEri to sale...itne me us ladke ke dosto ne ram par hamla kar diya...ram ko bachane uske dost agaye...aur fir dono taraf ke log ek dusre ko marne lage...



Khannnnnn...itne me ram ne ek bottle li aur us ladke ke maar di...aur us ladke ke sar se khun nikalne laga...


Dusri side ke ladko ne gun nikal li...



Itne me viky ne piche se akar ek rod jo usne club se uthai gun liye ladke ke sar par mari...


Ram : tu agaya...

Kehte hue ram ne rod chheeni aur un ladko par barsa di...


Sale tujhe pata nahi tune kise mara ye commissioner sahab ke beta hai...ek chotil ladka ram par gussa karte hue bola..


Ram aur uske dost ye sun kar hasne lage...



Xcuseme sir aapko bahar jana hoga..itne me guards agaye...


Hamne police ko call kar diya hai...wo bas aati hi hogi...


Ram ne gusse me gaurd ka collar pakad liya...


Ram : tujhe pata hai mai kon hon chutiye....


Sir collar chhoriye...nahi to ham uthayenge...gaurd ram ka hath pakadte hue bola..


YE sab kya hua ..lav ne akar ahana se pucha...


Ahana : yaar ram ne chhoti si baat ka tamasha bana diya...


Lavanya : jaao roko use...kahi wo gaurd se na ladne lag jaye...


Kya kar rahe ho chhoro use ram..ahana ram ko rokne lagi...jis par ram ne guard ko chhor diya..


Chalo chalte hai...ahana ke kehne par sab bahar ko chal diye...



Club se nikle to ahana us par gussa karne lagi...


Ahana : kya zarurat thi usse ladne ki..


Ram : wo tumhe piche se apna..sonch kar hi uska khun karne ka man ho raha hai..aur tumne use roka bhi nahi..sahi time par mai agaya..


Ahana : shut up jaise hi mujhe ahsas hua mai mudne lagi aur tum agaye sidhe use marne lage....chalo ab mood acha karo...ahana ne uske hath tham liye...




Pi..pi...pi...abhi wo club se nikle bhi nahi ke unke samne 2 police ki car akar ruk gayi ..


Gaurd ne piche se hi ishara kar diya..


Viky : in saalo ko bhi abhi hi ana tha...



TUm hi ho jo andar ladai karke aa rahe ho...


RAm : pata hai mai kon hon..c.m ka beta...mujh par hath dala to teri vardi utar jayegi...


Itne me managaer agaya .


ANdar ladke ghayal hai kuch ko serious chot ayi hai...


Vijay uncle isne rishi ka sar fod diya wo behosh hai...itne me ek ladka apna sar pakde bahar aya..


Policewala vijay : jaldi se ambulance bulao...


Manager : bas ane wali hai maine bula liya hai..


Sale tujhe pata hai tune kise mara...hawaldaro dalo in sabko..


Lavanya: ahana agar mai pakdi gayi to meri maa mere bhai ko sab pata chal jayega...


Ram : hath laga fir tujhe batata hon...kehte hue ram call karne laga..



Itne me hawaldar akar sabko pakadne lage...

Ahana : spector sahab fight sirf in boys ke bich hui hai...hame kyo pakda jaa raha hai...

Manager : sir inki koi galti nahi hai..

Ahana : ram surrender kar do .nahi to ye hame bhi le jayenge...



Ram ne sar hilaya...aur surrendar ke liye hami bhar di ..



Spector : ladkio ko jane do...in pancho ko pakad lo...


Ram : ruko mai surrender kar raha hon...


Chalte hue wo ahana aur uski friends ke pas aya...


Ram : tum hotel jao mai kuch der me chhut kar ata hon...


Ahana : tumhe is sab ki padi hai...


Ram : please...yaar mood hai bhut...



Ahana : agar time par agaye to..


Lavanya : mai hotel nahi jaungi ahana...lav ahana ka name lekar ram ko batate hue boli..







Ram : aisa karo kahi aur le jao kisi forum house me..ohh han tumne bataya tha tumhara ek forum house hai hill station ke kareeb wahan le jao addres mujhe message kar dena .


Chal re ..ithe me hawaldar ne akar ram ko hathkadi pehna di ..



Samne se ambulance bhi agayi..



Ram : baby kuch khane ka zarur order kar dena...mujhe bhuk lagi hai..ram ne jate hue awaj di...


Ram ko lakar hawaldar ne sabke sath lakar bitha diya..



Viky : lagta hai program war gaya...

Ram : abhi ruk tu..kehkar ram ne call laga di...


Apne bandhe hatho se phone nikal kar...




Ram : hello papa ye koi inspector Vijay hai jisne mujhe arrest kiya hai...okay..wait...ye lo baat karo...

Ram phone dete hue bola..


Vijay ne phone lekar kano se laga liya..


Vijay : c.m sir apke bete ne jise mara wo commissioner sahab ka beta hai unse baat kare...aur vijay ne phone cut karke phone apne pass rakh liya...



Ram mangta raha lekin vijay ne phone nahi diya..balki hawaldaro se sabke mobile jabt karbe ke liye kaha..


Ram : tera transfer order subah na aya to mai bhi ek baap ka nahi...


VIky : yaar soncha tha ahana se maze lunga lekin tune yahan fasa diya..


Ram : Abe mujhe bhi lavanya ke husn ka maza chakhna hai kuch der intezar kar ham chhut jayenge..


Raj : tujhe lav me kab se intrest hua...


Viky : Abe sale lav gande kapre pahan kar ati thi isne e kabhi us par dhyan nahi diya siwaye mere kyoki mujhe hai heere ki pehchan..


Raj : kya matlab..samjha nahi..

Viky : abe jaise hi wo mere sath rehkar mere paiso par aish karke ahana ki tarah banne lagi...tab iska dik us par agaya..


Rony : abhi to tune kisi ke ahana ko touch karne par itna hangama kiya aur tune yahan use share karne ka plan bana liya...


Ram : chutiye apne dosto me mai apni wife bhi share kar du ye to gf hai...magar bahar wale ko hamari property ko hath lagane ka adhikar nahi hai...


Rony : tu Ahana se pyar nahi karta..


Ram :karta hon...


Rony : fir kyo use share kar raha hai..


Viky: chutiye ye 2022 hai mai kon sa apna beej usne dalunga...


Ram : ye sala chutiya hi rahgea..



Jaise hi gadi police station me enter hui samne c.m ka minister khada tha...







Present time.












Parda lagne par sab ki chikhe ruki....aur wo sab lambi lambi sanse lene lage...





Ohh shitt...kisi ladki ne kaha..


Achanak se light chali gayi thi..



Shivangi : lagta hai koi ane wala hai....


Kya matlab.....kisi ne pucha andhere me rocky samjh nahi paa raha tha kon kya bol raha hai....


Wo dara sehma bed ke barabar akar jameen par beth gaya tha...




Bed ke upar Sab dar se ek dusre me simte baithe they....


Rocky ko barbar us bakre ka face yaad aa raha tha...aisa darawna bakra usne aaj tak nahi dekha tha... pura kala lambe lambe seeng aur lal ankhe liye wo khidki se dekh raha tha...



Rocky ne darte hue phone ki light jalai aur bed ke niche dekha...niche kuch nahi tha sirf dhul jami thi...



Hetter band hua to jameen thandi hone lagi...aur rocky apni shall me khud ko lapet leta hai...


Lavanya: rocky upar ajao...sannate ko chirti hui lav ki awaj rocky ko sunai di..


Rocky uski awaj sunkar utha aur samne deewar ke pass baith gaya...lav se aur door ...



Lavanya : ahana tum kaho use..

Ahana : mai kya kahu wo kya dudh peeta bacha hai..


RAm : yahan jagah bhi to nahi hai 10 log yahan baithe hai...


Rocky thand se kalp raha tha .uske dant baj rahe they jinhe wo rok raha tha..



Ahana : rocky yahan ajao ham sab ke pass..
Lav rone lagi to ahana ne use awaj di ..


Rocky ne jaise ahana ko ansuna kar diya....


Ahana : dekha....


Ram : wo jahil ziddi gawar hai...


Apne dosto ki batein sun lav ne bhi zidd chhor di...



Ting... Ting...ting...itne me bell baj uthi aur sab kalp gaye....




Light ab bhi nahi ayi thi...



Shivangi kon hoga.... avni ne pucha...


Ting ting....bell repeatly baj rahi thi lekin kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi uthne ki..


Shivangi: kya pta ....hey..tum pizza boy... jab tum aye they tab light gayi hui thi but bell ki awaj ayi ..kya bahar light thi....


Rocky : hmm...


Shivangi : shayad koi hai bahar...


Ahana : kon hoga..yahan ke bare me to koi janta nahi aur ye jagah kafi time se band hai..


Shivangi : shayad koi paryatak...thand badh gayi hai shayad barish ho rahi hai bahar...


Ahana : agar koi aya hai to yahi mauka hai yahan se nikalne ka...




Shivangi ki baat sunkar rocky utha...


Usne phone ki light jalai aur chalte hue wo khidki ke pass aya ....


Dhire dhire usne parda hataya aur roshni me bahar dekhne laga...


Bahar andhera tha aur kuch nahi...bell ab bhi baj rahi thi....bakra nahi tha...


Ache se jayeja lene ke baad rocky door ke pass aya...use bas yahan se nikalna tha kaise bhi karke...



Yahan rehta to bhi mara jata isliye use risk lekar kosish karna sahi laga....




Ahana : ram tumhe uske sath jana chahiye...

Shivangi: sirf ram ko nahi ham sabhi ko...agar nikalna hai...


Ahana : correct...


Rocky door kholne wala tha ki in sab ki awajo par ruk gaya...




Wo sab uthe aur rocky ki taraf badhne lage...


Rocky ne door khola darte hue usne idhar udhar dekha aur room se bahar nikal gaya....



Ab tak aur sab uske kareeb agaye they..


Sabko pass dekh wo lambe lambe kadam badhata hua door ke pass aya...



Koi hai... please darwaza kholo.. please....kya koi hai andar...


Rocky ne door khola to wo nahi khula..aur uske dimag me ahana ke shabd sunai diye...



Rocky : apni taraf se push karo...




Wo piche hatte hue bola...



Door khula aur ek aadmi jiski goadi me aurat thi aur sath me ek eight or nine class me padhne wala ladka tha wo jaldi me andar aye...


Rocky ne door pakad liya tha...wo puri power se door ko band hone se rok raha tha..


Rocky: wapas jaao....wapas jaooo...yahan se wapas jao...aurat ke ghayal hone ki wajah se admi rocky par dhyan nahi de raha tha wo bas shelter dekh raha tha..


Pii...piii .itne me samne se ek car aati dikhai di rocky ko...


Rocky: tum log niklo aur unhe roko ane se...jaldiii...rocky piche dekhte hue sabse bola..



Rocky : uncle yahan se bahar jaoo..uncle ye jagah hunted hai....


Rocky : kya hua niklo bhi...mai use aur nahi rok sakta....rocky ne sabko dekha wo wahi apni jagah par bilkul kisi putle ki tarah jame khade they.....


Kya ye hotel hai...itne me 2 ladkiyan ek ladka andar aya..unme se hi kisi ne pucha...lekin rocky ka dhyan apni bahan aur uske dosto par tha....





Rocky ne unki ankho ka picha kiya aur samne dekha..



Khattttttt...........aaaahhhhhhhhhhh....khatt ki awaj ke sath door band hua aur dar se rocky ki cheekh nikal gayi...




Lohe ke gate ke pass ek 15.feet lamba aur 3 feet chauda hawa ka hawla khada tha...jise dekh rocky aur waki sab ki upar ki sans upar niche ki niche reh gayi....siwaye andar ghusne walo ke unhone piche mud kar nahi dekha tha..


Usne apna hath hilaya aur gate band ho gaya tha...



Yahan kuch hai ham bhige hue hai...


Ab light nahi thi lekin aurat aur bache ke sath aye admi ne torch jaala li thi..


Uski awaj par jaise sab ko hosh aya....


Thanx jo ye jagah mil gayi...hame to laga tha yahan kuch nahi hoga stay ke liye..ek ladki ne kaha


Rocky utha aur andar ke liye bhaga....uske sath hi aur sab...


Kaha bhag rahe ho mujhe apki help chahiye...admi ne kaha...


Hello...do ladkio ke sath aye ladke ne sabko awaj di...


Rocky ke piche piche sab andar ane lage....



Rocky sonch raha tha agar wo nikal jata to nikal jata..samne bhi uske maut khadi thi...use uska bhi khyal aa raha tha...


Rocky ; sab log andar aao..jaldi...

Admi : kya hua hai..tum log aise kyo bhag rahe ho..


Ladka : ham log koi chor daku nahi hai bas mausam ke sataye hue hai..


Rocky : andar aao...jaldi...


Ruko mai karta hon..admi apni aurat ko pakadne laga ki dusra ladka uski help karte hue bola..

Don't worry ye meri maa ki saman hai...aap bhi ghayal hai.admi ki hichkichahat par usne kaha...
Admi piche hua ...aur us ladke ne aurat ko uthaya..jisne uske sath ayi ek ladki help karne lagi...





Ye gila kya hai...kiske kapde gile hai..ram ke hath par gila gila kuch laga aur usne kaha...sab apni apni jagah par baithe they siwaye lav ke...lav apne bhai ke piche khadi thi...


Ram : khada ho...jiski pant geeli hai..


Someone pooping here..smell kitni gandi hai..Shivangi naak par hath rakhte hue boli..

Waki sab ne bhi naak par hath rakh liya...



Ram : khada ho..wo andhere me tatolte hue bola...


Ram : nahi hua to marunga...itne me viky khada hua...


Viky : yaar use dekh kar nikal gayi...


Ram : change karke aa chutiye dho apne aap ko.



Ram use dhakka dete hue chikha .jisse viky niche gira..


Viky : aise me kahan jaunga yaar..


Ahana : aage jao samne washroom hai shayad pani bhi ho...


Viky : raj tu aa mere sath...


Raj : mai nahi aa raha..


Viky : washroom tak to hi jana hai..bahar thodi...


Raj : rony tu jaa sath...uth..

Raj ke force karne par rony uth gaya..






Aurat ko goadi me uthaye wo ladka uske sath ki dono ladkiya..aurat ka pati aur uske sath aya bacha pancho log andar aaye...


Unke aate hi rocky ne door close kar diya..



Rocky : hato ye ghayal hai inhe litane ki jagah do...


Ram : tujhe dikh nahi Raha hai yahan ham sab baithe hai...


Rocky : ye ghayal hai...


Aadmi : itna bada mension hai aur room nahi hai...


YE hotel nahi hai kya..ladke ne pucha..



Rocky ne hatash hokar naa me sar hila diya..




Ahana : us samne almirah me shayad kuch bichane ke liye mil jaye...



Rocky ne almirah kholi aur usme use kai blanket aur gadde mile...jo bandhe hue they...



Rocky ne sabko khola fir jhadte hue jameen par bichane laga...ek gadda bichane par ladke ne aurat ko lita diya...


Rocky : tum inhe dekho kya hua...shivangi se kehkar rocky aur gadde bichane laga...




Thand ki wajah se sab rocky ke bichaye gaddo par baith kar blanket daal lete hai...rocky bhi unke pass hi akar baith jata hai...


Ram : hame blanket do..

Rocky : almirah me rakhe hai nikal le..


Shivangi : inke chot ayi hai...tanke lagane hoge...shivangi aurat ke ghao dekhte hue boli...


Rocky : aap log yahan aye kaise..


Admi : mera naam praksh hai ye mera beta harry aur ye meri wife rozy hai..hamara yahi pass me accident hua..kafi der tak ham behosh rahe jab hosh aya to hamari car khai me atki thi ek support se ...jaise taise maine apni wife ko nikala..mera beta bahar hi mil gaya hame..wo help dhund raha tha...kafi der tak ham help dhundte rahe lekin koi nahi mila...fir ek car hame dikhi jis par kuch ladke jaa rahe they hamne unhe rokna chaha to un kamino ne ham par bottle fek kar mari...


Aadami ki baat sunkar harman raj ram teeno ek dusre ka mooh dekhne lage..

Ram : kash iski baat sunkar ruk jate...


PRaksh : fir jidhar ye log gaye ham bhi inke piche ho liye aur yahan pahuche...


Shivangi : inhe pani pilao...rocky utha ki ahana ne use jug thama diya...


Rocky aurat ke mooh me boond boond pani dalne laga...



Aurat fir bhi hosh me nahi aayi..


Shivangi : inhe aram karne do..tanke laga diye hai maine..


Shivangi rocky ke pass hi baith gayi..


Rocky : tum yahan kaise aaye..


Ladki : ye mera bhai dev hai ye meri friend aur meri bhabhi akshita..ham mumbai se yahan ghumne aye..

Rocky : acha..rocky ke father ne use kabhi bataya tha wo bhi mumbai se hai..


Ladki : mai hon jhanvi...


Rocky: yahan kaise aye..


Jhanvi : mera bhai thoda..jhanvi hath ghuma kar sar ki taraf ishara karne lagi... mentally unstable.. to jis hotel me ham they waha hamara jhagra hua aur hotel hamne chhod diya security ki wajah se fir kafi travel karne ke baad barish ke jaam me fas gaye..hamne shortcut liya aur pahadi rasto se yahan aye kisi dusre hotel ki talash me..koi nahi mila ki hame niche se ye uncle jate dikhe inse address puchne ke liye hamne car inki taraf ghuma di..aur ye jankar ye hotel nahi hai hamare armano par pani fir gaya... sach me bahut thak gaye hai ham log...


Tum sab itna dare sehme kyo ho...aur yahan band kyo kar liya hai..dev ne pucha..


Praksh : yahi mai bhi janna chahta hon..tum kyo hame aane se rok rahe they....aur itne bade ghar me yahan kyo bandh kar rakha hai khud ko...tumhare chahero par ye dar kaisa...




Rocky : ye jagah haunted hai...ham log fas gaye hai..isliye mai aap logo ko rok raha tha...


Jhanvi : lol..ye batao yahan ass pass koi resort hai yeh hame raat yahi guzarni hogi...


Ahana : ye sach keh raha hai...


Jhanvi ne use ghura fir ankho se puchne lagi ki kon ho tum..



Ahana : ye mera ghar hai...


Jhanvi ; thank you hamari help ke liye..


Praksh apni jagah se utha aur kuch mooh me padta hua jahan blanket biche they wahan se lekar bed tak ek rekha khichne laga...



Rocky : ye kya kar rahe ho aap...


Praksh ne mooh par ungli rakh kar chup rehne ka ishara kiya...


Praksh : isse koi bahar nahi jana...



Rocky : ye kya kiya aapne..

Prakash: laxman rekha khich di hai ye bhoot pret ko door rakhegi hamse..


Ahana : hamne sabhi mantra padh liye hai even chalisa bhi...lekin ham bahar jane ke liye door nahi khol paye....



Dhammm.....ek awaz se sab khamosh ho gaye...awaz bahar se ayi thi....jaise koi kuda ho...


Ye kiska ghar hai..

Hoga kisi ka hame isse kya...tu dekh koi jaag to nahi raha...




Awaz sunkar sabko laga koi bahar hai..lekin awaje aam insano ki thi..


Dev ne praksh ki torch uthai aur bina jalaye gate ki taraf badhne laga..dev ke sath rocky utha aur dev ke pass akar usne uska hath pakda aur use khidki ki taraf ishara kiya...



Dono dabe pair khidki ke pass aye...


Andhere me dono ko bahar kuch sujh nahi raha tha sirf awaje aa rahi thi...



Ye dekh dev ne awazo par torch ki light dali...do mard jinke hath hathkadio me bandhe they badan par jinke kaidi wali dress thi wo pizza kha rahe they jo bahar rakha tha...



Admi : pta nahi kisne ye hamare liye rakha..

Admi 2: jisne bhi rakha uska dhanywaad hahaha...


Admi : ghar dekh kar lagta hai andar maal hi maal hoga..Abe light agayi kya...dono piche mude...unhe khidki ke pass do saye dikhe torch pakde hue..


Dono ne hath upar kar liye...






Aaahhhhhhhh.....



Viky washroom ke andar gaya..air apne niche ke kapde nikalne laga...uske sare kapde gande ho gaye they..

Usne tanki chalai to pani aa raha tha..ye dekh use sahi laga apne jism par pani dalna aur usne sab kapde nikal kar shower on kar diya..


Nahate hue jab wo apne jism se gandgi chuta raha tha tab use lal lal pani dikha..hairat se usne upar dekha... shower se khun nikal raha tha...



Aaahhhhh chikh marta hua wo gate ki taraf nanga bhaga...


Usne gate kholna chaha lekin gate nahi khula...jabki usne lock bhi nahi lagaya tha...dekhte hi dekhte washroom khun se bharne laga...viky bhut hath pair maar raha tha awaje de Raha tha na gate khul raha tha na kisi ko uski awaje sunai di....


Pani nikalne wala hole bhi bandh tha jis wajah se washroom khun se bharne laga...dekhte hi dekhte washroom ka khun viky ki gardhan tak agaya...


Jab awaje aur gate kholkar wo thak gaya tab use ahsas hua wo doob raha hai..wo tairte hue shower ke pass aya aur use band kar diya...hole me baal fase they...jinhe wo hath se nikalne laga..ab khun uske sar se upar ho gaya tha...use sans lene me dikkat ho rahi thi..wo upar jane ko hua..ki kisi ne uska pair pakad liya...


Aaaahhhhhhhhh...uski khauf se chikh nikal gayi....



Viky ho gaya tera....viky ko awaj aayi rony ki...


Dubte hue viky ne baal hata diye...jise khun hole me jane laga...



Mai andar aa raha hon...she ise kya ho gaya..ye khul kyo nahi raha...






ROny door kholne ki koshish kar raha tha usse door nahi khul raha tha...idhar viky ke pairo tak blood reh gaya tha..aur viky behosh ho gaya tha..itne me shower apne aap chalu hua aur viky par pani girne laga...jisse wo fir hosh me agaya....


Khud ko sambhal kar wo kisi tarah door tak pahucha..









Police nahi bulana ham jaa rahe hai..hamne kuch bhi nahi churaya hai..dusre aadmi ne kaha..jis par pehle wale aadmi ne uske laat mari...



Pehla admi : kya kar raha hai...mauka milte hi inhe maar kar loot lenge..us admi ne itne dhime se kaha ki khidki tak awaj nahi jaa payi..




Rocky: kapdo se ye kaidi lagte hai bhage hue...rocky dono admio ke jism par kaidio ki dress dekh kehne laga..


Rocky : inhe andar le lete hai ye insan hai..


Dev ne hami bhari...


Rocky door ke pass akar usne door khol diya...


Dhammmm...dhammm dhammm..itne me bhari kadmo ki awaz sabko sunai di...ye awaz andar bhi sab sunpaa rahe they..


Jhanvi : dev ye kaisi awaz hai..

Ahana : ye wahi hai...


Rocky : jaldi andar aao...

Kaidi kadmo ki awaz ki taraf dekh rahe they lekin unhe koi dikhai nahi de raha tha...rocky ki awaz par wo hosh me aaye aur rocky ki taraf bhage...

Rocky : jaldiii....


Khatttt...dono andar aye aur rocky ne door band kar diya...




Dhammmm..
Dhammmmmm...


Bhari kadmo ki awaz tej se tej hoti jaa rahi thi.....



Dhammmmmm.... chatt.......fir ek sath door Tut kar rocky aur dono kaidio par gira....


Aaaaaaaaaaaahhh....aaaaaaaaaaahhhh...aaaaaahhhhhhhh..

Ek bijli jaisi tej roshni ek lamhe ke liye gate par hui...


Pura room sabki chikho se gunjne laga...


ISi samay viky bahar aaya ..room ka hal dekh rony ke sath wo kone me chhupne laga....



Awajo se room buri tarah se gunj raha tha....


Koi door se sabko dekh raha tha...



KOn hai...dev ne awaz di...




Jhanvi bhag kar uske pass ayi...pass akar usne dev ke mooh par hath rakh diya...


Akshita uth kar bed par agayi ..wo bhi ab rocky ki baton par trust karne lagi....



Dhammmmm..itne me ahana bed se giri shrishti ko girate hue....


Lavanya : ahanaaaaa.....



Ahana khich rahi thi...koi ahana ko le jaa raha tha....lekin le jane wala dikhai nahi de raha tha.....


Lav ne ahana ko pakda...aur wo bhi khichne lagi...


Ahana : aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh bachaooo..bachaoo...


Lavanya : aaaaaahhhh...bachaooo bachaooo....rockyy...


Jab dono rocky ke upar se khichadte hue gayi tab rocky ne lav ko dekha aur uski chikhe suni...


Dono room se nikal gayi thi....



Rocky ne kisi tarah khud ko darwaze ke niche se nikala...aur wo uth kar bahar ki taraf bhaga.....



Jab wo bahar aya tab na ahana thi na lavanya..





Rocky : ass pass ke room dekhne laga..

Wo ek room se nikla ki use room par number plate dikhai di...


Room number 5 for staff....aur wo sonchne par majboor ho gaya ye ghar tha yeh hotel....yeh kuch aur..








Ting....ek purani ghadi baji...





Itne me bed apne aap khisakne laga samne ki deewar ki taraf..bed par baithe hue sab ek dusre ke upar gir rahe they....unki chikho se room gunj raha tha.....



Dev jhanvi deewar se lage khade they wo dono bed se gir rahe sabko dekh rahe they...dev apni wife ko dekh bhaga...wo ram ke upar giri thi...


Dev bhaga ki wo fir akar deewar se laga...aisa lag raha tha jameen uth rahi ho....



Dev jhanvi ne samne dekha room ki diware badal rahi thi....dono kaidi door samit bahar ko gire....




Wo dono room se nikal gaye they...



Khatttttt....itne me bed deewar se laga aur jhanvi dev ko lekar hat gayi..dono room se bahar girne wale they ki dev ne ek hath se window pakad li...dusre hath se usne ram ke niche dabi apni wife ka shoulder pakad kar utha liya jisse ram darwaze ki taraf uchla...aur bahar nikal gaya....



Sab samne ki deewar se akar lage..



Jhanvi : dev chhodo window...


Window badal rahi thi jise dekh jhanvi chikhi....dev ne furti se window chhodi....


Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh...harman jab gira tha usne window pakad li thi apna balance banane ke liye....window change hui aur harman ki unglian cut gayi...jinse khun ki fawware chhutne lage....



Niche jo nange pair they unhe mitti mehsus hui... bed gayab ho chuka tha...pura room badal gaya tha...












Rocky barabar wale room se nikla hi tha ki deewaro aur farsh ke badalne se wo angan me akar gira ..wo letne ki halat me uthne ko hua ki uski najar upar gayi...upar roshni aa rahi thi jaise koi chamak...3rd manjil se...aur uska stracture badal raha tha...



Dekhte hi dekhte shandar ghar kisi purane khandar me badalne laga.....







Rockyyyyyy.....


Ek chikh par rocky utha aur chikh ki disha me bhaga.....rocky ko awaz upar se aayi thi ...wo upar ki disha me bhag raha tha...upar ab bas khandarat they....



Yahan pehle jina stairsthi upar jane ke liye thi magar ab jeena to tha lekin dekhne se lag raha tha bahut purane samay ka...




Rocky bhagta hua upar aya..





Rocky : lavanya....lavv......upar akar rocky ne ek room khola aur usme ghus kar wo lav ko awaje lagane laga..



Lavanya : rockyy.........



Room Khali tha aur rocky ko kahi aur se awaje aayi....



Wo bhagta hua room se nikla...



Aur usne us taraf daud laga di jahan se awaj aayi thi....



Lavanya : aaaahhhhh...bachaooo...




Rocky room cross karta hua last room me aya....



Khattttt....rukte hue usne door par hath mara aur door khula....




Samne dekh rocky ka kaleja mooh ko agaya tha....


Ahana ek taraf behosh padi thi...lav upar se nangi thi uski tange faili hui thi jaise kisi ne failai ho....





Lav ke kapde aise fate pade they jaise kisi janwar ne faade ho...tukdo ki surat me.



Rocky andar jane ko hua ki uske mooh par jism par ek hawa ka jhoka feel hua....

Wo bhagta hua andar aya...andar lav behosh nangi thi...uske badan par sirf panty thi jo ek jagah se fati hui thi...





Rocky je jaldi se apni jacket utari..aur lav ko pehnai...



Lavanya : rocky....rocky ke hath lagane se use hosh agaya tha...aur usne rocky ko pukara...thand se wo thithur rahi thi rocky ko bhi..lav ka sharir ek dam sardi se jamta mehus hua tha...ab use bhi bhut jyada sardi lag rahi thi...







Lav uthte hi rocky ke gale lag gayi ..usne jacket ki chain nahi lagayi thi...jisse uske dono boobs rokcy ke akar lage...magar agle hi pal rocky ne dhakka de diya....





Wo uthkar ahana ke pass aya...


Rocky: madam...madam...ahana jab nahi uthi to rocky ne uska cort utar liya jo mehnga aur far wala tha...




Rocky : pahan lo ise...lav ne ahana ka bhi cort pahan liya.....jisse uski tange ghutno tak chhup gayi thi..uske apne kapde pehnne ki halat me nhi they.



Rocky ne ahana ko uthaya aur bahar chal diya...sath sath lavanya bhi....



Chhat par chalte hue rocky ko bahar ka andhere me drashya dikhai diya...



Bahar ped hi ped they...


Wo niche aya...us room ki taraf jahan wo tha pehle...lekin ab wahan koi room nahi tha....



Lavanya : Ahana...ahana...



Kai baar jagane par bhi ahana hosh me nahi aayi...



Rocky : wo room kaha gaya jahan sab they....


Room na dekh lav ne bhi apna sar pakad liya....



Aaahhhh...rocky ke pet me dard utha usne kal subah khana khaya tha ghr se jate samay...tab se wo bhuka tha aur use 20 ghanto se jyada ho gaye they lekin ab uski bhuk bardast ke bahar ho rahi thi...



ROom na dekh rocky table dekhne laga jahan pizza tha lekin ab wahan kuch nahi tha...



USke samne ek galiyara tha...jisme amne samne room they....


Wo usi taraf chalne laga...wo ek room me aya...to room Khali tha but whan bhut sa saman tha...


Room ko ache se dekhkar wo aage badha....


Khannn..khannnn...ki use awaj aayi..kisi chiz ke bajne ki...


Rocky : madam... madam...madam .

Ruk kar wo ahana ko jagane laga...


Ahana bhi sardi se thithur rahi thi rocky ki awaz par wo kasmasai...





Itne me room se ram nikla....jahan se awaz aayi thi....



Lavanya : ram...lav andhere me gaur se dekhte hue boli..

Ram : lav...lav ko pukarta hua ram lavanya ke pass aya...


Ram : tum thik ho....aur wo uske gale lag gaya...


Ram : mujhe tumhari bahut chinta ho rahi thi...


Dhammm...itne me rocky ki bahon se ahana gir gayi thi...yeh rocky ne jankar gira diya tha...


Lavanya : ahana ..


Lav palti aur ahana ke taraf lapaki .


Rocky man me dono ko gaaliyan de raha tha lekin situation aisi thi wo kuch keh nahi sakta tha...



Usne dil me lavanya ke liye koi faisla to kar liya tha...



Ahana: aaahh...


Lavnya : tum thik ho..


Ahana : mera cort...


Rocky: ye pada tha udhar maine ise pehna diya iske pass kapde nahi hai...


Ahana : mujhe thand lag rahi hai...ye ham kaha agaye hai..wo apne charo taraf dekhte hue boli..


Lavanya : mai dhund kar de dungi..


Ram ahana ko sab explain karne laga..

Ram: maine dekha isne tumhe jan bujh kar giraya...kyo re chutiye sahi keh raha hon na...



Rocky : in hatho se maine majdoori ki hai...agar tere jaise college ke londe ke mara to tera jabda bahar gir jayega...




Ram: agar yahan se Bach Gaya to tujhe nahi chhodunga...




Lavanya : chal paogi...

Lavanya ne ahana ko sahara dekar khada kar diya tha...lav ke puchne par ahana sar hila kar hami bhar deti hai...




Rocky : ye awaje kaisi aa rahi hai..


Lavanya : batao ram wahan kon hai..

Ram : udhar wo do log hai jise isne andar liya tha...


Rocky kuch kahe bina aage badh gaya...piche piche wo teeno bhi ane lage..


Ram mujhe apni peeth par bitha loge mujhe problem ho rahi hai chalne me..


Ram ahana ki bat sunkar ruk gaya.


Lavanya : please..ye chal nahi payegi..


Ram : tumhare chutiye bhai ne ise giraya...ram baithte hue bola..jis par ahana sawar ho gayi..


Lavanya: mere bhai ne ham dono ki jaan bachai...tum nahi jante hamare sath kya hua..


Ram : kya hua...


Lavanya : bad me bataungi.






Andar andhere me ache se rocky dono ko dekhne laga..


Rocky : tum dono kya kar rahe ho...


Wo dono palte...


Unke hath me ek rod thi lohe ki..


Kaidi 1 : ye konsi jagah ban gayi bhaya..


Kaidi 2: ye tod doge tum...hamare hath bandhe hue hai..wo apne handcuffs dikhate hue bola..jo uske hatho me bandhi thi...



Rocky: tum log aaye kaise yahan..

Kaidi : jail se bhag kar ham chupte chupate yahan aye aur ei sala ghar bhutiya hai...kuch hayi der me puro badal gayo...yahan kya ho raho..


Rocky : tumne kaha ye bhutiya hai..ab batao tum log jail me kis jurum me gaye they..


Kaidi 1: bhaya mai to chor hon ek din galti se bade admi ke ghar ghus gayo jahan maine bahut maal sameto lekin ham fas gaye ui ghar me ghus to gaye lekin nikal na paye...usma funksan hi aise they kuch samjh na aayi...


Rocky : aur tum..rocky ne dusre se pucha...


Kaidi 2: mai...mai ek ache ghar se hon..mujhse accident ho gaya aur maine khud ko jail me surrender diya..lekin jail me mujhe maarne wala tha jailor kyoki maine accident uske bete ka kiya isliye jaan bacha kar bhag nikla..

Dusre kaidi ko pehla kaidi hairat se dekhne laga...

Rocky : lagte to nahi ho acche ghar se fir bhi maan leta hon...tumne dekha wo sab kaha gaye...


Kaidi 1: nahi bahaya.


Kaidi 2: dost meri hathkadi khol do isse..wo rod pehle kaidi ke hatho me dikhate hue bola..


Rocky : isse nahi khulegi..mere sath aao....


Sabko lekar rocky us room ki taraf chal diya jahan usne saman dekha tha...



Wo us room me aaya..


Lavanya : aisa lagta hai jaise ye hospital ka room ho..ye surgeries ke knife...


Ahana : ye chair kis liye hogi...ahana ek chair ko dekhte hue kehne lagi..



Ram : ye shock dene wali chair lag rahi hai..


Khattt...khaannnnn...itne me saman se rocky ne ek hathodi aari uthai...


Rocky : aao pehle isse kaat kar dekhta hon..nahi to hathode se Tod dunga.bari bari se rocky dono ki hathkadiyan kaatne laga...

Kaidi 2 ki hathkadi kat kar alag ho gayi thi..

Kaidi 1: bhaya jaldi kato .


Rocky : han bas..kya naam hai tumhara.

Kaidi 2 : gangu teli...aur tumharo bhaya..

Rocky : pata nahi...

Lavanya : rocky hai inka naam ye mere bhai hai...


Rocky kuch kehne ko hua ki uski najar samne padi lav ahana ke piche...aur uske ruye dar se khade ho gaye...uske hath se aari gir gayi... sabne rocky ki najro ka picha kiya to wo bhi dar se jam gaye..




Kone me koi khada tha is hawle ka size bada nahi tha andhere ki wajah se bhi kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha...bas lal chamakti ankhe aur ankho ke golo me ek lakeer peele rang ki jaise kisi bakre ki...


Wo andhere se nikli aur sabki taraf badhi aur jaise sab hosh me aye..


Aaaaaaaaahhhh...ram ne chikh mari ahana ko gira kar wo bahar bhaga..iske piche kaidi bhi..rocky ke hath se giri aari lekar gangu bhi bhaga..rocky bhag hi raha tha ki...use lavanya dikhi jo ahana ko sahara de rahi thi...furti se usne ahana ko uthaya.


Rocky : bhago...uski chikh par lav ne daud laga di...ahana jaise sadme se sab dekh rahi thi...uska bf use gira kar bhag gaya tha...


Wo hawla hawa ki speed se rocky ahana lav ki taraf badha...



Gate band hone wala tha ki rocky ahana ko liye kud gaya...teeno bahar aakar gire lekin bahar koi nahi tha na ram na kaidi...



Rocky ne furti se ahana ko uthaya jab lav ko uthane ko hua wo pehle hi uth gayi thi..chote bas ahana ko aayi thi...jine se wo upar ki taraf bhagne laga dono ko lekar ...


First floor par akar wo ek room me ghus gaya...room me akar wo kone dekhne laga..yahan tak ki washroom bhi...clear dekh usne ek jagah par ghas me ahana ko ghas par bitha diya...aur khud apne bhuk se tadapte pet par hath rakh kar baith gaya...



Ahana bhi deewar se tek laga kar baith gayi...itne me lav rocky ke pass ayi aur apna sar uske kandho par rakh kar...sisakne lagi...



ROcky hata usse to wo fir uske pass agayi...


Lavanya : ham kahan fas gaye...pata nahi bachenge bhi yeh nahi...


Ahana : nahi...yahan se koi nahi nikal sakta...


Rocky : hato na mere pass se...


Lav ko dhakka dete hue rocky pass se hat gaya..


Lavanya: tum ab bhi naraz ho chote bhai...


Rocky room me rakhi kam ki chize talash karne laga ki use piche se awaj ayi..


Rocky : kutto ki tarah mehnat karu na khane ka dhyan na pine ka...aur tu yahan meri bimar maa ko akela chhod apne yaro ke sath aish kar rahi hai...tujhse rishte ki wajah se gali bhi nahi de sakta...lekin jaan le ab hamare bich bhai behn jaisa kuch nahi hai..

Lavanya ke kehne par rocky fat pada uske andar ka dard bahar agaya tha.
Lavanya: aisa mat kaho rocky...mera tumhare siwa hai hi kon..lav tadap kar rocky ke kadmo se lipat gayi..lekin agle pal rocky ne laat khatak kar use alag kar diya...
Rocky : viky hai na jiske sath tu mooh kala karti hai...sala apni pant me poop kar raha chhii..ye teri pasand hai..rocky thukte hue bola...
Lavanya : tum jitna kamate ho usse mai itne bade college me inke sath admission nahi le pati ...viky ne mere kharche uthaye uska pyar dekh mujhe usse pyar ho gaya..
Rocky : ye jante hue ye tere bhai ka dushman hai...bahanchod kehti to mujhse..khud ko bech deta apni kidney bech deta lekin tu jahan padna chahti mai wahan padata lekin tune apni ayyashi ke liye mere bharose ko toda.. logo ko dekh kar tujh par proud feel karta tha ki meri bahan aisi nahi hai..garelu padahku ladki hai..lekin mujhe kya pata tha tu..dekh door hoja mujhse ..mere mooh me bas tere liye gaalian aa rahi hai...
Bina lav ko dekhe rocky ke dil ka dard chalak pada .uski ankhe ek lamhe ko bhigi lekin agle hi pal usne khud par control kar liya..
Ahana : atleast uski baat to sun lo..she loves you..lav ko rota dekh ahana ne kaha..
Rocky : madam tum to chup hi ho jao..kya bolun tumhe..vaise mera koi hak to nahi hai..lekin ek baat zarur kahunga..tum sab sale apas me dushman they 10th me ham koi dudh pite bache nahi they sahi galat samjhte they..tum sab sale ek ho gaye villian ban gaya mai...sala chutiya rocky..bf banaya kise us chutiye ram ko jisne tumhari pic lagayi thi..madam aap ki sangat ki wajah se ye aisi bani hai...isliye aap door hi raho..
Lavanya : aisa nahi hai rocky ahana ne mere kehne par ram ke sath relationship me ayi..

Rocky : han tu to sabse badi wali...tujhse kaha na chup rehne ko..mai bas galio se khud ko kisi tarah rok raha hon...ab tune kuch kaha to tu sun nahi payegi..hamare bich sab khatm tu ab kuch bhi kar..ram ke sath viky ke sath jo karna hai kar ....hamara rishta khatam tata bye bye..the end.
Ahana : agar rishta kahtm hai to ise ab tak bacha kyo rahe ho ..maaf kar do...ab viky ke pass nahi jayegi..
Rocky : madam maine kaha na hamse door rehne ko...kisi bahar wale ko mere family matter me bolne ka adhikar nahi hai...rocky ki tune me gussa tha jise dekh ahana chup ho gayi..
Lavanya : to marne kyo nahi diya mujhe kyo bachaya...
Rocky : apni maa ke liye mujhe nahi pata mai yahan se bachunga yeh nhi agar bacha to tujhe bhi bachaunga taki tu akeli jiye apni maa ke bina apne bhai ke bina...
Rocky ne ab tak room se bahut sara saman ikattha kar liya tha jo uske survive me kaam ata...
Lavanya : maa ko pata hai viky ke bare me... please ab to maaf kar do...
Khannnnnn...khannnnnnn....
Rocky ne suna aur uske hatho se sara lohe ka saman gir gaya..jo uske pairo par gira...sadme se wo nidhal hokar ghutno par agaya...
Haan beta tumhari didi so rahi hai...
Ab tak ruke aansu achanak behne lage...
Dhammmmmm..... gusse me usne lohe ki machine par hath mare aur ek nukili kor uski hatheli me chubh gayi...
Ghutno me mooh dekar wo sisak sisak kar rone laga.....
Lav ne use hug karke uske sar ko apni chhati se laga liya...
Lavanya : please rona band karo rocky... rocky...maa bas chahti thi mai padai ke baad ache ghar me jaun...
Rocky tha ki uski siskian band nahi ho rahi thi...uske dil par sadma laga...use hosh nahi tha...
Sahab..kam de do na... meri maa bimar hai...
Ache karega to hi paise milenge...
Nimbu le lo nimbu..
ROcky ye chot kaise lagi..
Kuch nahi maa fisal gaya tha...
Batate ho yeh pitayi kar du..
Sach me kuch nahi didi...
Rocky batao nahi to baat nahi karungi na padhaungi tumhe...
Eente uthate hue jine se gir gaya tha..
Tu kyo itni mehnat karta hai...mai part time job kar rahi hon na...khana kharcha to chal hi Raha hai hamara..
Maa ki dabai aur teri padai kaise hogi..meri bas ek hi khwahish hai mai nahi tu padh jaye...
Maaaaaaaa....apni maa ko pukarte hue rocky bacho ki tarah rone laga ..
Lavanya : betu please aansu pocho ..lav apne hatho se ansu pochne lagi...lav jaise hi ansu pochti rocky ki ankho se pani fir chalak padta..
Kafi der ro lene ke baad rocky chup hua...thaka hara wo deewar se tek laga kar baith gaya...
Lav pass akar uski peeth sehlane lagi...
Lavanya: sab bhul jao bas apni didi ko maaf kar do...tum jaisa kahoge mai vaisa karungi...rocky...bolte kyo nahi...
Lav ke bar bar kehne par bhi rocky koi jawab nahi deta..
Lavanya : kar do na maaf.. please...mujhse baat karo... rocky...mai tumse bahut pyar karti hon...rocky...
Ahana : itna keh rahi hai to kar do na maaf...tumhari bahan hai aur ham musibat me fase hai..kya pata aane wale samay me ham zinda ho na ho..
Rocky : tum Ameer tum log apni izzat apna zameer bech kar paise kamate ho aur ham gareebo ko nali ka qeeda samjhte ho agar yahan fasi na hoti to tum mujhe mooh lagane ko bhi apni beizzati samjhti tum log sab kuch kho kar samjhte ho hamne sab paa liya lekin ham aise nahi ham gareebo ke pass izzat ke siwa kuch nahi hota madam..na ham apne zameer ka soda karte hai.. aapki bhasa me kya bolte inner soul wohi ham log maut se jyada apni inner soul ki maut se darte hai.. inhone mere bharose meri gairat ka khun kiya hai agar maaf kar diya to apni inner soul ko maar baithunga jo maut se bhi badtar hai mere liye...abhi tak sirf inse rishta toda ab apni maa se bhi..kehkar rocky ghutno me mooh dale rone laga...
Lavanya : dekh rahi ho ahana..agar ye mera saga bhai hota to apni maa ko chhodne ka kabhi na kehta aur mujhe maaf kar deta....ye saga nahi hai na isne apna rang dikha diya...
Rocky ne ghutno se sar nikala aur hairat se wo lav ko dekhne laga...
Rocky : ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho...
Ahana : tum lav ke sautele bhai ho...tum dono ke father ek hai lekin maaye alag alag hai...
Rocky : nahi ....ye jhut hai ...hai na didi...ye meri sagi bahan hai...wo meri maa ... rocky ne dekha lav naa me gardan hila rahi thi....
Rocky : madam dekho ye mana kar rahi hai..ise kaho na wo ghar par leti aurat meri maa hai...rocky ke ansuo se uski jacket bhig rahi thi..
Ahana : wo sach keh rahi hai...tum to yahan ke ho bhi nahi...iski maa yahan se hai...tum nahi..tum mumbai me paida hue tumhari maa mumbai ki ek dengerous aurat hai jisse darkar tumhare papa yahan le aaye.. apni aur iski shakal dekho ye pahadi hai aur tum mumbai ke lagte ho...
Didi tumhari naak kitni chapti hai meri dekho kitni khadi..
Tum papa par gaye ho..
Nahi didi unki bhi aapki tarah hai...
Aur rocky fir sisak sisak kar rone laga...
Rocky : jis aurat ko mai maa kehta tha wo meri maa nahi hai... maaa....rocky chikh chikh kar rone laga...
Lavanya : rocky sambhalo khud ko...lav uske aansu pochne lagi...fir use apne seene se laga leti hai...
Lavanya : isse ye to nahi badal jayega wo tumhari maa nahi mai tumhari bahan nahi hon...maa ne tumhare baad bache nahi kiye...isliye ki tumhari parwarish me kami na ajaye..ham dono tumhe sage se bhi jyada pyar karte hai...tum hamesha mere bhai rahoge...
Rocky ; nahi madam ham bhai bahan nahi hai..lekin agar mai zinda yahan se nikla to tumhe tumhari maa ke pass zarur chhod dunga...
Lavanya : bakwas band karo...mai madam nahi tumhari didi hon...I know viky ki wajah se naraz ho..
Rocky ne naa me sar hilaya aur uth gaya.....
Rocky : madam aap azaad ho ab jisse affair rakho mujhe fark nahi padega...aur rocky apna saman binne laga..apne ghao par usne kapda faad kar bandh liya...



























 

Raj890

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Bhai itna successful update kya socha tha kya ho gaya Rocky to koi or hi nikla ye to lavanya ka soutela bhai nikla maa bhi mili hui ha horror scenes me to sach me dil dhak dhak kar raha tha next update ka intejar rahega
 

Kuchnahi24

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Next level bhai… aapki soch kuch alag hi kamaal karti hai jab shabdo mai ubharti hai…
Awesome plot… please update par aap kuch dhyaan de paaye to kha hi kahe maja aa jayega
 

dev61901

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Badhiya update bhai maja aya

Itne twist to kabhi kisi puri kahani me nahi hote jitna is ek ep me dekhne ko mil gaye

Itna kuchh kam tha kya apne mocko jhanvi or akshita ki bhi idhar fansa diya wait mocko urf dev ki shadi bhi ho gayi akshita se lagta ha ye story baad wali timeline ki ha or mocko ki yaddasht abhi bhi wapas nahi ayi ha

Mujhe ek baat batao creepy bro sari stories ki timeline kya ha arya or sam wali to shayd same hi ha uske baad ati ha salil wali fir moko wali or ab ye Rocky wali

Vicke mc pent me mut diya hahahha apne aap ko sava ser samajh raha tha sabke samne pant gili kar di or udhar bathroom me marte marte bachha ahh iski durdasha pe to sach ne maja aya

Or ye kya bhens ki ankh pura hotel hi jaise ki inki dusri duniya ke ser karwa raha ha sala koi hotel me to koi hospital pahunch gaya ha bas ek baat ha wo ye ki mout in sabke pichhe padi ha

Ahana susri ki ko okat oata chal gayi isko Ram kaise ise chhodkar bhaga tha sahi me iska chehra dekhne wala tha isko bhi pata pad gayi ki kitna pyar karta ha Ram usse use kahin jyada to apna Rocky ne kar diya ise puth per uthaker yahan se wahan bhag raha ha are kuchh to ahsas hua hoga ise lekin apna Rocky sakht londa bana rehna chahiye ye nahi ki ab iske age jhuk jaye nahi

Lavanya iske liye kya kahen susri ki Paisa dekhkar pyar kar bethi or ab sachai pata pad gayi to apne bhai ke wapas karib jaa rahi ha Rocky sahi kar raha ha ise dutkarkar or jo Rocky ne apne dil ke jajbat khol diye ha tab ise ahsas hua yani ki jab tak ahsas na ho to galti dohrate jao jab tumne apni ayaashi ko apne bhai ke uper chun liya tha tab hi tum uski gunehgar ho gayi thi kyonki bharosa sabse badi chij hoti ha uske tutne per insan bhi tut jata ha jaise is waqt Rocky tut gaya ha

Or bolo maa bhi apne beti ka sath de rahi thi boli sab kuchh janne ke baad bhi ab kya jaren bharosa to dono maa beti ne tod diya ki kahan to wo apni bimar maa ke ilaj ke liye paise ikathha kar raha ha or kahan wo apni beti ke galat kamo me uska sath de rahi ha

Sahi ha Rocky ne sahi kiya rishta todkar sala insan ki kadra tab tak mahsus nahi hoti jab tak wo inse juda na ho jaye sala dono maa beti ko tab pata padega

Ahana isko to lagta ha ki duniya ka gyan ab mil raha ha Rocky ki baton se ek dum chup ho gayi kya bole ye ab Rocky wo Rocky nahi raha jo iske pichhe lattu tha ab to banda sakht londa ban gaya ha sala kuchh bhi ho jaye jhukega nahi sala or isku jaan bachaker ahsasn or kar diya ha iske uper

Susri walon ko Rocky ne unki aukat dikha di ki jab mout samne ho to koi apna nahi hota ye baat ahana or lavanya ko pata chal gayi hogi ki paisa or shoharat insan ko sab de sakta ha lekin pyar nahi de sakta

And last me Rocky per futa ha bomb bolo jisko apni maa behen samajhta tha wo to uski sagi ha hi nahi souteli nikli what a twist lekin ab tak in dono ne Rocky ki sachai kyon chhupa ker rakhi hui thi ki kahin Rocky inhe chhodker na chala jaye yaa fir majra kuchh or ha

And Rocky jaise ahana ne kaha ki Rocky ki maa mumbai ki koi dangerous lady ha to iska matlab Rocky to kisi powerfull family se belong karta ha to kya uski maa ne apne bete ko dhundne ki koshish nahi ki ha kya ki uska beta kis halat me hoga ya fir wo bhi isko bhul gayi sala arya wali story ki feeling aa rahi ha

Ab me ek baat kehna chahunga ki Rocky ki maa kon ho sakti ha kyonki powerfull lady me to ek mujhe anaya ka naam yaad ata ha ek sam ki maa ka kya Rocky inki family me se hi kisi ka beta ha ya fir ek or koi nayi lady don ane wali ha story me age chalkar

Ek baat or ye lavanya Arya wali lavanya ha ya koi or kyonki abhi tak maa ka naam reveal nahi kiya ha tumne agar same nahi ha to achhi baat ha or agar same ha to or jyada achhi baat ha tab to or jyada maja ayega kher mujhe lagta ha same nahi ha kyonki fir wo is haunted jagah se itna darti nahi

Kher me ye puchna chahta tha creepy bro agar story ka jyadatar part is haunted mansion me ha to story ka naam thoda change kar do kuchh haunted mansion type naam rakh do

And last me ek hi bat bolunga horror scene me sach me maja aa raha tha jo sabki gand fati padi ha or Rocky dat kar samna kar raha ha mushkilon ka wo dekhkar maja aa raha ha

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