Incest PAAP PUNYA (KAMUK PARIWARIK UPNAYAS)

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PAAP PUNYA (CHATHA 6 ADHYAAYE)

Samya beetney ke sath-sath Akash ka sochney ka tariqa hi jaisey badal gya ho. Ab Ussey apni maa bhen pr koi ganda vichaar aaney par koi khaas preshani nahi hoti thi. Ussey jo aatam-gilaani shuru mein mehsoos hoti thi weh ab ansh matr hi bachi thi. Weh din pratidin incest material padh dekhkar naye naye vichaaron ko dimaag mein lata aur in sab ka khul kar maza leney laga tha.

Kuch mahino mein hi weh apni behn ke sath kaafi ghul mil gaya tha kyunki weh dono bachpan se hi akash ki padhayi ke chaltey jada samya aapse mein nahi beeta paaye they.

Aur sunita ko bhi ghar bore hone se bachney ki liye bhai ke roop mein jaisey koi dost mil gaya ho. Akash ab kafi khul gaya tha. Aur ab weh koi bhi baat be-dhadak hokar sunita ko keh deta tha.

September ka mahina abhi shuru hi hua tha aur , akash dopehr ko jaldi koi karib 12:30 apney horse farm se ghar aa chuka tha. Aaj woh kuch jayda hi utezit tha. Kyunki aaj usney ek ajeeb darishya farm mein dekh liya tha. Unkey farm mein ek ghodi jiska naam unhoney lakshmi rakha tha pichley dedh warsh pahley hi ek bacherey (badal) ko janam de chukki thi . Uss ghodi aur uskey bachey (badal) ki nasal achi or kimti honey ki wajeh se unko alag chaar deewari kiye gaye maidaan mein khula chor diya jata tha. Manager Niranjan sharma aur uskey pita g kisi ke sath deal ke silsiley mein office mein baithey they. Akash waha se uth kar us khuley maidaan ki tarf aa gya jaha us ghodi aur uskey bachey ko rakha gaya tha.

Akash ne dekha woh ghodi aur uska bacha jo ab bacheda toh nahi raha tha (kyunki ghodey dedh se 2 warsh warsh mein hi lagbha g apni puri kad kathi nikal lete hai kynki unki ostan aayu seema 25-30 warsh hoti hai ), chartey hue idhar udhar bhag rahey they. Bacha jo kad mein apni maa se thoda hi chota tha boht masti kar raha. Punch utha kar idhar bhagta kabhi udhar. Kabhi apaney nathuno ko sinkodrta , jhatkta , funkarta . woh ek bachey ki tarh khel raha tha. Akash yeh dekh kar parsan ho raha tha. Usko yeh ghodi ki nasal boht pasand thi. Gathili kad kathi, wali ucchi lambi ghodi , bhari hui golakar puth, aur chaal shaleenta se bhari napi tulli. Kaan ek dum stark aur khadey. Halkey bhureey rang mein safed aur kaaley rang ki chittia.

Akash ne dekha ki woh ghodi ghaas ke maidaan mein idhar udhar ghum kar chun chun kar tinkey aur ghsas foos kha rahi thi. Tabhi uska bacha bhagtey hue aaya , apni maa ke pichey jakar dono aagey ki taangey uthakar us par chad gya. Aisa hote hi ghodi ek dum se aagey ho gyi aur marney ke liye apney bachey ki tarf lapki , jissey weh door bhag gaya.

Is kuch hi pallon ki ghatna ne Akash ko maano hila kar rakh diya ho. Besahaq weh choti ummar ka ghoda kuch hi palon ke liye apni maa par pichey se chadha tha par is ghatna ne akash par jaisey salon ka parbhabh daal diya tha. Kaamdev ne kisi ko nahi bhakhsha hai chahey insaan ho ya jaanwar. Yahi karan tha ki aaj woh us ghatna ko soch soch kar boht hi kamuk hua ja raha tha.​

Sangeeta devi (49)
Kitchen mein sungeeta devi kuch kaam rahi thi akash ne aakr apni maa pairo ko chhua aur apni maa ke gorey-gorey gaddedaar pairon ka saparsh pakar use boht acha lag rha tha. Waisey bhi apni maa ke prati kamum vichaaron ke chaltey weh sangeeta devi ko chunney ka koi moka hath se nahi jaaney deta tha. Weh hamesha hi is taak mein rehta tha ki kaisey ussey sangeeta devi ko chuney ka koi moka hath laggey. Aur pairo ko chukar toh jaisey ek teer se do nishaney lag jaatey they. Ek toh sangeeta devi ka apney putr ka uskey prati sanmaan aur shradha dekhar chitt prasann ho jata tha , Dusra Akash ke mano bhaavo ko thodi c raahat mil jati thi.

Akash jab bhi apni maa ke pair chutta tha apney hath se pura hi pair ko pakad leta tha , jissey ki yeh laggey ki weh dil se apni maa ko pair chukar parnaam karta hai , na ki matr opcharikta ke liye thoda tha jhukar pranaam bolta hai. Weh ek hi hath se pair chhuta tha, ab toh usney pair ko chuttey wakhat pair ko hath mein pakadey rakhney ka samya bhi badha diya tha. Tanki ussey apni maa sangeeta devi ke sundr, bharey huey pair ki garmahat kuch or der mehsoos ho. Aisa hi usney aaj kiya tha. Pair ko pakad kar halka dawaav daltey huey kuch der tak mehsoos karta raha akhirkaar sangeeta devi hanstey huye boli - “Ab uth bhi beta sara din wahi baitha rahega!!”

Kyunki akash kisi chote bachey ki bhaanti bhola banta hua payar aur laad se apni maa ke pair ko chutey huey pakadey hua tha, usney hath ko sangeeta devi ke pair ke takhney (ankle) se ghumate huey nichey edi tak legya , sangeeta devi ne kolahpuri chamdey ki chappal pehni hui thi , akash edi ke nichley gol hissey (heel pad) ko thoda dawaakar bola , “aap saara din kaam karti hai mein thoda daba deta hu“. Sangeeta devi apney putr ki matr bhagati dekh kar muskurati hui prasann ho rahi thi.

Sangeeta devi - “beta ab uth bhi ja boht chu liye pair apni maa ke” sangeeta devi akash ke sar par hath ferte hue mamta se ott prot ho kar keh rahi thi.

Akash - “akash apna hath edi (heel) se uppr pair ke pichey le gaya aur jaha par pindali ka nichla hissa shuru hi hota hai waha pr hath leja kr usne sparsh kiya aur halka sa kisi nadaan bachey ki tarh baba diya. Akash ko pindali ka nichla hissa dabaatey hi ehsaas hua ki uski maa ki pindali kitni naram aur gaddedaar thi. Aur usney kalpana ki agr pindali ka nichala hisey ki paridhi (circumference) itni adhik hai toh uppr jakar pindali kitni sudaaul aur gathili hogi.

Sangeeta devi - “arey beta tu thak haar ke kaam se aaya hai chal uth mere payara beta!! pehley hath dhokar khana kha le “

Akash - “unnnn…unnn….mein …nahi …ma...” ek chota nadaan sa bacha banta hua bola , jo apni maa ke sath laad kar raha tha aur sath hi usney sangeeta devi ki dono tangey ghutno ke paas se apni lambhi bhujayo mein kas li.

Akash ki lambhi bhujao mein sangeeta devi ab fanskar khadi thi jissey uska santoolan thoda sa bigda aur ussey bachney ke liye usney kitchen ki shelf ko pakad liya.

Akash ki baahon mein uskey ghutney jakdey honey ki wajeh se sangeeta devi ko thodi gudgudi bhi ho rahi thi aur weh hanstey huey keh rahi thi- “arey hat natkhat! giraayega kya beta! Ab tu kya koi chota bacha hai , chor mujhey”

Akash - “maa aap ke liye toh bacha hi rahunga chahye kitana bada ho jau”

Akash ne apni maa ke ghutno ko chortey huey sidha khadey hotey huye kaha. Sangeeta devi ne bhi payar se apney bete ka matha chum liya aur akash ko dining table pr baithney ko kaha.

Itney mein sunita bhi kitchen mein aa gyi aur akash ke sath wali kursi par baith gyi.

Sunita - “toh kya baatein kar rahey they maa-beta”

Akash - “teri shadi ki baat kar rahey they , ko maa ke rishtedaaron mein se puch raha tha ki ghar mein kaam karney wali koi larki chahiye jo naukron ki tarh kaam karey “ akash ne sunita ko chidhatey hue kaha.

Sunita - “ dekho mummy!!! meri shaadi ki baat toh bahana hai asl mein bhaiya ko jaldi toh apni shaadi ki hai tabhi shaadi shaadi kar rahey hai. Koi baat nahi bhaiya pehley toh aap ki hi hogi” Sangeeta ne mazaakia palat waar kartey huye bola. Dono bhai behn aur sangeeta devi hans padey.

Sangeeta devi - “ tabhi shayad aaj kal mere jada hi pair chutta hai .”sangeeta devi ne bhi mazakiya taur par bol diya.

Akash - “kya maa aap bhi iskey sath lag gaye “ akash ne nakali sa virodh kartey hue bola.

Sangeeta devi - “arey beta mein toh hans rahi hun pagaley, sunita ab chup agr mere ladley bete ko tang kiya” - Sangeeta ne akash ka paksh lete hue bola.

Sangeeta devi ab akash ke liye khana paros rahi thi aur sunita bhi apni maa ki in sab mein thodi c madad karkey fir se aksh ke sath baith gayi. Dining table ke dusri tarf akash aur sunita ke samney sangeeta devi baithi khana kha rahi thi.

Sabhi shanti ke sath khana kha rahey they . Aaj farm wali ghatna ke baad akash kuch jayada hi uttezit ho raha tha. Usskey tej dimaag mein naye se nay vichaar aa rahey they. Sunita uski baayin (left) tarf ki dining chair par baithi khana kha rahi thi. Aur unkey bilkul samney tabley ki dusri tarf sangeeta devi ki maang mein bhara sindoor aur ballon mein halki c safed lattey usko aur bhi kamuk bana rahi thi.

Akash - “maa ! aap sham ko kadoo ki sabji banana kadoo khaney ka boht man hai”

Yeh kehtey hi Akash ne tirshi nazar se halki c shaitanni muskurahat se sunita ki tarf dekha. Sunita toh kadoo! Shabad aur apney bhayia ka aisey uski tarf dekhna usko sharam ke maarey pani-pani kar gaya tha. Par weh abhi bhi uljhan mein thi ki kya uskey bhaiya sabji waaley kadoo ki baat kar rahey they ya usko chidha rahey they.

"Par yeh wakya ki kadooo ! khaney ka man hai , kya bhaiya mere ….nitambho….ko haawwww.. … kaya sach mein bhaiya …. kaya bhaiya ko jara bhi sharam nhi aayi" - sunita apney antr man mein aisa hi kuch soch rahi thi.

Halanki akash ne natkhat bhari halki c muskaan dekar, utezana mein pura sanket sunita ko de diya tha ki weh ussi ke kadoo ki baat kar raha tha, par fir bhi sunita ko bishwaas nahi ho raha tha , ki uskey bhaiya mazaak mein kadooo ki sabji khaney ki baat karengey.

Parantu fir bhi weh nishchit roop se kuch nhi jaanti thi.

Sangeeta devi - “ arey beta pehley bata deta mein promila kaki ko subh hi bol deti, chal koi baat nhi shaam ko hariya ko bhejkar mangwa loongi”

Idhar sunita kadoo shabad sunkr maarey sharam ke apni aankhey jhukaye chup chaap apna khana kha rahi thi . Uska chup rehna jaisey akash ki aur himmat badha raha tha.

Akash - “ han maa bahar se kaya mangwana kadoo toh ghar hi mil jayega “ Akash ne apni behn ki tarf tirsha sa dekhey hue kaha.

yeh suntey hi sunita ko ab pakka ho gya tha ki uskey bhaiya kadoo ki sabji ka bahana karte hue uskey nitambho ke liye uska mazaak bana rahey they. “Par yeh kuch jayadaa nahi ho raha. Kadoo! Bolna toh samjh aata hai par kadoo khaney ka man hai… issey bhaiya ka kya tatprya hai.. kya bhaiya .. mere baare mein kuch……g…ga..galt.. vichaa….r… nahi …aisa nhi ho sakta woh aisa kabhi nhi soch saktey” - Sunita ne apney antrman mein socha.

Sangeeta Devi - "Arey beta!!!!! ab hariya kaka kaha sabjia ugaatey hai ghar par , aur khaney wala bhi kaun hota tha yha ab toh bahar se le aatey hai sab "

Sunita , akash ki baaton se uljhan mein thi aur ussey thoda gussa bhi aa raha tha par yeh nishchit nahi kar paa rahi thi ki in sab par kaisey pratikriya de , toh usney shant reh kar chup rehna hi thik samjha.

Akash aur sunita dono jantey they kadoo ka tatpraya kya tha. Par sunita dwara koi pratikriya na karna jaisey akash ki himmat aur bhi badha raha tha. Uski apni behan ki chuppi use apni jeet ka ehsaas karwa rahi thi.

Weh khana khatey huey sunita ki chuppi dekh aur bhi utezit ho gya tha . Ussey in sab mein bada anand aa raha tha. Weh is anand mein aur badhotri karna chahta tha.

Akash - “ hamarey paas itni jagah bageecho mein padi hai, hariya kaka ko keh kar unmey thodi sabjia ugwalo , aur kadoo jaroor lagwana , ghar ke kadoo khaaney ka maza hi kuch aur hai maa!” Akash utezna mein yeh sab bol gya tha. Aur sunita toh yeh sunn kar maano pathar ki ho gayi thi. Uskey man mein jo bhi shankayein thi woh door ho gayi thi.

“Han bahaiya uskey nitambho ki hi baat kar rahey they, Kaya mazaak mein yeh sab bolna uchitt hai, kya bhaiya shehr jakar jada hi khuley vichaaro ke ho gye hai, kya unko bilkul fark nahi parta ki unkey is mazaak se mere ko kaisa mehsoos hoga “ yahi sab baatein sunita ke andr chal rahi thi. Aaj baat kuch aisi ho gayi thi ki kabhi na chup honey wali sunita ki bolti jaisey band ho gayi thi.

Sunita shaant rahi, bhaley hi uskey andr ek tufaan chal raha tha. Akash apni maa se baatein kar raha tha aur khana kha raha tha. Khana khaney ke baad akash apni chair se utha aur.

“Acha maa thoda sota hu “ akash ne kitchen se bahr jaatey hue kaha aur dekha ki sunita chup baithi thi aur koi baat nahi kar rahi thi. Weh sunita ke sar mein halka sa thapad maar kar kitchen se bahar aa gya taki weh pakka kar sakey ki sunita aur uskey beech sab samanya tha aur apne kamre mein chala gaya.

“Par kya meiney kuch jada toh nahi bol diya , mein kaya karu maza hi boht aa raha tha, kahi sunita mere se gussa toh nahi hogyi ?“ Yeh sab sochtey hue bed par padey huey uski ankh lag gyi.

Sham ko akash vyayaam karney ke baad naha dhokar 7 bjey ke karib khana khaney ke liye kitchen mein jakar baith gya , kyunki shaam ka khana saarey ikathey hi khatey they . Subah to rajneesh rathod 7 bjey hi kheti badi aur farm ki dekh rekh ke liye nikal jatey they, sham ka hi samya hota tha jab rajneesh rathod saarey din ki bhadaas apney pariwaar par nikaltey they.



Dining Table ki sitting possitions.

Rajneesh rathod - “ sangeeta ! acharya g se milney gaya tha aaj , woh puch rahey ki hamari tirth yatra ka kya hua” gussey dikhatey hue rajneesh rathod boley , aaj jab se rajneesh rathod aaye they gussey mein they.

Tabhi sangeeta devi ko yaad aaya ki pichley saal Rajneesh rathod aur usney acharya g ki upsthithi mein yeh mannat mangi thi ki agr unkey horse farm ki jameen ka muqadama woh jeet gaye toh ghar ka koi ek sadasya ek saptah (one week) ki teerth yatra pr jakr aayega.

“Mannat toh puri samjho , humney!! bhi gurujano !!! ki jhutia jhaadi hai par yaad rahey mannat ke baad tirth yatra mat bhool jana , rajneesh!” Acharya g ki yeh baat sangeeta devi ke dilo- dimaag mein gunj uthi.

Weh 6 mahiney pehley hi muqadama jeet gaye they prantu yeh baat shayad unkey aur acharya g , dono ke hi dimaag se nikal gayi thi. Woh toh aaj ashram pr koi aur dampati issi samsya ke chaltey acharaya g se milne aaye they aur sanyog bash rajneesh rahtod bhi waha pahunchey hue they toh unko yaad aa gya.

Sangeeta Devi - “arey ! g mein toh bhul hi gayi thi, koi nuksaan toh nahi hoga " sangeeta devi ne ghabdaatey huy kha.

Rajneesh Rathod - “han mein hi hu jo sab kaam yaad rakhu, teri toh koi jimewaari hi nahi hai jaisey, pata nhi dimaag kaha ghaas chrney gya hai tera , aur yeh mand budhi issey bhi yaad nhi raha !” sunita ki tarf ishara krtey hue rajneesh rathod boley.

Akash ko apney pita g par boht gussa aa raha tha , ki weh is tarh se uski maa se baat kar rahey they, pr weh kr bhi kya kar sakta tha.

Rajneesh Rathod - “haan sara din bahr bhi kaam dekhu , ek choti c baat tumsey yaad nhi rakhi gayi” rajneesh rathod ne pura rohb daltey hue bola aur sangeeta devi toh bechari apney pati ke samney chupchap bakri ki tarh nazar jhukaaye sab shanti se sun rahi thi.

Akash ko apni maa ke sath boht sahanubhooti ho rahi thi par weh bhi majboor tha kya kar sakta tha, agr weh kuch bolta toh waha par bhuchaal aa jata. Akash ne dekha ki uski maa apney daayein (right) hath se chamach pakdey kheer (jiski meethas shayad ab jaati rahi thi) kha rahi thi aur uska baaya (left) hath uki baayi jhangh par rakha hua tha. Akash ne apni maa ko santwna dene ke liye table ke nichey dheerey se apni maa ke us hath par apna dayan (right hand) hath rakh diya , jo hath uski maa ki baayi jhangh pr pada tha.

Sangeeta devi ko thoda jhatka sa laga pr agley ki kshan ussey samjh aa gya ki yeh hath dining table ki sath wali chair par baithey akash ka tha. Jab usney akash ki tarf dekha toh akash ne apni aankey santwana (consolence) dete hue thodi band ki aur sanket diya ki koi baat nhi. Sangeeta ko bhi samjh aa gya tha ki uska beta ussey rajneesh rathod dwara daant laganey par is tarh se hath pakad kar saantwana (console) de raha tha.

Rajneesh rathod - “woh toh acha hua mein aaj chala gaya , acharya g keh rahey they agr ek mahina aur nikal jata toh teerth yatra ka mannat puri hone uprant subh muhrat ki awadhi nikal jati “, “ ab yaad rakhna is mahiney mein yeh yatra sampann ho jaaye. “Aur uppar se yeh nalayak 1 bjey hi waha se bhaag aata hai” akash ko bhi sath hi parshaad dete huey , rajneesh rathod ne chid-chidaatey hue kaha.

Udhar samney baithi sunita ke chehrey par apney bhai ko daant khatey dekh ek halki c muskuraht aa gyi, usney apni aankhey akash ki tarf uthakar dekhtey huey halki c jheebh nikal d . Aur rajneesh rahtod toh maano gussey mein bolte huey apni bhojan thali mein hi ghussey huye they. Unko pata nhi tha ki unsey aankh bachar kar uski beti aur beta mand mand muskura rahey they.

Kyunki itney saalo se sab ko unkey gussey ki aadat ho gyi thi woh ek kaan se suntey dusrey se nikal detey. Bas chup raho yhi mool mantr unhoney apna liya tha. Idhar akash ka hath uski maa ke hath pr rakha hua tha. Laghbhag aadhey mint se jada ho chuka tha hath wahi par tha. Kyunki table pr itna parshaad jo bant raha tha toh akash ko smya ka jaisey bodh hi na raha ho. Sangeeta devi ko apney putr ki apney prati itni chinta dekh kar jaisey raahat mehsoos ho rahi ho , ki uska beta uskey liye kitna komal hirdaya rakhta tha. Par woh shahyad akash ke andr ke shaitaan se abhi tak anjaan thi.

Akash ne jo hath apni maa ko santwana dene ke liye badhaya tha usey ab sangeeta devi ke hath ki komlta aur garmahat, uttejit kar rahi thi. Usney apni maa ke hath ko thoda sa daba diya . Sangeeta devi ne bhi apney hath ki unglio ko akash ki unlio mein daal liya aur akash ki tarf dekh kar usey apni mamta bhari nazron je jataya ki usney akash ki chintna aur santwana (consolence) ko savikaar kar liya tha. Fir sangeeta devi ne apna hath akash ke hath se nakaal kar uppr table se pani uthaney ka vichaar kiya , kyni lagbhag ek-dedh mint se uska hath akash ke hath mein tha. Sangeeta devi ne apna hath jaisey hi khincha toh usey akash ki tarf se thoda virodh mehsoos hua , usney thoda jor lagya par akash ne apni maa ka hath nahi chora. Fir dusri baar sangeeta devi ne apney bete se hath chudana chaha , is baar bhi usney hath nhi chora. Sangeeta devi jada jor bhi nahi laga sakti thi ki agr usney jada harqat ki toh sath baithey uskey pati ko nischit hi pata chal jayega .

Sangeeta devi ki kayi aur koshisho ke baad bhi akash ne apni maa ka hath nahi chora, sangeeta devi ko lag raha tha ki uska beta jaanbhoojh kar ussey nadaani mein tang kar raha tha. Par idhar akash ko , is chal rahi parikriya se jaha boht anand prapart ho raha tha dusri tarf is baat pr garv bhi ho raha tha , ki uski maa jada jor aur chup is liye baithi thi ki kahi rajneesh rothod ko is sab ka pata na lag jaye , aur akash ko daant khani padey. Usko garv is baat par ho raha tha ki jaisey sangeea devi ke liye rajneesh rathod se jayada uska beta prathmikta rakhta ho . Jaisey rajneesh rathod ko usney bina kuch kiye hara diya ho.

Yeh baat akash ko kamuk kar rahi thi ki uski maa usko daant se bachana chahti thi. Islye thoda jokhim bhi mol le rahi thi . Uskey dimaag mein vichaar aaya ki han uski maa jaisi pativarta istri bhi apney pati se kuch baatey raaz rakh sakti thi. Is baat ne ussey aur bhi kamuk kar diya. Kya woh pita g se itni darti hai , “ ki agr mein chupkey se unka hath pakad sakta hu toh kya aur bhi jayada bhi kuch kar sakta hu " - akash yeh soch kar kamuk hua ja raha tha.

Akhir kaar Sangeeta devi ne apney pati se aankh bacha kar akash ki tarf apney mathey par shikan laatey hue , jhoota sa gussa dikhatey huye , yeh sab band karney ka agrah kiya. Tab kahi jakar akash ne apni maa ka hath chora.

Akash ne anjaaney mein hi, in guzrey 4 -5 minto mein maano sangeeta devi ke sath sabki naak ke nichey , maa bete se hatkar koi sanbandh bana liya tha . Jisko kya naam diya jata is baat se sangeeta devi aur akash dono hi anjaan they.

Idhr sangeeta devi ko pehli baar apney pati ki naak ke nichey aisa karkey jaha boht ashcharya anubhav hua wahi is ghatna ne usey romanchin bhi kar diya tha. Pakdey jaaney ka dar aur na pakdey jaaney par safalta ki khushi isney sangeeta devi ki sadharan c zindagi mein jaisey kuch minto ke liye romach bhar diya ho.

Usney aaj tak koi bhi karya apney pati ki aagya ke bina nahi kiya tha , weh din bhar ki choti se choti baat bhi raat ko apney pati se saanjha karti thi. Par aaj jo usney kiya tha nisandeh hi mamta mein behkar apney bete ko bachaney ke liye kiya tha par chori toh chori hi hoti hai , chaahey tinkey ki ho ya jahaz ki . Par woh karti bhi kaya , rajeneesh rathod ke savbhaav ko woh achey se janti thi agr unko pata chal jata ki unki baaton ko table pr dhayan purvak nahi suna ja raha tha toh weh 3-4 dinno tak jalli-bhunni suna-suna kar uska bura haal kar dete .

Idhar akash ke hath toh jaisey koi khazaana lag gya ho , usko vishwaas ho gya tha ki uski maa sangeeta devi jaisi pativrata istri bhi apney pati dev se kuch baatein pariwaar ki bhalayi ke liye raaz rakh sakti thi. Is sangeeta devi se weh aaj pehli waar mila tha jo apney pati parmeshwar se koi baat chupa sakti thi. Akash ko yeh sab sochkar boht hi anand prapat ho raha tha. Akash ne agley hi pal is baat ko pakka karney ke liye apna daaya (right hand) hath apni maa ki baayin (left) jhaangh par rakh diya.

Sangeeta devi ko is baat ka bodh tha ki uska beta uskey sath bachkaani harqatey kar raha tha. Toh usney is baat par jada dhyan nhi diya aur akash ka hath apni jhaangh par hi pada rehney diya. Par akash ne apna hath sangeeta devi ki jhaangh par uppr nichey chalana shuru kar diya aur mazey lete huey beech-beech mein chikoti kaat deta , jissey uski maa ko laagey ki weh sirf uskey sath ek natkhat bachey ki tarh khel raha tha.

Rajneesh Rathod - “kya yaha meri baat koi sunn bhi raha hai ke nahi “

Sangeeta Devi - “O ho! Gussa ku hotey ho g! koi baat nhi jaa aayengey teerth yatra pr aap jada krodh mat kijiey “ sangeeta devi ne rajneesh rathod ko manatey huey kaha.

Rajneesh Rathod - “han ! sachi baatein gussa lagti hai!”

Akash - “ Pita g ! koi baat nhi mein yatra ka trip organize kar lunga mera ek dost hai uski jaan pehchaan hai travel agency mein , aap nishchint hokar khana khayiye “ Akash ne apney pita ko tasalli dete hue , apni maa ki baayi (left) jhangh par chikoti kaat-tey hue bola. Is baar akash ne thodi jada hi tej chikoti bhar d thi. Sangeeta devi ke muh se halki c seeee…s.eee……nikal gayi. Rajneesh rathod ke toh maano kaan khadey ho gaye hon, aur akash ki jaan toh gaaley mein aa gayi thi.

Akash ne dar ke kaarn apna hath sangeeta devi ki jhaangh se hata liya. Ussey laga ki shayad usney hadd paar kar di thi, ab uski khair nahi. Parntu Issey pahely ki rajneesh rathod kuch boltey sangeeta devi hi bol uthi - “ pata nhi is saari se kya chubh raha hai , aur khadi hokr kitchen ke sink pr jakar hath dhoney laggi , kynki usney ab tak apna khana samapat kar liya tha. Aur usney akash ki bachakana harqaton ke chaley ( jo kam se kam sangeeta devi ke liye toh bachkaana hi thi, ) waha se uthna hi behtar samjha. Kyunki weh nahi chahti thi uskey pati ko unpr gussa karney ka koi aur kaarn mil jaaye.

Dusrey din Askash subh koi 8:30 bajey fresh hokar farm jaane se pehley kitchen mein nastey ke liye gya , promila kaki ghar ke aangn mein jhadu laga rahi thi , Sangeeta devi ne akash ke kitchen mein aate hi usko kaan se pakad liya aur kaha - “haan! Ab bata badmaash raat boht tang kiya tuney aaj tere ko baigan khilaunga dupehr ko” Sangeeta devi ne hanstey huey , jhooti c sakhtayi dikhatey kaha.

Akash - “nahi maa kaan jitna marji kheencho par baigan nhi khaunga , please! Mummy”

Sangeeta - “ beta kal ke liye tere ko maaf kar deti hu , par beta! Aage se aisa mat karna , tu janta toh hai tere pita g ko unko toh gussa karney ka bas bahana chahiye " sangeeta ne thodi c chinta waykat kartey hue kaha.

Akash - “Arey maa aap ka chehra itna udaas lag raha tha toh mainey socha apni payari maa ko thoda khush kar du , aur aap mujhey hi badmaash keh rahi hai ” Akash ne nadaan bachey ki tarh thoda honto ko banakar ruth tey hue bola.

Sangeeta devi - “han beta pata hai tu boht payar karta hai apni maa se , par beta aisa apney pita ke samney kabhi dobara nhi karna “ akash ko khana dekr weh kitchen ki shelf ki taf mud gayi.

Akash - “acha meri payari mummy ! pita g ke samney nahi yaha toh tang kar sakta hu na “ Yeh bolte hue akash ne apni maa ko pichey se apni baahon mein jakad liya aur nadan bachey ki tarh apni maa se lipat kar hansi se lot pot hone laga. Sangeeta devi bhi apney putr ke is vehvhaar se parsann ho kar hansney laggi.

Sangeeta devi ko akash pehley bhi apni baahon mein le chuka tha par ek maa ke roop mein , jab bhi weh shehr se aata tha dono maa bete ek dusrey ko kas kar galley laga lete they . Par aaj woh sangeeta devi ko ek aurat ka roop maankar apni bahon mein jakdey hua tha , jis karan uskey ling mein harqat shuru ho chukki thi , kisi bhi wakhat uska ling pura akad kar thoss rup dharan kar sakta tha. Yahi karna tha ki akash ne apni maa ko apni baahon se azaad kar diya aur dining chair pichey khiska-kar us par baith khana khaaney lga.

Ab bhi weh apni maa ki gaddedar bahon aur chaati ke nichle hissey ko apni baahon mein jakda hua mehsoos kar raha tha.

Akash - “maa ab toh yatra pr bhi jana hai toh aap bhi saath shehr chalna mujhey bhi thodi shoping karni hai aur sunita ko bhi , apna bachan yaad hai na aapko aap bhi sath jaaoge. “ akash ne jaanbhoojh kar bachan shabad ka paryog kiya ke kahi uski maa apni baat se mukr na jaaye.

Sangeeta Devi - “acha baba chalungi tum logo ke sath , jo bhi dilwaana hoga dila dena“

Akash - “thik hai maa sunita se puch kar bata dena kab jana hai” - Kehtey huey akash nashta kar raha tha.

Sangeeta Devi - “ussey kya puchna hai beta! jaldi se is yatra ka karya sampann krna hai , warna tere pita g ghar ko sar par utha lengey , jaldi se tum log shoping ka kaam pura kar lo , aur yatra mein daan dakshina ke liye kuch chandi ke sikkey bhi banwaaney hai "

Akash - " maa shehr se gupta jewellars hai na , jantey hai pita g ko bhi , waha se baney banaye mil jaayenge "

Sangeeta Devi - " Chal beta fir toh kal hi shehr jakar yeh sab kaam nipta lete hai "

Akash - “G mummy ! jaisa aap thik samjhey”


To be Continued ​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

एक ऐसी कहानी जो एक्स फोरम के इतिहास में इन्सेस्ट प्रेमियों के लिए किंवदंती बन जाए !
अद्भुत लेखनी और अद्भुत स्टोरी ।

एक्चुअली कहानी नहीं बल्कि उपन्यास है ये । काफी लम्बी जर्नी होने वाली है इस कृति की । स्लो सिडक्शन ... स्लो बिल्ड अप... स्टेप बाई स्टेप डेवलपमेंट आफ स्टोरी ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग ब्रदर ।

मैं आशा करता हूं आप इस उपन्यास को अपने अंजाम तक जरूर पहुंचाएंगे ।
कहानी कहीं से भी काल्पनिक नहीं लगता है । परफेक्ट रियलिटी होने का एहसास दिलाता है ।

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वेटिंग नेक्स्ट ब्लाक बस्टर अपडेट ।

 

[Akki0003]

Nice

 

[Nidhi11111]

Very good

 

[decentpoet]

is upnayas ke updates ko update honey ke kam se kam 30 mint baad hi padha kijiye taki tab tak issmey se saari shabdik ashudhiya nikal d jaaye . ab yeh update bilkul padhey janey ke liye taiyaar hai. dhanya waad. Apney vichaar dil se de. dhanya waad.

 

[Nasn]

Good start
बहुत ही सुन्दर लिखा है।
आपकी हिन्दी काफी शुद्ध और परिमार्जित है फिर भी देवनागरी लिपि में लिखने के स्थान पर हिन्गलिश को प्राथमिकता दी, श्रेष्ठ कथानक के लिए भाषा/लिपि का चयन भी लेखक के मनोभावों का सही प्रकार से प्रस्तुतिकरण करता है, आशा करती हूँ कि आप इस उपन्यास को देवनागरी लिपि में लिखे जिससे यह पाठको के अन्तर्मन में स्थान बना सके।
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[Vinita]

बहुत अच्छी लिपि है आपकी
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[123@abc]

Ati sundar mitr
Sahi warnan ker rahe ho
Ek sankari maa aur uska ati uttejit nat khat balak