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Bahot khoob shaandar updateUPDATE -52
abb mera sir ghuma kyunki yeh koi alag hi number tha .. yeh uss sudheer ka number nahi tha .. abb yeh kon naya paida ho gaya .. or unki baton se lagta hai ki annu nai kuch plan kiya hai . or koi paper readdy karwaeyn hain .. abb sala yeh kon hai .. maine turant woh number detective ko send kar diya .. or thodi der mai uska mera pass call aa gaya ..
detective - jee bhai yeh jo number apne send kiya hai yeh kissi wakeel ka hai .. bohot badda wakeel hai . or bohot mehenga bhi ..
mai - okk uski or bhi detail mille to dena mujhe ..
detective - han bhai or woh jo pehle apne number diya tha uski ekk info milli hai ki woh sudheer aaj hi kahin bahar jaa raha hai .. shayad wapas apne ghar .. uska kaam khatam ho gaya hai yahan ..
mai - okk nazar rakhna ki koi milne aata hai usse ki nahi .
phir mai sochne lagga ki akhir mere behen karna kya chati hai sawal to bohot the .. or jawab ekk ka bhi nahi .. abb yeh to tabhi patta chalega jab woh kissi se milegi .. ya baat karegi .. or mere dekhte hi dekhte saare msg usne delete kar diye the .. ki koi sabut na rahe uske phone mai ..
ABB AAGE
body pain kar rahi thi meri or subha subha aise msg se sir or dard karne lagga ... bagao behenchod kahan fas gaya hun mai . itne shariyant to tv serial mai nahi hote jitna meri life mai hai .. mujhe mera mind fresh karna tha or mind fresh mera bakchodi karne pe hi hota hai .. or abhi mai kya nai bakchodi kar sakta hun yeh dekhna tha .karne ko to bohot kuch tha . .
chudai or drama aram se mil jata mujhe .. lekin abhi mujhe chahiye thoda thrill or woh patta nahi kyun .. shayad jo kal mere sath hua ussi ki wajah se .. lekin mai to woh sab chodd chuka tha ..... kafi time ho gaya usmai .. to abb kyun .. yeh adranil kuch alag hi bol raha hai ... mere diman ko woh chahiye abb .. wahi jiske mai hamesha picha chudata hun .. wahin jo meri pichli zindagi ka main hissa tha .. wahi jisko mai abhi ignore kar raha hun ..
BLOOD ..
han sach suna app logon nai .. mujhe chahiye khun .. or woh mujhe kahan millega yeh bass dhundhna tha .. meri past life mai maine jo kiya woh abb dohrana padega kyunki har time mind ko relax karne ke liye chudai to nahi kar sakta .. or mai ekk cheez or notice kar raha tha mai chudai ke waqt kuch zyada hi agressive ho jaa raha hun .. jo dusre ke liye sahi nahi hai .. chalo shalini or meri baki randiya to theek hai .. lekin jo mere ghar pe hai .. madhu ke sath kitna wild ho jata hun mai .. bechaari rone lagti hai .. lekin kya karun yahin cheez to mere mind ko relax karti hai .. abb aap log soch rahe honge ki aisa kya hua jo mai aisa ban gaya ..
to yeh dhire dhire start hua .. or iska bhi mai reason meri behen hi hai .. woh mujhe aksar papa se ya maa se maar khilwati thi meri jhuti shikayat karke .. or woh log bhi bina soche mujhe kutne lagte the .. pehne to mai roo roo ke shant ho jaata lekin jab yeh aam baat ho gai to mai gussa hone lagga .. or wahi gussa mera nikatla ladai mai .. mai aksar school mai or collage mai ladai karta .. or yahi reason tha jiski wajah se mujhe do baar school se or ekk baad collage se nikal diya gaya ..or mere maa papa ko ekk or wajah mill gai mujhese nafrat karne ki lekin tab mujhe zyada farak nahi pada .. meri behen to bohot khush thi ..jaise taise maine graduation complete kiya .. uske baad higher education papa nai karne nahi diya . kyunki unke pass paise nahi the mujhpe waist karne ke liye ..
han meri behen nai higher education complete ki lekin kya fayeda hua .. usko wahin vishal se pyar hua or uski shadi kar di gai .. abb gussa to mere andar bohot tha .. ghar ko leke behen ko leke kuch lafde the collage ko leke .. to maine apna dhyan chudai mai lagaya .. collage mai kafi ladkiyan chodi maine .. or usmai mera mind relax ho jaata lekin ghar ke mauhal se wapas aa jata .. to maine ghar ke pass hi chudai karna shuru kar diya .. or woh mere liye sahi sabit hua jab bhi tention hoti mai ass padoos mai chudai kar leta .. lekin meri behen ki shadi ke baad or baat bigad gai .. kyunki mere jija nai pehle to mujhse achhi banai .. or mujhe dadu peene ki lat lagwa di .. or phir ussi baat ko leke mere behen maa papa ko bhadkati ..
or isse family ka environment or kharab ho gaya .. or uper se meri behen ke shariyant . hadd to tab hui jab usnai mujhe jabardasti karne ka arop lagaya tha .. mai pagal sa ho gaya tha .. or itefak se uss din mujhe koi milla bhi nahi jiske sath chudai karke mai relax ho jata ... mai raghu ke sath ruka tha uss din .. or meri frustation badhti hi jaa rahi thi .. to mai baha aa gaya taihelnai ke liye ..
FLASHBACK ...
ekk taraf meri society thi or ekk taraf highway ka rashta . society mai jane ka mann tha nahi to mai nikal gaya highway ki taraf .. bohot zyada gussa aa raha tha mujhe .. jo abb bardast se bahar ho raha tha .. tabhi mere bagal se car nikli speed mai cut marte hue .. woh to achha hua mai side ho gaya warna sala uda deta ..
mai - ruk behen ke laude ... madarchod .. ( maine chilla ke bola .. jo sahyad uss car wale nai sunn liya kyunki woh car thodi aage jaake ruk gai .. )
or phir car back aai or mere samne ruki .. car mai char log baithe the .. do aage dono peche .. or charo bampar nashe mai the shayad kahin se party karke aa rahe the .. kyunki unmai se 3 ladke the or 1ladki .. car ruki or woh bahar nikla ladka jo car challa raha tha ..
ladka - kya bola bhosadike .. dubara bol ..
woh chutiya theek se khada bhi nahi ho paa raha tha ...
mai - madarchod .. jab gadi chalini nahi aati to road pe nikla hi kyun ,.
uske sath jo ladki baithi thi woh ..
ladki - hey shivam .. chodo iss chutiye ko .. chalo we are getting late for the party ..
shivan - no baby .. iss chutiye nai gali kaise di .. mujhe ..
mai - ma ke laude aise ..
usnai mujhe marna chaha to mai side ho gaya or woh gira niche meri hansi chutt gai ..
to woh do ladke bhi nikal ke bahar aa gaye .
ladka 2 - hey watchout ..
mai - kya watchout .. yeh chutiya gali bak raha hai or car aise chala raha hai ki iske baap ki road ho .
ladka 2 - tu shayad janta nahi isse .. tabhi bol raha hai .. sach mai yeh iske baap ki ho road hai .. minister ka beta hai yeh ..
mai - to usse kya ..
ladki - hey guys plzz lets go .. mujhe ghar bhi jana hai ..
dusre ladke nai uss shivam ko uthaya or car mai piche baithaya ..
ladka 2 - abhi late ho raha hai .. warna batate tujhe .
mai - jaa be laude ..
woh wahan se nikal gaye .. or mai waise hi taihelta hua wapas aake lait gaya .. batao gussa shant karne gaya tha or yeh chutiyon nai or badha diya .. mujhe raat bhar neend aai nahi .. or subha tak aisehi jagta raha mai .. ghar to next day bhi nahi gaya mai .. mai or raghu tv dekh rahe the . mera bilkul bhi mann nahi tha .. lekin wahin news channel pe jo maine news dekhi woh dekh ke or bhi zyada ajeeb lagga .. bcz wahan ekk news chal rahi thi jismai kissi ladki ke gumshuda hone ki khabar thi .. or uss ladki ko dekh ke mai dang tha .. kyunki yeh wahi ladki thi jo kal unn ladko ke sath thi .. uske maa baap ka kehna tha ki raat mai woh sone apne room mai gai or subha kahin nahi milli woh .. kuch logon ka manna tha ki woh bhag gai hai kissi ladke ke sath .. abb mujhe to malum tha woh kahan hai .. to mai sidhe police station challa gaya .. wahin jahan uss ladki ki ghumshuda hone ki khabar likhwai gai thi ..
mai thane pohoncha to mujhe wahin woh ladka dikha kya naam tha uska han shivam .. or uske sathi bhi the .. or uske sath kuch sarkari gadiyan khadi thi jo ki shayad uske baap ki thi .. or wahin uska baap bhi tha .. woh log has has ke officer se baat kar rahe the .. or mujhe samajhne mai zara sa bhi time nahi lagga ki inhone kharid liya hai iss inspecter ko .. mera gussa or badha or muthi kass gai .. wahin do hawaldar baat kar rahe the jo mujhe sunai de raha tha .
hawaldar 1- dekh bhai kitna fayeda hota hai paise or power ka .. pura case hi palta diya inhone nai ..
hawaldar 2 - han bhai paise or power ho to kya kuch nahi kar sakte .. waise tujhe kya lagta hai .. kya kiya hoga uss ladki ke sath inhone .
hawaldar 1 - abe mujhe kya patta chutiye .. lekin han abb woh ladki aayegi nahi wapas yeh confirm hai ..
hawaldar 2 - mujhe to uske gharwalon ka lag raha hai .. bechare kitna roo rahe the .
hawaldar 1 - bass kuch din royenge baad mai woh bhi bhul jayenge yahi maan ke ki unki beti bhag gai hai kissi ke sath ..
mujhe unki batein samajh aa rahi thi or mera gussa extreme level pe abb mai uss ladki ko nahi janta uske maa baap ko nahi janta mera kuch lena dena nahi tha unke sath lekin jo inn hawaldar nai bola ki kuch time baad sab bhul jayenge .. kissi ko patta bhi nahi chal payega ki kya hua uss ladki ke sath .. yeh mujhe pinch kar raha tha .. or mera gussa badh raha tha .. mai wahan se nikal gaya ..
itna to pakka tha ki abb kanuni taur pe kuch nahi kar sakta mai .. lekin mujhe yeh bhi nahi patta tha ki aage karun kya mai .. to sabse pehle maine uss ladki ko dhundhne ka socha .. or woh mujhe issi shivam ke through hi patta chalega .. jiss taraf woh kal jaa rahe the wahin aage kafi farmhouse the or ussi mai ekk farmhouse iss mantri ka bhi tha yeh mai janta tha .. ho na ho kal yeh log wahin gaye honge .. to mai sidhe wahin pohonch gaya .. mujhe time lagga bcz trafic tha but i was there .. aage se ghusna to imposible tha or mai logon ki nazar mai bhi aa jata .. to mai piche ki diwar khud ke andar gaya ...
piche chota sa lawn tha or uske aage bangla banna tha ... mai chupke se andar ghus gaya .. mujhe kuch to aisa chahiye tha jisse mai patta kar sakun ki woh ladki kahan hai or uske sath kya hua .. mujhe nahi malum tha mai yeh kyun kar raha hun .. or woh bhi uss ladki ke liye jiska mai naam tak nahi janta tha ...but mera dimag or dill dono hi mujhe yeh karne ko bol rahe the .. mai andar gaya to wahan hall tha furniture set tha or dekh ke aisa lag raha tha ki wahan koi party hui hai .. mujhe koi nazaar nahi aa raha tha ..taabhi mujhe ekk awaz aai
yeh awaz upar se aai thi .. to mai wahan chala gaya .. or mujhe wahan awaz or clear sunai di yeh kissi ladki ki cheekhein thi .. jo abb clear sunai de rahi thi .......or abb clear tha ki chekhein kyun aa rahi .. maine gate khola or samne ka sceen dekh ke gussa or badne lagga .. mere samne wahi ladki thi .. or koi ladka tha jo usko jabasdati chod raha tha ..
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woh ladki jhatpata rahi thi or cheekh bhi rahi thi ... uske chehre pe maar ke nishan bhi the .. mera gussa fatne ka ho gaya ... or mai aage badha or uss ladke ke baal pakad ke kicha usse or ghumma ke diya ekk mukka uske muh pe woh girra wahan se dur .. or ladki waisehi roti hui khud ko chupane ki koshish karne laggi to maine usse mera jacket diya jisse usnai khud ko dhakne ki nakam koshish ki ...
mai dubara uss ladke ki taraf muda or phir usse pitne lagga .. mujhe itna gussa chadha tha jo shant hone ka naam nahi le raha tha . yeh kal wale ladko mai se tesra ladka tha .. mere mukke uske muh pe pait mai baras rahe the .. or uski gand tod di thi maine .. woh ro ro ke mujhse bachne ki bheek mangne lagga .. to mai usse wahin chodd diya .. or sofe pai baith gaya ..
abb thodi shanti milli thi mujhe ..
mai - idhar aa behen ke lund ...
woh raingte hue aya ..
mai - phone kar apne baki ke pillon ko .. or bula unhein yahan ..
woh - bhhai maaf kardo plzz ..
mai - sunai nahi diya tujhe maine ekk laat mari usse ..
mai - phone kar or zara si bhi bhanak nahi lagni chahiye unhein ..
usnai pehle to khud ko shant kiya or phir call kiya shivam ko .. or usse yeh bola ki laundiya bhag gai hai .. yeh sunte hi shivam nai isse galiyan baki or phir bola ki 10 mnt mai aa raha hai .. abb wait tha unke aane ka .. mujhe nahi patta tha ki mai kya karne wala tha unke sath ... tab tak uss ladki nai apne kapde pehen liye the .. phir hame gadi ki awaz aai .. mai chup gaya or woh ladka waisehi nanga jameen pe padda raha ..
shivam - kya bachodi hai madarchod .. ghuste hi goli marunga isse mai ... sale ko zyada tharak chadi hai bola tha hamara wait kare lekin nahi .. ( yeh sab bolta hua woh andar room mai ghussa uske sath woh dusra launda bhi tha .. )
or phir jo usne samne dekha .. uska dost nanga pitta hua jameen pe padda hua hai or woh ladki apne pure kapde pehene samne baithi thi ..
shivam - yeh rand to yahin hai .. or iss chutiye ko kisnai mara ..
ladka 2- bhai kahin iss ladki nai to nahi ..
shivam - lund ghus gaya hai tere dimag mai .. kal jab iski bajja rahe the tab to kuch kar nahi paai aab kya karti ..
shivam - oye rand bol kisne kiya yeh ... tera phone to hamne le liya tha to kaise kiya yeh tune
ladki kewal shivam ko ghur rahi thi ..
shivam - lagta hai yeh kutiya aise nahi manegi usnai apni gun nikal ke tan di ladki pe .. or mai yeh sab dekh raha tha ..
ladka 2 - bol de madarchod warna thok denge tujhe ..
ladki - shivam maine pyar kiya tha tumse or tumne yeh kiya mere sath ..
shivam - chup behenchod .. mai to kewal khel raha tha tere sath .. woh to mere doston ko bhi tu chahiye thi isliye pyaar ka natak kiya .. abb bol kisne kiya yeh ..
woh gun tane khada tha to mai ekk dam se nikla or ekk hanth mara uske hanth mai or woh gun girri niche .. ladka dar gaya ki kon aa gaya ..
or maine bhi der nahi ki or dono ko pitna shuru kar diya ... pehle to woh mujhpe bhari pade lekin phir mai unpe padne lagga .. or dono ko maar maar ke adhmara kar diya .. tab jaake mujhe tasalli hui .. abb mann shant tha ... or mai sofe pe baith gaya .. woh teeno wahin adhmare khoon se sane pade the .. chehra pura bigad gaya tha unka .. or mere hanth or shirt bhi khun se san gaye the ... tabhi woh ladki uthi .. or usnai woh gun utha li .. mai dekh raha tha .. chahta to mai usse rok deta lekin maine aisa nahi kiya .. or usne dekhte hi dekhte teeno ko goli maar di woh tab ruki jab goliyan khatam ho gai thi .. or uske baad woh wahin pe fut fut ke rone laggi .. or maine bhi usse rone diya .. shayad jo uske sath hua uska yahi anjaam tha ..
time ho raha tha or hame abb wahan se nikalna chahiye tha .. to mai uss ladki ko leke wahi piche ki taraf se nikal gaya ... ladki nai mujhse mera naam pucha lekin maine na usse apna naaam bataya or na hi uska pucha .. maine usse number leke uske mummy papa ko airport pe bulla liya tha .. or phir woh teeno wahan se rawana ho gaye .. maine yeh tak janne ki koshish nahi ki woh kahan jaa rahe hain .. bass kaam khatam .. lekin isse yen hua ki mera gussa shant ho gaya tha .. or abb mujhe ekk dusra tarika mill gaya tha apna adranil ko pane ka .. phir aise hi kaafi kisse hue ... or mujhe usse mai mazze aane laage .. meri chudai or yeh dono ki mera sath dete rahe .. lekin eek baar jab ghar se mujhe nikal diya gaya or woh kissa hua .. tabse dubara maine yeh karne ka nahi socha .. soch raha tha ki chudai se hi sab theek ho jayega . lekin kahan ..frustration bhadne laggi thi .. or uski bohot si wajah thi ..
PRESENT
mai yahi sab soch raha tha ... or abb mujhe patta tha ki aage kya karna hai .. mujhe family issue ke sath sath isse bhi deal karna hoga ... dekhtein hai ki kaise kar pata hun mai yeh ..
mai fresh hoke nikal gaya haveli ke liye bcz varsha ko kal se join karwana tha collage to uske liye hostle dekhna tha .. or yeh bhi janna tha ki woh hostle mai rehna pasand karegi ki annu ke sath jaisa uski baat hui thi .. mai 2 ghante mai haveli pohonch gaya .. or sidhe dada ji se milla ..unke room mai ..
dada ji - aoo jatin kaisa raha tumhara kaam .. ho gaya .
mai - jee ho gaya .. abb bass company start karni hai.. or shayad jaldi hi construction bhi shuru ho jaye tab tak factory se hi kaam aage badhayenge ..
dada ji - yeh to achhi baat hai .. achha batta yeh priya ke sath sab theek raha ..
mai - jee woh bhi join kar liya hai .. workload badhta hi jaa raha hai ..
dadaji - to kon bolta hai workload lene ke liya .. apne niche logon ko rakh or unse kaam karwa .. tu bass supervise kar ..
mai - jee wahi karunga but phir bhi dekhna to padega hi na ..
dadaji - chal koi naa .. or baatta aaj kya karega ..
mai - abhi to varsha ko leke hostle jaunga .. uske liye dekhne ..
dadaji - are uski koi zarurat nahi hai .. annu bitiya ka phone aya tha mere pass woh keh rahi thi ki varsha ko uske sath hi rakhu .. abb ghar hai wahan to hostle ki kya zarurat ,,
mai - or aap maan gaye .. aap jante hai na usse woh kaisi hai ..
dadaji - beta mai itna janta hun ki woh bhi mera hi khun hai .. or varsha wahan rahegi yeh uske liye bhi achha hoga ..
mai - or varsha maan gai uske liye ..
dadaji - are uski to pehle hi baat ho gai thi annu se .. wo khush hai annu ke sath rehne ke liye ..
meri behen ekk mauka nahi chodti .. lekin yeh mujhe kaise nahi patta chala .. maien check kiya to behenchod mai woh phone to wahin ghar mai bhul gaya tha jisko maine annu ke phone se merge kiya tha .. lagta hai aaj hi daddu se baat ki hai usnai .. mera dimag ghum raha tha mann kar raha tha kissi ko khub marun .. ya hanak ke jordaar chudai karun .. abb maar to mai kissi ko sakta nahi tha .. to chudai hi kar sakta hun ...
mai - waise ghar mai kon kon hai ..
dadu - abb tere chacha or tau to factory mai gaye hai .. baki sabhi yahin hai ..
mai - okk mai nikalta hun .. thak gaya hun ..
phir wahan se mai nikla or apne room mai gaya .. maine vanshika ko nahi bataya tha ki mai aa raha hun .. mai room mai gaya to woh lait ke phone pe kissi se baat kar rahi thi .. mujhe dekh ke woh chaunki or phir call cut kar diya ..
mai - are darne ki jarurat nahi nahi .. tum baat kar sakti ho ..
vanshika - nahi woh baat hai ..
mai - achha phir kya baat hai ..
vanhika - woh mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai ..
mai - han bolo na kya baat hai ..
vanshika - woh raj gao aya hua hai ..
usnai darte hue bola .. to maine uske taraf dekha .. kuch der mai shant raha ..
mai - achha or tumhein usse milna hai . to jaao mill aao kisne roka hai tumhe .
vanshika - nahi woh baat nahi hai .. usko iss shadi ka patta chal gaya hai .. woh gussa kar raha hai ..
mai - to tumne usko bola nahi ki yeh kewal naam ki shadi hai .. or isse zyada kuch nahi ..
vanshika - bola tha to woh keh raha hai ki yeh sab jaldi khatam karo ..
mai - tum chinta mat karo mai aaj hi divorse ke paper banwa dunga tum uspe singh kar dena ..
vanshika - lekin isse to apke pariwar ki badnami ho jayegi ..
mai - bilkul nahi hogi .. balki agar aisa nahi kiya tab hogi ..
vanshika ki ankhonon mai ansu the .. abb woh khushi ke the ki gam ke malum nahi .. mai fresh hone challa gaya ... sala yeh sab kitna zyada ho raha hai .. abb to ekk achhi chut hi mujhe shant kar sakti hai or woh tai jee ki hai ..
mai fresh hoke unke room mai challa gaya .. woh soo rahi thi .. gown mai .. mujhse zyada der ruka nahi gaya or mai lagg gaya unki chudai karne .. ajj mai kuch zyada hi wild ho gaya tha .. tai ji kheli khilai thi lekin unki bhi halat maine kharab kar di thi .. woh roi bhi mazze bhi liya or jhadi bhi khub baar .. agle 2 ghante unke liye maze or saza dono the ..
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maine unki chut or gand dono ho maari thi .. or ant mai unki chut ke andar hi jhad gaya .. tab jaake ujhe thodi shanti milli .. mai cigret ka kush lagga raha tha unke bagal mai lait ke or woh nangi mujhse chipki hui thi ..
tai jee - aaj to tu pura janwar bann gaya tha .. kitni buri tarhan chodta hai tu ..
mai - apko mazza aya nah .. bass kafi hai ..
tai jee - aaj kuch tention mai lag raha hai kya baat hai batta ..
mai - kuch nahi bass business se related hai .. nothing much .
tai jee - itna tention mat le .. naya naya hai na isliye lag raha hai .. baad mai sab theek ho jayega ..
mai - mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ..
shaam tak mere pass divorse ke paper aa gaye the .. to maine unpe signature kar ke vanshika ko de diye ..
mai - yeh lo maine singh kar diya hai tum bhi kardo ... hamara divorse ho jayega ..
vanshika - apne sigh kar diye ..
mai - han kar diye hai . lekin han tum jab tak chaho yahan reh sakti ho isko apna hi ghar samajh na ..
vanshika - kiss hak se rahungi mai yahan abb ..
mere pass uske kissi baat ka koi jawab nahi tha ... mai wahan se nikal gaya .. or maa ke room mai challa gaya ... woh annu se baat kar rahi thi .. to maine thodi der wahan ruka or phir nikal gaya wahan se wapas city ..
TO BE CONTINUDE..
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