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characters-
ashok family
baap - kishan lal
maa -pushpa devi
beta - ashok
2nd beta- kewal
surinder family
maa -mohini
baap-sohan lal
beta-surinder
bahan- geeta
2nd bahan- rekha
sarita family
baaap- thakur
maa-radhika
beti-sarita
kahani ko thoda dekhte h pahle ki kya hua tha-
jab sunny apne pyar ka izhaar sonia se karta h or usko sabke samne kiss karta h uske baad=
kuch der room me sannata raha,,bas sab logo ke rone ki hi awaj aa rahi thi,,,,phir mama
bola,,,,,
tera koi kasoor nahi hai sunny,,,,or naa hi hum sab ka kasoor hai jo hum logo ne apni
hawas ko apne hi ghar me pura kiya,,,,kasoor to uss harami kishan laal ka hai jisne meri
jingadi kharab kardi,,mere pure pariwar ki zindagi kharab kardi,,,,,or badle ki aag me
maine tum logo ki family,,, apni family kharab kardi,,,,
main thoda preshan ho gya,,,,kishal laal ,,,yani maa ka chacha,,,,jisne seema ka rape kiya
tha ,,,lekin usne surinder ki family ko kaise barbaad kar diya,,,,main kuch samaj nahi
paa raha tha,,,,
mama bhala maa ke chacha ne apni family ko kaise barbad kar diya,,,,main kuch samaja
nhi
vo teri maa ka chacha nahi hai sunny,,,,vo ashok ka baap hai,,,,,or badkismati se vo
tera bhi baap hai,,,,,,,,teri baskismati ye hai ki usne teri maa ka ek baar rape kiya
lekin meri maa ka rape to vo har roj karta tha,,,,har din karta tha har pal karta tha
or main bebasi se sab kuch dekhta rehta tha,,,,itna bolkar surinder rota hua mere pairo
me gir gya,,,,
surinder ki batton se main preshan ho gya,,,,or sab logo ki taraf dekhne laga,,,maa or
bhua roti hui apna sar hila kar mujhe ye bata rahi thi ki surinder jo bol raha hai vo
sach hai,,
ashok ne age badke surinder ko uthaya or samne sofe per bitha diya,,,,,geeta chalke uske
pass chali gyi ,,,sath wale sofe per ashok khud baith gya,,edhar main bade sofe per akela
baitha hua tha tabhi maa mere pass ake baith gyi or maa ke pass sonia ake baith gyi,,,
tabhi geeta surinder ke sofe ki ek taraf thodi c side per baith gyi,,or uska hath pakad
liya,,,,,,or surinder ko bolne ko kaha,,,,
srinder bolne laga,,,,,,
main tera mama nahi sunny,,,,,or naa hi geeta teri bhua hai,,,,,geeta meri behan hai or
gaon me rekha meri behan hai,,,,,hum teeno bhai behan hai,,,,,or geeta ashok ki behan
nahi ashok ki patni hai,,,,
tabhi main thoda hairaan reh gya lekin tabhi mujhe yaad aya uss tasveer ke bare me jo
maine rekha ke ghar dekhi thi,,,,main usko pehchan nahi paa raha tha,,,uss tasveer me 5
log they jo jane pehchane lag rahe they lekin 2 ko main bilkul bhi nahi pehchan raha tha
,,aab pata chala main 3 logo ko kyu pehchan raha tha vo teen log surinder geeta or rekha
or ho na ho baki ke 2 log inke maa baap hongey,,,,,
surinder ne age bolna shuru kiya ,,,,,,,,,
meri maa kishan laal ke ghar kaam wali thi,,,kishan laal ke ghar ka sara kaam karti thi
or main bhi maa ke sath rasoyi ke kam me hath batane unke sath jata tha,,,jabki rekha
pushpa devi ke sath gain bhenso ko sambhalne ka kaam karti thi,,,,geeta ki ashok se bhut
banti thi isliye geeta ashok ke sath school jati thi,,,,,hum logo ko bhi school jane ka
dil karta tha lekin hum logo ka baap hume school nahi jane deta tha or naa hi kishan laal
hume school jane deta tha,,,vo chahta tha ki main maa ke sath kitchen ka kaam karu or
rekha pushpa devi ke sath gobar sambhalne me uski madad kare,,,,,vo geeta ko bhi nahi
jane
dena chahta tha school lekin ashok ki zidd ki vajah se kishan laal geeta ko school jane
deta,,,,
mera baap ek number ka sharabi tha ,,,koi kaam nahi karta tha or kishan laal issi baat ka
pura fayda uthata tha,,,,vo roj mere baap ko sharab k liye paise de deta or badle me meri
maa ke sath apni hawas mitata,,,meri maa bhi bebus thi kuch kar nahi sakti thi,,,kyuki
jiss ghar me hum rehte jo hum log khate pete vo sab kishan laal ka tha,,,,baap ne to puri
umar koi kaam hi nahi kiya tha,,,maa majboor thi,,,,ek to gareeb thi dusri ehsano ke boojh
tale dabi hui thi,,,,,,or majbori me kishan laal ko apne jism se khelne deti kabhi mana
nahi karti,,,or kishan laal bhi uski majbori ka pura fayda uthata ,,,,,,
surinder ro raha tha or bol raha tha,,,,,,,
kishan laal jab dil kare meri maa ke jism se khelna shuru kar deta,,,,kabhi kamre me to
kabhi angan me,,,,kabhi kheto me to kabhi kitchen me,,,,main maa ke sath kaam karta tha
kitchen me to kishan laal vahan ata or maa ke jism se khelna shuru kar deta,, kabhi vo
akela ata to kabhi dusre gaon ka thakur( sarita ka baap) bhi aa jata jo sarita ka baap
tha or kishan laal ka acha dost bhi,,,,,,vo dono milkar mere samne meri maa ke jism ke
sath khelte or main bas khada tamasha dekhta rehta,,,,main bhut chota tha kuch kar nahi
sakta tha,,,mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki vo log kya kar rahe hai,,,mujhe to essa lagta
jaise vo log meri maa ko maar rahe hai,,,,,kabhi kabhi gusse me khoon khoul jata mera or
hath me pakde chaku ko kishan laal ke seene me utarne ka dil karta lekin maa mana kar
deti
kuch time beet-ta gya or hum log thode bade hone lage,,,,rekha or geeta bhi badi hone lagi
jawan hone lagi,,,,,geeta to ashok ki vajah se bach jati kyuki ashok hamesha uske sath hi
rehta tha ,,,dono pyar karte they ek dusre ko,,,lekin rekha nahi bach payi,,,,pushpa devi
ne bhi koshish ki usko bachane ki lekin kishan laal pushpa devi ko bhut marta tha,,,
rekha jawan ho gyi or kishan laal ne thakur ke sath milke usko bhi apni hawas ka shikar
bnana shuru kar diya or jab main kuch karne ki koshish karta to mujhe bandh kar rakha
jata or bhut mara jata,,,,jab maar se bhi kuch nahi hua to mere pariwar ko jaan se marne
ki dhamki deke mere se hi meri maa k sath jismani rishta banane per majboor kiya jane
laga or main apne pariwar ki hifajat k liye is gande raste per chalne laga,,
agar mana karta to kishan laal or thakur mere pariwar ko maar dete,,,,main bebus tha
bhut
lachar tha,,,,,
rekha ke sath sath bhi vahi sab hone laga jo meri maa ke sath hota tha,,,or maa sara din
kishan laal or thakur ki gulami karti thak jati or mere baap ke sath raat ko kuch nahi kar
pati to mere baap ne bhi rekha ke jism ka shara lena shuru kar diya,,,mera baap bhi rekha
ke sath hawas mitane laga,,,,
kuch time baad un logo ne geeta per hath dalne ki koshish ki ,,,maine mana kiya to mere
baap ko maar dala un logo ne,,,,,maar kar nehar me phaink diya or bola ki sharab ke
nashe
me nehar me gir gya hai mera baap,,,,
main geeta ko nahi bacha sakta tha,,,agar koshish bhi karta to apne hi pariwar ke kissi or
shaks ko kho deta,,,,,,lekin geeta ne ashok ko sab kuch bata diya or ashok bhi janta tha
vo kuch nahi kar payega isliye vo geeta ko leke gaon se bhaag gya or shehar a gya,,,
ashok shuru se gaon ke school me pada thaa or baad me sehar me padne jane laga tha or
geeta bhi sath me jati thi isliye in logo ko shehar ki kafi jankari thi,,,,,,or udhar
pushpa devi ka kewal se bhut pyar tha isliye shuru se hi usko shehar me padne bhej diya
gya tha taki uspe apne baap ka ganda saya nahi pade,,usko apne baap ki kartuton ke bare
me kuch pata nahi chale,,,,,
geeta surakshit ho gyi thi,,lekin meri maa or rekha nahi,,,,,mere baap ki mout ke baad
meri maa ne bhi ussi nehar me kood kar khudkushi karli jahan mere baap ko maar kar
phenka
tha thakur or kishan laal ne,,,,vo aab jillat ki jindagi ko or jyada bardasht nahi kar
saki,,,,,,,
aab main or reeka hi rahte they,,,,,rekha meri jaan ki hifajat k liye kuch nahi kar sakti
thi or main reeka ki hifajat ki vajaf se kuch nahi kar paa raha tha,,,,maa ke marne ke baad
main kishan laal ke ghar ka kaam karne laga,,khana pakane laga,,,,
kuch time beeta to kissi bemari ke chalte thakur bhi mar gya,,,,thakur ne marne se pehle
sarita ki shadi ashok se pakki kardi thi lekin ashok geeta ke sath bhaag gya tha,,thakur
ke marne ke baad sarita kishan laal ke ghar rehne aa gyi thi,,,kishan laal ne kabhi gandi
najar nahi dali thi sarita per kyuki vo thakur ki beti thi or jab sarita ki shadi honi
thi ashok se to kafi paisa milne tha kishan laal ko ,,isliye vo na to khud sarita per
gandi najar dalta or mujhe bhi dhamki deta ki agar maine sarita ke sath kuch galt kiya to
mujhe or rekha ko maar dega,,,,
characters-
ashok family
baap - kishan lal
maa -pushpa devi
beta - ashok
2nd beta- kewal
surinder family
maa -mohini
baap-sohan lal
beta-surinder
bahan- geeta
2nd bahan- rekha
sarita family
baaap- thakur
maa-radhika
beti-sarita
kahani ko thoda dekhte h pahle ki kya hua tha-
jab sunny apne pyar ka izhaar sonia se karta h or usko sabke samne kiss karta h uske baad=
kuch der room me sannata raha,,bas sab logo ke rone ki hi awaj aa rahi thi,,,,phir mama
bola,,,,,
tera koi kasoor nahi hai sunny,,,,or naa hi hum sab ka kasoor hai jo hum logo ne apni
hawas ko apne hi ghar me pura kiya,,,,kasoor to uss harami kishan laal ka hai jisne meri
jingadi kharab kardi,,mere pure pariwar ki zindagi kharab kardi,,,,,or badle ki aag me
maine tum logo ki family,,, apni family kharab kardi,,,,
main thoda preshan ho gya,,,,kishal laal ,,,yani maa ka chacha,,,,jisne seema ka rape kiya
tha ,,,lekin usne surinder ki family ko kaise barbaad kar diya,,,,main kuch samaj nahi
paa raha tha,,,,
mama bhala maa ke chacha ne apni family ko kaise barbad kar diya,,,,main kuch samaja
nhi
vo teri maa ka chacha nahi hai sunny,,,,vo ashok ka baap hai,,,,,or badkismati se vo
tera bhi baap hai,,,,,,,,teri baskismati ye hai ki usne teri maa ka ek baar rape kiya
lekin meri maa ka rape to vo har roj karta tha,,,,har din karta tha har pal karta tha
or main bebasi se sab kuch dekhta rehta tha,,,,itna bolkar surinder rota hua mere pairo
me gir gya,,,,
surinder ki batton se main preshan ho gya,,,,or sab logo ki taraf dekhne laga,,,maa or
bhua roti hui apna sar hila kar mujhe ye bata rahi thi ki surinder jo bol raha hai vo
sach hai,,
ashok ne age badke surinder ko uthaya or samne sofe per bitha diya,,,,,geeta chalke uske
pass chali gyi ,,,sath wale sofe per ashok khud baith gya,,edhar main bade sofe per akela
baitha hua tha tabhi maa mere pass ake baith gyi or maa ke pass sonia ake baith gyi,,,
tabhi geeta surinder ke sofe ki ek taraf thodi c side per baith gyi,,or uska hath pakad
liya,,,,,,or surinder ko bolne ko kaha,,,,
srinder bolne laga,,,,,,
main tera mama nahi sunny,,,,,or naa hi geeta teri bhua hai,,,,,geeta meri behan hai or
gaon me rekha meri behan hai,,,,,hum teeno bhai behan hai,,,,,or geeta ashok ki behan
nahi ashok ki patni hai,,,,
tabhi main thoda hairaan reh gya lekin tabhi mujhe yaad aya uss tasveer ke bare me jo
maine rekha ke ghar dekhi thi,,,,main usko pehchan nahi paa raha tha,,,uss tasveer me 5
log they jo jane pehchane lag rahe they lekin 2 ko main bilkul bhi nahi pehchan raha tha
,,aab pata chala main 3 logo ko kyu pehchan raha tha vo teen log surinder geeta or rekha
or ho na ho baki ke 2 log inke maa baap hongey,,,,,
surinder ne age bolna shuru kiya ,,,,,,,,,
meri maa kishan laal ke ghar kaam wali thi,,,kishan laal ke ghar ka sara kaam karti thi
or main bhi maa ke sath rasoyi ke kam me hath batane unke sath jata tha,,,jabki rekha
pushpa devi ke sath gain bhenso ko sambhalne ka kaam karti thi,,,,geeta ki ashok se bhut
banti thi isliye geeta ashok ke sath school jati thi,,,,,hum logo ko bhi school jane ka
dil karta tha lekin hum logo ka baap hume school nahi jane deta tha or naa hi kishan laal
hume school jane deta tha,,,vo chahta tha ki main maa ke sath kitchen ka kaam karu or
rekha pushpa devi ke sath gobar sambhalne me uski madad kare,,,,,vo geeta ko bhi nahi
jane
dena chahta tha school lekin ashok ki zidd ki vajah se kishan laal geeta ko school jane
deta,,,,
mera baap ek number ka sharabi tha ,,,koi kaam nahi karta tha or kishan laal issi baat ka
pura fayda uthata tha,,,,vo roj mere baap ko sharab k liye paise de deta or badle me meri
maa ke sath apni hawas mitata,,,meri maa bhi bebus thi kuch kar nahi sakti thi,,,kyuki
jiss ghar me hum rehte jo hum log khate pete vo sab kishan laal ka tha,,,,baap ne to puri
umar koi kaam hi nahi kiya tha,,,maa majboor thi,,,,ek to gareeb thi dusri ehsano ke boojh
tale dabi hui thi,,,,,,or majbori me kishan laal ko apne jism se khelne deti kabhi mana
nahi karti,,,or kishan laal bhi uski majbori ka pura fayda uthata ,,,,,,
surinder ro raha tha or bol raha tha,,,,,,,
kishan laal jab dil kare meri maa ke jism se khelna shuru kar deta,,,,kabhi kamre me to
kabhi angan me,,,,kabhi kheto me to kabhi kitchen me,,,,main maa ke sath kaam karta tha
kitchen me to kishan laal vahan ata or maa ke jism se khelna shuru kar deta,, kabhi vo
akela ata to kabhi dusre gaon ka thakur( sarita ka baap) bhi aa jata jo sarita ka baap
tha or kishan laal ka acha dost bhi,,,,,,vo dono milkar mere samne meri maa ke jism ke
sath khelte or main bas khada tamasha dekhta rehta,,,,main bhut chota tha kuch kar nahi
sakta tha,,,mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki vo log kya kar rahe hai,,,mujhe to essa lagta
jaise vo log meri maa ko maar rahe hai,,,,,kabhi kabhi gusse me khoon khoul jata mera or
hath me pakde chaku ko kishan laal ke seene me utarne ka dil karta lekin maa mana kar
deti
kuch time beet-ta gya or hum log thode bade hone lage,,,,rekha or geeta bhi badi hone lagi
jawan hone lagi,,,,,geeta to ashok ki vajah se bach jati kyuki ashok hamesha uske sath hi
rehta tha ,,,dono pyar karte they ek dusre ko,,,lekin rekha nahi bach payi,,,,pushpa devi
ne bhi koshish ki usko bachane ki lekin kishan laal pushpa devi ko bhut marta tha,,,
rekha jawan ho gyi or kishan laal ne thakur ke sath milke usko bhi apni hawas ka shikar
bnana shuru kar diya or jab main kuch karne ki koshish karta to mujhe bandh kar rakha
jata or bhut mara jata,,,,jab maar se bhi kuch nahi hua to mere pariwar ko jaan se marne
ki dhamki deke mere se hi meri maa k sath jismani rishta banane per majboor kiya jane
laga or main apne pariwar ki hifajat k liye is gande raste per chalne laga,,
agar mana karta to kishan laal or thakur mere pariwar ko maar dete,,,,main bebus tha
bhut
lachar tha,,,,,
rekha ke sath sath bhi vahi sab hone laga jo meri maa ke sath hota tha,,,or maa sara din
kishan laal or thakur ki gulami karti thak jati or mere baap ke sath raat ko kuch nahi kar
pati to mere baap ne bhi rekha ke jism ka shara lena shuru kar diya,,,mera baap bhi rekha
ke sath hawas mitane laga,,,,
kuch time baad un logo ne geeta per hath dalne ki koshish ki ,,,maine mana kiya to mere
baap ko maar dala un logo ne,,,,,maar kar nehar me phaink diya or bola ki sharab ke
nashe
me nehar me gir gya hai mera baap,,,,
main geeta ko nahi bacha sakta tha,,,agar koshish bhi karta to apne hi pariwar ke kissi or
shaks ko kho deta,,,,,,lekin geeta ne ashok ko sab kuch bata diya or ashok bhi janta tha
vo kuch nahi kar payega isliye vo geeta ko leke gaon se bhaag gya or shehar a gya,,,
ashok shuru se gaon ke school me pada thaa or baad me sehar me padne jane laga tha or
geeta bhi sath me jati thi isliye in logo ko shehar ki kafi jankari thi,,,,,,or udhar
pushpa devi ka kewal se bhut pyar tha isliye shuru se hi usko shehar me padne bhej diya
gya tha taki uspe apne baap ka ganda saya nahi pade,,usko apne baap ki kartuton ke bare
me kuch pata nahi chale,,,,,
geeta surakshit ho gyi thi,,lekin meri maa or rekha nahi,,,,,mere baap ki mout ke baad
meri maa ne bhi ussi nehar me kood kar khudkushi karli jahan mere baap ko maar kar
phenka
tha thakur or kishan laal ne,,,,vo aab jillat ki jindagi ko or jyada bardasht nahi kar
saki,,,,,,,
aab main or reeka hi rahte they,,,,,rekha meri jaan ki hifajat k liye kuch nahi kar sakti
thi or main reeka ki hifajat ki vajaf se kuch nahi kar paa raha tha,,,,maa ke marne ke baad
main kishan laal ke ghar ka kaam karne laga,,khana pakane laga,,,,
kuch time beeta to kissi bemari ke chalte thakur bhi mar gya,,,,thakur ne marne se pehle
sarita ki shadi ashok se pakki kardi thi lekin ashok geeta ke sath bhaag gya tha,,thakur
ke marne ke baad sarita kishan laal ke ghar rehne aa gyi thi,,,kishan laal ne kabhi gandi
najar nahi dali thi sarita per kyuki vo thakur ki beti thi or jab sarita ki shadi honi
thi ashok se to kafi paisa milne tha kishan laal ko ,,isliye vo na to khud sarita per
gandi najar dalta or mujhe bhi dhamki deta ki agar maine sarita ke sath kuch galt kiya to
mujhe or rekha ko maar dega,,,,
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