Adultery Naakam

[rangeelakhan]

Update - 8

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6 mahine bit gaye, tony apne kaam me laga hua tha, ghar ghar ja wo nutrition ka dawa bechane me laga hua tha, use apne company se call ata hai ki aaj protest ki wajah se chutti kar di gayi hai, aur wo ghar ko wapas chala jaaye, ye khabar sun tony ka dil chehak gaya, aur wo market se jalebi le leta hai apni bib shabnam ko surprise dene ke liye,

tony jalebi pack kara apne jahez me mile bike se ghar ko rawana ho jata hai, tony ghar ke bahar apna bike laga deta hai, aur jalebi le ghar me dakhil ho jata hai apne chabhi se, ghar me sannata faila hua tha, tony muska deta hai,

"hello shabnam kahan ho"

tony ke ammi abbu gaon gaye hue the, aur tony ke liye yahi mauka tha shabnam ke sath romance karane ke liye, aur tony ko shabnam ko awaz dubara deta hai, lekin duubara awaz naa aane pe wo apne bedroom ki taraf upar wale floor pe jaane lagata hai sustane ke liye, lekin tony ke kaan me chap chap ki awaz aati hai, kamare ke andar se aur uske pair kanmp jaate hain, aur tony tez dhakka kamare ke darwaze ko marata hai, aur khrrrrrrrkak ki awaz ke sath darwaza khul jata hai,

aur tony ke samane ek aisi tasveer thi jo usne kisi khawab me bhi nahi socha tha, tony ke bistar pe ek aadmi leta hua tha, aur uski bibi shabnam uska auzaar muh me bhadi hui thi, jise dekh tony ka pair pighal gaya,

awaz sunate hi dono shabnam aur uska yaar ka nazar tanveer pe jata hai, aur unka gaand fat jata hai, shabnam jhat se bedsheet odh leti hai, wahi wo aadmi kapade pehan girate parate tony ke bagal se bhagata hai, wahi shabnam ka muh se rang ud gaye the,

"tony jo aap samajh rahe wo nahi hai"

"isme kya samajhana shabnam"

tony ke aankh se anshu girane lage aur wo shabnam ko chod waha se nikal apna bike utha chal diya, use kuch nahi malum tha ki wo kahan jaa raha hai bas uski gaadi chali jaa rahi thi, wahin uske aankh ke anshu rukane ka naam bhi nahi le rahe the...

 

[muskanpinku]

Bahut achchi kahani hai, please update

 

[rangeelakhan]

How is story going?

 

[rangeelakhan]

Update - 9

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Tony sahar se kafi dur nikal gaya, uske aankh se anshu sukh gaye, aur uske gaadi ka petrol khatam ho gaya, aur uski gaadi ruk gayi, aur wo wahi utar sadak ke bagal me baith gaya, uska dimag ke samane wo tasveer lagatar chal raha tha aur uska sarir gusse se kanmpane laga, tony saam tak wahi baitha raha honsohwas khoye hue, tony wahi sadak ke bagal sunsaan me hi behonsh ho jata hai,

Tony ko koi jaga raha tha, uski nind khulati hai, thadi hawa se use laga ki subah ho gaya hai, aur us sadak pe ek bhains wala apne bhaish ko charane subah ko le jaa raha tha aur uski nazar ek behosh aadmi pe padi to wo haal dekhane chala gaya, ki kahin koi accident to nahi,

Tony ko honsh aata hai, aur wo us bhains wale se time puchata hai, to use wo apna nokia ke phone pe dekh 4:30 bata deta hai, subah ka... Tony wahan se uth jata hai, wapas ghar koi jaane ke liye use hishab lena tha shabnam ka, lekin uska bike bilkul khali tha, aur wo paresaan ho utha aur taktak wo bhais wala bhi aage nikal gaya,

Tony gaadi le paidal sahar ke taraf chalane lagata hai, aur use road pe sign dikhate hai aur use pata lagata hai ki gaon kareeb 3 km door tha, tony us gaon ke taraf chal deta hai, taki use kuch petrol mil jaaye,

Tony gaon pahunch kuch petrol kharidata hai, aur phir bike se wapas ghar ke taraf rawana ho jaata hai, kareeb teen ghante me wo wapas sahar pahunch jaata hai, aur kuch waqt me wo wapas ghar pahunch jaata hai, Tony pure raste apne dimag me soch raha tha ki akhir wo kya karega, uska gussa satve asman pe tha,

Bike niche khada kar tony utar jaata hai, aur wo ghar pe ghusane ki kosis karata hai lekin darwaza band tha aur spare usne ghar me chod diya tha, tony darwaza thakthakata hai lekin koi jawab andar se nahi aata, tony ko aisa lagane laga ki shabnam bhi sayad kahin band kar ke nikal gayi hai, Tony kuch der khada rahata hai aur phir wo phone nikal shabnam ko call milata hai lekin phone band ya switchoff aa raha tha,

Tony hatash ho ghar ke samane road ke dusare taraf jaa kar baith jata hai, aur ghar ko niharane lagata hai, aur apne tutate hue sapane ko bhi, Tony wahin khada tha ki uske ghar ki khidki khulati hai, aur tony chaukanna ho jaata hai, ghar me andar koi na koi to tha, Tony aage badh darwaza pitane lagata hai, lekin andar se koi jawab nahi aata, to tony dhakke mar kar andar ka chitkili tod deta hai, aur wo upar apne kamare ki aur jaata hai, aur andar ghus jaata hai, aur andar wo jhankata hai, aur uski sitti pitti gum ho jaati hai, andar shabnam bilkul nange soi hui thi, aur uske bagal me wahi aadmi baitha daaru pii raha tha,

"aa gaya tu"

"teri himmat kaisi hui harami mere ghar me wapas aane ki"

Tony ka sarir gusse se kanmp raha tha, uska sare baal khade the, aur wo niche daudate hue bhagata hai, aur ek chaku kichen se utha apne kamare ki taraf bhagata hai,

"haramzaya, ***** ki kasam main tujhe zinda nahi chodunga"

Tony ye kehete hue aage ki aur chanku ke sath lapakata hai, jise wo aadmi rok nahi pata aur chaku uske kande me lagata hai, aur uska khun bahane lagata hai,

"are kutte ke pille kya kiya tune, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah hai a****"

khun se uska sarir rangane laga, aur is halle ko sun shabnam uth jaati hai, aur nazara dekh wo muh pe hanth rakh deti hai, wahi tony dubara chaku se war karata hai, lekin is baar wo aadmi tony ka hath pakad use ghuma deta hai,

"madarchod ka pilla, sale tune kaat diye mujhe, teri himmat kaise ho gayi"

"tujhe main zinda nahi chodunga, madarchod chor mujhe, shabnam tujhe main zinda zameen me gaad dunga"

shabnam ye sun aur dekh darr se kanmpane lagi, aur uska aankh se paani behane laga,

"please mat lado, khuda ka khauf karo, Rahman chod do mere sauhar ko"

"bkh sali, tera sauhar ki ammi ki chut, sale se mujhe kata, madarchod ye le tu"

wo aadmi tony ke pet pe ghunse marane lagata hai, aur shabnam rote hue kamare se bahar bhagati hai nange hi, wahin tony adhmara ho jaata hai, aur wo aadmi tony ko patak uske muh pe thukata hai, aur pairon se uske pet pe marane lagata hai,

"ye le haramzada, ye le bhosadi ke, mujhe katata hai"

Tony ke muh se khun nikalane lagata hai, aur wo behonsh ho jaata hai....

 

[Funworld]

Update - 9

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Tony sahar se kafi dur nikal gaya, uske aankh se anshu sukh gaye, aur uske gaadi ka petrol khatam ho gaya, aur uski gaadi ruk gayi, aur wo wahi utar sadak ke bagal me baith gaya, uska dimag ke samane wo tasveer lagatar chal raha tha aur uska sarir gusse se kanmpane laga, tony saam tak wahi baitha raha honsohwas khoye hue, tony wahi sadak ke bagal sunsaan me hi behonsh ho jata hai,

Tony ko koi jaga raha tha, uski nind khulati hai, thadi hawa se use laga ki subah ho gaya hai, aur us sadak pe ek bhains wala apne bhaish ko charane subah ko le jaa raha tha aur uski nazar ek behosh aadmi pe padi to wo haal dekhane chala gaya, ki kahin koi accident to nahi,

Tony ko honsh aata hai, aur wo us bhains wale se time puchata hai, to use wo apna nokia ke phone pe dekh 4:30 bata deta hai, subah ka... Tony wahan se uth jata hai, wapas ghar koi jaane ke liye use hishab lena tha shabnam ka, lekin uska bike bilkul khali tha, aur wo paresaan ho utha aur taktak wo bhais wala bhi aage nikal gaya,

Tony gaadi le paidal sahar ke taraf chalane lagata hai, aur use road pe sign dikhate hai aur use pata lagata hai ki gaon kareeb 3 km door tha, tony us gaon ke taraf chal deta hai, taki use kuch petrol mil jaaye,

Tony gaon pahunch kuch petrol kharidata hai, aur phir bike se wapas ghar ke taraf rawana ho jaata hai, kareeb teen ghante me wo wapas sahar pahunch jaata hai, aur kuch waqt me wo wapas ghar pahunch jaata hai, Tony pure raste apne dimag me soch raha tha ki akhir wo kya karega, uska gussa satve asman pe tha,

Bike niche khada kar tony utar jaata hai, aur wo ghar pe ghusane ki kosis karata hai lekin darwaza band tha aur spare usne ghar me chod diya tha, tony darwaza thakthakata hai lekin koi jawab andar se nahi aata, tony ko aisa lagane laga ki shabnam bhi sayad kahin band kar ke nikal gayi hai, Tony kuch der khada rahata hai aur phir wo phone nikal shabnam ko call milata hai lekin phone band ya switchoff aa raha tha,

Tony hatash ho ghar ke samane road ke dusare taraf jaa kar baith jata hai, aur ghar ko niharane lagata hai, aur apne tutate hue sapane ko bhi, Tony wahin khada tha ki uske ghar ki khidki khulati hai, aur tony chaukanna ho jaata hai, ghar me andar koi na koi to tha, Tony aage badh darwaza pitane lagata hai, lekin andar se koi jawab nahi aata, to tony dhakke mar kar andar ka chitkili tod deta hai, aur wo upar apne kamare ki aur jaata hai, aur andar ghus jaata hai, aur andar wo jhankata hai, aur uski sitti pitti gum ho jaati hai, andar shabnam bilkul nange soi hui thi, aur uske bagal me wahi aadmi baitha daaru pii raha tha,

"aa gaya tu"

"teri himmat kaisi hui harami mere ghar me wapas aane ki"

Tony ka sarir gusse se kanmp raha tha, uska sare baal khade the, aur wo niche daudate hue bhagata hai, aur ek chaku kichen se utha apne kamare ki taraf bhagata hai,

"haramzaya, ***** ki kasam main tujhe zinda nahi chodunga"

Tony ye kehete hue aage ki aur chanku ke sath lapakata hai, jise wo aadmi rok nahi pata aur chaku uske kande me lagata hai, aur uska khun bahane lagata hai,

"are kutte ke pille kya kiya tune, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah hai a****"

khun se uska sarir rangane laga, aur is halle ko sun shabnam uth jaati hai, aur nazara dekh wo muh pe hanth rakh deti hai, wahi tony dubara chaku se war karata hai, lekin is baar wo aadmi tony ka hath pakad use ghuma deta hai,

"madarchod ka pilla, sale tune kaat diye mujhe, teri himmat kaise ho gayi"

"tujhe main zinda nahi chodunga, madarchod chor mujhe, shabnam tujhe main zinda zameen me gaad dunga"

shabnam ye sun aur dekh darr se kanmpane lagi, aur uska aankh se paani behane laga,

"please mat lado, khuda ka khauf karo, Rahman chod do mere sauhar ko"

"bkh sali, tera sauhar ki ammi ki chut, sale se mujhe kata, madarchod ye le tu"

wo aadmi tony ke pet pe ghunse marane lagata hai, aur shabnam rote hue kamare se bahar bhagati hai nange hi, wahin tony adhmara ho jaata hai, aur wo aadmi tony ko patak uske muh pe thukata hai, aur pairon se uske pet pe marane lagata hai,

"ye le haramzada, ye le bhosadi ke, mujhe katata hai"

Tony ke muh se khun nikalane lagata hai, aur wo behonsh ho jaata hai....

Tony ko us Aadmi ki jagha par Apni Patni ko Chaku marna chahiye tha,

Us Aadmi ki kya galti, uski Biwi hi Sabko Apni CHUT deti hai to Dusra to lega hi.

 

[rangeelakhan]

Update - 10

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Tony ko honsh aata hai, uska sarir bilkul kamzor mehsus ho raha tha, aur use kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki use itna kharab kyun mehsus ho raha hai, tony badi muskil se uth pata hai, aur use ehsas hota hai ki wo aspatal me hain, aur uska ilaz chal raha tha, Tony kuch der waise hi yaad karane ki kosis karata hai lekin use kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha,

Tabhi use jana pehchana awaz sunai padata hai, apni bibi shabnam ka, jo uske kamare me ghusi hi thi, jaga hua tony ko dekh shabnam ka pair kanmp jata hai, aur wo tony se aankh nahi mila paa rahi thi, lekin tony ko kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki wo yahan kaise pahuncha...

"shabbu main yahan kyun hun, mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai, dhundhala dhundhala sa lag raha hai"

"www aaa, hai a****, a a a apka accident ho gaya tha, isliye yahan admit karana pada"

"achcha kitane din se hun main yahan"

"2 din se ho tanveer"

tony shabnam ki baat sun wapas sone chala jata hai, uska sarir kafi kamzor mehsus ho raha tha, us sham shabnam tony ko ghar wapas le aati hai release kara ke, kyunki bill kafi uth raha tha,

shabnam uske baad tony ko ghar me apne kamare me set karwa deti hai, kyunki use kuch aur healing ki zarurat thi, Tony ghar pe sustane laga, agle din tony ke abbu ammi bhi aagaye, jo tony ka haal dekh uske jaldi theek hone ki dua karane lage, wahi tony jiske sir pe kafi tez chot laga tha, wo us do din ki ghatana ko bhul chuka tha, lekin tony ke ghar pe baith jaane ki wajah se paisa ghar me aana band ho gaya, kyunki tony sales ke comission se ghar ka guzara karata tha...

Tony ke abbu ammi bhi kuch kuch bimar rahane lage the, aur ghar me sirf ek sahi aadmi tha, wo thi shabnam, Shabnam se kafi sochane ke baad kuch karane ka socha, kyunki usne arts me BA kar rakha tha, wo kisi school me teacher banane ki kosis karane lagi taki ghar bilkul hi pareshaan na ho jaye,

SHabnam ek hijabi, aur smart aurat thi aur use school me 4-5 th class walon ko padhane ke liye position mohalle ke school me mil gaya, aur wo kamane lagi....

 

[lekhak]

Lol ekdam chutia hero hai

 

[Masoom-Nigahen]

update

 

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Update - 10

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Tony ko honsh aata hai, uska sarir bilkul kamzor mehsus ho raha tha, aur use kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki use itna kharab kyun mehsus ho raha hai, tony badi muskil se uth pata hai, aur use ehsas hota hai ki wo aspatal me hain, aur uska ilaz chal raha tha, Tony kuch der waise hi yaad karane ki kosis karata hai lekin use kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha,

Tabhi use jana pehchana awaz sunai padata hai, apni bibi shabnam ka, jo uske kamare me ghusi hi thi, jaga hua tony ko dekh shabnam ka pair kanmp jata hai, aur wo tony se aankh nahi mila paa rahi thi, lekin tony ko kuch yaad nahi aa raha tha ki wo yahan kaise pahuncha...

"shabbu main yahan kyun hun, mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai, dhundhala dhundhala sa lag raha hai"

"www aaa, hai a****, a a a apka accident ho gaya tha, isliye yahan admit karana pada"

"achcha kitane din se hun main yahan"

"2 din se ho tanveer"

tony shabnam ki baat sun wapas sone chala jata hai, uska sarir kafi kamzor mehsus ho raha tha, us sham shabnam tony ko ghar wapas le aati hai release kara ke, kyunki bill kafi uth raha tha,

shabnam uske baad tony ko ghar me apne kamare me set karwa deti hai, kyunki use kuch aur healing ki zarurat thi, Tony ghar pe sustane laga, agle din tony ke abbu ammi bhi aagaye, jo tony ka haal dekh uske jaldi theek hone ki dua karane lage, wahi tony jiske sir pe kafi tez chot laga tha, wo us do din ki ghatana ko bhul chuka tha, lekin tony ke ghar pe baith jaane ki wajah se paisa ghar me aana band ho gaya, kyunki tony sales ke comission se ghar ka guzara karata tha...

Tony ke abbu ammi bhi kuch kuch bimar rahane lage the, aur ghar me sirf ek sahi aadmi tha, wo thi shabnam, Shabnam se kafi sochane ke baad kuch karane ka socha, kyunki usne arts me BA kar rakha tha, wo kisi school me teacher banane ki kosis karane lagi taki ghar bilkul hi pareshaan na ho jaye,

SHabnam ek hijabi, aur smart aurat thi aur use school me 4-5 th class walon ko padhane ke liye position mohalle ke school me mil gaya, aur wo kamane lagi....

Aisi biwi ko zeher de kar mar do jo apne pati ki na hoi aisi kaisi fantasy